Deepening
Member Since: 09/10/17 Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Deepening
A teenage boy is forced to cross-dress as a Girl Scout to sell cookies to the wrong sort of neighbor with a dark secret.
Rated: Adult 13 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 11389 Words: 17416 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Deepening Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/30/18 Title: Chapter 1: Watching and Waiting

Sehr aussergewöhnlicher Anfang. Bin gespannt wie es weitergeht...

Author's Response: Danke sehr! Ich spreche ein bisschen Deutsch. So, I'll reply in English to avoid confusion. XD

I'll be uploading a continuation soon. Just need to find a good point to stop writing for me to share it. XD

Thank you very much for reading and letting me know of your interest to see more. :D

A reclusive shut-in was mysteriously and violently transferred into the body of a young teenage girl in a strange alternate world. After being hospitalized, the man trapped in the girl's body tries to make best of the situation and their impaired condition.
Rated: Explicit 30 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 51541 Words: 79443 Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Deepening Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/17/18 Title: Chapter 1: Lightning Strikes Twice

I like your writing very much. Emotional, descritive, torn in emotions. The twist in kim and her family further on the constuction of the world you are painting. It doesn't get old, i love it. Im dying to get more chapters. Even better than watching and waiting, but I'll wait for a continuation on that story too. :)

Author's Response: Thank'ya very much. :D

I'll definitely be continuing to create this world, build the community, and make the family grow. :)

A new chapter will be in the works later today and I certainly will return to continuing Watching and Waiting and my other works. XD

Passable transgender teen girl doesnt think she can come out and somehow manages to convince everyone she is just a beautiful boy.
Can she keep the secret? Does she really want to?
Rated: Explicit 8 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 12228 Words: 41631 Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend, Teenager
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Hormonal
Series: None
Published: 11/13/18
Updated: 11/23/18
Reviewer: Deepening Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/25/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Pretty natural beginning, easy to read and to keep up reading 😊. I love it

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

An abused orphan is adopted by a billionaire to become his heir and has to fight to protect himself and his friends.
Rated: Explicit 3 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 13359 Words: 14843 Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend, Teenager
Featured Items: Boots, High Heels, Lingerie, Pantyhose, Sex Toys, Work Uniform
Locale: Family Household, High School, Hospital or Clinic
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Fast/Instant Change, Hormonal, Stuck
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Non-Consentual Sex, Torture
Series: None
Published: 12/20/18
Updated: 12/20/18
Reviewer: Deepening Signed
Date: 12/23/18 Title: Chapter 1: Maker's Mark Chapter 1

Cant read the story, The text blocks are way too big! Could you do much more paragraphs please, please? I would love to read this story?

Author's Response: Sorry, I'll get back over asap, I'm writing on my phone. I'm a trucker so it's easier for me to write on my phone while I'm getting loaded and what not. Thanks

Warning: This story contains some relatively intense anxiety, self-hate, and internalised transphobia.

So yea, basically, I had an idea of making a "I woke up as a girl" type of story, but making it readable to trans people, and it kinda went from there. I hope you enjoy it
Rated: Kid-Friendly 7 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 3797 Words: 6132 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Women, Does Not Change
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 11/15/19
Updated: 11/15/19
Reviewer: Deepening Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/24/19 Title: Chapter 1: It's okay

Pretty good story! Not even nearly the same as others from this topic. A bit strange that there is no interest in analysing about the own change, but well written and understandable. Love it!

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