Ravenholm
Member Since: 03/30/17 Membership status: Member
Average Review Rating Given: starstar


Reviews by Ravenholm
Something that usually happens to girls happens to Adam Miller.
Rated: Adult 7 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 16110 Words: 2698 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: Hospital or Clinic
Body Modification: Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: Accident, Forced
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 11/26/15
Updated: 08/18/19
Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed
Date: 08/18/19 Title: Chapter 2: Part 2

Now this is a story that I can enjoy, it is a take on something that happens to very rare number of people. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Two hikers anger the wrong ancient power, and don't come back as themselves. Or at all.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 4 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 5680 Words: 4789 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Child, Mannequin, Object
Motivation for Change: Accident, Forced, Tricked, Unknown
Personality: Fights Change
Story Theme: Horror, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 04/11/17
Updated: 04/11/17
Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed starstarstar
Date: 04/11/17 Title: Chapter 1: -

I hope you come back to explain about the warning and the final fate of the two young statue girl's

Author's Response: I hope there's more of this *gives 3 star review*

Daniel McCallum died when a tanker truck ran him over after running a red light. Now he's in Limbo, and the line to find out where you're going is too long, so he decides to take a little walk into his new future as the new Death.
Rated: Adult 47 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 23361 Words: 21331 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: For a Job
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Comedy, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: The Curse Universe
Published: 05/23/17
Updated: 05/02/19
Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed
Date: 05/29/17 Title: Chapter 2: The Second Chapter

Awesome story so far I can barely wait for the next chapter

Thrown into another world as an infant, Tyler is summoned back on his sixteenth birthday. Faced with a world she doesn't know, the Princess struggles with a world on a brink of war, and reconnects with a mother she never knew. Epic Fantasy.
Rated: Explicit 42 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 11531 Words: 17435 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 01/06/19
Updated: 01/21/19
Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed
Date: 03/31/19 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

This story is interesting and unique, I can't wait for the next chapter

Sir Chester of Echord died the warrior's death he had always known awaited him. Upon passing into the afterlife, he was not greeted by the eternal rest he so sought but by a foul-mouthed Goddess hellbent on recruiting him for yet another war. A new journey through a familiar world may lead our brave knight to a destiny greater than he ever could have dreamed.
Rated: Adult 19 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 10004 Words: 13948 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Featured Items: Corsets, Masks
Motivation for Change: In Hiding, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Bad to Good
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Women, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Mythical Setting, Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 01/14/19
Updated: 10/08/19
Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 10/10/19 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

So far I finding this to be a great story can't wait for further chapters

Sam is a quiet 16 year old high school guy. He's a nerd and a geek. A pretty typical guy. When his friends try to peer pressure him into playing the tank role for the new VR game they all want to play, he rebels, although he can't quite figure out why. Follow Sam as he dives into the world of Pellan Rise as the dainty little healer named Sylanna, where he discovers that the game has a lot more influence over the real world than everyone thought.
Rated: Adult 293 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 181459 Words: 133412 Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: High School, Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Women
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Mythical Setting, Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Intense Violence
Series: Kammi-verse, The Andrare Legacy
Published: 02/06/19
Updated: 02/03/20
Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/28/19 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Well. That happened.

Omg I was so waiting for this to happen but I am glad it did.

Leo gets a job at a tween girls clothing shop. There's a presence in the shop that seems him as delicious prey.
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 7201 Words: 4206 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: Boots
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Horror, Humiliation
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 02/14/19
Updated: 02/14/19
Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/15/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this story it has an incredible flow to it so I would like to see a proper ending to it

Callum is alone in the States applying for a job as an engineer when the world changes forever. In an event called the Emergence he is changed. Fox ears and a tail greet the newly minted girl in a mirror. On the run from the abusive system, she is forced to turn to crime to survive.
Rated: Explicit 239 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 89175 Words: 118355 Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Masks
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Personality: Bad to Good, Good to Bad, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Costume or Halloween, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 03/03/19
Updated: 07/20/19
Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed
Date: 03/31/19 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Colourful

My oh my kalia is the kind of girl I wish to have grown up as but I take life as it comes... Ravenholm mtf all the way

Author's Response: Word. Mee too friend. Me too.

In the burgeoning settlements of a post-apocalyptic world, the lone healer Duah wanders. Questing without a goal or path, he finally finds a direction via a prophetic dream about a beautiful woman. What will he find at the end of the white arrows?
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 1093 Words: 868 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: None
Locale: Road Trip
Body Modification: Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: From Submissive to Dominant
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Distant Future, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Bondage/S&M
Series: None
Published: 04/11/19
Updated: 04/11/19
Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04/16/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Now this is an enticing experience for a story and hope it continues, so I await the next chapter patiently.

What if you found a way to change your body into the feminine form you desire with just one sip?
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 2774 Words: 2313 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 06/20/19
Updated: 06/20/19
Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06/25/19 Title: Chapter 1: Noi

If this drink were ever truly real I would down the entire bottle just so I could be my beautiful female self

Author's Response: So would I. In a heartbeat.

An ordinary guy, and ordinary life. He had no plans to fight fate, but it was battle he was forced into when Rush encountered a mysterious woman who granted him the power to turn into a Magical Catgirl, a power he was never meant to have.
Rated: Adult 14 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 23916 Words: 100099 Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Undercover
Personality: Fights Change
Story Theme: Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 08/11/19
Updated: 11/17/19
Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed
Date: 10/09/19 Title: Chapter 23: Part 6 - The Day The Clocks Resumed

Please don't stop I live this story I really would luv to know how it properly ends

Jeff and his friend David discover some real magic when cleaning out his grandmother's attic - and learn she had an adventure on a magical world when she was younger. Together, they decide to take the plunge and see if Jeff's grandmother's world is real - and go on a quest to find the portal that took her there and back, over 45 years ago. Now, these two friends will be exploring a new world - a world called Mercia.

Also being published on Royal Road.
Rated: Adult 61 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 70598 Words: 154356 Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Locale: Road Trip, Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual, Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Historical Time Period, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 08/11/19
Updated: 01/18/20
Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/02/19 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Farewells

Now this is one of the most intriguing chapters so far that it grips my heart in a way that I have not felt in years

Author's Response: I can't say how glad I am to hear that the story is affecting you that way! I hope its a good way!

Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed
Date: 01/19/20 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Clan Dremora

My dear Kathryn you bring joy to the hearts of those who read your stories especially ones such as Birthrights keep up the good work and if you ever feel like you need an ear to lean on mine is always open in the Valyn stories discord chat under the name of Ravenholm

Author's Response: Thanks Ravenholm. Sometimes I do need people to talk too - but there are too few people in my life who care to listen. Thanks for the offer.

A middle aged veteran transgresses, and pays a price. Still, endings are often new beginnings.
Rated: Adult 6 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 1419 Words: 2021 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Featured Items: Boots
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime
Story Theme: Witchcraft
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change, Primarily Female to Male
Series: None
Published: 10/05/19
Updated: 10/05/19
Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed
Date: 10/07/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This idea a beautiful story and I believe it deserves at least one continued chapter to round out its open ending

Tom Ashton awoke this morning to find that dreams can lose their way and turn up on the wrong side of sleep. He was lying nude in bed, and when he raised his head a fraction he could feel long, curly hair bundled up on his shoulders underneath his head. Why did he wake up like this? And will he be able to find a way to change back? Or did this transformation wake up a side of him he never knew existed?
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 7991 Words: 3221 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Girlfriend, Model, Sissy
Featured Items: Bikinis, Breast Forms, Lingerie, Long Nails
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Hormonal
Series: None
Published: 10/25/19
Updated: 11/08/19
Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed starstarstar
Date: 11/06/19 Title: Chapter 1: Morning Of

A very intriguing story so fast can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Trying to get at least one chapter out a week, probably on Fridays. I’ll try to stick to it!

Monique has it hard enough as a Trans woman. But she also has to fight Elves, Faeries and things that go bump in the night. On top of that suddenly she has to take care of a little girl? What is a girl to do?
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 3680 Words: 68237 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Child, Daughter, Fantasy Character
Locale: Family Household, Office
Motivation for Change: Tricked, Unknown
Personality: Bad to Good, Loses Identity
Story Theme: Horror, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Age Regression
Series: None
Published: 11/06/19
Updated: 02/13/20
Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/11/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is something new and exciting I hope for more to come...

Author's Response: I'm in the midst of the second chapter as we speak. Just need to finish IRL stuff then I should have it at least all written down by friday, go over it with my editor and hopefully ready to publish by Saturday! If all goes according to plan anyway

Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/24/19 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

A beautiful continuation, I truly hope her story is more exciting in the days to come

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Don't worry as soon as my surgery is over I'll be going straight to part 3. Sorry it's going to be so long, I am literally going in for invasive surgery that NEEDS rto happen so I'm sorry ...

In what was very likely humanity's curtain call, we encountered the the one thing that could save us, fellow survivors.

Tom gets a chance to help strangers and may be able to find a new family in a way he never expected
Rated: Explicit 13 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 25360 Words: 17372 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Alien, Girlfriend, Wife
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Cultural/Nationality Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Medical Experiment, Pregnancy, Romance
Type of Change: Hormonal, Mechanical Device, Racial, Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 12/06/19
Updated: 01/18/20
Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/31/19 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Pizza and Tech’gar! Wait, whats Tech’gar?

So far I have been truly enraptured by this story and cannot wait or imagine what is to come...

I always wanted to try sex as woman. Thanks to one company, i managed. So first bodysuit, first transformation, first sex
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 3702 Words: 2317 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Bimbo, Clothing, Prostitute, Stripper
Featured Items: Breast Forms, Corsets, Curlers, High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Masks, Work Uniform
Locale: Labratory, Office
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement, Permanent Cosmetics, Permanent Hair/Skin/Nail Change
Motivation for Change: Dared into It, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Good to Bad
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Costume or Halloween, Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Body Suit
Warnings: Bondage/S&M
Series: None
Published: 01/21/20
Updated: 01/21/20
Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed
Date: 01/21/20 Title: Chapter 1: My first bodysuit

This is a very unique story and I for one would like to know where it will lead our main character to as you progress in your writing, and if you need help with editing your stories you can always find help in the Valyn Storyverse discord server
https://discord.gg/z2zbScF

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and link, but for now i can see only one room at discord Concerning storyline - frankly speaking, all my ideas for next parts are quite explicit, so i am not sure write them or not. I just trying to describe my vivid dreams

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