Erika
Only recently started my attempts at writing here, having been a longtime reader under the radar. It gives me great personal joy to write these stories, as it allows me to bestow beauty and joy on my characters, the likes of which I will regrettably never experience. Every single one of them is gonna look so fucking pretty. I hope what I do makes you smile and laugh.
Member Since: 03/10/17 Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Erika
After being released from prison, Brian is taken in by his cruel stepmother Faye, an unhinged and determined doctor, hell bent on forcing the stepson she always loathed into becoming the sweet daughter she could never have.
Rated: Adult 35 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 189816 Words: 61009 Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Erika Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/23/17 Title: Faye's New Daughter

I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!! You did a fantastic job with character appearance and emotional description! There was such high quality portrayal of Faye and Brian as characters, i cannot give this story higher praise beyond i WISH i could write this well!

Joseph was a pessimistic loner, angry with both his existence and the world. After a misused wishing stone alters his body and robs him of his voice, Joseph is forced to evaluate his life.
Rated: Adult 250 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 257389 Words: 105448 Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Daughter, Girlfriend
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Accident, Revenge
Personality: Bad to Good
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes, Romance, Sports
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 02/09/17
Updated: 07/15/17
Reviewer: Erika Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03/26/17 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Elegant Tortoise - Part 2

You're a really great writer, you've done a great job helping me to empathize with Johanna and vehemently hate Jarvis! I really love this story please keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll post a new chapter every week until the story is finished!

Jackson wasn't the happiest, underachieving and always at odds with his twin brother, until he becomes afflicted with a disease and discovers that sometimes the grass is greener.
Rated: Adult 56 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 68948 Words: 42417 Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Accident
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 07/27/17
Updated: 11/27/17
Reviewer: Erika Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/20/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Off to a great start, and i intend to continue! Very good job describing Jackson's new form, and you have some great character dynamics set up! I look forward to the rest, I'm sure you'll do great! One small piece of advise, not really related to the quality of your writing, but if you put 2 return spaces between paragraphs, it helps break it up when you upload.

When two young newly weds got married, but events ruin their love for each other, the wife has plans for her husband!
Rated: Kid-Friendly 2 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 55913 Words: 3203 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Erika Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/20/17 Title: Chapter 4: Forcing it upon him

Hey, just wanted to let you know that you've done a lovely job so far! You're doing a great job writing out a gradual change, and i'll definitely be following this story as it continues! Take your time, you're doing amazing!

Author's Response: Hi, I'm grateful for the feedback and I'm glad you're enjoying it. My only question is would you prefer to have short chapters updated every week, or a long chapter once in a while as I can't decide which is preferable. Any response and criticism will be taken on from anyone BTW.

A boy is bullied because he is different, but has one person that is his friend, although no one can see her
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 3563 Words: 3798 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Sissy
Featured Items: Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline, Undies
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Humiliation
Series: None
Published: 11/08/17
Updated: 11/08/17
Reviewer: Erika Signed
Date: 11/10/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very cute and satisfying! A compact yet still very well written narrative. Great work!

As a college freshman, Zack found himself having a hard time breaking out of his shell. That all changed when a mystifying classmate takes an interest in him.
Rated: Explicit 9 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 13314 Words: 1519 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse, Forced, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Comedy, Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 12/22/17
Updated: 12/23/17
Reviewer: Erika Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/24/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Stagnant

Your story looks great so far! I love your description of Maya and i hope that the rest of the story flows through your pen/keyboard with ease! I eagerly await new chapters as quickly as you are able, but understand it’s often a difficult process. Can’t wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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