KFC
Member Since: 01/19/17 Membership status: Member
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Reviews by KFC
In the golden age of Hyberia; an age of magic, swords, and sorcery there is a land in the far north. The kingdom of Vanaheim is ruled by Oberon and is enjoying a time of prosperity and relative peace. Prince Caspar is bored with his decadent life and seeks out his father’s Court Sorcerer demanding an artifact to help him satisfy his every lust . . . mischief and chaos ensue.
Rated: Explicit 13 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 66469 Words: 34295 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Reviewer: KFC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/19/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it! You are a top notch writer!

btw, is this Sanya inspired by Sansa? The spellings are close & both are red-haired, betrothed/married to a prince, not appreciated by their fiancee/husband etc.

In fact, I just came off from reading a fanfic where Joffrey & Sansa swap bodies and like to find similar stuff so I search for similar story here & I am not disappointed!

Author's Response: KFC, I'm super happy that you enjoyed this story. Nope. There is no connection between George R Martin's work and mine. I read the first three books in his "Game of Thrones" series and then stopped after he killed off all my favorite characters. lol Cheers Zapper

Reviewer: KFC Signed
Date: 02/17/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Upon reread I have noticed a discrepancy. Earlier Sanja said her mother died during childbirth? But later it was revealed that her mother is still alive.

Author's Response: I'll have to fix that. Sorry for the mix up! Cheers - Zapper

The medieval/fantasy kingdom of Riveria is ruled by monarchy and patriarchy. Gideon, born two minutes after his twin brother Percil, will never claim the throne until he is too old to utilize It, for his brother is seemingly blessed and protected in battle by the God of War himself. Only by using godly help and the patriarchy in place can Gideon claim the thr
Rated: Explicit 7 Reviews starstar Story Incomplete Reads: 14942 Words: 5205 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Reviewer: KFC Signed starstarstar
Date: 01/24/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like the concept. However the turn of events seem forced and not natural.

Logan a former Navy SEAL left the teams to pursue work as a civilian contractor. Hired to protect the rich Molly Falk, things become complicated after an attempt on her life. Enter the Medallion of Zulo and a proposition. Logan and Molly are swept up in events beyond their control and use an artifact to escape. Finding themselves in a new world Molly and Logan discover a land called Nevrast. With Morgoth attempting to destroy the remaining Elves in that land, war has come to Nevrast can Molly and Logan survive and return to earth?
Rated: Adult 15 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 35985 Words: 88221 Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Reviewer: KFC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/23/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love the concept! never read anything like this before...

Author's Response: KFC, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had a lot of fun writing this one and it makes me happy to think that other folks enjoyed my humble efforts. Cheers Zapper

A young, rich, and handsome American teenager with his whole glamorous life ahead of him has his life altered by a shopkeeper.
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 6962 Words: 1611 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo, Girlfriend, Slave
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Curse, Tricked
Personality: Cultural/Nationality Change, From Dominant to Submissive, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Genie/Wishes, Humiliation
Type of Change: Cultural, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 02/04/17
Updated: 02/04/17
Reviewer: KFC Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/17 Title: Chapter 1: The Wish

LOL... serve him right...

A 19 year old history student dies in a car accident, but ends up being revived in the body of the princess of a kingdom in a world of magic.
As he, now she, slowly adapts to her new lifestyle, she realizes how powerful her 21st century knowledge can be in a medieval world.
Rated: Adult 16 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 7787 Words: 4083 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Teenager
Featured Items: Corsets, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline
Motivation for Change: Accident
Story Theme: Historical Time Period, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Age Regression, Stuck
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 03/02/17
Updated: 03/04/17
Reviewer: KFC Signed
Date: 03/12/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Rebirth

hmm... nice concept but the execution seems a bit rush. A story worth of 5 chapters is cramped into 2 chapters only.

Eli knew the rumor: taking a coin from a wishing fountain made you responsible for fulfilling the wish. He didn’t realize the magic would take away his body and mind from him to do it, though. And how does him turning into a girl help anyone anyhow?
Rated: Adult 99 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 167219 Words: 85414 Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Trans
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse
Personality: Bad to Good, Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 04/03/20
Updated: 07/13/20
Reviewer: KFC Signed
Date: 07/15/20 Title: Chapter 1: Make a Wish, Take a Wish

Ok, thanks for explaining. Now I know what the fuss is about. But seriously, "The character started out attracted only to women, then in the end was only attracted to men" is what readers like me love about such magical gender change stories. People who are uncomfortable with that have the option to go back and read the more realistic TG stories, but for people like us we don't really have other option if magical gender change authors all decide not to write such things anymore. :'( Certainly I would prefer your original thought of letting it be ambiguous, but it is your story and you do what you feel right. Sorry my long rant.

Reviewer: KFC Signed
Date: 07/15/20 Title: Chapter 1: Make a Wish, Take a Wish

Re your response to my last comment. Pardon my ignorance but can you explain what you mean by "comphet vibe" I have googled the words but have no idea on how this would impact your story? Or maybe I am just stupid.

Author's Response: The character started out attracted only to women, then in the end was only attracted to men. Some readers thought she was attracted to men all along and just didn't realize it, but others felt like it was forced onto her because of magic and were uncomfortable with it. I changed a few things to make it clear that she was bi all along and didn't realize it at first.

Reviewer: KFC Signed
Date: 07/15/20 Title: Chapter 1: Make a Wish, Take a Wish

Hi, you said "I've gone through and changed some of the iffy parts to make it clear that the protagonist is just discovering themselves." If you don't mind, can I know which part that you have changed? I am just starting and would prefer to know how it was originally written by the author. Thank you.

Author's Response: There are a few parts throughout the story. Like five or six chapters where I had to edit a paragraph each in order to cut out the comphet vibes that were making readers uncomfortable. That's really all. It wasn't any one major change.

Linda and Tim are best friends. They are both 17 years old and summer vacation just started. While hanging out at Linda house they have a discussion about which gender has it easier but they don’t expect the consequences this discussion will have.
Rated: Explicit 3 Reviews starstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 4763 Words: 710 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men, Changes to be Attracted Only to Women
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Body Swap
Warnings: Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 07/26/20
Updated: 07/27/20
Reviewer: KFC Signed
Date: 07/29/20 Title: Chapter 1: 2 friends arguing

need proofread

Author's Response: For example?

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