Date: 03/17/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Hmmm, Denise thought it was her fault that her mom started dressing her dad as a woman when in fact it was her dad the whole time pushing her mom to go farther and farther, wow! Her dad as Jennifer is out of control! It's interesting to see how mom as to only GG copes with Jenny's and Denise's crossdressing. Tristmegistis, nicely written story. Taarpa
Date: 05/17/12 Title: Chapter 1: I - A Good Day at the Track
Words can not express fully how much I enjoyed this story. Being from New York, the use of actual towns and city from N.Y. really made this story believable to me. Reading it left me emotionally charged, it made me laugh, cry, feel anger, fear, and excitment!!!! And a part of me wishing I was Stephanie!!!! Please, Please, Please consider a sequal to this story, or at least something set in this universe.... Taarpa
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Gaff, School Uniform, Work Uniform
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Mind Control, Slow/Gradual Change
Date: 06/16/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. Day 1 - The Beginning of it all
Hi, I think you did a nice job on this story, I was just wondering how James/Jess's parents reacted to all that transpired? Anyway, I enjoyed reading it...... Taarpa
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Really appreciated. I started writing a diary by Beth and by James/Jess' mother. Could probably manage to continue both on. I thought it would be nice to put the story from a third parties POV. We shall see what happens :)
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Daughter
Body Modification: Breast Implants, Castrated/Neutered, Extreme Surgical Alteration
Motivation for Change: Accident
Type of Change: Hormonal, Mind Control
Date: 05/04/12 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1
Hi, I was just wondering if you will be continueing this story any time soon, I really enjoyed reading it , at least up until near the end, I didn't like the blackmail part near the end and would like to see that cruel guy get what's coming to him.....Taarpa
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Daughter, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Bikinis, Boots, Sex Toys
Locale: High School
Body Modification: Breast Implants, Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual, Becomes Only Attracted to Women
Story Theme: Distant Future
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Bodily Functions, Non-Consentual Sex
Date: 05/03/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Hi, I really like the story so far, so please continue. I'm sure there are others that do to, but far what ever reason have not bothered to leave reviews because it requires registration on the site first. it's a good start though so don't be discouraged by the lack of reviews, Taarpa
Date: 02/02/14 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 AKA Dead Story has returned
Wow, now this was a surprise! Anycent sweetie, you think maybe quicker updates this time hon? Pwease? Love the story! Loving Hugs Taarpa
Date: 06/25/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I liked the story right up to the twist at the end. Vicki's need for revenge goes to far when she decides to denie bobbie the chance to be a normal woman, it's just plain mean spirited....... Taarpa
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Secretary
Featured Items: Corsets, High Heels
Locale: Hairstyling/Salon, Office
Body Modification: Breast Implants
Motivation for Change: Lost a Bet
Type of Change: Drug-Induced
Date: 06/13/12 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1
Hi BC, I read "The Life Changing Wager", I think it was ok, but, I think your other three stories here were more enjoyable, Please please write more chapters Of "My Life Changed Drastically While Jogging", Thanks, Taarpa
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Stripper
Locale: Hospital or Clinic, Road Trip, Strip Club
Body Modification: Extreme Surgical Alteration
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Story Theme: Captive, Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Age Regression, Drug-Induced
Date: 05/09/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Hi Bob! I'm really enjoying your story, I just wish your chapters weren't so painfully short. Please please, more pwease! Taarpa
Date: 05/12/13 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
I get the feeling Jenni's not getting away anytime soon, if at all. Wouldn't it be fun if she found the billionaire in the same predicament! Bob, please hurry back with more! Hugs, Taarpa
Author's Response: Thanks Taarpa! I really appreciate the feedback. I write as much as I can but sometimes work gets in the way. There is a lot more to go in this story...
Date: 06/13/13 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
Bob, more please? I know you said there's a lot more to come on this story, can't help but thinking about the poor girls left standing there naked. Hurry back hon, Taarpa
Author's Response: More is coming soon Taarpa!
Date: 08/14/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Hi Bob, just wondering when we can expect to see some more hon? Waiting with bated breath, Taarpa
Date: 08/19/13 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
Thank you Bob. But sadly my bowls empty again, more soon pwease? Hugs, Taarpa
Ps. Is Jenni ever going to escape this tormenter?
Date: 08/30/13 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
Oh Bob, I'm beginning to think your torturing us on purpose! Almost as bad as poor Jenni. I'm guessing your pretty busy with RL stuff, so I appreciate what you do write, just wish it was longer hon. Hugs, Taarpa
Author's Response: Hi Taarpa. Yes, very busy at work. I have a lot more to come. Thanks for being patient.
Date: 09/03/13 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
Thanks Bob! The humiliation of Poor Jenni seems to have no end in sight. Surly some rich American friend of the Sheikh will come along and rescue her from all this, no? And what of the Billionaire that started this whole mess? Thanks again for the quick return on this one. Hugs, Taarpa
Date: 09/24/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Bobby dear, (with foot in 3" heels tapping floor) I know your real busy with RL and all, but poor Jenni's not getting any younger hon! You think you can squeeze in another chapter sometime soon? Pretty pwease? Hugs, Taarpa
Date: 09/28/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Bobby dear, let me guess, it was the foot tapping the floor that got you writing! (LOL). Sweetie, I hope poor Jenni's not going to be doing this for the next 11 years also, but at your current rate of writing it may take that long hon. I know your busy Bobby, but a girls life hangs in the balance so you have to ask yourself, what should you do, what should you do? (Giggles Taarpa!).
Ps. I think that was a movie quote I'd heard somewhere.... "Speed" I think...
Author's Response: Ok, I know. Just like the finale of Breaking Bad I don't think you will be disappointed when this thing finishes. It will be worth the wait.
Date: 10/22/13 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
Oh Bobby dear, how sweet. Mr X has ment with the same fate! That is of little consolation though. Thanks sweetie for the longer chapter. I hope Jenni's rescue isn't long from now. (Hugs) Taarpa
Author's Response: Thank you Taarpa. I'm glad you enjoyed. Not to give anything away, but things should be progressing rapidly plot-wise in the coming chapters. This story is turning into a novel!
Date: 11/01/13 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
Ok Bobby dear, so now we know Mr. X is now Arabella, and Arabella's now owned by the Sheikh also. As they say, "The Plot Thickens". Hurry back hon, the suspense is killin' me sweetie! Hugs, Taarpa
Author's Response: Hi Taarpa. I'm glad you are enjoying. There is so much fun to come.
Date: 11/14/13 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
Bobby dear, thanks for posting a new chapter. I see Jenni's got a plan, how ever dubious it may be. Hurry back with more hon! (Hugs) Taarpa
Date: 12/12/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Bobby dear, I'm sure your busy with RL and all, but when are we getting a new chapter sweetie? Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 09/11/14 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66
Hmmm, I'm dubious of this plan working. Doesn't Matt work under this creeton? I hope Jenni bought the bullets as well! Bobby dear, being the chapters are short, think maybe slightly more often would be unreasonable? Still lovin' it! Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 01/07/14 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
OMG! Oh so kewl and oh so short! Bobby dear, I blinked twice and this chapther was over! Please please, more pwease? Hugs Taarpa
Date: 01/10/14 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
OMG! More Jenni, yea!!! Our girls have the boat secured, now what? I don't think heading to Egypt is going to help. Must find the U.S. fleet. Should head for the gulf. Thank you Bobby dear! More pwease? (Hugs) Taarpa
Author's Response: You are great, Taarpa!
Date: 02/08/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Bobby dear! More pwease soon?
Author's Response: I'm sorry for the delay Taarpa (and everyone else!) Real life has reared it's ugly head and made writing difficult. Making a living has to take a priority. I will begin work on more chapters because this story needs resolution!
Date: 03/04/14 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
Bobby dear, thank you sweetie for the teaser! I hope RL issues subside and you can write more soon! Loving Hugs Taarpa
Date: 03/06/14 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
Oh, oh my goodness! They left Arabella on board the yacht! I know it's all her fault to begin with but still...... thank you for this sweetie, more pwease! Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 03/12/14 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
Thank you sweetie! At least the girls are on the road to Cairo now. Hope they get there soon. Hate to think what's happening back on the yacht. (Hugs) Talia
Date: 04/22/14 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
Bobby dear, yes I'm still here! Thank you for coming back to Jenni's story hon. Looking forward to Jenni getting back to the states. Just wondering what was Aribella's fate? Thinking maybe she's the key to Jenni being taken seriously when it comes to talking to the Authorities. More please soon! Loving hugs Talia
Date: 11/12/14 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71
Ugh! She needs to get away from this one as well! Losing focus now would be disastrous! Thank you Bobby! Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 07/18/14 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
Bobbi dear, yes I'm still following along poor Jenni's trials and tribulations! I certainly hope she makes it back to Miami in one piece! You think maybe she could get some help from that young sailor? Just a thought. Please sweetie, keep'em coming! Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 07/23/14 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60
Well I guess the Captains a manipulative bastard just like most men! Maybe there's still hope that the young kid might be helpful to Jenni. Bobby dear, I understand you write when RL leaves you time to do so. I just wish it was more often sweetie! Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 08/06/14 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
Yippy!!! Jenni's back in the states! Bobby dear, more please! Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 08/07/14 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62
Yea! I thought the kid might come through for Jenni. Hope he helps her get back at the Captain! Thank you Bobby dear, keep'em comin' ! Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 08/08/14 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63
Wow! Jenni might actually like this one! I wonder how long the kids in port for? Bobby dear, are we going to hear anymore about Arabella? Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 09/12/14 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67
Thank you Bobby dear! That wasn't so hard was it. ;)
Well, that went rather well for Jenni! I just hope she really can trust Matt now. I'm thinking though that taking the Wife's jewelry was a back move because now he has to explain why it's missing. She may report it stolen, and realistically Jenni can't prove what he did to her. If she had only taken back the diamonds and whatever cash he had, there wound be no reason for the Wife to suspect something was wrong. Bobby dear, your on a roll now, please keep'em comin' hon. Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 11/09/14 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70
Nice Bobby dear ! More pwease! Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 10/16/14 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68
Well at least Jenni made it to Vegas without incident! Now if she could get some clothes that are at least respectable, maybe people will start taking her seriously. Bobby dear, please hurry back with more hon! Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 10/24/14 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69
Geez, after all this time you'd think the programing would wear off a little! Hopefully she'll be safe with Mitch/Daddy! Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: You are awesome, Talia. Thanks for reading.
Date: 11/13/14 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72
Well we know Jenni's deal, but what's up with Erica? These two guys are god's gift to nothing! So what makes them so damned irresistible to these girls? I'm fearing this isn't going to end well for the girls! Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: Hi Talia. I know this is taking a long time to finish. Thanks for hanging in there with me.
Date: 12/12/14 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73
Wow ! I'm surprised he's going to just let Jenni go ! Thought for sure the guys would be klingy. Now Jenni can get on with the task at hand! Hurry back Bobby with more hon! Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 01/13/15 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74
As she sets the stage, she's going to have to go get laid, or she'll never be able to focus on job at hand! Hurry back Bobby dear! Loving hugs Talia
Date: 01/21/15 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75
Phew! One down, one to go! Hope Jenni can hold it together! Hurry back Bobby dear! Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 05/28/15 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77
She should of got rid of him when she had the chance! Bobby dear, a little more quicker would be a nice surprise! Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 08/06/15 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82
Yay ! Hooray for the Navy Seals! And good riddance to that POS! So happy to see Arabella's still alive! Now lets see if they can find those doctors! Thank you Bobby ! Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 08/12/15 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83
"This is the exact moment my life changed." That last line sounds ominous! She should of found a way to get the doctor to remove her programming before she set him up for arrest! It's good at least she's back in the States! Bobby dear, more soon please! Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 08/18/15 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84
Oh great! Just great! The last thing Jenni needs is another dominant "A"hole controlling her every move! Come on Bobby, is this really necessary? Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: Jenni, can't help herself. Can you imagine how it must feel to be that aroused and to experience mind blowing after mind blowing orgasm when used and dominated?
Date: 10/23/15 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86
Well, it is a happy ending, I suppose, not the one would have liked, but happy none the less. Bobby dear, think maybe your human doll story could be next ? Pwease? Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: :) I'm sorry it didn't work out exactly how you wanted Talia. I never saw Jenni winding up like she was before. There were too many changes made. However, she has found a way to have a great life. "The Pretty, Little Human Doll" will be finished eventually.
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Prostitute
Featured Items: High Heels, Sex Toys, Undies
Locale: Family Household, Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing
Date: 02/17/14 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Vacation with Julie
Hi Casey! I guess it's time to read this one now that "Coping" 's done for a while. I'm up to chapter three sweetie and Omg girl! That was some sex filled Vacation! Julie sounds like a real sweetheart, may be Talia will meet her someday? LOL! Big Closet's off line right now so I have lots of time to catch up on this one. Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: I've just begun posting a sequel to this one, too.
Date: 02/17/14 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Domme da Domme Domme
Oh, oh my!!! (Barely able to catch my breath!). I think if ask now Chet wound say, Trish? Who's Trish? Casey's the bomb! (Giggles Talia!) Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 02/17/14 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 A Regular Client
"It's always a pleasure doing business with you", or is it "It's always a business doing pleasure with you"! I guess they both fit so C'est-la-vie! Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: Smile.
Date: 02/18/14 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Ssurprise
Wow! You li'l minx you! Giggles Talia!
Date: 02/18/14 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 First Timer
Oh that poor boy will never be the same again! Casey dear, you've ruined him for all GGgirls! They could never live up to your performance! You've set the bar way to high! (Giggles Talia!).
Date: 02/19/14 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Tom's second visit
Decisions, decisions! Nice Casey dear! Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: smile
Date: 02/19/14 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Decisions
Ok, on to year two, you sexy li'l slut! (Giggles Talia!).
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, Lingerie
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Date: 07/28/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Rise and Shine
Hi Casey, I just started reading your story recently and I'm finding it enjoyable. Just wondering if at some point you'll touch on why the change occurred and what or who was/is behind it. Keep'em comin' hon! (Hugs) Taarpa
Author's Response: Thank you, and I'm glad you enjoy the story. So far, at least, neither Amanda or Harry has been able to figure out what happened so they can tell me. Who knows if they will in the future. lolol
Date: 07/29/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Rise and Shine
Yea, fist pump, rent for another month! I find it amazing Harry's coping so well with this situation (not that he has a choice!) LOL. And I'm surprised May wasn't feeling a little left out of Amanda's exploits with Amy. Still curious as to who's responsible for the change (mostly so's I can be next!). Nice chapter Casey, keep'em comin' hon. (Hugs) Taarpa
Author's Response: Glad you enjoy it, Taarpa, but I'm afraid I'm first in line to be next. You'll have to wait.lol There are many more chapters to come, and I hope you and others find them equally enjoyable. When writing I'm always cautious about knowing when to end a story....don't want to make it drag on and get boring.
Date: 08/03/13 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Virgin Vids
Hmmm, Amanda's a natural! Now there's a shock, (LOL) as if there was a dought. So I wonder who there building the apartment for? It still amazes me how the Harry part of her is dealing so well with the situation. Nice chapter Casey, keep up the good work hon. (Hugs) Taarpa
Author's Response: Thanks, sweetie. Never fear, Harry is not going to give up without a fight.
Date: 08/06/13 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Holidays
Nice chapter Casey! Amanda finally has the family both She and Harry were missing. I think both May & Sid have come to think of, & LOVE Amanda as their Daughter (hence Sid's reaction to Amanda's suggestion of her going to bed with them that night). Dana and Amy seem like a good fit as well, but time will tell. Keep'em comin' Ms. Thompson!
Date: 08/09/13 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 New Year, New Experiences
Let's go for coffee, just like another day at the office! (LOL). Sooo tell me Casey, is Amanda becoming a normal girl with menstrual cycles and all? And Harry's not freaking yet? Hurry back soon! Hugs, Taarpa
Author's Response: The working relationship between Harry and Amanda is very fluid, almost like the give and take of a marriage, now I think about it.
Date: 08/14/13 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 There's a Ford in Your Future
Wow, there just like two pea's in a pod! (Giggles). The next thing you'll be tellin' me is Ford was once a girl 'til one day.......(LOL). Anyway, nice chapter Casey! (Hugs) Taarpa
Author's Response: Thank you again, my number one fan. I hope you're willing to stick it out because there's sooooo much more to come.
Date: 08/17/13 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Heart to Heart with Harry
Oh my goodness! They've all found out our sweet little Angel is a centerfold! (LOL). Amanda, choo have some splainin' to do! Giggles Taarpa! Nice Casey!
Date: 08/19/13 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Busted
Hmmm..... special project you say? Requires lots of shopping money? Hmmm.... sounds like fun! (Giggles Taarpa!) Soo, if Amy's hooking up with George, what's Dana going to do? Thanks Casey for posting so quickly hon. Hugs, Taarpa
Date: 08/21/13 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Heart to Heart with Harry
Road Bandit, to answer your question the Tg comes from the beginning. Harry wakes up one day as Amanda. But its more than that. He's actually sharing Amanda's body with Amanda. The personality functioning as Amanda is actually a third hybrid of the two. That's why each morning Harry does the "dick" check, just to see if he's back to his normal. It's a bit confusing, but Casey makes it work. Hope this helps hon, hugs, Taarpa
Author's Response: Thanks for the assist, Road Bandit.
Author's Response: Thanks for the assist, Taarpa.
Date: 08/25/13 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Conquest of Fiona
You just gotta love that ol'coot! Sid's plans for there future and telling Amanda that she's part of there family and all was just so perfect, even I was all in tears! Casey Dear, your doing a wonderful job with this one! (Hugs) Taarpa
Date: 08/29/13 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Fiona, Ford, and Steve: A Trifecta
Thank you Casey! Your doing wonderfully. I'm a little uncomfortable with Amanda's relationship with Fiona, guess I'll wait and see what happens. The one thing that's still a mystery is who's behind Harry's & Amanda's joining? Will we ever find out and are they still watching Amanda's progress? Are they human or alien? Hugs, Taarpa
Author's Response: Quite honestly, I have no idea at this point whether we find out or not. I know this sounds like a cop out, but it's not. This story has taken on a life of its own. I've always planned this story 3 or 4 chapters ahead, but they all take strange turns and almost never end up being very similar to what I've planned. I'm following this with as much anticipation to find out what happens as anyone.
Date: 09/01/13 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 The Special Vid
Still here Casey! Sounded like a great Vid, Amanda & Dana are real pro's. I guess Amanda's family now so she really doesn't get to take the week off. LOL! Keep'em comin' Casey! (Hugs) Taarpa
Author's Response: Thanks, hon. This has been by far the most difficult chapter for me to write, since my fantasies don't generally go in that direction. I actually spent quite a bit of time watching videos to get myself in the correct frame of mind.
Date: 09/06/13 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Learning to be Management
Gee, wish I could have a Crazy Aunt May! (Giggles profusely). I'm still a little leary about Fiona. I'm just afraid she's gonna want Amanda to do something that's really perverse and she'll do it even if she doesn't want to cause she love's Fiona. I can't wait to see what she's got in mind for bookstore Jay! At the risk of sounding like a broken record, another nice chapter Casey! (Hugs) Taarpa
Author's Response: You're always so kind. Stay tuned.
Date: 09/16/13 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Busted! Again.
Wow, May & Fiona are best friends, go figure! I think Amanda handled the Sherri situation very well and if her ex boyfriend was connected some how, a lost pile of clothes is a small price to pay to be rid of him! Still wish I had a Crazy Aunt May! Thanks sweetie, keep'em comin' ! (Hugs) Taarpa
Author's Response: Thank you. It's so nice to have fans who follow my story.
Date: 09/20/13 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Business Woman
Still lovin' this one Casey! Amanda's connection with Kate should be interesting. Sid & May are feeling like very proud parents, which is nice! I particularly loved the line "I can't tell you how proud I am of you right now," he said. Then he added to May, "And you'd better watch out. I think she's almost as sharp as you are." The next line was kind of funny, if you think about it "The end of May and the first part of June before vacation was a blur for me". Of coarse that wasn't the end of "May", just the month! (LOL). Oh by the way, still wonderin' who or what did all this to Harry sweetie? Hugs, Taarpa
Author's Response: I wondered if anyone else would catch that. When I first noticed it, I tried rewording several ways, but none sounded better. lolol
Date: 09/23/13 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Family Vacation
Hmmm, sounds like the best part about the vacation for Amanda, (other than spending time with her adopted parents) was coming home! (Pun intended!!). Ok Ms. Thompson, time to get down to the business at hand (monkey business at is!). Giggles Taarpa!
Author's Response: I hope you weren't too disappointed with this chapter. I had all kinds of fun things planned for her, but Amanda said no. I have no choice but to let her control the story.
Date: 09/27/13 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Back to Work
OMG CASEY! You can't just do that! (Well I guess you actually can, but it's not very nice!). I hope Daddy's ok.
Amanda and the new companies hitting a ground running! (So to speak). Would loved to have seen the mirror vid, I'll bet it was awesome! I'm also thinking Kate's really going to love being involved in the new company. I wonder if she'd be crazy enough to make a vid of her own! (Giggles Taarpa! ). Still lovin' this one Ms. Thompson, even with the cliffhanger.... (Grrr)
Author's Response: lol Brace yourself for more clifhangers, I think. I may have some more.
Date: 09/27/13 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Sid and Roz
Oh thank god Daddy's ok, loved the incentive to get better! (LOL). Hmmm, Kate's helping direct? Interesting.
An evening of pizza & pussy sounds wonderful to me! (With NO cliffhanger's) LOL! Casey dear, nice work! (Hugs) Taarpa
Date: 10/04/13 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Interlude
OMG! I said that about Ford way back when...... Casey dear don't you dare only write once every two or three months! (LOL). And of coarse I still wonder about the why's and wherefore's of how this all happened to poor Harry, and original Amanda too! More pwease! (Hugs) Taarpa
Author's Response: laughing Amanda is only writing every two or three months, not me. Actually by making it nearly day by day, the action was becoming too compressed to be believable.
Date: 10/07/13 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 The Contest
Nice to see Kate coming out of her shell. Still wondering if Ford's more like Amanda than she knows. Would explain a lot about him. Wonderful chapter Casey. (Hugs) Taarpa
Author's Response: Thanks and stay tuned.
Date: 10/11/13 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 A mimi-May?
Casey, what can I say, Amanda's amazing! Here's a wild thought, maybe get Ronald & Fiona together?
Could work if a devious plot was put together by May and Amanda to see if there compatible. Thanks hon, still lovin' this. Hugs, Taarpa
Author's Response: Never can tel what will happen. I'm always writing 2 or 3 chapters ahead of what is posted. lol
Date: 10/14/13 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 And the Winner Is....
Hmmm, well Bella will never be the same, she may well be disappointed with any intercourse she has after all this though. Oh oh oh my, Judy (the other winner) wants May & Amanda to perform in her fantasy vid. This should be AWESOME! And how about that Kate! Just knew she'd be doing a vid, and this was the perfect excuse for doing it. The question is now that she's had a little taste, will she do more? (Giggles Taarpa). Nice chapter Casey, so what's next hon? (Hugs) Taarpa
Author's Response: Kate and Bella have more to come.
Date: 10/17/13 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 May's Vid
Oh oh my, our crazy Aunt May's still got it! (Giggles Taarpa!). I know Fiona says there was only one man she could ever love, but really how could she really know unless she tries? I still think they awed to set up Fiona and Ronald at see what happens. Anyway, thank you Casey! Still awesome! (Hugs) Taarpa
Author's Response: I have plans for Fiona. Keep reading.
Date: 10/25/13 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Getting through the Holidays
Wow Casey! This one gave me that warm and fuzzy feeling too! I know how Amanda feels though, not having a significant other on the holidays sucks! I guess Ronald & Kate could be good to, but I's hoping to find someone for Fiona, ah well. Thanks sweetie, enjoyed this one. Love Taarpa
Author's Response: Will Fiona find someone? Will Amanda find someone? Will Dana find someone? Will Jay find someone? Keep reading, sweetie. lolol
Date: 10/27/13 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Ready to Conquer the New Year
"So shut up and buy nice things!". Nice! So happy for Ronald & Kate! Now to see what makes Julie tick. This is going to be so much fun! Julie's going to be like a kid in a candy store. Ms. Thompson, lovely as always. Hugs, Taarpa
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 10/30/13 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Educational Trip with Fiona
Casey dear, I love what Amanda's doing with Julie here. Kate & Ronald getting hitched, awesome! Roz & Julie may have a history (past or future? ). Oh and one more thing, can I go on the next shopping trip? Pretty pwease? Hugs, Taarpa
Author's Response: I'm sure Amanda would adore having you on the next trip. She'd just love to have another Barbie Doll to dress up.
Date: 11/03/13 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Fiona and May Point the Way
Mmmm.... The smell of cinnamon..... Well this was a nice distraction for Amanda (and Harry for that matter). Casey dear, I'm going to PM you with my thoughts sweetie! Hugs, Taarpa
Author's Response: I've always loved the scent of cinnamon. If you recall in the earlier scenes at the beach, there was the scent of coconut, another of my favorites. And of course in nearly every chapter is the scent of sex and p****.
Date: 11/06/13 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 World Turned Upside Down
OMG! Oh no you didn"t! Tell me you didn't? (Sniffle sniffle!). Stifled shock slowly replaced with open sobs...... sure! Go head! Take us on an emotional rollercoaster! Grrrrr.... SSS She's gone? Sniffle.......
Author's Response: Honestly, I struggled against that, but Amanda said it must be.
Date: 11/08/13 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Trying to Survive
I think I'll be in morning for a while. I'm gonna miss my crazy aunt! (Sniffle). You did manage to make me smile a little near the end of this chapter though, thank you Casey. I see Fiona sent Amanda some therapy (in the form of twins). With Loving Hugs for Amanda & Sid, Talia
Author's Response: Too many stories ignore painful things that happen in real life. I hope this one is a little more realistic.
Date: 11/10/13 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Double Your Pleasure
I could eat Thai all day! Yeah, me too! Fiona's Therapy, how wonderful. So the girls are going to make Ford over into a girl. This should be interesting.
If there is in fact a girl personality within him as I've speculated in previous chapters, will this be a telling moment? Still morning my Crazy Aunt (sniffling).
Thank you Casey, will PM you soon! (Hugs) Taarpa
Author's Response: I thought what better test of Julie's makeover skills than Ford. lol
Date: 11/13/13 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Fiona, Sissy Ford, and a Visit from May
Casey dear, I'm smiling and I'm sure you know why! (Giggles Taarpa). Wonderfully imaginative way to introduce May to Harry! Hmm... if Harry can manifest himself like that..... just hmmmm. Sorry, now you have my imagination in high gear! (Giggles again!). I see they've managed to put Ford (or should I say Flora) in touch with his feminine side with great success. Sweetie, you've really out done yourself on this one! Loving Hugs, Talia
Ps. Uncle Harry picture, brilliant!
Author's Response: Thank you sweetie, and thank you so much for the idea about Amanda wanting to know what Harry looked like. *kisses*
Date: 11/17/13 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Matchmaker?
Walking through my office, Dana spied the picture of Harry, stopped and picked it up.
"Wow!" she said. "Who'd this? Your latest boyfriend? He's hot!". "Um, no," I replied. "That's Uncle Harry, my favorite uncle."
"Goody!" she said, replacing the picture. "Then you can set me up with him."She apologized with a sigh when I told her he was no longer among the living (big internal Harumph from Harry here), and we continued to our play time.
I was actually giggling while reading this!!!! (With happy tears) Thank you sweetie! Love the plan for operation-"new step mom". With Dana's help, I think Sid's enjoying it too! Now as for operation-"kill bastard", I hope Amanda's real careful! Umm oh, by the way, how's Kate and Ronald doing? Just wondering's all. Always do a happy dance when a new chapter appears!
Thank you Casey! Loving Hugs, Talia
Author's Response: I thought you'd like that, sweetie, and thanks again for the idea that Amanda didn't know what Harry looked like. Amanda will be careful. There are no plans for Amanda in prison chapters in the works.
Date: 11/19/13 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 Interlude 2
A time for soul searching & self-accessment. Yes, Amanda's come a long way in two years, but where to go from here? Interesting thought on twofers, can't wait to see if Ford checks out! Amateur Free-lance photographer could work to Amanda's advantage on the project. Oh Casey dear, always left wanting more! Loving Hugs, Talia
Author's Response: She'll be searching for twofers for quite some time, I think.
Date: 11/22/13 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 A Test and A Blossoming
Things are going along just swimmingly! (Giggle giggle). Loved the Julie scenes, so happy for the girl! Happy Daddy's making progress. A little disappointed Ford checked out "normal"(so to speak), we all know Ford's anything about normal! (LOL). All in all a lovely chapter sweetie, but I sense storm clouds on the horizon. Thank you Casey! Loving Hugs, Talia
Author's Response: I thought you'd like the Julie sequences. Don't forget to send me that email.
Date: 11/26/13 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 Cupid Strikes. Twice.
Casey dear, Fiona? Really? Not that I hadn't thought of it, but oh wow! So happy for Fiona, I hope the reality lives up to her dreams! And yeah, I think May would be pleased as well. As for Sweet Julie, I just hope she doesn't lose herself in this all to new relationship with Jay. I think it can be a good pairing as long as she's not rushed (forced) into doing anything she's not comfortable with. Ok dear our girl's going to get awfully lonely with Fiona taking on a motherly role in her life. (I know, I know, I need to start writing). Nice chapter sweetie, loving Hugs, Talia
Author's Response: Lots of huge changes coming for Amanda. Stay tuned.
Date: 12/05/13 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 Adjusting to New Circumstances
Sorry Casey, RL's been cutting into my reading time, just read this chapter. Margie could be a lovely diversion for a while, but with everyone else pairing off, I'll bet Amanda's hunger will grow for a meaningful relationship. Dana & Shelby have seemed to really hit it off after the "Twins Weekend". Fiona & Sid are really happy, as are Kate & Ronald. Now as for this revelation about May, one has to wonder just what else she had her hands in? Hmmm.... maybe her and Amanda's chance meeting in the beginning wasn't really by chance at all? Hmmm. Still tagging along Casey, loving hugs, Talia
Author's Response: Just keep guessing, sweetie. lol
Date: 12/12/13 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 Another Round of the Holidays
Hi Casey! Happy Amanda & Margie got together for new years. Being alone for the holidays really does suck! Fiona & Sid tying the knot makes her family complete again. Seems everyone's moving on except Amanda. I hope her desire for vengeance doesn't consume her. Still plodding along sweetie, I hope to catch up soon! Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 12/12/13 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 Switching Gears
Oh, oh wow! So jealous! Ahh but to dream.....
Lovely scene Ms. Thompson! Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 12/12/13 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 The Class
Now who would've thought a photography class would be so exciting! (LOL!). I think Amanda just might be in love! (Happy giggling). Just one question Casey dear; when is she going to give him the "TEST"? Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 12/12/13 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 Harley
Oh oh my ! "Take me home and take me!". Bird watching my @ss, I think that cat eat the canary! (Giggling profusely). Well Casey dear this catches me up to date for now. Nice chapter sweetie! I'm sure we'll find out more about Harley soon enough! Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: Little bit of jealousy there, sweetie? Like to have Harley yourself? lol
Date: 12/13/13 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 Steady Girlfriend
Whoa there cowboy, not so fast! Aunt Talia here wants to know what other skeletons may lie within the back of your closet first! Amanda dear you may think you love him, but you darn well better be sure before you commit to this big step sweetie! And what
do we really know about his parents? I just think this is how May would react as well if she were still here! Casey dear, I really do want Amanda to be happy, just think it's a touch to soon for this. Sorry for being an over protective Auntie! Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: Amanda appreciates your concern.
Date: 12/15/13 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 Domesticated
Oh Casey, sounds like Amanda's finally living the dream! I just hope it lasts. Happy that a little more info about his rents has come forth. I guess maybe he is all that! And yes there is just a little twinge of jealousy! (Snicker giggle). Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: I knew it. lol Don't forget the email.
Date: 12/20/13 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49 The World Keeps Turning
OMG! I just want to wrap my arms around her, and hold her as she cries, hold her til the fear and hurt subsidies! Oh Amanda dear, so sorry it didn't work out. Who'd of thought he was such a mama's boy!
If he really loved you, he would've been right behind you when you left, not just calling over the phone for two days! Casey dear, I'm thinking the snooty bitch needs to be humbled and her social status taken down a notch or two! If Amanda ever does decide to take him back, there better be lots of groveling involved!!!! Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: Don't hold back, Taarpa, say what you really feel. lolol
Date: 12/21/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Rise and Shine
Gee Casey, I thought I showed amazing restraint! (With profuse snicker giggles!). XOXO Talia
Date: 12/24/13 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 Interlude 3
Oh Amanda, it will happen, when you least expect it to! (At least that's what I keep telling myself, LOL!). It shouldn't be hard for Amanda to find sex when she needs it, love though is a whole other story. I still can't believe Harley turned out to be such a MOMMA'S boy! Maybe Kate can hook Amanda up at one of the charity functions or something, just a thought. Casey dear I promise I'll get to the e-mail later today or tomorrow hon. Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 12/28/13 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51 Picking up the Pieces
Hmmm.... Seems Amanda's just living day to day now. Sure there's the two new business ventures, but other than that, just living day to day, cold and calculating. So Casey dear, will Amanda find love? Will she find who or what started all this? Will May be making another appearance? I know we'll all find out in do time! This far into the story its easy to forget somethings. I have a couple thoughts I'll PM you about sweetie. Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: To answer your questions....some yesses and some nos. You decide which is which.
Date: 01/11/14 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57 Suspicion Confirmed
You know Casey dear, when I discovered you posted this chapter I was sitting on the edge of the bed cross legged reading "Amanda's" journal! (Giggling Profusely!). Oh Amanda's been so wonderful, I can't imagine what I'd have done without her, but I'm a quick study soaking it all in! (LOL). Girls night with Julie and Roz was fun. I think Roz's in love, every thing was Augie this and Augie that! Wonder if I'll ever feel that way about someone. Loving Hugs and Wet kisses! Talia
Author's Response: Love your reviews, as always.
Date: 01/02/14 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52 Always the Bridesmaid
Oh sweetie! So happy that "bastard" is dead, but if not Amanda then who? Harley maybe? Anywho, so happy for Dana & Shelby! Nice wedding scene by the way! Are you sure Flora's not a "two-for? Nice chapter Casey dear! Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: Flora was already ruled out. She didn't recognize the test phrases. Love you, sweetie.
Date: 01/12/14 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58 Helping Another Twofer
(Sniffle sniffle). Tears, lots an' lots of tears, tears of joy! (Snifflie giggles). Yes yes yes, YESSSSS! Oh f**k YES! Oh Amanda! Thank you so much for inviting me to L.A.! Casey dear, I think Talia might want to watch a vid shoot (actually Tim does to see if he can rap his thoughts around the "doing a guy" thing!). Thank you sweetie! ;) Loving Hugs and Wet Kisses, Talia
Author's Response: *laughing* As usual, you have anticipated some of what I've already written but not posted yet.
Date: 01/07/14 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54 Some Issues Resolved
Oh sweetie! I'm sitting here all teary eyed after reading this installment hon! The whole "Harry" photo thing, I think you know! It just sorta hit me as I was reading it!
I love Amanda's relationship with Augie, I have one exactly like it! I think I like the idea of Augie & Roz, I say go for it too! Casey dear, thank you dear one! Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: Always happy when you're pleased, dear.
Date: 01/08/14 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55 Interlude 4
Nice chapter of reflection Casey dear! Yes, Amanda's life has sort of settled into a routine, but I'll bet that's going to change soon! (Insert snicker giggles here!). I think someone's gonna rock her world! (Wink!) Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: Hang on to your socks...uh....stockings.
Date: 01/10/14 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56 Possibly Another Twofer
Oh oh oh em gee! (Panting so hard, barely catching my breath!). Can't seem to stop giggling! (Fanning myself with my hand, red hair disheveled and hanging in my face!). Oh oh that was wonderful Amanda! I never knew it could be like this! Casey dear! Thank you sweetie! Loving Hugs & Big Wet Kisses! Talia
Author's Response: kiss back
Date: 01/13/14 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59 Talia Takes the Plunge
Ok, my appetite's sated for the moment! (Giggling profusely!). As I lie curled up on the couch, I flip the tv on and a movie is just starting. It's called "Unstoppable"! Casey dear, I'm not sated anymore! (Hint hint). Yes Amanda, you've helped unleash the beast in me, here me Roar! Ok this shouldn't be all about me so, Casey dear, what's happening between Roz & Augie? Oh by the way speaking of pictures, when's Amanda going to ask about Tim's image? (Just a thought). Thank you sweetie! Loving Hugs & Wet Kisses, Talia
Author's Response: As much as Talia loves her new female body, I don't think she's too worried about how Tim looked. lol I think Amanda would only ask if Talia brought up the subject, and since she's read Amanda's journal, she knows about Harry's picture.
Date: 01/15/14 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60 An Old Friend
Hmmm..... Now there's something I hadn't thought of, Harry's ol' friend Roger. Well I hope it turns out to be what Amanda's been waiting for, but I suspect...... well let's just see what happens. Talia's not sure if Rory's the "one" either, but you have me thinking about Tim's past........ Casey Dear, as always.... Thank you sweetie! Loving Hugs & Wet Kisses Talia
Date: 01/19/14 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61 A Dream Day
Wow! Just wow! (Giggles Talia!). So Casey dear, is Roger really a "keeper" ? Is Amanda enamored with Roger? Or just what he represents? Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: Both, I think.
Date: 01/22/14 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62 A Dream Week
Yeah, but I still didn't hear an "I love you" from Roger.
Casey dear, I'm still here!(giggles Talia!) Loving Hugs
& Wet kisses!
Author's Response: True love takes time, sweetie.
Date: 01/23/14 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63 Day to Day
Oh honey, I so hope your right! I truly am happy for you Amanda dear. Casey dear, don't forget to update us on how Kate, Roz, Julie, & Margie are doing! Thank you sweetie, Loving Hugs & Wet Kisses Talia
Author's Response: Kiss.
Date: 01/26/14 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64 Two Months of Weekends
OMG! OMG! I'm going to be a bridesmaid! (Squee!). So happy for you Mandy dear! OMG! There's so much to do! Casey dear, you must simply come help with it all! Loving Hugs & Wet Kisses Talia
Author's Response: Calm down, sweetie. lol
Date: 01/30/14 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65 Wedding
Sniffle sniffle, Happy Tears! Did I mention I'd look gorgeous in white! (Giggles Talia!). Lovely chapter! Thank you sweetie! Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 02/03/14 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66 Mrs. Craig
Ahh give me a minute! While I catch my breath & compose myself! (Phew!). Yes, I wondered about May to, but when she came to Amanda in her dreams a while back and Amanda told her about being a twofer, May didn't seem to know 'til then, but of coarse that was a dream so who knows for sure. Casey dear, am I meeting you on Labor day? Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 02/07/14 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67 Interlude 5
Hi Casey! Guess we're getting close to the final chapter. The prospect of finding yet another "twofer" is an interesting development. I wonder if we'll ever find out who or what's been behind it all. Sweetie it's been fun and I've enjoyed participating in your story here. I see you've starting your next one already and I'm looking forward to reading it as well hon. Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: As long as it has been fun, then it's been worth it. *kiss*
Date: 02/08/14 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68 Harry Speaks
OMFG!!! It's a f**kin' nightmare! Always knew it could happen one morning, but wow! It's "Bobby Ewing" nightmare! On the other hand, so nice to finally meet the infamous Casey! (Xoxo!). You sexy vixen you! (Giggles Talia!). Oh sweetie, I know we're close to the end, but this really throughs a "monkey wrench in the works! Please please tell me I'm more than a figment of imagination! Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: How can you be a figment when Harry found your journal? giggle
Date: 02/08/14 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68 Harry Speaks
Yes, but Harry couldn't find Me! Or was it only "Tim" he looked for? Talia
Author's Response: He looked for everyone;
Date: 10/25/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Okay, this was an interesting exercise, more of a snippet than a story. It's a good description scene of a sci-fi transformation. Keep at it, this shows potential.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yes, it was really meant as more of a vignette of a episode in time, rather than to tell a full story from beginning to end. Sometimes I like short stories (other's as well as my own) to just be middles. Thanks again.
Date: 01/26/16 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Hmmm, just start this series. Interesting concept, though I'm sure "Jack" doesn't think so! Nice start Oak! Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: Thanks! I hop you enjoy the rest of the series.
Date: 01/28/16 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Eek! Aunt Flo has come to visit! (Giggles). I'm guessing Jenna's not going to be hassling Jackie again anytime soon! Nice story arc Oak! Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: I'm enjoying your chapter-by-chapter commentary. I hope you enjoy the last story as well!
Date: 01/28/16 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Hmmm, close call, but a successful test I'd say. To spite Jack's fears, Jackie is becoming a desirable looking woman and looks nothing like her previous self, now to just get use to the idea! Nice! Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 01/26/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
"I love you Mom"! Pretty much says it all! Lovely scene Oak Hugs Talia
Date: 01/27/16 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
A loooong summer indeed! Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 01/27/16 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Hmmm, tight fitting jeans improved Jackie's posture! Nice progression this chapter Oak! Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 01/28/16 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
“She?!” snapped Jack.“Whether you like it or not, you’re biologically female.” (Ouch!)
Guess Jack's a lot further along than previous thought! Nice! Loving Hugs Talia
Date: 01/28/16 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Oh wow! Love the scene you've painted here between Jackie & Mel ! Loving Hugs Talia