Mary Michelson
Member Since: 10/31/16 Membership status: Member
Average Review Rating Given: starstar


Reviews by Mary Michelson
Darrell loves his little sister, and wants to get to know her. He finds himself being dragged deeper and deeper into her world.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 12575 Words: 6049 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Child, Daughter
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes, Loses Identity
Story Theme: Second Childhood
Type of Change: Age Regression
Series: None
Published: 10/20/11
Updated: 10/20/11
Reviewer: Mary Michelson Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/15/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Absolutely one of my favorite stories of all time. This is the gold standard of both age regression and slow change.

A young boy is forced to try out for the baseball team again after his dad passes away and the mom wants her son to do more boyish things
Rated: Adult 20 Reviews starstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 35842 Words: 57539 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Sissy
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Forced, Revenge
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Story Theme: Humiliation
Type of Change: Age Regression, Changed by Clothing
Series: None
Published: 01/22/17
Updated: 06/25/17
Reviewer: Mary Michelson Signed
Date: 06/29/17 Title: Mommy i don't want to try out for the baseball team again

You accidentally posted chapter 8 twice.

Kaden's new 'Disease' is getting worse every day. How will he deal with the new effects, and will he find a way to reverse it before it's too late?
Rated: Adult 7 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 32017 Words: 1018 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Mary Michelson Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/23/17 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

I tend not to rate stories until they're complete, but it's not fair you've received three 2-star ratings from the same person because your science fiction story isn't realistic enough. I'd like to see you finish, but until then, I will partially counteract any damage done.

Jake Montessori, a sixteen-year-old boy, had lived a happy life until a few years ago. His family is very rich and everybody loved him much. Unfortunately when a few years ago his mother passed away and his father remarried a younger woman named Laura. She is very gorgeous and Jake fantasized more than one time about her. When his father married again, she brought her son, Bill, that she had from a previous marriage to live with them. Jake who was a slim and nerdy type of guy never bound with Bill, who was a year older than him and an excellent football player. Bill loved to tease Jake, bullying him and call him a f*****, but he never did dare to do it while Jake's father was present. But now things have changed, Jake's father died a few days ago in a car crash living him alone with his very seductive and gorgeous stepmother Laura and her bully and abusive son Bill...
Rated: Kid-Friendly 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 13325 Words: 1500 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: None
Turned Into: Daughter
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, Lingerie, Pantyhose, School Uniform
Locale: Family Household
Body Modification: Breast Implants, Ears Pierced, Sexual Reassignment Surgery, Vocal Surgery
Motivation for Change: Female Domination, Forced
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Captive, Everyday Living, Humiliation
Type of Change: Hormonal
Series: None
Published: 09/21/17
Updated: 09/22/17
Reviewer: Mary Michelson Signed
Date: 10/03/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: how it begins

It's a tried and true TG scenario, but there's really no reason to upload a chapter that's nothing but prologue. The story hasn't even begun yet. There's no TG or story in this TG story.

Set in 1962. 19 year old Barbara Ainsworth has a problem. Her boss at the Library, where she works, has demanded that she attend a lecture at the librarians conference. Unfortunately, it is to be held at the same night that she had promised to attend a "special dinner" with her boy friend. (perhaps he has finally decided to "propose"?) As none of Barbara's friends can attend the conference meeting in her place, she finds herself in a desperate situation. Her only hope is to convince 13 year old Marty Wright, the son of her mother's best friend, to attend the meeting. Of course he must be disguised as a "short, attractive 19 year old brunette" that Barbara's suspicious boss has told one of her contacts at the conference to be watching for.

Rated: Kid-Friendly 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 4941 Words: 16138 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Undies
Locale: Family Household, Office
Motivation for Change: Female Domination, Undercover, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Everyday Living
Series: None
Published: 12/16/17
Updated: 12/16/17
Reviewer: Mary Michelson Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/20/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I remember reading this back on Fictionmania. It's a truly deserved classic, and I'm glad to see it returned to the limelight. But what happened to the illustrations that previously accompanied this story?

Author's Response: They are coming----But I am busy adding them to my other stories

A boy with a reputation as a troublemaker quickly turns over a new leaf with the help of his family, his two best friends, and The Prissy Princess Correctional Club.
Rated: Adult 16 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 54777 Words: 55793 Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Mary Michelson Signed
Date: 01/21/18 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue: Prissy Princess Special Projects

While I love the story to pieces, I think the character of Cindy was underdeveloped. We know she's sadistic, which helps build the humiliation in the first few chapters, and such a character is welcome and practically stock in a story like this. Then in the epilogue, you allude she is a sociopath and possibly detrimental to the program, but you never follow through with how she helps or hurts. Just a big maybe. And frankly, such a plot thread seems out of place and superfluous. I would have just axed her character after Shawna is moved to the campus.

Author's Response: Ahh, so the deal with Cindy is she appears in some of my other stories and this one serves as a prequel of sorts. The Girl In Red - The Woman In White is about the red haired special project they discuss in the epilogue. So you are 100% on point that there is not much payoff for her character in this one. Even then though, I don't really develop her much beyond a sadist and sociopath. It's not a deep characterization, but I've encountered people like that in my life so I see some value in the realism. Thanks for reading and offering thoughtful feedback. :)

Reviewer: Mary Michelson Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/01/18 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Prissy Princess ABCs

Oh my good gracious, I am in love with every word of this story. You make Shawna's humiliation seem so delicious, I'm about ready to lick my screen. My only complaint is the ABCs begin almost rhyming, then stop suddenly. It should really be one or the other. Signed, Little Miss Mary, Prissy Princess of Upright Lily Lemongrass.

Author's Response: Heh, you are absolutely right about the ABCs. I poured over a thesaurus but couldn't find rhyming words to fit the theme for all of them but I also accidentally made new rhymes when I tried to de-rhyme it so I just gave up at that point. If anybody has suggestions for any replacement words that would fit and make it flow better I'm all ears. But for now, I think the Prissy Princesses will have to recite them in a slow cadence with pauses between each to avoid the awkward rhythm. Glad you are enjoying it so far, Little Miss Mary, it's been a blast to write.

A trip to a movie theater takes an unexpected turn.
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews Completed Story Reads: 11963 Words: 1142 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Mary Michelson Signed
Date: 06/12/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

If you're just going to transcribe a captioned image onto a story site, you could at least submit the picture as well.

A sales rep for a school supplies company is duped by an all girls school with an A+ in pretense. What is he to do now?
Rated: Adult 42 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 49434 Words: 22279 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: Girl's School, High School
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Age Regression, Drug-Induced
Series: None
Published: 07/01/19
Updated: 01/04/20
Reviewer: Mary Michelson Signed
Date: 07/04/19 Title: Chapter 1: Orientation

Oooh, Blake is going to be in so much trouble. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.

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