StephanReader
I write lewd stuff.
Member Since: 09/02/16 Membership status: Member
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Seeking shelter from the rain, a teenage boy ends up staying in a house in the forest. Trapped inside, his situation begins to change him...
Rated: Kid-Friendly 11 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 8396 Words: 6898 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Maid
Featured Items: Maid Uniform
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive, Is Unaware of Changes, Loses Identity
Story Theme: Captive
Type of Change: Mind Control, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 03/14/17
Updated: 03/15/17
Reviewer: StephanReader Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03/18/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked this. I think you could cut down a lot of explanation of what the main character is thinking it slows the reading down a lot.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. As for the suggestion, I suppose I could've, but I was going for a kind of running representation of their mental state as they changes, since I'm especially into that side of TG.

Two long time friends come up with a plan to keep one in his family's good graces.
Rated: Adult 6 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 7294 Words: 2844 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Pregnancy, Romance
Series: None
Published: 03/15/17
Updated: 03/15/17
Reviewer: StephanReader Signed starstarstar
Date: 03/18/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like how it gets started quickly but I didn't get drawn into the characters enough to want to finish this.

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