SheppardTheElder
Member Since: 08/18/16 Membership status: Member
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Reviews by SheppardTheElder
Connor and Linda have been married for 2 years. Their relationship is great and they're very happy with each other! Their sex life, however, is non-existent. Connor finds a power within himself that can change everything, his relationship, his sex life, and his body! Can he learn to control it before it's too late?
Rated: Explicit 23 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 105765 Words: 16750 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Husband, Wife
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive, From Submissive to Dominant
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men, Becomes Only Attracted to Women
Story Theme: Witchcraft
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 12/05/13
Updated: 01/05/14
Reviewer: SheppardTheElder Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/26/17 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good writing man!

I liked picking on my sister. I also kept a few secrets from her. When she finds a magic ring, what can go wrong for her?
Rated: Adult 10 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 17231 Words: 3350 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Baby, Daughter, Twin
Featured Items: Diapers
Locale: Family Household
Body Modification: Teeth Removed
Motivation for Change: Revenge
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes, Loses Identity
Story Theme: Babyhood, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 02/14/14
Updated: 02/14/14
Reviewer: SheppardTheElder Signed
Date: 04/02/17 Title: Chapter 1: Revenge of the sister

Mate great story! I loved the Latin spells you included. In one of my stories I did a similar thing except I tried really hard to make the translation make sense. I wasn't very good at it :,) Anyway keep up the good writing!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

The Alexanders were a perfectly normal family, a fact the mother, Lucy, sometimes took pride in...
Join the Alexanders as they struggle to retain a sense of normality as their lives are turned upside down.
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 21737 Words: 3611 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Reviewer: SheppardTheElder Signed
Date: 11/24/16 Title: Chapter 1: Intro/Premise

Good job! This has the makings of an interesting story. I look forward to more

Derek woke up to find a strange girl in his bedroom. What follows...
Rated: Adult 10 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 9807 Words: 2683 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Undies
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Comedy
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: The Curse Universe
Published: 04/02/17
Updated: 04/02/17
Reviewer: SheppardTheElder Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/10/17 Title: Chapter 1: Tricking the Trickster

Love it! That is a great little story. I like how it ended on such a nice point after the indentity change

Two hikers anger the wrong ancient power, and don't come back as themselves. Or at all.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 4 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 5760 Words: 4789 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Child, Mannequin, Object
Motivation for Change: Accident, Forced, Tricked, Unknown
Personality: Fights Change
Story Theme: Horror, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 04/11/17
Updated: 04/11/17
Reviewer: SheppardTheElder Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/16/17 Title: Chapter 1: -

Absolutely brilliant writing. You're sentence structure, creative description and just beautiful flow is inspiring :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Comments like these are what help to keep me going sometimes. <3

A sorcerer's attempt to cheat death goes horribly wrong.
Rated: Adult 18 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 43687 Words: 24602 Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Daughter, Fantasy Character
Personality: Bad to Good
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Mythical Setting, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Racial, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 05/03/17
Updated: 12/20/18
Reviewer: SheppardTheElder Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/05/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ah I love the irony of him trying to cheat death only to be killed by his slaves and then his souls being put into one. Hope to see more soon :D

As part of a dare, Reg tempts fate by insulting the gods. Unexpectedly someone or something responds in kind to Reg's detriment. Now Reg has a new situation to figure out.
Rated: Adult 7 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 16839 Words: 7776 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Reviewer: SheppardTheElder Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/09/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Tempting Fate or whats on the BBQ

I like you're writing but I'm not sure how the second chapter relates to the first one yet

Author's Response: Thanks for the pat on the back. I appreciate it. When I wrote Chapter one, I was focused on Reg but I kept pulling Doug into the story line. For Chapter 2, I wanted to supply a little backstory, introduce some characters, and expand on Doug and Reg's relationship. I'm still not sure where I am going with the story but I have a couple wingnut ideas.

Jackson was just a normal teenager that had a normal family and a normal life: But when he goes on a forest walk he finds a device that will change him forever.
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 11208 Words: 1111 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: None
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Child, Daughter, Son
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Body Swap, Mechanical Device
Series: None
Published: 06/28/17
Updated: 06/30/17
Reviewer: SheppardTheElder Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/30/17 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

The second is a much better improvement. Keep up the good work! :D

Janet was just trying to get through another day of her retail job when a really strange customer came in.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 1 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 2813 Words: 4392 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Featured Items: Undies
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men, Becomes Only Attracted to Women
Series: None
Published: 04/17/18
Updated: 04/17/18
Reviewer: SheppardTheElder Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/04/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I feel like janet suddenly changing was random and came from no where. That's not entirely a bad thing but it could have worked better if it was a time jump and Bryant came back asking a guy for Janet for it to be her having been changed. Look forward to more though, I definitely like the orientation change and romance parts.

In a world where only females are capable of magic, a boy will have to fight for the right to be himself.
Rated: Adult 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 4162 Words: 2528 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: In Hiding, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Mythical Setting, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 06/03/18
Updated: 06/04/18
Reviewer: SheppardTheElder Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/04/18 Title: Chapter 1: Kitsuneki

Omggggg I love it!!! I had a similar idea having a trans character be in a female form but you've done it really, really well here! XD I like the no explanations just it's there, deal with it, magic style with all the elements and different fighting styles. Also really love the aura idea. I really look forward to seeing more

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