DerbyGhost
Trash girl. Trash world
Member Since: 07/26/16 Membership status: Member
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Reviews by DerbyGhost
Dane thought he had life planned out and everything was working out. That is until a car crash tears it all away and leaves him paralyzed, but what can a medical company that specializes in bleeding edge technology offer him that will help him retake his life?
Rated: Explicit 75 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 53721 Words: 65166 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: High School, Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Mechanical Device
Warnings: Death, Politically Incorrect
Series: None
Published: 06/26/15
Updated: 05/18/17
Reviewer: MrPeanutbutter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/30/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Tetraplegia

I wasn't a member when I read this, but I wanted to retroactively do a review. I love the level of research that Misaania put into making it realistic and the level of detail is great. Watching the tentative relationships form with this whole new life is very interesting to behold.

This is probably one of my favorite stories on the site and I hope it comes back. I completely understand that other stories capture the imagination and sometimes it is just hard to write, but I wanted to share my love with this tale.

Author's Response: Saw this review, and you're actually not the only one to have a similar liking to the tale. Sadly, it just so happens there are two extremes in the audience. People believe that because I do not suffer from the injury, I should not write about it (obviously, I ignore these people in the same way I ignore SJWs). And then there are people who believe that the mc's issues arising from the sex change is enough and the leg is going too far. To these, I need to make a clear statement, but I have specified them below in other review responses.

Inevitably, I will return to this writing, but I've been pressured to do something with my life. To take a step forward to prove that I am someone different. To prove that I am someone different, not to others, but to myself. I fear that my work is subpar, that my work is only good enough to be in the upper-echelons amongst other 'hobbyist' writers. This won't work for me. I dream of becoming a writer and as a result, I've stopped focusing on my work here and started on a massive project that I will attempt to publish. I will come back (hopefully very soon) and I hope you stick with this until then.

Marc and his six friends are on a vacation in a posh mountain cabin, only to find that half of them have been transformed into women. On top of that, a mysterious force seems to be hunting them as they give into their erotic desires and discover things they never knew about each other.
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 25084 Words: 9864 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo, Jock
Featured Items: Bikinis, Corsets, High Heels, Lingerie, Masks, Sex Toys
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Personality: Bad to Good, Cultural/Nationality Change, Good to Bad, Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual, Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Comedy, Horror
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Racial, Stuck
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 03/09/16
Updated: 07/29/16
Reviewer: MrPeanutbutter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/29/16 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four: Swimming? Really?

This is sort of a retroactive review for the series, but this has been a really fun read so far. I enjoy the way you are playing around with horror movie tropes. As always with a TGTrinity story, the sex scenes are sexy, and I really enjoy the narrative frame that you've got going on. I can't wait to see the rest of the gory direction the story will go in (I mean, it is sex AND death, so I'm looking forward to the death as well).

Author's Response: You won't have to wait too long, as the next chapter definitely brings the "Death" promised in the title.

A normal kid with a not so normal sister ends up agreeing to something he shouldn't have. But then a new journey begins.
Rated: Explicit 16 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 26813 Words: 10444 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 07/14/16
Updated: 07/25/16
Reviewer: MrPeanutbutter Signed
Date: 07/27/16 Title: Chapter 5: A new school

I really enjoy the character interactions so far in this series. The relationship between Abbie and Alyssa feels real to me, which is quite nice. Keep up the good work!

In a realm where hair color determines a person’s worth, Prince Delvaran was destined for greatness. However, when his kingdom falls to invaders and his magic backfires, he becomes stuck as a light-haired girl. He disguises himself as a maid in his former castle, and plots to assassinate his conquerors.

All the while, a powerful empire stirs in the east, where two thieves conduct an ambitious heist.
Rated: Adult 242 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 113084 Words: 138685 Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Maid, Slave, Teenager
Featured Items: Boots, Maid Uniform, Work Uniform
Motivation for Change: Accident, In Hiding
Personality: Bad to Good, Cultural/Nationality Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Captive, Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Mythical Setting, Romance
Type of Change: Cultural, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 06/12/18
Updated: 06/13/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/04/19 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Unleashed

I've been burning through this story today, literally burning through it. If this was on paper I'd describe it as a total page Turner. Just wanted to say that this is absolutely adorable. I just can't wait to read what happens next.

Author's Response: Haha, thanks so much! I didn't think that this story would be adorable when I first began writing it, but I suppose I can understand that.

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/04/19 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - The Golden Wing II

*pounds fists on table*

Let.
Liral
Be
Happy

Author's Response: Liral deserves a million happy endings, for sure :D

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/05/19 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - With Ink and Quill

OH my GOD YES TAKE THAT INITIATIVE GIIIIIIIIIIIRL

Author's Response: She can do it!

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/05/19 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - The Liar

Pour one out for your favorite dead homie. RIP the best of us. The damned and doomed Cross

Author's Response: :(

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/05/19 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Justice

FULL BLOWN TRANS SCREAMING. OH MY GODDDD

Author's Response: Hehe that's a fun kind of screaming!

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/05/19 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Faith

Oh noooo. I caught up. My heart is broken. This story is so lovely. I'm so happy to read them.

Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter, so you won't have to wait too long! The bad news is that I only have two more chapters planned, so this story is wrapping up. <3

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/11/19 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - Rise and Fall

Thank the mother flipping giant for all of this! Dang it's a good chapter.

I think I might be the only person who would be interested in reading about the geopolitical situation of rebuilding a collapsed empire and overthrowing a caste system and the consequences thereof in a fantasy setting. But I know that's not as much fun to write as adorable romances. I've only been reading this story irl for a short period of time but this was your first story that I read and fell in love with. I'm bummed it's ending but I can't wait to read whatever else you write.

Thank you so much for the chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I agree that the aftermath may be more interesting than the tale of Folston and Daila's rise, but I think it'd be a very different type of story :D

Justin is a rock climber. He's not the best, but he's pretty good. What will he do when his climbing goals and his life are upended by a poorly timed infection?
Rated: Explicit 71 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 85640 Words: 37915 Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Romance, Sports
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 09/22/18
Updated: 02/12/19
Reviewer: MrPeanutbutter Signed
Date: 02/09/19 Title: Chapter 12: First Crux

I want to like this story more than I do. It feels every time the author wants to add in drama they go for a heaping helping of transphobia. One would ideas cis people have about gender might change at least a little bit in a world with magic gender disease. It feels cheap.

Reviewer: MrPeanutbutter Signed
Date: 02/09/19 Title: Chapter 12: First Crux

Mobile won't let me write longer reviews: the problem I have with the cheap drama is that you are one of the few writers on here who seems to grasp some of the nuances of gender compared to the average embarassing stereotype filled tg fiction. I just expect better from you.

Author's Response: I'm not sure why finding out that you're dating a TERF counts as cheap drama or what kind of drama would be suitably expensive for your tastes. I hope that you enjoy the story more as we move on.

The story of a transgirl who hasn't realized her own identity yet, Gendered tells the tale of David - who gets pulled into a new world, shoved into a new body she isn't ready to admit she wants, and told that she needs to defeat an immortal queen if she ever wants to return home.
Rated: Explicit 11 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 13993 Words: 25899 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 11/03/18
Updated: 02/28/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/28/19 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Another lovely chapter. I love seeing Lonna's slow change of how she thinks about Melissa. And I too am looking forward to seeing Melissa in leathers. Thank God she's going to get a bra that actually fits.

Sir Chester of Echord died the warrior's death he had always known awaited him. Upon passing into the afterlife, he was not greeted by the eternal rest he so sought but by a foul-mouthed Goddess hellbent on recruiting him for yet another war. A new journey through a familiar world may lead our brave knight to a destiny greater than he ever could have dreamed.
Rated: Adult 19 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 8972 Words: 13948 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Featured Items: Corsets, Masks
Motivation for Change: In Hiding, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Bad to Good
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Women, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Mythical Setting, Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 01/14/19
Updated: 10/08/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/02/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked this first chapter a lot. The battle scene felt visceral and real, like a forgotten myth. And the ending left me full of so many questions! I'm excited for what comes next.

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/03/19 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ooohhh exciting! Things are really happening now. I'm 100% all in for returned from the dead reveeeenge. This is a lot of fun to read and I can't wait for what comes next. And congratulations on your other writing!!

Two best friends witness an unexplainable transformation in childhood. Now, with adulthood rapidly approaching, they reunite by chance. But are they the same people they once were? And what does this bizarre change mean going forward?
Rated: Adult 30 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 14305 Words: 20145 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: Formal Dance, High School, Road Trip
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 01/22/19
Updated: 03/02/19
Reviewer: MrPeanutbutter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/16/19 Title: Chapter 4: The Turn of the Wind

This story is absolutely gorgeous. The writing does such a splendid job painting the scene. Even a mundane (albeit exciting) high school feels alive through the graceful prose.. now the grand question is what comes next.

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words! I hope you continue to read and enjoy this story.

Sam is a quiet 16 year old high school guy. He's a nerd and a geek. A pretty typical guy. When his friends try to peer pressure him into playing the tank role for the new VR game they all want to play, he rebels, although he can't quite figure out why. Follow Sam as he dives into the world of Pellan Rise as the dainty little healer named Sylanna, where he discovers that the game has a lot more influence over the real world than everyone thought.
Rated: Adult 286 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 157649 Words: 132027 Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: High School, Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Women
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Mythical Setting, Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Intense Violence
Series: Kammi-verse, The Andrare Legacy
Published: 02/06/19
Updated: 09/14/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/01/19 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Well. That happened.

Well you should read the reviews this time because that was super sweet and cute.

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/13/19 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: Heartfelt.

Like always, this chapter is a gift. I love the genuine heartfelt discussion between Karen and Syl.

Doan, a ranger, Roland, a shieldbearer, Lowell, a troubadour and a secretive mage with no name are a merry band of adventurers seeking the usual fortune and glory. Following rumors of great treasure, their latest quest brings them to one of the numerous abandoned castles of the Mad King...
Rated: Adult 15 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 8626 Words: 13751 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Mythical Setting, Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 02/09/19
Updated: 02/17/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/18/19 Title: Chapter 3: Crown for a New Age

So I'd been waiting a few chapters to put in a review but gosh this is so extremely cute. Just extreme warm and fuzzy feels. And the idea of a bunch of eggs just adventuring together and coming to terms with it with a little magical nudge is so we'll put together in this.

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words <3 I plan on continuing to write magically wonderful little stories~

A young man on the precipice of adulthood discovers the mistakes of his parents have opened up a brand new impossible world.
Rated: Explicit 147 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 161004 Words: 30582 Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Bride
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Romance, Witchcraft
Series: None
Published: 02/12/19
Updated: 05/30/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/22/19 Title: Chapter 4: The Warlock

Good on Erica for standing up for herself. I'm sure it won't make much difference but it's nice to see her just refuse to go along. I wasn't sure if I wanted to read this based purelh on the description, but the little details make this really charming. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: yeah, my description is super bad! i always go way too generic. i'm glad you like things so far. xo, charlotte

For many people, becoming infected with the CARV virus a horrifying prospect. Your life as you know it might as well be over. So why is it that Nick can't stop thinking about it? At least, whenever he's not playing fighting games...
Rated: Explicit 29 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 20211 Words: 8726 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Romance
Series: None
Published: 02/17/19
Updated: 03/04/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed
Date: 02/18/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"I wondered briefly if I had some kind of meta-disease. Some affliction that made me desperate to become sick..."

Awww poor mc. They've got dysphoria so bad and they don't even know it. Excited on seeing what happens next!

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/18/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Forgot to put a rating on here. The descriptions of the game makes me wonder what it's real world counterpart is? It feels like a mixture between smash Bros and street fighter.

Author's Response: I don't know anything about fighting games, so I don't think this one has a real world counterpart.

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/21/19 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Dysphoric times call for desperate measures. I just have nothing but terrible feelings about future interactions with current "friends"

Author's Response: Hmm, that's definitely something to keep an eye on.

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/27/19 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm sure I'll be feeling super dysphoric about this new body any day now. Yep. Any day now. The doctor told me it would happen soon and I'm sure I'll feel super upset. Yep. Sometime soon.
Also please mc eat a meal! Be good to yourself!

Author's Response: Stay tuned for more about this character's upcoming dysphoria crisis.

Erik came home from school one day after being called a girl, but realized...he kind of liked it? Follow along as Emma navigates her gender identity, in a family and community that may not be ready for her.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 59 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 16857 Words: 33654 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Hormonal
Series: None
Published: 02/18/19
Updated: 03/28/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/21/19 Title: Chapter 1: September 28, 2018

Sibling solidarity is the best kind of solidarity. I hope it stays that way though.

Author's Response: It will - though the next chapter may be a bit of a red herring in that regard. Keep hope!

Marcus is a bored young senior stuck in a slowly emptying countryside, with parents quick to blame him for all of his life's woes, and two friends, Jules and Sam. A chance meeting with a new punk student at school, Lucie, eventually leads them four to stumble upon their science teacher's secret lab, including a portal to other universes. After an accident, him and Sam find their bodies transformed, and all four friends have to put their heads together to find the best way to accommodate for their changes while keeping the lab a secret.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 39 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 47371 Words: 30749 Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse, Forced
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Mind/Body Posession, Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 02/18/19
Updated: 05/06/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/20/19 Title: Chapter 4: Lunch Reunion

I'm sure N will find a name that fits them. That period in between of knowing you don't like your name but not knowing what to call yourself is so rough. I'm glad they have good friends to help support them though.

Author's Response: I think by this point it's already come through my writing, but I attach an enormous symbolic importance to names. Usually, characters that have no name don't fully know themselves, names can be rejected or embraced, and sometimes, a moniker or a nickname is the truest name someone can have.

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/20/19 Title: Chapter 10: The New Self

I just want to give Anna a huge hug. I'm honestly worried about what's going to happen when she gets home to her parents. Also I think all bosses should appreciate a good mohawk. It should show good patience and character to be able to grow and maintain one.

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/26/19 Title: Chapter 19: Looking Sharp

If there was a gap in between writing chapters, then this chapter definitely didn't show it. Exciting and fun as always. I love how all the teens just totally roll with whatever is facing them. And the support they give each other is so sweet.

The story of a transgirl's realistic transition, including the pitfalls and highlights. Somewhat autobiographical in nature. I hope you enjoy!
Rated: Explicit 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 3966 Words: 6481 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Featured Items: Undies
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 02/21/19
Updated: 02/27/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/27/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is probably one of the most important stories on this site. I'm one chapter in but wow this is hitting the feelings hard.

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/27/19 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Haha woops I'm coming out to my boss today.
Woops. Ha. Haha. Ha. Ha. Wow this chapter was hard to read. But really well done to the point where by the time I realized it was a Trainwreck of a day for Bethany it was already too late. Poor girl...
I was going to say "ooh ooh one of the first trans women I talked to about gender works at a casino" but ... I don't know if that response is really appropriate by the end of the chapter. Again really really well done.

In a world of superheroes and villains, Gavin McArthur feels like more of a shell than a person even after he transfers to a school for kids who are likely to soon posses an Alter form, a form that grants the user super powers and a different appearance. But what do you to do when your Alter form represents an uncomfortable truth about yourself that you're not prepared to face?
Rated: Adult 100 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 47852 Words: 121554 Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Featured Items: Masks, School Uniform, Work Uniform
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Coming of Age
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 02/25/19
Updated: 10/16/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/07/19 Title: Chapter 2: Kinetic Potential

Everything about this setup screams "fun" I love super hero school dramas. I love how you showed her discovering her powers. There was such a sense of heady excitement. I can't say enough about how excited I am for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Iím glad you like it all so far! Iíll try to keep the excitement coming!

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/11/19 Title: Chapter 4: Hastened Momentum

This remains one of my favorite stories on the site. I'm waiting for everything to come crashing down for our hero with baited breath. And I enjoy the introduction of quirks, womthkng that really helps humanize these superheroic figures. Really well done.

Author's Response: It was very important to me to include this complication for the Alter status quo; every single one of them is dealing with something innately personal that canít just be fixed.

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/04/19 Title: Chapter 7: Spotlights and Receipts

What I love about this story is the characters feel so incredibly human to me. Gabby trying and failing to hide her interest in women's clothes. The conversation about Cass's dad. Even the gut churning final interaction with her mom. It all feels so real and it makes me so happy to read a new chapter.

Also the lengths of these chapters are just the right size. Although, I'm always bummed when I finish one because dang it's just so good.

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/22/19 Title: Chapter 8: Increasing Imp-etus

Well as expected we know where dear Gabs gets all her toxic information about trans people from. And god every time my anxiety thinks she's just going to come out to people she continues to make it worse for herself... Oh gBby. You're a wreck and I can't wait to see what happens next!!

Callum is alone in the States applying for a job as an engineer when the world changes forever. In an event called the Emergence he is changed. Fox ears and a tail greet the newly minted girl in a mirror. On the run from the abusive system, she is forced to turn to crime to survive.
Rated: Explicit 235 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 79216 Words: 118355 Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Masks
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Personality: Bad to Good, Good to Bad, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Costume or Halloween, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 03/03/19
Updated: 07/20/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/04/19 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Jocelyn

awww no not Jocelyn. You're doing a good job bringing great character to small interactions. We only spent a little time with her, and my heart is hurting at the fact that she might be dead. Also poor mc. Although now I want to pet a fox tail... It sounds so soft and fluffy

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/04/19 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Thief

My new favorite sneaky thief. Steal from all the jerks.

It's weird. Fictional characters shouldn't be able to interact with the real world yet Kalia has stolen my heart. Gosh I can't wait for more. Thank you for writing this.

Author's Response: AAAAAWWWWHHHHHHHHHHH. Thank youuuu! Aaahhhh I love how ppl are reacting to Jocelyn's death.... maybe I should kill characters more often..... :thinking:

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/11/19 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Socks

Hmm people have amazing powers. You know what I'm going to do? Directly antagonize someone with said powers. Yeah this is gonna turn out great for that guy. But I'm so glad that Kalia got some clothes that fit her. It's not good to run around in just a hoodie all day. I love their interactions with Laithe and how you're slowly revealing her powers. Really good work.

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Emergence

If something bad happens to Caser I'm gonna cry. I love this cool non-binary cuddle buddy. I really like the self reflection and introspection present in this whole series. And it's nice to just have little sweet breaks where nice things happen amongst the dramatic elements. I feel like it grounds the story and makes it feel more realistic to me.

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/16/19 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Realisation

This chapter is an absolute joy. From the super gay television interview, the hint about Kelly, and the heart to heart breakdown so much happens in such a fun way.

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/24/19 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Photo

This is a master class on fluffy, consensual, heartwarming romance. This is the queer enemies to lovers fic we don't deserve but dammit we need.

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/04/19 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Captured

This chapter gave me so many good fuzzy feelings.

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Date: 05/27/19 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Hospital

Since nobody else seems like they want to review this chapter I just want to say I adore the relationship between Laithe and Kalia. Adorable. I'm just holding back my anticipation for whatever the outfit is going to be. What I love about your stories is they always surprise me with the little touches and joys that come with it. You have such a graceful way of writing character interactions. It's just beautiful.

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Date: 06/11/19 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Bastet

This chapter is just like... What I love about this story is it captures the mundane bliss of love. And of being a flirty superpowered master thief who likes to play with the hearts of those around her. Look it's good. I just love this story.

Finding himself kicked out of his foster parents’ home on the night of the Emergence, John Doe Smith doubted even his luck could get any worse.

Now irrevocably changed by the Emergence into what many see as a monster, the newly dubbed Wraith must now deal with the consequences of her new powers in an unfriendly world.
Rated: Adult 95 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 34986 Words: 71532 Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character
Locale: Family Household, Prison
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown, Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Captive, Everyday Living, Mythical Setting, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Torture
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 03/15/19
Updated: 10/16/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/04/19 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Hope

Who can take Ms. Clark seriously with such a riiiidiculous accent. I know I can't. But seriously, here's looking forward to good things for them in the future. I love how you're slowly drawing out their time in super jail but each chapter feels fresh and important.

Author's Response: I'll be honest Ms. Clark's accent started off as me shitposting late at night, while writing and teasing Rosilys Inknose, now I have her double checking the phonetics of the accent before I post. On the writing prison chapters it is a challenge to convey the long durations of time and the monotony without actually making it boring ( I hope I am succeeding), I experimented a bit before I decided to use this first person "diary then live" structure.

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Date: 04/16/19 Title: Chapter 9: Interlude 2: Alexander Spencer

My favorite daddy is here~

Author's Response: kinky ;)

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/09/19 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12: Songbird

Speaking of filled with joy, this whole chapter makes me so happy. I love the idea that Redd and Nightbinder have a drinking buddy relationship. Not friends. But buddies. And I love exploration of powers. You bring a lot of excitement and joy to the process.

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/16/19 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 18: Scapegoats

I am so excited for the continuation of Songbird. I know how much time and dedication you put into writing this story, and the love just pours out of the prose. Also Kelly and Robin together are so cute!!!!

Tyler makes a wish, but ignores an important rule attached to it. The wish-granter needs to take another route, so that the wish comes true.
Rated: Adult 27 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 38913 Words: 15747 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Tricked, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Women, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 03/15/19
Updated: 04/16/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/19 Title: Chapter 7: Monachopsis - 1.6

I've been reading this story for a while and just wanted to say I really enjoy your writing style. I hope Taylor is able to feel more comfortable as herself soon. Maybe Max can help her with that. The characters feel real to me and I really like that. Please keep up the good work.

A young man has an encounter with a ghost that just wants him to dress better.
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 5454 Words: 2264 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Maid
Featured Items: Corsets, Maid Uniform, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline, Undies
Motivation for Change: Forced
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Comedy
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 04/11/19
Updated: 04/11/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/11/19 Title: Chapter 1: Story

Imperialism vs. lack of pockets. Which one truly is humanities greatest crime?

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/11/19 Title: Chapter 1: Story

Goofing aside though, this story was really cute and fun to read. I quite enjoyed it! I love the interactions with the ghost and the transformation was just lovely.

Dave's seemingly static life gets turned upside down the day the second wave of the Emergence sweeps through the world.

How does the newly minted Catgirl fit into a world of Heroes, Villains, and mysterious artifacts of an advanced civilization?

This story takes place in the wonderful Kammi Kettu universe made by Rosilys Inknose.
Rated: Explicit 35 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 11218 Words: 31113 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Women, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Mythical Setting, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 04/16/19
Updated: 06/11/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/29/19 Title: Chapter 5: Recovery

All of these Puns gave me a hare-ty laugh. These scenes are so bun-believably cute. I love their interactions. Seriously I love this story.

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/16/19 Title: Chapter 1: Second Wave

The first time I read this chapter I was like "no fucking way they're a first time writer I don't but it." I love how your story helps expand the Lore of how companies are dealing with this, but feels so organic and fresh as well. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/11/19 Title: Chapter 7: Hero?

I'm sure Redd would love to play with you again cutie~

But also gosh what a fun chapter! I love all of this. It's just so cute and adorable. The catnip is just... So friggin cute. Someone get this girl some NIP and CUDDLES. Stat!

Someone has to make gadgets for all the new heroes that are gonna pop up, and that someone might as well be Bridget, a relatively popular tech youtuber turned genius mouse girl! But how did her early days go, and when did she start making gears for heroes specifically?
Rated: Adult 45 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 11953 Words: 37117 Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Mother
Locale: Family Household, Labratory
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Made Smarter
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 04/16/19
Updated: 06/29/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/18/19 Title: Chapter 1: First Uploads are the Hardest

From the very first moment of the story I loved your protagonist. She's plucky and I love the aspect of a YouTuber in another country experiencing the emergence. Now.... The question is do they travel for conventions after they change.

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/23/19 Title: Chapter 5: Bonding Glue

The interplay between your characters during the AMA is so sweet. I feel like I'm watching it on a stream. Our mouse I such a good mom.
I am worried about what's going to happen with Sharkies dad. He's an asshole, but will he cause some legal issues?

Author's Response: He deserves some legal issues, but since äŠrka is only 14 she doesn't have an ID yet so it's easier to make her disappear. Thanks for the prompt to address it though, Derby.

After a fun night on the town Maria was ready to wind down and relax but things dont always go to plan when magic is involved.
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 12053 Words: 7090 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Maid Uniform, Sex Toys
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Female Domination, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Bondage/S&M
Series: Convenient glamours
Published: 04/16/19
Updated: 04/19/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/18/19 Title: Chapter 1: Here we hecking go

Endearing, heartwarming, smutty fluff. My favorite kind of smut. This feels like a warm hug and a handjob all in one. Please keep adding on to this story.

Author's Response: Im imagining a warm hug with a handjob involved and OOOF. Ill get that second part up before too long. Its hard to say if there could or should be a third.

Cyrus Sutton, an ex-engineer at a luxury car firm in England is struck by the Emergence shortly after being fired from his job.
Changed into a Cyborg with Psionic powers, emotionally unstable, jobless, and with a growing distrust of the authorities. Under the alias Eunos. Cy is set to wreak havoc on the town and governmental systems hellbent to bring her under their control.
This is set in the same Universe as QuietValerie's Kammi Kettu and as such works under the same ideals and laws as her and all the other authors works, I hope you enjoy it!
Rated: Explicit 38 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 14260 Words: 50498 Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Masks, Pantyhose
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Personality: Good to Bad, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Costume or Halloween, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Mechanical Device
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 05/12/19
Updated: 09/14/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/12/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Frontal Impact

Strong start!! I immediately am interested in your character. This is a personality that I haven't really seen in other tg stories and I am very excited to see what happens to them! Please keep it up.

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/12/19 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Burning Up the Night

Awwww shiiiiit what happens next?? Your chapters go by fast and I wish we got to spend a little more time in the world. I'm immediately interested in what is happening in England and I can't wait to see what else comes from these changes. Great start!

An oblivious little egg goes for a ride.
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 2658 Words: 1909 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Caught Crossdressing, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: Convenient glamours
Published: 05/13/19
Updated: 05/13/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/14/19 Title: Chapter 1: Tough egg to crack

Every time you write a story I know I'm in for a treat. you write my absolute favorite trans positive sex out there. I'm sorry I'm at a loss for words. This just stole my heart and turns me on omg.

Author's Response: I'm thrilled to provide within this niche :). thanks for the kind words!

Andra, Fiona, Kaylen, and Riven are the four worst adventurers in their guild. Each has a reputation for being a screw-up, but what will happen when they come together? Will they find a way to become legendary heroes? Or will they leave only destruction in their wake?
Rated: Adult 40 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 16282 Words: 80033 Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Comedy
Series: None
Published: 05/17/19
Updated: 08/30/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/27/19 Title: Chapter 1: Bad Reputation

They're all idiots and I love them so

Coby was once again forced to go to a college party by his best friend Brook. He hadn't been counting on much happening, he was an anxious nerd after all, but waking up in his friend's bed as a gorgeous girl was pretty damn far out of even his craziest dreams. A Kammiverse story.
Rated: Explicit 116 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 106659 Words: 68557 Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character, Model
Locale: College, Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Women, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Intense Violence
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 05/21/19
Updated: 09/12/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/02/19 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Big Fluffy Jumper

In a rude and cruel world, these lesbiabs are a shining beacon of cute that brightens my day. It's so exciting that Elsie is getting in touch with her desires. Now if only she'd realize that Maddy is gay as hell

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/21/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Loose Shirt

It begins!! Dramatically starting with the third Emergence, we've got such a nice treat with some new faces. I love Coby's relationship to Brook. It feels like they have such a strong history already, even early in the story. And woops! A fast change, but the good stuff is yet to come. HEHEHEH.

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/21/19 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Braless

THESE TWO DISASTER GIRLS!!!! Every time I read and reread over the exchange it leaves me giddy. I start giggling when they're chatting and talking about how the other is so cute. Like. DAMN. Immediately you reach for the heart with these two cutie-patooties.

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/21/19 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Tank Top Pajamas

Ahhh Elsie. Just so absolutely adorable. Just the cutest egg out there on the whole face of the Earth. I don't have much to say because I'm still just internally squealing.

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/25/19 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Skater Lesbian Shoes

It's starting. The slow and subtle changes of her perception of herself. Being drawn to women's clothes. To styles. Poor confused girl.... I'm glad she has people she can talk to and try to work this out with. I love the professor and I'm so excited to see what happens!

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/27/19 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Flowing White Blouse

This chapter is a roller coaster of emotions. I kept getting so upset at her other classmates. And especially the professor. Ugh that guy is such a tool. But it ends with such hope. At least in the school setting we finally see Elsie comfy in her own skin and that makes me so giddy.

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/30/19 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Little Black Skirt

This story is the best kind of tease. :3

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/03/19 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Scuffed Jeans

This chapter fucking.... Killed me when I read it. I'm a ghost right now reviewing this story. So much raw sexual, erotic energy in one cute chapter. You're amazing.

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/07/19 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Flowy Robes

Who has two thumbs and is so so gay

Me reading this story. Also fuck this story makes me giddy. Like there's hope and joy for all us trans gals. It's important to me.

Michael thinks he knows his heart's desire. Unfortunately for him, the demon he summoned seems convinced she knows better.
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 11464 Words: 7636 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Featured Items: Boots
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Female Domination, Forced
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Women, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 05/26/19
Updated: 05/26/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/27/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is probably the hottest story that I've read on this site in a while. I loved the masturbating against the clock because she didn't want Arialla to see her enjoying her body. The sex scene between the two of them could have been portrayed as creepy, and instead you have this loving fucking sexy scene. All in all, this is such a good read. Thank you for writing it and putting a lot of effort in it. Now I am wondering about what hell is like for Elishe. Hopefully it's sweet because she's a good girl who deserves nice things.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I worked so hard on this story, so it's really good to see it enjoyed. I'm sure she'll enjoy hell~ There might be a sequel, one day, but it would likely feature her returning to earth to help another transgirl.

After the strange machine appeared on the lawn at the library, Meredith found it was easy to physically transition to the feminine body she wanted so desperately. But socially transitioning, and getting her parents to go along with it, would be a lot harder.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 14 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 10857 Words: 30083 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Mechanical Device
Series: None
Published: 08/28/19
Updated: 10/15/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/30/19 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This chapter 100% gives me flashbacks to my Presbyterian teenage years. If I never hear "Here I am to Worship" again, I will be a happy woman.

Like always, this is a really enjoyable chapter. Every time I think the mom is worn down a little bit and is going to accept Meredith, she pulls out more "facts I learned on the internet." Thank you for writing it!

Wanting to help him escape the dreary life of the future, as well as a bad break up, Terry's twin sister drags him into the latest VRmmo. The intention was to distract, but when Terry agreed, he could never have known the adventure of self discovery he'd be dragged into.
Rated: Explicit 51 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 35654 Words: 62469 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Twin
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Women, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Romance
Type of Change: Mechanical Device, Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 09/19/19
Updated: 10/18/19
Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/30/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Break Up

Taylor is the absolute sweetest older sister. I love how she swoops in and swoops us off to story time

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Date: 09/30/19 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Dance Floor

Nobody writes a sex scene like Vale. I've said it before. I will say it again. The most affirming, heart warming, toe curling sex scenes. The goood shiiit

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