Cashmere Chloe
Member Since: 03/06/16 Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Cashmere Chloe
All my friends were growing up and leaving me behind. Why would they want to hang out with girls instead of me? But thanks to my mother, I was able to once again become "Mr. Popular!"
Rated: Kid-Friendly 21 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 149632 Words: 65 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend
Locale: Family Household, High School, Hospital or Clinic
Body Modification: Breast Implants, Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Personality: Bad to Good
Story Type: Comic
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Series: None
Published: 09/29/11
Updated: 09/29/11
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed
Date: 05/03/16 Title: Chapter 8: Page 8

... mother knows best!

There was a time traveller, who had a door capable of opening to anywhere in time.
He approach historians and offer to take them back in time. But as they go though the door they turn into woman.
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 9689 Words: 85 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstar
Date: 05/03/16 Title: Chapter 1: intro

You'd benefit from some proofing and the last sentence, as written, doesn't quite make sense. For example, I think you mean to say something like: "This was all good, but every second traveler passing through the door would turn into a girl regardless of their original gender." Or, maybe you mean something else with the "even out the population type in the past". I'm not sure what you' re trying to say there.
It would be a shame to share your fun idea, only to find people can't understand it.
Good luck!

A man starts slowing turning a girl. Can he stop it before it's too late?
Rated: Explicit 25 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 213195 Words: 6729 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Breast Forms, Lingerie
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 07/23/14
Updated: 10/13/14
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/04/16 Title: Chapter 5: Road to Seattle

It's nice to read the thoughts and details of the change. I liked the gradual change more than one quick "pooft, you're a girl!"

Sometimes you shouldn't read notes.
Rated: Adult 12 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 46565 Words: 3048 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend, Mother, Teenager
Featured Items: Bikinis, Boots, Corsets, Lingerie, School Uniform, Undies
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement
Motivation for Change: Female Domination, Forced, Tricked, Unknown
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive, Loses Identity
Story Theme: Pregnancy, Witchcraft
Series: None
Published: 04/11/15
Updated: 06/07/16
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstar
Date: 05/01/16 Title: Chapter 3: The Steamroom 3

The idea seems to have promise but there are distractions beyond typos like descriptions that don't make sense. I'll be it would be a lot better if you proofed it. Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: I think that happens with the fact I chose a creature of mist and steam as my transformation method. After that you end up going a bit crazy.

A Twisted Glen Tale: The beautiful barkeep at the Crimson Hen offers young squire Podryn a drink that will transform him into a sultry, ginger haired woman.
Rated: Explicit 3 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 6563 Words: 3925 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Prostitute
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Comedy, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 08/14/15
Updated: 08/14/15
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07/12/16 Title: Chapter 1: CHAPTER -ONE-

I don't usually read magical stories but this was fun - the setting the bit of lightness. Thanks for sharing.

A short story for the weekend crowds. A man reads something that changes him progressively.
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 4658 Words: 1718 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Tricked, Unknown
Personality: Fights Change, Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 11/13/15
Updated: 11/13/15
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/11/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A fun read!

A short story I wrote a while ago describing my most common fantasy; awakening to discover I've changed into a girl while sleeping.
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 2366 Words: 1009 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Body Modification: Permanent Hair/Skin/Nail Change
Motivation for Change: Forced, Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Bodily Functions
Series: None
Published: 11/16/15
Updated: 11/17/15
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstar
Date: 05/04/16 Title: Chapter 1: A Short Story

As a summary from a dream, it's a nice story but it's not a "realistic gender change". Maybe you should re-classify it?

Harry will hit the jackpot, but he'll need his best friend George to help him collect the winning prize
Rated: Adult 22 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 52371 Words: 19399 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Bride, Clothing, Wife
Featured Items: Bikinis, Breast Forms, Bridal Gown, Curlers, High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails
Locale: Family Household
Body Modification: Ears Pierced, Vaginal Alteration
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Series: None
Published: 02/11/16
Updated: 04/08/16
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstar
Date: 04/12/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Harry wins the jackpot on a slot machine

I know it can be cumbersome, but you should proofread more carefully. Some of the mistakes look like typos but others are more distracting (like mistaking "Boob's" as the plural form of "boob" - its "boobs," no apostrophe, no capital letter).
Maybe try to picture the conversations as a tool to make the dialogue more natural.
Try some basic web research on the products and procedures you're writing about. It's generally easy to find information that will make your writing more credible.

She wanted to humiliate and feminize him. Could he keep her believing he didn't like it so she would continue?
Rated: Explicit 26 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 58627 Words: 13069 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend, Prostitute
Featured Items: Breast Forms, High Heels, Lingerie, Pantyhose
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Breast Implants
Motivation for Change: Female Domination, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Humiliation
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 04/04/16
Updated: 05/22/16
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04/23/16 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Good prose, fun read.

Author's Response: Thank you. Starting with this story I'm trying to take more time to edit and rewrite. Hopefully I'll have a better product.

Colton Hughes has just signed up for the Beta Test of a lifetime. Over the next week he will begin to see changes that take him from being an overweight man in his mid forties to a hot, young college woman with her whole life in front of her. Will the changes bring him the happiness he seeks, or will he lose sight of what he really wanted?
Rated: Adult 7 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 36770 Words: 11544 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Good to Bad
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Type of Change: Age Regression, Mechanical Device, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 04/17/16
Updated: 05/30/16
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/17/16 Title: Chapter 5: CHAPTER FIVE

I love the email method. It works really well for getting details out of the way without having to working them into a conversation. And the plot's interesting and more than I expected. I'm not sure I get why Alexis didn't remember much about having sex, though. If you didn't want to write about that, maybe she should have just been too polite to share.
I look forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks for your thoughts! The reason Alexis didn't mention much of the sex is because she was drunk and a little ashamed. As for the measurements? I was basing them off of Brooklyn Decker, but made her a little shorter.

Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06/02/16 Title: Chapter 8: EPILOUGE

A fun method and a good story. Thanks for sharing!

I wake up in the middle of the night to find a strange man standing in the doorway. This isn't a nightmare. This is really happening. Come morning, nothing will ever be the same. If I'm still alive come morning.
Rated: Explicit 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 2438 Words: 5215 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Featured Items: Lingerie
Motivation for Change: Caught Crossdressing, Forced
Series: None
Published: 04/23/16
Updated: 04/23/16
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/26/16 Title: Chapter 1: My Dark Knight

Twisted and wonderful

When Rory's parents inherited 20 acres and millions, Rory became the family's baby.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 4 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 14041 Words: 1540 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Baby, Daughter
Featured Items: Diapers
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Babyhood, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Age Regression, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 04/27/16
Updated: 06/08/16
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed star
Date: 05/04/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Family meeting

It seems to be missing a plot or motivation for what's going on. I could see the potential, but not much a story here.

Fully transitioned, Sadie reconnects with Allan
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 10481 Words: 9550 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Body Modification: Breast Implants, Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: In Hiding
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Series: None
Published: 04/30/16
Updated: 06/07/16
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/04/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Seems I need to read the prequel!

Colin makes the decision to finally take action on a feeling he's been hiding inside himself for many years.
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 8799 Words: 4676 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Teenager
Featured Items: Undies
Locale: College, Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: In Hiding, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 05/08/16
Updated: 05/23/16
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/23/16 Title: Chapter 1: Colin Makes a Purchase

As one Chloe to another, I hope this works out for her! :)

This is a classic Sci-Fi gender change story but with a revenge twist.
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 133415 Words: 15057 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed
Date: 06/01/16 Title: Chapter 1: Money and Power

You know, it's often an interesting decision - where to end. Yes, The Final Look is the last chapter. Once the main character had fully developed and revenge was satisfied, it felt like the rest was easy enough to imagine. Where would you take it from here?

Laid off from work, Matt's only choice is to apply for a job wearing his sister's clothes. It's only for a few months, so that doesn't seem like a big deal, right?
Rated: Explicit 10 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 34014 Words: 6108 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Featured Items: High Heels, Long Nails
Motivation for Change: For a Job
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Series: None
Published: 06/07/16
Updated: 06/10/16
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed
Date: 06/08/16 Title: Chapter 1: Laid Off

This one's a little short and, to help set expectations, it's a bit more of a love story without the sort of wild sex that you might have liked in others.

To overcome the woman's tragedy caused by Jack Welch, he became the solution to the woman's husband
Rated: Explicit 10 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 34049 Words: 7919 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Mother, Wife
Featured Items: Bikinis, Breast Forms, High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Undies
Locale: Family Household, Hospital or Clinic
Body Modification: Ears Pierced, Extreme Breast Enlargement, Permanent Cosmetics, Sexual Reassignment Surgery, Vaginal Alteration
Motivation for Change: Accident, Blackmailed
Personality: Bad to Good
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 06/19/16
Updated: 07/12/16
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07/13/16 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Jack gets the best sex ever as Lori now

I like the basic plot idea. There's a few grammar things (like "boob's" when you mean "boobs") and a 36DD is a massive 41-inch bust measurement (I think you might have meant her to have a large 36-inch chest which is often a 32D).

This is a short, fun Christmas story of no meaning or moment - just fun. Enjoy!
Rated: Kid-Friendly 2 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 4898 Words: 2724 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Featured Items: Latex or Rubber Clothing
Locale: College, High School
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Costume or Halloween, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Hormonal
Series: None
Published: 06/27/16
Updated: 06/27/16
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07/05/16 Title: Chapter 1: Cosplay Christmas

I love the easy-going and fun writing style!

Author's Response: Thanks, Chloe. Yes, this is a very light story, It was an entry to a story contest (unfortunately, it didn't win lol). It's not even 2,000 words - hardly a story. But I hope it was fun to read, nevertheless. I've just learned how to put pics in my stories in Storytime, and will be sprucing up this story with pictures, soon. Hope that'll make this one a little bit better.

A guy is bad to his family and has a choice that will change his life forever.
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews star Completed Story Reads: 7982 Words: 8369 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Baby, Daughter
Featured Items: Diapers
Locale: Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Story Theme: Babyhood, Humiliation
Type of Change: Age Regression
Warnings: Bodily Functions
Series: None
Published: 07/09/16
Updated: 07/10/16
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed
Date: 07/10/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I wanted to read this but I just can't get through the first line with so many errors in it. It badly needs to be edited. Here's the first line after five corrections:
"Mom, stop picking on me! How come you are always on my sisters side? You know I am going to be 18 tomorrow and I can move out anytime I want to.” Mommy looks at me strangely because how loudly I am talking.

We all like to share our work but it's just too distracting without editing. None of us are that good that we can just spew out thoughts without making it easy for someone to read them.

Introduction: What is discovery? Perhaps it’s finding something that you didn’t know existed. Maybe it’s finding a hidden treasure. Maybe it’s finding out something about yourself that many were aware of but you just didn’t know it.
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 17592 Words: 29838 Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Featured Items: Curlers
Locale: Hairstyling/Salon, Road Trip
Body Modification: Castrated/Neutered, Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Romance
Type of Change: Hormonal
Series: None
Published: 07/10/16
Updated: 07/27/16
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07/13/16 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 of 15

I found myself skimming it in parts. The story contains a lot of details, maybe too many, which don't seem necessary. It's like it feel bogged down.
On the plus side, the writing is good and I like the credibility of the dialogue.
I'm interested in seeing where it goes.

Author's Response: The story is in the details.

It's a classic Lost Bet storyline but with a little twist.
Rated: Explicit 38 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 172431 Words: 22123 Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Lost a Bet
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Type: Includes Images
Series: None
Published: 12/20/16
Updated: 01/09/17
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed
Date: 01/05/17 Title: Chapter 17: Another Booty Call

It's all part of the journey for her.

Dana doesn't always consider the consequences of his actions. His big mistake changes his life drastically.
Rated: Explicit 62 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 130884 Words: 22771 Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: Bikinis, Gaff, High Heels, School Uniform, Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: In Hiding
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Hormonal
Series: None
Published: 12/26/16
Updated: 03/10/17
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/11/17 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Little Friend

Great story. I like the setup, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Lots more to come.

Someone once said that once you put something on the internet it is permanent. This is about how a ghost from the past surfaces to motivate someone to do something that should have been done before.
Rated: Explicit 2 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 5182 Words: 13184 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Bikinis, Lingerie, Undies
Locale: Family Household, Office
Motivation for Change: Caught Crossdressing, For a Job, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Costume or Halloween, Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Bodily Functions, Bondage/S&M
Series: None
Published: 01/18/17
Updated: 01/18/17
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01/18/17 Title: Chapter 1: My Past Resurfaces

I like it well enough but it's a little clunky, especially in the beginning. Why not use some contractions? Few people speak without them. And the logistics of who's working when and such seem to bog things down.
But the overall story plays out just fine.

Author's Response: All points taken. This was a story I had written before my cancer diagnosis and had almost forgotten about. It was stored in my slush file folder. The contraction issue was caused by a problem introduced when I upgraded from MS Office 2000 to 2007. Between an incorrect setting in the spelling and grammar checker and an autocorrect macro error, well it went nuts and replaced all sorts of things when I opened the file. Working on correcting all these little glitches so it won't happen again in the future, and now going back through the files to undo some of the auto changes. I hate the way MS thinks they know better than everyone else, according to their grammar and style guides contractions should never be used, they represent bad form and a level of illiteracy! Can you believe that? I hope they fixed that error in newer versions of Office.

A women's lingerie company mails Keir Adrian Travaglini a catalogue invite addressed not to him but to Keira Travaglini. His girlfriend thinks it's hilarious, and starts purchasing items using Keir's mistaken name and his address. Keira wins a contest, a whirlwind extravaganza through the main tourist cities of Europe. "Keira" wins the contest; not "Keir." It sort of gets complicated from that point on.
Rated: Explicit 48 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 113521 Words: 9362 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/29/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Invitation

It's very well done (and HOT!). I like the images and can tell you looked around a while to find ones that work with the story. Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks, Chloe. Happy to know you find it enjoyable. And good news: you're reading the story with all the latest improvements and error corrections. This is mostly a Christmas time story (though I never planned on that when I first began it last May.) Most of the story occurs in the fall of 2017, so you are reading it at the right time. I went back and reread it, just because the bulk of the story is set in the mountains of Pennsylvania during Christmas, and I wanted to "feel" the autumn/holiday ambiance I endeavored to capture last May. I kept fusing over the epilogue in fact up to yesterday, tiny details, just to get the chapter just right. It's a long one; hope it doesn't bore you.

Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/29/17 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Annie's Place

Oh, those girlfriends and their tweezers!

Author's Response: Hence the word, "Ow." Funny, you reading this chapter, and my becoming aware that you sent these reviews while I was with my Mom at the very same Cracker Barrel depicted in Chapter Two. So busy this day decorating my Mom's house for Christmas, didn't even turn on the laptop (or smartphone) to even know I had new reviews of "Your Inner You" until I was seated at the restaurant waiting for the waitress to return.

Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/29/17 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3:Autumn

I like the way you return to the name of the catalog.

Author's Response: "Your Inner You" is actually a fictitious version of the online and former mail order catalogue site, "The Woman Within." I don't know. They claim they exist to cater to plus size women. Yeah, but with a name like "The Woman Within," that could be a little insulting, implying that beneath all that extra poundage lies "The Woman Within." I'd be pissed to think they were implying I was somehow less a woman because of my plus size requirements, and thus their pretty garments allowed said plus size females to bring out "The Woman Within" them. I think, and always have thought, that the name was a code phrase for TG types who just naturally might need a little larger size female garments to fit over their slightly more rugged frames. Anyway, Your Inner You was my way of avoiding getting "The Woman Within" mad at me, possibly taking me to court. How do I even know of their existence? They used to send me catalogues, using my male name (without the extra letter "A" tacked on the end.) Why send them to me way back then? Did they know something at the time I didn't?

Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/29/17 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4. A Stroll Through the Park to think things over.

The natural transition boost is a different and fun way to help your character along. Nice!

Author's Response: Thanks. And here in Chapter Four is your first introduction to Keir/Keira's very colorful family. Don't forget: she/he has a niece named Chloe who plays an important part in Keir's experience further up in the story.

Chris is a semi-nerdy high school senior on a ski trip with his parents and sister. When his sister meets a boy in the chalet and his parents get unexpectedly called home on business things start to change for him.
Rated: Adult 9 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 49460 Words: 12669 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: Bikinis, Breast Forms, Gaff, Lingerie
Locale: Family Household, Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Type of Change: Body Suit, Mechanical Device, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 06/05/17
Updated: 05/21/19
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed
Date: 10/11/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I had the exact same formatting with my first stories. If you're like me, you wrote in Word and used the default paragraph setting. When you paste it, you lose your paragraphs and that makes it harder to read (I had a lot of complaints). Just go to your document, select all, and change the paragraph setting to zero space in between, then manually add returns after each one. Then it'll look on the site like it does in your draft.

Author's Response: Thanks, I know this was a long time ago, but I'd love to hear your thoughts on the actual story if you wouldn't mind re-reading.

Ideas I’ve had for stories for this site, but don’t have the patience or enough fleshed out ideas to make them flow as complete stories.
Rated: Explicit 3 Reviews Story Incomplete Reads: 658 Words: 754 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Non-Story
Characters: None
Series: None
Published: 11/09/17
Updated: 11/09/17
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed
Date: 11/09/17 Title: Chapter 1: Story Concepts

This seems better suited to the Discussion board than a Story post.

Author's Response: While I do agree, I personally don't like the discuss section. It feels... disorganised.

Adjusting to, and accepting the results of a horrific accident is a process that takes years, involving a decision, struggles, self doubt, gradual acceptance, some sex, some romance, and a unicorn. (I'm lying about the unicorn.)
Rated: Explicit 69 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 131850 Words: 26175 Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Teenager
Locale: Family Household, Hospital or Clinic
Body Modification: Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Hormonal
Series: None
Published: 12/29/17
Updated: 04/18/18
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/29/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Brian

I think it's great that we're both writing stories about fictitious all-boys schools where our main character is teased for looking like a girl! Ha! Good so far, Casey!

Author's Response: Thanks. Hope you still think it's good after further chapters.

Michael DeAngelo is a gifted high school senior, with a girlfriend, and a life he hopes will bring him to MIT and finally to a career as an Aerospace Engineer. But then he meets Melinda, a somewhat reclusive, but very pretty fellow senior that until that year in high school Michael never even knew existed. But she knew he did. And as I said, they meet, and things just ... take off from there, for the future, that is ... literally.
Rated: Explicit 11 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 38060 Words: 26465 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: Family Household, Formal Dance, High School, Labratory, Road Trip, Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Distant Future, Historical Time Period, Mind/Body Posession, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 02/25/18
Updated: 03/21/18
Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/20/18 Title: Yesterday's Child (A five-chapter preview)

Oh my gosh! You cut that character out by hand? You have incredible patience.

Author's Response: Actually, Chloe, I did not. One of my motivations for revisiting this novel was the chance to use a new photo shop app I downloaded off the internet. It's called InPixio. It works great. The rear shot of Mindy Shepherd in the photo is a composite of one female's lovely bottom and another's top. The whole thing was then digitally inserted into a static internet downloaded shot of a teenage girl's supposedly typical bedroom. If I had to do that by hand, I could do it, it just wouldn't look anywhere near that good. No, the sad part is the realization that the two final chapters of this book (as they exist in the Amazon Kindle version) are badly told. When I can't even read them without wanting to skip past the unnecessary parts, the editor in me is just screaming to fix it. That's why it's taking too long to just put up the final couple chapters of this long novel. Apparently, three years ago when I uploaded the original TG Storytime version to this side (and then uploaded an edited version of it to Amazon Kindle), I uploaded the ending without first running it through the editing process a little better. I'll be uploading the final one or two chapters, plus the Epilogue very soon now.

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