FifthJirk
Member Since: 01/25/16 Membership status: Member
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Reviews by FifthJirk
What if the lightning bolt that was supposed to strike Barry Allen missed? This is a story set in the exact same world as the TV Flash series, it’s just a spin on what if Barry didn’t get hit by lightning and it was someone else. Credit for most characters go to DC and the CW, I’m only creating a new Flash and family. Think of this as an Alternate Earth :P
Rated: Explicit 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 3551 Words: 18405 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Type: Comic
Story Theme: Fan Fiction
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Torture
Series: None
Published: 05/02/16
Updated: 05/10/16
Reviewer: FifthJirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/03/16 Title: Chapter 1: The new introduction.

This is fun. I am a huge fan of CW´s Flash and liked this very much. For future chapters you should change at least a few characters meaning the villains and some dialog from the episodes.

At first I thought that Rachel would have Violet Lightning oh well - Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Who says she won't? :P. I most definitely will be changing characters around. This is going to get really mind boggling in later chapters since we don't know who the Reverse Flash is now, what role Barry Allen himself is going to play.

Reviewer: FifthJirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/12/16 Title: Chapter 2: Episode Two. Doubt

Very good chapter or an episode Idon´t know how to call it =D I read it from the begining again - i have a few questions - first how did Rachel knew Arrow? I know why he is there but I think it needs a litle explanation. And Second why make Rachel a CSI? Sometimes I think it would have been better to change Barry. I am sure all of this is only because these are the first episodes I remember truly loving the show from the Christmas Reverse Flash episode.

I am interested in the love interests - I can see Will is one but since this story´s sexual orientation is written bisexual - I am curious who will be a female love interest.

One last question =) will you be doing the crossover with Arrow?

Looking forward for the nex episode.

Author's Response: I don't think i wrote it quite clear enough. Basically instead of Barry meeting the arrow during the super soldier thing in the arrow episode, Rachel/Nathan accidentally stumbled into it and helped. I tried mentioning it in the middle of their conversation, but It didn't quite come out the way I had planned. The reason I made Rachel a CSI is because there is a reason why Barry is still in this story. What do you think Barry is feeling right now after seeing a speedster at the Simon Stagg reward party. This episode coming up is going to be a little different. I'm going to introduce another character and yes the Arrow crossover will be there, Felicity is actually in this next episode :P. Love interest is going to be a surprise.

A young man finds himself in a strange and different world, a world of light that is far too bright, and of vibrant, beautiful darkness.
Rated: Adult 36 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 39528 Words: 54174 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Curse
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Body Swap, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 05/16/16
Updated: 09/09/16
Reviewer: FifthJirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/17/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nicely written chapter - I am very curious where it will go next

The war between the Demon Realm and Human Realm has lasted centuries on this world, with no end in sight. However the 72nd Demon Lord has a plan to finally achieve peace by turning the current the human's current champion, Hiro, into the new Demon Lord and a succubus to boot. With his newfound responsibility, he must try to seek peace between the two Realms with the help of his friends.
Rated: Adult 19 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 11864 Words: 16130 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Maid, Prostitute, Robot, Wife
Featured Items: Lingerie, Maid Uniform, Undies
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Curse, For a Job, Forced, Undercover
Personality: Cultural/Nationality Change, Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Bodily Functions, Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 04/26/17
Updated: 08/26/17
Reviewer: FifthJirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/24/17 Title: Chapter 2: A New Maid

I read the first chapter and thought it was interesting. When the second chapter was released I was glad. Now I am looking for more. I can not wait to read what other members of the party turn into.

What happens when you agree to let a stranger stay with you for a short time? If you're not careful your entire life could be turned upside down.

I am purposely leaving many boxes unchecked for this one. I'm curious to see how many people figure out what's happening without those clues.
Rated: Explicit 14 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 11203 Words: 5454 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Accident
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Series: None
Published: 06/28/17
Updated: 07/03/17
Reviewer: FifthJirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/04/17 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

A bit confusing naming her Kasalen but otherwise i am looking forward to more.

In a world where magic had nearly faded from existence, a race has been driven to extinction by those fearful of their powers. It new millennium bringing with it a new Kindred. Is it time for them to return to the world?
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 1493 Words: 3232 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Child (0-12 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: Breast Forms, Long Nails
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Body Modification: Permanent Hair/Skin/Nail Change
Motivation for Change: Accident, Forced, In Hiding, Undercover
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 07/03/17
Updated: 07/04/17
Reviewer: FifthJirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/05/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very interested in more.

Andrew, a young explorer, was hired to document the location of the Temple of the Daughters of Aku. However, events transpire, and he finds himself unwillingly joining their cult. Now with a split personality, he must take on the role of Ami to assassinate Samurai Jack and regain full control of her forced programming.
Rated: Explicit 1 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 3925 Words: 2359 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Featured Items: Masks
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse, Female Domination, Undercover, Unknown
Personality: Cultural/Nationality Change, Good to Bad, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Fan Fiction
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Mind Control
Warnings: Politically Incorrect
Series: None
Published: 08/06/17
Updated: 08/06/17
Reviewer: FifthJirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/06/17 Title: Chapter 1: Indoctrination

Nice chapter i will admit i had a similiar idea about a symbiont change likes that. I am definetly interested in more.

An accident ruined Daniel's life, but an amazing opportunity is about to turn that around. Join Daniel on the adventure of a lifetime as he tries to save humanity.
Rated: Adult 9 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 3686 Words: 6359 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Alien
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Personality: Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Distant Future, Mind/Body Posession
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 09/25/17
Updated: 09/27/17
Reviewer: FifthJirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/26/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow i must say i am very interested in more. Especialy if it leads where i think it leads.

Callum is alone in the States applying for a job as an engineer when the world changes forever. In an event called the Emergence he is changed. Fox ears and a tail greet the newly minted girl in a mirror. On the run from the abusive system, she is forced to turn to crime to survive.
Rated: Explicit 240 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 111672 Words: 27933 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Masks
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Personality: Bad to Good, Good to Bad, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Costume or Halloween, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 03/03/19
Updated: 07/20/19
Reviewer: FifthJirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/10/19 Title: Kammi Kettu

I love so much the dynamic between Vulptrix and Nightbinder

Someone has to make gadgets for all the new heroes that are gonna pop up, and that someone might as well be Bridget, a relatively popular tech youtuber turned genius mouse girl! But how did her early days go, and when did she start making gears for heroes specifically?
Rated: Adult 44 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 15524 Words: 37194 Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Mother
Locale: Family Household, Labratory
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Made Smarter
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 04/16/19
Updated: 06/21/20
Reviewer: FifthJirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/30/19 Title: Chapter 1: First Uploads are the Hardest

I can't get over the fact it's taking place in Czech Republic. I am from Prague and I find it funny to sudennly read a Czech names inside an english written story.

Author's Response: Oh s*** hey! I am f****** surprised to see one of us on here but yeah it's in the South Moravia region near the Austria border since I grew up there. I'm vagueing the "gympl" I went to as the one Bridget went to and Klára and Šárka are going to right now. Anyways, thanks for reading, hope you enjoy it!

A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away, there lived a little Twi'lek kid, struggling to survive after their mom is taken away by slavers. They then begin to exhibit signs of Force aptitude, and are taken in by the Jedi. But what if the Jedi do not like what they will become?
Rated: Adult 1 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 1319 Words: 2370 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Alien, Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Work Uniform
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: From Submissive to Dominant, Good to Bad
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Fan Fiction
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 02/02/20
Updated: 02/02/20
Reviewer: FifthJirk Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/02/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Lethan

It is an interesting start. Thing is some fan-fictions are hard to get right and this is not bad. I am looking forward to what you come up with for next chapters.

Wolverine is a mystery, even to himself. But he is also a survivor. With the help of Professor X and Jean Grey he is learning to trust and, in the case of Jean Grey, to love. But what if everything that has helped him survive and cope is turned against him? How will the Wolverine survive when he can’t claw his way out or heal himself? Will rage devour him and lead him into the unending madness of a mindless, desperate wild creature, or is there another way - a way he could never have anticipated? A way that involves love and sex, but is not without peril.

Feral Saga Title Image

original title image source: https://astonishingx.tumblr.com/image/134755978643

There are unique chapter title images as well.

Rated: Explicit 22 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 35352 Words: 166667 Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Twin
Featured Items: Sex Toys
Motivation for Change: Accident, Tricked
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Fan Fiction, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Intense Violence, Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 03/21/20
Updated: 06/08/20
Reviewer: FifthJirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/13/20 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - New Player

I am honestly enjoying this more than I thought i would. Its well written, with enough details and coherent enough to love it. Still I imagine the scenes as if they were from the movies. Big fan.

Author's Response: Hahaha, what a hilarious way of putting it, I almost feel like apologizing for making it enjoyable. Thank you, really, it does mean a lot when someone takes the time to comment, especially to say they liked what I'm doing. It really keeps me going. And I have no problem with you doing your "casting" from the movies. That's what's great about stories, you can cast or recast it however you like. For me, Captain Andrews is cast as a certain OTHER Captain, even though that could never happen in the MCU. Anyway, I hope you continue to enjoy it, and uhh... Sorry?

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