liltiger
Member Since: 01/02/16 Membership status: Member
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Reviews by liltiger
DR wants to change medical science, but all he changes is himself and his sister
Rated: Explicit 9 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 46493 Words: 17763 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo, Daughter, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Good to Bad, Loses Identity, Made Dumber
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Series: None
Published: 05/21/15
Updated: 01/30/16
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 01/16/16 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Missy Hyde changes back to DR Jekyll during the night

This is an interesting story so far. I wonder how true to the "original" story you gonna stick to. Hopefully not too much cuz then we will have a really bad ending XD

Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 01/22/16 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Jody's first date with a girl, and she loved it.

Hey, considering what direction this story has taken, you should re- tag it

A group of four friends lives change when they find a set of magical cards and use them to become pro gamers
Rated: Adult 61 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 63069 Words: 56015 Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Girlfriend, Model
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie
Locale: College, Road Trip
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 06/05/15
Updated: 08/05/16
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 04/22/16 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Summers Job

Ooh the plot thickens. Judging from what happened last , I have a feeling your plot will take a massive dark turn. But I hope it ain't what I think it is.
Btw, majestic wars sounds a lot like this other game I know. How is it played?

Author's Response: Since I made it up for this story Its hard to say but in my head it is a mix of Yugi-oh and Cardfight Vanguard. With a team element. If that helps

After a one of the worst school days in his life Carter becomes obsessed with the idea of getting revenge on the schools big bully, Patrick Ty. As he dug through his things he came across a necklace with a power that might allow him to get the revenge he had been craving for nearly four years.
Rated: Deviant 27 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 166660 Words: 26932 Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: Lingerie, Sex Toys
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse, Revenge, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Humiliation
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Bondage/S&M
Series: None
Published: 07/23/15
Updated: 08/03/17
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 07/25/16 Title: Chapter 1: Most Devious Revenge Plot Ever

No offense man, but I think your story has a severe lack of focus.It makes things pretty annoying to follow when the story jumps around so much.

As Valentine's Day nears, Nathan learns from a fortune cookie that he will soon “find the love of his life.” Very shortly, he starts to believe that his possessions are being replaced--becoming more effeminate. And for that matter, so might he. What is the cause behind this transformation, and why does he feel so comfortable with most of these changes? For that matter, why does he have a hard time remembering exactly what he was worried about?
Rated: Adult 33 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 132551 Words: 24835 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Romance
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 10/06/15
Updated: 06/30/17
Reviewer: liltiger Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01/08/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Takeout Chinese

This story, while a lil slow, is really cute and has a lot of heart. Keep up the good work 😊

Reviewer: liltiger Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01/24/16 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Whoa did not expect that ending! Good story!

Tyler Hillman flees from Earth after an information brokering deal goes sour. His contact at Ringed Amusements Company has promised him a place to hide, a disguise, and a new job.
Rated: Explicit 110 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 309120 Words: 294163 Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 11/13/16 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Hazardous chemicals?
Amber is so dead.

Aiden Sommers was just your average, boring man, until he died. Upon learning that the afterlife is not exactly what it seems, Aiden must become a demon and an agent of Lust. What he doesn't know is this also entails him becoming a succubus.
Rated: Explicit 77 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 221760 Words: 49461 Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: For a Job
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Mind Control, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 12/04/15
Updated: 07/06/17
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 04/08/16 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Well shit! This is really bad! How on earth is she gonna get out of this one.

After being caught spying on a group of girls Scott a usually well behaved, teen and his mischievous best friend Bobby are turned into beautiful girls by a spell. They're then given the task of breaking the curse before midnight or risk remaining girls forever...
Rated: Explicit 89 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 122309 Words: 21038 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Curse, Female Domination, Forced, Revenge, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Story Theme: Costume or Halloween, Humiliation, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Stuck
Series: None
Published: 01/03/16
Updated: 02/26/16
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 01/04/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Time for a spell

Ooh. Nice start. I'm very eager to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. More to come soon! xx

Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 01/17/16 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Time to look the part

Aww I hope they make it. Stuck as a girl is cool, but having your memories changed is something I have never really liked

Author's Response: It is a disturbing prospect isn't it. Though I suppose it would make things easier instead of having to get used to being a girl with a male mind. Thanks for reading, more to come soon. xx

Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 02/20/16 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Time to end it.

Oh god! That made me feel sick to my stomach! How could anyone do that to their best friend! He is basically killing him!
I really really hope you're not gonna do what I think you're gonna do in the last chapter. Bobby dragged him into this mess, and pushes the only repercussions on him!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I wouldn't quite say he's 'killed him' that's a bit harsh. he's just changed him if anything. It was a despicable move on Bobby's part but I hope this hasn't ruined the story for you. I will upload the last chapter in the coming week. xx

Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 02/20/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Time for a spell

Seriously, don't do this to him....he does not deserve a fate this cruel, betrayed by his best friend, Literally over having a fuck buddy, and being effectively erased from existance.Give us a happy ending.

Author's Response: I'm guessing you're not fond of this plot twist but wait until you've read the last chapter, you can judge for yourself then whether it is a happy or a sad ending. Thanks for reading. xx

Reviewer: liltiger Signed starstarstar
Date: 02/26/16 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Time is Changing

Well, now that the story is over, I am able to give a fair judgement on the whole thing.
The story started very well, though they wasted a lot of time dressing up. If that was necessary or not depends on what kind of guys were dealing with.
The twist was pretty gross to me, but I have a feeling that was the intention. The ending does not strike me as happy at all though. Biggest issue I have is that Bobby gets away with everything without any punishment, and is outright rewarded for betraying his best friend! This whole thing is his fault. This sends a really bad message that it's okay to effectively brainwash your friends as you will be better for it in the end. That ain't a good thing to have in any story! I think the good karmic option here would have been that the spell would have required both of them to complete it, otherwise both are stuck. That wouldn't have been a happy ending either but it would have been much more satisfying.

Another issue I have is with the witches. They clearly know what happened. Do they not have an ounce of sympathy in them? One cool thing that could have happened also is that they punish Bobby in someway and invite Scarlett into their cult. They say as long as they're happy, but they know how fake it feels.

That's my two scents. This has not killed my interest for checking out your stories in the future, but I hope extremely fake feeling endings do not become a theme for you. Best of luck in future writing!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the long detailed review, I appreciate your advice. I understand the betrayal of Bobby was a risky and slightly dark twist that wouldn't be to everyone's tastes. I thought it would be more interesting and dramatic then my original idea to have Scott go over the deadline because he was enjoying the sex too much and lost track of time. I understand what you're saying about the 'Message' that is put across but for me there is no message to this story, it's simply a wacky race against the clock with a slightly dark twist at the end. That's not to say I don't write stories with positive messages as I have done in the past (The Summer Holiday). I just didn't feel this story needed that. I like your ideas and suggestions on how I could have ended it, it just shows there are many great directions the story could have gone in. Anyway thanks for reading and I'm sorry it didn't satisfy in the end. Hopefully my future work you'll enjoy more. Thanks for reading. xxx

Ash, a delinquint who likes makeing peoples live's hell for his own enjoyment, find's the notepad. What will he do with it? Read on to find out.
Rated: Explicit 9 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 58169 Words: 6887 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Reviewer: liltiger Signed starstarstar
Date: 01/11/16 Title: Chapter 4: Just Another Happy Ending

The ending seemed pretty convinient, and it seemed pretty Abrupt. Regardless I had my suspicions about this story, and it didn't turn out bad. You seem to have switched into more shorter stories.

As a big fan of your previous work, here's my advice. Your stories have always had their darker elements, but have had a generally lighter tone. Stick to what you know best. Feel free to explore new ideas, but don't forsake what made you good in the first place. Keep up the good work!
As long as it is not another ex-changed, I didn't like that one.

Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 01/08/16 Title: Chapter 1: Fire!

Hey there! I have been a fan of your previous stories! I have to say I have a bad feeling about this story, based on this beginning. Tread carefully, if you go overboard with dark stuff it loses all meaning. I'll be keeping my eyes on this story. Btw, couldn't the mother just scratch text into the house wall or sand to ask help? She maybe dog but still is aware right?

Author's Response: Don't worry, all of my stories have a happy ending, this one won't be any different, just enjoy the ride

Ashton Wilkins is a pretty ordinary guy - albeit pretty unlucky. His luck seems to change as he is invited to take part in the closed Beta of the greatest virtual reality game of his lifetime!
Rated: Deviant 59 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 219691 Words: 39725 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 01/01/17 Title: Chapter 1: Money, apparently, is everything

Come on, really? This is getting repeatitive!

Author's Response: I'm sorry to hear you think that - what would you suggest should have happened? (Not being mean, just genuinely interested!)

Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 01/01/17 Title: Chapter 1: Money, apparently, is everything

You're interested? Oh, mostly people just tell me to go away. Well, i'll tell.
The thing is that your hero had things bad, and then they just get worse and worse. Even when things seem like they're getting better, it gets worse instead. Things getting worse is not bad for a story, but the reader quickly adapts to the downward slope, and the bad things no longer shock them. It is sadly a common storytelling pitfall.

Have some genuinely good things happen to your character, and don't take them away right away or makenthem backfire. This will keep us quessing, and will not make us think you're just picking on the hero. Also having the character not get sad from the bad treatment she gets, even if it is just a game hurts believability.

That is, unless you just want to make porn erotica, and the story is not that important. In which case, keep doing you. Nothing wrong with that, the sex scenes are hot.

Author's Response: Thank you, and I'm always open to constructive criticism! And I get your point, really I do, in that the plot is rather weak in points. I think a lot of stories (especially on this site) either focus on plot or p***. I tried to do both, but fell down on the plot a bit? I do feel like my HTML games on TFGamesSite do it a bit better, but I've had a lot more practise with them, Total Immersion is my first typical story style work. It might be a bit too late to build this story up, but I will definitely keep your critique in mind for future works!

Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 05/08/17 Title: Chapter 8: A load of bull

Well that got really dark really fast....

Author's Response: Aha, I guess it kind of did - although, who knows for certain whether Clarissa is actually correct...?

Reviewer: liltiger Signed starstarstar
Date: 08/16/17 Title: Chapter 1: Money, apparently, is everything

Now that it's done, i have to say my opinion hasn't really changed. It was great as porn, but as a story...not so much. The ending cements this. Also not a big fan of beastiality.
Still, i wont be too harsh. Keep working hard. If you want to write just erotica, stick to that. But for things to work as a story, it needs improvement.

Author's Response: Yeah, that's all fair criticism. I'll say that it really was the first time I'd tried writing something in a moderately long form, and I had no clear idea of the story as a whole when I started it. I probably will mostly be sticking to erotica, with not enough time in my life for more detailed storytelling, I just like to put enough of a story around the sexy bits to make the whole thing readable. I think I managed that quite well, but I'm also aware that this site has a lot of people much more dedicated to in-depth, well thought out stories and well done to them for that! I'm just sticking to smut for now.

A "Timber Grove" Story: Hank finds a camera that will give him the upper hand in a fierce prank war between him and his friend, Patrick. With it he will procure some racy photos of Patrick's sexy twin sister, but Hank soon finds that he has a much bigger part to play in his devious plan.
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 15209 Words: 5252 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: None
Turned Into: Twin
Featured Items: Bikinis, Lingerie, Undies
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Tricked, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Identity Theft
Series: Timber Grove
Published: 01/22/16
Updated: 02/20/16
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 01/23/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Oooh, I like where this is going!
Btw, what happened to sexiest cheerleader

Author's Response: Thanks, and "The Sexiest Cheerleader" is back up on the site.

Randall finally gets the chance to meet a person that means the world to him, only their visit leaves him heartbroken. It will take a little time, and maybe some magic, to mend Randall's broken heart and maybe allow him the happiness he has longed for.
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 4931 Words: 3964 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: Formal Dance
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Romance
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 02/05/16
Updated: 02/05/16
Reviewer: liltiger Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/16 Title: Chapter 1: The Crush: A Timely Change

Whoa, that was really sweet. Good job!

During the rule of the Greek empire, demons and Gods were prevalent in the world. But men from the Greek army could stand the torment no more and set out to wipe out all the Gods and demons. Led by Demi Gods and Nephilim, the armies fought back and all but wiped out the Gods and demons which plagued the Earth.
Rated: Explicit 10 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 19895 Words: 15040 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 02/10/16 Title: Chapter 1: The Great War

You make a lot of grammar errors, also the ending to chapter 5 came completely out of nowhere and left a really bad taste. You shouldn't make a that abrupt tone shift, from romance to gender bender rape.

Aside from that, your story has potential. The characters are well established, and the romance is believable.

Story is not bad but not good either. Keep practicing.

Author's Response: Been altering the crap out of it, didn't think anyone would even read it :-P

A depressed teen who fantasizes about being a woman is given the opportunity to make his dream come true, believing that it will make him happy.
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 11144 Words: 13569 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: liltiger Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03/25/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey, that was pretty good! I didn't realize where it was going at first but i liked it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. One thing I think I need to work on, even in my non-TG writing, is pacing. While re-reading it, I was afraid that there was too drastic of a tonal shift, going from erotica, basically, to a Hallmark movie by the last third. But I kept it in as Caleb/Hayley realized what was really important. Going from focusing on sex to focusing on service towards others. I hope it came across more as natural than directionless. But thank you for the review!

Jack’s life changes dramatically one day when he walks to work. He is literally thrown into the middle of a secret lecture. All this stuff that the wicked teacher talks about, it’s not true right? And even if it is, Jack is still able to fight the changes, right? And succubus isn’t as bad as it sounds. Is it?
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 28813 Words: 8831 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo, Fantasy Character, Slave
Featured Items: Corsets, High Heels, Lingerie
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement, Vaginal Alteration
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Captive, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 05/21/16
Updated: 06/03/16
Reviewer: liltiger Signed starstar
Date: 05/26/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yeah, i don't think this is my kind of story. Ima jump off before I start to feel sick.

Sometimes life happens and you have to make a choice with only one option. Today, that option is to use the only available restroom, even though it's the girls' room. Though now that you think about it, why don't you remember ever hearing about this situation happening to anyone else?
Rated: Adult 8 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 7980 Words: 1840 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Bodily Functions
Series: None
Published: 05/23/16
Updated: 05/23/16
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 05/23/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

To be fair, nit very good, but not too bad either. I liked the ending.
Btw, did you give up on Xingie?

Author's Response: Heh, no, I didn't give up on it. But I had the final chapter pretty much ready, and I decided that I didn't like the ending and wanted to take it in a different direction. I pushed it off to the side for a while, and then real life got in the way. Now that I've turned my attention back, though, I might be able to hammer it out in a week or so. Kind of embarrassing, actually, to get to the very end and just fail to deliver the final bit.

Sometimes the things that happen in dreams can symbolize something that you're going through in real life. And sometimes you wake up confused because a dream you had feels like reality. Other times, your real life might just be reacting to those symbols from your dreams.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 2742 Words: 2654 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Husband, Wife
Featured Items: Bikinis
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes, Loses Identity
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 05/30/16
Updated: 05/30/16
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 05/31/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was...strange. I'm not sure what to say about it.

An impoverished student living in the bad part of town is harassed one too many times, and get revenge on his antagonists with the help of a gift from a strange man in a wide brimmed hat.
Rated: Explicit 2 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 7166 Words: 4479 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Revenge, Tricked
Personality: Cultural/Nationality Change, From Submissive to Dominant, Good to Bad, Loses Identity
Type of Change: Cultural, Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 05/31/16
Updated: 05/31/16
Reviewer: liltiger Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/31/16 Title: Chapter 2: Part 2

Well, that escaleted quickly. Juri has always both fascinated and creeped me out. But not bad!

Author's Response: Thanks. While I wouldn't say it's my best work nor does it have much in the way basic story elements, it's pretty much exactly what I set out to write: fetish smut. Still, I had fun writing it and I'm glad that you liked it too.

It's just so frustrating! Follow the adventures of Jason as his life is made much more uncomfortable by a curse and his life trying to cope with it and find some peace with himself.
Rated: Explicit 35 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 87843 Words: 17604 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend, Mother
Locale: Office
Motivation for Change: Curse, For a Job, Forced, Revenge, Tricked
Personality: Bad to Good, Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Horror, Pregnancy, Romance
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Bodily Functions
Series: None
Published: 06/04/16
Updated: 05/28/17
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 06/07/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

This is pretty good start! Our hero doesn't really deserve to be cursed, but maybe things are not what they seem. Eager to see more

Author's Response: I agree, he doesn't deserve it.

Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 06/14/16 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Aww.... Poor guy. Some people are just douchebags.
I think I have a good guess where this story is going, but we shall see! Keep up the good work 😊

Author's Response: Was your guess correct?

Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 06/17/16 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Welp, my guess was wrong. Way to go 😊! I hope it's Val at the door, would be nice to know a bit of what was going on.

Author's Response: Thanks. Good to know the story up to this point has suspense. :)

Michael lived a simple life. Single, a full-time job, never had things ever been better for him. That was until a sexually driven wizard came into his life, cursing him into a girl with a body designed and addicted to sex.
Rated: Explicit 42 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 221698 Words: 114419 Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo, Fantasy Character, Girlfriend, Stripper
Featured Items: Lingerie, Undies
Locale: Strip Club
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement, Permanent Cosmetics, Permanent Hair/Skin/Nail Change, Vaginal Alteration
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Humiliation
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Bodily Functions, Bondage/S&M, Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 06/06/16
Updated: 05/11/17
Reviewer: liltiger Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/06/16 Title: Chapter 1: Michael's Last Moments

Ah, it seems you were not satisfied with the latest chapter. I think this one is a better direction for the story too. My advice is that you use magic as a plot mechanic very little, and focus on how Miranda moves on in her life. The curse already controls her life.

Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 06/11/16 Title: Chapter 40: Experiments

I don't think Noah is all he seems to be... Hmm, hopefully its not bad.

Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 06/28/16 Title: Chapter 42: An Invitation

Things are getting interesting. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
Btw, you are almost 50 chapters in. How long are you planning to go.

Author's Response: This story is divided into 6 definite sections. There was the section of chapters about her first hours as a horny and sexy girl, then the section about her living with the Kellers, next came her time at the strip club, then the horrid hostage situation she got into because of John, after that was reintegration back into a normal life, and now we have Noah. Noah's interactions with Miranda is the last section of chapters that tell her story.

Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 05/11/17 Title: Chapter 49: A New Era

So it is finally over. Maybe not the ending that i was hoping for, but still a very good one. Thank you for the great story and good luck on your new life.

A letter to someone who passed away.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 5 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 959 Words: 683 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Non-Story
Characters: None
Series: None
Published: 06/07/16
Updated: 06/07/16
Reviewer: liltiger Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/08/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am so sorry about your dog. As someone who has lost a dog before, I know how you feel and you have my sincerest condolences

A story about power.
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews Completed Story Reads: 2697 Words: 469 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 06/14/16
Updated: 06/14/16
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 06/14/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ummmm....the point is....?

A new amusement park opens up, with a Pokemon theme. But there are hidden intentions behind it
Rated: Kid-Friendly 5 Reviews starstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 10880 Words: 1725 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 06/28/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: welcome to the park

This story is very very confusing. Your grammar could use some work too.
No offense but you got lot to learn.

Author's Response: If you could explain how it's confusing I can fix and improve on it

A horny teenage boy falls for an attractive woman. Little does he know that she has different desires.
Rated: Explicit 8 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 33584 Words: 2700 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend, Maid, Slave
Featured Items: Lingerie, Maid Uniform, Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Weight Gain
Motivation for Change: Female Domination, Revenge, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Women, Does Not Change
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Captive, Humiliation, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Bondage/S&M, Politically Incorrect
Series: None
Published: 07/03/16
Updated: 07/03/16
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 07/03/16 Title: Chapter 1: Candid Cameraboy

Aww, i liked the nerdy girl look D:
How about making her super cute short girl, and making her wear extremely girly outfits and colors.

A story about a group of friends who gain the ability to enter the world of their favourite game thanks to a mysterious computer program. With the ability to design their own characters and even install game mods an exciting adventure awaits.
Rated: Adult 16 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 48853 Words: 56318 Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Personality: Bad to Good, Fights Change, Good to Bad, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Mythical Setting
Series: None
Published: 07/06/16
Updated: 07/21/16
Reviewer: liltiger Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07/21/16 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

The ending was slightly unsatisfying. So many things were left unresolved. Did Mel finally return to real world? His family must be worried sick. Did others make it out fine? Who exactly was Croft?
These and more really hurt the ending, even if our heroes were triumphant. Saying" will be explained in a sequel" does not make it okay.

Done ranting now. The story itself was pretty good however. The characters were good, and the fights exciting. The story did have a lack of focus at start, but it got better. So overall, not bad.

Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 07/10/16 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Awesome story so far. But I do have a complaint. Clement seems pretty underwhelming, all the other characters have goals and do stuff while clement just looks cute.

Author's Response: I intended for him to be a bit of a late bloomer. He'll become more important later.

All Andy wanted to do was play video games and ignore his roommate. Now this former boy has to grapple with their gender identity and figure out how to be as true to themselves as possible. Can she cope with her changes in order to find help and reverse the curse? And more importantly will she even want to?
Rated: Adult 79 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 63003 Words: 46879 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 07/26/16
Updated: 03/05/19
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 07/26/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooh, great start. I see potential in this story. Just don't start going over the top with the changes.

Author's Response: Nothing to worry about on that end. Andy is going to try to hold on as tightly as possible to the spellbook.

Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 07/28/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooh, another good chapter! I'm not sure why she didn't tie parker up, but oh well. This is all a very good setup.

Mike Cross is your average, all around high schooler. He's nothing special, nobody you'd pick out in a crowd. Then he woke up to find he'd been possessed by a succubus who just wants to get out of her trade...
Rated: Explicit 63 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 138601 Words: 54821 Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, Maid Uniform, School Uniform, Undies
Locale: Family Household, Hairstyling/Salon, High School
Motivation for Change: Forced
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Comedy
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: The Curse Universe
Published: 08/31/16
Updated: 02/19/18
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 04/08/17 Title: Chapter 7: Part 7

Great stuff all around. I have a question though. How longexactly is Eve stuck inside his body? Mike would have probaply asked about that in this. If she could leave anytime she wants, why not just find a better host?

Author's Response: She CAN leave, but she sees Mike as her way out of being a succubus. He'll be her host until she's finally conquered her urges.

Also, why would I undermine the story by giving Eve a new host? C'mon, it's funnier this way.

What happens when a fairy tries cursing a man who is already bearing a greater curse? Jackson is about to find out as a camping trip with his friends goes horribly wrong after an encounter with a dark fairy.
Rated: Deviant 101 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 96256 Words: 73152 Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Cultural/Nationality Change, Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Captive, Mythical Setting, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 09/17/16
Updated: 01/29/18
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 10/06/16 Title: Chapter 1: The Camping trip

Hmm. If there are moon fairies I wonder if there is sun fairies

Author's Response: There is 10 Kingdoms, only 3 of which have been named. Perhaps one of them is based around the sun?

Sequel to Cyber V. A month has past since the events of Cyber V. Marty's participation in the game has become scarce as he seeks to understand it rather than enjoy it. Struggling to continue without him the group begins to discuss the prospect of new players but such things become trivial in the face of what is to come.
Rated: Adult 9 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 13304 Words: 59439 Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Forced, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Bad to Good, Fights Change, Good to Bad
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Identity Theft, Stuck
Warnings: Intense Violence, Torture
Series: None
Published: 01/12/17
Updated: 03/09/17
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 01/28/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Man, this is getting complicated x.x

Author's Response: It'll worse before it gets better I'm afraid, but it will get better.

In a mystical land, a young Ranger keeps the countryside safe from all manner of dark creatures. One fateful night, a chance meeting with a beautiful maiden will change his life forever...
Rated: Deviant 73 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 134398 Words: 119977 Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Fights Change, Good to Bad
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Mythical Setting
Warnings: Death, Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 04/18/17
Updated: 06/23/20
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 05/26/18 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter XI

D: Noo! Not the cubs! That's... Too cruel!

Author's Response: I know! It hurt to write, but I want to get across how cold-hearted the curse makes Elldin when he transforms into Ellina (kinda like a male-to-female Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde).

2 people have completely different experiences in one day. One can control Women, the other becomes a woman.
Rated: Explicit 1 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 12066 Words: 4439 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Stuck
Series: Sexy Shorts
Published: 05/24/17
Updated: 05/24/17
Reviewer: liltiger Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/25/17 Title: Chapter 1: The Day I controlled Women

Cool to see another story from you. This one was great!

An ordinary student get a position on a program where he was to be a support teacher at a school for a week. It came out of the blue, but he knew it would help his studies, so he went. Only to discover the Students were girls between 16 and 18, and they all wanted one thing. One thing he can't do, otherwise the Head Teacher would end him.
This is his Tale
Rated: Explicit 2 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 17198 Words: 5401 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo, Teenager
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: College, Girl's School, High School
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive, From Submissive to Dominant, Good to Bad, Is Unaware of Changes, Loses Identity, Made Dumber
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Type of Change: Drug-Induced
Series: Sexy Shorts
Published: 05/25/17
Updated: 05/25/17
Reviewer: liltiger Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/26/17 Title: Chapter 1: Miss Abercrombies School for Girls: The Long Week

That was hot. The teasing and sex scenes were great. You made some grammar mistakes though, but that's okay. Keep up the good work.

Zach is, more or less, an ordinary 19 year old. Until, that is, he discovers CCC.exe. Now able to modify women to his liking, he starts with his stuck-up stepsister Lena - and his life only gets more complicated from there...
Rated: Deviant 18 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 178241 Words: 29706 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 12/10/17 Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings and Happy Endings

I see you decided to stick with the erotica angle. Hey, good for you!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Honestly, I like what I'm doing right now, and I'm not going for the Man Booker prize or anything!

Broderic is a blacksmith of some merit, always creating new armor for the king and the warring nations surrounding their kingdom. He messes around with a special mithril and has his life changed forever. How will he deal with these changes?
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 8776 Words: 5067 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Maid, Prostitute, Slave
Featured Items: Lingerie
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime, Forced, Revenge, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Captive, Historical Time Period, Humiliation, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Warnings: Bondage/S&M, Non-Consentual Sex, Torture
Series: None
Published: 08/26/17
Updated: 08/27/17
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 08/27/17 Title: Chapter 2: Partial Persona

I hope that wasn't what you meant by "he had it coming." it is a pet peeve of mine, but i don't like stories who think having too much sex should be punished. He didnt force the girls.

Aside from that, i am interested to see where this story goes

A new Hero arises from a family originating from dark and light, the mother a villain, the father a hero, and a twin sister split beetween her villainous ways and helping her brother on his way through life.
Rated: Explicit 2 Reviews star Story Incomplete Reads: 4441 Words: 768 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Twin
Featured Items: Masks
Motivation for Change: Female Domination, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Story Theme: Coming of Age
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 09/13/17
Updated: 09/14/17
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 09/13/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Epilouge

Since you're a newbie, im gonna go easy on you. I can't really comment on the story since there is nothing there really. Dont take what im about to say too harshly, i am only trying to help.

First, one paragraph is not a chapter. You need to write a lot more. Second, align your post better and lined em up properly. It makes the post much more appealing to the eye. Read some other storia in this site and you will see the finesse way od doing things.

Dont give up, but you have a long way to go.

While regaining lost memories, a man is tried for his crimes...
Rated: Deviant 5 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 23495 Words: 4343 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Maid, Slave
Locale: Prison
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime, Curse, Forced
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Horror, Humiliation, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Bondage/S&M, Non-Consentual Sex, Torture
Series: None
Published: 12/09/17
Updated: 12/09/17
Reviewer: liltiger Signed starstar
Date: 12/10/17 Title: Chapter 1: The Court

I think i see What this story is going for...i just personally dont agree with it. I find it very cynical. Maybe that's an unfair criticism, but i stand by it. This man did not deserve the punishment he was given, instead he should have been made to make things right.

Author's Response: Thanks for the honest opinion. It sounds like this wasn't your thing necessarily, but you get what kind of theme I was experimenting with. Because I appreciate your opinion so much, I'll let you in on a bit of a "secret". I plan on revisiting this story in the near future, with the goal of taking closer examinations of the characters, plot, theme, etc. I haven't decided yet which stories of mine I wish to revisit, but this story was published simply just to get the idea out there.

Raphael Pierce is an aloof boy that has more secrets then he cares to share. The Girl's Magical Combat Club finds one out.
Rated: Adult 26 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 13870 Words: 8640 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Warnings: Death, Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 01/22/18
Updated: 02/03/18
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 01/22/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Your start isn't bad, but there really isn't much here. It felt like the first chapter ended before it even began.

But keep at it! You have talent im sure!

Ryan gets in an argument with the wrong person and his life is turned upside down. However, he tries to make the best of things and takes the change is stride and the punishments become opportunities.
Rated: Explicit 26 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 90355 Words: 52413 Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Reviewer: liltiger Signed starstar
Date: 07/11/18 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Girl's Camp

I dont want to be too critical since the story is unfinished, but i know where it's gonna go. Basically you have created a scenario where a chance of a happy ending is impossible without breaking the rules, and...well, thats not much of an incentive to read. Children are gonna grow up believing their father died in a cave in, widow who knows the truth wont be off any better, and so on. You see what im getting at?

What happens when a vengeful being goes after those who do not honor Halloween tradition
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews starstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 2649 Words: 1640 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Horror
Series: None
Published: 10/30/18
Updated: 10/30/18
Reviewer: liltiger Signed starstar
Date: 10/31/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Not sure i understand the point of this...

Interactive Story: You are Maxine Lawrence, a public defender. Across from you sits a nameless girl who has been accused of an unspeakable offense. You must discover the truth behind who she is, where she came from, and most pressing of all, what happened that led her to where she is today.
Rated: Adult 10 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 9016 Words: 5464 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Slave
Featured Items: Long Nails
Locale: High School, Office, Prison, Road Trip
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Fights Change, Good to Bad
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Costume or Halloween, Horror, Mind/Body Posession
Type of Change: Identity Theft, Mind Control, Stuck
Warnings: Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 12/03/18
Updated: 12/21/18
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 12/04/18 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Long Haul

TGir1: ask her to tell her side of the story. No matter how insane it sounds.

From tone of her clients voice, Maxine has been getting quite good at determining what kind of people her clients are. It is quite a useful trait as a defender, actually!

An ordinary guy, and ordinary life. He had no plans to fight fate, but it was battle he was forced into when Rush encountered a mysterious woman who granted him the power to turn into a Magical Catgirl, a power he was never meant to have.
Rated: Adult 15 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 27139 Words: 100099 Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Undercover
Personality: Fights Change
Story Theme: Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 08/11/19
Updated: 11/17/19
Reviewer: liltiger Signed
Date: 08/11/19 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

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