burnabyjoe
Member Since: 12/29/15 Membership status: Member
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Reviews by burnabyjoe
A couple guys go up to a cabin to enjoy some outdoors time. Unfortunately for one of them, a group spell goes awry.
Rated: Explicit 16 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 71227 Words: 7937 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: Camp, Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Fights Change
Warnings: Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 05/22/13
Updated: 05/26/13
Reviewer: burnabyjoe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really thought this story had a lot of potential, really wish you would continue it

Allison desires to be strong and confident, but her delicate, submissive nature are at odds with those desires. One day she receives a mysterious jeweled pendant in the mail...
Rated: Explicit 15 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 36838 Words: 7432 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Husband, Wife
Featured Items: Lingerie
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident, Female Domination, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive, From Submissive to Dominant
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 09/24/13
Updated: 09/24/13
Reviewer: burnabyjoe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/29/16 Title: Chapter 1: Even Trade

Really good story love the concept seems almost natural

I was a normal guy living a normal life. Then my life became the complete opposite of normal.
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 12053 Words: 949 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Sissy, Slave
Featured Items: High Heels, Undies
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Mind/Body Posession
Series: None
Published: 01/20/14
Updated: 01/21/14
Reviewer: burnabyjoe Signed starstar
Date: 04/06/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You should of expanded on this more, the idea is great but you rush it

John Grey is the big man on campus at USC, until he and his buddies decide to have a panty raid...on a coven of witches. John will slowly become everything he desires in a woman, but will John come out with panties as his prize, or will he be wearing them? Magic can be a b****...
Rated: Kid-Friendly 6 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 18446 Words: 7559 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails
Locale: College
Body Modification: Ears Pierced, Extreme Breast Enlargement, Lips Plumped, Permanent Cosmetics, Permanent Hair/Skin/Nail Change
Motivation for Change: Revenge
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity, Made Dumber
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Mind/Body Posession
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Fast/Instant Change, Hypnosis, Mind Control
Series: None
Published: 07/05/14
Updated: 07/05/14
Reviewer: burnabyjoe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/27/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a story i return to often. Really well written and loved the concept. Nice job

A man leaves his wife, searching for a better, hotter woman. He finds her, but does he like what he finds?
Rated: Explicit 54 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 214770 Words: 54087 Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo, Girlfriend, Stripper
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Sex Toys
Locale: Strip Club
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Personality: Bad to Good, From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Mind/Body Posession
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 02/16/16
Updated: 05/28/17
Reviewer: burnabyjoe Signed starstarstar
Date: 04/06/16 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I must say I really liked your first two chapters, but since than I have lost interest. I really liked the plot line of being body swapped, but the forced labour/borderline slave storyline has been done to death on this site. I wish you would go back to the beginning and explore that more .

Kevin tries to pick up the wrong girl and ends up with a little problem of his own that no little blue pill will solve.
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 20752 Words: 4042 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Not Applicable
Featured Items: Sex Toys
Locale: College
Body Modification: Vaginal Alteration
Motivation for Change: Curse, Female Domination
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 03/27/16
Updated: 04/05/16
Reviewer: burnabyjoe Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Wrong Girl to Mess With

Great concept. Potential for great things.

Groom-to-be Mike is having trust issues about his intended. After a poorly-worded wish results in him getting exactly what he asked for, will he ever get his old body, and life, back?
Rated: Adult 33 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 86262 Words: 17876 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Featured Items: High Heels, Long Nails, Pantyhose, Undies
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident, Undercover
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Series: None
Published: 09/25/16
Updated: 10/30/16
Reviewer: burnabyjoe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/27/16 Title: Chapter 1: Well, this is a fine dress I've gotten myself into

Hello, this might be my favourite story written on TG storytime. Waiting in anticipation for the next chapter keep up the good work

After defeating his life-long rival in the US Open, Ben was living the dream. However, tennis turns treacherous when the rival's family seeks vengeance.
Rated: Explicit 26 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 85104 Words: 21687 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Forced, Revenge
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Romance, Sports
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 10/20/16
Updated: 11/05/16
Reviewer: burnabyjoe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/30/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Price of Gold

Really enjoyed the concept, interested to see where you take the story.

Author's Response: Thanks! Don't worry, I won't keep you folks hanging. This is not going to be one of those stories that's left incomplete for three years :D

Alex and his wife discover that their bodies will change to fit the clothes they wear. When playful experimentation gets out of hand, will they regain their own bodies or be stuck forever?
Rated: Explicit 27 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 75146 Words: 21832 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Wife
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Undies
Locale: Family Household, Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 12/13/16
Updated: 12/15/16
Reviewer: burnabyjoe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/15/16 Title: Chapter 2: A Mixed Blessing

Great story love the concept, can't wait to see how the third chapter goes

Author's Response: Thanks, hope you enjoyed it.

Eric was a small boy who loved sports but could not play due to his size and lack of confidence. Which also prevented him from having girlfriends.
Rated: Adult 1 Reviews Story Incomplete Reads: 3224 Words: 359 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend, Jock, Teenager
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Sports
Series: None
Published: 11/05/17
Updated: 11/05/17
Reviewer: burnabyjoe Signed
Date: 11/05/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Eric would love to play and to have a girlfirend

I think you need to focus on one story at a time. You have some very interesting ideas in all three of your stories, but I sense because you are bouncing between them none are getting your full attention, and the quaility of the writing takes a hit.

Jeremy Sanders had certain expectations for his college life, but none of them involved becoming a loving girlfriend to his douche of a roommate. Can he resist the role he is being forced into or will he be trapped as a sexy college coed for the rest of his days?
Rated: Explicit 35 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 171512 Words: 81693 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Girlfriend, Model
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Forced, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Captive, Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Horror, Humiliation, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Identity Theft, Mind Control, Stuck
Warnings: Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 06/02/18
Updated: 06/19/18
Reviewer: burnabyjoe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/08/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Revised

Hey great story so far! It reminds me a lot of the first season of Jessica Jones on Netflix minus the TG stuff, you should give it a watch!

Author's Response: Thanks! Iíll definitely give that show a look.

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