mirandabanana
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What is the nature of a transition from male to female?
Is it like flipping one big switch, or flipping a thousand small ones?
In this story, an advanced medical experiment forces Alex to discover the answer.
Rated: Explicit 36 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 233630 Words: 47745 Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Locale: Hospital or Clinic, Office
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual, Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Medical Experiment, Romance
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 04/18/16
Updated: 05/28/16
Reviewer: mirandabanana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/29/16 Title: Chapter 14: Week 2, Thursday - Underwear

I actually really like how you're dragging out this transition. You're making my slow cook my anticipation.

Author's Response: Thanks. My favorite stories all really take their time with the transformation, instead of it all happening in one paragraph, so I am trying to follow that pattern. Hearing that you and others enjoy it, it makes it worth the effort.

Reviewer: mirandabanana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/06/16 Title: Chapter 21: Week 3, Thursday - Mislabeled

With characters starting to pick up on it now, I wonder how Alex is going to deal with all the awkward conversations coming up. The more awkward you write their interactions with him, the better. Make me cringe for Alex and curl my toes tight. In this chapter, I would have loved to have read the doctor checking up on his genitalia. Oh that would be quite the reaction from both of them!

I can see this story branching off into a few different directions from here. I'll be waiting to see which direction you choose.

Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review! I'll take your recommendation under advisement.

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