rtbateman
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A man who is traveling the world alone is kidnapped and forced to become a test subject in a medical experiment. The kidnappers have advanced medicine to a point far beyond what is capable anywhere else in the world and his life is changed permanently.
Rated: Adult 233 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 2177325 Words: 110386 Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Stripper
Locale: Hospital or Clinic, Road Trip, Strip Club
Body Modification: Extreme Surgical Alteration
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Story Theme: Captive, Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Age Regression, Drug-Induced
Series: None
Published: 10/25/12
Updated: 10/22/15
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Date: 02/25/16 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Arrogant inhuman bastard, kharma finds everyone, eventually, and yours will be especially painful.

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Date: 02/25/16 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

This man is not a man, he's a Monster. Kill the Monster, he's not human.

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Date: 02/25/16 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I hope she gets ahold of a knife and cuts his dick off.

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Date: 02/25/16 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Take Ali to America.

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Date: 02/25/16 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Jeez, man, this story has more villains than ants at a picnic. Very depressing.

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Date: 02/25/16 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Cut his down to size, Jenni. He's no man.

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Date: 02/25/16 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Story is rapidly losing credibility. The world is NOT composed of men who treat women like dogs to be paraded on a leash. Write a real man into a story, for once.

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Date: 02/25/16 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Finally, this story has risen from the dead. And Matt ain't too bad after all.

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Date: 02/25/16 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Damn story keeps getting stuck in Lodi with another load of perverts.

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Date: 02/25/16 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Finally, a story where the bad guy gets a dishful of revenge, ice cold, shoved in his face..

Reviewer: rtbateman Signed
Date: 02/25/16 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Finally, a story where the bad guy gets a dishful of revenge, ice cold, shoved in his face..

Author's Response: Yes, it felt good to write it. :)

George is jobless and looking for any job that can help him pay rent with his flat mate. he goes for an interview as a babysitter at a mysterious rich mans house. the job to look after a 6 year old girl, the reality though is much worse. George wakes up as a living doll...
Rated: Explicit 51 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 177022 Words: 26196 Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Doll, Mannequin, Mother, Object, Slave
Featured Items: High Heels
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Tricked
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Captive, Humiliation, Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 03/25/13
Updated: 05/22/15
Reviewer: rtbateman Signed
Date: 03/01/16 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: One last Hope

I just love it when the bad guy gets his lunch handed to him. I am doubly happy to see the main Character choose to remain female. Wish I had something to do that.

Author's Response: Thanks, Glad you enjoyed it. Yes it's always good to see the bad guy get whats coming to him. Thanks for reading and reviewing. xx

Martin is a 21 year old student who is somewhat afraid of social situations. his friend finally manages to convince him to come to a party after the school year ends. The following morning his body is not quite how he remembered any longer.
Rated: Explicit 120 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 393764 Words: 105046 Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
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Date: 02/11/16 Title: Chapter 8: Apartment

Quite the storyline, I must say. I can only hope that Abby and her Mother can get back together. The empty room has got to eat on that whole family. As for mom & dad believing this is a surgical gender reassignment, nothing can explain the obvious: Martin vs Abigail's height. Sorry, but gender reassignment can't make you a foot shorter. Not even.

Author's Response: Oh, I'm well aware of what is and isn't possible as I've researched a lot about it for my own transition. But the fact that I know doesn't mean all my characters do as well. There's plenty of people that don't know what is and isn't possible. The dad in this case truly doesn't know and doesn't really care to know if it'd be possible or not. The mother's case... well, it's been a while since her first introduction and we've barely seen her so far. But don't worry, I'll be delving into the whole family stuff among other things to tie up all the lose plot threads still hanging about before I get to the end of the story. Thanks for the feedback though, I really appreciate it and if there's still things you're questioning, feel free to contact me.

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Date: 02/13/16 Title: Chapter 27: Rehabilitation

As good as this story could have been, the main character was much too destroyed. It need not have been so, and much of the story after the capture would need only a small edit.
The means for Abigail to escape were in the room you described all the time. The very pin that held her there had a mushroomed head from years of use, and carefully working one loose petal of metal gave her the sharp edge to cut her bonds...and Escape!
What I'm really saying is that you, the writer, gave up on your character for no gain when you could have added some real spice to the hair-raising journey to freedom that took her nearly a week with almost nothing to eat but a few acorns and one water hole, all the while being hunted like an animal. Write that for an alternate, and see for yourself.

Author's Response: Thatīs some very valid points and for the most part, I agree. At the time I wrote those parts, I felt it fitted the story suitably, but now in hindsight I see that I could most assuredly have gone about it much better. Your suggestion is indeed a pretty good alternative. The flow of a story is pretty important and I feel now that the way about about that part disrupted that flow too much. It's certainly a good learning experience. That said, while she is kinda broken at the moment, I do not believe that has to be permanent. True, what she went through was extreme and will have lasting consequences for the rest of her live, probably. Maybe she would have come out of the whole ordeal much more interesting to the reader if I'd gone about it in a different way, but that doesn't mean that now Abigail is broken beyond repair. As as you'll hopefully understand, I don't plan on completely rewriting the last couple of chapters. So I'll continue with what I have and hopefully still keep the interest of everyone keep the flow of the story steady from now on. One thought that has come to mind is to, after having finished this story, to go back and edit the story into a better version of it. There are more parts of the story that I feel needs improvement. Several parts that could either need bits added to them or even need to be rewritten for the most part, like the police part. If I ever do that, I'll certainly try to improve this part as well. Thanks a lot for your insight. It's what helps me a lot in realizing in what ways I can improve as a writer.

Kyle was an ordinary guy enjoying his winter in the coolest way. But, after a minor incident, he finds out that he isn't as ordinary as he thought.
Rated: Adult 55 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 141798 Words: 51591 Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: Family Household, High School, Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Series: None
Published: 03/27/14
Updated: 03/02/18
Reviewer: rtbateman Signed
Date: 03/06/16 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

A great story line, but what lies ahead is the real challenge.
She has a group of guys who are her true friends. But what about the girls? Some will accept her, but some will not. And there will be those girls who will loathe and try to hurt her.

An ordinary guy wakes up one morning to find he's in the wrong body. A beautiful girl's body to be exact. One far more attractive than he's used to. Watch as she acclimatises to her new life and hits some very sexy speed bumps along the way.
Rated: Explicit 34 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 198541 Words: 44504 Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
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Date: 03/08/16 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

If you truly love someone, nothing will get in the way. Nothing.
Reality bites, and show's no compassion, for the world is full of monsters.
He failed himself. He let the monsters eat him.

What would you do if you woke up in the hospital as a different gender? Then your told it would take at least 5 months to get your male body back. That's what happened to Chris after a deadly accident. Now he has half a year to survive as a woman and succeed at his job.
Rated: Explicit 57 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 93129 Words: 21887 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Undies
Locale: Office, Vacation Destination
Body Modification: Extreme Surgical Alteration, Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 06/24/14
Updated: 12/03/14
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Date: 01/21/16 Title: Chapter 6: So Much to Learn

I'm giving you a 4 out of a 5 for a very absorbing story. Lot's of details in there that I never stopped to think about.

Reviewer: rtbateman Signed
Date: 01/21/16 Title: Chapter 10: Consequences

Ooh, that Dr. Moore rubs me the wrong way. She was blaming the victim, not the slobbering asshole that tried to force his way onto a someone way smaller than he was. But, that's the way with life these days, and I hope she takes that Dr. down a few pegs for her piss-poor bedside manner. Oooh!

Reviewer: rtbateman Signed
Date: 01/21/16 Title: Chapter 13: A Present From My Brother

Aha, the know-it-all Dr. Garcia has to eat some crow. Let that be a lesson to you : Don't vent your spleen on the victim, lest you end up with a stream of whiz on your face.
Yea!

Mark Raynor is nearing the end of his career as an airship gunner. But when his ship receives a mission to look for an ancient device, and actually find it, his outlook on life changes completly
Rated: Explicit 53 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 43459 Words: 27560 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Boots
Locale: Labratory
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: From Submissive to Dominant, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Historical Time Period
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 08/22/14
Updated: 02/03/15
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Date: 03/10/16 Title: Chapter 10: What Doesn't Kill You...

One need not go all the way to a brutal rape. Just the beating, humiliation and being forcibly undressed is quite enough. Rape is real, it almost happened to me, and I cannot ever forget how close I came to being totally destroyed. It was destruction enough for a lifetime.

Reviewer: rtbateman Signed
Date: 03/10/16 Title: Chapter 12: A Captain's Calling

Almost 50 years after being the subject of an attempted rape, the sheer terror of it is still there, in a dark corner of my mind. The incredibly powerful hands, the rank smell of my assailant, and the daze that consumed me for days. Being driven to absolute panic, I tried to jump out of the car at 65 mph, and that's the only thing that saved me from total rape.

An average man sees his life flipped on his head, as his desires take on a wholly unexpected form
Rated: Explicit 16 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 56162 Words: 11783 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Pantyhose, Undies, Work Uniform
Locale: Office
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 10/14/14
Updated: 04/21/15
Reviewer: rtbateman Signed
Date: 01/23/16 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Time to Impress the Boss

Let me guess: It was Michael's turn to be hopelessly drowning in debt, and his only way out was to 'pleasure' a very rich but disfigured woman who had a reputation. A very rich, influential, and highly informed spinster who had a Midas touch for punishing arrogant fools. Paybacks are a xxxxx, but this lady left scars. Her conquests were essentially purged from higher social circles.

Kyle becomes Jessica and learns that there is life after becoming a woman.
Rated: Adult 26 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 140082 Words: 12136 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Locale: College, Family Household
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: From Submissive to Dominant
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 01/30/15
Updated: 06/30/15
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Date: 02/29/16 Title: Chapter 13: Twenty Years Gone

A real Cliff Hanger, as we used to call them, for TV shows that each week ended up with a new impossible/death-defying glimpse of next week's episode.

An electric shock knocks Jason out and when he wakes up, he is in the body of a college girl. Can he manage to switch back, or will he be stuck like this forever?
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 47288 Words: 5858 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Lingerie, Sex Toys
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Accident
Story Theme: Comedy, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 02/21/15
Updated: 11/21/16
Reviewer: rtbateman Signed
Date: 03/04/16 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Waking up

What's to get all torn up over? Can I get zapped and turn into a luscious lady with dark brown hair, oh please?

A crazy girlfriend uses her work to achieve revenge on her ex by showing him that it wasn't her fault she cheated in a way to create a similar situation to hers...
Rated: Adult 52 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 127067 Words: 32362 Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: None
Turned Into: Stripper
Featured Items: Sex Toys, Work Uniform
Motivation for Change: Revenge
Series: None
Published: 03/24/15
Updated: 10/16/15
Reviewer: rtbateman Signed
Date: 02/14/16 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

sounds like a plan. Here's one for all the poor ladies who got their hearts ripped out by prowling men who think that life is all about them.

Dane thought he had life planned out and everything was working out. That is until a car crash tears it all away and leaves him paralyzed, but what can a medical company that specializes in bleeding edge technology offer him that will help him retake his life?
Rated: Explicit 75 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 54985 Words: 65166 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: High School, Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Mechanical Device
Warnings: Death, Politically Incorrect
Series: None
Published: 06/26/15
Updated: 05/18/17
Reviewer: rtbateman Signed
Date: 03/04/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Tetraplegia

The amputated leg is a big letdown and a heavy burden for a body plus gender change. It could have been at the ankle or toes, or just badly scarred/shortened. It's just a bit much, over the top.

Author's Response: Sure, but if you feel that, then you don't need to read it. I wrote this for the case of research and not simply as a gender change. I've had enough reviews about it, but I'm not going to write it another way. It's either like this or it doesn't get written and I've got enough people who want to see it written.

Derek comes home from work and finds a strange man in his house, who makes him an offer he can’t refuse.
Rated: Adult 11 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 26489 Words: 21158 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 07/15/15
Updated: 07/15/15
Reviewer: rtbateman Signed
Date: 02/29/16 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I got a dog that needs to go halfway to France. Nicknamed him Poopdeck.

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Date: 02/29/16 Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue

A very nice story, great ending. And hey, if you happen to run into Wilfred, send him my way. I'd like to transfer into the lady that lives deep inside me. Just your average, everyday brunette with good curves and standard C cup will do it, as she's a total love.

Meet Jayce, a 16 year old bully who just so managed to pick on the wrong girl in his class, follow his story as Natasha gives Jayce some of his own medicine... with a twist.
Rated: Explicit 32 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 174801 Words: 25428 Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Daughter, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Lingerie, School Uniform
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Ears Pierced, Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime, Blackmailed, Female Domination, Revenge
Personality: Bad to Good, Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Humiliation
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Mechanical Device, Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 08/04/15
Updated: 05/16/17
Reviewer: rtbateman Signed
Date: 02/10/16 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Turn that incident into a dream, with her waking up in a cold sweat. Now she will have a fighting chance. A happy story needs a happy ending. No sense in destroying 13 chapters of good writing.

Author's Response: You are right, I f***** up. Since posting that chapter I find it really hard to write a follow up on it, hence the lack of updates. I guess i should indeed seriously consider rewriting that. I am currently thinking of writing a short chapter to put things right again and patch it all up. Thanks for the advice, let me know what you think of the next chapter.


What would you do, if you had no clue what was going on, but had to figure it all out on your own?
Rated: Kid-Friendly 3 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 16755 Words: 16001 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Alien, Child, Daughter, Twin
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Forced, Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Horror
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 08/11/15
Updated: 10/31/15
Reviewer: rtbateman Signed
Date: 02/26/16 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: This is Halloween

There are some people on our News that don't look human to me. Like General Petraeus and Hillary Clinton and Lois Lerner.
They all have weird traits, like a big smirk, and then there are their hands. They like to stick all their fingers out straight and point them down at a desk or table. They just don't seem human to me.

Author's Response: that does make sense. They must be aliens.

A struggling businessman comes up with a bold idea to ensure his 14 year old son a better life...
Rated: Explicit 24 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 209676 Words: 24694 Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, Lingerie, School Uniform
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Medical Experiment
Warnings: Incest, Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 08/27/15
Updated: 08/20/17
Reviewer: rtbateman Signed
Date: 01/10/16 Title: Chapter 3: Let's Do It!

More, more, more of this story. Just don't let it get too kinky, would ruin the mass appeal thing.

Reviewer: rtbateman Signed
Date: 01/10/16 Title: Chapter 6: Can't Sleep

He needs (dad) to get some of this stuff for his wife, or extra esgrogen shots/pills.

A young man fall asleep. Only to find that when he wakes, he is no longer himself.
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 34774 Words: 14149 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: Family Household, High School, Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Age Regression, Body Swap, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 09/15/15
Updated: 09/21/15
Reviewer: rtbateman Signed
Date: 02/27/16 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The Pass

I suppose that Allie is going to go searching for whomever it was that she came from. And find out that he had died in his sleep. At least that would be the most natural line of thought.

Have you ever wished you could travel back in time and give comfort and guidance to your younger self?
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 15261 Words: 10663 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Senior (63+ yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Girlfriend
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Romance
Type of Change: Age Regression
Series: None
Published: 11/08/15
Updated: 11/08/15
Reviewer: rtbateman Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/10/16 Title: Chapter 6: Interlude: on the matter of living.

And, for some of us, being the man we should have been wasn't possible. Because that's not who we really were: we were female at our very core. We just happened to get stuck in man's body.

Andrew McKenzie is a junior in highschool when a strange incident sweeps the world. In the aftermath Andrew is left confused and unsure what's happening to him as he slowly begins to notice changes. How we he and his family find the silver lining?
Rated: Adult 17 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 29233 Words: 32389 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Teenager
Locale: High School, Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 03/05/16
Updated: 03/11/16
Reviewer: rtbateman Signed
Date: 03/10/16 Title: Chapter 5: Mom

I really like this story. So full of warmth and love. Now if only I could find a brown cloud for me. !!!!

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