Selvanius
In the deep, dark, web where creatures of hideous descent live. I, Selvanius shall...! Be very happy and social though in reality, I'm an antisocial hermit. I respect and love everyone in this community. Let's be awesome together!
Member Since: 11/10/15 Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Selvanius
What lies after death? For Jeff, it involves something neither he nor his host will ever forget.
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 3607 Words: 1633 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Story Theme: Mind/Body Posession
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 03/21/11
Updated: 03/21/11
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/09/16 Title: Chapter 1: Looking Glass

This is honestly one of the best reads I have ever read. Good story!10/10

The Machines of the Matrix don't care a whit for things that mean the most to humans. So what happens when one of their side experiments is awoken from the Matrix by the crew of the Nebuchadnezzar, and discovers what reality truly is?
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 4240 Words: 2107 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Story Theme: Distant Future, Fan Fiction
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Mechanical Device, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 03/21/11
Updated: 03/21/11
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/23/16 Title: Chapter 1: Matrix: Reassignment

Well written and interesting! Wish there was more though.

Part 3 of the Succubus Bride Trilogy, The moment of reckoning first set into motion by the chance encounter has come. The fate of the Succubus Bride hangs in the balance. A dark tide threatens the world. Will those who have worked so hard succeed, or will an orgy of evil prevail? Thus ends the tale of the Succubus Bride.
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 13771 Words: 66851 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Bride, Wife
Locale: Family Household, Office, Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Captive, Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 08/14/12
Updated: 08/14/12
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/09/15 Title: Chapter 1: Section 1 of The Succubus' Vows

This is amazing. Why don't you have anymore reviews?! You deserve a lot I credit!

A military man a day before leave has his so-called magic run out nearly getting all of his squad killed. A mysterious figure watches the proceedings of the battle and then decides to give Magic a choice Serve his country in new ways or go home a war hero knowing he could've done more.
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 17910 Words: 7615 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed
Date: 01/07/16 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: When the Magic Ran Out

Wait, no, hold on. Taking that many shots is... Impossible! It may be fiction but there is always a limit to how much you can stretch the truth.

A tale of adventure and self discovery, follow along the journey of Geoffrey Scott, a teenager that is forced into a world of ghouls and ghosts. He discovers who he really is and takes part on a journey to save his love ones.
Rated: Adult 161 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 138551 Words: 296576 Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character, Teenager
Locale: Family Household, High School, Space or Foreign Planet
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Horror, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 08/12/13
Updated: 07/05/18
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/31/16 Title: Chapter 16: Part 1; Chapter 16: Communication Breakdown

I enjoyed this chapter! Lots of new juicy information! Just a few sentence errors but otherwise, great work!

Author's Response: Sorry for the delay on answering this review. My computer didn't want to log in into Susy's account and I had trouble logging in for a while. I love your reviews! And thank you for reading, I'll hope you'll be here for what's happening next!

Jackie experiences the physical portion of her gender transformation.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 30 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 62755 Words: 14180 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Fights Change
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 11/07/13
Updated: 11/21/13
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/08/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"Do you know what denial is?"
"Sure, it's when you say no."

Ahaha! So blunt and straight up!!! xD

A man finds a fursuit that changes his life forever.
Rated: Deviant 9 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 52565 Words: 89325 Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Curse
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Body Suit
Series: None
Published: 11/07/13
Updated: 11/12/13
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/17/15 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10b

Is she still a Alpha?

Colene is the envy of every girl in St. Mary's Academy, and Jamie seems strangely drawn to her ever since Colene first moved into the school a few weeks back.
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 7067 Words: 1783 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Featured Items: Corsets, High Heels, School Uniform
Locale: Girl's School, High School
Story Theme: Mind/Body Posession
Type of Change: Body Suit, Fast/Instant Change, Identity Theft
Series: None
Published: 02/01/14
Updated: 02/01/14
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12/16/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOL... I think orgasms are a bit more then just a few rubs...


No one knows what the future holds. Everyone has a prediction. It doesn't mean it will come true. That's what one child learn in this futuristic story.
(RATED TEEN)
Rated: Adult 30 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 49102 Words: 42405 Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Child, Daughter
Featured Items: Undies
Locale: Hospital or Clinic, Labratory
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Distant Future, Horror, Humiliation
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Stuck
Warnings: Bodily Functions, Death, Intense Violence, Torture
Series: Isisraxtosa
Published: 02/20/14
Updated: 01/01/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01/03/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - This Strange New Feeling

One huge, major, super, humongous, gargantuan mistake... 6-year olds aren't strong enough to even hold a pistol, much less chamber the bullet. Story gets a bit repetitive at times like urinating/deficating every other moment but otherwise, a good, fresh story!

Author's Response: Thats not actually true. I have a friend that has a little 4 year old girl. We had her hold a non loaded pistol to prove it can be held. Also we had her hold a non sharpened katana, which is heavier and she was able to hold it as well. So, it can be done.
thanks for commenting.

Rated: Adult 4 Reviews star Story Incomplete Reads: 6764 Words: 798 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sissy Story
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Sissy
Featured Items: Diapers
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Breast Implants
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Type: Non-English
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Age Regression
Warnings: Bodily Functions
Series: None
Published: 06/22/14
Updated: 06/22/14
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed star
Date: 03/19/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm trembling... Oh god... this is too hard... It's just so... GOD DAMN FUNNY!! Seriously, what the hell were you thinking?! I'm going to be completely honest. This looks like a kid from elementary school found out how to get on pornhub and then proceeded to describe a dick. No, a "REALLY REALLY REALLY" thick one. Holy crap I'm dying. It's too much!

Stay in school.

After making a deal with Seth, Myserra hands Brett over to the incubus and for one night only, Seth becomes Brett's master and shows him what it's like to be with a real man.
Rated: Explicit 3 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 3746 Words: 3839 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Featured Items: Corsets, High Heels, Lingerie
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Male Domination
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Warnings: Bondage/S&M
Series: None
Published: 07/10/14
Updated: 07/10/14
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/21/16 Title: Chapter 1: Seth & Brett

Oh wow! This was really hot!

16 year old Kage Black is the son of the evil shadow lord, but he has the willpower to overcome the darkness of his soul. When he is forcibly turned female he realizes that he's now unrecognizable. Now under the name Katie White he tries to find the cure to his family's curse, and save his dad from his corrupted ways before he gets himself killed, and doing as much good as he can along the way.

A story of magic, fighting, and modern technology's, this adventure story will have everything except romance, there will be lust though so don't worry
Rated: Adult 12 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 13399 Words: 19022 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Featured Items: Boots, Corsets, Long Nails, Undies
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement, Permanent Hair/Skin/Nail Change, Vocal Surgery
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse, Forced
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Mythical Setting, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Fast/Instant Change, Hormonal, Stuck
Warnings: Bodily Functions, Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 08/07/14
Updated: 09/12/14
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/13/15 Title: Chapter 5: Molds and memorys

Bwahaha a single breast clench made her wet? xD!

In Randion City where technology and science determine rank and status, while those with no skills receive nothing. Now there is someone or something new and more capable. Will the city crumble or reach a new golden age.
Rated: Adult 55 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 48876 Words: 101155 Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character, Teenager
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: Family Household, High School, Hospital or Clinic, Labratory
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Accident, Revenge, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 09/17/14
Updated: 05/07/15
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/18/16 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 22: Yaweh, King of the World

I just reread this but didn't Frederic die? I thought the bridge was destroyed...

Author's Response: Rebuilding the bridge and reconstructing memories. Frederic and Liz are both dead, but after Sheeni became 'God' she also became capable of recreating it. At the end she tells Frederic that she tore them out of the bridge. That's only partly true. These problems actually become present in Liz, who has nightmares and incredible headaches resulting off memories she should have, but lacks.

Much of the world has been destroyed an a mysterious enemy who have poisoned much of the land. A pilot fighting to defend Alaska is shot down bringing his flying career to an end, that is until he is offered the chance to become a test subject in the Winged Warrior programme.
Rated: Adult 187 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 108778 Words: 128996 Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Featured Items: Lingerie, Undies
Locale: Labratory
Motivation for Change: For a Job
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 09/19/14
Updated: 01/05/15
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed
Date: 11/13/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whoa! This is really good! It can be slow at times but it shows lots of good content!!!

Author's Response: Thanks

Sequel to Castaways. Thanatos is on the move, and he's doing what he does best. Killing everyone he can.
Rated: Adult 26 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 10812 Words: 40060 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Girlfriend, Object
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual, Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Mythical Setting, Witchcraft
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Torture
Series: Castaways
Published: 11/29/14
Updated: 05/12/17
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/02/16 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Wyoming Chosen Academy

What is this "Freedom" you speak of...?

Author's Response: Freedom, the Dealer sequel.

When a band of the king's men delve into the subterranean city of a long-dead goddess, one among their number finds himself undergoing an agonizing transformation as they fight their way through horror and nightmare. Will their very presence revive the beautifully dark goddess who once nearly conquered the world?
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 4587 Words: 8771 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse, Unknown
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Horror, Mind/Body Posession, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 01/23/15
Updated: 01/23/15
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/31/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is amazing. The plot is very interesting and good. Please continue this!

A man who spat words to kill. A young woman that struggles with the past. What do they have in common? Nothing, yet they're the same person: RQAX-Y2SO AKA The Reaper
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews starstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 791 Words: 351 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstar
Date: 03/30/16 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: RQAX-Y2SO

This is not enough for me to understand anything. Interesting concept but it's leaving extremely dissatisfied that it's not being used properly.

A mystery, a man named The Dealer, who takes the dead and places them in new worlds. Their names... Aces. People who will go on to change history, or fail trying. This is Shore's story, a Dragon Knight and The Dealer's newest Ace.
Rated: Explicit 254 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 99373 Words: 208366 Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Unknown, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 02/14/15
Updated: 02/17/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/11/15 Title: Chapter 1: Ace of clubs: Rigging the deck

AMAZING!! I love how Shore goes out on a journey just to find support in her life! Bravo!!!

Author's Response: Which chapter is that? This must be when she went out to find her Mother, isn't it? Anyway, considering I think it is that, I'll say, thanks. Probably wouldn't have happened if no-one guessed correctly in the challenge.

How I view the girlfriend story should be continued.
Note:the original story is not mine,this is just a persona idea to continue it.
Rated: Explicit 3 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 11356 Words: 688 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstar
Date: 03/31/16 Title: Chapter 1: A new brother and old friends

Wait, hold on... None of this makes any sense whatsoever...

Poor Logan, not only does he get dumped (hard) by Ashely (his girlfriend of 6 months) on his birthday but something else happens that he'll never forget.
Rated: Adult 50 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 142432 Words: 20678 Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Slave
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced, Revenge, Tricked
Personality: Bad to Good, From Submissive to Dominant, Good to Bad
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Captive, Horror, Mythical Setting, Romance
Type of Change: Stuck
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Torture
Series: The TGR Series
Published: 03/30/15
Updated: 01/30/17
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/06/15 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: The Shadows of Fate

More please!!! This story is awesome, but leaving on a cliff hanger is mean! ;P

Author's Response: I'll get back to it eventually... I'm just being lazy and let y'all "hang around" for a while till I get back to writing it again... Right now, I'm just too into a few mobile games I'm playing... Jurassic World: The Game, Mobile Strike, Monster Island, & Farm Hero Saga... Yes, I'm a bit of a nerd when it comes to games... XP

I had been a slave to the Qharr nearly my entire life, but one fateful day everything changed. I joined up with a group of rebels, and through a twist of fate, no one could have ever foreseen, I became the woman I am today...
Rated: Adult 46 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 74781 Words: 232807 Chapters: 72 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Accident, Forced
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: The Earth Source Universe
Published: 04/16/15
Updated: 02/24/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/16/16 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter Thirteen

Good chapter! A bit short, but now I know more!

Author's Response: Thanks!

A shady organisation begins recruiting teenage males to its ranks; an organisation that, unknown to many, intends to eradicate the world of all males using female super-soldiers.
Rated: Explicit 114 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 277624 Words: 116261 Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: Camp, Labratory
Motivation for Change: Female Domination
Personality: Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Captive
Type of Change: Mechanical Device, Mind Control
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 04/20/15
Updated: 02/19/17
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed
Date: 11/13/15 Title: Chapter 27: “Back In The Game”

Ohhh can't wait for the next one!

DR wants to change medical science, but all he changes is himself and his sister
Rated: Explicit 9 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 45899 Words: 17763 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo, Daughter, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Good to Bad, Loses Identity, Made Dumber
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Series: None
Published: 05/21/15
Updated: 01/30/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed
Date: 01/05/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 DR drinks his first mixture to make scientific history

Well... It's... Okay? I like the writing style but your information isn't logically correct... at all. Also I beleive it's "chalk" not "caulk..'" This has potential, but nothing unique. If there is some twist to the plot, then this could be very good. I won't rate for now.

Adam and Steve were just helping out their sisters, unfortunately they came upon a witch, and now Adam's been cursed...
Rated: Adult 135 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 394086 Words: 39803 Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: High Heels, Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: The Curse Universe
Published: 05/25/15
Updated: 08/30/15
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/13/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved these chapters! Interesting plot, showed good struggles, and made a warm tingly feeling at the end.

Author's Response: I'm happy you enjoyed it.

Eternal darkness waits on the edge of reality, threatening to devour everything it touches. Unbridled wrath burns in the heart of an untested immortal with a tortured past. An army of acolytes rises to reshape the world in the vision of its fanatical mistress.

The only hope for salvation lies in the soul of a young girl who is only beginning to learn the truth of herself. Can she unravel the mystery within before these forces clash in a titanic struggle that will burn the world?
Rated: Adult 45 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 21152 Words: 108224 Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Locale: Family Household, Road Trip
Motivation for Change: Curse, Revenge
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: Archon Saga
Published: 05/30/15
Updated: 11/27/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/13/15 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This story shows a lot of promise! I can tell a lot of effort was used for editing and perfecting. I wonder where this will go!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I do put a bit of effort into editing. I'm glad you like it, and I'm pretty happy with where it goes so far. Thanks for the comment! I hope you like the rest.

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/23/16 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 23: Living Weapons

Dun dun DUUUN!! What will happen to Amber now? I wonder if she'll be manipulated or if you're just throwing us off track to surprise us! :D

Author's Response: Hmm, a red herring? Now would I really do something like that? :P

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/20/16 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Earthborn

Could've been more moving and dramatic but I still love it!

Author's Response: I intended to go a little deeper and add more drama, but honestly I couldn't think of other things to add and go into. I'm glad you still liked it.

Dane thought he had life planned out and everything was working out. That is until a car crash tears it all away and leaves him paralyzed, but what can a medical company that specializes in bleeding edge technology offer him that will help him retake his life?
Rated: Explicit 75 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 54503 Words: 65166 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: High School, Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Mechanical Device
Warnings: Death, Politically Incorrect
Series: None
Published: 06/26/15
Updated: 05/18/17
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/04/16 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Normalcy, Contrary to Lunacy

“Tara, it’s good to see you. How are you feeling?” She asks.

Getting a little tired of that question. “I’m doing alright, Diane. Tara invited me over.”

DUN DUN DUUUUUN!!!! A mistake!!! *gasp

Author's Response: Not just that. Italics. Italics everywhere.

Andrew is a pretty normal dude living in a pretty normal town. But what happens when you throw magic into the mix?
Rated: Explicit 3 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 4383 Words: 3171 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Bikinis, Lingerie, Pantyhose, Undies, Work Uniform
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Fights Change
Story Theme: Mythical Setting, Witchcraft
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Politically Incorrect
Series: None
Published: 08/15/15
Updated: 08/15/15
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstar
Date: 12/16/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wait what was happening? No freak out or anything? Good spelling, but bad plot.

Many of my wants were fulfilled by a strange chalice found within the Maze, but many more problems arise due to the power it grants and the world it opens.
Rated: Explicit 285 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 200582 Words: 161202 Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Forced
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Torture
Series: None
Published: 08/22/15
Updated: 09/18/19
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/12/15 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Magic and a Melee

She becomes overpowered, learns how to wield awesome weapons, and even shows off. I like this type of transformation.

Me likey, I can't word when happey liek evrydyy. ;3

Author's Response: It's been a change that a lot of people have been waiting for it seems. I wanted to delay it a little longer because it's so easy to drift into my habits. I wanted some time for Verona to learn about her mortality within her immortality. I suppose nearly dying was enough for that.

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Date: 02/06/16 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: An Opinion of a Friend

Good new chapter but I feel like Verona snapped on Scylla way too harshly. Oh well! I enjoyed it! Also, yay Echos of the Soul!

Author's Response: Yeah, you aren't the only one who thinks that, but would you not react very similarly to a friend coming onto you so forcefully while you're in a bad mood? Her response made the most sense logically.

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Date: 04/06/16 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Heart on a Stick

Heh, music at the end of each chapter... Reading and listening to music don't go well with each other...

Author's Response: Not really. If it's something new it will distract you, but I thought I might as well give you guys some stuff that I like listening to. You'll probably find that I listen to Unique Music a lot. I listed to a 300+ long playlist of them and then there's a lot more.

In the far reaches of space, a mysterious alien race captures a crew of human smugglers. One man is chosen to be the subject of a dramatic transformation, a process they call Uplifting, but will he embrace their gift or run from it?
Rated: Explicit 86 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 139324 Words: 46150 Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/13/15 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Bring It On Home To Me

Haha this is so bad for me but SOOOO GOOOD!!!!

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Date: 11/13/15 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Nobody But Me

This... Is... Painful as heck..?! Why leave on a cliff hangaaaarrrr!!!! I loved it either way though!

Author's Response: If that hurt, the next chapter might kill you. Thanks!

Magic, the mysterious energy. Many studied it, but nobody understands. In a magical society, a man has mysterious dreams. Could they mean something more than they appear?
Rated: Explicit 76 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 55554 Words: 48990 Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 08/27/15
Updated: 05/07/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/20/15 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Stop torturing us! We want the tg! Anyways great job!

Author's Response: But this is my one story where few if any have any sort of idea where the TG is going to be! I like drawing it out. Thanks!

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Date: 04/23/16 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 20.5; Byul

Will this Beel be introduced later on in the story? As a companion I hope.

Author's Response: Honestly? No. But if I write a sequel (*glances at notepad with ideas on it*) you might see him again

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Date: 04/02/16 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

More! I need to read more of this story!! D: It's so good!!

Author's Response: More? Fine, I'll go post a chapter literally right now

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/03/16 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 10.5; Mren

Yay! More brother gods with sister complexes! :D

Author's Response: I honestly have no response to that

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Date: 04/13/16 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 15

*GASP Are they really the same entity...? How? Why? Wasn't Gust conceived by Tornado? I must learn more!! Please post a new chapter! ;-;

Author's Response: Aaaand next chapter is going to be a short, off-topic one! Mwahahahahaha!

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Date: 04/16/16 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 16

KEKEKEKE?! DIDJA FALL ASLEEP ON DA KEYBOARD?!?! HEHEHEHEHE!!!

Author's Response: There was an error when posting, trying to fix it now

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/17/16 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 17

Yay another chapter! When is the tg coming?

Author's Response: It's getting closer, I can say that much... and expect another chapter here in a few hours *wink wink*

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Date: 04/19/16 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 18

I can imagine the faces on Ice's parents...

Author's Response: Yep... hope you're not disappointed with it when we get there!

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Date: 05/01/16 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 24

The apocalypse?! Things have just heated up! Oh by the way, how many chapters until tg...? Just wondering...

Author's Response: You want the truth, I take it? Two, if I'm not mistaken

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Date: 05/05/16 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 26

Yay! The tg has finally arrived, though it was kind of (very) anticlimactic...

Author's Response: Yep! Saddening, wasn't it? The one time I try to make the TG not the point of the story this happens

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Date: 05/07/16 Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue

So... well... HUH?! It was a tg but it wasn't... We really only got a few lines of dialogue from Gust/Fos which isn't nearly enough. I really do hope there is a sequel though.

Author's Response: Yep! A far cry from my usual stories where the TG is usually at the beginning, not the end... and there is a sequel. Question is how long it's gonna actually be, and how long until I start posting it. Hopefully I don't have the same problem I did with this story, namely not having a name for it until seven chapters in

It's God's Game Show. If you win, you get a wish. Anything you want, from an amazing burrito to eternal life. How hard could it be?
Rated: Explicit 65 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 44068 Words: 39045 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Non-Consentual Sex, Torture
Series: None
Published: 09/22/15
Updated: 03/25/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/26/16 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Earth's Stout Murdering Guardians

I feel like her wish will be the end of God's Game Show. You gave us a game breaking foreshadow. (No pun intended.)

Author's Response: I like that you tried to guess. But it's better than that. Promise.

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Date: 12/04/15 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Wheel of Misfortune

What happened to Karen? Or are the stages done in different groups due to the large amount of participants?

Author's Response: She was around. There's just so many contestants that finding someone within the crowd is incredibly difficult.

Kazuki is an avid watcher of anime; he knows all there is to it! He's got every cliché and 'plot twist' memorized. Good thing too! He and his group of friends are one day suddenly transformed each into a stereotypical part of a harem! The only hope of returning back to normal is finding the culprit behind this madness by surviving through the world of anime clichés. Only by utilizing all of his knowledge can Kazuki save himself and his friends!
Rated: Adult 11 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 16009 Words: 5630 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Teenager, Twin
Featured Items: Boots, Maid Uniform, Pantyhose, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline, School Uniform, Undies
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Forced, Unknown
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Comedy, Genie/Wishes, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 09/24/15
Updated: 09/30/15
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/29/16 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Spooky Wind!

I see what you did 'dere'... heh! Get it? Dere....

Author's Response: Ayy!

A master thief, caught in his homeland, escapes to another country and begins rebuilding his life in the best way he knows how: Stealing everything.
Rated: Adult 65 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 60695 Words: 45816 Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Forced, Tricked
Story Theme: Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Death
Series: Hrelsin Universe
Published: 10/02/15
Updated: 10/15/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/20/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Why didn't he become a vampire... -.- I hope the plot make up for the awesomeness that was wasted...

Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see, won't you? Good thing I'm almost done with the next chapter

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Date: 03/25/16 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I want some trolls blood... it seems so interesting... especially with the tg factor.

Author's Response: It's a shame it's so hard to get, but that's what One-With-Magic is for!

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/27/16 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I can only hope that Olus becomes an immortal magic wielding baddass like one-with-magic.

Author's Response: I'm a good way through the next chapter and all I can say is *Insert spoiler here*

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Date: 07/20/16 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I just caught up on the last four chapters. WOW! I feel incredibly stupid for not noticing the clues scattered about in the first 6 chapters. The way you wrote these chapters amazed me. Not only did you cleverly hide the fact that our dear protagonist was turning into a vampire, but you also managed to keep me hooked the entire time! So far, my only complaint is the dramatic scenes but those aren't really a problem when everything else is perfect.

Author's Response: That's great to hear! I know my next chapter has some things people have been waiting for as well... I hope you continue to enjoy this!

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Date: 07/24/16 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Awwwww yeeeeeaaaahhhh!!! And here comes the tg! Hooray! Another great chapter. I like the carelessness of One-With-Magic coupled with logic of Olus. Their chemistry is wonderful.

Author's Response: They do make a nice pair, don't they? I hope to get the next chapter up soon-ish

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Date: 07/29/16 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Hmm, makes me wonder if Olus/Oliua is a special vampire that gains abilities from the creatures he/she sucks blood from. I'm excited for more.

Author's Response: Glad to hear it! Unfortunately I haven't been motivated enough to write, but I'll keep trying

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Date: 09/01/16 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

YAAAAAAYYYYY!!! She finally becomes a vampire! I'm so happy for her!

Author's Response: Laughs So far you're the only one happy she's done that

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/29/16 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

One-With-Magic is probably going to deny Oliua access Acksiin at the cost of her own life. I hope it doesn't happen. She needs to become the ruler of the world.

Author's Response: Everyone seems to have their own theories and hopes... I wonder how many of them I'll smash?

Reginald Barclay discovers that space is not the final frontier.
Rated: Adult 15 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 19555 Words: 21983 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Personality: From Submissive to Dominant
Story Theme: Distant Future
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 10/12/15
Updated: 08/19/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/13/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love how Reg transitions so well! I would love to know what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you! Mopar

A short story for the weekend crowds. A man reads something that changes him progressively.
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 4790 Words: 1718 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Tricked, Unknown
Personality: Fights Change, Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 11/13/15
Updated: 11/13/15
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/13/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG! This is really good! Not many stories begin with self discovery of their bodies!

John Hornbostle is a Heavily in debt private investigator, Just as it seems hopeless a well paying case arrives. But he is not prepared for the truth of what happened to Malcolm Booth. ( The first story of the John Hornbostle series)
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews Story Incomplete Reads: 1736 Words: 745 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Locale: Family Household, Office
Motivation for Change: Curse, Revenge, Tricked, Unknown
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 11/29/15
Updated: 11/29/15
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed
Date: 12/06/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Unpaid Bills

It's... way too short. I don't what to say because it's so darn short. Aim for at least 1000 words per chapter. Also, you should put some more description into your writing. I'll put a rating in when it gets better.

Author's Response: Thank you for the advice I will work on your points

When a business Tycoon swaps bodies with a woman not all is at is seems.
Rated: Deviant 2 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 22171 Words: 3764 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Mind/Body Posession
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 11/30/15
Updated: 11/30/15
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12/06/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Switch

Decent story. But I'm confused about the reason behind the transformation. Sprinkling a vial of liquid isn't very explanatory. It's good, but still really confusing.

Author's Response: That was a lie they told him to explain how the guy made them switch without the girls permission. However the girl was in on it to so the real cause of the swap is still unknown.

Aiden Sommers was just your average, boring man, until he died. Upon learning that the afterlife is not exactly what it seems, Aiden must become a demon and an agent of Lust. What he doesn't know is this also entails him becoming a succubus.
Rated: Explicit 76 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 215410 Words: 49461 Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: For a Job
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Mind Control, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 12/04/15
Updated: 07/06/17
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/17/15 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

So it WAS him!!

Author's Response: Dun dun daaaaaaaaa

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Date: 12/05/15 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

This is great!! Yet another hidden gem in the piles of rocks that litter the site!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

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Date: 12/06/15 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Two words... More Please!!

Author's Response: Thank you, more is on its way!

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/12/15 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Nice! You're dedicated to this story. I can't wait till the next chapter gets approved. It's a pain, I know. I love it when the story includes orgies that have people screwing each other until pass out! This is great. :D

Author's Response: Thank you! I've been working on it for a while, it's nice to get it out there.

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12/13/15 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Can we... NOT have her become a superhero? It's too cliche... We already have Paragon Verse and Brave New World...?!

Author's Response: Don't worry, it's kind of a silly in-joke with a friend who wanted her to become a low-tier superhero who f**** her girlfriend in between stopping crime. I can safely say she WON'T become a superhero.

There's a moment when you realize that something is different, but can't quite put your finger on what it is.
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 3843 Words: 973 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 12/06/15
Updated: 12/07/15
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/07/15 Title: Chapter 1: Attention to Detail

Hahaha "Kid-Friendly" then I see "I loved the sensation of warm water over my nipples." Haha too good!!! Anyways great small story! It left me feeling... Nice! A lot of stories are confusing, but this is pretty good!

Author's Response: Hmm, should I change the rating then? I don't know what the category definitions are.

Caught on the brink of despair, Grey gets an offer: One wish and power in exchange for three favors. He knows a Magical's life is usually short and brutal, but there's nothing he wants more than his father and sister to be brought back. He never wondered if his Magical form would be the right gender.
Rated: Explicit 15 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 7693 Words: 3268 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: Corsets, High Heels, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline
Motivation for Change: Unknown, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Horror, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 12/09/15
Updated: 12/16/15
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/10/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well made! But the term Magical seems weird. I'm always expecting The "-girl" after. It just doesn't fit right...

Author's Response: Well considering that anybody can be Magical, it seems silly to append a gender to the end when not referring to anybody in particular. No worries though: when people talk about specific Magicals they add boy or girl or man or woman to it. Glad you like it in other respects!

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/16/15 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good punctuation/grammar!
I have no idea where you'll take this. So what I know so far, is that Grey is only female when he's a Magical? Also will we be hearing about how he copes wih the sudden change? Surprise us!

Author's Response: It sure seems like he's only female while he's in his Magical form, doesn't it? And we'll definitely hear about it. Just...not for a few chapters. Things are too scattered and hectic right now for Grey to take the time to do more than a quick review of what's happened.

Over the hundreds of years, the legend of Saint Nicholas has changed. Young Malcolm soon discovers the magical truth.
Rated: Explicit 22 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 47853 Words: 17391 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: Family Household
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement
Motivation for Change: Curse, For a Job
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 12/10/15
Updated: 12/25/15
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/24/15 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Christmas Eve

Haha! This made me cringe so hard! All I could think was "Wow... that escalated quickly!" Anyways great work!!!

Author's Response: Thanks....I think? Hahaha :)

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/22/15 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Melody

That was a quick fight for someone who has been battling for centuries... O.O

Author's Response: That was the point. ;)

A devious skeleton cursed to do what he has to, chasing his prey and having a little fun doing it.
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 18523 Words: 31173 Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced
Type of Change: Stuck
Warnings: Death, Torture
Series: The TGR Series
Published: 12/12/15
Updated: 01/15/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/14/15 Title: Chapter 5: TG Reaper Pt. 5

Oh my goodness! This short story was great... but really random... I had no idea what was happening. There's a lot of useless information in there, but I still liked it. 5 stars because it was good for a first story!

Author's Response: Meh... Made it 'bout 3 years ago at DeviantArt... And it's not a short story, persay... Story within a story is more like it...lol

Before Mike's sister dies of cancer she gives him a magic pendant. The pendant and its magic can save Emily, but at a cost to Mike. Can Mike embrace the changes that it brings to alter Emily's fate?
Rated: Adult 15 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 18458 Words: 7545 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Daughter, Teenager
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 12/17/15
Updated: 01/10/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/07/16 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Andrew

Oh! Phew! I almost thought that your threw away 2 chapters worth of writing away to have his mind become non-existent. Then I read more and was relieved. Good Job!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. As you know it is nice to hear some feedback. Mike is going to experience first hand Emily's life. As you will find out, their fates are intertwined. Stay tuned. More is coming.

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/17/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Emily

Really good! Only problem is paragraph spacing. It helps a lot!

Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback! I've been using an app for my phone that creates the story first as a 'word .doc'.I think the paragraph spacing is being lost when I convert it over to a .txt document. I will compensate for this in future chapters. Thank you for reading. It makes me happy that you are enjoying it :)

Time for fun, and jokes, and japes, and elves. But what sex are elves anyway?
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 3760 Words: 1476 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Clothing, Daughter, Teenager
Featured Items: School Uniform, Undies, Work Uniform
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Story Theme: Witchcraft
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 12/22/15
Updated: 12/22/15
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/23/15 Title: Chapter 1: Santa's helper

Nice!! I enjoyed reading this! A little few mistakes like saying 'your' instead of 'you're', but otherwise, it was good!

Author's Response: Thank you, yeah I'm bad for that. I suspect part of it comes from simply writing everything as I go. The entire story unfolds in the box.

Halloween is fast approaching and North, to impress the girl he likes, agrees to dress up as a character from a TV show he has never seen. Unfortunately he discovers too late that the character he agreed to dress as is a girl and he has no choice but to go through with it.
Rated: Explicit 47 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 69273 Words: 42767 Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Maid
Featured Items: Boots, Maid Uniform, Pantyhose, Work Uniform
Motivation for Change: Accident, For a Job
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Costume or Halloween
Type of Change: Body Suit
Series: None
Published: 01/02/16
Updated: 02/22/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/05/16 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Ohhh body suit tg... I was about to suggest that this story be put in realistic cross dressing, but now I see what's happening... ;3

Author's Response: I usually don't have such a slow start

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Date: 02/01/16 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

"Huh?" xD That was hilarious! Good chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks

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Date: 02/02/16 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Yay! I honestly hope you're joking about the two week wait thing because I want more! ;D

After being caught spying on a group of girls Scott a usually well behaved, teen and his mischievous best friend Bobby are turned into beautiful girls by a spell. They're then given the task of breaking the curse before midnight or risk remaining girls forever...
Rated: Explicit 89 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 119509 Words: 21038 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Curse, Female Domination, Forced, Revenge, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Story Theme: Costume or Halloween, Humiliation, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Stuck
Series: None
Published: 01/03/16
Updated: 02/26/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/03/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Time for a spell

I love it! Other than a few mistakes like putting their instead of they're and some confusion in description, it was well written. I hope to see more!

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it. I'll look out for these mistakes in future, thanks for noting them. xx

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Date: 03/04/16 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Time is Changing

That was a "dick" move... xD

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/04/16 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Time is Changing

That was a "dick" move... xD

Author's Response: ha-ha, indeed it was. Thanks for reading. xx

Josephus Carter is dying of cancer. Believing there is no grace in death, on death's doorstep, he abandons his family and friends to sail into the Pacific and die alone. Josephus soon finds himself in a strange yet familiar world. A world with gods, where a goddess of fate and a god of Labor have called Josephus to take his place as their child a Goddess of the Arts.
Rated: Adult 15 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 7494 Words: 24545 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Bride, Child, Daughter, Fantasy Character, Slave, Wife
Locale: Road Trip
Motivation for Change: In Hiding, Unknown
Personality: Cultural/Nationality Change, Made Smarter
Story Theme: Distant Future, Mythical Setting, Second Childhood
Type of Change: Age Regression, Cultural, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 01/04/16
Updated: 10/10/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/06/16 Title: Chapter 1: Born Again

OHMYHOLYSMOD??!11!!11 This is so well written and the plot is amazing. PLEASE MAKE MORE!! I REALLY enjoyed reading this. This is amazing and I love it.

A well deserved 5-star for you!

Daniel Hosteen burns things. He doesn't want to burn things but his fire powers are hard to control. He knows this and the government knows this and he wears a collar that helps suppress his powers. Afraid of hurting others, Daniel lives alone but things are about to change. Soon he learns that he's not what he seems, and discovers there's more to the world than he could possibly imagine.
Rated: Adult 7 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 7500 Words: 10387 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Teenager
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Forced, Unknown
Personality: Loses Identity
Story Theme: Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 01/04/16
Updated: 10/12/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01/06/16 Title: Chapter 1: Undesired Assertions

Good, but slightly confusing. Try having your characters explain the situation in a more understandable way. I often have to reread entire sections to find out what they really mean.

my friend and I were at the wrong place at the wrong time when the cheerleaders come back then we were caught by them something was going to change me forever
Rated: Explicit 7 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 91324 Words: 92202 Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstar
Date: 01/28/16 Title: Chapter 1: Cheerleader snoop and changes at school

Well.... Let's see. Major problems with grammar, descriptions, and transitions but good plot. One thing that bugs me is that the whole point of a tg is the reaction that the MC produces. When you hangs their memory, it's just another story that you will find on any other site.

Author's Response: I am getting a proof editor very soon to help besides someone else on this Thank you

Ashton Wilkins is a pretty ordinary guy - albeit pretty unlucky. His luck seems to change as he is invited to take part in the closed Beta of the greatest virtual reality game of his lifetime!
Rated: Deviant 59 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 209699 Words: 39725 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/24/16 Title: Chapter 2: Completely skipping the frying pan

This is going to get dark... REALLY fast...

Lauren, a highschool teacher is turned into her 16 year old seld by her student, Henry now in his teacher's former body, and now named Haley.

Also a side story about a body swapper is going on as well.
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews starstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 8922 Words: 678 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstar
Date: 01/19/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - the turning of the screw

Well, it's short. Focus on at least 500 words. Proofread it. "Single and unmarried." Doesn't work well together. Single is just fine. There are also various other mistakes. I suggest reading books to increase your vocabulary and understanding of sentences. Otherwise, it's an okay concept and has potential.

Author's Response: thanks man, it was just a sample i wrote to see what people think. Also english is not my native language so mistakes might appear. but thanks for productive criticism

Having transitioned physically, Jackie must rapidly learn how to be a girl in her new school.

The conclusion to X Chromosome Therapy – Resurrection and Transition.
Rated: Adult 21 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 27480 Words: 16738 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Coming of Age
Series: None
Published: 01/23/16
Updated: 03/01/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/08/16 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh my goodness. I must see more! What happens next?! I WANT TO KNOW!!! D:

Dr. Janet Beacher's research had hit a dead end, as had her hopes of ever having grandchildren. Her only son, Jason, seemed oblivious to the opposite sex. As for her research, animal tests seemed to lack the leap of mental consciousness needed to activate her lab's new drug, UR21 – a drug capable of changing male tissue to female tissue.

Janet had a revelation, maybe one problem could be the solution to the other. If only she could find someone who could help her son start thinking like a female...
Rated: Explicit 19 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 114612 Words: 64464 Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Pregnancy
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 01/27/16
Updated: 01/27/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/03/16 Title: Chapter 18: The Conception of Everything: An Epilogue

Oh my goodness... This was one of, if not, the wildest rides I've ever been on, or read in this case. The story was superb. Amazing character development, spot on transition, and the perfect amount of support that Jay could ask for! Definitely deserving of a full 5/5 star rating. I enjoyed this story.

My plans for my break from school go horrible wrong when my older sister says that she's going to have a sleepover.
Rated: Adult 11 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 48970 Words: 1182 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Baby, Cheerleader, Girlfriend, Sissy, Slave, Twin
Featured Items: Bikinis, Diapers, High Heels, Lingerie, School Uniform, Sex Toys
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Dared into It, Forced
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Babyhood, Captive, Everyday Living, Humiliation
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 02/01/16
Updated: 03/18/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/02/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice! Great start and good grammar! Just make the chapters a bit longer and it'll be perfect!

A man who cross dresses for his friend is going to get a surprise when he puts on a spider necklace.
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 5435 Words: 1680 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Curse
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Horror
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 02/08/16
Updated: 02/08/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed
Date: 02/08/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Everything doesn't connect very well... It's very "William does this, William does that." Use other nouns and try changing perspective. It feels like you aren't very comfortable or ready for a 3rd person POV. Otherwise, this story has potential and I'm not hating, just giving advice.

During the rule of the Greek empire, demons and Gods were prevalent in the world. But men from the Greek army could stand the torment no more and set out to wipe out all the Gods and demons. Led by Demi Gods and Nephilim, the armies fought back and all but wiped out the Gods and demons which plagued the Earth.
Rated: Explicit 9 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 19402 Words: 15040 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/11/16 Title: Chapter 5: Punishments

Great story. It's interesting how you write. It seems that you rush the typing. The story is slightly rushed, but now terribly so. I hope to see more! :D

Author's Response: TBH wrote 95% of it in one sitting until 4:30 in the morning, when I was really drunk, after my girlfriend broke up with me, a year ago. just decided to post it now.

Poor Daniel. Woke up to find his world turned sideways as his manhood is stripped from him without a trace or any sign of how it happened. Will he be able to find the source of his new X chromosome and revert it or live life as a newfound woman?
Rated: Adult 52 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 86494 Words: 38805 Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Series: None
Published: 03/02/16
Updated: 02/16/17
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/03/16 Title: Chapter 1: Morning Alarm

This is... AMAZING! I wouldn't say the plot is original but dang, the description and story telling is great. Nice mental transition and even better reaction. I hope to see more!

Author's Response: I am not trying to reinvent the wheel, however your encouragement means a lot to me :)

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/12/16 Title: Chapter 4: Third and Fourth Bells

I take back what I said before. This is really a really good plot. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/02/16 Title: Chapter 8: Monitor Buzz

Ohh!! I can feel the plot developing! I can't wait to see more!!!

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/19/16 Title: Chapter 10: Late Night Noise

Oh sweet mother of... MORE PLEASE!!!

Andrew McKenzie is a junior in highschool when a strange incident sweeps the world. In the aftermath Andrew is left confused and unsure what's happening to him as he slowly begins to notice changes. How we he and his family find the silver lining?
Rated: Adult 17 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 28528 Words: 32389 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Teenager
Locale: High School, Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 03/05/16
Updated: 03/11/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/05/16 Title: Chapter 1: The First Day

This is great! Make it more fantasy-like! This story has a great start and has lots of potential.and I think if you play your cards right, it can be a hit! Just fix your comma's and it'll be perfect!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story. Sorry in advance for any issues like lack of commas. Honestly I sometimes don't know whether I should use one or not, and other times I just forget altogether.

John and his best friend Tim are searching for a new game to play when they stumble on Tetra. After designing their ideal characters they enter the game. What awaits them leaves them shocked.
Rated: Explicit 9 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 6558 Words: 2017 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/05/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The first day in a new world

This story is like a rough diamond. Some good polishing (Grammar, punctuation, and writing fixes.) will make this story great. For now, make a better explanation of how they were transported. I'll be here to help if ya need it and if you're truly devoted to this story, I can help proofread it with my spare time.

A man, who lives in the shadows making a living on taking lives and stealing prized items, but he may not be the Man he was so certain he was
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 1657 Words: 1074 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Child, Daughter, Fantasy Character, Girlfriend, Teenager
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime, Tricked, Unknown
Personality: Fights Change, From Submissive to Dominant
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Historical Time Period, Mythical Setting, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death, Non-Consentual Sex, Torture
Series: None
Published: 03/12/16
Updated: 03/12/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstar
Date: 03/12/16 Title: Chapter 1: The Man

Whoa, whoa, WHOA! Slow down there. Okay, so since this is your first story and you don't have much experience with writing, I will go over a few basics for better writing. This story looks like someone asked a 10-year-old to write this, which is good! You have to know that there is room for improvement.

Let's start!

Capitalization- It looks ugly, really ugly but it doesn't mean you can't fix it!

Past tense, Present tense, Future tense- Your story is everywhere right now. You can't use were and then use an ing word.

Paragraphs- It's good to keep some things separate. I, personally chop the story up into sections where there are new topics to be read.

Grammar- I didn't see anything that popped out. No fancy words. You should use some.

Length- Boy, oh boy! This was way too short! When writing, you need to put enough information out there so the readers will stay interested. I had no idea what was going on.

And finally...

Time- Take some time, proofread the story. Try using a word processor. Your greatest ally is free! All you need to do is take some time to think things through.

Good luck! I hope this helped.

PS: I've seen worse, so 2-star is actually a very good start.

Author's Response: Lol. Thanks for the reply I'm actually quite surprised i sent this so prematurely myself. I meant the errors ugh it pains me. The quotations on dialogue and the paragraphing was a submission error but in the future i will take longer to review both my writing and the submission. thanks for this reply ill get it fixed right away :)

A tale of two friends... Read on to find out what happens.
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 12413 Words: 1026 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Fast/Instant Change
Series: The Curse Universe
Published: 03/13/16
Updated: 03/13/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/13/16 Title: Chapter 1: Side A

Well that was quick.

Author's Response: Well, it was going to be a Mixed Tape story. I didn't extend it afterward.

My first attemp at a body swap story between a son in his senior year of high school and his mother. With a simple jingle of a bell, a mom with a well endowed body and a son raging with hormones will swap bodies and get to know what life in one another's shoes can be like.
Rated: Explicit 17 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 73517 Words: 18467 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Mother, Son, Teenager
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Pantyhose, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline, School Uniform, Sex Toys, Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School, Office
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes, Mind/Body Posession, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Incest
Series: None
Published: 03/26/16
Updated: 12/03/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/30/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You know what? This is pretty good! Good chapter length, decent storyline, and not too many grammar mistakes! (Though there are a few.)

I was getting slightly annoyed that there was a reviewer who 5-starred your four chapter story several times but I think you deserve it.

By the way, please space your paragraphs. It makes the whole reading experience easier.

Author's Response: I caught the grammar errors upon rereading, but I kind of just bypassed them and tried focussing more on the spelling. The grammar errors that I did adjust were the ones that seriously pulled me out when rereading prior to posting, but the old tablet can only make things so easy as it really is pretty small and quite dated. I appreciate the compliment. As for the spacing, I typically tapped the space bar 7 times when starting a new paragraph. Did you mean that you wanted me to have an empty line of space between each paragraph?

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed
Date: 03/30/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes, a space between paragraphs would be nice. Also, there is a delay when uploading your story because an admin needs to check if your story is okay. Eventually this complication will be lifted when enough chapters have been posted. Anyways, I hope you continue this story!

Mark's ex takes an extreme revenge. Mark fights back. Or tries to.
Rated: Adult 8 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 54320 Words: 7931 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo, Teenager
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Revenge
Personality: Fights Change
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 03/28/16
Updated: 04/07/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03/30/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Start

I'll make this quick as I can.
-Pacing is too fast.
-Needs more emotion. It's kinda lame... Add some tears, feelings, HATRED!!
-Illogical. Psychotic ex + fem-syringe makes for a really strange story

Otherwise, it's pretty good though it doesn't feel right for some reason.

An 18 year old just out of high school gets the opportunity of a lifetime, well sort of. He signs a contract without looking at it and ends up in a virtual... Paradise?
Rated: Explicit 34 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 87705 Words: 24388 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/05/16 Title: Chapter 1: Medieval Knights

Hehe... $30 minimum wage... inflation must have messed up economy...

Author's Response: Well, I estimate that we will be able to do neuro uploads like this by 2045 but gave myself some padding, I guessed what minimum wage would be around that time using a ratio between the current minimum wage and that of 45 years ago.which came out to around 1:4.52 then multiplied 4.25 * 7.25 = 32.77 and just rounded down to 30 :) historically the minimum wage has remained very close to the same when adjusted for inflation, the highest it was was in 1968 when it was $1.60 when adjusted for inflation this is equal to around $10

Therefore in 2016 the VR bed would cost around $2,350 assuming we had the same technology for life support and other tech used in it which would shift the Production Possibilities Frontier that we currently have outward quite massively. Subtracting this outward shift and using current technology would probably end in us having a bed that costs around $1,000,000 in today's money if not more. But considering that the bed has to have some form of AI in it it's not even possible given current technology, similarly with neuro interfacing. Think about how much computers cost in 1970 compared to today, and they were not even close to as powerful, so when converting this I just said eh, I will guess :)

Sorry for being such a nerd. Thank you very much for the review :)

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/16 Title: Chapter 1: Medieval Knights

Yay! Dragons!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/09/16 Title: Chapter 2: Function Disabled

Ohhh! No complaints other than the fact that the kiss portion was very quick. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Don't worry, it's going to continue in the next chapter. I just felt it was a good place to end a chapter so I took it so I could get the chapter out for everyone :)

Kayden Ballard lives in Empire city, Paragon's dark twin - its Gotham to Paragon's Metropolis, and he's hit rock bottom. Without some quick cash, he'll be out on the street - and from there, its a short step to dying on the streets. With no hope left, he makes a decision that he can't possibly realize will change the world forever... or destroy it. Soon to be posted on Royal Road
Rated: Adult 80 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 33985 Words: 95544 Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Masks, Work Uniform
Motivation for Change: Accident, For a Job, Undercover
Personality: Bad to Good, Fights Change, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Type of Change: Age Regression, Drug-Induced
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: Tales of Empire City
Published: 04/17/16
Updated: 12/06/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/26/16 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Friends

Well written. I hope there's more. Not sure if 'virus' really fits in with a shapeshifter though.

Author's Response: Hi Selvanius - and there will be more - the story is only starting. Kayden isn't just a shapeshifter, so I think Virus is still appropriate - but I can see why you might not. (See the review down a few entries to see my not-so clear reasons for calling her Virus)

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/01/16 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Virus

Oh boy! I really do hope that Kayden and Daryl get together. It would be such an amazing relationship.

Author's Response: Thanks for your opinion, Selvanius! Whether things work out between Kay and Dar in the future is kinda hard to tell right now - but they definitely seem to have some connection. Let's see how it develops.

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/06/16 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Rebirth

Heh. A lot of "Juicy" information there... Anyways great chapter! It seems like Justin Pierce has obtained some sort of ferrokinesis from using Neural Accelerator. I wonder what side he will choose or if he will stay neutral.

Author's Response: Actually he gained a power that lets him transform machines and machine parts into other machines and machine parts - he's the kind of guy who could touch a rusted out wreck of a car, and turn it into a armored humvee with a laser gun on top. That being said, he has to conserve some mass - so he can't turn a hammer into a battleship - but he doesn't have to conserve it exactly. Just ballpark it. I'm glad you liked the chapter Selvanius - and thanks for reading it from day 1.

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/14/16 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Hazard Man

I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I like how the relationship between Kay/Kayden and Daryll is developing. Now I'm wondering what direction Dr. Pierce will take as a Mad Scientist Super Villain.

Author's Response: Hi Selvanius! Thanks for reading! Dr. Pierce still wants to cure cancer - but he'll need a lab and money... I'm glad the relationship with Kay and Darryl is going well - I'm not intending to rush it, either. Kinda see where it goes naturally.

This is a story of hope and contact with all universe.A message of full love, building a NEW WORLD with gentle values, plenty of care and "finesse".A group from the inner love, not aliens, but the best of US, our hearted COSMOS, gives a voyage to a boy-girly and her friend, and so them are prepared to fight against untrue life.A tale in scents and good relationship; a step to a NEW ORDER, with peace and love that "pearls" all of us, all of universe.A sensitive adventure.And sensual with all "delicatesse", "girlishie", too...
Rated: Kid-Friendly 1 Reviews star Completed Story Reads: 872 Words: 834 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Clothing, Secretary, Sissy, Teenager
Featured Items: Lingerie, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline, Undies
Locale: Family Household, Labratory
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Dared into It, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing
Series: None
Published: 06/11/16
Updated: 06/11/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed star
Date: 06/14/16 Title: Chapter 1: Pearls, But With All... Cosmic Dimension...

Hmmmm... I want to give this a good review because it's partially legible and was written with good intent but the fact that it is partially legible and not completely readable disturbs me. The story confuses me. What are you talking about?

"...said, with a serious sense. She explained..." Okay whaaa..?! You can't have explanations like that. They just don't work.

"...siad..." You need to check your spelling, seriously.

Oh! Lastly, what's with all the underscores? This is a story telling website, make sure we understand the story.

PS: Not to be rude but how old are you? Because these grammar mistakes are elementary school level...

This a fictional Story about a pair of friends, one of whom is beta testing some cutting edge state of the art VR suits. After a night of merriment they decide to return to Derek's flat, to smoke and test out the gaming suits... What follows is Andy's story.
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 3315 Words: 351 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Sissy
Featured Items: Corsets, Lingerie, Undies
Motivation for Change: Forced, Tricked, Unknown, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual, Does Not Change
Type of Change: Body Suit
Series: None
Published: 07/17/16
Updated: 07/18/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed star
Date: 07/20/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: End of Night: Suiting up.

Uh, well I see some very SERIOUS problems with this story. Three major mistakes will be explained to you.

Sentence Structure- It doesn't fit, at all. Your sentences look like somebody took their ideas and stuck em' in a blender. NO! Take your time and reread your story before posting it. It helps a lot. I reread my stories at least twice.

Punctuation- Well at least you got some commas down. Are they REALLY sentences? Ask yourself that after every period you place, if there are any at all... Learn about different ways that you can arrange your sentence by taking advantage of your symbols.

Choice of Words- Use words that we understand. Slang and names of unknown places are horrifying to look at. Also, it looks like you took your latest spelling quiz and shoved them into your story. Keep the theme alive. You can't suddenly put a advanced word into a half baked story and expect everything to come put shiny.

There are many other mistakes but focus on these for now. The score that I have rated this story legitimately reflects the current quality of your work. If you want to get payback on me, then go make a story that I can respect. Don't ever feel deterred from writing by someone's review. Instead, use their information to make your story even better! :)

An intergalactic gun runner, on a six month mission, makes a serious mistake. A gritty sci-fi noir, with space debauchery, bisexual escapades, and weird alien sex.
Rated: Explicit 141 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 173621 Words: 111268 Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Featured Items: Bikinis, Boots, Corsets, High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Pantyhose, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline, Sex Toys, Undies, Work Uniform
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Accident, Female Domination
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Comedy, Distant Future, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Bondage/S&M, Death, Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 07/20/16
Updated: 05/27/17
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed
Date: 08/03/16 Title: Eleven

Hmmm... interesting title, very original!

A woman who lost her husband in the war brings him back to life, and together they set their goals higher than ever before.
Rated: Explicit 1 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 2177 Words: 2274 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: None
Series: Hrelsin Universe
Published: 07/31/16
Updated: 07/31/16
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/31/16 Title: Chapter 1: Miss Him

Trouble for Oliua and One-With-Magic in the future?! :O I hope to see the two powerhouses meet!

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear it! Maybe they will, maybe they won't, I certainly can't tell you. You'll just have to wait and see...

What happens when a fairy tries cursing a man who is already bearing a greater curse? Jackson is about to find out as a camping trip with his friends goes horribly wrong after an encounter with a dark fairy.
Rated: Deviant 101 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 94658 Words: 73152 Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Cultural/Nationality Change, Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Captive, Mythical Setting, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 09/17/16
Updated: 01/29/18
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/26/16 Title: Chapter 4: The Light of the Moon

I like how she transitions into a fairy slowl- FUCK it. She's already making love to bright blue flowers and creating offspring from mysterious bulbs.

Author's Response: Why go slow? Speed!

A late-night stroll seems to be the perfect time to encounter strange events. After getting pulled into an encounter with slavers, Alex is forced to find his own way back home, however difficult that may be.
Rated: Explicit 194 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 118708 Words: 228394 Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Mythical Setting
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 05/05/17
Updated: 11/27/19
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/25/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Snipers and Slavers

Misaania is like a drug... You experience it once, and you're hooked. Now, seeing a 100k word story made by Misaania... well that's like cramming your mouth full of pills and injecting 3 times the maximum dose of heroin.

Time to catch up! ;)

Author's Response: Welcome back, man. I was wondering what happened to you and I saw you talking in the discord for some time. What happened?

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/27/17 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Open and Shut

“Damn it, don’t say it like that- I wanted to avoid this,” he grumbles. “You better stay in contact- And you better come to Balder sometime- Don’t you ever try to leave without saying goodbye to me- And most of all- If you stay around and you can’t care for yourself- Find someone to care for you as much as you should.”

Dash x6!!!

Misaania, did something happen to your period key? It doesn't seem to be working. ;O

Author's Response: That was on purpose. It's supposed to represent sudden pauses as a result of insecure conversation. There are multiple ways of showing this, but I found the dash to be the most apt choice as opposed to ellipses or full stops. It's just a style decision rather than anything else. As I've grown as a writer I've been utilizing the dash in forceful stops, because it's clear and when it isn't attached to another word, people read it as a pause. It's a style decision that stuck, if there's any better method that you can think of, I am willing to hear it.

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/28/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Snipers and Slavers

I recognize the dash as sudden stops but in this context, it doesn't really convey the emotion that he's displaying. I think a combination of ellipses and dashes would show the thoughts that goes into his speech.

The way you wrote it, especially in the second part of his speech, the dashes feel unnecessary to me. But if you think it's right, then leave it as is. It's just what I feel since I'm an avid of user of ellipses rather than dashes.

Author's Response: I tend to use a lot of ellipses as well, but I tend to consider ellipses as part of a conversation that will continue without skipping a lot, while dashes skip a portion of a sentence due to the inability to keep up with one's mind. I'll take a look at it but I probably had a reason for doing it that way at the time.

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/29/17 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: First Date

Thanks for the good read. I'll continue reading the future chapters as well!

Author's Response: No problem. It's one of the more interesting characters I've ever written. All of them seem real, which for me, shows major growth in my writing.

Kim Possible's Father Dr James Possible is researching a new formula for genetic DNA he can now change men into women and the same way back but there is lot evil people out there in America and the Amazon jungle in the race known as Amazon women his daughter Kim Possible work for Global Justice Network with her friend Ron Stoppable what happen if Kim Possible became evil like her enemy Drakken and Shego
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 25208 Words: 109880 Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstar
Date: 07/23/17 Title: Chapter 5: Amazon Middleton and the New agents

I think I've said it before in another story, but the grammar is horrendous. I understand that it's due to a disability but there are parts of the story where I am completely lost. I suggest rereading a chapter and clearing parts of your story of unreadable text.

The story is okay but the execution is terrible.

Author's Response: thank you for your review will have a proof reader soon

When Danny is about to face the Dragon of Kung Lun for the powers of the Iron Fist, he is not ready to face a female dragon. What effects will the fusing of Danny's soul and the dragon of Kung Lun have on his body and his mind.
Rated: Adult 9 Reviews starhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 3503 Words: 385 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Selvanius Signed
Date: 07/21/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whoo! 6 sentence chapters! Aim for a thousand at least.

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