auroria
Member Since: 10/15/15 Membership status: Member
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Reviews by auroria
In the distant future the mythological races are returning. But they aren't exactly what we would have expected. How far would you go to help one of them if you didn't have any other choice?
Rated: Explicit 97 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 221062 Words: 55422 Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Reviewer: auroria Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/16/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Enjoy the twist about how the elves can't expand there race (compared to middle earth elves); I agree with another one of the other reviewer with that you should not be afraid to go into a little more detail..

Reviewer: auroria Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/06/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please Continue :)

Alexander started a normal life as a boy in sunny California but when he meets Amanda his life will change drastically
Rated: Kid-Friendly 6 Reviews starstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 15058 Words: 1364 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Daughter, Girlfriend, Model, Teenager
Featured Items: Bikinis, Breast Forms, Curlers, High Heels
Locale: Camp, Family Household, Formal Dance, Hairstyling/Salon, High School
Body Modification: Breast Implants, Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Type: Non-English
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Everyday Living, Sports
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 07/12/16
Updated: 09/23/16
Reviewer: auroria Signed star
Date: 08/15/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Agree with previous comment.. Grammer is must.

Also when I read through the first chapter it felt like you were trying to go to fast.. slow down the story a little. Give some background on characters; so that people can relate to them.

Justine and Maureen Cunningham were inseparable twins. When their mother surprised them with an adopted brother, the girls take the initiative to make him fit in.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 12 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 17641 Words: 29292 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Child, Daughter, Twin
Featured Items: Pantyhose, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline, Undies
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Forced
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Age Regression
Series: None
Published: 09/19/17
Updated: 08/08/19
Reviewer: auroria Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/12/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Welcome to Your New Home

Remember reading this so long ago... please continue =)

Sam is a quiet 16 year old high school guy. He's a nerd and a geek. A pretty typical guy. When his friends try to peer pressure him into playing the tank role for the new VR game they all want to play, he rebels, although he can't quite figure out why. Follow Sam as he dives into the world of Pellan Rise as the dainty little healer named Sylanna, where he discovers that the game has a lot more influence over the real world than everyone thought.
Rated: Adult 306 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 198749 Words: 34674 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: High School, Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Women
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Mythical Setting, Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Intense Violence
Series: Kammi-verse, The Andrare Legacy
Published: 02/06/19
Updated: 02/03/20
Reviewer: auroria Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/08/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: No Tankerino pls.

Love it.. keep it up

In a world of superheroes and villains, Gavin McArthur feels like more of a shell than a person even after he transfers to a school for kids who are likely to soon posses an Alter form, a form that grants the user super powers and a different appearance. But what do you to do when your Alter form represents an uncomfortable truth about yourself that you're not prepared to face?
Rated: Adult 130 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 100042 Words: 222078 Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Featured Items: Masks, School Uniform, Work Uniform
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Coming of Age
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 02/25/19
Updated: 06/22/20
Reviewer: auroria Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/29/19 Title: Chapter 12: Observer Effect

Enjoying the story.. really a cliffhanger *cry*.

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