BatJade
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Martin is a 21 year old student who is somewhat afraid of social situations. his friend finally manages to convince him to come to a party after the school year ends. The following morning his body is not quite how he remembered any longer.
Rated: Explicit 120 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 390515 Words: 105046 Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Corsets, High Heels, Latex or Rubber Clothing, Lingerie, Sex Toys
Locale: Camp, College, Family Household
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Women, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Captive, Everyday Living, Humiliation, Pregnancy
Type of Change: Drug-Induced
Warnings: Bodily Functions, Bondage/S&M, Non-Consentual Sex, Torture
Series: None
Published: 02/22/14
Updated: 12/08/16
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 10/29/15 Title: Chapter 27: Rehabilitation

I like the story! You are back!

My memory got weak sometimes, I reread in the chapter 26. Now I remembered how your main character got pregnant.

Author's Response: Glad you like it! And yea, sorry about that. That's one of the issues with an update after a long hiatus like this. I tried to make sure that people wouldn't be as lost at what's going on, but I can't really account for everything that way. No matter. At least it wasn't difficult for you to look it back up.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 05/24/16 Title: Chapter 28: Release

Nice to read about Abigail. She becomes healthy again. Where in Europe are you from? I am a Chinese and lives in Sweden!

Author's Response: Glad to hear you like it. And I'm from the Netherlands.

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Date: 12/10/16 Title: Chapter 29: Trust

WOW!

I love the chapter. How many chapters do you finish, may I ask?

Author's Response: Glad to see the chapter is being received so well! I'm really bad at making estimates, but I think something around 40 chapters total. I want to take my time finishing some plot points that are left before going for the conclusion of the story.

The adventure continues please read part 15 to understand my story. hope you enjoy.
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Princess
Rated: Adult 7 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 4104 Words: 6165 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Child
Featured Items: Diapers
Locale: Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Accident
Story Theme: Babyhood
Type of Change: Age Regression
Series: None
Published: 03/17/14
Updated: 03/18/14
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/15/15 Title: Chapter 1: Part 16

Keep to write on, I love the story! The new title!

A man's fantasy is fulfilled, but it's not quite how he imagined it.
Rated: Explicit 41 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 87013 Words: 13299 Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Child
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Fights Change
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 04/03/14
Updated: 06/16/14
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/12/15 Title: Chapter 12: A Brand New Day

Interested story! I know that you are busy, but I wonder, will you keep to write on?

What would you do if you found yourself in one of your favorite stories, but the hero is gone? That's not the only surprise in store.
Rated: Deviant 7 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 15706 Words: 11495 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07/17/15 Title: Chapter 1: My Mistake

When will you write the next chapter? I never read Eragon, but I began to read a bit. And I have seen the film.

Mark Raynor is nearing the end of his career as an airship gunner. But when his ship receives a mission to look for an ancient device, and actually find it, his outlook on life changes completly
Rated: Explicit 53 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 43270 Words: 27560 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Boots
Locale: Labratory
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: From Submissive to Dominant, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Historical Time Period
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 08/22/14
Updated: 02/03/15
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/19/15 Title: Chapter 13: New Ship

I like it. But I am not a seaman, and I noticed when I read, so you wrote about the ship. There were just common words, but not nautical terms. Room=Deck, Wall=Bulkhead and so on.

I am not hard, and I want to say it to you.

Author's Response: I'll try to keep that in mind for future chapters. I'm not a sailor either, so I often don't think about things like Wall vs Bulkhead. Thank you for the suggestion!

You have probably heard about me. Number one stripper. Thet is the title that I have earned, or actually it was cursed on me. You see, I wasn't always a stripper or even a girl, I was a 17 years old boy. But why should I complain, look at the body I have and all the money I earn. Well, I will happily tell you more, if you want to hear it.
Rated: Explicit 8 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 74184 Words: 9478 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstar
Date: 06/17/15 Title: Chapter 6: Testing

Hej!

Jag gillar din story, fast jag ogillar fluga-storyn. Din engelska är okej. Men du borde läsa noggrant innan du skulle skicka in.

A mystery, a man named The Dealer, who takes the dead and places them in new worlds. Their names... Aces. People who will go on to change history, or fail trying. This is Shore's story, a Dragon Knight and The Dealer's newest Ace.
Rated: Explicit 254 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 100216 Words: 208366 Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Unknown, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 02/14/15
Updated: 02/17/16
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 07/20/15 Title: Chapter 12: Three of Spades: Gold and Black

Yes, you only wrote about the chapter, and I suspected that Shore never has been in the Demon Gate. If I missed anything, so I could read too fast.

The playing cards count up to 52 or 53 (a joker), will you finish the 52nd or 53th chapter?

WOW! I always liked the Phantom, El Zorro (The Fox in Spanish) and most Batman. Shore is my favorite.

Are you an Asian? You wrote the story of Sheeni. Yes, I am a Chinese and live in Europe.

Author's Response: Fair enough. I'm not angry about it, I was just pointing something out, just so you know, the main bad guy is to the North, in the Wings of Frost. So there we go.

Remember the part at the beginning where the Dealer said you could shuffle in more decks? I'm not putting a limit on the amount of chapters I have, so either it will end before, however if you take Betrayer as an example... After.

You mean the vigilantes? I think my comparisons would be fairly similar to that of the Punisher.

And I'm not Asian as most native Japanese speakers would tell me, death is actually just 'ni'. So I messed that up, but it's done now, so there's no point going back to change a name that's already had its place in peoples' minds.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 12/09/15 Title: Chapter 28: Seven of Hearts: Questioning the Heart

I reread, but I noticed, Like the chapter said, there are a few pages dedicated to the or many laws.

Author's Response: Yeah. They should be coming up a lot more commonly now.

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Date: 12/09/15 Title: Chapter 28: Seven of Hearts: Questioning the Heart

U miss "I proud of you" and the quotation mark in the end, "I hope you don’t mind, but I told Freeda and Ula that you were their Mother. It’s just easier that way. You can blame me for not asking permission.

But you wrote that Hyla was eighteen years. She is a major.

Author's Response: I fixed the stuff you informed me about, thanks.

And, when I was writing Hyla I deliberately made it so she was 12 when her parents were killed, because that seems like the age where a child might be able to flee with an infant. So when she met with Shore, she was 16. When 3 years past she was 19 going on 20. After that she was nearing 21.

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Date: 08/13/15 Title: Chapter 16: Four of Spades: Go Fish

I also like the chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks. It's one of the few times I've finished a chapter and haven't thought something was off.

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Date: 10/09/15 Title: Chapter 20: Five of Spades: Two of the Same

You write too fast!

I like it when Shore shares her body! How?

Author's Response: They are one and the same. They share minds and thoughts. The psyche and Magtera has a single key, a note that is unique to each user, for example a color. That is why psyches always send back the same thought and can remerge with the original body. When a God Stone is merged into the psyche, the magic color doesn't change. So the two Shore's are the same person.

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Date: 11/03/15 Title: Chapter 23: Six of Hearts: Repairing a Broken Heart

So the Dealer has been the Dragon Knight? Interestingly!

Author's Response: The Dealer has never been a Dragon Knight. I'll go into greater detail as I near the end of the story. I'll just say that I've mentioned him before in one of my stories. Whether it's directly or indirectly.

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Date: 12/08/15 Title: Chapter 27: Seven of Diamonds: The Will of an Ace

I like the chapter!

Author's Response: Good. I'm glad.

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Date: 12/09/15 Title: Chapter 29: Seven of Spades: The Forth Suit (Conclusion of book one)

I like the book title Freedom, when will you finish The Dealer?

Author's Response: Technically I did finish it. Book 1 is called 'The Dealer'. Book 2 is called 'Freedom'.

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Date: 10/08/15 Title: Chapter 19: Five of Hearts: A New Queen

WOW! I like it.

One question. Why does Shore let the "evil" dragons live?

Author's Response: 'Evil'? You mean Sable or the other Aces. Because either it's because she doesn't want to or isn't strong enough to.

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Date: 09/06/15 Title: Chapter 17: Five of Clubs: Deckmaster

Oh, I like this chapter, not when Shore has to be a pupil to Salazar.

Author's Response: You don't like the student/master relationship?

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Date: 07/20/15 Title: Chapter 12: Three of Spades: Gold and Black

Let me guess... In the Demon Gate. Every villain has the hostage, then every hero saves the hostage. If I am wrong, so I am interested in how powerful Shore is.

One question. Your main characters seem to be the antiheroes because I like the antiheroes. Why do you choose to write about them?

Author's Response: Huh? The only time I spoke about the Demon Gates was in the most recent chapter. It's where Imrish Darkwing, Shore's Father used to live and where Shore's actual family probably is, her grandparents are suspected to be there if they are still alive. The Demon Gates is just a name for the place close to the volcano, it was named as such because it was near the volcano, not because of demons etc.

Favus was anti-hero, but a lot of my characters are heroes in a more... Loose sense, anti-heroes are defined by being against heroes, my characters are more like vigilantes, they kill for the right reasons and harm for them too. Shore is very much, for herself only, though she does have a conscience, that's why she saved the slaves. So maybe the better word is vigilante, I make a lot of characters who fight for the right reasons and with a lot of power, I like writing on large scale, so there's the particular way I write.

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Date: 09/07/15 Title: Chapter 1: Ace of clubs: Rigging the deck

Yes, but it depends on what the teacher is for Shore. Hard or calm? If it still is secret, tell not.

Author's Response: I see. I'll figure it out with time.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 07/21/15 Title: Chapter 12: Three of Spades: Gold and Black

I reread from the start. Hmm... Shore's mother is anywhere in the south of Dragonspine Mountain!

Author's Response: Maybe. Thanks for taking another shot at it, you may find that I said it for a reason, I will see if I can get another few chapters out by the conclusion of this week.

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Date: 07/22/15 Title: Chapter 13: Four of Clubs: A Joker in the Deck

I enjoy the chapter.

Author's Response: Great, then I'll keep on the task.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 07/26/15 Title: Chapter 13: Four of Clubs: A Joker in the Deck

Just one question, where on the Earth did James, Shore's past life oome from? USA, UK, Australia, New Zealand or Canada?

Author's Response: Specifics? Hm, I think I'll go with Australia, I've lived there, and while it quite safe, you can still get a gun, the gun used to kill him, however is not a real gun. It would have been an altered toy made to carry real round and fire, which can be done, or even created with a 3d printer, which is quite a scary thought. (Don't try this at home, those guns can explode and will likely kill you.)

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Date: 08/01/15 Title: Chapter 14: Four of Diamonds: A Mountain and a Bridge

I just wonder... When will you write about the erotic scene?

Author's Response: Once ten years have passed I think. Her dragon form is only mature once it has reached the tenth year, meanwhile the main love interests aren't even that far ahead of her in age, but I do want to develop the characters first anyway.

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Date: 08/02/15 Title: Chapter 15: Four of Hearts: Violet Jack

I notice that you are interested in both Western and Eastern dragons. Why are you into them? You know that the Western dragon is evil while the Eastern dragon is kind sometimes, huh?

Author's Response: I know that the Eastern dragon tends to be kind, but I also know that Wraiths, at least the dragon style wraiths I've been explaining are monstrous and consume as much as they can (At least they are the ones who have the Eastern dragon designs), the western dragons exist as the most common Dragon Knights, while I plan to have Wyverns, (back legs and the claws located halfway up the wings) appear later.

Why am I into them? I have been reading a lot about dragons and riders, probably Christopher Paolini's fault that I got interested in the dragon's point of view. They always have power, but we're never given a look at exactly how powerful they are, which is why I'm here, I always work on powers and give my characters amazing strength, so I thought I wanted to delve into them, but most of all, dragons are in a lot of myths, they are intelligent and capable and have their own legends, it gives me so much to play with. The fact that dragon society in writing sorely lacks means that, for a writer, it's a gold mine waiting to be mined.

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Date: 09/18/15 Title: Chapter 18: Five of Diamonds: Flipped Face Up

The "Finding my folks"-programme sounded like this! I began to cry.

Author's Response: Never watched it. Is it a non-fictional programme or completely fictional?

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 09/19/15 Title: Chapter 18: Five of Diamonds: Flipped Face Up

Non-ficitional. Sorry, it was my mistake of the title. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Find_My_Family

Even in Sweden we had the programme.

Author's Response: Oh, yeah. I've seen it before. I used to watch it when I was a little younger.

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Date: 10/30/15 Title: Chapter 21: Six of Clubs: All In

I like it!

Author's Response: The next chapter should be fun too. At least that's the plan.

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Date: 11/01/15 Title: Chapter 22: Six of Diamonds: Torn Cards

WOW! I like the chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you.

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Date: 11/04/15 Title: Chapter 24: Six of Spades: The King and His Thing

I like it. You write "She’s not drinking a..." what?

Author's Response: Fixed. Thanks for pointing it out. I must've deleted the line because there was a continuity error after I altered the chapter earlier today.

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Date: 11/07/15 Title: Chapter 25: Seven of Clubs: Jack Shit

I like the story. As you know, I have a disability. A part of the people with learning disability have a high intelligence.

You miss "There’re are".

Author's Response: Yeah. Some of those with Aspergers have high intelligence in areas. But at least for autism, this is very rare. Those with physical disabilities have normal minds, those with mental disabilities have something wrong. With autism the problem can vary and I'm still on the fence with how far I should go with Ula.

And fixed. Thanks.

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Date: 11/07/15 Title: Chapter 26: Side Deck 1: Asthenia: Ace of Clubs: The King’s Gambit

I like it!

Author's Response: Good :)

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Date: 12/10/15 Title: Chapter 29: Seven of Spades: The Forth Suit (Conclusion of book one)

Oh, I missed what you wrote. I could read too fast sometimes.

Author's Response: Understandable. It happens a lot with reading.

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Date: 01/04/16 Title: Chapter 30: Freedom: First Link: A Queen to a Commoner

I like it! How does Shore plan to kill Hundredbreath? Is he immortal?

Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see :3

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Date: 02/17/16 Title: Chapter 31: Freedom: Second Link: Ordering a New Golden Age

It is too dangerous :p But how many things does Shore need to fix?

Author's Response: Considering everything has changed since the middle ages, pretty much everything.

I had been a slave to the Qharr nearly my entire life, but one fateful day everything changed. I joined up with a group of rebels, and through a twist of fate, no one could have ever foreseen, I became the woman I am today...
Rated: Adult 46 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 76059 Words: 232807 Chapters: 72 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Accident, Forced
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: The Earth Source Universe
Published: 04/16/15
Updated: 02/24/16
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Date: 07/26/15 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter Thirteen

Mara lives?

Amy's senior year and her time has come round at last! She's learned a lot about herself and what it takes to be a girl in desperate times. Now she's going to put it all to use, fight all comers and make her mark or die trying! (The final novel in the "The Ridiculous Destiny of Amy Komori" series)
Rated: Adult 14 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 7144 Words: 64960 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend, Teenager
Featured Items: Bikinis
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Curse
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Women
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Age Regression, Racial, Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Warnings: Politically Incorrect
Series: The Ridiculous Destiny of Amy Komori
Published: 05/30/15
Updated: 10/20/16
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Date: 06/07/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Amy Explodes

WOW!

I like it!
Two questions. Why just a final story? Won't you keep to write the "adult Amy-story"?

Author's Response: Thank you so much! A big WOW! is always appreciated! Anyway, first, there are more chapters coming to this one so hang on! And second, when I first posted these a while back I did go on and write some stories about Amy at her university. I meant to stop the summer after Amy graduates high school with a big climax but the characters kept talking to me in my mind. But at the same time, as much as I enjoy writing these I think the concept is stretched almost as far as it will go without just turning into self-indulgence. Not that this is a bad thing, really, but I also think there's been some audience erosion and diminishing returns. If I get really inspired I might extend things again, but at the risk of wearing out my welcome I think the aftermath of graduation is the best stopping point. She'll have learned fully how to be a girl and ready to grow further into womanhood and maybe that's best left to everyone's imaginations.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 06/07/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Amy Explodes

I forget to tell about my background, so I am a Chinese who lives in Europe.

Author's Response: Yay! Well, I hope everything is going well for you!

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Date: 02/20/16 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: As Loud as Hell

I miss you, Amy. How many chapters do you need to finish, may I ask?

Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry for the late, late, LATE reply. I think about 5 or 6 more. I'm back to working on the next one starting... today!

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 05/27/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Amy Explodes

No worries! I have patience, but sometimes I can't wait. :)

Author's Response: Haha! I hope your patience is being rewarded!

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Date: 08/24/16 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Amy's Christmas Carol

Hey! It is Jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl.

Yes, it is too tough!

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Date: 10/06/16 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Electric Prom Mayhem!

One of the chapters is my favorite. I like the environmental background.

Arigatou! I watch anime.

Author's Response: Thank you! It took forever to write!

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Date: 10/20/16 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: This Is the List of the Things Amy Loves

Oh, shit!

Nice! I like the chapter! Next 3-4 chapters are last?

Author's Response: Well, the bad news is it's going to be more like 2 or 3 chapters. Definitely two narrated by Amy, maybe one more after that. I still want to write something from Sarah's POV and I might make that the coda.

A group of four friends lives change when they find a set of magical cards and use them to become pro gamers
Rated: Adult 61 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 62508 Words: 56015 Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Girlfriend, Model
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie
Locale: College, Road Trip
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 06/05/15
Updated: 08/05/16
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Date: 06/28/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Majestic Wars

WOW! The three other girls have to be attracted to the boys.

Author's Response: Maybe :)

An aging overweight man who plays too much online gaming receives a gift from Freya, the
goddess of love, lust, beauty, sorcery, fertility, gold, war and death.
Rated: Adult 102 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 110120 Words: 136354 Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Clothing, Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Lingerie, Long Nails, Pantyhose, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline, Undies
Locale: Camp, College, Family Household
Motivation for Change: Revenge, Tricked, Willing or Voluntary
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 06/29/15
Updated: 02/05/16
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Date: 07/25/15 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: How Small the World Is

I wanted to say about Thor and Loki, not bad. In the Marvel they are the brothers, but in the Norse mythology Loki is actually Thor's niece.

Author's Response: I only found 1 reference to the idea of Loki being female from Wikipedia: Loki is the father of Hel, the wolf Fenrir, and the world serpent Jörmungandr. By his wife Sigyn, Loki is the father of Narfi and/or Nari. By the stallion Svaðilfari, Loki is the mother—giving birth in the form of a mare—to the eight-legged horse Sleipnir. In addition, Loki is referred to as the father of Váli in the Prose Edda. Thanks for the insights.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 07/25/15 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: How Small the World Is

Yes, I am interested in mythologies, languages and thunder. I live in Scandinavia and I am an Asian. If you ask about my adoption, so I am not adopted. Are you interested in mythology?

Trying to earn a grant for the school, Professor Victor Redding tested a formula of his own making on himself. Are the results a success or failure? Read to find out.
Rated: Explicit 10 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 27885 Words: 9604 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Featured Items: Bikinis, Breast Forms, High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Pantyhose, Undies
Locale: College, Labratory, Office
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement
Motivation for Change: Accident, For a Job
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Drug-Induced
Series: None
Published: 07/09/15
Updated: 10/27/15
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 08/11/15 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Substitute

I like the "villainous" students. Good writing!

Author's Response: So far there is only one student who's a villain. Although thanks! :) That means a lot

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Date: 07/10/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: For The College

It sounded like X-Change, an Eroge, or a Japanese adult dating game. Oh, I wait for the next chapter. One question, why did you choose the "Female to Male" and "Extreme Penis Enlargement"? If you made a mistake, so you can change it.

Author's Response: My mistake for those I have no idea why I clicked them. I never played X-Change but I've heard about it. What do you think of the characters?

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 07/11/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: For The College

I like them, but I like Valerie most. Wait... You also wrote about the books-scene, so the scene resembles Detective Conan. Write more.

Author's Response: I never watched that either lol I will write more when I free time. Right now have a lot of stuff going on :) Really? Valerie? May I ask why?

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 07/13/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: For The College

Valerie seemed to get smarter than her male Victor. But it is a bit too early to say about her.

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Date: 09/19/15 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: A Night as Her

I love it! Hm, but skip to write "Victor".

Author's Response: Glad you like it. May I ask what you mean? :)

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 09/19/15 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: A Night as Her

I meant that you wrote "Victor", not "Valerie" as a main character, but "he" also becomes "she". It is up to you. I just give the tips to you.

Author's Response: That is because he is still Victor mentally.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 09/22/15 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: A Night as Her

Which side is Valerie on? You have "Bad to Good" or "Good to Bad"?

Author's Response: I am meaning to change that. I originally was going to have her go from bad to good but I think I just want to make her good

ask any mother how she felt when she held her first small child in her arms for the first time.
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 61213 Words: 40334 Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Child, Daughter, Teenager
Featured Items: Bikinis
Locale: Family Household
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement, Extreme Surgical Alteration, Vaginal Alteration
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Bad to Good
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Age Regression, Hormonal
Series: None
Published: 07/14/15
Updated: 01/03/16
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07/18/15 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Breaking the news to Dad, he has to go to school

It is interestedly and sweetly to read about the "mothership" to the dad. Write more about the "daughter".

Many of my wants were fulfilled by a strange chalice found within the Maze, but many more problems arise due to the power it grants and the world it opens.
Rated: Explicit 286 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 204187 Words: 161202 Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Forced
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Torture
Series: None
Published: 08/22/15
Updated: 09/18/19
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/05/15 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Cappucino

Good story! But I don't understand what Verona's weapon looks like. Viking Axe or common axe? I sound like a weapon expert, but she would possibly want to turn the Viking Axe into the European Longsword, the Katana, Japanese Sword, or the Jian, Chinese Sword?

Author's Response: I used the name 'Viking axe' to explain the beard. A beard is where the weapon is drawn out along the haft to provide protection for the fingers. A common axe doesn't have it. Neither do common axes or viking axes compare to an executioner axe which has a head which is maybe about twenty-eight inches in length with a haft which is as big as a person. The head is large and the metal is drawn out to a point at the back with a beard drawn out at the front. There is no comparison between the weapons you mentioned. http://www.heavenlyswords.com/images/C/hk508xx.jpg Similar to that. Perhaps even larger.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/03/15 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Information Overload

Fun to see "fake" teeth.

Is Bake's dad dead?

Author's Response: No, Blake's Dad isn't dead. He just lives, or lived with his Mother.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/22/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Verona's Chalice

WOW! From the begin, I thought that the story was a bit boring, but I could stop to read. Then I just wanted to keep on because you wrote all good stories.

Author's Response: It starts slow. My plan is to get hunters involved at some point.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/27/15 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Redefining Logic

WOW! I like it. When will Verona wear the dress? I wonder.

Author's Response: She wore it the day before when she talked to Lord Summer originally. She might wear more another time, I haven't thought that far ahead yet.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/25/15 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Thornton Academy

Hm, will the Vampires also drink the Human blood in the party? But if Verona doesn't want?

Author's Response: It's there for just that. Half Vampires will partake in the blood available. Verona might, or might not. It depends.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/18/15 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Bloody History

I have not comments. Three big letters - WOW!

Author's Response: Yeah. Saturday and a half day next.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/23/15 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Devil By My Side

Eh, come on! I like the cliffhangers! :p

Author's Response: Do you? I'm a little on the iffy side with cliffhangers. They leave me hanging too.

In the far reaches of space, a mysterious alien race captures a crew of human smugglers. One man is chosen to be the subject of a dramatic transformation, a process they call Uplifting, but will he embrace their gift or run from it?
Rated: Explicit 86 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 143677 Words: 46150 Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/20/15 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - ...They've Come To Take Me Home

Oh, my God! :) I still wait...

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/17/15 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Keep My Things...

WOW! The leader died at end! Next boss can become worse.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/10/15 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Bring It On Home To Me

WOW! Can the protagonist take the power over the Third prince? If not, she still can fight?

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 11/14/15 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Nobody But Me

The protagonist can take the power over the pirates too? Hmm?

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/27/15 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - A Promise With A Catch

WOW! I like it! She is the powerful!

While Jonathon just wants to squeeze every bit of excitement out of a day with his prom date, he may have taken it too far.
Rated: Explicit 11 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 170149 Words: 42883 Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Boyfriend, Daughter, Girlfriend, Son, Teenager
Featured Items: Curlers, High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Pantyhose, Undies
Locale: Family Household, Formal Dance, High School, Labratory
Motivation for Change: Accident
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change, Mechanical Device
Warnings: Bodily Functions
Series: None
Published: 09/09/15
Updated: 01/06/17
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/22/15 Title: Prom Didn't Go As Planned

It sounded good, and your main characters were sweet. But I missed the environmental background in your story.

It's God's Game Show. If you win, you get a wish. Anything you want, from an amazing burrito to eternal life. How hard could it be?
Rated: Explicit 65 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 44299 Words: 39045 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Non-Consentual Sex, Torture
Series: None
Published: 09/22/15
Updated: 03/25/16
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/24/15 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Survivor

Nice... Becoming attracted to men is good, but one question, have you tested to writing about the ftm-story?

Author's Response: Not so much. The way I am right now I'm not sure it would be possible for me. I have God Killer and Eclipse. God Killer has a side character. Eclipse has a main character, but that part comes super late.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/04/15 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Attracting Attention

WOW! Why not the international team?

Author's Response: They'll be revealed sooner or later.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 09/23/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Congratulations, Your Death is Highly Probable!

I reread, it sounded like a mixed of Gladiator and Avatar. Hm?

Author's Response: Not everything will happen on this planet. There's a lot more that will happen.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/22/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Congratulations, Your Death is Highly Probable!

Three letters again... WOW! It is too early to comment, so I don't know. Is the male Jay asexual? It seems so.

Author's Response: Actually it's more the messing of the Universe Guardians. They said that they granted to one wish already. That means that Jay is exactly as he was if he was female. After that was done they gave the now female Jay the powers and wings. They are Gods, so calling their abilities miracles wouldn't be wrong, but it's not something that I can even begin to think of explaining.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 09/22/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Congratulations, Your Death is Highly Probable!

jwilliams, even Chinese, Mayan and Indian Gods, yes, are known to toy with mortal.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/12/15 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Homecoming

I like the chapter. It is mixed of the situation. Sometimes the fathers also try to wish that the girl is a son. I have 3 bro, not sis.

Author's Response: Yeah. The Dad here is more of a mediator, he doesn't much care. The Mother however desperately wanted a daughter. Someone she could bond with, when it didn't happen she couldn't specifically say it, but the Universe Guardians caught up on it.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 10/17/15 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Knuckle Sandwich

I like it! Let me guess. Does Carter plan to --- --- --- ---? Forget it!

Author's Response: Carter plans something. Though there's a bit of a twist I have planned.

Kazuki is an avid watcher of anime; he knows all there is to it! He's got every cliché and 'plot twist' memorized. Good thing too! He and his group of friends are one day suddenly transformed each into a stereotypical part of a harem! The only hope of returning back to normal is finding the culprit behind this madness by surviving through the world of anime clichés. Only by utilizing all of his knowledge can Kazuki save himself and his friends!
Rated: Adult 11 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 16207 Words: 5630 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Teenager, Twin
Featured Items: Boots, Maid Uniform, Pantyhose, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline, School Uniform, Undies
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Forced, Unknown
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Comedy, Genie/Wishes, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 09/24/15
Updated: 09/30/15
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/26/15 Title: Chapter 2: Red and Purple Go Great Together!

Arnold Schwarzenegger, it spells, or the story sounds good!

Author's Response: Whoops, looks like I must have missed that mistake! Thanks for that, and liking my story!

An unstable and divided world is thrown into the abyss by those who welcome the unthinkable. A battered but resurgant humanity struggles to build a better future and one woman will fight those who seek to repeat the mistakes of the past.
Rated: Deviant 14 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 4842 Words: 25951 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Locale: Labratory
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Fights Change, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Distant Future, Horror, Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Non-Consentual Sex, Politically Incorrect, Torture
Series: None
Published: 09/27/15
Updated: 10/21/15
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 10/04/15 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Awakening

Hmm? The environmental background seems to be unseen, or it is good.

Author's Response: Thanks a ton, looking back, I can see that I definitely skimped on the environmental details. gonna write that down in my notes and clean it/not try to make the same mistake again.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/09/15 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: The Star And Stripes Forever

I like the story!

Author's Response: Thank you, I hope the environmental detail was better this time around.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/17/15 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: The River Less Traveled

Oh..! I like it!

Author's Response: Thanks, sorry if that chapter was a bit on the long the boring side. Next one will be much more interesting.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/21/15 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: A Born Killer

WOW! I like the chapter. What is Max for something? No, I don't want to know. :p

Author's Response: We'll see when I get back! Thanks for the review.

As Valentine's Day nears, Nathan learns from a fortune cookie that he will soon “find the love of his life.” Very shortly, he starts to believe that his possessions are being replaced--becoming more effeminate. And for that matter, so might he. What is the cause behind this transformation, and why does he feel so comfortable with most of these changes? For that matter, why does he have a hard time remembering exactly what he was worried about?
Rated: Adult 33 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 130382 Words: 24835 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Romance
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 10/06/15
Updated: 06/30/17
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/20/15 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Comfortable as an Old Shoe

I am an Asian-European. Yes, I am a Chinese, ask not how. My Chinese is bad, but I try to understand my mother tongue. I know the Chinese girls and my mother and other. The Asian girls are more moped than "white girls". I like the story.

Look at the video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qW1a3UOAIaw

Reginald Barclay discovers that space is not the final frontier.
Rated: Adult 15 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 19740 Words: 21983 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Personality: From Submissive to Dominant
Story Theme: Distant Future
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 10/12/15
Updated: 08/19/16
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/19/15 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: More than Friends?

I notice that you don't know about the nautical term. But in the Nautical and Aviation Terms, they are very different from the common language. The nautical term "room" is "deck". http://see-the-sea.org/nautical/naut-body.htm and http://www.aviation-terms.com/index2.php or google after the better site if you want. I like the story.

Author's Response: Deck refers to a floor or level, not an individual room. Hence the use of room(s) or quarters. But thanks for the kind words, and I will look at those sites. Mopar

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/26/15 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Truth

I like it better.

Author's Response: Thank you! Mopar

The story of how a teenage boy and some others adapt to a new life.
Rated: Explicit 1 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 17615 Words: 2389 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Locale: Camp, Girl's School
Motivation for Change: Accident
Story Theme: Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Hormonal, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 10/29/15
Updated: 11/14/15
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 11/01/15 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - What is Going On?

Write not "Work in Progress".

It's the end of the world as we know it, and I feel kawaii.
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 5416 Words: 2993 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Personality: Cultural/Nationality Change, Loses Identity
Type of Change: Age Regression, Racial
Series: None
Published: 11/16/15
Updated: 11/16/15
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 11/16/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It is hard to read the environmental description.

Tyler Hillman flees from Earth after an information brokering deal goes sour. His contact at Ringed Amusements Company has promised him a place to hide, a disguise, and a new job.
Rated: Explicit 110 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 303789 Words: 294163 Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Reviewer: BatJade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/12/16 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

WOW! I love the chapter.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/30/16 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I am stucken, but I never have read this story. WOW!

Aiden Sommers was just your average, boring man, until he died. Upon learning that the afterlife is not exactly what it seems, Aiden must become a demon and an agent of Lust. What he doesn't know is this also entails him becoming a succubus.
Rated: Explicit 76 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 218275 Words: 49461 Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: For a Job
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Mind Control, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 12/04/15
Updated: 07/06/17
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/15/15 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Interested story!

One question, I played Corruption of Champions and Trials in Tainted Space. Are they the same to this story, aren't?

Author's Response: Thank you, though I'm not sure what you're asking. They're completely different settings.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 12/16/15 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

I mean that the games conflict to this story.

Author's Response: They're completely unrelated.

Caught on the brink of despair, Grey gets an offer: One wish and power in exchange for three favors. He knows a Magical's life is usually short and brutal, but there's nothing he wants more than his father and sister to be brought back. He never wondered if his Magical form would be the right gender.
Rated: Explicit 15 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 7746 Words: 3268 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: Corsets, High Heels, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline
Motivation for Change: Unknown, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Horror, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 12/09/15
Updated: 12/16/15
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/09/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it! And I agree with you about the Voice!

Author's Response: It's annoying...but necessary. I will endure the bold tags, for...

*Looks to the stars*

...it is my destiny!

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/17/15 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hmm... It is good.

Author's Response: Glad you like it!

Lauren, a highschool teacher is turned into her 16 year old seld by her student, Henry now in his teacher's former body, and now named Haley.

Also a side story about a body swapper is going on as well.
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews starstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 9056 Words: 678 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 01/19/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - the turning of the screw

I agree with Selvanious, but 500-700 words are okay. If you aren't a real teacher, can't you write slower?

James Bond is on a mission, a deadly new technology has been weaponised by the evil SPECTRE organisation, and it's his job to stop it. But is he the hero? Or the target?
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 5726 Words: 7824 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/22/16 Title: Chapter 1: A Dame To Die For

I like the spy fiction story. WOW!

A man who cross dresses for his friend is going to get a surprise when he puts on a spider necklace.
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 5503 Words: 1680 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Curse
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Horror
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 02/08/16
Updated: 02/08/16
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 02/08/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I agree with Selvanius.

If you were a brilliant female scientist who had been grievously mistreated by a man, You'd probably want to teach him a lesson as revenge. But what if the man who wronged you was now dead? You take out your bitterness on a substitute (or substitutes).
Rated: Explicit 45 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 68748 Words: 15768 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, Undies
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Revenge
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Humiliation, Romance
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 02/15/16
Updated: 03/23/16
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/15/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, my, my! I like it!

Author's Response: Glad you do.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03/07/16 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Nice chapter! I agree with Roadbandit. A question, where in the world are your main characters from?

Author's Response: They are from Milwaukee, but are now in Florida.

Poor Daniel. Woke up to find his world turned sideways as his manhood is stripped from him without a trace or any sign of how it happened. Will he be able to find the source of his new X chromosome and revert it or live life as a newfound woman?
Rated: Adult 52 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 86885 Words: 38805 Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Series: None
Published: 03/02/16
Updated: 02/16/17
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/25/16 Title: Chapter 6: Over the Hump

I like the cliffhangers!

WOW! I like the story.

Asher wakes up in a girl's room without any recollection of how he got there. Things start to get strange after he realizes that he's locked in.
Rated: Explicit 9 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 14298 Words: 4949 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Featured Items: High Heels, Sex Toys, Undies
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Captive
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Bodily Functions
Series: None
Published: 03/21/16
Updated: 03/21/16
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03/21/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

From the beginning, I just thought: "WTF?" Nice bluff!

Greg and Alex have been friends, since, well, forever. They decide to have a final celebration before both going off to college, filled with video-games and macaroni and cheese. However, on the first night, something goes terribly wrong. Can Alex reverse his change before Greg's parents get back, or can he find a way to fit in as a woman?
Rated: Explicit 12 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 90504 Words: 9020 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Hormonal
Warnings: Bodily Functions
Series: None
Published: 03/24/16
Updated: 07/08/16
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 03/25/16 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Problem Solved?

Hmm, a question. I don't know if it is your fantasy, but how did the Norse god and the Greek god end in your story?

Author's Response: I don't know, to be honest. This might be the last you see of them. I just wanted to introduce some dramatic irony in the story, with the characters thinking that they'll turn backed when they won't be, and I didn't know how to do this without some supernatural elements. I mixed the pantheons just for fun.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/26/16 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Problem Solved?

I also wrote about mixed mythologies from the world, but it is another language, yes, a few English babbles. But I stopped to write, ask not why. Write more about the supernatural things!

A magical heirloom causes havoc in the household. Junior, Helen and Arty have discovered the secrets of an old family heirloom. Have you ever dreamed of becoming someone else, thought about being the opposite sex or just wanted to take a vacation from being you? Junior, Helen and Arty learn the hard way that it's not all it's cracked up to be. 4 Chapters. COMPLETE.
Rated: Deviant 15 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 34939 Words: 32720 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/27/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Pendant

WOW! I like it!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/31/16 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Learning the Rules

Nice, the girl in the dad's or brother's body that is powerful doesn't want to change back. But she can job?

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/05/16 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Games We Play

I like the chapter.

Kayden Ballard lives in Empire city, Paragon's dark twin - its Gotham to Paragon's Metropolis, and he's hit rock bottom. Without some quick cash, he'll be out on the street - and from there, its a short step to dying on the streets. With no hope left, he makes a decision that he can't possibly realize will change the world forever... or destroy it. Soon to be posted on Royal Road
Rated: Adult 83 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 35672 Words: 95544 Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Masks, Work Uniform
Motivation for Change: Accident, For a Job, Undercover
Personality: Bad to Good, Fights Change, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Type of Change: Age Regression, Drug-Induced
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: Tales of Empire City
Published: 04/17/16
Updated: 12/06/16
Reviewer: BatJade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/04/16 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - The Battle

I love the chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks BatJade. I'm busy working on the next one right now. Hopefully I'll have another one by tomorrow. After all, the Halloween party is coming up!

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04/18/16 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Donor

I like the dark city fiction story.

Author's Response: Thanks Jacob... I hope you enjoy it! I loved Dark City - that movie was awesome. Another cool superhero film is Chronicle, where three students find an alien rock that gives them telekinesis. Its pretty cool. I hope you keep reading!

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 04/21/16 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Infected

Nice and interesting chapter! But I am sorry, meh, you can explain more...

Author's Response: I am confused Jacob... Thank you for your opinion on the chapter - but what do you mean sorry, meh? Is it your way of saying "Please give more information" or is it kind of saying the chapter was good... but not too good? IF there was a problem, could you maybe tell me what turned you off? Thanks. If its just about how the title works into the story, I'd be happy to tell you. I was just concerned people might think I was giving away spoilers.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/25/16 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Mutation

The chapter is good...

And I deleted the comment about your spoiler.

Author's Response: What comment? Did I have a Spoiler?

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/27/16 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Friends

Dammit! I want to know more! And I love the Cliffhangers!

Author's Response: Hi Jacob - I made a colossal screw up when posting the chapter - it cut off before the chapter was complete. If you go back now, it ties up a lot more nicely - but it still ends on a cliff hanger. I hope this repaired version of the chapter is more to your liking!

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/30/16 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Friends

I notice that you missed the spell "drank" with a double letter. "He drankk his beer and wondered - would Kayden try to use his powers for good, or for his own profit."

I still like the chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out - I'll get on that and fix it. I'm glad you liked the chapter!

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Date: 05/01/16 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Virus

Maybe threesome... Joking apart, Kayden talks with Darryl and says that she regrets to kiss, but she says that she is in love with Taylor. What does Darryl say then? It depends on his feelings.

Author's Response: Yeah... No Threesomes. For that, you want Mandate of Heaven part 2. I think falling spontaneously in love with Taylor might be tough - she just met him. But I see how you might work it in. Let's say its "under advisement" - Taylor has a bigger part to play in this tale eventually.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/06/16 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Rebirth

I never read your full story The Mandate of Heaven, part 1, so I can't pay either. May I get your free story? arsenalwheelrider@gmail.com

One thing, I noticed that you mixed of "Mr. Chip's" and "Mr. Chips'" a few. I think that the chapter is good and erotic.

Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out Jacob... I think I could send you a copy as a favor. It was on this site for a while, and was pretty well received - I hope you like it. In case you're worried, I don't have plans to remove Empire City from this site to try and sell - there's far too much copyrighted material to do so - and its more of my fun project rather than commercial project. It'll be here for all to enjoy! Could I ask you a favor? If you like Mandate of Heaven part 1, let me know. Thanks!

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 05/13/16 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Hazard Man

I notice that you missed the word - ansy. *If the police get ansy I’ll text you*

Or I like the chapter.

I like The Mandate of Heaven, Part 1, but I will keep to read the whole story, if I have time. Another thing, my computer can't read the files like you sent to me.

Author's Response: Hi Jacob! Glad you liked MOH part 1. Would you like me to send the files in another format? Let me know which format you can read easiest. I'd be glad to resend them to you. Oh - and thanks for the note on my omitted word - I appreciate it!

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/30/16 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Hacking

Nice! I like the chapter. Write more action scenes. :P

Author's Response: Hi Jacob! Thanks for the thumbs up - and don't worry, there will be more action scenes soon. Now that Kayden / Colby has some necessary evils like getting an ID out of the way, she'll be having a chat with Darryl and then going full blown superheroine. There will be action.

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed
Date: 07/26/16 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Mutation

Yes, I asked about the virus.

Author's Response: What did you ask? Maybe I can answer the question...

Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/02/16 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Opening Moves

Nice chapter. Come on. You keep to write.

Oh no, I mean that somebody reads your spoiler, so I deleted the comment.

Reviewer: BatJade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/04/16 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Party Preparations

Will Virus flirt with the detective?

Author's Response: I think she finds the detective attractive - but I don't see her flirting with him unless something seriously major changes in this story... For the future, though? Who can say?

Reviewer: BatJade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/09/16 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Victory!

You missed the name - "Mr. [Chips] growled in frustration.

OMG, I just like the chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks, BatJade! I corrected the error - and in the true fashion of Marvel Comics, I award you a NO-PRIZE. To be honest, I should award a few more, to Desert Willow and some others too, but there you are!. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.

Reviewer: BatJade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/10/16 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Repercussions

Oh my God! I love the cliffhanger!

Author's Response: Thanks Batjade!

Reviewer: BatJade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/16/16 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Doubles

Oh hell! I like the chapter! :)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: BatJade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/26/16 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Showdown

Hell! I like the chapters! Every hero has a weak side and every villain discovers it.

I wait for your e-mail. :P

Reviewer: BatJade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/10/16 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Finale

WOW!

Virus is like Batman. Good job! Who is next antihero?

Author's Response: Thanks BatJade. She might eventually be like Batman, but she really doesn't like to hurt people. She felt she had to to scare the bejeesus out of him, and maybe she took it a little too far. That's why she felt uncomfortable and ill after it was over - I think she knew she might have crossed a line she shouldn't have. I think Virus is going to be a bit darker than many heroes in Paragon - but not to the point of ever being like the Punisher. Even some iterations of Batman are really violent. I don't want Virus to be that violent - so if the Punisher is a 10, and Batman from the Dark Knight Returns is a 9, Shade from Paragon about a 8, and the Adam West batman of the 60's is a 1, I'd want her around ~6. On a scale of 1-10.

Transformed by a mysterious chemical compound, Batman has to scour his (now her) rogues gallery to find who is responsible, and a means to return to her old life.
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 18743 Words: 12441 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Bride, Fantasy Character, Girlfriend, Model, Stripper, Wife
Featured Items: Bikinis, Boots, High Heels, Long Nails, Masks, Work Uniform
Locale: Hospital or Clinic, Labratory, Prison
Motivation for Change: Male Domination
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Captive, Costume or Halloween, Fan Fiction
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Fast/Instant Change, Hormonal, Identity Theft
Series: None
Published: 06/14/16
Updated: 07/10/16
Reviewer: jacob_wishes_to_be_a_girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/07/16 Title: Chapter 5: Issue #5: A New Dancer At The Iceberg Lounge

Nice!

But I want to see more about the changing.

An intergalactic gun runner, on a six month mission, makes a serious mistake. A gritty sci-fi noir, with space debauchery, bisexual escapades, and weird alien sex.
Rated: Explicit 141 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 174292 Words: 111268 Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Featured Items: Bikinis, Boots, Corsets, High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Pantyhose, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline, Sex Toys, Undies, Work Uniform
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Accident, Female Domination
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Comedy, Distant Future, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Bondage/S&M, Death, Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 07/20/16
Updated: 05/27/17
Reviewer: BatJade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/17/16 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: [XXX] Lia's Bar

HOT EROTIC SCENE! I like the scene!

Alex Meyers, his son Liam, and Liam's best friend Vic are off to Hawaii for the perfect vacation. By luck these three men are chosen to be granted passage to a island which exists in another dimension.
Rated: Explicit 12 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 25393 Words: 7172 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, Lingerie, Sex Toys
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet, Vacation Destination
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Bad to Good, From Dominant to Submissive, Good to Bad
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual, Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Mythical Setting
Series: None
Published: 07/30/16
Updated: 08/31/16
Reviewer: BatJade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/13/16 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Names

It is a bit too early to answer, but I like Lia. I still want to read more about these characters.

Author's Response: I have a few ideas how I can do that ;)

Mike Cross is your average, all around high schooler. He's nothing special, nobody you'd pick out in a crowd. Then he woke up to find he'd been possessed by a succubus who just wants to get out of her trade...
Rated: Explicit 63 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 137232 Words: 54821 Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, Maid Uniform, School Uniform, Undies
Locale: Family Household, Hairstyling/Salon, High School
Motivation for Change: Forced
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Comedy
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: The Curse Universe
Published: 08/31/16
Updated: 02/19/18
Reviewer: BatJade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/31/16 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Fun! I like the comedy story.

Joe isn't happy with how he looks. He has been wanting to look more manly for years but just can't, no matter how often he goes to the gym. Desperate, he approaches the local fairy godmother/Madame to help him transform. What he has to do in the short term will be uncomfortable, but after a month, all Joe has to do is ask, and he'll get exactly the body he wants
Rated: Explicit 8 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 27965 Words: 4217 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Reviewer: BatJade Signed
Date: 09/22/16 Title: Chapter 2: 2. Joe becomes Jessica

I don't know if you will write, but you don't need to write "Work on the chapter". If you want to write, so there is End Notes.

With the pharaoh dead and no heirs to take his throne, the throne of Egypt falls to a palace servant touched by the gods. But for the unimaginable power and responsibility of this station, the gods charge a divine price.
Rated: Explicit 14 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 22712 Words: 6917 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Masks
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: From Submissive to Dominant, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Historical Time Period, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Stuck
Warnings: Intense Violence, Politically Incorrect
Series: None
Published: 08/04/17
Updated: 11/17/19
Reviewer: BatJade Signed
Date: 08/11/17 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I don't care about the history. But I think that the title majesty didn't exist in this period.

Author's Response: I'm willing to guess most Egyptians didn't speak English either. I'm taking some liberties with the diction. Hope that's alright!

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