mario_zxa
Member Since: 05/27/15 Membership status: Member
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Adam and Steve were just helping out their sisters, unfortunately they came upon a witch, and now Adam's been cursed...
Rated: Adult 135 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 413503 Words: 39803 Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: High Heels, Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: The Curse Universe
Published: 05/25/15
Updated: 08/30/15
Reviewer: mario_zxa Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/27/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting story so far. I looking forward to the rest of the story. I'm hoping that the sorceress gets a bit of comeuppance.

Reviewer: mario_zxa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/20/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hmm... Nice. The story continues to be quite interesting. I wonder who Melanie was talking to, I don't think it is the witch, hmm... anyway thanks for the new chapter.

Reviewer: mario_zxa Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08/16/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent Chapter. I'm surprised that Melanie and Stephanie were the cause of the change. Still it does seem like they had a good reason, I think they probably should have come up with a better way to do all of this though.

Author's Response: That took some time to discover for myself, actually. As far as a better way, I don't see any better way than magic, honestly.

Kazuki is an avid watcher of anime; he knows all there is to it! He's got every cliché and 'plot twist' memorized. Good thing too! He and his group of friends are one day suddenly transformed each into a stereotypical part of a harem! The only hope of returning back to normal is finding the culprit behind this madness by surviving through the world of anime clichés. Only by utilizing all of his knowledge can Kazuki save himself and his friends!
Rated: Adult 11 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 16698 Words: 5630 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Teenager, Twin
Featured Items: Boots, Maid Uniform, Pantyhose, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline, School Uniform, Undies
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Forced, Unknown
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Comedy, Genie/Wishes, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 09/24/15
Updated: 09/30/15
Reviewer: mario_zxa Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/28/15 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Spooky Wind!

So far so good. The story is looking really interesting. I noticed that the genie took inspiration from High School DxD. Does that mean we can look forward to more magical hi jinks.

Author's Response: Thanks! And yep, there's definitely going to be some magical stuff from all types of genres coming, though I'd rather not specify much as not to spoil anything. Definitely totally not going to be any magical girl type of stuff. ;)

Boys will be boys until they aren't
Rated: Adult 8 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 20274 Words: 2724 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 01/26/16
Updated: 02/05/16
Reviewer: mario_zxa Signed starstarstar
Date: 01/26/16 Title: Chapter 1: TacoBell tries to kill me

Looking okay but you would do better to differentiate between speaking parts and thoughts. The easiest way to do that is to use quotation marks for speaking parts, and italics for thoughts. But you are off to a good start.

Author's Response: Ok, yeah I will change that right now.

Eric, heir to one of the most famous last names in all history. His family was known to kill and hunt down the most dangerous monsters hat walked these lands. But what does the title of Monster Hunter gives you, if in this society monsters and humans now live in peace, working together to form a better future. Struggling to leave his last name in the shadows, Eric will soon find himself more attracted to these shadows.
Rated: Adult 36 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 12570 Words: 22399 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Corsets, Long Nails, School Uniform, Undies, Work Uniform
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Personality: Bad to Good, Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Mythical Setting, Romance
Type of Change: Hormonal, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 01/30/17
Updated: 02/08/17
Reviewer: mario_zxa Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01/30/17 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Nice beginning I hope to see what you have in store for this in the next chapters.

Author's Response: Thaaaank you, and don't wait long! I'm glad you liked it.

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