the Brows
Member Since: 02/14/15 Membership status: Member
Average Review Rating Given: starstarstar


Reviews by the Brows
Aislin learns that all choices come with consequences
Rated: Adult 42 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 136943 Words: 65594 Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Personality: From Submissive to Dominant
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Mythical Setting, Romance
Series: None
Published: 01/29/13
Updated: 08/28/13
Reviewer: the Brows Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/20/15 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great story, wish you would continue it

Martin is a 21 year old student who is somewhat afraid of social situations. his friend finally manages to convince him to come to a party after the school year ends. The following morning his body is not quite how he remembered any longer.
Rated: Explicit 121 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 397882 Words: 105046 Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Reviewer: the Brows Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/25/15 Title: Chapter 25: Free

great chapter with the depth of the damage being shown in all the characters very sad chapter though. Keep up the great work with your story, cant wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad it came over the way as I intended, as sad as this chapter is. Hopefully we've seen the last of the deep pit everyone's sunk into.

We've all heard the stories of wings that have been stained black by darkness. Wings that have been stained by hatred, contempt, pain, death, the list goes on... But have you heard the story of the angel whose wings are streaked with crimson. Dark. Light. Good. Evil. Some lines aren't as clear as you may believe.
Rated: Adult 23 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 7852 Words: 21097 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Accident, Blackmailed, Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 01/01/15
Updated: 03/28/15
Reviewer: the Brows Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03/29/15 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The Angel With Crimson Wings

awesome story so far, the battle scene was greatly written

Author's Response: Awesome! I'm glad you're enjoying it. My muse was rather generous this week.

Daichi, a sixth Animorph (my OC) has been with the others through thick an thin. He has a lot to lose in this war. His mother, sister, and even his life. Something happens during a Gathering raid, and he gets discovered. The power to fix this lie within his hands. The question is: Can he do it?
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 3746 Words: 6368 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Child, Daughter, Teenager
Featured Items: Boots, High Heels, Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Blackmailed, Forced, In Hiding
Personality: Fights Change, Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Captive, Fan Fiction
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Bodily Functions
Series: None
Published: 02/22/15
Updated: 03/01/15
Reviewer: the Brows Signed starstarstar
Date: 02/24/15 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 A Way To Live

i like where the story is going. you have the original characters mannerism down quite well so far. keep up the good work :)

A brash young thief and his friend take on a job they are not fully prepared for.
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 5337 Words: 4367 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Captive, Mythical Setting
Series: None
Published: 02/23/15
Updated: 02/23/15
Reviewer: the Brows Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/24/15 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

great story so far, cant wait to find out what happens next

Author's Response: Thanks, I can't either.

Adam and Steve were just helping out their sisters, unfortunately they came upon a witch, and now Adam's been cursed...
Rated: Adult 135 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 413889 Words: 39803 Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: High Heels, Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: The Curse Universe
Published: 05/25/15
Updated: 08/30/15
Reviewer: the Brows Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/26/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

good story so far,interesting idea

Reviewer: the Brows Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06/06/15 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

great story so far, just a little confusing at times to work out when it is dreams and not time skip but good job so far :)

A, sadly, true story of myself and my thoughts recently
Rated: Adult 8 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 1684 Words: 1501 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: None
Series: None
Published: 07/12/15
Updated: 07/12/15
Reviewer: the Brows Signed
Date: 07/13/15 Title: Chapter 1: Conviction

very touching. you are a lot braver then me, who doesnt even have the courage to tell anyone that i feel wrong in my body.

Author's Response: Don't get me wrong, it took me five years to reveal it to two people. And it's been three years and I've done very little since then. I'm glad you found it touching, and I hope you manage to work up the courage like I did

Many of my wants were fulfilled by a strange chalice found within the Maze, but many more problems arise due to the power it grants and the world it opens.
Rated: Explicit 286 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 211586 Words: 161202 Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Forced
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Torture
Series: None
Published: 08/22/15
Updated: 09/18/19
Reviewer: the Brows Signed
Date: 02/07/16 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: An Opinion of a Friend

im not a fan of this chapter as it seems that verona is just being angry with everyone all the time and exploding at anyone who tries to talk to her

Author's Response: Eh, it happens. I just felt that Verona hasn't had much of a chance to be in a 'bad mood'. I had to take the opportunity to build on her character. She really wasn't angry with everyone, she was angry at Callum, but was a curt with everyone else. She yelled only at Callum. Then again, I won't try to convince you to change your opinion. To each their own, and I already knew that this whole chapter hinged entirely on Scylla and Kayla. It was a bad chapter and I know this. It's just the result of writing through writer's block.

TG Storytime uses the eFiction engine and Vanilla discussions. Design by J6P.