A mandalin
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Jennifer was born within a five hour visit to the salon. She was put on the fast track to becoming a girl and Mark faded with every new experience. She also was surprised by the acceptance and encouragement she recieved from her mom and relatives. She also discovers two new friends who will be instrumental in her development as a girl.
Rated: Explicit 7 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 92353 Words: 36370 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Reviewer: A mandalin Signed
Date: 11/18/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Read this story a couple of years ago and have been looking for it to read it again. I'm glad I found it again. One of my faves.

Chapter 5: The Great Divide. Boys will be boys, even when some of them are really girls...
Rated: Adult 12 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 14924 Words: 20577 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Story Theme: Coming of Age
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 02/12/13
Updated: 04/06/13
Reviewer: A mandalin Signed
Date: 12/11/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Tempus Fugit

Would like to see you pick this up again. Have read it twice and wanted more both times.

A young man not really material for much good meets his social opposite: He is of wealthy family and has never had to know the rough side of life, she is an orphan who has grown up in foster home and has had to struggle hard all her life for anything good in life. Into this class struggle a body swap takes place, this new girl then learns that there are some advantages to a strenuous life too…

This story as a comic:
https://www.deviantart.com/ab-norway/art/Front-Cover-to-Opportunity-Knocks-Hard-766159040
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 5200 Words: 10733 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs), Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Personality: Bad to Good
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change, Identity Theft
Series: Magic Transformed - with or without Your Consent
Published: 02/24/13
Updated: 02/24/13
Reviewer: A mandalin Signed
Date: 09/01/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it. Liked how making the best of what he had made her a better person.

All John wanted was a girl friend. When his family moved to Clarksville, he thought he’d found one. What he did discover was a town secret and his own life changed forever.
Rated: Adult 115 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 241097 Words: 208874 Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Teenager
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Type of Change: Age Regression, Drug-Induced, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 04/18/13
Updated: 12/31/17
Reviewer: A mandalin Signed
Date: 05/27/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Dear John

I love this story! One of the best here, just gets better and better. Please more and more! Never stop!

Eric was a great soldier, a good guy and looking at a promising career in the military. Until one day he finds himself facing problems even his training couldn't prepare him for.
Rated: Adult 12 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 40225 Words: 29948 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Work Uniform
Locale: Camp, Family Household, Hospital or Clinic, Office
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Sports
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 04/28/13
Updated: 06/30/14
Reviewer: A mandalin Signed
Date: 07/30/16 Title: Chapter 1: Very Busy People

Please continue this story.

Repeating your life... How does that sounds? Well, Arthur here is going to have, a chance of a life time.
Rated: Adult 12 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 17803 Words: 11940 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: Family Household, High School, Hospital or Clinic, Labratory
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Women
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Medical Experiment, Second Childhood
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 09/24/13
Updated: 12/28/13
Reviewer: A mandalin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06/23/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. Making the Bags

Could you please finish this? I've read it 3 times.

curiosity of a game can change your life
Rated: Kid-Friendly 19 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 22864 Words: 4651 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Featured Items: Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline
Locale: Family Household
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Forced, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Story Theme: Mind/Body Posession
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 01/03/14
Updated: 01/10/14
Reviewer: A mandalin Signed
Date: 07/06/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Learning the rules

Please please please finish game of Claire.

Kyle was an ordinary guy enjoying his winter in the coolest way. But, after a minor incident, he finds out that he isn't as ordinary as he thought.
Rated: Adult 55 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 141364 Words: 51591 Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: Family Household, High School, Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Series: None
Published: 03/27/14
Updated: 03/02/18
Reviewer: A mandalin Signed
Date: 02/25/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my God, people, this is a fiction site. Maybe everything was taken care of at and by the hospital and the parents took care of school while Alexa was in the hospital! Stop being like this is a biography.

I have liked this story from the first time I read it and am hoping you continue it.

In the first part of my sequel to Bound To Happen Sometime, we meet an ordinary guy who wakes up one morning to find he's in the wrong body. A beautiful girl's body to be exact. On his first day of college. Watch as she finds out college is the most exciting, terrifying and sexy place she could have ended up.
Rated: Explicit 26 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 54557 Words: 20041 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Reviewer: A mandalin Signed
Date: 06/22/16 Title: Chapter 1: Book One, Chapter One

Please write more.

Adam and Steve were just helping out their sisters, unfortunately they came upon a witch, and now Adam's been cursed...
Rated: Adult 135 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 400159 Words: 39803 Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: High Heels, Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: The Curse Universe
Published: 05/25/15
Updated: 08/30/15
Reviewer: A mandalin Signed
Date: 07/20/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved this story. Simple, more thought provoking about what someone would be going through then hey I changed genders, time to have sex.
I have a story I'm working on, but I'm trying to get past a mental block but it will be more like this one with more angst.

Author's Response: Well, the story's not over yet.

Eric is a normal teenage desperately in love with his 'fiancée' Sarah, yes they are that in love. His parents have other ideas and start Eric on an incredibly unfamiliar journey. Will he be able to cope?
Rated: Adult 13 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 34843 Words: 18404 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Forced
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 07/11/15
Updated: 07/13/15
Reviewer: A mandalin Signed
Date: 08/11/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-An Unwelcome "Gift"

Just finished what you wrote, wish you'd write more and finish it.

Meet Jayce, a 16 year old bully who just so managed to pick on the wrong girl in his class, follow his story as Natasha gives Jayce some of his own medicine... with a twist.
Rated: Explicit 32 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 173729 Words: 25428 Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Daughter, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Lingerie, School Uniform
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Ears Pierced, Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime, Blackmailed, Female Domination, Revenge
Personality: Bad to Good, Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Humiliation
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Mechanical Device, Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 08/04/15
Updated: 05/16/17
Reviewer: A mandalin Signed
Date: 03/12/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please continue. I like this story very much.

Aaron is a computer programmer for a small software company. His life is turned upside down by forces unknown to him. Follow him and his friends journey as he is confronted with a completely new outlook on life.
Rated: Adult 23 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 77895 Words: 20913 Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 01/27/16
Updated: 07/14/17
Reviewer: A mandalin Signed
Date: 03/09/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story, keep writing.

Poor Daniel. Woke up to find his world turned sideways as his manhood is stripped from him without a trace or any sign of how it happened. Will he be able to find the source of his new X chromosome and revert it or live life as a newfound woman?
Rated: Adult 52 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 86865 Words: 38805 Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Series: None
Published: 03/02/16
Updated: 02/16/17
Reviewer: A mandalin Signed
Date: 03/25/16 Title: Chapter 1: Morning Alarm

Great story! If you like a clean psychological story this is the one.

A man who breaks up with his loving mistress pays dearly for it.
Rated: Adult 93 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 238068 Words: 86673 Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime, Forced, Revenge, Tricked
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Age Regression, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 04/13/16
Updated: 02/14/17
Reviewer: A mandalin Signed
Date: 02/08/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I would like to see things go better with Kaylee. If this were a real girl she'd have slit her wrists.
Please start giving her a life.

Reviewer: A mandalin Signed
Date: 06/08/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Didn't think I'd like it, almost didn't download it, I love it. After all she's been through please have a happy ending for Kaylee. Maybe have her fall in love and have a family, that would be nice, but you still got more story to go like her mother gets out and Robert takes her in and they marry and she lives with them and gets to go to college. Don't make Robert a bad guy.

This is a story about Daniel, a guy with a unique talent and an even more unique problem: A great singing voice and the looks of his gorgeous sister, how he and his family deal with his having breasts, and how he deals with getting turned on by his would-be girlfriend. Also, how he ends up as the female lead singer for a high-school pop band as well as a radio DJ. Never a dull moment with Batch Fourteen, Dan & his gang.
Rated: Adult 19 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 29644 Words: 130691 Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Accident
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Hormonal
Series: The DannyVerse
Published: 06/26/16
Updated: 06/26/16
Reviewer: A mandalin Signed
Date: 09/28/16 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1 (installment 1)

Please continue. Didn't think I'd like this one but I love it.

A man dies. Or did he? He wakes up in a virtual world. Or is it? Now he's a ginger teenage girl with a whole different set of problems, not all of them existential. Whose story is this? If Mackenzie isn't the main character, then which role does she play?
Rated: Adult 32 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 54990 Words: 25877 Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend, Teenager
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Unknown, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes, Romance, Second Childhood, Sports
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 08/17/16
Updated: 08/29/17
Reviewer: A mandalin Signed
Date: 09/21/16 Title: Chapter 1: August

Love the story. She should take the test, otherwise her life is an act and she will never be able to do anything she wants. She'll be a slave to the story.

Author's Response: Thank you for the thoughts, A mandalin! Excellent points!

Reviewer: A mandalin Signed
Date: 03/08/17 Title: Chapter 1: August

Just reread it. You must keep writing.

Author's Response: I just posted a new chapter. If it's not showing it, it will soon. Thanks for the response!

Evan tries to be a good brother by attending his sister's track meet, but when he angers a powerful sorceress he loses both his gender and his identity. It will take traveling to a magical realm to find out that not all identity death is permanent.
Rated: Adult 11 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 18126 Words: 24604 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Featured Items: Lingerie, Pantyhose, Undies
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime, Forced
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Story Theme: Comedy, Horror, Mythical Setting, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Age Regression, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 08/25/16
Updated: 11/07/16
Reviewer: A mandalin Signed
Date: 11/09/16 Title: Chapter 1: Part One: Death

Like it. Seem to remember reading this a while ago though. KEEP writing please.

Author's Response: It takes me about a month between chapters, so you very well could have read one of the first couple of parts a while ago. I like to think that it's worth the wait. I will definitely keep writing. Thanks for reading.

After defeating his life-long rival in the US Open, Ben was living the dream. However, tennis turns treacherous when the rival's family seeks vengeance.
Rated: Explicit 26 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 84961 Words: 21687 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Forced, Revenge
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Romance, Sports
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 10/20/16
Updated: 11/05/16
Reviewer: A mandalin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/26/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Price of Gold

Love the story. Keep writing, PLEASE!

Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter should be ready shortly

Alex is your average teenage boy with a nasty attitude towards women. It is the start of the Christmas season and Alex suffers a drastic change that warps his view on everything, but will his misfortune end there?

The chapters have been condensed into larger chapters, more chapters to come, but they'll be coming once a week from here on out!!
Rated: Explicit 18 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 53813 Words: 18416 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Reviewer: A mandalin Signed
Date: 11/14/16 Title: Chapter 1: "And Here We Go"

Going pretty well, like the story. The wedding thing came out of nowhere, I hope it is some sort of prelude to later in the story.

Author's Response: It did, you're right, lol. But who knows, maybe it will!, I guess we'll find out! Thanks for your review!!!

My best buds and I make an annual trip to our favorite winter cabin, except we have a unique twist on our epic week. Of course, the twist never happened to me until I drew the short straw this year...
Rated: Explicit 167 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 288938 Words: 119627 Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Daughter
Locale: Family Household, Office, Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Lost a Bet, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Romance
Series: None
Published: 11/28/16
Updated: 09/29/18
Reviewer: A mandalin Signed
Date: 01/04/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Drawing To Keep Your Straw

I don't know why but I cannot download to my reader.

Author's Response: Hmmm, I am sorry A Mandalin! I hope it starts working soon! :/

Joseph was a pessimistic loner, angry with both his existence and the world. After a misused wishing stone alters his body and robs him of his voice, Joseph is forced to evaluate his life.
Rated: Adult 250 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 263034 Words: 105448 Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Daughter, Girlfriend
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Accident, Revenge
Personality: Bad to Good
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes, Romance, Sports
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 02/09/17
Updated: 07/15/17
Reviewer: A mandalin Signed
Date: 02/26/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Objective Apples

Like it. Keep writing.

Author's Response: I always do ;)

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