Monica Rose
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Seth felt alone in this world. He's just a guy trying to be loved. And when he finally found the perfect girl he committed a huge mistake. She forces him to dress as a woman to punish him, but he doesn't like it. Destiny has its own way of turning him into a woman. Now he tries to escape this prison he's in and hopefully have a normal life once again.
Rated: Explicit 89 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 237453 Words: 155766 Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Featured Items: Bikinis, Breast Forms, Gaff, Lingerie
Body Modification: Castrated/Neutered, Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: Female Domination, Forced
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Type of Change: Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Torture
Series: None
Published: 03/13/15
Updated: 01/02/18
Reviewer: Monica Rose Signed
Date: 04/15/15 Title: Chapter 1: Diane

I think that it's great that Seth did what he could to help Diane come to terms with his unfaithfulness to her. It's obvious that she could not adjust to the fact that Seth as 100 percent male, but I take it that she wanted a man that looked like a woman.

It looks like Seth might have some surprises in store for when he fully wakes up. I wouldn't be surprised to find out that the person he thought was his friend has a connection to Diane and that he has been changed against his will in some way. That would be a shame because Seth really does not deserve to be tortured, which is how he would view any form of enforced feminization.

Author's Response: I hope you're in for a surprise then. I'm trying to make things a bit less predictable.

Reviewer: Monica Rose Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/11/16 Title: Chapter 1: Diane

I think that we are seeing things from the viewpoint of someone who has had a psychotic break as a result of their SRS and they are fighting their way back to reality. Joe may seem like a sadistic jailer, but what if he is an unconventional doctor actually trying to help Seth?

Are we going to find out that Mallory is actually Seth's feminine side? I'm a bit confused about what part Diane is playing because I am sure that she is a willing participant in what is happening to Seth.

Interesting story.

Author's Response: I'm trying to keep surprises coming and make the story not feel predictable to keep it interesting and different. What I'm really afraid of is making the story too tyring from all these things happening.

Eric is a normal teenage desperately in love with his 'fiancée' Sarah, yes they are that in love. His parents have other ideas and start Eric on an incredibly unfamiliar journey. Will he be able to cope?
Rated: Adult 13 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 32773 Words: 18404 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Forced
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 07/11/15
Updated: 07/13/15
Reviewer: Monica Rose Signed
Date: 07/11/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-An Unwelcome "Gift"

Interesting story. I wonder how Eric's parents can actually get away with changing their son without having to pay some kind of price. I have to wonder if Eric's father is actually telling the truth about changing Madison back into Eric or if they are hoping that Madison will like the new reality. I think that seeing some actual interaction between Madison and Sarah could be interesting or hearbreaking. What happens if Madison buys into the new reality and starts hanging around with boys? What action might the parents take if they feel that the choices Madison makes are as distasteful to them as the choices Eric was making?

There seems to be some questions waiting to be answered too. Are the parents wizards of some sort or using magic someone else has provided? Is it possible that Eric was supposed to be Madison all along?

Author's Response: Hi Monica Rose! Yes, this story does leave a lot of open paths that could be pursued, and this is what stimulated me to start writing about it. Most of your questions are going to be answered, and I hope it will be an enjoyable adventure as they do. Your questions also got me more stimulated to put the story near the front of my writing pile (currently actively working on two other little projects)! I appreciate your feedback!

A young man's life snatched away from him; the only thing that he can hope to do now is survive his hellish new existence. As he deals with hardships and torment, the only thing that comforts him is hope... hope that maybe it'll be better the day after tomorrow.
Rated: Deviant 87 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 159939 Words: 47769 Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Monica Rose Signed
Date: 04/27/16 Title: Chapter 21: Family

Having Sarah be the one who brought the authorities back to take down the cult was pretty good. I kept worrying that the cult would grab Emily again because she is first successful transformation. I imagine that could still happen though.

Author's Response: All of the cult members are currently in custody, so them recapturing Emily would be fairly difficult. At least for now. Thank you for reading!

Aaron is a computer programmer for a small software company. His life is turned upside down by forces unknown to him. Follow him and his friends journey as he is confronted with a completely new outlook on life.
Rated: Adult 24 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 75996 Words: 20913 Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 01/27/16
Updated: 07/14/17
Reviewer: Monica Rose Signed
Date: 02/10/16 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I've been wondering if Baylee isn't somehow involved with what is happening to Aaron. Seems to be monitoring him more than trying to help him with what is happening to him and make him comfortable.

After getting bullied by the class bully Nathan finds that his life will never be the same
Rated: Kid-Friendly 45 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 63642 Words: 25066 Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: Hospital or Clinic, Labratory
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Drug-Induced
Series: The Shelby Research Center
Published: 04/08/16
Updated: 05/02/16
Reviewer: Monica Rose Signed starstarstar
Date: 04/13/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Class Bully

Nathan was bullied by a bunch of boys at school.

You do realize that everything Rebecca is doing to her new daughter is nothing more than bullying also? Rebecca needs to think this through before Bethany has a breakdown.

Reviewer: Monica Rose Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/15/16 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Plays Like a Girl

Excellent act of justice upon Tyler. It's nice that Bethany isn't feeling bullied by his mother and that she actually was thinking of his future happiness. Bethany just had to know that.

Author's Response: Exactly

Reviewer: Monica Rose Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/19/16 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Biggest Question Yet

Good cliffhanger. Bethany needs just a couple more reasons to like being a girl and a way to get over the bullying that is still going on at school. Maybe everyone will forget about her at some point. I imagine that there will be some intense feelings when they find out that Bethany will never be able to change back to Nathan.

To overcome the woman's tragedy caused by Jack Welch, he became the solution to the woman's husband
Rated: Explicit 10 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 33639 Words: 7919 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Mother, Wife
Featured Items: Bikinis, Breast Forms, High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Undies
Locale: Family Household, Hospital or Clinic
Body Modification: Ears Pierced, Extreme Breast Enlargement, Permanent Cosmetics, Sexual Reassignment Surgery, Vaginal Alteration
Motivation for Change: Accident, Blackmailed
Personality: Bad to Good
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 06/19/16
Updated: 07/12/16
Reviewer: Monica Rose Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/19/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Jack has a close call with death

An interesting start.
Roger must have loved Lori, even though he intends to transform Jack into Lori. I would imagine that Roger will need to grieve for her and the relationship between Roger and the new Lori will take a long time to grow.

What happens when a fairy tries cursing a man who is already bearing a greater curse? Jackson is about to find out as a camping trip with his friends goes horribly wrong after an encounter with a dark fairy.
Rated: Deviant 101 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 92840 Words: 73152 Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Cultural/Nationality Change, Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Captive, Mythical Setting, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 09/17/16
Updated: 01/29/18
Reviewer: Monica Rose Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/04/16 Title: Chapter 7: The Place

It seems to me that Deleka may have overplayed her hand at the end there. She made the comment that she wanted to get rid of Siskie herself. How would her followers react if it were pointed out that she might get rid of anyone else she did not like?

Author's Response: It comes back to how much power the Queens have over their subjects. There are some that aren't happy with the way Deleka does things, but know its better to stay silent than try to oppose her.

Cam never knew anything aside from the inside of a hospital. Suddenly he finds out that he's the clone of a female alien superhero and his caretaker was her greatest enemy. Can he adapt to his body changing into a young woman? Can the superhero Venusian teach him about his newfound powers? Can he trust the woman who raised him?
Rated: Kid-Friendly 7 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 6816 Words: 10785 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Alien, Daughter
Locale: Family Household, Hospital or Clinic, Labratory, Office
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Hormonal
Series: Mother from Another Planet
Published: 05/14/17
Updated: 05/15/17
Reviewer: Monica Rose Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/15/17 Title: Chapter 1: The Reporter

It sounds like Lum and the Venusian have a communications problem. I wonder if Cam's problem and his/her future siblings possible problems will bring everyone together.

When Bunny hop is on the brink of closing, it’s up to Linda and her son Eric to save the gymnastics studio whether Eric wants to or not.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 26 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 42221 Words: 13837 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Witchcraft
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 02/24/18
Updated: 12/06/18
Reviewer: Monica Rose Signed
Date: 04/01/18 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 New Body New Rules

This an interesting transformation story, but I keep getting stuck on the fact that the mother has essentially threatened her son with killing him and replacing him with a little girl who is happy to be what the mother wants. It seems to me that Eric would experience quite a bit of depression when faced with that kind of choice.

Author's Response: I know it sounds bad but it gets explained more in the next chapter. Basically it's to see how you all will react so I can change things and add things that will make an interesting story for you all to love

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