Zsuzsi
Member Since: 05/25/11 Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Zsuzsi
Sometimes when you see a shooting star, it's a speck of space dust. Sometimes... it's something else. Fluffy butch lesbian story with gratuitous sexual content.
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 5144 Words: 3072 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: From Submissive to Dominant
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Women, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Genie/Wishes, Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 01/27/18
Updated: 01/27/18
Reviewer: Zsuzsi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/05/18 Title: Chapter 2: Day 1

Ooh, this is very promising!

When Nick comes into possession of a ring whose maker claims it’s cursed he thinks nothing of it. He can’t figure out how to remove it, but he figures there’s some trick to taking it off. He realizes how wrong he is when an acquaintance touches it and he turns into a female version of himself. What follows is a night of passion, but the ring has more in store for Nick each time someone new touches it.

What will Nick do to explore the spectrum of sexual experience over six nights of transformative sex?
Rated: Explicit 22 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 66349 Words: 29030 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Featured Items: Boots, High Heels, Sex Toys
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Curse, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual, Becomes Only Attracted to Men, Becomes Only Attracted to Women
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 01/30/18
Updated: 01/30/18
Reviewer: Zsuzsi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/01/18 Title: Chapter 7: Saturday

I LOVE THIS! Everything about it! It's the perfect cursed-item story!

Evan's girlfriend has gotten her hands on a reality-altering device that can swap around people's body parts and traits. She's already used it to wreak havoc on the college bar, and now she has plans for him as well.
Rated: Explicit 22 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 169614 Words: 322247 Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Zsuzsi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/04/18 Title: Chapter 3: Part 3 - Swap till you Drop

So! Hot! Keep it coming!

Ethan has been lying to his parents about his romantic life. Now they've invited his made-up girlfriend to a wedding. Maybe it's time to call in a simple favor...
Rated: Adult 77 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 101402 Words: 25844 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Romance
Series: None
Published: 09/04/18
Updated: 09/13/18
Reviewer: Zsuzsi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/08/19 Title: Chapter 6: Bucket List

I love this! I'm so glad you posted on Reddit!

Reviewer: Zsuzsi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/08/19 Title: Chapter 11: Epilogue

D'awww. Love, love, love. Just sweet and simple and completely normal and un-hung-up. This just reminds me of me, and so I love it to pieces.

Synopsis: Greg is shocked when he discovers his younger sister, Kelly, is a witch. Particularly since this revelation occurs after she uses her power to swap bodies with him after an argument. Unbeknownst to Kelly her actions awaken Greg’s latent magical power and because the spell was miss-cast a simple temporary body-swap becomes more complicated. Enter the Covens of Light and Dark, politics, male and female hormones and things are soon spinning out of control. Will Greg get his body back or will Kelly decide she likes being the older masculine sibling? This story is complete and is intended as a stand alone urban fantasy.
Rated: Adult 23 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 48187 Words: 50534 Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Jock
Locale: High School
Story Theme: Sports, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Body Swap, Identity Theft
Series: None
Published: 12/02/18
Updated: 12/02/18
Reviewer: Zsuzsi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/06/18 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Now that's old school! Great story and some pretty nice worldbuilding there. All kinds of nice.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it.

A young closeted trans girl struggling with dysphoria in her life; Luna, or as she's known to others, Leo desperately wishes upon a star like in the stories to become the girl she always knew she was supposed to be. Little did she know her wish would be granted, and what that would entail.
Rated: Adult 59 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 20310 Words: 27577 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend, Teenager
Locale: Family Household, High School, Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Women, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 01/31/19
Updated: 02/12/19
Reviewer: Zsuzsi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/17/19 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue: Tomorrow Never Knows

D'awww. This is just so sweet.

Growth, or:
My Roommate Used Her Superpowers Near Me and Now I’m Transforming Into Something Weird That Totally Isn't What I've Always Secretly Wanted!

Sarah and ZoŽ are ordinary roommates. Sarah has a job slinging boxes, and ZoŽ goes to school at a local community college. There's nothing peculiar about either of them, besides of course Sarah's telekinetic abilities, or the fact that ZoŽ dreams about transforming into something spectacular. None of these things ever have to come up, as long as they can just keep things... normal.

But what if something threw that normalcy off? Would it ever come back?
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 18865 Words: 20194 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Not Applicable
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Locale: College, Family Household
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 02/13/19
Updated: 02/21/19
Reviewer: Zsuzsi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/21/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yeah, I've been to Rushville. It didn't take *me* long to escape Indiana either.

Two friends discover the hard way that you shouldn't read out random spells scribbled in books. Still, it's bound to liven up a boring Saturday evening, right?
Rated: Explicit 40 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 79938 Words: 17482 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: Corsets, Undies
Motivation for Change: Accident
Story Theme: Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 09/10/19
Updated: 09/19/19
Reviewer: Zsuzsi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/22/19 Title: Chapter 1: A mystery spell

Nicely put together - very nice indeed!

More like that, please, she asked politely.

Author's Response: Thank you! More stories on the way if and when I can get round to finishing them. (Not my strong point!)

A man wakes up naked, bound and gagged on a chair, in the middle of a dark and empty room.
Rated: Deviant 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 7008 Words: 3147 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: Labratory
Motivation for Change: Forced, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Story Theme: Captive, Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Fast/Instant Change, Mechanical Device
Warnings: Incest
Series: None
Published: 09/22/19
Updated: 09/22/19
Reviewer: Zsuzsi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/22/19 Title: Chapter 1: Trapped

Well, that's just *delightfully* weird!

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