KagatoAC
Member Since: 05/05/14 Membership status: Member
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Reviews by KagatoAC
Even years after the SAO incident... so much time to forget the ones from that "Death Game". Kazuto Kiragiya, AKA Kirito, still feels the same pain that he felt as he lived 2 years of his life in SAO. When Kirito discovers a strange MMO, generated using "The Seed" along with disturbing claims of players becoming female as they play, The Black Swordsman, Kirito goes to investigate...
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 14636 Words: 4581 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08/28/14 Title: Chapter 1: The World Seed

An excellent beginning, I'm currently watching the latest season of SAO myself and you seem to have captured the feel of it. i do hope you continue :)

Author's Response: Wicked! I love that this is already engaging an audience and I'm surprised that I'm already getting a response to my first chapter! I grateful to that. I'm an all time fan of SAO and I can tell you that the prologue for this story took me longer than I could imagine. I really glad though that this story fits into the TG genre without trouble and I think this will be a very popular fiction to write and to read. Bear with me... The TG content will be held back for a more meaningful transformation, although when it does happen it will be a huge obstacle that Kirito has to face. Not sure if Asuna is into lesbians, but she does love Kirito more than anything... she'll at least help him with the changes. Before I go, this is a TG based on realistic motives will be similar to the GGO mystery in Volume 5&6 of the light novels. No more from me... The chapters will come out whenever I feel like writing and they will probably be a little longer next time. Until then... Cya in the next chapter... LasbAuthorArtist.

In the not-so-distant future, Virtual Reality gaming has become the new way to play. Among the many mmorpgs out there, Nurtha has a reputation for being one of the most unique games of its kind. Its competitive scene isn't very large, but it has a dedicated player base and a massive world. When two gamers log on, they find that the game is a little more than they anticipated.
Rated: Adult 14 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 12167 Words: 22800 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Mechanical Device
Series: None
Published: 05/09/15
Updated: 05/18/15
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed
Date: 05/05/17 Title: Chapter 4: Gifted: Chainwarden

Sometimes I wish I would read the end notes before starting, I love VR games and the combination of Fallout with an Mmo was a neat start, but getting to the end and finding it was never going to continue :(

Author's Response: Oh, hey. Yeah, sorry about that. It's got a lot to do with Steph not being able to find inspiration. I actually have a backup chapter that I wrote because I tend to write a little faster than her. She ended up not being able to catch up and because I don't like taking people's character's I chose to stop myself.

Transformed by a mysterious chemical compound, Batman has to scour his (now her) rogues gallery to find who is responsible, and a means to return to her old life.
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 19282 Words: 12441 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Bride, Fantasy Character, Girlfriend, Model, Stripper, Wife
Featured Items: Bikinis, Boots, High Heels, Long Nails, Masks, Work Uniform
Locale: Hospital or Clinic, Labratory, Prison
Motivation for Change: Male Domination
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Captive, Costume or Halloween, Fan Fiction
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Fast/Instant Change, Hormonal, Identity Theft
Series: None
Published: 06/14/16
Updated: 07/10/16
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/04/16 Title: Chapter 1: Issue #1: A Joker In the Deck

An excellent start, not sure why it took this long end up on the front page of the site. definitely tracking it for the continuation :)

An intergalactic gun runner, on a six month mission, makes a serious mistake. A gritty sci-fi noir, with space debauchery, bisexual escapades, and weird alien sex.
Rated: Explicit 141 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 175609 Words: 111268 Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
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Date: 11/12/16 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42: Power Play

Dunno how this never got my attention before, but I just binge-read the whole thing in one day :)

Peter - a shapeshifting intelligence operative - sets out to solve a series of grisly murders, only to have his investigation derailed when a disguise backfires.
Rated: Adult 127 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 118777 Words: 108139 Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Teenager
Featured Items: High Heels
Locale: High School, Hospital or Clinic
Body Modification: Extreme Piercing
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Horror
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change, Identity Theft, Stuck
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 11/07/16
Updated: 06/23/17
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/16/16 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: One Giant Leap

An interesting Start, but unless you haven't seen it, the Villian seems very similar to the bad guy in Heroes. Using Telekinesis to open the brain and then stealing the powers from the other operatives.

I honestly hope to be surprised tho, ad will still be tracking this for updates :)

Author's Response: The villain is partially inspired by heroes (although there are several differences, as you'll find), but that's where the similarities end. I see it as less of stealing and more of an homage to an awesome character. I guarantee there will be surprises.

Daniel McCallum died when a tanker truck ran him over after running a red light. Now he's in Limbo, and the line to find out where you're going is too long, so he decides to take a little walk into his new future as the new Death.
Rated: Adult 48 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 24358 Words: 21331 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: For a Job
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Comedy, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: The Curse Universe
Published: 05/23/17
Updated: 05/02/19
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed
Date: 05/23/17 Title: Chapter 1: The First Chapter

I love the imagery of death with a Teddybear, will be tracking this one, an Amusing start.

This story tells the tale of a simple mistake which snowballs into something a lot worse. Set in a modern world with magical elements, it doesn't actually follow the story of Romeo and Juliet very well.
Rated: Deviant 16 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 44931 Words: 23370 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/09/17 Title: Chapter 1: Do you bite your thumb at us, sir?

Well this could go to some very very weird places very quickly, I'll keep my hopes up :D

Author's Response: Oh, have no fear, I have some quite weird places planned...

Jason is just a plain old vanilla human living in the grand city of Paragon, home of Heroes and Villains alike. But things are not always as they seem...
Rated: Adult 30 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 19314 Words: 17099 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Girlfriend
Motivation for Change: Unknown, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: Paragon Verse
Published: 09/29/17
Updated: 12/18/17
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/30/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

An interesting start at least. I'll have to put a track on it for updates :)

Brian Parkland discovers a way to fix his past mistakes, but every change takes his farther away from himself. What will it take to achieve the happiness he has always craved?
Rated: Explicit 20 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 46088 Words: 11804 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Locale: College, Family Household
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Age Regression, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 03/22/18
Updated: 03/23/18
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/25/18 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

That was excellent. Tho I gotta admit I was kinda hoping for her soulmate to be the college roommate :)

Author's Response: Well, I thought about it, but Iíve used that trope before. I also wanted to show that it was possible to have close, loving friendships that are not romantic or sexual in nature. Thanks so much for reading!

Born into a family of superheroes, Jack isn't sure he wants to follow the path set out for him when he finally gets powers of his own.
Rated: Adult 30 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 35902 Words: 23266 Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Personality: Good to Bad
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 06/12/18
Updated: 11/19/18
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed
Date: 07/19/18 Title: Chapter 9: A change of scenery

Really enjoying this so far. cant wait to see where its going :)

Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/11/18 Title: Chapter 10: Just another villain

I'm so glad I tracked this story, I am enjoying it immensely. hope it continues :)

A teenage boy is forced to cross-dress as a Girl Scout to sell cookies to the wrong sort of neighbor with a dark secret.
Rated: Adult 13 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 12299 Words: 17416 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/28/18 Title: Chapter 1: Watching and Waiting

Wait, it says story complete and thats where it ended? Arrgghh. I really want to know whats going on here now :(

Author's Response: lol, after agreeing with everyone on how this ended, I'm working on a continuation. XD

Thank'ya for reading and letting me know you also want to find out more. I'll have something out soon to resume this story. :)

Two companions adventure to a forbidden ruin to explore and confront an imprisoned and long forgotten Goddess. This would be the final adventure for one of the two...
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 5936 Words: 3620 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Child, Son, Teenager
Locale: Prison, Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Forced, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Captive, Mind/Body Posession, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change, Identity Theft, Mind Control, Primarily Female to Male, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 07/17/18
Updated: 07/17/18
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed
Date: 07/17/18 Title: Chapter 1: Prison

But its marked Complete, Noooo. I want to see what happens next.

Author's Response: I'm sorry! I'm glad you enjoyed it while the story lasted. XD

One foolish male's attempts to magically transform his friend into the perfect girlfriend backfires, bringing a new twist to an old cliche
Rated: Explicit 10 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 7673 Words: 5416 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Forced, Male Domination
Personality: From Submissive to Dominant
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Witchcraft
Type of Change: Mind Control
Warnings: Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 12/14/18
Updated: 12/14/18
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed
Date: 12/15/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

To be continued? even better I thought it was a one shot :)

Definitely tracking you.

Author's Response: It was originally intended as a one-shot, but I'm 90% sure at this point that I'll expand it. Am currently brainstorming. Glad to have you tracking! I'll try not to disappoint.

A down on their luck protagonist, constantly beset by misfortune, finds themselves abducted, summoned into a dimension that is a mirror of hell by a demoness looking for an apprentice.

This a story about healing, new beginnings, finding and forming chosen family, transition and choices.

Another light novel set in my narrative universe of Magic, Witches, Gods, Demons, Dragons, Superheros, Supervillains and infinite connected dimensions.
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 7577 Words: 3430 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: Family Household, Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Mythical Setting, Romance, Second Childhood
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 01/20/19
Updated: 03/08/19
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed
Date: 03/17/19 Title: Chapter 3: Part 3: Sanctum

So you put up a couple chapters to tease, then want people to pay 10$ for the rest of the story.. I don't even pay that for a new book to read from a store. sorry.

Sam is a quiet 16 year old high school guy. He's a nerd and a geek. A pretty typical guy. When his friends try to peer pressure him into playing the tank role for the new VR game they all want to play, he rebels, although he can't quite figure out why. Follow Sam as he dives into the world of Pellan Rise as the dainty little healer named Sylanna, where he discovers that the game has a lot more influence over the real world than everyone thought.
Rated: Adult 306 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 197716 Words: 34674 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: High School, Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Women
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Mythical Setting, Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Intense Violence
Series: Kammi-verse, The Andrare Legacy
Published: 02/06/19
Updated: 02/03/20
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed
Date: 02/07/19 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Getting blood everywhere

This was fantastic. I am definitely adding it to my tracked list for when you update. Please, please say your gonna keep writing :)

Author's Response: Definitely going to keep writing! I'm currently writing the 6th chapter right now, should be finished soonnnn

Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed
Date: 02/27/19 Title: Pellan Rise

you are the writer, so do what feels right to you, I'm gonna keep reading either way. personally I don't need smut to tell a good story though :)

Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed
Date: 03/02/19 Title: Pellan Rise

If anyone is giving you bad reviews they need to be taken out back and shot. this is one of the few stories I am tracking that I constantly look forward to the updates, I love everything about this.

Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed
Date: 03/04/19 Title: Pellan Rise

Noooooooooo.....

Callum is alone in the States applying for a job as an engineer when the world changes forever. In an event called the Emergence he is changed. Fox ears and a tail greet the newly minted girl in a mirror. On the run from the abusive system, she is forced to turn to crime to survive.
Rated: Explicit 240 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 111481 Words: 27933 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Masks
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Personality: Bad to Good, Good to Bad, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Costume or Halloween, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 03/03/19
Updated: 07/20/19
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04/01/19 Title: Kammi Kettu

Keeps getting better and better.

Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/19 Title: Kammi Kettu

If only Magic could fix those of us who don't "fit" like that. Still love the story tho :)

Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/27/19 Title: Kammi Kettu

But the rating only goes to 5, can I give it ++ on top?

Finding himself kicked out of his foster parents’ home on the night of the Emergence, John Doe Smith doubted even his luck could get any worse.

Now irrevocably changed by the Emergence into what many see as a monster, the newly dubbed Wraith must now deal with the consequences of her new powers in an unfriendly world.
Rated: Adult 96 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 49422 Words: 71972 Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character
Locale: Family Household, Prison
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown, Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Captive, Everyday Living, Mythical Setting, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Torture
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 03/15/19
Updated: 06/21/20
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/26/19 Title: Chapter 21: Interlude 4: Mystrix Pallas, Part 1

Wonderful, I was wondering if there was backstory planned on some of the side characters.

Superheroes have existed for a while now. And Sydney, since he was young, always wanted to be one. But since he has no powers, he has to fight villains with only the technology he creates. One day, a supervillain named The Magician starts to make superheroes disappear. This wouldn't have bothered Sydney, until The Magician comes to his home town.
Rated: Adult 11 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 3355 Words: 4352 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 03/16/19
Updated: 03/17/19
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed
Date: 03/17/19 Title: Chapter 1: Sydney's Story

That was fun, it seems like it could be the beginning of a much larger story tho, I gotta admit I'm hoping for more :)

Jacob Redd was an ordinary guy working a soul crushing salary job when the world went bonkers. Suddenly finding herself as a wolf girl, the newly dubbed Johanna Redd had no idea how life would play out, but she just knew it would be trouble. Trouble, as it turned out, was a murder mystery, an alluring woman, and a whole lot of drinking. Not in that order.

The Kammi Kettu universe was created by QuietValerie. I just have the fun of bringing my mess of a character into the mix.
Rated: Explicit 49 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 11467 Words: 51746 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 03/26/19
Updated: 05/30/19
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03/28/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Something Soon

Wonderful start, will be keeping an eye open for future installments

Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/19 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Drugs With Friends

Oh Ho, a connection to the other stories in the series. Bonus :)

Author's Response: It's going to take a while, but we're going to slowly tease out the connections between these characters more. Redd has had a busy two years between the Emergence and when this story takes place.

Author's Response: It's going to take a while, but we're going to slowly tease out the connections between these characters more. Redd has had a busy two years between the Emergence and when this story takes place.

Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04/11/19 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - I Want You To Know I'm Awake

Still here, still enjoying it, waiting for more connections in the story but hey, I'm here for the duration :)

Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/02/19 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9.5- Hey, Wolfy, Take Off Your Clothes pt. 2

Wow, it just keeps getting better.

Steve has one wish: To be some girl's slave, any girl really. He wants it so much he harasses women online - but he might have just picked the wrong one.
Rated: Deviant 20 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 54217 Words: 41741 Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Maid, Sissy, Slave
Featured Items: High Heels, Maid Uniform
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Curse, Female Domination, Forced, Revenge, Tricked
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Captive, Everyday Living, Horror, Humiliation, Mind/Body Posession, Witchcraft
Series: None
Published: 03/30/19
Updated: 04/28/19
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04/08/19 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Interesting and you seem to have a basic grasp of the Fae, you got my attention :)

Cyrus Sutton, an ex-engineer at a luxury car firm in England is struck by the Emergence shortly after being fired from his job.
Changed into a Cyborg with Psionic powers, emotionally unstable, jobless, and with a growing distrust of the authorities. Under the alias Eunos. Cy is set to wreak havoc on the town and governmental systems hellbent to bring her under their control.
This is set in the same Universe as QuietValerie's Kammi Kettu and as such works under the same ideals and laws as her and all the other authors works, I hope you enjoy it!
Rated: Explicit 38 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 15893 Words: 50498 Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Masks, Pantyhose
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Personality: Good to Bad, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Costume or Halloween, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Mechanical Device
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 05/12/19
Updated: 09/14/19
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/26/19 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Night Fever

Great chapter, love where this is heading 👍👍

One morning, 17 year-old Trevor Bailey discovers that his suburbanite parents are actually reality-hopping secret agents... and things only get stranger from there. When the family is assigned to a new reality, Trevor is caught up in a body-bending mix-up that sees him and his friends changing in unexpected ways. Can Trevor unravel the plot to edit his new reality before he's stuck in a reality he isn't from in a body he never wanted?
Rated: Adult 25 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 39238 Words: 36641 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/28/19 Title: Chapter 7: CHAPTER SEVEN: ELECTROLUX

Feels a lot like classic Jack L Chalker story, and thats a very good thing indeed

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I've read a lot of classic science fiction, so this story is no doubt influenced by that. Hopefully, it continues to be enjoyable!

Mia Blake is a musician in a city with no music scene. Knowing she must take a chance and gamble to change her fortunes, when the opportunity comes for her to move cities, she jumps at the chance. She hadn't planned on waking up in her hotel room with her body completely changed and a city burning outside.


Set in QuietValerie's ėKammi Kettu" universe. Thank you to her and the other amazing authors for their support!


This story is queer as f**k and contains strong LGBTQ+ themes. Also has bits of cuteness, I promise :)
Rated: Explicit 10 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 11603 Words: 12723 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Girlfriend
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Good to Bad
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Women, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Mythical Setting, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 07/11/19
Updated: 11/04/19
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07/14/19 Title: Chapter 1: Future Starts Slow

Interesting enough start, will follow 😁

You have some odd formatting errors tho with words having random characters added on.

When Robin takes the zeta tube to Gotham one night, he realizes that something bizarre has happened. He is now a girl and who is to blame but Wally West. Set after YJ season 1. Possible AU and collection of one-shots. Awkward and humorous stories told through Robin's eyes. (Female Dick Grayson)
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 2156 Words: 2098 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: Masks, School Uniform, Work Uniform
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Comedy, Coming of Age, Fan Fiction, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 08/24/19
Updated: 08/28/19
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08/28/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

An interesting enough start. worth tracking :)

Cal Kestis, once a lowly ship scrapper found himself thrust into a perilous journey to rebuild the Jedi Order 5 years after Order 66 initiated the Jedi Purge.

While searching an alien temple constructed by alien force users, he encounters his most powerful enemy yet.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 3371 Words: 2843 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Twin
Locale: Labratory
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Good to Bad
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Fan Fiction
Type of Change: Body Swap, Identity Theft, Mind Control
Series: None
Published: 11/22/19
Updated: 11/22/19
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/23/19 Title: Chapter 1: Cal Kestis

an interesting start. love the artwork at the bottom, is this connected to the new game?

Author's Response: This is based off of the newest video game: Star Wars Jedi: Fallen Order.

Lucas is a 22 year old guy, or so it would seem, somewhat stuck in life thanks to his oppressive parents. But all of this changes when he starts playing the full-dive VRMMORPG Turn of Destiny 19, which he got from his loving sister.
Rated: Adult 10 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 30774 Words: 38776 Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 12/05/19
Updated: 04/06/20
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/28/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Birthday

Totally loved this, here is hoping I dont have to survive another 40 years waiting for a Vrmmo to show up

Author's Response: Let's all pray to the Goddess for this!

Cataloging the genetic code of every intelligent species in the quadrant may not be a fun job, but it's relatively straightforward - at least, until the crew of Scout Craft Zeta Three stumble upon Earth, an entire world full of beings who can't clone themselves. Fortunately, they might have a way to use the dominant species' own biology to complete their mission. Unfortunately, for one unlucky human their plan has drastic consequences.
Rated: Explicit 14 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 34866 Words: 10257 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/09/20 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

loving everything about this, keep it coming.

Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/04/20 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am liking these aliens probably far more than I should. It feels like Hitchikers guide to the galaxy. :)

Wolverine is a mystery, even to himself. But he is also a survivor. With the help of Professor X and Jean Grey he is learning to trust and, in the case of Jean Grey, to love. But what if everything that has helped him survive and cope is turned against him? How will the Wolverine survive when he can’t claw his way out or heal himself? Will rage devour him and lead him into the unending madness of a mindless, desperate wild creature, or is there another way - a way he could never have anticipated? A way that involves love and sex, but is not without peril.

Feral Saga Title Image

original title image source: https://astonishingx.tumblr.com/image/134755978643

There are unique chapter title images as well.

Rated: Explicit 22 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 34657 Words: 166667 Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Twin
Featured Items: Sex Toys
Motivation for Change: Accident, Tricked
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Fan Fiction, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Intense Violence, Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 03/21/20
Updated: 06/08/20
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/21/20 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Sin

Very interesting start, more to come soon I hope. will be tracking.

Author's Response: Thank you! I have 15 chapters written so far and I'm pretty close to the end. I started publishing on another TG site (BigCloset) back in August. I will probably publish weekly here, on Saturdays. I'm still finding grammar and spelling issues that make me cringe, so I do want to spend a little time getting the chapters right, even if it's the second time 'round. I hope you enjoy my little tale, there's many twists to come.

Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/28/20 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Betrayal

Loving it so far. eagerly awaiting the next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks for reaching out, I really appreciate it. I'm nearing the end, so I might publish a little more often once I complete it, but for now I think weekly. Starting with Chapter 3, I think the cover shots become truly awesome. This is my first story ever, so it took me a little while to find my voice and hit my stride. I think it really starts to take off around Chapter 5. I hope you stick around and continue to enjoy it.

Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/04/20 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Duped

Loving this except for one niggling issue, is this the version of Wolverine where he no longer has the Adamantium? because otherwise the healing factor might have done some really painful things trying to reshape the body around the skeleton. :)

Author's Response: Yep, the adamantium is there and you'll see how the mutant healing factor is dealing with it over the next few chapters. I didn't forget or not understand, it was actually part of my original inspiration for the story. I do hope you like how I resolve it and will let me know one way or the other.

Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/11/20 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - New Player

Loving every word.

Author's Response: Wow, I hope I got all the typos. Thanks, I'm really glad you're enjoying it. The next chapter is where I feel like I kinda hit my stride and found my voice. I'm almost done with the full story, so I'll probably post it a little faster than once/week.

Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/20/20 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - Choices

So far I'm only having one issue, how did his Adamantium bones reshape into ones that would fit a copy of Jeans body. I'm hoping you have some sort of a plan to explain that at some point.

Author's Response: So you want to make sure that the guy with retractable claws in his forearms, made from a metal that can't be cut or melted by any conventional means, could have his mutant healing factor (which allows him to heal from anything, even regrow limbs if they could be cut off) used against him so that he is essentially a duplicate of the girl who can read minds and use telekinesis to move huge objects, in a way that is believable? While that does make me giggle, I actually do get it. Thanks for sticking with the story. The end of this paragraph could be a slight spoiler for people, but I think I can phrase it so I don't give too much away. I promise that this very issue was part of the inspiration for the story. Remember, this isn't Hugh Jackman. It is a Logan who is slightly shorter than Jean and the amount of his skeleton that is bone and the amount that is adamantium is a little vague. But, if you can stick it out until Chapter 10 you'll see that it is a major plot point. Thanks soooo much for commenting, it really is great to know you're invested enough in the story to "talk back to it". I can't wait to hear what you think of my comic book technobabble when I explain what is happening.

Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04/27/20 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - Revelation

I would have still given it a 5, but the overly graphic sex scenes are throwing off th pacing of the story a bit for me :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reaching out and letting me know. I'm sorry that anything is getting in the way of your enjoyment, but I am glad to see that you still think it's a worthwhile read. When I decided to write my first story and chose this"fever dream" of an idea, I decided to challenge myself to write it with all the action, romance, humor, violence, and sex that was in my original idea and try to make relatable characters that seemed real, even if they were superheroes. Some of what they do isn't supposed to be normal. But, I guess not everyone is going to feel like I performed at the same level with each of my challenges. In my defense, I do warn everyone in the tags and it IS a TG fantasy site... But I do hope you'll keep reading.

Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/08/20 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - Reckoning (Part 1)

I think I might have stayed away from the X-23 references myself, but otherwise Great stuff. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I hope you were ok with my technobabble about the healing factor and the adamantium. As for the X-23 references, I'm sorry, I just couldn't resist adding another inside joke. Plus it allows me to use X-23 pictures to represent Lolo without having an anachronistic X-23 logo pop up. But mostly it was just for fun. Thanks for commenting, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/29/20 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17 - Restoration

Wow. Finally got caught up on this and I have to say I love it. I mean sometimes the Sex is a little over descriptive for my personal tastes, but the story and the emotion behind it is what I come for anyway :)

Can I give it more than 5 stars?

Author's Response: Hahaha, I wish you could, it'd make up for when I was underperforming for you and got a 4! But welcome back, I really thought I'd lost you back on Chapter 12, but Maria's been keeping me going. I'm so glad that the story is entertaining you and I really appreciate you reaching out to let me know. The sex, as I've said, was purposely written to be very explicit and not what I plan to do in most of my future stories, but this was my first story ever and I wanted to see if I could do it.

Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/09/20 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 19 - Progeny

Nailed it. But please don't quit, I really enjoyed your style.

Author's Response: I'm not quitting, but I'm not sure if I'll get back to Lolo. But we'll see. Thank you so much for all your kind words and encouragement!

Do Dragons exist? Do aliens exist?... what if they're the same thing?... A prelude to the main story I have in mind, a sort of intro of some of the main characters: Wrex, Skylen, the rest of Strike Team Fury, Reikon and her sister Arisu. The TG coming up in the last chapter soon before we move onto the next story ;)
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 4967 Words: 39042 Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Alien
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes, Loses Identity
Story Theme: Historical Time Period, Medical Experiment, Mythical Setting, Romance
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Mechanical Device
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 04/30/20
Updated: 06/05/20
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/02/20 Title: Chapter 2: Scheming

A very interesting start at least, will track, I did notice a couple minor spelling errors, but nothing earth shattering.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review... yeah, my spelling and grammar is not the best, never has been... I keep going back and noticing mistakes. My problem is, I'm writing this on the fly, not copying and pasting or uploading like I probably should, and due to my work at the mo, not having much time to proof read until later :/ My bad, will try and work on it :)

Munki, @GoodboyeMunki "If the teacher is 15 minutes late we are legally allowed to take the class nerd and put him in the girl's uniform." May 19, 2020, 10:23 AM, Tweet.
A short piece of fluff inspired by this quoted tweet
Rated: Kid-Friendly 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 1273 Words: 1187 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Forced
Story Theme: Comedy, Everyday Living
Series: None
Published: 05/21/20
Updated: 05/21/20
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/24/20 Title: Chapter 1: Somehow, Just Like My Mangas

Loved it.

Clark's sister Sophie is bothering him again, trying to get him to hang out with her and her friend. He eventually plays along, walking right into her magical trick and a regrettable night. Things really get out of hand, however, when it doesn't wear off.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 10 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 24778 Words: 72054 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Curse, Dared into It, Tricked
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Witchcraft
Type of Change: Age Regression, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 08/29/20
Updated: 09/05/20
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/07/20 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue - Roles

That was Fantastic, I love the perspective on your storytelling and how it all resolved.

Ambrose is getting to spend two whole semesters in Japan! In a world where all of Japan, and all people and things within its borders are an anime, how will this American teen manage? Especially when his stay involves certain... changes no one was expecting.
Rated: Adult 1 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 1107 Words: 3711 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Lingerie, Maid Uniform, School Uniform
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Comedy, Everyday Living, Mythical Setting, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 09/19/20
Updated: 09/20/20
Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/20/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hehe, an Anime version of Toontown from Roger Rabbit. I Love it.

Author's Response: Hehehehehehe, it does raise the question of if there would be anime in that universe if the story came back in the modern world! And I love writing it! I'm so happy that you enjoy it so far!

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