cpisballa
Waiting for one of these magic stories to actaully happen to me.
Member Since: 04/23/14 Membership status: Member
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Reviews by cpisballa
Kids, they are a playful sort, aren’t they?
Rated: Adult 7 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 11252 Words: 8221 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Daughter
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Blackmailed, Revenge
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes, Loses Identity
Story Theme: Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 01/27/11
Updated: 01/27/11
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/18/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow that was an amazing story! So glad to have come across it! 5 stars for sure!

Tommy's working on an essay, when his pencil breaks. He grabs a new one, and realizes that everything he writes with it comes true. With that in mind, he decides to give his girlfriend an early birthday gift.
Rated: Explicit 12 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 68296 Words: 1868 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Romance
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 09/22/12
Updated: 09/23/12
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/29/14 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great story please make a series out of it. I'd like to see maybe the holder of the pencil change people into other things like objects along with the opposite gender.

Jerry a middle schooler who has no girlfriends friends or even a perfect life. Then after being given unlimited wishes he gains all he's ever wanted in a night. But when he wakes up it will be all different. The catch? Jerry must be female.
Rated: Adult 12 Reviews starstar Story Incomplete Reads: 20415 Words: 765 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01/03/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like the premise but slow the fuck down.

Mitchell is a man who as made his ideal woman, 3 of them
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starstarstar Completed Story Reads: 9831 Words: 195 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed
Date: 07/20/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Eh needs work. You should elaborate more. Oh and work on your spelling.

Reviewer: cpisballa Signed
Date: 07/20/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Eh needs work. You should elaborate more. Oh and work on your spelling.

When Will's mom brings home a gift, he changes.
Rated: Adult 6 Reviews starstar Completed Story Reads: 15781 Words: 1285 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Daughter, Girlfriend, Teenager
Featured Items: Bikinis, Undies
Locale: Family Household, Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Accident
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion
Type of Change: Body Swap, Changed by Clothing, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 06/09/13
Updated: 06/09/13
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstar
Date: 09/29/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I thought it was just kinda meh for the reasons other people are saying

A young man in his twenties owns a junk shop. One day, he buys a set of rings. He comes to realize that each ring has a different power that changes the world around him, including himself.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 14 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 33385 Words: 8849 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Accident
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 07/02/13
Updated: 08/08/14
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 10/22/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's a great story don't get me wrong but I wish it moved at tad bit quicker.

If you were a child who was beaten every waking hour and realized that your greatest fantasies would become true, many would know you would take this chance.
Rated: Explicit 7 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 30781 Words: 640 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend, Model, Teenager
Featured Items: Bikinis, School Uniform
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Curse, Revenge, Unknown, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Good to Bad, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual, Changes to be Attracted Only to Men, Changes to be Attracted Only to Women
Story Theme: Genie/Wishes, Mind/Body Posession, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Age Regression, Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 07/14/13
Updated: 08/25/14
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed
Date: 07/22/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 : Unknown Ventures

Very good start!

im new to this
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 5017 Words: 214 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Featured Items: Pantyhose, Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Castrated/Neutered, Sexual Reassignment Surgery, Vaginal Alteration
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Series: None
Published: 09/09/13
Updated: 09/09/13
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed star
Date: 09/29/14 Title: Chapter 1: the lips

I'm not normally this blunt but that was bad. Needs tons of work and expansion.

My first story, please be gentle. I hope you enjoy.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 4 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 4570 Words: 390 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: None
Type of Change: Drug-Induced
Series: None
Published: 09/16/13
Updated: 09/16/13
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/29/14 Title: Chapter 1: A New Beginning?

Great first story! Would love to see you write more stories!

Michale, a 15 years old boy is kidnapped by a mysterious organization called WIFEfactory. He doesn't know what will happen to him in the future, and he can only hope that he will have a happy life... eventually...
Rated: Kid-Friendly 6 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 9472 Words: 1233 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Bride, Mother, Wife
Locale: Labratory
Motivation for Change: Forced
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Artificial Age Progression, Mechanical Device
Series: None
Published: 10/12/13
Updated: 10/12/13
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/27/14 Title: Chapter 1: WIFEfactory

I thought your grammar was actually pretty good! Great story!

I have moved to a new apartment with my friends but when I get back a genie which has recently being freed decides to experiment sexually with me, this changing me.
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstar Completed Story Reads: 11027 Words: 2406 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: None
Featured Items: Sex Toys
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Genie/Wishes
Series: None
Published: 12/23/13
Updated: 12/24/13
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/03/15 Title: Chapter 1: Genie messes with dicks

Really don't understand how this only has 3 stars. Great story. 5 stars or sure.

P.S. make sure to capitalize names. "tye" threw me off a couple times but very insignificant since the story was so good. Keep it up!

after Robert gets hit by a limousine he wakes up completely healed thanks to an untested drug only he is no longer he!
Rated: Kid-Friendly 4 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 2526 Words: 978 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Not Applicable
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: High School, Hospital or Clinic
Body Modification: Permanent Hair/Skin/Nail Change
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Drug-Induced
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 01/22/14
Updated: 01/22/14
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed
Date: 07/20/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Pretty good just lay off the parenthesis a bit.

Colene is the envy of every girl in St. Mary's Academy, and Jamie seems strangely drawn to her ever since Colene first moved into the school a few weeks back.
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 7209 Words: 1783 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Featured Items: Corsets, High Heels, School Uniform
Locale: Girl's School, High School
Story Theme: Mind/Body Posession
Type of Change: Body Suit, Fast/Instant Change, Identity Theft
Series: None
Published: 02/01/14
Updated: 02/01/14
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/12/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome story so far! Can't wait to see where this goes!

Husband forced to live a new life after making his wife mad for the last time.
Rated: Adult 17 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 104077 Words: 15068 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Clothing, Daughter, Mannequin, Object, Teenager
Locale: Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Forced, Revenge
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 02/22/14
Updated: 05/18/16
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/01/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I absolutely love this story! Im gonna be so sad when its over! I'd give it a 10 out of 5 if I could.

Author's Response: Lol! Thank you!

Reviewer: cpisballa Signed
Date: 06/15/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I wish posted chapters more frequently! I can never wait for the next chapter!

Jamie is wrote a letter of complaint to Strange Potions & Funny Foods Co. because his plan to hear out his friend Arnold backfired. He tried to uncover some lies with the Truth Syrup. But when Arnold drank the whole bottle instead of just a little mixed with water, the line between the truth and lies was permanently crossed.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 4 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 3472 Words: 1264 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Undies
Motivation for Change: Forced, Male Domination, Tricked
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Type of Change: Mind Control
Series: None
Published: 05/06/14
Updated: 05/06/14
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/20/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story! I also love your other story too. I'd like to see a longer version of this one that is just full of transformations of different kinds.

Dan was a man that loved women, but could never get one. After he finds a genie, he tries to make the world, a more feminine place.
Rated: Explicit 54 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 129200 Words: 5531 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Bimbo, Girlfriend, Object
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement
Motivation for Change: Dared into It, Forced, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Made Dumber
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Genie/Wishes, Humiliation
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change, Mind Control
Series: The Wish
Published: 05/18/14
Updated: 06/02/14
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/08/14 Title: Chapter 1: The Genie

This is an amazing story!!!!!!!!! I wish there was more stories on here where people were turned into things other than a different human! I just loved how you turned Lewis into boobs!!!! Great job man.

Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/08/14 Title: Chapter 1: The Genie

This is an amazing story!!!!!!!!! I wish there was more stories on here where people were turned into things other than a different human! I just loved how you turned Lewis into boobs!!!! Great job man.

Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/05/15 Title: Chapter 1: The Genie

Just came across this story again and really enjoyed reading it again! Would love to see a sequel!

The women's bathroom wasn't a good place to fall into. Nathan now knows why.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 6 Reviews starstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 6211 Words: 615 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: None
Turned Into: Girlfriend, Prostitute, Teenager
Body Modification: Permanent Hair/Skin/Nail Change
Motivation for Change: Accident, Forced
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Series: None
Published: 05/19/14
Updated: 05/19/14
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstar
Date: 01/03/15 Title: Chapter 1: The Stumble

Agreed with everyone... The content is good out presentation needs to be better

Joe's life was shit on at a young age. but with help of his childhood friend, her life will be the best she could ask for.
Rated: Adult 8 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 20722 Words: 13681 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Girlfriend
Featured Items: High Heels, Long Nails, Undies
Body Modification: Ears Pierced, Extreme Surgical Alteration
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Personality: Bad to Good, Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Mind Control, Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Bodily Functions
Series: None
Published: 06/22/14
Updated: 06/24/14
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed
Date: 06/24/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story has promise but the grammar is just terrible. Revise the story and I'll read it.

Two schoolmates discover they're both little girls at heart: it's a thrilling saga of dressing-up, playing with dolls, diapers, spankings and an afternoon of kinky sex with a 17-year-old bondage mistress. Bet you can't keep your panties on until the end.
Rated: Explicit 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 8739 Words: 5153 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/19/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi! I liked your story very much! Great job. As for what u should write next I think a story about maybe someone getting/having the power to change people into anything. I really enjoy stories like that. Please consider my suggestion! And once again, great story.

Author's Response: Thanx cpisballa (interesting name, by the way) for your comments. I understand your fascination with magical transformations, I know there's many of us girls writing about it. However, I try to write stories that could actually take place in the real world, even though, as in this story, there's about a million to one chance of that ever happening. That doesn't mean there's not some way of weaving magic into a future tale. A good idea is a good idea, and doing what we do is always magic. You take care, sweetheart, love Jane

This is a side Story of Cosmic Balance: The Book and it covers Velvet's first usage of the book as well as the aftermath of Sally's story.
Rated: Adult 1 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 8138 Words: 3746 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Doll, Object
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: Family Household, Girl's School
Motivation for Change: Revenge
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: Cosmic Balance
Published: 09/08/14
Updated: 09/09/14
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/10/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Detention

Absolutely Terrific story! I really hope you continue this series!

Author's Response: Thank you, though I don't know where to go next. Do I keep focus on the book and Librarian or do I bring up other magic users in the universe and any conduits they might use? I have set the series as open so anyone can add to it. If you have any suggestions on what you'd like to see feel free to contact me.

Boy teases his sister and ends up being a beautiful cheerleader!!
Rated: Adult 7 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 10844 Words: 1859 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Sissy
Featured Items: Diapers
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Dared into It
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Type of Change: Mind Control
Series: None
Published: 09/24/14
Updated: 09/24/14
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/24/14 Title: Chapter 1: Cheerbaby Time

Great story hope u continue

A college student's life changes overnight thanks to a visit from a late night stranger.
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 6001 Words: 1033 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Series: None
Published: 10/08/14
Updated: 10/08/14
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/23/14 Title: Chapter 1: Sam

Great story! I love to read short stories like this one.

A young man finds a device that can turn someone into anything that he could ever imagine.
Rated: Explicit 20 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 138430 Words: 17439 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/22/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I absolutely love this story! Can't wait to see where you take this and to see what exactly happens when Alex turns someone into an object rather than a different person.

Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/12/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Since you ask for suggestions on where to go, I'd like to see one of the girls turned into a sex toy and the other into some type of sex robot/doll/machine.

A bullied teenager finds a magic wand in his closet and what follows is his hilarious journey in the world of comedy of errors!
Rated: Adult 9 Reviews starstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 75042 Words: 3660 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: None
Turned Into: Bimbo, Girlfriend, Teenager
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Revenge
Story Type: Comic
Story Theme: Comedy, Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: Revenge
Published: 10/28/14
Updated: 03/26/15
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed
Date: 01/12/15 Title: Chapter 1: Midnight Scare

Now that it's all cleared up and I'm not confused anymore.... I really like your story! Can't wait to see some more chapters! Will there be more use of the wand for TG purposes?

Author's Response: Yep. TG imagination may be at its peak level along with the suspense and dramatic storyline! Keep reading and writing reviews to help me with the story.

Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstar
Date: 01/04/15 Title: Chapter 1: Midnight Scare

You lost me in chapter 4... Is there something I'm missing?

Author's Response: That will be clear in next chapter where it will be connected to the present situation and the upcoming comedy of errors. Will be full of surprises!!

Reviewer: cpisballa Signed
Date: 01/05/15 Title: Chapter 1: Midnight Scare

Ok thank you for the clarification!

Author's Response: I'm New here. But I promise, the readers would like my work!

What if you had a Notepad, one that made whatever you wrote in it come true.
This is that story.

With Great Power, comes Great Responsibility.
Rated: Explicit 23 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 268818 Words: 9634 Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/20/14 Title: Chapter 1: The Shop

I'm a huge fan of when people are changed into objects or body parts (for example I've read stories where people were turned into tables and also people being turne into the breasts of an attractive woman) idk just a thought Id really like to see it. Great first few chapters though

Wishes can take all sorts of unexpected directions, as the protagonist discovers.
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 23857 Words: 1836 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Featured Items: Maid Uniform
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Genie/Wishes
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 12/29/14
Updated: 01/03/15
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/04/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very interesting. Id like to see a sequel come out. Maybe a little longer? Either way, great story.

Author's Response: Thanks! I might eventually try more like another version, but probably not soon.

A man dies and is offered a deal; he may return to life but he will inhabit a body of a malevolent deity's choosing. He is dropped into a teenage girl's body, which he thinks isnt so bad, until he learns the hard way his new body is destined to be abducted and modified beyond his wildest wet dreams.
Rated: Explicit 114 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 601370 Words: 37863 Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/12/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: I died.

Very good! Can't wait to see where this goes!

Author's Response: Ive got this thing planned out for a while... Stick around you're in for a wild ride :)

A trio of friends, Zack, Brandon, and Kate, find a beat up old board game in the attic of Zack's new house. With all other forms of entertainment stick packed away in boxes, they decided to appease their boredom and play the weird game.
Rated: Adult 9 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 10462 Words: 1748 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Accident
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 01/16/15
Updated: 01/16/15
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/16/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is so much like my story! It's interesting to see another person write a story similar to mine because it's cool to see what other people come up with even in a very similar story.

Ryan finds a lamp and satisfies his desires
Rated: Adult 6 Reviews starstarstar Completed Story Reads: 15035 Words: 5875 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: None
Turned Into: Bimbo, Model, Prostitute, Stripper
Featured Items: Bikinis, Boots, Breast Forms, High Heels, Lingerie, Pantyhose, School Uniform, Undies
Locale: High School
Body Modification: Breast Implants, Extreme Breast Enlargement, Extreme Penis Enlargement, Permanent Hair/Skin/Nail Change, Vaginal Alteration
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Series: None
Published: 02/20/15
Updated: 02/20/15
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/21/15 Title: Chapter 1: The lamp

I'm giving it 4 stars, would be five with paragraphs. It was pretty well written and ha good material.

Three friends agree to split the wishes granted to them by a genie.
Rated: Adult 1 Reviews starhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 14529 Words: 354 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstar
Date: 07/14/15 Title: Chapter 1: Friendly Wishes

This story has a very decent base but needs more details to make it a truly good story. For example, why did a character want to have sex with another character's mom and why did another character want to become another character's mom even after knowing she was about to have sex with one of his friends? How did these 3 come across this genie? With more details and explanations this could be a good story. I encourage you to keep writing!

Victor's remote suddenly starts exhibiting special transformative powers, and he chooses to use it on his roommate Tyler.
Rated: Adult 1 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 10409 Words: 1161 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Baby, Mother, Teenager
Featured Items: Bikinis
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Accident, Forced, Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Humiliation, Pregnancy
Type of Change: Age Regression, Mechanical Device
Series: None
Published: 04/19/16
Updated: 04/19/16
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/24/16 Title: Chapter 1: In a Flash

Great story... just wish it was a little longer. Maybe play around some more with all the functions on a remote.

A boy possesses a wand that lets him bend reality to his will. After giving in to some very base desires, he realizes he has a very personal journey in front of him. He won't make it alone.
Rated: Explicit 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 60533 Words: 4954 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Baby, Bimbo, Cheerleader, Child, Daughter, Model, Teenager, Twin, Wife
Locale: Family Household
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement, Extreme Penis Enlargement
Motivation for Change: Male Domination, Unknown
Personality: Loses Identity, Made Dumber
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Women, Does Not Change
Type of Change: Age Regression, Cultural, Racial, Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Incest, Politically Incorrect
Series: None
Published: 05/01/16
Updated: 05/08/16
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/01/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please continue this story. This is by far my favorite type of story... can't wait to see where you go with this.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm hoping to add two chapters per week at this point. Maybe more as the summer gets on.

A horny teenage boy falls for an attractive woman. Little does he know that she has different desires.
Rated: Explicit 8 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 33587 Words: 2700 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend, Maid, Slave
Featured Items: Lingerie, Maid Uniform, Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Weight Gain
Motivation for Change: Female Domination, Revenge, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Women, Does Not Change
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Captive, Humiliation, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Bondage/S&M, Politically Incorrect
Series: None
Published: 07/03/16
Updated: 07/03/16
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07/04/16 Title: Chapter 1: Candid Cameraboy

Great story so far... Maybe make her an infant? Or maybe make her pregnant? Or turn her into a dildo for her captor to use? Just some ideas

Josh and Charley have an interesting evening when they realise the coin josh bought the day before granted any wish they desired
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 58515 Words: 7807 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend, Twin
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Genie/Wishes
Type of Change: Primarily Female to Male
Series: None
Published: 08/18/16
Updated: 11/13/16
Reviewer: cpisballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/24/16 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love this story. I can really get into people changing into different types of animals and objects. I'd love to see some more of that. It seems this story may be coming to an end and there may not be many more wishes but I'm really hoping for a lot more! Either way, can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Hey mate! I'm planning for at least ten chapters so there's plenty more for you too look forward to! :D I'm not sure about objects but I'm going to make some interesting animal/human cross related scenes. Thanks for the review

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