Zapper
Zapper has been reading TG fiction for a number of years and in December of 2011 he decided to try his hand at writing. Since that time he's become addicted to writing and plans to continue for several years.
Member Since: 04/09/14 Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Zapper
When he finds himself in the body of a bride-to-be, what will he do?
Rated: Adult 7 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 26239 Words: 8322 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Bride
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 01/26/11
Updated: 01/26/11
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/27/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I enjoyed this story.

Cheers
Zapper

a man makes a bet with his house keeper and regrets it ....
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 83769 Words: 3917 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo, Girlfriend, Slave
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Maid Uniform, Pantyhose, Work Uniform
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Lost a Bet, Revenge
Personality: Bad to Good, From Dominant to Submissive, Loses Identity, Made Dumber
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Humiliation
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 03/18/13
Updated: 03/18/13
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Date: 02/18/17 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Nice twisted tale. Calvin certainly got his comeuppance . . .

Cheers
Zapper

One evening, right in the middle of 'the act,' a husband and wife find their bodies changing gender. This transformation is not the only thing the two share, as the couple is just weeks away from becoming new parents.
Rated: Explicit 44 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 159299 Words: 30433 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Mother, Wife
Locale: Family Household, Office
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Story Theme: Pregnancy
Series: None
Published: 04/30/13
Updated: 03/07/14
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Brave New World

Paula adjusted pretty darn quick. lol - Did she plan it or is she just enjoying the turn of events?

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Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Mother Knows Best

Nice chapter. I like the character development and how he has a good healthy relationship with his mom.

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Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: You're Doing That All Wrong

Nikki is very understanding. There is some kind of vibe Paul is giving off that makes me not want to trust him.

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Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: My Lunch with Meghan

Nice dialogue in this chapter.

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Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Truth Will Out

Ah, the plot unfolds. Great chapter.

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Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Authority Figures and Their Discontents

Wow - I didn't expect that plot twist. Every woman in his life has betrayed him except his sister . . . so far. One plot problem. If only a woman can use the book, that would mean to swap back, they'd have to tell him eventually. Unless Niki's mom wanted him to be a woman forever.

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Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Private Performances

This bouncing from place to place is a bit odd. I'd think exhaustion would have caught up to Nikki.

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Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Implacable Urges

That is one powerful baby witch.

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Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Universal Contractions

What a twisted and unexpected chapter. I wonder, what was his mom's motivation in all of this? Really well written by the way. Nikki is a very likable/tragic character.

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Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Out of the Mouths of Babes

Really good story. I'm not sure I'd have forgiven Paul so quickly.

A (very) short story about a couple who decided to see how the other half lives.
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 14386 Words: 381 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Boyfriend, Girlfriend
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 08/19/13
Updated: 08/19/13
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/10/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love the ending. Hehehehe.

Allison desires to be strong and confident, but her delicate, submissive nature are at odds with those desires. One day she receives a mysterious jeweled pendant in the mail...
Rated: Explicit 15 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 37654 Words: 7432 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Husband, Wife
Featured Items: Lingerie
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident, Female Domination, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive, From Submissive to Dominant
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 09/24/13
Updated: 09/24/13
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Date: 09/01/18 Title: Chapter 1: Even Trade

Very sexy story.

In which a villainess sets out on a quest to seduce a hero, a hero must come to terms with the secret identity (s)he'd rather deny, and a mad scientist just tries to get some mad science done without getting distracted by the antics of her magical minion.
Rated: Explicit 347 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 642647 Words: 69415 Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Zapper Signed
Date: 07/20/14 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 29

I can't help but feel a little bad for Amethyst Star! I wonder why she doesn't just hang up her cape and walk away? Move on with her normal life and give up heroing?

OBTW - Great Story.

Author's Response: An excellent question! I suppose part of it is the 'sunk cost' fallacy - she has sacrificed so much to her heroics that quitting now would make all those sacrifices for nothing. What's more... Amethyst genuinely loved being a hero. It gave her purpose she did not have in her normal life.

Reviewer: Zapper Signed
Date: 07/20/14 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 36

Why do I feel bad for Cinder Snow? - Very well drawn chapter.

Cheers
Zapper

Author's Response: Excellent question! More seriously, for all her evilness, Amelia is a very lonely, unhappy person. It's hard not to feel for her at least a little. But then, I love all my characters, so I'm biased.

Reviewer: Zapper Signed
Date: 07/20/14 Title: Chapter 43: Epilogue

Wow - this really is an exceptional story. Hutcho told me I needed to read this and he was right. Thank you for sharing such a captivating story.

Cheers
Zapper

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed it ^_^

A fallen hero. An assassin. An unlikely meeting. The road to redemption is long and hard and filled with explosives.
Rated: Explicit 422 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 214185 Words: 73655 Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Mind/Body Posession, Mythical Setting, Romance
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Bondage/S&M, Intense Violence
Series: Paragon Verse
Published: 03/06/14
Updated: 04/13/14
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/19/17 Title: Chapter 43: Epilogue

This was fantastic. I loved the pacing and character development, and the holistic way you pulled all the plot threads together at the end. Bravo.

Cheers
Zapper

A man, newly transformed into a woman finds, finds himself alone with the smug jerk who stole his ex-girlfriend
Rated: Adult 7 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 6926 Words: 513 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Girlfriend
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Cultural/Nationality Change, From Dominant to Submissive, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Humiliation
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Racial, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 04/22/14
Updated: 04/22/14
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07/08/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very short, with so much hinted at yet not explored. This is a really nice short story, I just wish that you'd given us a tiny bit more back story so that we could appreciate this scene even more. All-in-all, well written and enjoyable. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you Zapper, I really appreciate your feedback. Perhaps a short backstory would be fun to write!

Skylar wants to 'move her relationship to the next level' with her boyfriend, but is afraid of the pains associated with doing so. Good thing she can swap bodies!
Rated: Explicit 16 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 20786 Words: 3380 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend, Teenager
Featured Items: Undies
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Forced, Tricked, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Mind/Body Posession, Romance
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 04/22/14
Updated: 05/07/14
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 10/11/15 Title: Chapter 2: A Desire

Great story . . . I get the feeling that Skylar is playing with fire here . . . it would also be interesting to see Skylar have a sexual experience while in his body. . .

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! We'll see what happens...

After attending a magic show, my wife and I are given a gift that draws our lives into unison.
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 23052 Words: 5612 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Husband, Wife
Featured Items: Undies
Locale: Family Household, Road Trip
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Body Swap, Changed by Clothing, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 07/10/14
Updated: 07/10/14
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/11/15 Title: Chapter 4: The pain of Love

Terrific story! The ending was sad, but not every story should have a happy ending.

A collection of 12 short, short stories from 12 different voices in TG fiction. Hit play and let them transport you from the world as it is now to fairy castles and dystopian futures and back again, and introduce you to gods, daemons, cross-dressers and criminals and much more.
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 14010 Words: 6648 Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Zapper Signed
Date: 07/29/14 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction + Liner Notes

I just wanted to add a note to thank Hutcho for another excellent job editing and posting this story! It was a lot of fun to be part of and I know how much work it takes to do something like this . . . so thank you.

Cheers
Zapper

Everyone’s favorite magical cassette is back! This month featuring 12 short, short stories that will transport you from the exclusive and dangerous worlds of royals and aristocrats, to slices of contemporary life, to the last days of Planet Earth, and an interview with Minikisa the author of “Of Heroes and Villains”.
Rated: Adult 9 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 20674 Words: 8911 Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Zapper Signed
Date: 09/23/14 Title: Chapter 15: Afterword

I just wanted to thank Hutcho for once again putting together a great collection. To my fellow authors; it was a blast working and collaborating with you. Until next month.

Cheers
Zapper

Marriage is all about sharing... sharing your hopes and dreams, your fears and your failures, your lives and even your bodies with one another. This story is about one couple who took that last part literally and made a game out of it. And wouldn’t you know it, take them too seriously and games have a way of getting out of hand...
Rated: Explicit 11 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 13324 Words: 4115 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Husband, Wife
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Pregnancy
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 10/08/14
Updated: 10/08/14
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/11/15 Title: Chapter 1: The Game: Hawk vs. Dove

Ha! Very well written story with a twist at the end I didn't see coming! Bravo!

A man helps his girlfriend to be more independent...but he's unaware of just how independent she wants to be!
Rated: Explicit 39 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 163290 Words: 23607 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Zapper Signed
Date: 02/28/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Happy Halloween

Very nice start! You've got some real talent. I like the way you showed us the details instead of just listing them. We got to experience the story instead of just reading it. Very nice character development. So far much of the plot is still being developed but its a good start.

I also like the way you did the swap. Please keep this one going!

Cheers
Zapper

Author's Response: Thank you so much! This is my first attempt at anything for this large a forum, and the response has been encouraging! Of course as soon as I post anything I can immediately see a hundred ways to improve it...but such is art I guess. Right now it's more important to get it out there and get it finished. It's got at least a couple more chapters to come yet...hopefully they'll be recieved the same way...:)

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Date: 07/09/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Happy Halloween

Very interesting chapter! The mystery builds, who was the woman casting the spell and what did she want? I think I know but I hope to see it in the next few chapters. Really nice writing so far!

Cheers
Zapper

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Date: 07/09/15 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 What now?

Ooohhhhh . . . got red handed . . . sotta speak. Why do I get the feeling that Mellie is about to take advantage? lol

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Date: 07/09/15 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Witch Witch is Witch

Ah, fun chapter, the plot thickens and me-thinks the magic is having an affect on poor Carl's mind. How long can she wear that hot little body and resist the urges that came with it?

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Date: 07/09/15 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 A Rough Night

Nice chapter, the conflict between the ego and the body is wonderful and the subtle taunting of Carl by Mellie hints of more to come. I really enjoyed this chapter.

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Date: 07/09/15 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Go Team Go

Wow, the plot really thickens, Mellie is manipulating Carl perfectly and he's too caught up in his new body to see it. Nice chapter.

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Date: 07/09/15 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: A change in perspective

And at last Carl succumbs to the desires of the body she's wearing . . . nice chapter.

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much..:) There is a little bit more to come, probably two more chapters before it wraps up...once a get a little more free time. I'm glad you're enjoying it!

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Date: 01/16/17 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 "Revelations"

Damn! Not the ending I was expecting and very abrupt. You should do a short epilogue to tie it all up.

Cheers
Zapper

Author's Response: Yes, there's one more chapter yet to come which will wrap everything up...:)

A young man discovers an ancient artifact with mysterious powers. After accidentally activating it, can he figure out how to use it to return to his own body before it's too late?
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 54226 Words: 7317 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Lingerie, Undies
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes, Mind/Body Posession, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change, Identity Theft, Stuck
Warnings: Bodily Functions
Series: None
Published: 12/16/14
Updated: 12/16/14
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 10/11/15 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm enjoying this story a lot! Very well written with an interesting plot. Just finished part one and am heading to part two.

Aaron's taste of being a woman got him hooked, and he's back to using the artifact for more sexy fun. However, he (or should I say, she?) quickly gets in over her head...
Rated: Explicit 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 37441 Words: 7319 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Lingerie, Undies
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes, Mind/Body Posession, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Age Regression, Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change, Identity Theft, Stuck
Warnings: Bodily Functions
Series: None
Published: 12/17/14
Updated: 12/17/14
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 10/11/15 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Really hot story! I hope that you continue it soon!

Evan's petite girlfriend has always longed to be able to take a more dominant role in a relationship. So he has offered to do whatever it takes to help her achieve that.
Rated: Explicit 19 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 50080 Words: 5568 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Boyfriend, Girlfriend
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Tricked, Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 05/29/15
Updated: 06/04/15
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 10/04/15 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Very nice chapter. I like the ingenuity he's using! I also am enjoying your exposition, and the way you built the tension and drama in this chapter. Really nicely done.

Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 10/04/15 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

LilacWren,

Very nice story! I enjoyed it a lot. If I were to offer one critical comment, this chapter felt a little rushed. Like you knew how you wanted to end it and jumped to that point. It would have been nice to see what happened to Evan once she got free, realizing that she had one choice if she wanted to escape the trap, and then her going to the police and the story she spun. It would have made for a great chapter.

But that's just my opinion. Thanks for sharing.

Cheers
Zapper

Author's Response: Zapper, Thanks for the reviews and feedback. I can certainly understand your opinion of the last chapter. Sometimes I'm a victim of my own short attention span. :)

Reviewer: Zapper Signed
Date: 10/04/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LilacWren,

Very nice first chapter! You do a great job with characterization, and really drew me into the story, I expected the twist, but not the reason for it! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Cheers
Zapper

A man engages in role-playing that suddenly becomes all too real.
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 15454 Words: 2698 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Tricked, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: From Submissive to Dominant
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 06/19/15
Updated: 06/19/15
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/10/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story.

When Abigail finds a magic pebble that can turn her into her son Sammie, she enjoys playing with him at his own level. But when Sammie gets his hands on the pebble and changes into her, she realises she has a big problem on her hands!
Rated: Kid-Friendly 4 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 9198 Words: 9925 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Child, Mother, Son
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive, Loses Identity, Made Dumber
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Second Childhood
Type of Change: Age Regression, Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change, Identity Theft, Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 07/01/15
Updated: 07/01/15
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/08/15 Title: Chapter 1: Stuck Too

This is a really well written story, with more going on than I'd thought at first. "Stuck Too" IMO - Is a tale of innocents and horror mixed together in a way that provides insight into human nature. A young mother succumbs to temptation and the desire to bond with her young son only to find out that children can be petulant and cruel. Emma does a fantastic job of reversing the roles in the end as the new adult realizes that she just can't steal the life of another and offers a way out. But at this point will the new child, using logic that only makes sense to a four year old, chose to return? ~ Bravo Emma!

A sextet of stories from six very different authors. Hit play on July’s Mixed Tape flash fiction collection for sea-creatures, sexy transformations, an interview with Amy Komori AND MORE!
Rated: Adult 1 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 11274 Words: 6649 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Zapper Signed
Date: 07/08/15 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction + Liner Notes

I just wanted to say thank you to Hutcho for keeping this project going. I've enjoyed the discussions, the friendship, and the stories.

Cheers
Zapper

Four friends from college decide to go on a road trip together but their journey comes to halt when they get caught in a sudden blizzard. Fortunately they find a large manor house to take refuge but soon discover that the manor has a big secret.
Rated: Explicit 7 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 20848 Words: 10953 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: Road Trip
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Story Theme: Mind/Body Posession
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 11/15/15
Updated: 11/15/15
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/27/18 Title: Chapter 4: Always Kana

Very well written. I really enjoyed this story.

Cheers
Zapper

When a business Tycoon swaps bodies with a woman not all is at is seems.
Rated: Deviant 2 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 22786 Words: 3764 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Mind/Body Posession
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 11/30/15
Updated: 11/30/15
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Date: 08/06/17 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Conclusion

Interesting twist. Very original.

Cheers
Zapper

Ashton Wilkins is a pretty ordinary guy - albeit pretty unlucky. His luck seems to change as he is invited to take part in the closed Beta of the greatest virtual reality game of his lifetime!
Rated: Deviant 59 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 222070 Words: 39725 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstar
Date: 11/29/16 Title: Chapter 1: Money, apparently, is everything

Interesting start.

A magical heirloom causes havoc in the household. Junior, Helen and Arty have discovered the secrets of an old family heirloom. Have you ever dreamed of becoming someone else, thought about being the opposite sex or just wanted to take a vacation from being you? Junior, Helen and Arty learn the hard way that it's not all it's cracked up to be. 4 Chapters. COMPLETE.
Rated: Deviant 15 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 35886 Words: 32720 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
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Date: 05/27/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Pendant

Hehehe . . . very cool start.

Cheers
Zapper

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Date: 05/27/18 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Learning the Rules

Oh, wow, talk about ramping up the drama! Nicely done.

Cheers
Zapper

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Date: 05/27/18 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Games We Play

This has an innocent flare that turned down right evil. I hope "Jonathon" doesn't get away with it.

Cheers
Zapper

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Date: 05/27/18 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Tables Turned

Well done. I liked the twists and turns and the levels of suspense.

Cheers
Zapper

When Robert's friend Jessica asks him to swap places with her for one night so she can see a concert, he reluctantly says yes. However not reading all the information about a spell can prove to be a very bad idea.
Rated: Adult 17 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 52876 Words: 5637 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Pantyhose, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline, School Uniform, Undies, Work Uniform
Locale: Formal Dance, High School
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Bad to Good
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Mind/Body Posession
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 08/01/16
Updated: 02/13/18
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/16/17 Title: Chapter 1: The Favor

Fun start to what I hope is a great story!

Cheers
Zapper

Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/16/17 Title: Chapter 2: The Switch

Nice swap scene.

Cheers
Zapper

Reviewer: Zapper Signed
Date: 01/16/17 Title: Chapter 3: Waking Up

Good wake up chapter. I hope to see the next chapter soon!

Cheers
Zapper

Gary Truman is a waste of space or so he believes. He lives a plain directionless life, a world away from the beautiful, young, successful Daphne, who seems to have it all. A simple accident completely changes both of their lives around, not only trapping the mismatched strangers in each other's bodies, but in their chaotic lives too. Work-in-progress
Rated: Explicit 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 14036 Words: 4436 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/27/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One - The Accident

Nice set up for the story. I like the character development and then the switch.

Cheers
Zapper

Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/27/18 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two - Wrong Body

Holly,

Well done. I've read the stories you've posted so far and enjoyed both. You're a talented writer.

I've you'd ever like to talk about writing or TG fiction. My email is: 2020zapper@gmail.com

I've contributed stories here and on BCTS and on FictionMania. My author pages are below.

https://www.fictionmania.tv/searchdisplay/authordisplay.html

https://bigclosetr.us/topshelf/author/zapper

Cheers
Zapper

The boss will have to learn his place if he wishes to survive.
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 27436 Words: 3238 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Maid
Featured Items: Maid Uniform, Undies, Work Uniform
Locale: Office
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced, Revenge
Personality: Bad to Good, Cultural/Nationality Change, Made Dumber
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Humiliation, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Body Swap, Cultural, Identity Theft, Racial, Stuck
Warnings: Politically Incorrect
Series: None
Published: 08/12/16
Updated: 12/28/16
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01/16/17 Title: Chapter 1: From boss to maintenece schedule

Dan is a horrible person here. It's obvious that Maria is going to get revenge. I just hope she doesn't become the same awful person, he is, when she has the power.

Cheers
Zapper

Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstar
Date: 01/16/17 Title: Chapter 3: What the fuck is happening to me?

Nice revenge story. The race swap is an interesting touch. I didn't like the switch from third person in the first two chapters to first person in this one. That was kind of jarring.

Cheers
Zapper

Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/27/18 Title: Chapter 3: What the fuck is happening to me?

Wow - Very hot revenge story. I hope you finish it.

Cheers
Zapper

The second story in the series "Three Generations".
Bertha Adams is the youngest daughter to her parents and she is given The Medallion of Zulo by her mother and decides to use it a few times in her life to try to change her fortune.
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 6921 Words: 18714 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice medallion story. It's always interesting to see how the magic affects the mind of the person transformed.

Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Nice story. I loved the character development. I'm not sure what country this is set in, at first I assumed the U.S.A. but the use of the metric system made that unlikely, particularly in the 1800s. Then I thought France, since the metric system was introduced there in the 1830s, but the names of the characters made that unlikely. There were also a few jarring moments, when you write a historical piece and use modern terms like "Mr. Right" it destroys the illusion your building. All-in-all, this is a well written and enjoyable story.

Author's Response: We can just think of it as any random country and the names are interchangeable.

An artist wishes to get a feel of female life for the benefit of his artistic expression. He meets another artist in same genre as him, a girl with the same wish. And she knows a little magic... She opens a portal so that he can feel life in her body and opposite. But an opened portal can also be closed!
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 8958 Words: 12213 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Zapper Signed
Date: 04/02/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I enjoyed this story. I liked how you used tragedy and drama to drive the plot and the real life problems Jonny had to deal with. There were a few bumpy spots but nothing that prevented me from enjoying the story.

Cheers
Zapper

John invites his best mate and their girlfriends for a friendly game of cards. Little does he know the magic behind the deck and how quickly everyone's identities and genders will change.
Rated: Explicit 8 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 13672 Words: 2474 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Boyfriend, Girlfriend
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Witchcraft
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 09/29/16
Updated: 09/29/16
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/27/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fun story.

A womanizing boss is taught a lesson- one that will take many years to fully sink in.
Rated: Deviant 9 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 12700 Words: 2144 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/18/17 Title: Chapter 2: 1962

Nice story so far. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Cheers
Zapper

George Bailey searches for a gift for his daughter and stumbles into the Spells R Us shop.
Warning: This story has a two hanky rating.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 7 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 4122 Words: 3369 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Child
Locale: Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 12/27/16
Updated: 12/28/16
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/29/16 Title: Chapter 1: A Short Christmas Story

Very sweet story. Perfect for the holidays.

Cheers
Zapper

Author's Response: Thank you.

An oft-used trope in TG fiction is futuristic technology for switching a person’s mind from one body to another. When and if it ever becomes available, I guarantee it will be used and abused; certainly by those rich enough to afford it, and quite likely by those who delight in screwing around with other people’s lives. In this tale, a young couple goes out for dinner at a fancy restaurant… and stumbles into the field of play for a rich man’s deadly game.
Rated: Adult 6 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 5866 Words: 9069 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Wife
Locale: Family Household, Hospital or Clinic, Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Forced
Type of Change: Mechanical Device
Series: None
Published: 02/09/17
Updated: 02/09/17
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/27/18 Title: Chapter 1: Bodyswap: A Table for Two

Really good story!

Cheers
Zapper

Josh's old crush returns to town, but he is still too anxious to talk to her. He finds a shop where they sell him a "Confidence Potion", which has unintentional side effects, in this hot story.
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 11648 Words: 3193 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive, From Submissive to Dominant
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men, Changes to be Attracted Only to Women
Story Theme: Mind/Body Posession
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: The Magic Notepad
Published: 02/13/17
Updated: 02/13/17
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/27/18 Title: Chapter 1: Sex Swap

Very hot. I like how Carlie's personality changed.

After the USSR collapse, Yuri, an evil old KGB boss, uses a mind swapping machine to escape justice then uses it to substitute his agent for a California software developer.
Rated: Explicit 12 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 28873 Words: 44869 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Featured Items: Bridal Gown, Corsets, Curlers, High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Undies
Locale: Labratory
Motivation for Change: Forced, In Hiding
Personality: Cultural/Nationality Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Captive, Romance
Type of Change: Age Regression, Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change, Identity Theft, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 02/23/17
Updated: 04/11/17
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/28/19 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Gary Escapes

Very dramatic chapter. I remember reading this story years ago, but I forgot how it all ended.

Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/28/19 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Epilogue

I think I read this story a few years ago on FM. Regardless, really well written.

Cheers
Zapper

Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/16/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Villian Yuri Chomenko

Exciting first chapter!

The War between Chaos and Order has raged across the multi-verse since the beginning of time. Joel is caught up in it and has to come to terms with the changes to his body and life if he is to rescue his loved ones.
Rated: Adult 9 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 7864 Words: 26805 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Fantasy Character
Locale: Family Household, High School
Warnings: Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 03/26/17
Updated: 03/29/17
Reviewer: Zapper Signed
Date: 03/27/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm glad you're enjoying it! I plan to post the rest of the story over the next few days. Cheers - Zapper

Not all revenge schemes work as planned. When revenge involves changing your target’s gender, a backfired plan can become a disaster.
Rated: Explicit 230 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 715727 Words: 95249 Chapters: 104 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo, Bride, Girlfriend, Model, Prostitute, Stripper, Wife
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Sex Toys
Locale: Labratory, Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Revenge
Personality: Bad to Good
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual, Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Humiliation, Romance
Type of Change: Age Regression, Drug-Induced, Mechanical Device, Mind Control, Stuck
Warnings: Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 05/10/17
Updated: 08/28/17
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/19/18 Title: Chapter 104: New Friends: Type Three

Wow what a wild ride. Plenty of sexy parts and what an emotional roller-coaster. Well written, well plotted, with plenty of character development . . . my only criticism is that it's marked as a body-swap. It isn't. It's a fantastic transformation story but no one swaps bodies.

Cheers
Zapper

Author's Response: You're right - it's not a body-swap. Fixed! Thanks for your feedback!

It was the last chance for my roommate and I to go to a party before the semester started. It turned out to be the first chance either of us had to see what it was like to be someone else.
Rated: Explicit 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 7653 Words: 2097 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/27/18 Title: Chapter 1: 1 - The party and a discovery

Nice start. I can't wait to see where this goes next.

A couple struggle to stay together while they each feel trapped in the wrong body.
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 6617 Words: 1194 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Husband, Wife
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Romance
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 06/23/17
Updated: 06/24/17
Reviewer: Zapper Signed
Date: 08/06/17 Title: Chapter 1: Husband and Wife

Nice, sweet, sentimental story.

Cheers
Zapper

Two friends are walking through the park when they come across a strange sight that changes both their lives forever.
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 7292 Words: 3499 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Locale: Labratory
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 08/05/17
Updated: 08/05/17
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/06/17 Title: Chapter 1: The Green Pool

Very interesting start. I hope you continue this story.

Cheers
Zapper

Two people born on the same day have their destiny intertwined; every time their birthday falls on a Friday, they swap bodies.
Rated: Adult 9 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 35341 Words: 9008 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 10/30/17 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Years Gone By

A new and interesting twist on a body-swap story. I thought you used the device, (jumping forward in time with each swap) very well and that kept the pace of the story on point.

My only criticism is that because each chapter is focused on the day of the swap and the events around the swap we didn't get to see much character development. You could have easily doubled or tripled the length of this story and used the character development to drive a unique and interesting plot. The ending felt a little rushed, but that might be because I was enjoying it and didn't want it to end.

All-in-all, a fun entertaining story. Well done.

Cheers
Zapper

Author's Response: Thank you, I understand about the length, I'm bad when it comes to writing shorter stories. Also this one started out as a gimmick story which became much longer and more deep than I originally intended. The ending probably was rushed as I tried to finish it as quickly as possible but I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Benny catches his girlfriend cheating on him, and wakes up in her body the next day. He decides to take revenge.
Rated: Explicit 7 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 11697 Words: 3950 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 10/19/17
Updated: 10/19/17
Reviewer: Zapper Signed
Date: 10/30/17 Title: Chapter 1: Day

I do enjoy a good body swap story, particularly when a bit of erotica is thrown in. I agree with 930310 it would have been easier to read with proper parenthetical breaks. Having said that, it was still readable.

I would have liked to have seen more character development and drama. The swap happens and he goes all slut and that's about all we get for character development. How did the swap happen? Did he just discover a new power? By imagining himself as Connor having sex with Alex will he swap with Connor? That would have gotten revenge on both Connor and Alex. Having Alex get hit by a car deprived the reader of the confrontation between Alex and Benny which would have had delightful drama.

Please keep on writing, you've got a great imagination.

Cheers
Zapper

A group of friends try out a new boardgame on Halloween night, which may have life changing impacts.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 7390 Words: 2386 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 10/31/17
Updated: 10/31/17
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/13/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Clever story. I liked it.

Sometimes, the best way to learn about yourself, is to be away from yourself.
Rated: Explicit 35 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 58821 Words: 67774 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Featured Items: Bikinis, Lingerie, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Curse, Unknown
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Everyday Living, Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Body Swap, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 11/26/17
Updated: 09/09/18
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/21/18 Title: Chapter 1: Day 1: Day One

I really enjoyed the start of this story. I can't wait to see more.

Cheers
Zapper

Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/21/18 Title: Chapter 2: Day 2: Girl Meets World

I love the character development in this chapter! Well done.

Cheers
Zapper

Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/21/18 Title: Chapter 3: Day 3: Santorini Scramble

Exciting erotic chapter. Well done.

Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/21/18 Title: Chapter 7: Day 7-1: Revelation

That was an unexpected twist. Where does this lead?

Cheers
Zapper

No one knows what caused it. All that is known, even to this day, was that the when Star Wars: The Last Jedi premiered the world changed.

The first video proof of someone using the Force came when a mother was filming her kids playing. Her son thrust his hand out in an attempt to force push his sister away and when he did, she flew 50 feet across the yard and into their pool. Everyone though it was great special effects and eventually the fervor about it died down.

But it was real. The Force Sensitives kept their powers hidden, practiced in secret, alone or in groups. There were so few of us, no one knew the exact totals. Eventually, a few idiots robbing banks and killing their cheating spouse with force lightning outed us to the world.

Eventually it was decided to parallel Star Wars. The UN asked us to create the Jedi Order and to help serve and protect the world.

Not enough people expected darkness could grow from that. Pretty stupid really. If there are Jedi there will be Sith. All they had to do was watch the movies or read the books.

Everyone was blinded by the peace the Jedi forged. Soon the planet was united like never before. A world government, colonizing the moon, Mars.

It was every nerd's dream, so I can understand they wanted to ignore the possible downsides.

Me? I always played the bad guys, always got pissed when the heroes always won.

I always said that if I had super powers, I'd be the villain.
Rated: Deviant 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 2149 Words: 1539 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Accident, Forced, Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Mind/Body Posession
Type of Change: Age Regression, Body Swap, Identity Theft
Series: None
Published: 12/21/17
Updated: 12/21/17
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/13/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very short, but exciting.

A husband and wife go to a very special resort on their tenth anniversary in order to share experiences that they never thought possible.
Rated: Explicit 16 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 31146 Words: 20938 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Husband, Wife
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men, Changes to be Attracted Only to Women
Story Theme: Mind/Body Posession
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change, Mechanical Device
Series: None
Published: 12/28/17
Updated: 01/17/18
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/21/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very hot chapter.

Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/21/18 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Very nice, sweet, story.

When the young married couple of Leo and Sakura find an antique that does more than just look nice on a shelf, they find themselves living each other's lives. Can they find a way to change back, if they even want to?
Rated: Adult 1 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 4338 Words: 2704 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Fantasy Character, Husband, Wife
Locale: Camp
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse
Personality: Fights Change, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men, Changes to be Attracted Only to Women
Story Theme: Fan Fiction, Mythical Setting, Romance
Type of Change: Body Swap, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 02/09/18
Updated: 02/09/18
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/18/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I enjoyed this story. Sweet. Simple. Emotional scars are healed. Well done.

Cheers
Zapper

Tariq retired from his post after losing his legs. But now his successor in office wants him to do one last job -- one he won't need his own body for.
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 10468 Words: 26309 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet, Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: For a Job
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Bodily Functions, Torture
Series: The Travel Agency
Published: 03/27/18
Updated: 04/10/18
Reviewer: Zapper Signed
Date: 04/28/19 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Fun story. I liked the drama you built in chapter 6. Good ending.

Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04/28/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start! I don't know why I didn't find this story earlier. It's a Trismegistus Shandy so of course it's well written and well plotted. I like the "Travel Agency" idea so I'm sure this will be a fun read!

Reviewer: Zapper Signed
Date: 04/28/19 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I feel bad for Keisha since she got a body with no legs. I'm not sure she's going to have a great vacation. I wonder how Natalie deals with being an Ifrit? Powerful being who can change his shape?

Taylor and Leslie are going on vacation, but all their parents will say is that it's nowhere they've ever been before -- and that it's "going to be the biggest surprise of your lives"
Rated: Kid-Friendly 4 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 21002 Words: 34839 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/20/18 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Cool start. I love this story concept.

Cheers
Zapper

Connor is a successful young techie living in New York. Just when he doesn't think life could get any better the two kinky girls downstairs invite him over for what he naively assumes is a threesome.
Rated: Explicit 66 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 198079 Words: 54429 Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Pantyhose, Undies, Work Uniform
Motivation for Change: Tricked, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual, Changes to be Attracted Only to Women
Story Theme: Humiliation, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change, Mind Control
Series: None
Published: 04/30/18
Updated: 09/13/18
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/20/18 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Venus Magic

Super hot chapter! I love how he tries to get out of the magical deal at the last minute. So far, I don't really think the witches are evil. He should have been listening.

Cheers
Zapper

Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/20/18 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Waking Up on the Other Side

lol - Awesome chapter. I hope Maria and Alice are being honest, they just want a little experimentation and play time and aren't being more sinister.

Cheers
Zapper

Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/20/18 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Texting Troubles, Shower Bubbles

I'm really enjoying this story. I can't wait to see where it goes next.

Cheers
Zapper

Author's Response: Happy you liked it! I've actually really enjoyed your stories for a couple years now!

Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Undercover Dinner

I just read ch-5 and loved it. The compulsion to act like Alice is really exciting. I also like the taunting . . . hehehe. "“Wow that’s way more convenient! I dunno how I'm ever going to go back."

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Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - White Girl Wasted

Wow - this chapter kicked up the drama a notch or two. I love the way Connor gets wasted in his smaller female body.

Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - A Spec of Revenge

I love how Connor is on an emotional roller coaster. Not a good idea to get wasted and then start snapping nude pics . . . I bet that comes back to haunt him. If he wasn't so wasted he'd be a bit alarmed by Maria's steady story line that they're going to stay swapped for a few days. Nice bit of foreshadowing there.

Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - An Exchange of Responsibilities

I get the feeling that the girls are going to steal his life. On the one hand, I hope they don't, or if they do there is some kind of justice. On the other hand, this is a super hot story.

Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Something Gained for What Was Lost

I really love this chapter. I like how Connor is fighting back and the hints that he is going to end up stuck. On the one hand, I want Alice and Maria to be above the board and have no plan to steal Connor's life and body. On the other hand, with all the hinting, I think they are planning to steal his life. It makes me wonder if he doesn't try something and mess up his own chance to get his life back?

Author's Response: Thanks for all the great feedback and reviews! I actually read some of your stories quite a while back and have enjoyed them so much! I think one of the first stories like this that I read was Medallion Comes to Fairview several years ago on fictionmani.tv.

Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/27/18 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - A Very Different Career

Good chapter. I like how he's fighting his feminine impulses, struggling to keep his identity, and also discovering new things about Alice.

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Date: 08/27/18 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Sisterly Support

It was nice to get confirmation that Maria isn't evil and they aren't trying to steal his life. There are still a ton of ways this can go sideways for Conner. lol Really good story.

Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/01/18 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - The Witch's New Game

Love the story. I think Maria is more than a little cruel, I hope that she gets taken down a peg or two before this is all over.

Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/11/18 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Realization and Compromise

Another interesting chapter, I've gotta say, your character development for Connor is superb! I do wonder, why are Maria and Alice being so cruel? It seems misplaced . . . but I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/13/18 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Left Out

The slow torture of Connor is really well done. I'm think that Alice and Maria have no intention of giving him his life or body back. I wonder when Connor will figure that out? When he does, what will he do? Suicide? Or will the magic have changed him so much he accepts life as a girl? If it's the second part, then I hope he at least breaks away from Maria . . . maybe moves in with his sister? I also hope that Maria and Alice get a little karma. After all, from what Connor's sister said, they'll be punished when they break the contract and steal his life. Of course, I could be wrong and he'll get switched back . . . but I don't think I am.

A husband and wife on the way to a friend's wedding in Hawaii hope to better understand one another. A mysterious woman has a solution but maybe one they weren't expecting.
Rated: Deviant 11 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 58610 Words: 16674 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Husband, Wife
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, Lingerie, Sex Toys
Locale: Strip Club, Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive, From Submissive to Dominant
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual, Changes to be Attracted Only to Women
Story Theme: Genie/Wishes
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 05/24/18
Updated: 05/27/18
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 1: The Flight

Love the last line. Great start.

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Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 2: The Change

Hot scene! I bet they're in for a surprise when they wake up.

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Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 4: The Questions

Love their reactions. Obviously they are getting a little magical help. lol

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Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 5: The Need

lol - Yup. A little magical nudge or two. Good chapter.

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Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 6: The Need (part 2)

HA! I love how Alex is struggling trying to fight against biology and magic.

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Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 7: The Bathroom

Very hot scene.

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Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 8: The Shattering Glass

Wow - talk about a few mental adjustments. Will Alex want to go back to his male body after this?

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Date: 08/27/18 Title: Chapter 9: The Lingerie Shop

Very hot chapter.

Dave and Serena have been together for quite some time now. They have anything they could desire to be happy.
However Serena can't be satisfied, and it doesn't matter how hard she tries: she's too shy, and every day is a challenge for her.
Dave loves her very much, and he may have found a solution.
Rated: Explicit 36 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 159510 Words: 38222 Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
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Date: 01/19/19 Title: Chapter 14: 14 - Shopping. And, Mostly, Veronica

Wow - I wasn't expecting this darker turn. Veronica has expertly seduced Serena and is encouraging her darker impulses.

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Date: 01/19/19 Title: Chapter 19: 19 - Best Friends

Serena needs to go back to the lab and restore her emotional connection to Dave. After that she can make choices about her future.

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Date: 01/19/19 Title: Chapter 20: 20 - First Day Of Work

Ah, at last Serena is thinking with more than her new male appendage. Nice chapter.

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Date: 01/19/19 Title: Chapter 22: 22 - The Second First Date

The ending seems fitting. I do feel like Dave lost a lot, but he also gained a lot. I hope if you do an epilogue that say a year in the future Dave let's Serena restore his feelings and memories of they're 3 years together.

Author's Response: Thank you for your reviews!!! :D I was actually reading right now one of your wonderful stories!!! :D I got a little "writer block" on this story. It would be nice to complete it one day, and one more chapter would definitely be doable: thank you for these ideas! ^^

A middle-aged businessman stuck in a tortuously boring meeting finds a way out... right into the body of a high-school student with a burden all her own.
Rated: Explicit 94 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 147871 Words: 81296 Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Pregnancy
Type of Change: Age Regression, Body Swap, Stuck
Warnings: Bodily Functions
Series: None
Published: 06/28/18
Updated: 11/20/18
Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/20/18 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: The 10 Indignities of Kennedy Garner

I like the way you designed this chapter with the #10 Indignities.

Author's Response: this is one of the first chapters i wrote for this story! xo, charlotte

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Date: 10/20/18 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Just Breathe

Things are really accelerating for Greg. I'm starting to get really curious, how will all of this end?

Author's Response: to quote the inimitable J. Goldblum in Jurassic Park, "Like finds a way..." xo, Charlotte

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Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Begging For a Change

Wow - what a start.

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Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Face in the Mirror

Very well written chapter. I love the twist at the end.

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Date: 07/28/18 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Gregory Dobson, I Presume

Very well written. I like how you've drawn up the characters and how they react to each other.

Author's Response: thank you for your comments, Zapper. hopefully you'll keep enjoying the story and that the twists won't be too obvious. xo, Charlotte

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Date: 08/27/18 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: My Lunch With Kennedy

Cool chapter. I love how Kennedy is feeling free and doesn't want to swap back right away. I wonder how her mom will feel after being in Greg's body for a while?

Author's Response: the dirty little secret here (or maybe it's obvious?) is that everyone got * something * they were missing. of course everyone also got a bunch of stuff they never would have asked for in a million years. hopefully as things progress I'll be able to show the 'win some / lose some' aspect of these swaps. xo, charlotte

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Date: 08/27/18 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The Glow

Great scene. I love how you wrote this, the inner monologue is fantastic.

Author's Response: thank you, Zapper! xo, charlotte

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Date: 08/27/18 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: In Over Her Head

I really like how his Greg's new body is affecting him. Very well written chapter.

Author's Response: then you are going to love the next chapter ;-p xo, charlotte

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Date: 09/01/18 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Mind ~ Body Problem

Ha! I really enjoyed this chapter. The subtle (and not so subtle) mental changes, how he struggles and fights yet his new body, it's hormones and needs are obviously calling the shots. I can't wait to see what happens when his body gets home from work. Will Kennedy show up in her mom's body? Will Kennedy's mom, in his body be attracted to Kennedy now in an adult female body? I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: there's a lot here that i want to say but won't. and i should be able to post the next chapter sometime this week. xo, charlotte

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Date: 09/10/18 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Hard Truths

A hard truth or an uncomfortable truth? I like how Kennedy puzzled it out and then confronted Greg with his own inner demon. Now, how do they move forward?

Author's Response: <3, xo, charlotte

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Date: 09/13/18 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: In or Out

Good chapter. I like how they are all changing and adjusting. Well, some more than others . . . hehehe. I enjoy how you have the characters supporting each other. I think in the end, if they are stuck or return to their normal bodies, they'll be better people. I don't know about your other readers, but I'm kinda hoping that Greg ends up giving birth. I just think that with his personality it'd be pretty humorous. Although his doctor's visit on Wednesday is bounded to be interesting. Looking forward to your next chapter.

Author's Response: 'pretty humorous', you say. i'll have to take your word for that. if (yes, if) Greg is the one who gives birth, i assure you, it will be... something alright. guess you'll have to wait until chapter 35, lol. and i dunno about 'better' but everyone, regardless of how things end up, will be different, that's for sure. thank you for reading my drivel!! xo, charlotte

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Date: 09/21/18 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Middleside High

Ah, me thinks a baby is coming soon. I enjoyed the last two chapters. Please keep up the good work.

Author's Response: glad to hear you're enjoying things still. the limits of Greg's borrowed body (it's quite petite) are starting to materialize. i suppose 'soon' is relative but i have it on good authority she won't make it to her due date, which is still about a week away. xo, charlotte

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Date: 09/30/18 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: This is Happening

I love the way you have Greg handling the stress, with the snarky inner monologue, it made me laugh several times. The detailed exposition in this story is really well done. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: thank you, Zapper! i should be able to post another chapter later this week. hopefully. xo, charlotte

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Date: 10/06/18 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: The Boyfriend

Nice chapter. It was fun to see how Greg's new body is affecting his mind in more subtle ways. I think he's so caught up in being female and pregnant that the more subtle changes are being lost on him. How are Kennedy and Gretchen changing?

Author's Response: ty, Zapper! unfortunately(?), this is Greg's story so we'll only get tangential knowledge of how Kennedy and Gretchen are faring. hopefully we'll see more of that as we wind things to a close here. xo, charlotte

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Date: 10/22/18 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: We Had an Agreement

Really well written chapter. I didn't see that twist coming. Gretchen, with Greg's money, is in a perfect spot to adopt her granddaughter. Just a thought.

Author's Response: ty, Zapper! and a very astute observation... xo, charlotte

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Date: 10/27/18 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: All You Have to do is Push

Very well written chapter. I felt like I was in the room with Kennedy watching her have the baby.

Author's Response: that chapter very nearly killed me. i'm happy you enjoyed it. if enjoy is the right word. xo, charlotte

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