Jacks-O-Lance
Hello, I'm Jacks-O-Lance..... but be forewarned, I'm one devious skeleton! Mwahaha....
Member Since: 03/17/14 Membership status: Member
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A dying 19-year-old adult man is given the chance for a new life by being changed into a 'creature', an immortal being with strange and incredible abilities, powers, and also weaknesses. She's ALMOST human, with some animal tendencies. Will she adjust? Will she cope?
Rated: Deviant 32 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 136383 Words: 170640 Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
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Date: 09/22/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

An interesting story, though could use some editing to certain areas of the story.

First person short story of being changed into a female vampire.
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 8967 Words: 878 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Slave
Motivation for Change: Forced
Type of Change: Mind Control, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 12/12/12
Updated: 12/12/12
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Date: 02/26/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Quite the interesting tale, ever think of making a series from it?

A soldier is killed in the line of duty. Grateful local people then work magic to have him reincarnated back to a new life in America - however as a girl born the very second after his death... Coming of age she elects to restart the military career so abruptly ended.
This story as a comic:
https://www.deviantart.com/ab-norway/art/My-Career-in-Two-Editions-Front-Cover-790273289
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 8208 Words: 17455 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
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Date: 08/26/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Second Infancy, Childhood and Adolescence

Well it's definitely interesting, plenty of errors but not bad for a non-English speaker.

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Date: 08/27/15 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Active Career

What an intriguing ending...

A tale of adventure and self discovery, follow along the journey of Geoffrey Scott, a teenager that is forced into a world of ghouls and ghosts. He discovers who he really is and takes part on a journey to save his love ones.
Rated: Adult 161 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 142885 Words: 296576 Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character, Teenager
Locale: Family Household, High School, Space or Foreign Planet
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Horror, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 08/12/13
Updated: 07/04/18
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Date: 04/06/15 Title: Chapter 8: Part 1; Chapter 8 Dazed and Confused

Nice, just correct a few errors I've noticed with certain misplaced words...(from here all the way to ch1.) I rate this 4/5; but unofficially, I rank this whole story a 4.7 or of 10.

Author's Response: Oh come on Jacks! Expected more for you! http://33.media.tumblr.com/7fdf6e6ffea8c93de68e51a0d729a0b6/tumblr_mysl9tm5o41smcbm7o1_500.gif Nah just kidding, a little, but do tell why isn't it worth the 5 star rating? And what do you mean 4.7 or of 10? I didn't got you there buddy! Oh, and thank you. Maybe you don't know this, but actually english isn't my first language (¡Arriba México Cabrones!), and thank you for not reviewing only the first chapter, my writing did improve through time right? Whatever it is, take care!

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Date: 04/17/15 Title: Chapter 8: Part 1; Chapter 8 Dazed and Confused

I meant to to say 4.7 out of 5... It's a hassle using a small phone. Constant typing/Swyping errors on my part.

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Date: 05/18/15 Title: Chapter 9: Part 1; Chapter 9: Bring It On Home

Excellent, just need to change some words.... Like on to in, among a few others....

Author's Response: Oh come on Jacks! 4 stars again? Pleaaaase tell me what I did wrong aside from the spellings. You have no idea how it works whenever I write. http://img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20140223041635/breadwinnersnick/images/b/b8/Please.jpg And I hope you liked it!

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Date: 05/24/15 Title: Chapter 10: Part 1; Chapter 10 Achilles Last Stand

Now that was a good read...

Author's Response: https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/30/24/9b/30249ba706c43b8f1116878bbf959878.jpg That's me right now. I managed to make you give me five stars! Thank you Jacks! I hope you get hooked and continue reading the story!

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Date: 11/10/16 Title: Chapter 25: Part 2; Chapter 24: Ride On

Some spelling errors theoughout the story, but a great read nonetheless...

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Date: 06/15/16 Title: Chapter 21: Part 2; Chapter 20: Don't Stand So Close to Me

Hahaha.... That chapter title reminds me of a song from the 80's.... XP

Author's Response: Jacks... *Giggles* From chapter 6, all the titles have been songs from the 70's and 80's. I hope you enjoyed it!

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Date: 12/18/16 Title: Chapter 26: Part 2; Chapter 25: The Razor's Edge

Great story, but there are some mispelled words...

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Date: 01/06/17 Title: Chapter 27: Part 2; Chapter 26: Black Ice

Keep up the good work, Susy...XD

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Date: 10/17/17 Title: Chapter 40: Personal Update

If ya have too many reviews and want to answer them all but cant answer all by yourself... Then you could ask for help on that, just a suggestion... ;)

Cat girls appear and start spreading like a virus.
Rated: Adult 27 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 50903 Words: 40199 Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Daughter, Slave
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Series: Neko
Published: 01/04/14
Updated: 08/15/15
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Date: 08/16/15 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Well now, glad you started back on this story... How long it's been?

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Date: 08/16/15 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Interesting, I'm curious to see where this goes... XD

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Date: 08/16/15 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Wow, such a cruel past to be a part of...

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Date: 08/16/15 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue

Interesting, I'm looking forward to see what comes of this...XD

When Marcus’s best friend became the woman of his dreams, their love became inevitable. And so too was their strange journey through the farthest reaches of time and space.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 3370 Words: 4296 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Locale: Labratory, Space or Foreign Planet
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Distant Future
Type of Change: Mechanical Device
Series: None
Published: 02/20/14
Updated: 02/20/14
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Date: 03/24/15 Title: Chapter 1: Stand By Me

Well that was interesting, quite odd though and missing details. 3 stars

(And that name of this story reminds of that old song, do you know the one?)


No one knows what the future holds. Everyone has a prediction. It doesn't mean it will come true. That's what one child learn in this futuristic story.
(RATED TEEN)
Rated: Adult 30 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 50711 Words: 42405 Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Trans
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Child, Daughter
Featured Items: Undies
Locale: Hospital or Clinic, Labratory
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Distant Future, Horror, Humiliation
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Stuck
Warnings: Bodily Functions, Death, Intense Violence, Torture
Series: Isisraxtosa
Published: 02/20/14
Updated: 12/31/15
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Date: 09/26/15 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Finger lickin' good

A very good story story so far, yet there are some errors in every chapter so far that needs fix'in; but it's of no pressing issue to fix 'em right away...

Author's Response: Don't worry. The errors and issues are going to be or worked on. I got someone that said she will help me.

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Date: 09/26/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - This Strange New Feeling

Intriguing, but there are a few mistakes that need correcting...

Author's Response: Don't worry, I got the mistakes fixed. I have a program that fixed it all

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Date: 11/18/15 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: From Dusk Til Dawn

Ever watch the 'From Dusk Till Dawn' trilogy? Your title and mentioning of vampires reminded me of that series... XP

Author's Response: Yeah, I have seen the first one only. 4 stars? What made it 1 star less?

Jaux Ballad has always wanted to enter the realm of magic, but could not do so by regular means. In his desperation to become a magician he finds himself with more power, and more trouble, than he could ever have imagined.
Rated: Adult 354 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 332025 Words: 97327 Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Teenager
Featured Items: Corsets, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline
Locale: Camp, College, Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Historical Time Period, Mythical Setting, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: Vanasia Universe
Published: 02/22/14
Updated: 09/17/15
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Date: 09/17/15 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48: Return to White

Been a while since I've read this story.

The realms are aligning as the places of power come together in an unprecedented fashion. In all the realms, of all the gods, demons, deities, and lesser folk. An impossible chance encounter pulls together our cast of hapless heroes and a incompetent summoner. Together they'll build a bridge to another plane if they don't manage to kill themselves in the process.
Rated: Explicit 11 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 18924 Words: 35987 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Story Theme: Comedy, Coming of Age, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Warnings: Bodily Functions, Death, Intense Violence, Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 03/16/14
Updated: 09/23/15
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Date: 09/24/15 Title: Chapter 5: Obstacle Four. Doors

A ghost? Now that's interesting... Definitely a some funny moments with this story, which I like.... XP

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Date: 09/24/15 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Whoa, now this some story... Very intriguing.

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Date: 09/24/15 Title: Chapter 2: Obstacle One. Girl

Dang, one hell of a start for this story so far...

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Date: 09/24/15 Title: Chapter 3: Obstacle Two. Captain of the Guard

Interesting set up, I'm liking this more and more...

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Date: 09/24/15 Title: Chapter 4: Obstacle Three.

Well now, that's what I call a humorous turn of events... Nicely done.... XP

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Date: 09/24/15 Title: Chapter 8: Obstacle Seven.

Hmm, what an intriguing test..

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Date: 09/24/15 Title: Chapter 10: Obstacle Nine.

Well that's some strange turn of events...

My sister and I where playing around with a trunk we found in my new place's basement. When we found its secrets it was already to late...


Author Note: disclaimer, this story is written on a 3DS, the spelling is bad because of that fact.
Rated: Adult 14 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 52987 Words: 5429 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Doll
Locale: Family Household, Girl's School
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Comedy, Mind/Body Posession
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 03/31/14
Updated: 10/27/15
Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed
Date: 07/17/15 Title: Chapter 7: Fire 7 - Suspicious Actions

The story itself is good, but there's a lot that needs fixing...(Like run-on sentences, spelling errors, story length, and some other issues.)

Two friends ascend a mountain, prepared for a difficult, yet rewarding journey. However, they could never have prepared for what ensued.
Rated: Adult 56 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 80933 Words: 15703 Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Locale: College, Road Trip
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse, Undercover, Unknown, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Mechanical Device
Series: None
Published: 04/13/14
Updated: 07/17/16
Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/27/15 Title: Chapter 8: Some Reckless Actions

The story has been entertaining, looking forward to reading more...

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm looking forward to writing more!

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Date: 09/27/15 Title: Chapter 1: A Long Hike

An interesting start....

There are many gods in the land of Hemfall: the gods of men, the gods of monsters, the gods of the beasts and bums. But what if the story of one such god were true?
Rated: Explicit 8 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 20481 Words: 11344 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Slave
Motivation for Change: Forced, Tricked, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Captive, Mythical Setting, Pregnancy, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Non-Consentual Sex
Series: The Hemfall Chronicles - A Medieval World
Published: 06/10/14
Updated: 09/30/14
Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed
Date: 04/05/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Story by the Fire

You gonna do anything else with this story?

A genius scientist alters his identity to protect a technology the world is not ready for, but this key to immortality is still being pursued by rival scientists and nations. The new woman is living a new life on the run.
Rated: Explicit 29 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 56793 Words: 7881 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager, Twin
Featured Items: Bikinis, Lingerie
Locale: Labratory, Prison, Road Trip, Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: In Hiding, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Medical Experiment, Pregnancy, Romance
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change, Racial
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Non-Consentual Sex, Torture
Series: None
Published: 06/23/14
Updated: 07/06/15
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Date: 06/22/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well this seems like an interesting story...

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Date: 06/22/15 Title: Hunted (Abandoned, see note)

Oh man, that's one messed up planning ya have there... Yet quite interesting, nonetheless.... XP

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Date: 06/23/15 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I am definitely liking your story more and more......

You soldier, do you know what happens when you take bio warefare to the next level and include it in your average teenage kid?!?! Well do you?!? No?! The drop for 30 and read this story to find out!?
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 9698 Words: 3718 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Daughter, Girlfriend
Series: None
Published: 06/24/14
Updated: 09/09/15
Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/10/15 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Ah yes, I know the pain of typing a story on a cell phone. Pain in the ass, but necessary when you don't have another way to type your story.

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Date: 09/11/15 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: The Mission

A bit too short.

James and Nate, brothers, were wanting to be in a new family. When their dad marries a woman on a royal line, they never knew the price of the marriage...
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 4589 Words: 132 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: None
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Bikinis, Lingerie, Long Nails, Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 07/19/14
Updated: 07/20/14
Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed
Date: 06/25/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Prologue

Interesting, but it needs to be more than 500 words (as I've been told), but this story looks interesting despite the length...

In Randion City where technology and science determine rank and status, while those with no skills receive nothing. Now there is someone or something new and more capable. Will the city crumble or reach a new golden age.
Rated: Adult 55 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 51271 Words: 101155 Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character, Teenager
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: Family Household, High School, Hospital or Clinic, Labratory
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Accident, Revenge, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 09/17/14
Updated: 05/07/15
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Date: 05/01/15 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 20: Three Months Later

Well that is interesting...

Author's Response: You read fast man, either that or you've been reading everything I've written. The first one is a compliment, the second one will just make me feel good, either way, thanks.

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Date: 05/08/15 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 22: Yaweh, King of the World

What a great story, a little bit sad & unfortunate turn of events.

Author's Response: Needed to kill some people. Otherwise it wouldn't be much of a final fight. But thanks for reading it and I'm happy you enjoyed it.

When a dormant curse reawakens on his 18th birthday, a high school senior finds that moonlit nights have become infinitely more terrifying...and annoying.
Rated: Adult 75 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 199260 Words: 134250 Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Curse, Revenge
Personality: Fights Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 10/07/14
Updated: 06/21/19
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Date: 02/23/15 Title: Chapter 17: Road to Recovery

Wow, I like where all of this is going; great story with some errors that could be fixed and whatnot, but doesn't take away how good the story itself is!

(And yes, I'm on Deviantart as well; if you remember me that is! XP

Author's Response: Happy ya like the story! Sorry about the errors, though. My proofreading tends to miss a lot of stuff. =( I do remember you, too. Good to see you made it here, too!

When a grizzled SAS Sergeant's mission goes wrong, he is launched into a new world of combat. Can he survive the test?
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 1300 Words: 4968 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Featured Items: Undies, Work Uniform
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Forced
Story Theme: Comedy, Everyday Living, Horror, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Stuck
Warnings: Bodily Functions, Death, Politically Incorrect
Series: Castaways
Published: 11/16/14
Updated: 11/16/14
Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/26/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well this was an interesting rendition to Castaways, can't wait to see what else you do with this story; good luck with the rest!

A Brave New World spin-off based in Cape Town, South Africa and a challenge set by Hikaro.
Rated: Adult 19 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 11333 Words: 48187 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: Hospital or Clinic, Labratory
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: From Submissive to Dominant
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Series: Brave New World
Published: 12/02/14
Updated: 06/12/15
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Date: 06/10/15 Title: Chapter 12: Last Light: part 1

Excellent, story's moving along great... Making us wonder about what is to come next... XD

Author's Response: You'll see, I'll explain at the end about what's happening, make sure to read my notes.

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Date: 06/12/15 Title: Chapter 13: Last Light: part 2

Excellent ending, just wanted to see exactly what happened during the missing gap between her being shot and one month after that happened.

Author's Response: Healing period. She got shot in the head, can't do much during that time.

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Date: 06/12/15 Title: Chapter 13: Last Light: part 2

Healing period and can't do too much during that time, you say? Perhaps on her end, but there's always more that can be added for the other characters... Hell, it'd almost be clever to let that guy that shot her become a rejected; that's one way to d spice things up.... No? XP

Author's Response: True, the other characters did have stuff to do. But the only character who's focus point I could use was Singrin, and making him become a rejected would kind of ruin the reason he exists in this universe, plus I doubt anyone cares about his fame and fortune. So I decided against explaining everything and just left that open, there will be more info later, just not now.

She's the woman of his dreams. Quite literally. Daryl met Lilith and soon after starting to date her, he started having vivid sexual dreams about her. But the more dreams he has, the less healthy he looks. What's happening to him? Does it have something to do with the dreams? Or maybe Lilith herself? Big life changes are in store for Daryl. Can he do anything about them before it's too late?
Rated: Explicit 19 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 60597 Words: 38480 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: Family Household, Hospital or Clinic, Office, Road Trip
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced, Tricked
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Non-Consentual Sex, Torture
Series: None
Published: 12/16/14
Updated: 03/05/20
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Date: 04/13/15 Title: Chapter 5: New Direction

Quite interesting... Am I correct to assume that this priest is drowning his sorrows because he hadn't been able to 'save' anyone?

A new world of magic and strange creatures, where slavery is accepted and racism is the norm. One man will become something completely different and change the world itself.
Rated: Explicit 139 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 112353 Words: 196456 Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Wife
Locale: Camp
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Forced
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Historical Time Period, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Racial
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Non-Consentual Sex, Torture
Series: None
Published: 12/27/14
Updated: 03/21/17
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Date: 05/16/15 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: Sharing Steam

So how many more before the wedding and then the invasion?

Author's Response: Can't answer that. It's very difficult to answer. THe wedding is within the next three chapters. The invasion might not even be within 15.

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Date: 04/13/15 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: The Betrayer Betrayed

Faved this story.... And 5 stars for this chapter for how good the plot made it.

Author's Response: Awesome, maybe one day I too can become like M. Night Shamalamadam, except not with that movie we don't dare talk about which we would rather forget.

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Date: 04/15/15 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Fevered Pitch

I like this one very well too; but first a question: Are you going to make a chapter that tells us about those "magical" words> What they mean, how they're spelt, how they're used, ect...?

Author's Response: At the end of the Betrayer, when all is everything is typed out and the third part is complete, I plan to write out the glossary of every word written in this book, maybe I'll write some runes too (that's very dependent on how far I want to go with this) but, yes, there will be a glossary, just like the stuff I put at the end of each chapter.

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Date: 04/18/15 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: Negotiations with the Lord of Light

Excellent... But what is the story of Violet, I don't remember reading the history (among many things I intend to forget) of that sword?!

Author's Response: Violet is a sword given to Favus by Anveil when he was younger, it was really the only lasting gift Anveil ever gave to Favus and is incredibly important to him. There was a small conversation about the name 'Violet' in the chapter 'The Berserker'. I have no plans to write about it and might just have her explain why Violet is so important to her, but for now it's the only present she has from Anveil.

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Date: 04/22/15 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Droplets of Information

Nice, this was a great chapter.

Author's Response: I was happy with it, it allowed me to set up a few things, I'll get to work bringing everyone together now.

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Date: 04/24/15 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Unbreakable

More stuff getting destroyed? That's what I like about this story... Mwahaha! XP

Author's Response: Oh, then next chapter will be a little bit more explosive and many, many, many times more bloody.

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Date: 04/25/15 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: The Lord of Light and Blood Soaked Stone

Excellent, the story is overwhelmingly awesome/intriguing; can't wait to see more death & destruction.... Mwahaha!

Author's Response: It's going to be on a short hiatus sadly, I need to finish one of my long-running stories, when I get back to this I have a little bit of closing up with the marriage and other secrete things.

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Date: 05/28/15 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 28: Girls' Night Out

Impressive..... She can out drunk, out fight, out run, out smart, and out think some of the must menacing opponents... Lucky and has their 'gods' favor.... Anything I should know?

Author's Response: In a couple hundred thousand words... Yes.

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Date: 06/23/15 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 29: My White Knight

Well how lovely and erotic... So when shall the battle re-commence?

Author's Response: Battle? You mean the war? But yeah, the war is only a temporary break as was mentioned. I didn't want to rush back into the war because otherwise it will make things too actiony in an already oversaturated story, I need a pause to develop characters, help steady Irasha's psyche and also get around to picking up some of the other parts of the stories that have yet to come up. So, it could be as low as two or three chapters or as high as six or seven, depends where my muse goes.

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Date: 06/24/15 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 29: My White Knight

Read what you said previously, and I agree.... So what will be the focus on (besides character development) the story while we wait for the war to recommence? Information gathering? Another wedding? Enemy's side of planning? Assassination plots?

Author's Response: You'll see. The obvious ones are the wedding and the Golden Palm. But otherwise, I'm not giving away anything.

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Date: 09/18/15 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 30: Apprehensiveness

Excellent, so the fighting will soon commence.... Yes? And if people do want you to make a chapter about facing fears you can either do a side chapter, not do it at all, or just tell them to do it themselves and send it to you or add as co-author... Just a food for thought. XD

Author's Response: Well, I've been told to cut off the fighting for a while to update you guys on the character personalities. Lots of character development. There's still the wedding, the slaving ring and then marching again.

We've all heard the stories of wings that have been stained black by darkness. Wings that have been stained by hatred, contempt, pain, death, the list goes on... But have you heard the story of the angel whose wings are streaked with crimson. Dark. Light. Good. Evil. Some lines aren't as clear as you may believe.
Rated: Adult 23 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 7908 Words: 21097 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Accident, Blackmailed, Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 01/01/15
Updated: 03/28/15
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Date: 03/28/15 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The Angel With Crimson Wings

I like this chapter, just a few more corrections and it could make 5 stars in my opinion! Are you considering of having Lyle try to advance back up to get not only catch up to her but try to get revenge as well?... Or what?

Author's Response: Haven't really put much thought into it yet really. But you've got me thinking about that. Guess you'll just have to wait and see ;)

Fils Du Cirque is a teenager working at his families travelling circus but after stepping in for his cousin he will become the masked hero of hope, the bringer of justice, THE BLACK ROSE.
Rated: Deviant 4 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 4069 Words: 1492 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Featured Items: Masks
Locale: Camp
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Good to Bad, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: The Peace Corp
Published: 01/08/15
Updated: 01/09/15
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Date: 06/03/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Day it happened

Well I got bored and decided to read all the Peace Corp stories I haven't read yet. (I've only read the Hunt For Red Phoenix and Lyfe & Deph.)

This chapter is good, needs a little work; but I like it.

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Date: 06/03/15 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: BURN BABY BURN

Well it's good, but you definitely need to think about adding more to this story.

Sexy alien Sunstanna arrive's on earth to study human habit's. Unfortunately the man who first contacted her had given up waiting so instead she must find someone to assist her in her alien shenanigans. Armed with 'Space Magic' she sets out to fulfil her check list.
Rated: Deviant 83 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 114758 Words: 82329 Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
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Date: 04/21/15 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Well that's convenient... Any chance those clones/dolls get a mind of their own and be used to take over... Whatever?! XP

Author's Response: Nah, they are basic programmes with no self awareness.

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Date: 05/26/15 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Nice; so do I detect a fight between Anna & Tera next?

Author's Response: maaaaaybe

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Date: 06/12/15 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Now this has become even more interesting... I'm getting a weird vibe that's telling me that Firms is using Lara to get to Anna... I wonder if I'm right?!

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Date: 06/17/15 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Quite the finale to this part of the story; so I wonder what the next one will be like? XD

Author's Response: It's a step in a different direction, thanks for reading.

Humanity has accepted the control of the Alfanian Empire for years. Now, it's time for them to stop.
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 18246 Words: 23811 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: Family Household, Labratory, Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 02/08/15
Updated: 06/12/16
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Date: 02/18/15 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - The First Shots

Bravo, I like where this is going...Can't wait to see what happens next! (Some minor errors, but relatively well written....4 Stars!)

Author's Response: Minor errors? What minor errors?! ~ Hikaro

A mystery, a man named The Dealer, who takes the dead and places them in new worlds. Their names... Aces. People who will go on to change history, or fail trying. This is Shore's story, a Dragon Knight and The Dealer's newest Ace.
Rated: Explicit 255 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 102634 Words: 208366 Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Unknown, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 02/14/15
Updated: 02/17/16
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Date: 10/09/15 Title: Chapter 20: Five of Spades: Two of the Same

Nice, I'm looking forward to see what comes from this deception.... Though if a dragon knight becomes strong enough and wise enough to defeat others and challenge their god/gods and cease to be their ace then does he/she become a rogue knight or is there more to it than that?

(Not sure if I asked that correctly, though...)

Author's Response: A rogue knight? Technically an Ace is just a term that the Dealer coined for emissaries that do battle against any other god's emissary for a God's personal gain. A gamble. They wouldn't become a rogue anything, the God wouldn't be able to touch them, just like Circa couldn't touch Shore near the beginning. The Dragon Knight has to go to their realm. So the Dragon Knight who escapes a God is pretty much just a Dragon Knight, nothing more, nothing less. If they reach the 9th rank of immortal magic, they become a God and are no longer a Dragon Knight.

I hope that answers your question. I think I was pretty thorough.

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Date: 10/07/15 Title: Chapter 19: Five of Hearts: A New Queen

Nice, I'm looking forward to reading more and stung her get one over on those gods... Especially the Dealer... So when will 'All In' become a chapter, if you catch my drift?

Author's Response: Funnily enough, 'All In' could be the name of the next chapter. It's the council chapter after all. I think I've got an idea of how to end it now so that's awesome.

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Date: 08/13/15 Title: Chapter 16: Four of Spades: Go Fish

Very good... Will you be naming one of the next chapters 'The Bluff' or something along those lines dealing with bluffing? XD

Author's Response: Perhaps I will. It's a good name, and I think I have a chapter for it.

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Date: 02/19/15 Title: Chapter 3: Ace of Hearts: Drawing a new card

Great story so far, some errors with spelling but only with a few words!

Author's Response: Yeah, I saw those, I spent some time messing with it to correct it, but I doubt I got it all.

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Date: 09/06/15 Title: Chapter 17: Five of Clubs: Deckmaster

Excellent, I was wondering when you may throw in a Sensei to train the young dragon.... XD

Author's Response: I didn't even know I was going to throw in a sensei until I finished the chapter.

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Date: 05/24/15 Title: Chapter 9: Three of Clubs: The Diamonds and the Daggers

Excellent... I like this chapter!

Author's Response: I'm working on another Betrayer chapter. Hopefully you'll like that too.

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Date: 07/20/15 Title: Chapter 12: Three of Spades: Gold and Black

Excellent chapter.... And I'm guessing her mother will be held in the unnamed city she plans to conquer.... It'd make sense, but you could also have her in her own brother's castle in a dungeon of sorts..... No idea, really, but the unnamed city sounds more appropriate...

Author's Response: Conquer, she plans to take over, the city will be passed to her without battle, it would be very convenient though.

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Date: 07/22/15 Title: Chapter 13: Four of Clubs: A Joker in the Deck

As to your question: Why not make that a aside chapter, think that'd work?

Author's Response: I think making side chapters might mess with the flow of the story, it works with Betrayer, not so much with Dealer as it would be a question of 'why didn't you do it in the first place?' I can still refer back to it though like I did this chapter.

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Date: 07/29/15 Title: Chapter 13: Four of Clubs: A Joker in the Deck

Hey Misaania, just a little food for thought (if ya haven't considered it already) that I've been thinking on:

If you run run out of cards, you can always use hands (Flush, Pair, High Card, and/or even the dreaded 'Dead Man's Hand') as chapter titles.... Well?

Author's Response: I have been thinking about that, and will probably use them.

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Date: 07/30/15 Title: Chapter 14: Four of Diamonds: A Mountain and a Bridge

Excellent, I'm looking forward to the next chapter...XP

And don't feel bad, I haven't done anything with my (actual) TGR story in months..... I'm so behind... XD

Author's Response: Yeah. I just got distracted though which involved me digging into some writer's block.

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Date: 08/02/15 Title: Chapter 15: Four of Hearts: Violet Jack

Nice... So does she encounters a powerful creature to calm her anger and have a nice feast for all?

Author's Response: Nope, I skipped the hunt, I've explained enough hunts, and if I go through another Thunder-wraith fight I think I'll go mad.

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Date: 09/18/15 Title: Chapter 18: Five of Diamonds: Flipped Face Up

Nice... I wonder where it'll go from here?

Author's Response: Good question. Probably somewhere where I actually have a proper battle with someone equal to Shore's power.

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Date: 10/30/15 Title: Chapter 21: Six of Clubs: All In

Nice, this is a great chapter... Very entertaining to see ruthless leaders get out smarted by a 'child'... XP

(And I see you've added "All In" as the name of the chapter. A move that can make you or break you; though if they call, your victory will depend on the hand you have and the cards fate deals you.

Author's Response: I did. That's your chapter name that I forgot to mention. Sorry about that :3

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Date: 11/01/15 Title: Chapter 22: Six of Diamonds: Torn Cards

Yikes, that was an intense chapter. So what's next on the menu? XP

Author's Response: Good question, slowing down and romancing methinks. It was mentioned briefly about midway through the chapter and we're getting close to the all important 'puberty' I was talking about and for me, that's about as awkward as they come.

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Date: 11/03/15 Title: Chapter 23: Six of Hearts: Repairing a Broken Heart

Intriguing.... So who's going to declare war on whom and when will it commence?

Author's Response: Good question. That's to be figured out later.

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Date: 11/04/15 Title: Chapter 24: Six of Spades: The King and His Thing

Autism? That there is really a handful, in of itself. I have a younger sibling that has that (not to mention I have a higher functioning form called Aspergers, undiagnosed); so I can relate with that.

So I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next... XD

Author's Response: I have a cocktail of my own issues myself, a minor case of Aspergers included (I went to therapy to help me with my social issues.) As for my knowledge on the subject, I'm not all too knowledgeable on it myself, but my Mom is a teacher and she's talked about a few kids like Ula. Of course, Ula is an extreme case and I'm on the fence as to what I want to do with her, but I guess I'll be forced to figure it out soon enough.

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Date: 11/05/15 Title: Chapter 24: Six of Spades: The King and His Thing

You know, reading some of the comments has got me thinking. Perhaps further down the road, you 'could' make a short story (that or side chapters) on Kara and her late husband; a prequel of sorts. And maybe her point of view of how her daughter has achieved so much in a such a short amount of time.

Not really suggesting anything, just throwing an idea out there. Just something to think on to get the gears going layer on... And what not... XP

Author's Response: I've been considering that a while now. Before you said it. One of the books that inspired this story's creation did the same. It will probably be an idea for after the Dealer is completed.

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Date: 11/07/15 Title: Chapter 25: Seven of Clubs: Jack Shit

Excellent....Though I did notice a misplaced comma near the end. (Not sure if there were more than that.

Of course I was you, idiot.

Author's Response: Fixed. Thanks.

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Date: 11/07/15 Title: Chapter 26: Side Deck 1: Asthenia: Ace of Clubs: The King’s Gambit

Intriguing.... I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

Author's Response: Legends is up next. Almost done, there'll be a chapter tomorrow.

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Date: 11/07/15 Title: Chapter 25: Seven of Clubs: Jack Shit

My phone didn't finish what I said for some reason.

Error: Of course I was you, idiot.
Correct: Of course I was, you idiot.

Though the way you have it fixed seems okay.

Author's Response: Yeah. It's quite a pain. The title gets deleted and I have to fix the thing multiple times so I kinda don't want to go back.

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Date: 02/17/16 Title: Chapter 31: Freedom: Second Link: Ordering a New Golden Age

Quite interesting.... She ever going to meet a wacky investor that may somehow increase their chance of success? *Like some guy pulling a Ben Franklin with metal wire, a kite, and a thunderstorm?

Author's Response: A wacky investor? Makes me think of that guy in Django Unchained. Anyway, we'll have to see, considering everything, maybe, but then again, I have a bunch of characters I can still use ;)

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Date: 12/06/15 Title: Chapter 27: Seven of Diamonds: The Will of an Ace

Interesting.... I'm looking forward to the next chapters.. One question though.... Twins?

Author's Response: 'Technically' impossible. And with that said, it means maybe.

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Date: 12/10/15 Title: Chapter 29: Seven of Spades: The Forth Suit (Conclusion of book one)

Excellent... looking forward to reading more... XD

Author's Response: I'll see what I can do about getting more. For now I'm going to see if I can focus on writing and forget the world exists.

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Date: 02/18/16 Title: Chapter 1: Ace of clubs: Rigging the deck

*when I said investor, I meant to say inventor....damn auto-correct....😧

Author's Response: Lol. Guy from Django Unchained stays true!

A war is starting. An unwitting teenager is getting pulled into the centre
Rated: Kid-Friendly 7 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 9852 Words: 7478 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Forced
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Horror, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 02/20/15
Updated: 02/19/16
Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed starstarstar
Date: 02/20/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting story, I give this a 3 (well, 3.7 to be exact); the story is good but there seems to be more that could've been done here, though I'm not exactly sure what! There's more, but I can't seem to place it just yet from just 1 chapter...!

Author's Response: yeah you're right, there's a lot more. i hope you keep reading. thanks for the comment. means a lot

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Date: 02/22/15 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is an interesting story, yet there are some errors.... Spelling, punctuation, things that could be added, ect...

Author's Response: yeah there's probably tons. i write on my phone in class, on the bus and stuff so it's easy to make silly errors. i'll try to be better. as usual, i appreciate the comment

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Date: 02/23/15 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Interesting!

A brash young thief and his friend take on a job they are not fully prepared for.
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 5348 Words: 4367 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Captive, Mythical Setting
Series: None
Published: 02/23/15
Updated: 02/23/15
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Date: 02/23/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting, I like where you're going with!

Author's Response: Thanks, I have a few ideas that will probably make the story more interesting, but less exciting.

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Date: 02/23/15 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Nice, the Prince got lucky; but will there be a time where the King/Prince fall victim to that poolof enchanted water?

Author's Response: That would be interesting, but Ive already mentioned an antidote.

After every single adventure link been in this is one of his hardest. Ps this is my first story and I this thing in which I put the title and I'm still working on the story.So wish good luck.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 4 Reviews star Story Incomplete Reads: 3798 Words: 189 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Featured Items: Boots
Locale: Camp
Body Modification: Vocal Surgery
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Fan Fiction
Type of Change: Artificial Age Progression
Series: None
Published: 02/26/15
Updated: 02/26/15
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Date: 02/28/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Your story has great promise, but you lack many things as mistakes has downed your story... You need training, my young Padawan; Roleplay will help you, and I'll be happy to help if you have a Deviantart account!

James is a 3L at a mid-tier law school in Portland, Oregon. However, he begins to notice changes in his classmates. Significant changes. Is he losing his mind?
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 8715 Words: 10475 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Cultural, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 02/28/15
Updated: 03/08/15
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Date: 02/28/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well that was an interesting chapter, some mistakes but I like where this is going!

The house always wins, something.
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 7219 Words: 870 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Stewardess
Featured Items: Work Uniform
Locale: Vacation Destination
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement
Motivation for Change: Female Domination, Forced
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Story Theme: Witchcraft
Series: None
Published: 03/01/15
Updated: 03/01/15
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Date: 03/01/15 Title: Chapter 1: The Bet

This was interesting, but needs some modification and some things that needs fixing/correcting...!

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback, I'll give it a little read-over and fix while I decide if there's enough stuff in my head to make a second chapter or not.

A sexually frustrated man and social outcast gets back at all the women who spurned him, with a little help from Eris and her golden apple...
Rated: Explicit 3 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 3735 Words: 831 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Motivation for Change: Unknown, Willing or Voluntary
Series: None
Published: 03/26/15
Updated: 03/26/15
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Date: 03/27/15 Title: Chapter 1: It Happened One Night

Well that was interesting, I like where this is going!

Poor Logan, not only does he get dumped (hard) by Ashely (his girlfriend of 6 months) on his birthday but something else happens that he'll never forget.
Rated: Adult 50 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 145066 Words: 20678 Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Slave
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced, Revenge, Tricked
Personality: Bad to Good, From Submissive to Dominant, Good to Bad
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Captive, Horror, Mythical Setting, Romance
Type of Change: Stuck
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Torture
Series: The TGR Series
Published: 03/29/15
Updated: 01/29/17
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Date: 09/26/15 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Wasted

And so, the series continues as we await what will happen, as well as to find out who that mystery boss is and what or whom he's after...XD

Author's Response: We couldn't have said it better ourselves... XP

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Date: 08/18/15 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Taking It All In

Ch 15 is currently in the works, so this is gonna be epic... XP

Author's Response: Now I'm working on ch 17.... And so on! XP

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Date: 09/01/15 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Girl's Night Out

Damn, I wonder what I can do to make this better? XP

Author's Response: Indeed... XD

Alex purchases a video game and the resulting journey will change his life forever.
Rated: Explicit 17 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 37144 Words: 7584 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Featured Items: Maid Uniform
Motivation for Change: Accident, Tricked
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Captive, Mythical Setting, Pregnancy
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Bondage/S&M, Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 03/30/15
Updated: 05/01/16
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Date: 03/30/15 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Interesting start, but it'd be better incoporate this pre-chapter and the "first chapter" into just one chapter.... In my opinion anyways...!

Jordan Levine, age 16, is given superpowers after survivng a fire in a chemical warehouse. However, as he begins to explore his powers, he meets a man who takes him to a strange highschool where he is taught how to control his powers, interacts with teenagers with a wide variety of superpowers, and even fights evil every now and then during the weekends. But when a supervillian of old rises to power once more, it is up to him and four other trainees to decide the fate of not only the students and the school, but the fate of superheros in general.
Rated: Explicit 18 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 62807 Words: 23014 Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
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Date: 05/17/15 Title: Chapter 11: Elsewhere

Excellent story so far, just need to work on the length of the story as this particular chapter is a little too short... XD

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Date: 05/09/15 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: My Power's True Power

Well that's intriguing...

Read 'School Trip' and other story's from 'The Idol of Razoukan' series, to find out the unique story of a golden idol found in the Amazon which turns men to girls. Found by a man in a dump in Pheonix, the Idol makes an exciting new series of events occur...
Rated: Explicit 9 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 67079 Words: 10297 Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Stripper, Teenager
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Sex Toys
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Series: The Idol of Razoukan
Published: 04/11/15
Updated: 07/23/15
Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed
Date: 04/14/15 Title: Chapter 6: Working Nights

This is a good story, but the first few chapters need work; I'm not trying to be constantly a negative critic, just want to help.

Author's Response: Ok, thanks for the feedback

Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed starstarstar
Date: 04/14/15 Title: Chapter 5: Allen the Stripper

Much better, though still a bit short....

Author's Response: It's just a bit of fun, take your constant criticism elsewhere please

A shady organisation begins recruiting teenage males to its ranks; an organisation that, unknown to many, intends to eradicate the world of all males using female super-soldiers.
Rated: Explicit 115 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 285206 Words: 116349 Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: Camp, Labratory
Motivation for Change: Female Domination
Personality: Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Captive
Type of Change: Mechanical Device, Mind Control
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 04/20/15
Updated: 02/19/17
Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed
Date: 04/20/15 Title: Chapter 1: "Introduction"

Well this seems intriguing.

Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed
Date: 06/29/15 Title: Chapter 1: "Introduction"

@ColbatTungsten & GreenLeaf: darwen98 was unaware of this till it pointed out and that he had his cousin make it better; I as proofreader/editor of said story has told him to send me a copy of it and then delete it from here.... So I'll edit to the fullest extent I can where there's no Cory"unintended copyright infringement taking place... You have our sincerest apologies for this unintended incident... ~ Jacks-O-Lance & darwen98

The Hagerton family of New Allentown, Pennsylvania in the year 2415 discover that their lives will never be the same again, not after father and son, Keith and Jeffrey Hagerton go on a Sunday excursion to the long abandoned tourist cave, Crystal Cave, in one time Kutztown, Pennsylvania.
Rated: Adult 34 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 33182 Words: 17025 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: Family Household, Space or Foreign Planet, Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Distant Future, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 04/20/15
Updated: 05/28/15
Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed
Date: 04/21/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well thus seem interesting, very intriguing.

Author's Response: My thanks, Jacks. You're not going to want me to upload the WHOLE thing, are you?

Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed
Date: 04/21/15 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting, I wonder what's down there?

Author's Response: Oh, you'll find out, don't worry. You're just going to have to wait awhile. You haven't read "A Contested Future," I see. You'd already have an inkling, if you had. This is like watching the second three Star Wars "Prequels" before the original three. Following the numbered order of the six pretty much kills the "big reveal" when Darth Vader says, "Luke, I AM your father." If you'd already read "Contested Future," it would spoil it for you. I almost envy you. You're going into this story cold.

Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed
Date: 04/21/15 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Intriguingly, entertaining story so far.

Author's Response: Four's almost up. By the end of the night, if not sooner.

Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/23/15 Title: The Stellar Quest -- (A five chapter Preview)

Well that was interesting....

Author's Response: Oh, and thanks again for reading.

Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/23/15 Title: The Stellar Quest -- (A five chapter Preview)

Well that was interesting....

Author's Response: This stuff wasn't in the original manuscript. Jeffrey was not that far over into the "Iffy" category, originally, such that the issue of whether he thought himself a male or female ever came up. And he's not the main character anyway. You haven't even been introduced yet to the rest of the cast. (It's a big cast.) As for Athena, she wasn't revealed so soon either. The Venus fly trap in Crystal Cave was originally depicted as a flying saucer deep underground (ridiculous). It was only revealed later it was Athena shape shifting into a spaceship (for no good reason other than that it was the original concept). So dumb. A bad case of trying to salvage the original "reveal." I'm now fixing it. It's more like it's depicted in "A Contested Future" now. You should see Chapter 7. Poor Jeffrey finds himself morphing into Alice from Wonderland. Who the hell is writing this thing? I said I wasn't even going to post it here, and I'm making all these TG alterations. But the underground shape-shifted UFO-- DUMB.

I went on a class trip to Japan. I was separated from my class and met a beautiful young woman. I would never be the same again. (Involves catgirls.)
Rated: Adult 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 28280 Words: 803 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend, Maid, Slave
Featured Items: Bikinis, Bridal Gown, High Heels, Lingerie, Maid Uniform, Sex Toys
Locale: Family Household, High School, Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Female Domination, Forced
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Captive, Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 04/22/15
Updated: 05/14/15
Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/15/15 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Will this is..umm.an interesting story... Looking forward to the next chapters... XD

The fatal act of a good Samaritan leads to a new life and a new chance to make a difference in the world. There's just one thing: Geoffrey West asked for an upgrade, and the upgrade has a steep learning curve.
Rated: Adult 22 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 32885 Words: 11688 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Teenager
Locale: Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Cultural/Nationality Change, Made Smarter
Story Theme: Second Childhood
Type of Change: Age Regression, Mechanical Device
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 05/09/15
Updated: 05/13/15
Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/09/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. The Road to Hell

Well this is interesting....

Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/09/15 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2. The Road to Bushkazah

Intriguing, I see some potential in this story.... XD

Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/13/15 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10. All Roads Lead Home Again

Excellent story so far....

Author's Response: Thank you, Jacks-O-Lance! The story is complete. Not sure why not, but the COMPLETE check box didn't take the first time. I'm sure I did something wrong. But it shows complete now. Now you know how and why Rachel came to be. I'm looking for excuses to write the next story in the series.

Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed
Date: 05/13/15 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10. All Roads Lead Home Again

Looking for excuses.... School, abductions, bullies, family, coming to know one's new self?..... So many reasons, just take your pick...! XD

Author's Response: Oh, I have plenty of story lines. I worry there isn't enough audience, though. I know more than 10,000 people have clicked on it, but I don't know how many have actually read it. Also, I have several non-TG story projects I need to finish.

In the not-so-distant future, Virtual Reality gaming has become the new way to play. Among the many mmorpgs out there, Nurtha has a reputation for being one of the most unique games of its kind. Its competitive scene isn't very large, but it has a dedicated player base and a massive world. When two gamers log on, they find that the game is a little more than they anticipated.
Rated: Adult 14 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 12317 Words: 22800 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Mechanical Device
Series: None
Published: 05/09/15
Updated: 05/18/15
Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/09/15 Title: Chapter 1: Colonist: Nurtha

Wow... This story is quite intriguing...

Author's Response: Thanks! We're definitely trying lol.

Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/09/15 Title: Chapter 2: Gifted: Wrapped up

I'm liking this story more and more...

Author's Response: Glad you like it, this is just the beginning, we might have more planned soon.

The second story of Rachel Montoya, an American teenager in Europe who used to be an old man in California. She meets new friends in school, comes to terms with her sexuality, helps a TG classmate, and hides from a hired killer while still finding time to study for exams.
Rated: Adult 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 14395 Words: 11752 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Boyfriend, Daughter, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Sex Toys
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Romance
Warnings: Death, Torture
Series: None
Published: 05/15/15
Updated: 05/22/15
Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/15/15 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1. On the Road Again

Ah, I see you've continued it... Looking forward to the next chapters... XD

Author's Response: Next one's already there. Just waiting for the approval.

Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/20/15 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7. The Rules of the Road

Well that was interesting..... Is she what would be considered as a 'slacker genius?'

Author's Response: Depends on your definition of 'genius.' She certainly has an advantage over her classmates, in that she really has learned this material before. She's even taught this material before. Just not in her current incarnation. Geoff was a 60 years old, with a masters in engineering, and if he didn't know this material inside and out, he wouldn't be much of an engineer. On the other hand, we know from the previous story that Rachel is "more intelligent and more intuitive" than the average human, explaining her new found facility with languages, music, and art. I'm not going to specify an IQ or anything. Suffice it to say, she'll be as smart as the narrative needs her to be.

In a small village in Japan, Megurine Len is about to be put on the fast track to a fight which he didn't even know was coming
Rated: Adult 1 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 1438 Words: 1777 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend, Son, Teenager
Locale: Labratory, Prison
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men, Changes to be Attracted Only to Women
Type of Change: Stuck
Series: Brave New World
Published: 05/18/15
Updated: 05/18/15
Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/19/15 Title: Chapter 1: Song 1 - The Sound of the Ocean

Well this is quite interesting...

What happens when you are exposed to top-secret chemicals? One high schooler finds out
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 17995 Words: 3254 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Accident
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 05/23/15
Updated: 06/04/15
Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/26/15 Title: Chapter 1: Summer's Eve

Well this ought to be good....

Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/26/15 Title: Chapter 2: School Day

Interesting chapter... Looking forward to the next few chapters... A little on the short side, but great read so far aside from that....

Author's Response: I'll try to expand the next chapter so that it includes more of the story.

A week has passed since Seth Phoenix was extracted from Dimension X. The team are slowly adapting to their new roles while Bobby and Fils are trying to be normal teenagers but a string of robberies and attacks on rich men by unknown forces along with the appearance of two individuals linked to Seth's dark past requires them to suit up and for one member, come to grips with a personal demon
Rated: Deviant 2 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 6229 Words: 30540 Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/23/15 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Olympus has fallen

Nice, love me some explosions.... XP

Author's Response: The next few chapters will be flashbacks that go into detail about certain events, one of them being the destruction of London as told by Jackie so yeah, expect a lot of explosions

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