Helena St James
Hi, i'm Helena, 18, Scottish, slightly unhinged but an amazing writer with amazing ideas, capable of amazing...stuff

I have been mainly writing stories for my Peace Corp series and I have several smaller projects in the works too

If you want help contact me at jynxblog@gmail.com as I rarely use the email associated with this account.

Member Since: 03/16/14 Membership status: Member


Reviews by Helena St James
Billy was your average sixteen year old until he encountered a mysterious website that would change his life forever.
Rated: Explicit 24 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 168024 Words: 15881 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Genie/Wishes
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Intense Violence, Politically Incorrect
Series: None
Published: 03/19/14
Updated: 04/07/15
Reviewer: Once A Boy Now A Girl Signed
Date: 09/20/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Origin

I've fixed the chapters to help people understand the mask but it essentially is a more futuristic version of the masks in mission impossible ghost protocol

When a 16-year-old boy stumbles across a TG fiction site, a magical mirror is going to make thins pretty for him...
Rated: Kid-Friendly 6 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 4079 Words: 1203 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Teenager
Featured Items: Lingerie
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Forced, Unknown, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 04/18/14
Updated: 04/18/14
Reviewer: Once A Boy Now A Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/18/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start hope you write more

Aaron finds a rock in his back yard. Hilarity ensues.
Rated: Deviant 43 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 89290 Words: 14634 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Sissy
Featured Items: Bikinis
Locale: Family Household, High School
Warnings: Non-Consentual Sex
Series: The Curse Universe
Published: 05/13/14
Updated: 06/09/14
Reviewer: Once A Boy Now A Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/14/14 Title: Chapter 1: There Was A Young Boy Who Found a Rock

Great story, I hope you write more.

Author's Response: Thank you for enjoying the story, and don't worry, there will be more.

a teenage boy with an interesting vantage point gets a rude awakening when he discovers that teenage girls REALLY don't like being spied on in their locker room!!
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 23341 Words: 2108 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Once A Boy Now A Girl Signed starstarstar
Date: 08/06/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved the story but here's some advice, Space out your story into paragraphs so people aren't just looking at a wall of text, I know it's a small thing but trust me it will make your story look a lot better.

This story is a made up story were I wet myself at school and am sent to the kindergarten classroom to get a diaper on me but don't know till it happens
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 6644 Words: 770 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Baby
Featured Items: Diapers
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Breast Implants
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Type: Non-English
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Drug-Induced
Warnings: Incest
Series: None
Published: 08/09/14
Updated: 08/12/14
Reviewer: Once A Boy Now A Girl Signed starstarstar
Date: 08/10/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm not sure if this was a mistake but why do all of the paragraphs start with "so one day" apart from that I don't see anything else wrong. I hope you continue and make the next chapter longer

Author's Response: I will make the next chapter longer and that was a mistake

Reviewer: Once A Boy Now A Girl Signed star
Date: 08/13/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

For the love of god, did you even spell check this plus you need full stops and commas as well because it lets the reader take a break and can be used to add extra information plus the pacing of the story is ridiculous. All that I got from this chapter is he was wearing his sisters panties for some reason and then gets turned into a girl by a witch and then some fucker called mr evil shows up. The dialogue, or lack of, as I see no speech marks ("these") yet I see parts which are clearly dialogue but no speech marks is also annoying

A man is forced to undergo some serious changes at the hand of his wife for his wrong-doing. The power changes and and corrupts and leaves everyone it touches with new lives and new trouble.
Rated: Adult 15 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 101878 Words: 19176 Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Once A Boy Now A Girl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08/10/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this story but please space out your story into paragraphs, I hate walls of text.

Randy Mayer was the number one recruit for volleyball in the US. But, that could change when he catches the rare disease of MGCD (Male Gender Change Disease)
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 6331 Words: 1900 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, School Uniform
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Accident
Story Theme: Sports
Series: None
Published: 08/12/14
Updated: 08/15/14
Reviewer: Once A Boy Now A Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/12/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start, I will be watching this closely.

Tom Jackson has been given the opportunity of a life time. His parents and younger sister have gone away leaving him alone to indulge in his crossdressing. He finally carries out his daring plan to attend his sisters school dressed in her uniform. But his innocent adventure soon turns into a desperate fight to hide his true identity.
Rated: Explicit 22 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 47805 Words: 7055 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: Breast Forms, School Uniform, Undies
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Humiliation
Series: None
Published: 08/20/14
Updated: 09/29/14
Reviewer: Once A Boy Now A Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/20/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Todays the day

Ok definetly tracking and favouriting this story, please post new chapter soon.

Author's Response: oh im so happy you enjoyed it, more to come soon. While you wait check out my other stories. xx

Reviewer: Once A Boy Now A Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/27/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Todays the day

Love the pacing, your always leaving the reader wanting more. Please put up chapter 3 soon

Author's Response: ha-ha, that's my style, cliff hangers are much more fun. Glad you enjoyed it more to come soon, x

A man who spat words to kill. A young woman that struggles with the past. What do they have in common? Nothing, yet they're the same person: RQAX-Y2SO AKA The Reaper
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews starstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 775 Words: 351 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Once A Boy Now A Girl Signed starstarstar
Date: 02/01/15 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: RQAX-Y2SO

Nice start but the only criticism is that you are vague on what reglades arenjoying, apart from that it's really good

Izunagi looks at the sea from the sky. Izunaga looks at the sky from the sea. When the two meet the gate shall open, and through it a being will come to destroy the world. Wait, wait, wait, why do I have to deal with that? I have my own problems! First off why am I wearing my sister's clothes? Secondly: why is the government of three different countries chasing me? Thirdly: why does my life suck? Oh, and the last thing: I HATE THE GATES!
Rated: Adult 1 Reviews Story Incomplete Reads: 894 Words: 243 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Twin
Locale: Family Household, Labratory, Road Trip
Motivation for Change: Undercover, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Comedy, Distant Future, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 02/04/15
Updated: 02/04/15
Reviewer: Once A Boy Now A Girl Signed
Date: 04/26/15 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Nice bit of back story to set up the world but can you please add more. The summary suggests that you have an idea but I can't give this story a rating based on its summary

A mysterious package, a strange journal, and a few sentences that change reality- and then disappear.
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews starstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 5365 Words: 816 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Once A Boy Now A Girl Signed starstarstar
Date: 03/28/15 Title: Chapter 1: Packages and Changes, Pt. 1

One problem I have with this is that the brother is 10 and he is ,if I am reading correctly, masturbating which is kind of a thing I dislikeseeing in stories purely because it is borderline child porn other wise this is a good story with a good,overused but still good, plot device.

Author's Response: Yeah, I don't like it too much either, but it felt right for that scene. That reminds me of a detail I left out, too... *fixes*

Brandon is home alone for the week while his mom dad and sister are out on vacation what will happen to him while he's at home?
P.s. This is my first story so pleas give me your opinions!!!
Rated: Explicit 1 Reviews starstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 4677 Words: 3925 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Featured Items: Bikinis
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 09/30/15
Updated: 09/30/15
Reviewer: Once A Boy Now A Girl Signed starstarstar
Date: 09/30/15 Title: Chapter 1: The arm band and taylor

You need to work on your writing style. I would suggest using commas to break up the sentence as the first paragraph could use a comma after Brandon I would also put an and before "this is the story"

I would suggest going through the entire passage and rereading it and using commas to break up the longer sentences. I would also suggest breaking up the large paragraphs as walls of text is painfully hard to read.

Anyway good story, kind of cliched but hell most stories on this site are, I can't wait to see where it goes.

Author's Response: Thanks for your input and I'm knew at making story's I've never even had like a drive to make any kind of story until recently and it took me like a week to write this one and I plan on adding more to this one and eventually finishing it I just need to find a way to put my ideas on paper

When mom goes out to a busness trip I get hypnotized into becoming a little girl
Rated: Kid-Friendly 11 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 16944 Words: 650 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Helena St James Signed
Date: 02/06/16 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

A bit short but I see potential. I would definitely continue.

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