DarkLuke
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While hiking, a boy stumbles across a magic artifact. As a result, whoever the boy touches transforms into a woman who is extremely attracted to him.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 37 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 187451 Words: 32306 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Coming of Age
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 12/10/12
Updated: 12/14/13
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/26/14 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

It appears that this fic is dead and therefore will not be updated, but I just wanted to let you know that this fic was fantastic. I was intrigued by the plot and the characters, and personally, I wouldn't mind having a power like that myself, hehehe. I don't think you elaborated enough on who the characters were, but still, the creativity and ingenuity in this premise is still THERE. So, kudos on a great TG story.

Dan Miles is having a really bad day, and it only gets worse! It seems that someone has something planned for him, something he never believed possible, and it all stems from a mysterious note.
Rated: Adult 15 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 78121 Words: 31635 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Boots, High Heels, Lingerie, Pantyhose
Body Modification: Ears Pierced, Extreme Breast Enlargement, Permanent Hair/Skin/Nail Change
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Captive, Humiliation, Pregnancy, Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Hypnosis, Identity Theft, Mind Control, Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Warnings: Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 07/13/13
Updated: 07/30/13
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/04/14 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1: Notes from Nobody

I was skeptical at first, but I grew to really like this story. None of the characters are particularly good people(Except for maybe Dennis and Sean), but they maintained my interest almost all of the way through. The last chapter in particular is BRILLIANT and subverts what most people thought this story was going to turn into.

Dave is a handsome guy and his girlfriend just doesn't live up to his friend Corey's expectations. One night out to the bar and a little persuasion lead to a life-changing revelation, his soon-to-be ex-girlfriend is a twisted witch.
Rated: Explicit 15 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 40466 Words: 6224 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo, Bride, Girlfriend, Mother, Slave, Wife
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails
Locale: Family Household
Body Modification: Ears Pierced, Extreme Breast Enlargement, Lips Plumped, Permanent Cosmetics, Permanent Hair/Skin/Nail Change
Motivation for Change: Curse, Female Domination, Forced, Revenge
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Pregnancy, Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Mind Control, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 07/16/13
Updated: 07/16/13
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/29/14 Title: Chapter 1: . . .

I'm not going to tell you how many times I've read this. This is one of my top three stories on whole site. The characterization is fantastic.

Lee & Stephen are two flatmates and best friends. With the Xmas Ball approaching drastic measures are taken to ensure they both have a date.
Rated: Adult 10 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 19604 Words: 4643 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Girlfriend
Featured Items: High Heels, Long Nails, Undies
Locale: College, Formal Dance
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 12/24/13
Updated: 12/31/13
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/20/14 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I loved this story. The relationship between Lee and Steve/Stephanie was so sweet and dorky in a Simon Pegg/Nick Frost kind of way that I wanted to see another chapter describing what happens after Stephanie dumps the antidote down the drain. Oh well, always leave them wanting more. Favorited.

Author's Response: Hiya, very happy you enjoyed it and I'm a huge fan of Spaced & Hot Fuzz so I'll take that comparison as a huge compliment! I've got a number of ideas. Perhaps a catch up with Lee & Steph, perhaps more on the mysterious Coven. If and when a story forms it'll be on here.

Two jocks come across a magic lamp and make foolish wishes.
Rated: Explicit 67 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 585958 Words: 21729 Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/23/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Bad Decisions

This story was WAY better and more well written than I thought it was going to be. Please update soon!

James returns to his home after turning into an attractive girl, hoping to find acceptance. Confronted by friends and family who can't help but see him in different light, he is dragged down into a spiral of jealousy and lust.
Rated: Deviant 8 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 31689 Words: 8408 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Featured Items: Lingerie, School Uniform, Work Uniform
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive, Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Humiliation
Type of Change: Hormonal, Stuck
Warnings: Bondage/S&M, Incest, Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 02/12/14
Updated: 04/11/14
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/16/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Neat little story. What I really enjoy is how you describe the claustrophobia and discrimination that James/Jamie is feeling in his small little town. The doctor at the beginning of the fic was right- I wouldn't want to live in a place like that either.

**I saw one too many commercials for Nutrisystem one night and this is the result.**
Rated: Kid-Friendly 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 3899 Words: 1815 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Comedy, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 03/08/14
Updated: 03/08/14
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03/16/14 Title: Chapter 1: The only chapter

Neat little fic. The only flaw in it is that we the readers can already tell that it's a dude narrating just from the story tags right above the text.

Author's Response: You should be able to tell by reading it too. I wasn't trying to hide that it was a guy.

After Will gets dumped, his friend Don agrees to help him find his perfect woman. Things don't go according to Don's plan, though.
Rated: Explicit 12 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 73772 Words: 6707 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Lingerie
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 04/09/14
Updated: 08/09/14
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/20/14 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Another great chapter.

Mark and Evan make a friendly wager on a hockey game and the result leaves Evan in more than just an embarrassing situation.
Rated: Adult 12 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 74855 Words: 8395 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Bikinis, Lingerie, Undies
Motivation for Change: Curse, Lost a Bet
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Costume or Halloween
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Mind Control
Series: None
Published: 04/14/14
Updated: 04/21/14
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed
Date: 06/02/14 Title: Chapter 8: EPILOGUE

Very well written TG fic. I enjoyed it thoroughly.

A man is offered a promotion, and accepts it before asking for a description. He might not like what his boss had in mind
Rated: Explicit 35 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 74337 Words: 8799 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Bride, Mother, Wife
Featured Items: Corsets, High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails
Locale: Office
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Pregnancy, Romance
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 05/29/14
Updated: 06/12/14
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed
Date: 06/09/14 Title: Chapter 3: Dance

As somebody who absolutely despises sex slave/bimbo TG stories, I'm glad to be surprised for once. I didn't see the "twist" coming, which put a smile on my face while reading it. Yeah, fuck you Parson. You got exactly what you deserved.

On the other hand, the reviewer below me made a good point. Parson could have done ANYTHING he wanted with the serum. Why didn't he use it to turn himself into a more handsome man?

Anyways, great story mate. The writing is good, and I'm very pleased that the former man now woman is independent and kicks ass. Will be following.

Author's Response: Like I mentioned for the below review, I really don't have a good reason why Parson didn't change himself instead. He was a shallow narcissistic a**, and that would always have shown, but he probably would have used it on himself if I had thought the start out a little more. This story is mostly being written off the cuff with a rough plan, so a few things are likely to slip through the gap. And although Illiara will eventually wind up a domestic wife, I didn't want to go full bimbo with her, I felt that was too far into stereotype. I wanted to try and write a mostly normal, if slightly sexual, character. Thanks for sticking with my story past the first chapter and the fake foreshadowing of her being a sex slave.

Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/09/14 Title: Chapter 3: Dance

Sorry, I forgot to rate this. It's easily a ***** caliber fic.

Understood that you wrote this without a strict outline. It's OK. If everyone acted rationally 100% of the time, we wouldn't have any drama!

Author's Response: Thanks :) And who need rationality, drama ftw!

A miserably pregnant wife and her average nerdy husband find themselves in a sticky situation after falling through to an alternate reality.
Rated: Explicit 9 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 153111 Words: 26274 Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Husband, Wife
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident, Forced, Revenge, Tricked
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Pregnancy, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Age Regression, Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 06/03/14
Updated: 06/03/14
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/16/15 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I love the slow burn of this work. You incorporate the magic element and the witchcraft so effortlessly into the story that it doesn't feel like it's a deus ex machina. I also really enjoyed the characters and the subtle shifts in Kyle/Kylie's and Brianna/Brian's personality.

Gregor is a terrible magician. When trying to pass his final test to become a journeyman wizard, he blew up his masters house. Even worse he turned himself into a woman. Now on his own he has to break the curse while keeping his skin and virtue intact.
Rated: Adult 16 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 35000 Words: 10138 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/20/14 Title: Chapter 6: On to Rushalli

I've read all of your stories, and this one along with Alice Rose is my favorite. I can't wait to see Gregor/a become a powerful female wizard and get revenge on her master!

Author's Response: Many thanks. I'll try to update Alice Rose tonight or tomorrow, I tend to follow my muse and Alice has been refusing to come out of her cave, but I have some ideas on what happens next with her. And I'l keep trying to update this story once a week until the end. What the end is I'm not saying, but it will be interesting. Have a great day.

John Grey is the big man on campus at USC, until he and his buddies decide to have a panty raid...on a coven of witches. John will slowly become everything he desires in a woman, but will John come out with panties as his prize, or will he be wearing them? Magic can be a b****...
Rated: Kid-Friendly 6 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 18232 Words: 7559 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails
Locale: College
Body Modification: Ears Pierced, Extreme Breast Enlargement, Lips Plumped, Permanent Cosmetics, Permanent Hair/Skin/Nail Change
Motivation for Change: Revenge
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity, Made Dumber
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Mind/Body Posession
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Fast/Instant Change, Hypnosis, Mind Control
Series: None
Published: 07/05/14
Updated: 07/05/14
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/14/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Usually I hate these kinds of "bimbo" stories, but this one really entertained me. It was well written too.

Defeated, Batman's body is compromised. Transformed into a beautiful amazon, he (or she) has to take down eight of the most dangerous villains Gotham city has ever known. Complicating the mystery is the fact that the serum came from his own labs. Can Batman save the day and once again earn the cowl?
Rated: Explicit 15 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 15837 Words: 8008 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/29/14 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction I: The Bat and the Clown

Oh man, now THIS is how you do a Batman TG story. Fantastic. The atmosphere was just perfect. It was dark, depressing, and you got Bruce's voice down right. I felt like I was reading one of the comics or watching a particularly weird episode of The Animated Series. Can't wait for more.

I wonder why Bruce's hair is red now, though.

Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/29/14 Title: Chapter 2: Introduction II: The Butler, the Bird, and the Babe

Another great chapter. I'm conflicted. While I feel really bad for Bruce and all that he's going through, at the same time, you would think the “Batgod” who according to internet legend can beat literally anyone given enough prep time would have prepared for a serum that turns him into a woman. :P

I'm also conflicted because as much as I love Batman, I can't wait to see him kick ass as Batgirl. Superheroines are so sexy. Plus I adore redheads.

Author's Response: Hey thanks for the review! The next chapters ready and coming up soon, so watch out for it. Batman's a fun character to write except when he's perfect. If the main character's seen everything coming then it's a bit boring. I'd say this Batman's a combination of the chronology and backstory of pre-new 52 Batman, but with the character of Batman: Earth One by Geoff Johns,a more human character with flaws like anyone else. Interesting points though Jim

Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/21/14 Title: Chapter 3: Introduction III: Awake and Aware

Another great chapter, and a "TAKE THAT!" to the people who argue that Gotham City would be better off if Batman wasn't there. :)

Ever seen a magic trick so convincing, it makes you wonder if the magician really is hiding a secret power? One man discovers just that, a little too late.
Rated: Adult 16 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 14607 Words: 3200 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Model
Featured Items: Corsets, High Heels, Long Nails, Pantyhose
Locale: Vacation Destination
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Humiliation, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Age Regression, Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 12/06/14
Updated: 12/06/14
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/11/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent TG fic. Clever premise, good narration, unique location, and I love how you leave us hanging with the ending.

A jerk is given a change...for the better?
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 5414 Words: 1430 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Personality: Fights Change, Made Smarter
Story Theme: Costume or Halloween, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 01/09/15
Updated: 01/10/15
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/04/15 Title: Chapter 1: Something Wicked This Way Comes

Please continue, this was getting good!

I decide to use a monkey's paw to repair my relationship with my girlfriend Lucy. It might not be the smartest decision I've ever made.

Heavily inspired by 'I Wish' by Snoopbone.
Rated: Adult 6 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 41322 Words: 9009 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Bimbo, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Undies
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident, As Justice for a Crime
Personality: Made Dumber
Story Theme: Comedy, Genie/Wishes, Romance
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 04/05/15
Updated: 04/05/15
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/18/15 Title: Chapter 3: Sophia

First of all, welcome back. I missed you. Take your time with Simone Says. I'd rather it be perfect than here quickly, even if it has been over a year.

As for this story, another rousing success. The story worked, and the characters were well defined. Kudos. This story worked very well in a revenge tale kind of way. I felt briefly for a moment like I was reading an old Tales From The Crypt comic or something(Oddly enough, your story has that kind of a feel to me) since it's about a horrible person getting their just desserts in a horribly ironic way.

Does "Sophia" hold down a job in the new reality, or does Lucy/her family take care of her? She doesn't seem merely ditzy or bimboesque. The way you wrote her made her seem mentally disabled.

A "Twisted Glen" Tale: Paul finds a portrait that transports him to the fantasy realm of Twisted Glen, and transforms him into a rather perky princess.
Rated: Explicit 2 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 20586 Words: 4395 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Featured Items: High Heels, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Comedy, Historical Time Period, Mind/Body Posession
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: Twisted Glen
Published: 07/10/15
Updated: 07/15/15
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07/22/15 Title: Chapter 3: CHAPTER -THREE-

I thoroughly enjoyed this story, I love this type of TG story, but I had to deduct one point because you ended it too soon. You ended it just as it was getting really good! Please do a sequel!

Author's Response: Don't worry, I think you'll be seeing the Princess again soon...

The mall, a mysterious man named Marty, a magical pendant, and three chances at a new life. What will 17 year old Ben do as his life is flipped upside down in the adventure of a lifetime to finally get the chance to live his life as a woman?
Rated: Explicit 48 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 101501 Words: 37506 Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Clothing, Fantasy Character, Secretary, Teenager
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Sex Toys, Work Uniform
Locale: Office
Motivation for Change: Curse, Tricked
Personality: Good to Bad
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Mind/Body Posession
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 08/08/15
Updated: 02/13/16
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/25/15 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Kimmy and College (Part Two)

I wasn't expecting a lot when I first read the title and summary, but this story surprised me. You have very good writing ability, and you have a good sense of characterization. So far if I had to choose, I would rather choose Jenny's life over Kimmy's life were I in Marty's situation just because it seems more stable (The naughty sex doesn't hurt either), but Kimmy's friend sounds sweet and like a genuine friend. Ms Peters may just be using Jenny as a fuck toy for all we know.

Sam discovers his company's new diversity policy will mean some big changes in his immediate future. It's political correctness gone mad, I tell you! And if you don't look out, this could be coming to an office near you!
Rated: Adult 7 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 13807 Words: 5251 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Featured Items: High Heels, Long Nails, Pantyhose, Undies
Locale: Office
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Forced
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Type of Change: Identity Theft, Racial
Series: None
Published: 11/23/15
Updated: 11/24/15
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/19/16 Title: Chapter 1: Positive Discrimination

Very G. This is probably one of the most well written stories that I've read on this site. It defitinely does play on our modern fears of political correctness and forced diversity in a very fun, supernatural way. Kudos.

Aiden Sommers was just your average, boring man, until he died. Upon learning that the afterlife is not exactly what it seems, Aiden must become a demon and an agent of Lust. What he doesn't know is this also entails him becoming a succubus.
Rated: Explicit 76 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 215854 Words: 49461 Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: For a Job
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Mind Control, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 12/04/15
Updated: 07/06/17
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/05/16 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I just started reading this fic, but I already now that if this isn't my absolute favorite TG fic on this site, it's number two. Your story is AMAZING. It's extremely well written. Aiden/Aeriel, Holly, Veshnial, and all the periphery characters feel like real people, which is rare in a story of this kind since most TG stories are self inserts. Your jokes and sense of humor is genuinely funny and witty, and your world building is surprisingly creative, and I say that as someone who reads a lot of fantasy and is very discriminating about world building. Your story fucking rocks, dude. It's also very sexy and human. Kudos.

Author's Response: Oh man thank you so much. You don't know how much this means to me. This gave me a serious confidence boost! =D

A straw misogynist is caught by a witch. To teach them a lesson, they're sent on an odyssey back in time, to go through the experiences of women across history.
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 25005 Words: 6203 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/05/16 Title: Chapter 4: 1927

First of all, this is an absolutely brilliant concept for a story, and the writing is good too, which makes me a little bit sad that this story could be GREAT. I think if your chapters were a little bit longer, and maybe if the main character stayed in these time periods for a longer period than a day, maybe a week or even a month so he can get acclimated to each environment before being forcibly thrust into an earlier period, it would have more of a mental and emotional impact on him, and we would get to see what kind of a person he truly is underneath. Either way, though, this is a fine story, and one of the best ones on this site. Favorited.

After being caught spying on a group of girls Scott a usually well behaved, teen and his mischievous best friend Bobby are turned into beautiful girls by a spell. They're then given the task of breaking the curse before midnight or risk remaining girls forever...
Rated: Explicit 89 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 119670 Words: 21038 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Curse, Female Domination, Forced, Revenge, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Story Theme: Costume or Halloween, Humiliation, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Stuck
Series: None
Published: 01/03/16
Updated: 02/26/16
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/22/16 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Time is Changing

Oh my god. I was expecting Bobby to fuck Scott over, because that's just where my head always turns to as a writer, but I didn't think you would ACTUALLY do it! Holy fuck, Bobby is a bastard.

Great story.

Author's Response: he-he thanks.yeah it was a risky plot twist and a few readers didn't like it but it was worth it. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading. xx

After Barry accepts a job from a mysterious client to deliver a dress, his curiosity gets the better of him, and he sneaks a peek. The lesson that some items are best not meddled with is not one he will be likely to forget in a hurry.
Rated: Adult 11 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 11837 Words: 4757 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Bride
Featured Items: Bridal Gown, Corsets, High Heels, Pantyhose, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline, Undies
Locale: Road Trip
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 03/02/16
Updated: 03/02/16
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/19/16 Title: Chapter 1: Nice Day for a White Van Man

Wow, that's the most abrupt ending since the Sopranos finale a decade ago.

Either way, this was a wonderful story, while it lasted anyway.

Colton Hughes has just signed up for the Beta Test of a lifetime. Over the next week he will begin to see changes that take him from being an overweight man in his mid forties to a hot, young college woman with her whole life in front of her. Will the changes bring him the happiness he seeks, or will he lose sight of what he really wanted?
Rated: Adult 7 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 37860 Words: 11544 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Good to Bad
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Type of Change: Age Regression, Mechanical Device, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 04/17/16
Updated: 05/30/16
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/02/16 Title: Chapter 8: EPILOUGE

Please do a prequel on Sarah! This story is killer!

Author's Response: That's not a bad idea. If I'm not buy with commissions I'll give it a go.

Gary and Andrea are on a trip with the intention of recapturing something from their relationship that has disappeared, only after an accident they find themselves looking at each other in a whole new light.
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 6190 Words: 3670 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Husband, Wife
Featured Items: Bikinis
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men, Becomes Only Attracted to Women
Story Theme: Romance
Type of Change: Age Regression, Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 05/12/16
Updated: 05/13/16
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/17/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very much enjoyed this story, but I wish that you had continued on with Gabrielle and Andrew's story and see how their life changed after the transformation. Either way, I like your writing style. It's very down to Earth and psychological and it draws you it. Keep it up.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! It was always my intention to show the change and then leave them to it, giving the reader a chance to imagine what their future holds.

Years after leaving home, Robert finds that his maternal grandmother has left everything to him. He will discover the legacy she left for him is much greater than money and possessions.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 5 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 5005 Words: 4255 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Featured Items: Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse, Unknown
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Second Childhood, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 05/14/16
Updated: 05/14/16
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/17/16 Title: Chapter 1: Broken Image

Huh. Well that was interesting. I wish it were longer so we could have gotten to know Bob/Bobbi and his/her situation better and maybe relate to him/her more, but this is well written. Keep em coming.

A successful young investment banker with a thing for stewardesses makes the fateful mistake of not keeping his hands to himself. The rest of his flight is going to become an interesting experience for him.
Rated: Explicit 7 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 19110 Words: 6437 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Stewardess
Featured Items: Lingerie, Long Nails, Pantyhose, Work Uniform
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime, Curse
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Witchcraft
Series: None
Published: 08/06/16
Updated: 08/06/16
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/19/16 Title: Chapter 1: High-Flyer

Another wonderful story by a someone who is quickly becoming one of my favorite authors on this site.

The thing I liked most about this was the agency you gave to the main character. You weren't FORCING Ron into accepting her new life as Shelley, she CHOSE to because it made her happier and more fulfilled. This is a surprisingly progressive TG story. Kudos.

Christian is a fan of TG fiction, but most of the stories he encounters are about male idiots who are just too stupid to be permitted to live on this earth. Still the universe presents judgement on them, the payback leaving them often in better situation. As if it would happen to a normal guy like him. Poor Christian. A genie wants to show him, how he could screw up his life even if he can make an educated choice. Over and over again.
Rated: Explicit 7 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 49007 Words: 15821 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/31/16 Title: Chapter 2: The First Experience

YESS!!!!!!!!! I've been WAITING for a story like this for so long, and somebody has finally made one! You're a man after my own heart, Amator. I have a feeling that if this story lives up to its potential, it will easily become one of my favorite TG fics ever.

Groom-to-be Mike is having trust issues about his intended. After a poorly-worded wish results in him getting exactly what he asked for, will he ever get his old body, and life, back?
Rated: Adult 33 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 85310 Words: 17876 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Featured Items: High Heels, Long Nails, Pantyhose, Undies
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident, Undercover
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Series: None
Published: 09/25/16
Updated: 10/30/16
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/13/16 Title: Chapter 4: Maid of dishonour

Well this was another fun chapter, and sexy too. Glad that Mike/Rebecca found a seemingly nice guy to hang out with for a while.

Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/03/16 Title: Chapter 3: No-one here but us hens

Another great story from arguably the most consistently good writer on this site. Even if this isn't the most original story, it's the rhythms and beats that feel new, and they're a pleasure to read. Sometimes it's nice just to admire good craftsmanship. I'm so glad that you wrote this and can't wait to see where it goes from here.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm flattered! Another chapter coming up now.

A college student makes a deal with a spirit for wealth and sex, but not all goes to plan.
Rated: Deviant 4 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 14638 Words: 5205 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo, Prostitute, Sissy
Featured Items: Bikinis, Breast Forms, High Heels, Undies
Locale: College
Body Modification: Breast Implants, Castrated/Neutered, Ribs Removed
Motivation for Change: Curse, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Humiliation, Mind/Body Posession, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 10/19/16
Updated: 10/19/16
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/26/16 Title: Chapter 1: The Demon Within

Well that was...something else. I'm glad that someone is finally sticking it to r/TheRedPill/Pick Up Artist/meninist type assholes, and I enjoyed the occult aspect you introduced.

A witch forces a young innocent man to suffer in place of her evil, shallow, daughter for a curse. After being thrown away and forgotten, he is forced to live a new reality, struggling to return to a normal life while the curse strands him in the body of a petite, bottom-heavy woman where even the simplest and most menial tasks become endeavors, cursed with the obscene body proportions that comes with becoming Lillian Widdel...
Rated: Explicit 23 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 106262 Words: 38996 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Featured Items: Long Nails
Locale: College
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement, Lips Plumped, Permanent Cosmetics, Permanent Hair/Skin/Nail Change
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Horror, Humiliation, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change, Identity Theft, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 10/20/16
Updated: 09/06/17
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/16/16 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Another sad, melancholy chapter. Poor Lillian!

Author's Response: It's really quite an unfortunate fate!

Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/26/16 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

There's something vaguely horrifying about this story. Well, not vague, but I'm not used to TG fiction where the transformation is portrayed as a negative, thus making this a unique fic. A gem. Kudos. I can't wait to see where it goes from here.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/22/16 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh my, this just gets worse and worse for her, doesn't it? I hope she finds a way to cope with her new body, or at least finds a way to speak properly.

Author's Response: Morgana wasn't lying when she said speaking properly would require practice! All Lillian wants to do is live a normal life!

Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/07/17 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I apologized for not having reviewed this in so long! I'm still very interested in where this story is going, and I enjoy the new character of Sophie.

Genies DO exist, and Lenny makes use of one to get what he really desires. Of course, there's always some room for unintended consequences.
Rated: Adult 8 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 11308 Words: 8817 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Accident
Story Theme: Genie/Wishes
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 11/06/16
Updated: 11/06/16
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/12/16 Title: Chapter 1: Full Story

I quite liked this! I enjoyed the characters and the slow burn of the transformation. It's also a very unique genie story, if only because I'm used to genies granting wishes instantaneously. I believe I've heard that wasn't always the case in the old folktales and legends, but genies have been that way for a while now, so for you to drag out Lenny's wish like that felt fresh. I see that this is your first story. If this level of writing talent is maintained, you'll become an excellent TG writer!

Mark agreed to magically lend his roommate some masculinity for a track meet. But while his roommate gets beefier, Mark finds himself getting more and more feminine.
Rated: Explicit 11 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 47859 Words: 9301 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Featured Items: Lingerie, Undies
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Series: None
Published: 11/20/16
Updated: 11/20/16
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/22/16 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh wow, this was sex-ay. XD I rarely get turned on by sex scenes for some reason, but your sex scenes definitely hit that sweet spot. It definitely helped that your characters are all well written. Typically, stories of this sort, about frat boys and such, rely on stereotypes and cliched dialogue, but your Matt and Mark sound and feel almost like real people. Plus your magic scrimshaw is played out quite subtly, I thought. Kudos!

When your kid sister holds you hostage for the weekend with magic, you tend to want to play along for your own safety. Carter does not have that preservation instinct. Victoria has transformed him into a teenage girl so he will act as her sister and do her bidding while their parents are away, or risk never returning to being a boy again. But he intends to show her that he is still the eldest and still in charge; she may have taken away his well-deserved weekend, but he’s not going down without a fight.
Rated: Adult 24 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 40025 Words: 14713 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Forced
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 05/11/17
Updated: 06/23/17
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/26/17 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: 4:15-8:00

Adorable, heartfelt story. I really loved this. Your characterization skills are excellent. Carter and Victoria felt like real kids you might know in real life, and that's not often the case with these stories. Even more, I love how their sibling relationship took the center stage and not so much the magic or the TG. Often, these stories are just excuses to engage in masturbatory wish fulfillment, with the characters being just weak stand ins for the author. Not here. Kudos, and I'm looking forward to reading through your other stories.

Author's Response: Thanks! Although you'll probably find there's quite a bit of variation between the stories I write. A lot of experimentation means a lot of different results. I would like to start focusing on longer stories like this more often, though, where characterization is the main focus over the TG elements.

Mark has always been in love with his friend Francine, but she just doesn't seem him that way. Can he find his way out of the friend zone with a little bit of magic?
Rated: Adult 14 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 15939 Words: 6770 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Featured Items: Boots, Lingerie, Long Nails
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 09/29/17
Updated: 09/30/17
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed
Date: 10/07/17 Title: Chapter 1: Friendzoned!

Finally! I've been waiting for another story from you for a while now, and you didn't disappoint. Another triumph to put atop your mantelpiece.

Excellent sense of characterization like in all of your stories, and like another reviewer mention, this story had very good pacing. You should be proud of this one.

Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/07/17 Title: Chapter 1: Friendzoned!

Sorry, I forgot to give you a star rating.

Derek has a cunning April Fool's prank in store for the kids on an Easter Egg hunt. The Easter Bunny, however, has other ideas.
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 7312 Words: 6328 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: High Heels
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Costume or Halloween
Series: None
Published: 04/01/18
Updated: 04/01/18
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/07/18 Title: Chapter 1: Easter Fool

This tale seemed a lot more raunchy and typical of the type of TG story you would normally find among other authors, but I enjoyed this all the same(I laughed out loud at the "Make me your little bunny slut!" line). I have to admit that your descriptions of Derek's had me turned on, and I'm intrigued to see what other kind of "sexy" stories you have up your sleeve.

Author's Response: Yep! I'm trying to mix it up a bit more with some explicit stories and/or scenes, although I do prefer to keep it light in tone.

It's a tale as old as time, but from a slightly different point of view. A witch turned quarterback Brian into cheerleader Brianna, and he's the only one who remembers. But what does it all look like to Brianna's friends?
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 4958 Words: 1162 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Teenager
Featured Items: High Heels, Undies
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes, Made Dumber
Type of Change: Stuck
Series: None
Published: 04/05/18
Updated: 04/05/18
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/07/18 Title: Chapter 1: Story

Finally! I've always wanted to see a story like this, of how spectators would view some transformed boy turned girl, and you pulled it off quite admirably. Your story is smart, witty, and re-readable. I also like the implication that every one of these characters potentially could at one point have also been a boy(Natalie could have once been a Nathan, Kendra once could have been a Ken, etc).

Three hundred and forty five years ago, Sergeant Frank Dailey left Earth on a colony ship to Novearth. But between the time when he stepped into the suspended animation chamber and the time in which he is about to wake up, things have changed somewhat.
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 4313 Words: 3139 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Forced
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Distant Future
Type of Change: Mechanical Device
Series: None
Published: 07/07/18
Updated: 07/07/18
Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/27/18 Title: Chapter 1: Altered Plan

Another solid, entertaining story from SwiffSwaff.

This one was cool, I dug it. Most of the science fiction TG stories on this site for some reason don't interest me, but this one did. I'm particularly interested in how vastly different the society of Novearth is going to be in a few generations compared to current day Earth. A single gender society of women who are all pregnant every single day from puberty to menopause would seemingly have very different attitudes towards family, work, monogamy, etc.

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