Kathryn Mayhew
Hi! I'm 46 years old, and a MtF transwoman who transitioned later in life. I write books for a living. I wrote Call of the Void - Dreamers, Call of the Void - Dragons, and the Mandate of Heaven. I'm currently writing "Tales of Empire City - Virus" and "The Mandate of Heaven, part 2" I live with a great guy, two cats, a ton of games, movies, and RPGs.
Member Since: 11/09/13 Membership status: Member
Average Review Rating Given: starstarstarstar


Reviews by Kathryn Mayhew
An ousted department of education official takes the reigns of a huge multinational corporation to try and turn it around. But in fact, he hasn't given up the theories he never got a chance to prove.
Rated: Adult 9 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 19281 Words: 22166 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Daughter, Teenager
Locale: Office
Motivation for Change: Revenge
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Age Regression, Drug-Induced, Hormonal, Hypnosis, Mind Control, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 02/15/11
Updated: 02/15/11
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/14/13 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This seemed light-hearted at first - then slowly built up to become frightening and then bone-chilling in the strength and scope of how much mind and body modification was being done - and how insidious it was as it slowly crept up on everyone involved. i truly hope NOTHING like this ever becomes reality - its too frightening... I find the idea of personality loss to be akin to death - and in this story, the Bad Guy wins. Wow.

The Goddess Rhiannon is alive and well, living as a school teacher by day and an avenging goddess & Rock-n-Roll star by night. When one of her students shows signs of abuse, the enraged goddess leaps into action!
Rated: Explicit 3 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 6653 Words: 9317 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Type of Change: Stuck
Series: None
Published: 05/08/11
Updated: 05/08/11
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/20/13 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

THIS WAS AWESOME! I really, really liked this story. It was sweet and sentimental, which I like a lot - but it had Goddesses and divine punishment and all sorts of mythic goodness! I really like the idea of Ancient Deities living amongst us - like Percy Jackson or such. COOL!

Simon, an 18 year old in the top year at school, goes through a sudden and unexpected series of changes.
Rated: Adult 30 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 301027 Words: 26589 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Teenager
Featured Items: Long Nails, School Uniform
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse
Personality: Fights Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Hormonal
Series: None
Published: 11/26/12
Updated: 12/31/13
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12/02/13 Title: Chapter 9: A New Day

This is really fun to read! I keep wanting more chapters - to see what happens to george and simone next! It's got a 'page turner' kind of feel that makes you want to read "just one more part'. Very fun stuff indeed!

Author's Response: Thanks - I'm trying to make the stories entertaining as stories as well as the erotic side of the story, though I worry at times that things move too slowly as a result. Glad you're enjoying it, and I'll try to keep giving you a reason to turn the page!

Aislin learns that all choices come with consequences
Rated: Adult 42 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 135662 Words: 65594 Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Personality: From Submissive to Dominant
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Mythical Setting, Romance
Series: None
Published: 01/29/13
Updated: 08/28/13
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/18/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've read the first 9 chapters or so and i can't wait to read more about Aislinn and her plight. The darkness seeks her - and she has to hide her true nature while still following her heart - which she doesn't seem to know herself which way it leads. This is a story that seems to be one of the ones you remember months if not years later. A definite "Should read" - and a fun romance to read too. I only hope the later chapters don't drop the ball - Elsbeth has set the bar high with her awesome beginning!

A young man finds a cave rumored to have a magic sword. When he touches it, it transforms him into a beautiful girl. He begins to use the sword to accomplish his goals. Based in a fantasy world.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 7 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 18081 Words: 4634 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Slave
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 02/12/13
Updated: 02/22/13
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/13/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story was really fun! I liked how the main character adapted to her new situation quickly and with a minimum of - and I love how she used the magic sword to her advantage. She obviously is rather "morally gray" - which is refreshing from either the "white knight" or "scumbag" type characters you often see. I'm left wondering what will happen next - and I'd love to read more. I like that there were pictures in the story.

Can Eric find the missing pieces in is life
Rated: Kid-Friendly 15 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 27398 Words: 18977 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Bridal Gown
Locale: Formal Dance
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Witchcraft
Series: None
Published: 02/23/13
Updated: 03/08/13
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/13/13 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I really liked this story - sweet, sentimental and above all, it has a heart. I really cared about what happened to Eric/Erin, Kaylee and Tabitha. It was a great story - I'm kinda sad it ended so soon!

The life of a physicist can be troubling, at times, as the universe doesn't always play well with others.

But even the universe can't break a true promise.
Rated: Adult 26 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 25582 Words: 27904 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Locale: Family Household, Labratory
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 06/10/13
Updated: 03/17/14
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/26/13 Title: Chapter 1: In the Beginning

I'm really enjoying the Time travel and character development in this story - and its true -- no one remains exactly the same as they are - so when Tara realizes a few years later she's basically a new person who shares some of the memories as her old self, its a really neat moment. This story is awesome - I'm looking forward to seeing the ending - I hope Tara can move into a future that's new, and unknown. I think you've shown that knowing the future can be a curse.

Daniel has known most of this life that he wants to be woman and now he has been given the chance. Join him as he goes through a physical, mental and emotional journey into womanhood.
Rated: Adult 30 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 225290 Words: 27259 Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Daughter
Featured Items: Undies
Locale: Family Household, Hospital or Clinic
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Medical Experiment, Romance
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 06/21/13
Updated: 11/18/16
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/25/15 Title: Chapter 16: I'm Not Okay

Wow - your telling of this story is excellent! I love how you capture Dani's feelings and how she's reacting, and how her family is reacting. It's amazing! I can't wait to see more - it seems like there might be a long way to go on this story!

One January night in 2002, Danielle Alexandria Tigerson retired to bed with her husband, Roger, in their rustic, spacious log-home in the mountains of Oregon. During the night she had an out of body experience and journeyed to a place beyond the infinite, a place outside of normal time and space. The story began there-- at what she learned out there about herself, who she really was, in the present and the past.
Rated: Adult 10 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 27069 Words: 11387 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Wife
Featured Items: Boots, High Heels, Lingerie
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Romance
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Non-Consentual Sex, Torture
Series: None
Published: 08/29/13
Updated: 06/29/14
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/27/13 Title: Angie's Revenge (A four chapter preview)

Wow - this is pretty deep. Danielle and Daniel might be the same person - and that the creation of their two realities is what brings Kelinder to them - in a hard to fathom way, I'm beginning to think this story is a "first contact" tale - where Kelinder is the alien, coming to meet or monitor Danielle and Daniel. This is really neat! I'm looking forward to reading more. I am a bit curious about the title... is there an Angie? What is her revenge - or have we not come to that character yet?

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Kath, and I'm glad the story intrigues you. Oh yes, there's an Angie and her desire for revenge is justified. You'll see. Just wait till you reach chapter 29. I won't give anything away about Kelinder. Let's just say he and Daniel/le are old friends. Kelinder an alien? Who I claim he ultimately is by story's end, may have some people declaring, "How dare you?" ps. I'm really enjoying "The Call of the Void."

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/07/13 Title: Angie's Revenge (A four chapter preview)

This is intriguing - and very cool. I like the Kelinder character - he does seem a lot like Q - but I suspect he's something different. Daniel/le is having some really interesting scenes - its like we're getting a flashback of Danielle's life through this past-life regression scenario. What I really like about this story is that its DEEP - it's asking us the reader to question what is the nature of reality - and its asking us to seriously think about it. It's very philosophical - I enjoy the heck out of it.

Thanks for writing what is turning into a very thought-provoking story!

Author's Response: You are most welcome, thanks. I'm glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12/19/13 Title: Angie's Revenge (A four chapter preview)

I'm really interested in seeing what's going to happen now! something terrible must have happened to define Danielle and Roger - for you to have named the story Angie's revenge - that some tragic event changed them through several lifetimes. I can only imagine!

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/19/13 Title: Angie's Revenge (A four chapter preview)

This tale more and more reminds me of a recent movie that critics seemed to hate, but I really, really loved - "Cloud Atlas". How the events of one life can touch the events of other lives, and how we entangle ourselves in the lives of others repeatedly - by every sin or sacrifice, we forge our future and shadow our past. WOW... I'm really really impressed Pablo. I love this story.

Author's Response: In the space of an hour and a half, Kath, you upped your rating from four stars to five. I'm at a loss for words ("Him? He's kidding, right?") Thank you. No one on this site who has read this far has made comments on the story's later chapters. So at this point you still do not yet know Kelinder's true identity? You'll love it. The critics stopped me (with their dissents) from viewing "Cloud Atlas, " despite the great cast. I'll have to see it now. I just read Roger Ebert's review. (One of his last no doubt.) He considered Kubrick's 2001 to be one of the greatest films ever made. Between your thumbs up for "Cloud Atlas," and his, I have to see it. I wonder if following all the lifetime layers will be a piece of cake for me? Thanks again. ps. You may have noticed, I've begun hand-typing, uploading "Kayelle's Return." I wish I could say the work was fun. It is, but it drains me. As soon as I'm able, I'm going to switch to scanning the old hard copy printout. This retyping stuff is so old school.

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12/19/13 Title: Angie's Revenge (A four chapter preview)

Wow - I don't know what to say... I wasn't expecting this ending! I'm not sure if I would have preferred the Q vs the religious angle or what - but what I do like is that the story made me question why I don't know if I prefer it. It made me question things about myself and what happened in the story - and I like that. I think if you don't question yourself, you never learn anything. This story makes you want to ask questions - and it doesn't give you easy answers. This was amazing!

Author's Response: You are too much, Kath. I know your story is exceptional, told with such authority and intensity, but mine? My stories so go off into the nether regions of metaphysical WTF, that I'm used to people eyeing me like I come from outer space or something when they read my stuff. I won't dare ask my family to read Angie's Revenge or any of my books. They're Catholic; how dare I write such drivel. My late Dad? A long time ago I was watching some tv show where the story touched on the meaning of life, and he saw how immersed I was in the very contemplation of such subjects, and he quipped: "Smarter minds than you have been trying to comprehend these mysteries for centuries, what makes you think you can?" My very interest in them annoyed hiim. FYI. Daniel's diary entires about his dad, yeah I didn't have to make up any of them. And the Frat Boys "experience?" When I "awoke" from that one, I couldn't help saying to myself, "You arrogant prick, you had to go back down there and tease them. Trying to overtake that receding window as the black of purgatory lay all around me, scared the crap out of me. Thank God for Jobeth Williams and her quote.

A husband and father has a chemical accident at work and his life is changed forever.
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 11209 Words: 5094 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Clothing, Daughter
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Type of Change: Age Regression
Series: None
Published: 10/17/13
Updated: 10/17/13
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstar
Date: 11/20/13 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

I thought this story was fairly well written, with the exception of a few minor grammatical mistakes. The hero seems like a normal joe, stuck in a (very) weird situation. What bothered me about this story were some elements that touched on my "squidge factor" - you know, where you just feel damn uncomfortable? Like when the hero meets his wife after the accident and umm... gets her off. Ewww. Anyway, I plan on reading a few more chapters, to see if my impression changes (for better or for worse) - its hard getting a story off the ground, and the first chapter is always the hardest. I'm definitely willing to cut the author some slack and keep reading! This story will definitely appeal to some readers - I think perhaps a warning in the notes about some of the content might have been appropriate.

In an age of turmoil, with two kingdoms warring against each-other, any small action could have massive repercussions. When a prank is pulled on the prince, it seems harmless enough, if embarrassing. But will fate let it be as harmless as it seems? Or will it have terrible consequences?
Rated: Explicit 9 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 24878 Words: 7960 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/18/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - An Extreme Prank

I really enjoyed this story so far... I can't wait to read more. First, there aren't that many fantasy TG stories - so this is awesome. There are also a lot of elements in the story that resonate with heroism (pranks and evil brothers aside) - like the heroine's anger and desire to save her people (and presumably get revenge on her brother). Likewise, the tale provides a mentor / ally in the form of the likewise transformed wizard. The elements are all there for a classic 'hero rises from the ashes" tale - I can't wait to see how it ends!

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/07/13 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Breaking Point

This was an excellent take on a chapter with rather grim circumstances - it was handled as tastefully as the subject matter could be handled - and it IMO still kept Ellis in the role of hero/heroine - not victim, which I thought was important. It may not have been the most pleasant of events to happen so far in the story - but i suspect it will be an event that strongly shapes Ellis' future and the Queen she might one day become (I'm assuming, because of the title). AWESOME WORK. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you, Kathryn. I'm glad that you're enjoying it. It wasn't my favorite chapter to write, but I needed to set the events in motion for the rest of my plans for Ellis.

A man gets into a chemical accident and his life, and his family's is changed for ever.
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 7406 Words: 6440 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: None
Locale: Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Accident
Type of Change: Age Regression
Series: None
Published: 10/27/13
Updated: 10/27/13
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/20/13 Title: Chapter 1: Part 2

I'm a bit uncomfortable with cindy and his wife still seeming to have a relationship - although she knows Cindy is still her husband inside, she *looks* like an eight year old - maybe younger, according to his wife, Penny. This chapter seems to be better written and flows smoother than the first chapter, which is good - there are definite signs of improvement. I'm just not sure the subject matter is one I'll enjoy or keep reading. And hey - that's totally okay. Not every story is for every reader - I know there are people who will enjoy this story, and to them I say, you will probably like it a lot.

Keep writing! Even though this story wasn't for me, It shows a lot of talent, and I'm sure you'll have an audience for your stories! I rated the first chapter a 3, more because It didn't have a warning about the nature of Cindy and Penny's relationship. Knowing that (because its not a surprise), I'd rate this chapter a 4.

A teenage boy undergoes a life-saving experimental treatment that has a very unexpected side effect
Rated: Kid-Friendly 22 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 29899 Words: 6302 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Fights Change
Story Theme: Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 10/30/13
Updated: 10/30/13
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12/02/13 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I really liked this! I hope you write more - its getting interesting!

Jackie experiences the physical portion of her gender transformation.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 30 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 63788 Words: 14180 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Fights Change
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 11/07/13
Updated: 11/21/13
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/09/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I enjoyed this story - it reminds me of a sweet modern fairy tale. Jackie is a nice young person, who I personally wanted to end up happy. His family seem so loving and supporting - which is a nice change from some stories where a previously loving family goes all hateful. I know it may not be the most common - but it made for nice, pleasant reading and I look forward to reading more!
Its not an adventure story or action story - its more of a 'slice of life' story with a sweet sentimental edge to it. Very nice and refreshing!

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind and thoughtful words! I decided that since this started as a near-death experience, the natural response for a family that cares would be to count their blessings rather than to turn against the protaganist. I've read a few too many of the kinds of stories that you describe. Admittedly, my other stories are not sentimental!

To hikers explore a cave in the transylvanian mountains. There they find a new life under the spell of some witches making them to join their coven.
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 7974 Words: 2713 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Fantasy Character
Locale: Road Trip, Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced
Personality: Good to Bad
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Horror, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Hypnosis
Warnings: Death, Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 11/07/13
Updated: 11/07/13
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12/21/13 Title: Chapter 1: Involuntary Recruitment

Interesting short horror tale! Cool!

A man finds a fursuit that changes his life forever.
Rated: Deviant 9 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 53720 Words: 89325 Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Curse
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Body Suit
Series: None
Published: 11/07/13
Updated: 11/12/13
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11/09/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm not normally into race-shifting or were's - but this story has a lot more going for it than that... The strange changings of the main character are interesting - and his / her personality changing is quite interesting too, going from a beta to an alpha wolf type personality. The first several chapters are mainly erotica - but they're really good and evocative. It was an entertaining read - but I think I would have enjoyed it more if we'd seen more story outside the bedroom before chapter 9. The change in Elaine and Steven was interesting too - and fits with some of the pop culture legends about weres, which was kinda cool. Still, it was great to read - I still have to read chapter 9 onward, but I'm looking forward to it. very Enjoyable

Author's Response: Hello! I hope you enjoyed chapter 9 even if I feel like that chapter is kind of a setup/filler for the last chapter. And, thank you for the compliments :) I have to say, the story started off as a simple small erotic piece with the fursuit based on a daydream I had. And then people wanted more so I added a bit and then added a bit - so that's why it reads like a p*** with a story tacked on. Although, I'm hoping the explanations from chapter 8 kind of make the story make a logical sense? I had a hard time figuring out how to make it make sense so I asked for ideas and I had a user (several months back) give me a really good seed of an idea to make it work. Thank you for trying it even though weres are not your thing!

Samuel Werthy: God's Gift to Women. Heaven, however doesn't see it the same way. Yet, they're willing to give him a chance to redeem himself for his terrible actions towards women. His own life is in his hands. Will he pass Heaven's tests?
Rated: Adult 16 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 19030 Words: 13202 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Motivation for Change: Accident, As Justice for a Crime, Forced
Personality: Bad to Good, From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 11/09/13
Updated: 11/14/13
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/12/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this story so far. Sam/samantha really seems to be undergoing some major character growth, realizing her past wrongs, and trying to go forward with the future. I even enjoyed the angel's tests - a refreshing change to allow Samantha to choose her own fate, rather than have a divine punishment handed down from on high. It was a great idea - and very fun to read. i look forward to seeing more!

Flash fiction. Psann, a bull seal turned transman, meets Ma Tien Lân, the ky-lân, who gives him his first gift.
Rated: Adult 1 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 1334 Words: 1061 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Mythical Setting, Romance
Type of Change: Primarily Female to Male, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 11/18/13
Updated: 11/18/13
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/18/13 Title: Chapter 1: At the Opening Ceremonies of the Illuminated Colleges of the Immortal Realms

Very artistic! i liked this story... it reminded me in a way of the short vignettes that dotted the Nobilis book I have. Mythic, magical - and full of deeper meaning, it seems, than the story's obvious parts. This was a fun, "thinky" short tale.

This is my first attempt at creative writing in quite a while, so go go easy on me. This is a story about two somewhat ordinary guys that get their hands on a not so ordinary device. How will they use it? Keep reading to find out.
Rated: Adult 9 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 26189 Words: 5833 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Type of Change: Mechanical Device
Series: None
Published: 11/27/13
Updated: 11/27/13
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/29/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOL! I love the ending! This was a light, fun story - a very enjoyable read.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.

It all starts with a dream, and then things get worse. A boy, a cat, and made up rules.
Rated: Adult 9 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 15195 Words: 6132 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced, Unknown
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Comedy, Horror
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 12/11/13
Updated: 12/19/13
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12/20/13 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Danger Wrapped in Sleeves

Keep going! This is an unusual story - I haven't read tons of genie/demon tales but it seems Card is being manipulated. I hope he manages to figure things out before they get really bad!

How a demi bra changed my figure. Permanently.
Rated: Explicit 17 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 20220 Words: 2604 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Accident, Caught Crossdressing, Tricked
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing
Series: None
Published: 12/19/13
Updated: 12/19/13
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12/19/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was fun to read - short and sweet! I enjoyed it immensely.

The story of four friends, each going through their own unique sort of changes.
Rated: Adult 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 6467 Words: 3826 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: Family Household, High School
Series: The Perils and Pratfalls of Roleplaying
Published: 12/24/13
Updated: 12/24/13
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12/24/13 Title: Chapter 1: I Used to be a Roleplayer Like You, But Then...

Nice - it rounds out the other stories in your series and fills in a few blanks. An enjoyable read! Oh - to others reading this, the author is pretty serious about needing to read the other two stories for this to make sense. They're short and fun too!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, and thanks for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed not only this story, but the other two as well. Hopefully everybody heeds our advice and read the other two stories as well.

Lee & Stephen are two flatmates and best friends. With the Xmas Ball approaching drastic measures are taken to ensure they both have a date.
Rated: Adult 10 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 20134 Words: 4643 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Girlfriend
Featured Items: High Heels, Long Nails, Undies
Locale: College, Formal Dance
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 12/24/13
Updated: 12/31/13
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/01/14 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I really liked this story! It was sweet - and it was well told. This was a great story!

After being mortally wounded in a raid to reclaim a stolen warhead, Cody Jones is selected by the goverment for lifesaving surgery and upgrade program but it comes at a cost.
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 6979 Words: 2601 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12/31/13 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Raid

Interesting! I like the story so far - I'd like to see where it goes from here. It's got a little 'ghost in the shell' kinda vibe at the moment, or a six-million-dollar man thing (Boy does that date me).

Professor Richard Bloom loves grad student Natalie. Sadly, her intellectual brilliance and modest physical endowments are a problem that he seeks to rectify.
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 7477 Words: 3905 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Teenager
Locale: College
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Type of Change: Age Regression
Series: None
Published: 01/02/14
Updated: 01/02/14
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstar
Date: 01/04/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really liked the beginning - and I think this is the very first (re: only) story I've seen that had a person actually reconsider changing their loved one - which showed a great deal of integrity. i kinda thought they were going to have a happily ever after - but then the story did a 360 and he began to transform... I was left with the thought of either a) the wizard did it in revenge, which seems odd for his sense of humor - he seems to like 'good' people, or b) his wife found out and wanted revenge. the problem is that there's no indication that b) is what happened - its sort of out of left field, which left me confused as to why the change happened.... I liked the first half - the second half left me scratching my head.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading my story. The reason for the transformation is in the Wizard's remark: "Sometimes the mere thought suffices." The sentence is repeated in Richard's thoughts after Natalie rereads the anonymous email, as Richard and she wonder who "W" could be. Have another look at the story.

You know how it goes. The strange market stall selling necklaces. The little old lady who insists that you have to buy this one particular necklace, you try it on and, bang, nothing is ever the same again.
Rated: Adult 37 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 90211 Words: 25847 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 01/04/14
Updated: 01/11/14
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01/05/14 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two: Shopping

I really like this story - its building slow - which is really nice - and it seems sweet so far, like Andy and Tom really care about each other as friends - not like a lot of well, jerks that are featured in so many other stories. I really would like to see where this is going, and see more in this series. Its pretty cool!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I can't say much more without spoilers. S.S.

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/13/14 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight: Ch... Ch... Ch… Ch... Changes

This was amazing! I really liked the development of how Tom/Tiff got to where she was at the end. I really liked the ending too - this was top-notch!

John decides to give his wife the gift she's always wanted. Along the way, he makes some curious discoveries about himself, his wife and the very nature of their relationship.
Rated: Explicit 14 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 251114 Words: 34180 Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Mother, Wife
Featured Items: Lingerie, Undies
Locale: Family Household, Hospital or Clinic
Body Modification: Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Medical Experiment, Pregnancy
Type of Change: Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Politically Incorrect
Series: None
Published: 01/13/14
Updated: 06/03/14
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/03/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: An Introduction

I LOVED this story! I read it once a long time ago, but I recently read it again, and I love it even more. Its sweet, and tender - and real at the same time (I mean the emotions are real, not the nano machines). This story hit my buttons and I loved it - and Johanna was very interesting to read. Miles felt a bit one-sided, but I think that's because the story was POV from Johanna, and either way, I really, really liked it. Thanks for writing such an awesome and fun story!

Some princesses grow weary of waiting for a knight to rescue them.
Rated: Adult 11 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 7970 Words: 5407 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: From Submissive to Dominant
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Historical Time Period, Mythical Setting, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Primarily Female to Male, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 01/29/14
Updated: 01/29/14
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/30/14 Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Time

I LOVE THIS STORY! This was really, really great - I love how you turned the "save the princess" theme around and had her try to save herself... This was really a great, fun read. Top Notch! This was really good Minikisa!

Author's Response: Aw, shucks, I'm blushing! This means a lot, big fan of your work!

In which a villainess sets out on a quest to seduce a hero, a hero must come to terms with the secret identity (s)he'd rather deny, and a mad scientist just tries to get some mad science done without getting distracted by the antics of her magical minion.
Rated: Explicit 347 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 642614 Words: 69415 Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/16/14 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

NOOOOOO! You can't leave it on this! I love this story so far Minikisa - its awesome, and you should feel awesome.

Author's Response: *evil supervillain laughter* Oh wow, I'm really flattered you like my silly stuff! Big fan of Call of the Void =D

Chris never thought he'd go through what he did. All because of one stupid move by people he didn't even know. And now he has to adjust to the biggest challenge of his life.
Rated: Adult 24 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 110145 Words: 32647 Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: Family Household, High School, Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Warnings: Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 02/05/14
Updated: 11/09/17
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/12/14 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So far this has been really enjoyable... i'm wondering how you're going to tie-in the oddity of the "accident" with the grey gang of kids and all that, but hey - that's what future chapters are for, right? So far its been a fun read.

Jaux Ballad has always wanted to enter the realm of magic, but could not do so by regular means. In his desperation to become a magician he finds himself with more power, and more trouble, than he could ever have imagined.
Rated: Adult 354 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 329174 Words: 97327 Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Teenager
Featured Items: Corsets, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline
Locale: Camp, College, Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Historical Time Period, Mythical Setting, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: Vanasia Universe
Published: 02/22/14
Updated: 09/17/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/25/14 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Claimed

Hi! I'm really enjoying this story so far - it's pretty cool. I can only imagine what hijinks you have in mind for Suhara - it looks fun!

Author's Response: Thank you ^_^, I'm trying to establish the world slowly without making the story boring, so far the response has been so nice. Makes me giddy :)

A different kind of dynamic duo fiendishly add a bit of class to the capes and leotards of Paragon City.
Rated: Explicit 22 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 13914 Words: 14088 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Corsets, High Heels, Lingerie, Masks, Undies
Locale: Labratory, Prison
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Bondage/S&M, Death, Intense Violence
Series: Paragon Verse
Published: 03/02/14
Updated: 03/07/14
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03/07/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just a guess, but have you watched 12 Monkeys?

Author's Response: One of my favorites ^_^ I couldn't resist using Jeffrey, he personafies everything I love about mental hospitals. I even pulled a couple of his rants, just on the basis of how awesome they are. He's going to become more of my own later, but for now he's just a cameo

The realms are aligning as the places of power come together in an unprecedented fashion. In all the realms, of all the gods, demons, deities, and lesser folk. An impossible chance encounter pulls together our cast of hapless heroes and a incompetent summoner. Together they'll build a bridge to another plane if they don't manage to kill themselves in the process.
Rated: Explicit 11 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 18868 Words: 35987 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Story Theme: Comedy, Coming of Age, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Warnings: Bodily Functions, Death, Intense Violence, Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 03/17/14
Updated: 09/24/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/30/15 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This is both alternately confusing and very interesting. The blend of the two stories into one tale keeps me wanting more and more, but I find I'm more invested in Corin and his odd friends, rather than Ella and her strange goblin and mora pals. I really like this story, and binge-read it in one go. I'm really looking forward to the next part. Thanks!

Kyle was an ordinary guy enjoying his winter in the coolest way. But, after a minor incident, he finds out that he isn't as ordinary as he thought.
Rated: Adult 55 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 142890 Words: 51591 Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: Family Household, High School, Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Series: None
Published: 03/27/14
Updated: 03/02/18
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/24/17 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Hi Monoxin! I am really loving this story... I missed it when it first came out and binged read it today and I love it - its well written and stylish and really enjoyable! I'd love to see more of it!

Lucas is a poor farmer living in a prosperous Kingdom in medieval England. He dreams of experiencing a life of luxury living in the kingdoms castle. One day he meets Princess Abigail who explains she also wants to experience life on the other side and so she suggests they use a magic potion to body swap.
Rated: Explicit 35 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 76336 Words: 19036 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character, Prostitute, Wife
Featured Items: Corsets, High Heels, Lingerie, Work Uniform
Motivation for Change: Tricked, Undercover, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Historical Time Period, Humiliation, Mind/Body Posession, Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change, Identity Theft, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 04/11/14
Updated: 10/01/14
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06/16/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. A Fateful Meeting

I'm really enjoying this so far! I like how princess abigail just up and vanished - Somehow, I think she'll find the life of a peasant far less appealing in a few days... I'm looking forward to more of this story!

Two friends ascend a mountain, prepared for a difficult, yet rewarding journey. However, they could never have prepared for what ensued.
Rated: Adult 56 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 80445 Words: 15703 Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Locale: College, Road Trip
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse, Undercover, Unknown, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Mechanical Device
Series: None
Published: 04/14/14
Updated: 07/17/16
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/27/15 Title: Chapter 8: Some Reckless Actions

I'm finding myself looking forward to new episodes coming out all the time... I really enjoy this series so far, Lanz - thanks for sharing it with us. Erin is kinda cool - I hope she and paul can come to terms with her changing. I only wish the chapters were a bit longer.

Author's Response: I'm the same way; I get hooked and then disappointed that it's not done yet! This chapter was a bit shorter than the last two, but I felt that this scene needed to stand alone from the next one. Thanks a bunch for reviewing, good to know there are still people interested!

East City was enjoying a normal day, until several people awoke to find strange humanoid creatures telling them that they were "chosen"...
Rated: Adult 147 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 79308 Words: 181322 Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/01/14 Title: Chapter 18: Issue #17: Mother and Daughter

Wow - what a great read! I love me some superhero TG stories and this had so much fun and comic-booky goodness in it I was very happy to see and read it. I'm not going to review each chapter - there's too much content for that. I do love the fact you've populated your world with a large number of heroes - many with interesting backgrounds and concepts - but I'm a little dissappointed that you seem to have slacked off on the villains too... I mean this mysterious benefactor is cool I guess, and Gustav is okay - but where are the Other bad guys? It seems 90% of the chosen are heroes - but we've seen very few of the "Not interested in using powers to fight crime" bunch or the "Lets get rich using our powers" bunch. Maybe they don't make for as interesting a story - but using the same villains over and over again gets boring - and is an easy cop-out. I know its probable that it was done to prevent the story from spilling into too many directions, but it might be nice to see more variety. Maybe a group of bad guys who doesn't care for - or even works against - this benefactor, for their own reasons? Either way, the story was frikking awesome and if it sounded like i was dissing it, NOPE. I really liked it. Top Notch - and very fast paced.

Author's Response: I'm going to address your concerns over the villains. The reason most of the Chosen that we see are heroes is because Cloak and his Benefactor are killing Chosen, sometimes using them, but mostly killing them. HARP has nothing to do with the Benefactor, save for Harmony (who isn't a Chosen) being experimented on by them. Gustav, despite working with the Benefactor, actually has ulterior motives that will be explored in the next chapter. And the next arc will have a villain with nothing to do with the Benefactor, in any way. There ARE bad guys who don't revolve around the Benefactor, it's just that he's the main villain.

A playboy is offered the "best sex" of his life by a woman who offers him her daughter's phone number. He's terrible when it comes to his lack of respect for the female gender. And the woman, herself, as gorgeous as she is, has no interest in him. Will he take the bait? We'll see.
Rated: Explicit 20 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 56419 Words: 5346 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Featured Items: Boots, High Heels, Pantyhose, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Fights Change, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Distant Future, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Mind Control
Series: None
Published: 06/23/14
Updated: 07/08/14
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/25/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm really liking this one! I like the characters (human and kitty) - and I really wonder what's happening with this Serraphina. Is Cassie actually Casseopia, from greece? I'd really like to see more of what's happening. Three thumbs up!

Author's Response: You will, Kath. Chapter 5 is up and sixty hits are now recorded for it. And the saddest, my response to you was delayed because I was "tweaking" the chapter (again) just now. So to the fifty or so of you who have already read it. Sorry. I just love to make changes. I get it; I'm as bad as George Lucas. I just wish I had his talent . . . and success. Is she Cassiopeia? I don't think so. Or Cassandra, not necessarily, not unless the mood to link her to Greek mythology sweeps over me at some distant point. But that is not important to this story. Don't forget Dexter. He's still got his story arc to be "dealt with." Oh, and thank you for the review.

Aaron, upon waking up one day, realized he was going through changes, seemingly for the better. What will he think of them as his changes progress?
Rated: Explicit 40 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 147217 Words: 24736 Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 07/01/14
Updated: 06/23/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/24/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was very disturbed by this story and your writing style, Person42 - but probably not for the reason you're expecting. The story on its own is pretty cool and odd - and although I found Aaron's belief that he was becoming a cat a little absurd, I do have some other things to say...

Your description of Aaron/Rachel and their disorientation, their losing time, and their constant confusion as to what was going on around them, was VERY accurate to what someone suffering from a psychotic break and schizophrenia actually feels from their point of view. I've been there - and its scary as hell when you're living through it. Your brain says "Something is wrong - you're missing time; where did the last 5 hours go?" - and you start to panic physically and emotionally, because you KNOW something is wrong, and you can't figure it out. Now imagine this feeling never, ever ends, and that's a good day. Its pretty scary.

This story brought back some unpleasant memories for me - for reasons you did obviously not intend - but I'd like to commend you for your skill at writing Rachels and Aaron's mentally altered states - it was accurate, disturbing, and very very realistic. My head still hurts after reading it... You did her confusion and fear and terror and disgust and all that stuff perfectly. If she had scary voices telling her to do bad things, it would have matched my experiences almost exactly (minus the cat transformation) - this was so accurate it was scary. My hat's off to you.

Author's Response: Oh, then I'm kind of glad I disturbed you, in a perverse kind of way! Sorry for bringing up the memories, but I'm glad to know I nailed it! It's wonderful to hear you enjoyed it, and I can't thank you enough for the detailed review!

A man with his whole life ahead of him is cursed by a witch, all because of his drunk brother. How will Robert adapt to his new life as Erica?
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 11796 Words: 1804 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Bikinis
Locale: Family Household, Office
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 07/17/14
Updated: 07/17/14
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/28/15 Title: Chapter 2: Day 1

Hi Lanz - I love your other story Aerin, and I'd love to see more of it - and this one too. I hope you can find it in your heart to come back to this one and continue Aerin as well... they're really good! Thanks for sharing them.

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! :)

Jack is reserved, Jessica is eccentric. When they come together, they have an experience that causes them to realize that their stories and emotions run deeper than they ever suspected.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 8 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 2639 Words: 6337 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Accident
Story Theme: Comedy, Coming of Age, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 07/23/14
Updated: 08/01/14
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/02/14 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I'm really enjoying this - I like the detailed characterizations - they're thoughtfully and artfully presented - you really get a feeling for their characters and their feelings for each other. I love this.

When McGacky agreed to take his sister's shift at her work he never imagined that his world would never be the same.
Rated: Explicit 31 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 58313 Words: 34137 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend, Maid
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Maid Uniform, Sex Toys, Work Uniform
Motivation for Change: Undercover
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Genie/Wishes, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: Meddling Gods
Published: 08/06/14
Updated: 11/27/18
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08/06/14 Title: Chapter 1: A little bit of dress-up

Is there going to be more of this, or is it a one-shot? I'd love to see more - it looks good!

Author's Response: There are 3 chapters in total in this story, haven't had time to edit the other two yet but they'll be up soon. I enjoy writing these short stories but I'll definitely be making more similar stories in the future.

Playing with magic can be dangerous, especially when you mess with someone elses spell. Can Tim manage to figure out just what is happening to him and find a way to reverse it before its too late?
Rated: Adult 8 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 22357 Words: 16448 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Child, Daughter
Featured Items: Pantyhose
Motivation for Change: Accident, Forced
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Story Theme: Second Childhood, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Age Regression, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 08/06/14
Updated: 08/06/14
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08/06/14 Title: Chapter 1: The Telling

I really liked this story - and I think the "Be careful what you wish for" trope is well used here. it was a quick fun read - and very entertaining. I hope you write more stories for us here - this was great fun

Sam has been looking forward to his summer holiday away with his big sister and her friends all year. But when a subtle mistake turns Sam into the opposite gender he must decide whether to let it ruin his holiday or embrace his new appearance.
Rated: Explicit 213 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 608685 Words: 92080 Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: Bikinis, Curlers, High Heels, Undies
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Humiliation
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 08/14/14
Updated: 12/15/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/31/15 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Just a joke

Hey Adam, I've really been enjoying this story for a long time! Its one of my favorites right now, and I always look forward to seeing a new chapter! I like the way you write Sam and how he's thinking, and also I like how the story is developing at a realistic pace. On a lighter note, you had a few spelling errors - like Seized instead of Ceased - and I thought it might help to point out. it didn't detract from the story in the least, and I can't wait to find out what happens next! Top Notch!

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for the kind words. I am loving writing this story and it makes it all the more fun knowing other people are enjoying it too. Developing the story at a realistic pace was always my intention when writing this. I also wanted to show a realistic transformation of what a boy would do in sams situation. Thanks for the notes on spelling. I am dyslexic and spelling is the bane of my life. Thanks for pointing out the mistake and I'm glad it wasn't distracting. x

An escort mission turns into a tale of discovery and love. A Princess, a Foreign mercenary. Lots of trouble to get into. IN the warring world that is, Narmax.
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 6559 Words: 9616 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Boyfriend, Fantasy Character, Girlfriend
Motivation for Change: Curse, Tricked
Personality: Loses Identity
Story Theme: Mythical Setting, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: The World of Narmax
Published: 08/19/14
Updated: 11/03/14
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/19/14 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Physically, and mentally Changing. Start of something new.

I LOVE this story so far! Garnet and Nicholas seem like they're going to have a rough ride in any relationships and I can just tell Garnet has a lot in his/her past that made her so hard, so bitter. I cant wait to discover it. Nicholas seems like perhaps she wasn't always the vapid princess - maybe she was putting on an act, or the witches spell changed more than we know? I would love to see more of this story.

What would you do... If you can only remain in the body of a person for several weeks, before you passed into the next. You have no identity, no body that is your own. The morals you develop are useless in this sick and twisted reality. You are alone, always alone... like the sole survivor of a dying planet. You have but one choice, make or break? Explict, cause I'm paranoid.
Rated: Explicit 3 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 25150 Words: 5425 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/03/14 Title: Chapter 3: The Snake

I really like this so far - I wonder what story elements you plan to try out? This strange power has a lot of potential for self-exploration and I like how you've hinted that the main character will have to learn a new morality for dealing with this odd power.

Author's Response: I'm glad that you like it! I can't stress enough on how much I wanted to pick at morality and whether what we do is wrong or right. I originally planned to jump ahead a few decades or even to the present year, but I'll hold back a little and go through every detail. As you said, this story has a lot of potential for self-exploration and I'd like to give my readers something a little different. Thanks for your lovely comment and look forward to the next chapter! Until then... Cya in the next chapter... LasbAuthorArtist.

Alone in an unfamiliar town, a young man accepts an invitation to go out drinking. But very quickly, his life is turned inside-out thanks to a little bit of evil magic. Now, he needs to find a way to undo what's been done to him.
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 27503 Words: 7609 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo
Featured Items: High Heels
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Costume or Halloween
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 09/04/14
Updated: 09/04/14
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/04/14 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1 - Mislead by Strangers

I liked it a lot - another "careful what you wish for story" - it was cute and fun

Much of the world has been destroyed an a mysterious enemy who have poisoned much of the land. A pilot fighting to defend Alaska is shot down bringing his flying career to an end, that is until he is offered the chance to become a test subject in the Winged Warrior programme.
Rated: Adult 187 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 112251 Words: 128996 Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Featured Items: Lingerie, Undies
Locale: Labratory
Motivation for Change: For a Job
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 09/19/14
Updated: 01/05/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/20/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm really enjoying this story - I love the fact our hero is a reckless pilot (is there any other kind in fiction?) and is willing to do anything to help save his people. I think he's going to have to do just that - and the wing suits are very mysterious. Where did they come from? Who Made them? Why can humans even use them, and not aliens or something? WANT MORE.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try not to disappoint

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/27/14 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I hope its not like that laser disc video game from the 1980's called Space Ace... I really really like this story so far - it and Sky Queen have been must-reads for many weeks. I can't wait to see how it ends.

Author's Response: Laser Disc version of this story will be out in 2059 when Laser discs come back into fashion

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/18/14 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

LOVE IT - YESSSSS I cheered!

Author's Response: Yaaayyyy

When a dormant curse reawakens on his 18th birthday, a high school senior finds that moonlit nights have become infinitely more terrifying...and annoying.
Rated: Adult 75 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 197912 Words: 134250 Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Curse, Revenge
Personality: Fights Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 10/07/14
Updated: 06/21/19
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/15 Title: Chapter 16: Disharmony

I absolutely love the hairy fit both parents throw! Totally appropriate, and funny to boot. If I ever did something like that when i was a kid, and my parents acted like that, I'd be totally terrified! I love this chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! =D I was hoping to get the anger of the parents nailed convincingly. Thankfully, it wasn't too hard, I just had to imagine how any parent would logically react to their kid doing something so monumentally stupid. I know I'd be fuming, for sure!

Patrick was an ordinary teenager, then he fell into another dimension along with his sisters cat. Now he's far from home, not exactly human, and definitely not male. Worst of all she is surrounded by people she's not sure she can trust, in a situation she can barely comprehend.
She has a long way to go if she's ever to find safety, and the path is dark and dangerous.
This is the first part of a trilogy.
I added in a new chapter, Answers and Questions, it was necessary for the second part.
Rated: Adult 57 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 41908 Words: 57295 Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Alien, Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Long Nails
Locale: Hospital or Clinic, Labratory
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Coming of Age
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: Far From Home
Published: 10/29/14
Updated: 12/13/14
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/29/14 Title: Chapter 1: Strange Paths

AWESOME START!!! I really like this story so far - and its probably too early to give a rating, but I don't care... Its a really nice opening to what seems like a superhero tale in an alternate universe. (To be fair, I'm 99% likely to rip it off for my weekly superhero RPG game) - Great instant origin story. This was a great read and I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks. More will come fairly soon, and feel free to rip off as much as you want for roleplaying. If you get some cool ideas while role playing send them to me, I may want to rip off from you to. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/14/14 Title: Chapter 11: Conspiracy

I love the surprise twist- the government is the true enemy... A little trope-y, but still a good one. I'm looking forward to seeing how this develops... (And just because it's a bit tropey and traditional doesn't mean its bad) I'm liking how Pat and Christopher are getting along - and I love the quirkiness of Pulam and his friends' powers - its so strange a character I don't think I've EVER seen one like it.

Author's Response: But are the rebels any better than the government? And just how bad is the government? How much of this is true and how much are lies or half truths? I was looking for weird powers that wouldn't over power things, I think I've got a good mix, just wait until you start reading the second part or the shorts on Travel Tales. Then you'll see some weirdness. Thanks for commenting.

Keith and Gina were happily married until a car accident changed their lives forever.
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 11686 Words: 2819 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Wife
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 11/29/14
Updated: 11/29/14
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12/04/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this was a nice, short story. i like how the change wasn't explained, and how the events took time - months, not days or hours like many other stories. it was refreshing! (sorry about all the uncapitalized letters, my keyboard is screwed up - need a new one.) i'm a little surprised there wasn't more strife in their relationship - but it seemed like the main focus was on acceptance, not the greif and stress it took to get there. Liked it very much

An ordinary Joe is possessed by a female spirit. Fortunately for Joe, the spirit is blithe, rather than dark. The series contains both male to female and female to male transitions. It has explicit sex scenes, but not in the first chapters. Obviously, it deals with the difficulties inherent in changing gender. Also some mystery and a few laughs. I hope you enjoy it!
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 16771 Words: 15168 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Featured Items: Bikinis, Lingerie, Pantyhose, Sex Toys
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Mind/Body Posession
Series: None
Published: 12/11/14
Updated: 12/16/14
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12/11/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- An Ordinary Joe

I'm really enjoying this so far - thanks for a good story!

Pat has escaped from the government safe house where she and her friends had been living. But her friends are captives, and she only has the vaguest notion where they might be. Her only companion is a young girl who is rapidly getting weaker. Now this former boy turned cat girl, must head across a country where everyone is an enemy, hoping for a miracle to free her friends and finding a place of safety.
This is the second in the series Far From Home
Rated: Adult 22 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 6417 Words: 9687 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Alien, Fantasy Character
Locale: Road Trip
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Good to Bad, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Coming of Age
Type of Change: Stuck
Series: Far From Home
Published: 12/13/14
Updated: 01/01/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/15/14 Title: Chapter 2: Missing Him

I think this was a really nice reminisce of a romantic scene - something i think would have fit very well into the first book of the story. Still, its really nice to see it here. Maybe Pat could come to terms with this new form - cause it doesn't look like she's going back to being human or male anytime soon, even if a mysterious person could send them home....

Author's Response: Actually I think you're right. Sales are still low enough on kindle that throwing it in tomorrow definitely wouldn't hurt. So yeah, I'll do it tomorrow morning. Thanks,

A new world of magic and strange creatures, where slavery is accepted and racism is the norm. One man will become something completely different and change the world itself.
Rated: Explicit 139 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 111723 Words: 196456 Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Wife
Locale: Camp
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Forced
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Historical Time Period, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Racial
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Non-Consentual Sex, Torture
Series: None
Published: 12/27/14
Updated: 03/22/17
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/31/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Savior

Hey Missania, this is an awesome story so far! I'm really, really enjoying it and its one of those "I can't wait to see more" page turners... I love how you're building the Ashar's culture and personality - I'd love to learn more of their beliefs and culture - and I'd love to learn more about the 5th son of the king who likes beastmen (I forget his name, sorry) - I can't help but realize I'm going to be reading this one a long time... Awesome!

Author's Response: Oh, Esran? You could not have mentioned him at a more perfect time, as I right the chapter and saw this review I was about to do some more work on talking about him, and more. The Ashar beliefs are different with every tribe, so you will likely see more with this tribe and less about the other tribes, that is until we get deeper into the story. I'm glad you're liking the story, I'll be working on developing Irasha and the gang very soon, but first we need to do some slaver hunting ;)

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/12/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Savior

I'm really gripped with your story - I can't help but wanting to rush right in and read it whenever a new chapter comes up... This is very good storytelling - and i really like the way you're developing Irasha and how she's slowly learning to deal with emotions at all, from not having them... Could it be the price that god took from her was her emotions and morality? Maybe she's regaining them? Did she have to become a monster (when she killed a city of people) to know what she was fighting to prevent, now?

Author's Response: Oh... You will not believe what I have planned. It's the plot twist of an eternity and I can tell you, three hundred thousand words might not even be enough to get to that point. But I'll answer some of your questions now. Sylin took a price, though it was not the emotions, Favus never had emotions to begin with, more on that in three hundred thousand words time (approximately). The emotions this is definitely Ishavael's fault, she didn't have a choice because emotions are part of instincts and Ishavael is kind of the goddess of instincts. The last question I can't really answer as it's really a thing for you to figure out for yourself, you view Irasha as a monster or as a person, be it whether you look at her newly discovered emotions or the fact she has killed tens of thousands of people, perhaps more. I have a long run plan for this entire story and the train appears to be missing breaks, hopefully you won't have bailed out when I really do hit the time where you finally learn why she was born without emotions.

A man reveals his love to his neighbor, but it doesn't go as expected. In order to stay together, they both go through more than they expected.
Rated: Explicit 23 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 102668 Words: 10227 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Boyfriend, Girlfriend
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men, Changes to be Attracted Only to Women
Story Theme: Romance
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 12/28/14
Updated: 06/14/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/15/15 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Hi Guynoir - I'm really enjoying your story so far. The main character Jon seems really lonely - lonely enough to throw away his current life - and more than a bit infatuated. Are you planning on a female to male transformation for his girlfriend in the future, or is the listing on the story for him turning back... (If its a spoiler, don't answer). I like the fact he was crying without even knowing it - I think stuff like that adds a level of seriousness to the story. Nice

Author's Response: I had this whole story planned from the start, and added a bunch of tags from the start as well. Of course I'm also writing each chapter at a time so it's hard to tell what'll happen.

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03/03/15 Title: Chapter 7: Clothing - Part 1

I'm not sure if its the characters frame of mind, or if you're trying to show he/she's discombobulated, but this chapter seems to be written in a style that implies abruptness and maybe impatience. Was that your intent? I am enjoying the story, but this chapter seems somehow out of sync in its writing style from the previous chapters. Maybe I'm over thinking it, but it seems you might have had trouble getting back into the story after your recent hiatus.... Still, nice.

Author's Response: Yes I wasn't too happy with how this chapter turned out in terms of style, but I didn't want to put it off indefinitely. I might redo this chapter.

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/28/15 Title: Chapter 9: Shower

Hi Guynoir! I'm really, really liking this - but I can't help but feel the main character rushed into this too quickly and is now suffering (to be expected) - but also at the same time, I'm really hoping she pulls through it and feels better. I'm really developing empathy for the heroine and I hope it works out well for her.

Author's Response: Yeah, I wanted to do a character study going through a deeper analysis of how one deals with a sudden change. Don't worry though, the story isn't over yet.

Egon of house Silber have to save his noble family from their neighboring rival house: Gelder. To do this, he have to marry a strong family, in order to gain support. Therefor, he travels to the Yawen Academy, to be paired up with a girl from a strong house. But if he have to it, would he rather marry a guy from a strong house?
Rated: Explicit 7 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 8526 Words: 3555 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Bride, Daughter, Fantasy Character, Girlfriend, Teenager
Featured Items: Bikinis, Lingerie, School Uniform
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Blackmailed, Forced, Undercover
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Historical Time Period, Mythical Setting, Pregnancy, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 01/08/15
Updated: 01/08/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01/08/15 Title: Chapter 3: A work of magic

Hiya! I really enjoyed this tale so far - it looks like it has a great deal of promise! I don't know if it matters to you, but there are a great deal of spelling mistakes - is English your first language? It doesn't take away from the enjoyment for me - but I know it bothers a lot of other readers. I like the characterization of Egon/Erika - she seems like a dutiful royal, like they should be - but she does seem a little... submissive already. If she gets more submissive, I don't think I could stand her. I think a ruler should be strong - but YMMV. Anyway, I'm looking forward to more of this tale.

Author's Response: You are right, it is not my main language. I will try to find the spelling mistakes. You might have misunderstood something; Egon was not a royal, only a noble, and he is not even the heir to the house. And with the submissive part, I had planned for her to be less submissive later on, as she will rather take control of the situation. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed
Date: 01/08/15 Title: Chapter 1: House Silber

Then perhaps you should switch the tag on the story from "Dominant to Submissive" to "Submissive to Dominant" - it would better explain what you mean. Thanks for telling me - I won't hold your spelling against you!

Following a party nobody seems to remember, Parker wakes up to find himself a woman with no idea how it happened. His atheist beliefs are quickly shattered as he discovers the world is filled more than just humans.
Rated: Explicit 29 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 35945 Words: 29498 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Featured Items: Corsets
Motivation for Change: Curse, In Hiding, Undercover
Personality: Bad to Good
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Comedy, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Stuck
Series: A Day and A Night
Published: 01/11/15
Updated: 06/01/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01/13/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is starting off really fun. I am really hoping to see where it goes next. IMO I don't think Hera would be upset about the bull - after all, all the gods deserve worship and if she took umbrage at his offerings, then he might be taking umbrage at her offerings... What she MIGHT be pissed about is two pretty women being in her husbands presence... she isn't the most trusting of women - for a good reason, considering her husband. I wonder what other gods and monsters the heroine will meet in her quest to return to normal! KUDOs!

Author's Response: Having such a diverse range of characters is what makes the story fun to write and it won't just be mythology I'm delving into :D

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed
Date: 01/21/15 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

What was in that potion!? Seriously, this tale is quite enjoyable - it reminds me of "Dude, Where's my Spartans?" (like dude, where's my car) or something like the Hangover - they're still dealing with the party aftermath - this is great.

Author's Response: I could tell you if I was vocabulary educated enough to know the word I'm looking for but I don't :(

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/24/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whoops! Looks like Parker has a problem! I wonder why he didn't want his original doll back - there's probably a really interesting scenario in that if he can just remember - and what the hell eats thoughts and memories for food? Is this a castlevania reference or and obscure mythological creature - or some dramatic license? I really like this tale so far...

Author's Response: I can't remember where I got the idea of a memory eating creature from, I thought it would have existed in mythology somewhere but google didn't give me and answers to that.

A boy who didn't go to his prom wakes up to find he has become a girl, and the clocks have gone back a full year. He is faced with going back to school all over again with his new identity.
Rated: Adult 14 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 66182 Words: 16188 Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Story Theme: Coming of Age
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 01/19/15
Updated: 04/05/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/19/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This has the earmarks of a lovely sweet story - I love it already! I can't wait to see more. Becca has a very realistic and very interesting way with dealing with things - she's supposed to be extremely smart isn't she? I'm really looking forward to discovering more about her situation and her life - and see how Brian adapts to the situation.

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/22/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's not exactly what I expected, but I'm really liking this one... thanks for writing it!

When a band of the king's men delve into the subterranean city of a long-dead goddess, one among their number finds himself undergoing an agonizing transformation as they fight their way through horror and nightmare. Will their very presence revive the beautifully dark goddess who once nearly conquered the world?
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 4726 Words: 8771 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse, Unknown
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Horror, Mind/Body Posession, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 01/23/15
Updated: 01/23/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01/23/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome story so far! I really enjoyed it Andres. Just a side note - some of your punctuation is off - which didn't really detract from the story, but it was noticeable. What manner of creature is roy turning into - was the demigod of human stock or some other species? I suspect his friends may be coming for him in the future, unawares that he's roy.

Author's Response: I am sorry for the punctuation. English is not my primary language and the grammar still sometimes confuses me. I get a lot wrong. Can you tell me what I mixed up? And you'll find out more about the demigod later on. Can't spoil the story, haha.

When a US marine finds a strange sword on patrol, he is forced into a mystic world of aristocracy, magic and adventure.
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 3624 Words: 4632 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/26/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really really liked this! It punched all my buttons right away - i can't wait to read more. I really like the 'stranger in a strange land' kind of story - but I wonder if you had Stark accept his circumstances too easily... Do you think he'd be more "NOPE this isn't happening - I'm being drugged!" or is he kind of putting off his meltdown until he knows he's not in enemy territory... cause it does kind of feel a meltdown (even if minor) is coming. He just suffered a HUGE change in his world view - not only is his gender and maybe age different, his world and all the geopolitics are different too. He'd feel lost and alone, probably except for his sisters who know about earth. Really cool - I can't wait to see more.

Author's Response: Not to spoil anything, but I'm toying with the idea of a meltdown later on, I'm surprised you caught on. Thank you for the feedback, helps a lot.

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed
Date: 08/23/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi! I was wondering if you were going to continue this story? I was really hoping you would!
Writing can be hard and lonely, and I just wanted to share some support with you! I like your story telling style, and would love to see more!

On the Isles of Hesperides there are many orchards but none as important or sacred as the Gardens of the Ladon. An Orchard of the gods. Tended to by mortals but guarded by dragons. To touch a golden apple is punishable by death. To steal a golden apple? What would you risk for a taste of the gods? Could you risk everything?
Rated: Kid-Friendly 1 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 2190 Words: 1290 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Personality: Fights Change
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Mythical Setting, Sports
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 02/11/15
Updated: 02/11/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/12/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1.1

Hi Erinn - I really like this so far... I'm a little confused though - is there modern trappings in the story (like cars) or when they talk about driving back home are they talking about a different type of conveyance? I love the interplay between the dad and daughter - but although we know the name of the daughter (Korin, I think), the dad remains nameless... Will he have a name soon? I really enjoyed this vignette - it looks like your writing style is clean and easy to read, well scripted and flows naturally. I imagined an ancient monastery while reading this passage if it helps... it was cool.

Author's Response: Their world is technologically comparable to ours with the addition of a strong magical influence which they term Aether. This is an abbreviated chapter in that it is only a piece of the first chapter. I'm sure I'll find an organic way to properly introduce the father within the first few chapters. Though now I feel tempted to make not knowing the dad's name an ongoing gimmick of the story, lol. I'm definitely happy to read you're enjoying it so far and thanks so much for the feedback O.O It means a lot lot lot. :D

A war is starting. An unwitting teenager is getting pulled into the centre
Rated: Kid-Friendly 7 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 9700 Words: 7478 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Forced
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Horror, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 02/20/15
Updated: 02/19/16
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/23/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've been enjoying this tale so far - its odd how Emmanuel is transforming - was he under a spell until his birthday, or somesuch, or the presence of him in the town of the spell affecting him? If the change is happening for no reason that would be odd. I hope its explained. Also, I really enjoy the story - its shaping up to be really fun - but he seems to be too accepting of whats going on and too eager for it - is he under some sort of mental manipulation? Or simple discovering something he never realized before... cause if its the latter, you need to make his lack of feeling complete, much more apparent in the first chapter or two or else it will seem like it comes out of nowhere.

This is really cool - and a nice change from a lot of the more erotic tales that get posted here. Fun.

Author's Response: Yeah I guess it'll feel like it comes out of nowhere if i wait too long to explain it. Thanks for that. And thanks for the comment. I really really appreciate it

Jim is a loner and a pervert. When he gets a new sexy neighbour he is all too interested in her but she obviously isn't in him. Then Jim gets on her wrong foot and he undergoes some changes... and more changes.
Rated: Explicit 39 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 175291 Words: 12970 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/22/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Jim's life

Interesting mix of revenge and erotica. Will the story be mostly situations where he's humiliated, or is there a story hiding in here that's taking a while to come out...? I like it so far - I'm just wondering where you're going with this. Thanks - its a great effort so far.

Author's Response: I think humiliation will be a great part of the story but I can't say what the end will bring so far. Personally I enjoy humiliation the most and since his is my story I think it will revolve around that.

Part 1 of 2. A retelling of Theseus facing the Minotaur.
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 5157 Words: 4287 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive, Made Dumber
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Historical Time Period, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Stuck
Series: None
Published: 03/02/15
Updated: 03/02/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03/02/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is definitely a different retelling of the minotaur legend - so far I like it, but it is strange. I've never seen someone write about turning into what appears to be a cow woman before. You dedicate a lot of time to describing veins - is that significant? I'm not aware of its importance.

Author's Response: Hello and thank you! Udder veins are interesting to me as part of cow TFs and part of the transformation process. I tend to describe in detail and especially like showing small yet distinct changes so that's one of them. To show that, yeah, definitely not human any more.

Part 2 of 2. Theseus enters the Labyrinth as his body changes further.

Note: I welcome comments, reviews, critiques or whichever. Just don't be a condescending jerk about it, please! I take good criticism quite well and would rather work to improve my writing than to pretend it's amazing. Thank you!
Rated: Deviant 8 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 7810 Words: 5103 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Historical Time Period, Mythical Setting, Pregnancy
Series: None
Published: 03/06/15
Updated: 03/07/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/07/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 2

I love how you ended this with a twist! Awesome! A very unusual twist or change on an ancient story - I like it. This was a fun piece of short fiction - and well written.

An origin story based on the pen and paper game Mutants and Masterminds....with modifications of course. The main character, Scott gets captured by a supervillain and experimented on much to his dismay. None of the Mutant &MasterMind characters are mine. They are copyright Green Ronin Press and whoever else has ownership. Scott is my character.
Rated: Adult 12 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 10599 Words: 11386 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: Labratory, Office
Motivation for Change: Forced
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Hormonal, Mechanical Device
Series: None
Published: 03/28/15
Updated: 08/11/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/30/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Captured

I'm a really big fan of the Mutants and Masterminds game - and I love me some Freedom League and Freedom City - and this story is really really cool and refreshing... but so far (and I think I know why you did it this way) - I feel Scott is seeming a little weak as a character and I hope that changes. He's been through the ringer - and all we've seen of the freedom league is a few heroes and a few hugs - and I know for people who are not familiar with the Freedom League, they won't know who or what the heroes and heroines are from your descriptions...

Captain Thunder is a super-brick who can hurl lightning, like Shazam - and Raven is a martial artist and mastermind - like Batman. Johnny Rocket is like the flash - but none of the other heroes are mentioned beyond their first name - and you should introduce them more for the readers that are not familiar with Freedom City - otherwise they might as well be called "Captain cabbage" - its just words with no meaning attached.

Another thing I find is that I like is that not only are the heroes heroes - they actually care about the people they try to save. I like that you showed that - its really important. I like that they haven't let their godlike powers go to their heads... And I'm wondering when you'll have Scott join their ranks (if ever).

I would really like to see more of this story - but I think it would be better to stop assuming readers know all about who you're writing about - these heroes (in their world) are the best known most popular heroes ever, with magazines and articles and books written about them all the time - people probably argue which hero can lift more weight while having their morning coffee, like armchair quarterbacks... "Doc otaku could totally take Daedalus" etc... Scott might be able to paint a better picture of who these heroes are and what they can do than he's done so far...

To be fair, he's been more than a little distracted though.

I like this! Please continue!

Author's Response: Thanks for the awesome feedback! True, I have been very vague about the Freedom League but will featured more later in the story. I was trying to give people an idea of who they are without taking the spotlight away from Scott. (Looks like I may have been too vague.) Scott is now settling down and coming to terms with everything that has happened. Scott will start to figure out where his/her new place in life is soon. As far as Scott joining their ranks? I'm not telling!

Alex purchases a video game and the resulting journey will change his life forever.
Rated: Explicit 17 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 36969 Words: 7584 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Featured Items: Maid Uniform
Motivation for Change: Accident, Tricked
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Captive, Mythical Setting, Pregnancy
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Bondage/S&M, Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 03/30/15
Updated: 05/02/16
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/03/15 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

This was really enjoyable - I'd love to see more of what happens... It reminds me of a few other stories I've read here and elsewhere and I liked them too... The writing and dialogue is very good, and the characters moods and dealing with emotions seems pretty accurate as well - great! I like how you describe her amazement at the game being so real - and how she's adjusting to the game not being a game.

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/02/16 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I'm enjoying the story so far - I kinda like these "Videogames become real' stories - and I hope this one keeps going.

In a modern-day revamp of the classic fairy tale, Kevin is trapped in a lonely rut in both work and at home. When he tries to break out of that rut for a night out, he succeeds with a bit of help, but not in the way he would have ever expected...
Rated: Explicit 29 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 92320 Words: 26749 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Featured Items: High Heels
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 04/08/15
Updated: 11/13/17
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/05/15 Title: Chapter 5: Find Me In Da Club

This is turning into an awesome night for kayla! I really, really like this story! I hope you do more of it - its very entertaining. I love how she's nicknaming her fairy godmother FG and all the little details you toss in. I need to do more of that, frankly. You're awesome.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it! I am trying to keep that stream of consciousness feel to it, so I feel the details do aid in that, so I'm very happy you appreciate it!

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04/08/15 Title: Chapter 1: Another Saturday Morning

I like Kevin - and I like the writing style you wrote the story with. It makes him easy to sympathize with and easy to start to understand. It has just enough detail to get the story going, without too much to bog you down in 'wall of text' style info dumps. I can't wait to see where you go with this...

The Hagerton family of New Allentown, Pennsylvania in the year 2415 discover that their lives will never be the same again, not after father and son, Keith and Jeffrey Hagerton go on a Sunday excursion to the long abandoned tourist cave, Crystal Cave, in one time Kutztown, Pennsylvania.
Rated: Adult 34 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 33009 Words: 17025 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: Family Household, Space or Foreign Planet, Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Distant Future, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 04/21/15
Updated: 05/29/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed
Date: 06/03/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just started reading Stellar Quest and it's very easy to read so far - I can't wait to see how it develops. Sorry I took so long in getting to it, Paul! I'll leave a rating for a later review.

Author's Response: My thanks. I hope you really like it. It was a fun project.

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06/03/15 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow - this reads like the slow steady beginning of "Close Encounters" by Spielberg - its got interesting characters, and I like the realistic dynamic between Jeff and his dad keith, as well as Frieda and her mom. It seems like a real family (except they're all nice people - not everyone gets that lucky with their family.) Definitely going to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks, Kath. The Hagertons. I must have been channeling the Robinson family from the original 1960s "Lost in Space" TV series for a family template when I came up with the Hagertons (no way were the Robinsons so loving and tolerate of each other in the later movie version.) And as you already know, I did not base it on any of my own personal "fond family memories." A Dad like Keith? Me, maybe, if I had a kid of my own. In my imagining of that future, to even bring a kid into the world and into the island city community means getting permission, and because the individuals themselves can't procreate on their own, it stands to reason that said family "might" be as nice to one another as the Hagertons were, the parents grateful just to be granted permission. (For a contrast, though, in "A Contested Future: Mike's Globally Despised Solution," Cindy Bradshaw's futuristic "parents" in a near similar island city reality are elevated status seekers who solicit their city to beget a child only as a way to raise their social standing in the tightly knit community of the city. They were "pretenders," jerks, and Cindy felt nothing for them at all, didn't even miss them when her "timeline" got cancelled and her parents along with it. Anyway, I'm glad you're liking the story. And thanks for the good rating.

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/03/15 Title: The Stellar Quest -- (A five chapter Preview)

I love the way you describe this alien future earth - the tech and society is so well imagined, so vivid its like YOU have been there, and are telling us... I guess that sounds a bit familiar, huh? Anyway, I can really visualize the situation and setting and I really love the way you make the characters empathize. If I had to compare this with some of your other works, I'd have to say that so far, I really am enjoying this one a bit more than they - this is great!

Author's Response: I had a good time writing this one. It was based after all on the roughly ten minute dream I had back in 1972 about my intruding as unseen as astral presence on two teenage neighbor kids (a boy and a girl) who were just idly talking among themselves in one of the two's bedrooms in a many centuries from now future. Their two dads enter and invite the two to do something rarely (if ever) done: Visit the surface. The four take a subterranean shuttle train out to an old, rarely used maintenance sub-station out beyond the city. They climb the rock-hewn steps, departing the hollowed out and below-ground level station and visit the topside world. For just a few moments I felt like I was really there, unseen, but with them, seeing our world many centuries from now, their below-ground island city, and the topside world as it looked after centuries of being allowed to erase all of humanity's former presence upon it. THAT and my visit years later to Crystal Cave in Kutztown, Pa. were the basis for this story.

The second story of Rachel Montoya, an American teenager in Europe who used to be an old man in California. She meets new friends in school, comes to terms with her sexuality, helps a TG classmate, and hides from a hired killer while still finding time to study for exams.
Rated: Adult 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 14105 Words: 11752 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Boyfriend, Daughter, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Sex Toys
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Romance
Warnings: Death, Torture
Series: None
Published: 05/15/15
Updated: 05/22/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/15/15 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1. On the Road Again

Woo! I'm glad you continued this Luthien - I really enjoyed the tale of Rachel and I'd love to see where it goes. I'll be following this story for a while i think. Thanks for continuing it!

Author's Response: Thank you, Kathryn! Watch this space for more!

What happens when you are exposed to top-secret chemicals? One high schooler finds out
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 17888 Words: 3254 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Accident
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 05/24/15
Updated: 06/04/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/28/15 Title: Chapter 1: Summer's Eve

Hi Guynoir - I'm enjoying this so far! I'd love to see more! It would be nice if the big pharma gave a good compensation package - assuming they admit they did anything... I like how you phrase your sentences and how the characters talk - it sounds natural, like you'd expect a real conversation to go.

Author's Response: I haven't really decided how the direction of the story, but thanks for the feedback.

Adam and Steve were just helping out their sisters, unfortunately they came upon a witch, and now Adam's been cursed...
Rated: Adult 135 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 410600 Words: 39803 Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: High Heels, Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: The Curse Universe
Published: 05/25/15
Updated: 08/30/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/07/15 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm really loving this one! Thanks for a great story!

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/17/15 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

i really liked this chapter - I'd love to know Melanie's reasons, but I really liked this chapter. It was smooth to read, and it flowed. it was a great way to continue the story! I'm not sure why you had to rewrite it too much, but this was a really nice episode in the tale

Author's Response: Originally, the chapter began with Amy extremely angry over Melanie and Stephanie's idea that she and Steve were perfect together. It led to a lot of Steve asking Amy questions and Amy simply freezing up, like, SIX TIMES, Amy froze up. It just wasn't progressing anything, and thus I scrapped it. The chapter, as it stands now, wrote much more naturally, and didn't involve too much "I don't want to answer this question!" from either side.

Evan's petite girlfriend has always longed to be able to take a more dominant role in a relationship. So he has offered to do whatever it takes to help her achieve that.
Rated: Explicit 19 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 50080 Words: 5568 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Boyfriend, Girlfriend
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Tricked, Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 05/29/15
Updated: 06/04/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/04/15 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

HA! I LOVE THE ENDING! LOL! I really like this ending Wren - this is an awesome turnabout! Kudos!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I always hope to keep people guessing. Thanks.

A young superhero obtains a mysterious cassette. In the near future high school students will be required to spend time as the opposite sex. A trans woman and a transformed man share lunch. Hit play on this month’s sweet and steamy TG Mixed Tape for all these stories, an interview with DAW, author of Battle for Earth and the Ragnarok Rising trilogy, AND MORE!
Rated: Explicit 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 11696 Words: 9836 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/03/15 Title: Chapter 12: Writing Trans Characters: Gender Dysphoria

Hey Steph - this was really well thought out and helpful. I really enjoyed how easy and simple your advice was and how I'll be able to incorporate more of it into my stories. This article should be a Must Read for EVERY author who uses a TG character, IMO. Thanks for this wonderful article!

A group of four friends lives change when they find a set of magical cards and use them to become pro gamers
Rated: Adult 61 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 63314 Words: 56015 Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Girlfriend, Model
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie
Locale: College, Road Trip
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 06/05/15
Updated: 08/05/16
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06/05/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Majestic Wars

This was fun and enjoyable sakura - thank you for a nice story so far. I noticed that the formatting of the story could look visually better - maybe some spaces between paragraphs and sentences to sort of make a visual separation, so that your tale doesn't look like a "wall of text." Otherwise, I find it refreshing that Blair is the 'voice of reason' and that at least someone of the four of them is going "Hey guys - doesn't this strike you as potentially dangerous?" It makes sense, and is a point a lot of people ignore in their stories. And hey - a lot of Guys don't WANT to be women, and same with a lot of Women vs Men. It may be the norm on this site - but Blair's reaction is at least a nod to the fact that the majority of people are happy as they are. Its realistic and refreshing.

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06/17/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Majestic Wars

I love the newest chapter - awesome and cute!

Author's Response: The praise is appreciated

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/03/15 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Blair's new Groove

Blair has a lot of heart and compassion to help Reggie this way, even if it may not be the best choice for reggie or her - he'd probably be better just telling people, but fear is pretty messed up how it can screw with your head. It's nice to see Blair can be a caring person, and not someone who's just annoyed and angry all the time. Cool

A tango instructor discovers that one student is a much better dancer (and person) as a woman than as a man. As his student transforms into a lovely woman, he must reconcile his feelings toward her.
Rated: Adult 8 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 33237 Words: 17360 Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Breast Forms, High Heels, Lingerie
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Romance
Series: None
Published: 06/08/15
Updated: 06/20/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/08/15 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

OMG this story is so sweet and romantic! I love it! I can imagine it all as a voiceover by a sexy older man, with 'flashbacks' to his dancing scenes with his student Emerald... Emmy? Oh wow - such a vivid description with so few words... I'm speechless - this is awesome.

After centuries in cryonic suspension, Jerry discovers that the future is not at all what he had expected!
Rated: Explicit 23 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 52537 Words: 36679 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Senior (63+ yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Fantasy Character, Model, Stripper, Twin
Featured Items: Bikinis, Boots, Corsets, High Heels, Pantyhose, Sex Toys, Work Uniform
Locale: Family Household, Strip Club
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Tricked, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Distant Future
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: Reawakenings Universe
Published: 06/11/15
Updated: 11/29/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06/12/15 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Skin

I don't really know what to say about this story. Its interesting and unique, kind of like a twist on Quantum Leap with an over-arching plot that slowly reveals itself. I know I like it and want to see more - but just a little bit of their society is revealed at a time so that we the readers are always left not knowing whats' really going on. Strange and oddly compelling. i'd like to read more!

Gabe is a selfish, one-night stand college graduate with a very reluctant attitude towards his sisters daughter, and children in general. Can he change his ways, for the better?
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 9271 Words: 4381 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Bride, Girlfriend, Mother, Wife
Featured Items: Bridal Gown, High Heels, Long Nails, Undies
Locale: College, Family Household
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement, Lips Plumped
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Bad to Good, Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive, Loses Identity, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Captive, Mind/Body Posession, Romance
Type of Change: Mind Control, Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Bodily Functions
Series: None
Published: 06/20/15
Updated: 06/20/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstar
Date: 06/20/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I kind of have to agree with JWilliams on this one - Sandra and Brad are pretty damn evil. You kinda did portray them as good guys, but they weren't - and they basically murdered Sandra's brother to get Brad's Sister back - thats pretty effed up. The story was technically well written, but I really disliked the plot and subject matter - and I hate stories of Personality death. Uch. Oh well - It had elements that were interesting, but taken as a whole I was unhappy with it. Is this a first story, or have you written others before? I'd like to read some of them to compare with this one, to see if they all have this grim-dark tone. I think you write well, though - and your writing style is pretty good. I'm giving it a bad vote not because you lack writing skill but because I hate the ending.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comments on the writing style. I'm still unsure what the hell people expect from this site, since the only reason I come here is to get turned on or write harmless stories that turn me on. The dude below is clearly expecting way too much, and I suppose visits TG-Storytime for excellent supreme literature rather than a simple turn on, lol. What's even more perplexing is the fact I wrote a previous story of helpless "forced" transformation, regardless of the main character's wishes or personality, and people here loved it. Seems there's a very divided and hyper critical crowd here on TGS, I'm just here to write and read for fun, not win a Pulitzer Prize and give you happy endings.

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06/28/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thanks for that candid response, Heather. I think a lot of people here on this site like a quick fix of fun story - and some are looking for good literature - and some people on the site can provide both. I also agree that not every story should have a happy ending - Its just my personal opinion that I dislike unhappy endings. I think they have their place - I just was not expecting it, and it colored my opinion of the story. Oh - I went and read your other story in this series - and it was very much in the same vein as this - and for those who read that story, this would seem to be more of what they knew and enjoyed - and when I viewed it, it flowed very naturally from that story into this one. Again, excellent writing.

I just was kinda hoping the bad guys wouldn't win. It happens too much in reality - its nice when the good guys can win in fiction. That being said, if everyone won in fiction all the time, fiction would be pretty damn boring. After reading the original story, I'd probably up my vote to 4.

Oh - and my bad - the story was rated for Identity death and I didn't see it - serves me right for complaining it has ID death in it when it is clearly labelled as such. Perhaps I should read more closely the tags before issuing a review? I like your writing a lot.

A short poem I just wrote to celebrate my eighteenth birthday I now classified as an adult can finally transition without any need to involve mom. yay me!!! (//_^)
Rated: Kid-Friendly 6 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 1507 Words: 44 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Series: None
Published: 06/21/15
Updated: 06/21/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed
Date: 06/21/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good luck on taking charge of your life! It can be a hard step to cut ties for some, and not so hard for others. I wish you well, no matter what may come! Good luck Kawaii. I hope transitioning is everything you wish for!

Author's Response: Thank you very much and it will be hard but i have a good group of friends who support me. (//_^)

What would you do if you had one wish?
Rated: Kid-Friendly 3 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 4021 Words: 5004 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Cultural/Nationality Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Medical Experiment
Series: None
Published: 06/21/15
Updated: 06/21/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/21/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this story - its a little odd, to be sure - but it reminds me in ways of a classic sci-fi story called "The Giving Plague" where a plague was spreading the concept of Altruism. The main character in that story was very different, but i loved the idea of a healing plague rather than a nasty one... Well Done! I am going to rip this off the next time one of my D&D characters gets a wish, just to screw with my DM

what happens when Danny finds an ancient sword underground that changes his life forever.
Rated: Adult 12 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 24684 Words: 19877 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Girlfriend, Teenager
Featured Items: Bikinis, Boots, Breast Forms, Lingerie, Long Nails, School Uniform
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced
Personality: Fights Change, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Type: Comic
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes
Type of Change: Stuck
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 06/22/15
Updated: 08/10/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed
Date: 07/01/15 Title: Chapter 1: morning routine

So far I find the story very hard to read - not because the story is uninteresting, but because it seems like a wall of text. You might find it more aesthetically pleasing to view if you separated each paragraph with a line of empty space, and the same after each character speaks. It makes the story easier to read, and easier to realize who is speaking, and so on. It would improve your writing appeal greatly. I'm going to hold off giving a rating to see how things develop. I take it this is styled after some of those slice of life action-y anime's that are out there?

Author's Response: Sorry. I was writting the orginial in a separate place so i wouldnt have to rewrite the story and lose all the context. so I will definitely fix it. Thank you for the great tips

Dane thought he had life planned out and everything was working out. That is until a car crash tears it all away and leaves him paralyzed, but what can a medical company that specializes in bleeding edge technology offer him that will help him retake his life?
Rated: Explicit 75 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 55373 Words: 65166 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: High School, Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Mechanical Device
Warnings: Death, Politically Incorrect
Series: None
Published: 06/26/15
Updated: 05/18/17
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06/30/15 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Stumped

I'm enjoying this story so far - but i'm a little worried about the 'loses personality' tag. Is her losing her old self going to be a big part of the story - cause I kind of like her the way she is. I'd hate to see her have identity death like some stories do, if you know what I mean. Its almost worse than dying.

Author's Response: Her personality won't die, I'd call it 'fading', 'changing', it's something that happens as a result of a major event, I added the tag mostly because I realized the psychological aspect I was bringing to the story and then thought it was required. I have no plans to have Dane change, but I also don't think it's possible for Dane to remain the same, unchanged by the whole experience.

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07/12/15 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Door Trap

I honestly didn't think it felt rushed - it did feel a bit different than some of the previous chapters - but it felt good different. Maybe it was her feeling of hope that tinged the story with more optimism or how she's adjusting to her new parents. I liked it.

Author's Response: Still got a long time to actually get used to everything, I just needed to give the mc some hope. I don't know why it felt different, which is why I thought it felt rushed, maybe I'll find out later,

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/17/15 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Pulling my Leg

I really loved this chapter - I really find it fascinating how she seems to be suffering from phantom memories as well as phantom limb pain. Is it really that painful? You seem to have done a ton of research on this - so I was wondering. Do you have first hand experience with an amputee? The story's level of detail and the emotions you give dane/tara make me think you've at least talked to a few. Its unreal how good this story is.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter and I will do what I can to answer your other questions.

Phantom limb pain is a different kind of pain. 80% of amputees tend to feel something. Though most aren't quite as bad as Tara. Tara falls into a measly 23% of amputees who feel phantom 'pain'. Pain being the keyword here. Most feel something such as the limb shortening, heaviness, itchiness. It's as if the limb had suddenly regrown and regained sensation. Sadly for Tara, she has an episode of high-intensity pain that at times can be debilitating. These episodes, from my research can last seconds... To years if untreated.

I don't have any experience with amputees or even those who have a small deformation. I only serve them as a checkout operator. No, when I started writing this story, I said "If I pick an issue and run with it. Then I want to do it RIGHT". There are far too many I could offend and honestly it's just easier to put myself in Tara's shoes. Do the research, have the knowledge and then apply it to emotions. "How would I act if I had a disability and someone judged me on that disability alone?" I would try to either hide the disability so no-one can notice and judge me. If someone found out, then I would try my best to show them that just because I'm disabled doesn't mean I can't do anything you can do.

Thanks a lot for the review and I hope that answered your questions.

A, sadly, true story of myself and my thoughts recently
Rated: Adult 8 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 1658 Words: 1501 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: None
Series: None
Published: 07/12/15
Updated: 07/12/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/12/15 Title: Chapter 1: Conviction

Thank you for writing this, Person42 - it must have been really, really hard to put on paper. I've felt very close to how you feel in the past, and I'm glad you made the choice to live. It's so hard trying to live without worry about what other people think - we're hard-wired to be pack animals as humans - and its so hard to pick life when suicide is so damn easy. Thank you. You have people that care about you - some you may not even know about. You deserve to be loved. You are a person...

Author's Response: Thank you. You may or may not know how much it means to me you went through the little trouble of saying that, but it helps.

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/14/15 Title: Chapter 1: Conviction

Would it be weird to say I still have days that make ending it all seem like a viable option? I know its the wrong idea for me - I have so much I want to do - but sometimes the weight of all the stress on me, and the problems I'm dealing with seem so damn big its like letting it all go would just bring relief - not an end.

In the end, I came to realize that I was wrong - all it would do is bring an end - and not a good one. The problem is, that it seems so damn seductive... just one step too far, just one pill too many, and all your worries are over. Like a rest at the end of a long trip, or the way pain goes away when a wound is finally healed.

It's too easy - and usually what's easy, isn't worth getting. I decided to try the hard road - and so far I haven't been disappointed - but the siren call of my dark thoughts brings me back and back again, and I keep having to decide to choose life instead of annihilation. I wonder sometimes if I can keep making that decision, or if one day I'll make the wrong decision.

Person42, I really felt deeply about what you wrote - and although I did write what I said to cheer you up, I also said it to let you know I think I know how you feel - and also to know you're not alone in suffering. I'll bet a lot of us here have been where you and I are or were. Things get better (even if they don't seem like they will) - and nothing stays the same forever.

If you want to talk or converse via email, feel free to write me. kathryn@nexicom.net

Author's Response: I'm glad my words could resonate so deeply with you. I might just send you an email one of these days to talk, but there's no guarantee since I'm a rather shy person. I do know what you mean when you say that there are times where ending it seems like a better idea than usual, and I would guess that you do know how I feel, and it's comforting to know I'm not alone.

With the death of his artist grandmother, Andrew receives her final painting. Then mysterious things begin to happen, forcing him to delve into his family history as well as her death. All while he's forced to deal with his life changing forever!
Rated: Adult 84 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 159137 Words: 53852 Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Locale: College, Family Household
Motivation for Change: Forced, Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 07/31/15
Updated: 11/16/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/06/15 Title: Chapter 6: Gran's End

I love the cliffhanger ending to this chapter! This is a really intriguing story - and I like it a lot. I'm looking forward to seeing more when you're ready.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I'm approaching it like a mystery/thriller so I'm glad to hear that it's keeping you in suspense. Thanks.

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed
Date: 09/02/15 Title: Chapter 13: Traffic Stop

I really enjoy this story! I like how its developing slowly, the visions, and the mysterious plot. SELKIES! Its all good! I can't wait to see more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I can't resist a mystery with a slow build, so I'm glad you're enjoying it. Plenty more to come too.


What would you do, if you had no clue what was going on, but had to figure it all out on your own?
Rated: Kid-Friendly 3 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 17155 Words: 16001 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Trans
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Alien, Child, Daughter, Twin
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Forced, Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Horror
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 08/11/15
Updated: 10/31/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstar
Date: 09/17/15 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: School

I don't believe I really enjoyed this story Natasa - not because of the story itself, but because of the writing style you used. It did seem childish, which to a point was good for the portrayal of the characters - but the main character seemed rather too immature for his supposed age, and your stilted manner of writing was not easy-flowing and relaxing to read. Is English your first language? It was grammatically correct in most cases, but didn't sound like the way real people speak to other people. I think the story has some promise, but I found the writing style uncomfortable to read.

Author's Response: If you didn't know, you will know now, I am not good at grammar. I went to a special education school. I try my best when it comes to writing. It would be nice if I had someone help me write, but I don't have anyone. Thanks for the comment. It does suck that you gave me a bad rating though, but I don't care. at least I got someone.

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed
Date: 09/18/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Babysitting

I'd love to help with your grammar, Natasa - I didn't mean to upset you as much as give an honest review. I think your writing could improve drastically with a few simple changes, and I'd be very willing to help you out with it if you're interested. I trained for a while as an english teacher (I didn't finish my degree) - so maybe I can give some pointers?

Author's Response: I would love that. I would love to have good stories where people can enjoy and understanding.

A wealthy man finds himself lost in the dark town of Barton, but when he stops to ask directions he finds himself going down a spiral stair that changes him into a little girl. Now he really is in trouble as the mad denizens of Barton close in to trap him there forever.
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 5442 Words: 10611 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Child
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse, Forced, In Hiding, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive, Loses Identity, Made Dumber
Story Theme: Horror
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change, Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 08/14/15
Updated: 08/14/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/14/15 Title: Chapter 1: Spiral Stair

Holy cow, that was as creepy as hell! It reminds me of some of those old Alfred Hitchcock shockers, or Rod Serling's Twilight Zone with the 'nasty endings' - truly gripping and effective... Nice!

Many of my wants were fulfilled by a strange chalice found within the Maze, but many more problems arise due to the power it grants and the world it opens.
Rated: Explicit 287 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 210150 Words: 161202 Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Forced
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Torture
Series: None
Published: 08/22/15
Updated: 09/18/19
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/22/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Verona's Chalice

This was pretty cool! I take it its set in an alternate earth, where the cities and continents are different and magic exists? I'm really liking Blake's character, and I can't wait to see more!

Author's Response: Slightly. Pangea is really the main difference, being that it's a large continent located between the Americas and Europe. It's not far from the East coast of North America. As for magic, I have a different ambition for it. It's probably going to be similar to Castaways. As for Blake, let's see how she improves as we go along.

It's spring break and Fran is looking forward to spending his entire day relaxing and playing games. Unfortunately his sister thinks Fran spend the day at school, specifically her school; a school exclusively for witches.
Rated: Explicit 18 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 17697 Words: 13470 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Twin
Featured Items: Bikinis, Lingerie, School Uniform, Undies
Locale: Girl's School
Motivation for Change: Forced
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Mythical Setting, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: A Day and A Night
Published: 08/23/15
Updated: 08/23/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/23/15 Title: Chapter 1: A rude awakening

Uh-oh... Is Fran going to be a better witch BY ACCIDENT than her sister??? I'd bet real money that's the case... I can't wait to see more!

Author's Response: Probably not a good idea bettering real money against the author :p I'm still impressed you managed to get a review in before I had finished uploading the other two chapters.

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed
Date: 08/24/15 Title: Chapter 3: Extra Credit

Ha! I'd have lost that bet if I'd put real money up! I really enjoyed this short tale - it was fun. Thanks!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it :)

In the far reaches of space, a mysterious alien race captures a crew of human smugglers. One man is chosen to be the subject of a dramatic transformation, a process they call Uplifting, but will he embrace their gift or run from it?
Rated: Explicit 86 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 146715 Words: 46150 Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/08/15 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Long Live The Queen

I loved the story, and I loved the ending! This was really, really good and a very interesting story. I couldn't wait to read each chapter as you posted it - top notch!

Author's Response: Thank you! It's been great having you read along from the first review.

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08/26/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Birth of Serpents

This was really cool! I can't wait to see more! I also loved how you detailed how each crewmember met his fate (if that is what they were doing) and gave a bit about them - it made them seem more there.

Author's Response: Thanks, there's definitely more in the pipeline, so I hope I can live up to your expectations. And don't worry about the crewmembers, they'll be back... in one form or another.

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed
Date: 09/08/15 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Touch-A, Touch-A, Touch Me

Hey Devo, I just thought that I'd tell you I love the mental description of our heroines resisting the effects of mental change - It was really well written, and it seemed like it would be something a real person would think and do. I thought it was a great chapter, and showed off how well you know the character and your craft.

Author's Response: Thanks! I've tried to get the voice down as much as possible, so it's great to see that it paid off! I'll try to keep up with the high praise.

Nate joins a yoga class to put an end to his friend's incessant nagging. Will it end up getting him in shape?
Rated: Adult 14 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 102502 Words: 9522 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Romance, Sports
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 08/30/15
Updated: 09/05/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/03/15 Title: Chapter 5: Thursday

Hi, Reticulus? I like your story, but I detected what I think is a continuity error... In chapter 1, which is 4 days ago, our hero lived with his parents - but in this chapter, he's been living with James for months... So does James live with his parents too, or is this worth a no-prize? Otherwise, I love the story!

Couples have a unique way of speaking to each other when they’re alone in bed. It’s private, it’s intimate, and it involves a level of vulnerability you won’t find anywhere else. That’s what makes it both exciting and scary as hell. And as this short story illustrates, it’s the sort of thing that can easily get out of hand. Whether the way things turn out is good or bad, of course, is entirely up to you.
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 5565 Words: 6916 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Wife
Featured Items: Breast Forms
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Dared into It
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Series: None
Published: 08/31/15
Updated: 08/31/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08/31/15 Title: Chapter 1: Pillow Talk

I enjoyed this story - it was short, though - but as long as it really needed to be. I think it was a fun read.

In the distant future the mythological races are returning. But they aren't exactly what we would have expected. How far would you go to help one of them if you didn't have any other choice?
Rated: Explicit 97 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 218838 Words: 55422 Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/27/15 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hi fantasygirl! I really, really like this story so far - its got a ton of potential, and I really like the mythos you're building up with the elves, dwarves and humans - its pretty cool! I can't wait to see where you're going with this - it sounds exciting!

Author's Response: Thanks. But I'll be honest there's a lot that's going to happen before the Dwarves really make a showing.

An unstable and divided world is thrown into the abyss by those who welcome the unthinkable. A battered but resurgant humanity struggles to build a better future and one woman will fight those who seek to repeat the mistakes of the past.
Rated: Deviant 14 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 4957 Words: 25951 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Locale: Labratory
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Fights Change, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Distant Future, Horror, Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Non-Consentual Sex, Politically Incorrect, Torture
Series: None
Published: 09/27/15
Updated: 10/21/15
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/27/15 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Over The Edge

I love your attention to the politics in this story! It reads like some of David Webers stuff with Honor Harrington - the Peeps, Solarians and Manticorans - I love it. I'm looking forward to seeing more!

Author's Response: Thank you, very much.

Tyler Hillman flees from Earth after an information brokering deal goes sour. His contact at Ringed Amusements Company has promised him a place to hide, a disguise, and a new job.
Rated: Explicit 110 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 310921 Words: 294163 Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/28/15 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I really enjoy this story, Kat - its awesome! I can't wait to see more. I like the idea of a wild west frontier in our own solar system - kinda reminds me of Firefly

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