Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Alien, Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Bikinis
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Fights Change, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Type: Comic
Story Theme: Fan Fiction, Historical Time Period
Type of Change: Age Regression, Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change, Mechanical Device
Series: Angel Season One, Angel Season Two
Date: 06/01/13 Title: Chapter 4: Angel S:1E:3 Pilot Part III “Icarus”
Like a few others that commented, I usually just read. For this story, I had to create an account. Fantastic opening with a some homage to the Superman Mytho, but remaining it's own work. I hope you keep it as such. I really liked how Michael uses his brain instead of raw power to save the day. Also your character's interactions are very real and emotional. Great work.
Date: 06/01/13 Title: Chapter 8: Angel S:1E:7 “Event Horizon”
The coming out scene in this episode was very emotional. Superb job capturing what it's like to want to tell someone close to you, that someone else exists inside, but can't quite work up the courage. You nailed it comparing it to standing on the edge wanting to cross over into the unknown, but afraid you will never be able to return. The fear of acceptance or rejection sometimes keeps us from coming out. This scene had me in tears.
Date: 06/01/13 Title: Chapter 9: Angel S:1E:8 “It’s the End of the World as We Know It”
Another spectacular Episode. Spoiler Alert****
Did not see this coming. Fills me with rage and hatred towards that scum doing what he did to Liz and Ashley. I genuinely wish for his rapid demise.
Date: 06/03/13 Title: Chapter 10: Angel S:1.5 E:9 “Needle in a Haystack”
I love Michael/Kaaren. Way to go teaching that slim ball a lesson or two about abusing women. I also liked seeing Mike again. It was a pretty nice guy back in Anguish. Would like to see a little more of him...Got a feeling we will.
Date: 07/21/13 Title: Chapter 2: Angel Season One Episode 1 "Pilot Part 1 Failure" (Revised Alternate Opening)
Well I can't say I agree with you about the original opening. It had me hooked from the start and I couldn't stop reading your story until I hit the last sentence. The revised alternate opening, is even more amazing. An extremely well told thriller that locked me to the seat of my chair and had my crying like a little girl even though I knew Michael wasn't going to die. Mega kudos on this. Can't wait to see how you revise the rest of the story. Let me know when it's published, I'm buying several copies.