ubougie
I generally like shorter more explicit stories, with a slow tantalizing transformation.
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A young man finds himself changing into a perfect female lover for his friend.
Rated: Adult 10 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 16946 Words: 9758 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Fights Change, Made Dumber
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Hypnosis, Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: Mine
Published: 08/10/17
Updated: 08/10/17
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/16/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 2

Hey! Always glad to see a story by you on this site, I know I will thoroughly enjoy it. I usually drop off at a certain point because you can go a bit cartoony with how extreme you'll push things, but this story simmered all the way to the end, so I can say, for me, one of my all time favorite stories. I can learn a lot from you. Thanks, and I look forward to more stuff by you!

Author's Response: I think "cartoony" is a new one for me. Can you explain that one a little, please?

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 08/18/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 2

Hmmm, explaining "cartoony", that's a tough one. I admit I used the word on a whim. I guess it is just a difference in fetish and writing style. Your characters can be brash (like Layers when the protagonist meets the respondents from craigslist), and whatever the opposite of sheepish is (when your characters lose to their desires, they can become very aggressive / take charge). In this story, Derek throughout the transformation is timid in a way I like a lot, with the libido taking him in directions his thinking mind wouldn't dare.

Also, your transformations can go to extremes, but fortunately for my appreciation of your stories, you write excellent gradual descriptions that I love up until a certain threshold (that threshold being when they're fully female). But then you'll do something further, like give them 8 nipples, or turn them into an amazon, or a bimbo (beyond just "kinda dumb" but really far out there). That's where our tastes diverge, and the rest of the story, though I do read it, is no longer quite as captivating.

Honestly I regret pointing out anything wrong with your stories. Firstly, because it is all subjective. There's nothing about your writing that is objectively wrong like formatting or spelling mistakes. We just have divergent tastes in some respects, and I really believe authors shouldn't write differently than what they want to write about just to cater to their audience, because 9 times out of 10 that's when things fall apart. I can really tell though that you have a strong muse that pulls you in a specific direction and that feedback probably doesn't impact your stories much.

My original point, and what I meant to be the emphasis, was how I liked this story from start to end. The fact that I wish it continued is a good sign of that, but it might have been a great place to end it, since you hit all the main objectives of a TG transformation story. I see you mentioned you would have gone in a more extreme bimbo direction with this story, and I think in fact I would have liked it less if that was the case.

This story reminded me a bit of another story I liked, Girl Unraveled, by JacksorBetter, about a "boy" who's actually a girl but made to look like a boy, who's puberty was suppressed, but unravels (to use the word in the title) throughout the story. It isn't the story itself that is similar, but rather the elements, constructs and devices (frankly I just used three words that I barely understand in hopes that one of them captures what I'm trying to say).

One little thing you do in the story that I really liked is the static that plays in Derek's mind whenever there's some kind of clash between old ways of thinking and new ways of thinking. Excellent touch. I also like when memories of innocent words once said replay in the mind in a more naughty context to elevate the sensuality of the moment.

Listen, if you want me to sing your praises, I can go on for a long time. Every paragraph in the story has something quite great to offer. You know how to write great stories with really sexy descriptions, and so I should get a little better myself before I start handing out advice. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: You shouldn't regret writing a criticism! I appreciate it. Although, like you've said, a lot of it is just subjective. That's something I've had to learn while writing. That I can't please everyone and I should just write what works for me at the moment because there will be some people out there that really like it. Or that like bits and pieces. I'll see if I can check out the story you've mentioned but I'm sad to say I don't make time to read TF or TG stories as much as I should. Already hard enough to find time to write. I very much appreciate that you went above and beyond to explain what you meant but I hope you didn't take my question as any kind of attack. I've kinda sorta learned to grow a thicker skin regarding comments and reviews. I'm just glad some parts of the story work for you. Curiously, what kind of TG story is your ideal?

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 08/22/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 2

Thanks. Sometimes I have to walk on eggshells when talking with authors but it is a relief that is not the case with you. As for my ideal, it is pretty illusive, a moving target. I've gotten in the habit of writing what I like, but unless it stays still for a couple of months, it doesn't get published. I happen to currently be in a more stable period, I am fleshing out a story.

I can't really say what I like about TG. First and foremost, it doesn't repel me, so that's allowed me to consider its strengths and weaknesses and become in some respects a member of the community. Moreover, I like that it is a great vehicle to accentuate femininity. When the starting point is something without any femininity and you can push it as far as you want, almost every part of what it is to be female becomes this big revelation, and allows the author to go deeply into detail about it. I'm generalizing here, but more generic erotic literature takes it for granted and can have a bit more crassness that shows that an (uncultured) man was writing the story, with descriptions like "I pulled her hair and nutted on her tits".

I think a lot more people love M2F stories, but I've really liked some F2M stories as well. Despite the direction of the transformation, you can still hit all the same notes, only what's interesting is not what is gained but what is lost (or the reverse, depending on how you choose to look at it).

I also like a story that will have a new take on things, especially after reading hundreds of versions of essentially the same thing. Your stories do that, I can see your voice very clearly in all of your stories, and it is definitely not like anything else on this site. I dislike stories that dance around sex, essentially a "perpetual tease", but rather prefer when they aren't afraid to get into the subject, with high quality descriptions, both physically and mentally.

My current narrative, though as I said it can change a lot with the passage of time is a story in three parts. Part one is sort of a reverse-male puberty that ends with a scrawny shorter body. Things are really tough for the protagonist at this point but I try not to harp too heavily on themes of despair. Part two involves coping, and finding ways to enjoy (at this point) herself, as well as some innocent not quite sexual but just kinda nice passive rubbing of the altering crotch while laying on the couch and watching tv. She rediscovers her sexuality in a way here, realizing that female sexuality is not just some inverted male sexuality, but that there's an entirely different set of parameters, like a person who sustained a big spinal injury learning how to walk again. She learns to not guide her fantasies, but let them take the path they want to take. Part three (the by far longest part) involves the confession of her friend, who's been with her for much of this, and not so long ago realized, shit, I like her now. The confession is obviously very awkward, but they do come out of it ok. Physically here, she's day-by-day rounding out into a true female shape. Mentally, she's discovered, the idea that her friend could feel that way about her is kinda cool. She tests the limits of it, flirting as a kind of teasing, not really to move anything forward, realizing how hilariously easy he is. Her body, which in an earlier phase had great fascination for her that got her off like nothing, is seeming routine at this point, and she asks herself questions like, isn't it weird that so much of attraction rides on some loose fat that grows from our chests? She also fantasizes about her body, being a heterosexual female, receiving in some vague way sex as opposed to giving it, somehow avoiding altogether the thought that a guy would likely be involved, and revels in it. The story from this point is just a very slow progression of her giving concessions to her new sexuality, not like an overnight "I like men now!", but more of a looking back and wondering, how did we even get to this point? The overall vibe between her and the friend is pretty cute, along the lines of a "friends become lovers" story, but when she is alone with herself, she is pretty insatiable, getting corrupted ever more by the fantasies always rolling through her head. At the end (which I haven't fully fleshed out yet), the two worlds collide, and her fantasies soften with the reality of love while, at the same time, her friendship becomes pretty focused on continuous sex and amazing orgasms.

One thing I've figured about what I like and what I don't, is that it is a staged process. I can't just jump in and imagine a guy who is now a girl and really enjoy that, even if I had just read a similar story the day before. I have to really carry the whole story through to collect the bits together, and build the reality of it before the pivotal part of the story. It is similar to when you come in on people watching a movie at the half way point. Even when you get to the end of the movie, you still feel pretty disconnected from it, but people who have been watching it from the beginning are fully invested.

Anyway, hopefully I answered your question. I appreciate you asking me these questions, it allows me to give it some thought, and flesh out my thoughts a bit more. It can only help my writing, and though I don't post often, I do look forward to when something I write feels like something I'd like to post and share with the community (as you've read from what I wrote above, I've currently got something in the works).

All the best.

He was you're average guy until he was hit by a bus. Now he's adapting to a new life.
Rated: Adult 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 20498 Words: 5021 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Cheerleader, Girlfriend
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Series: None
Published: 09/01/17
Updated: 09/27/17
Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 09/03/17 Title: Chapter 1: The Day It All Changed

To me this is like reading the premise of a story. Not very rewarding if this is all there is, but to repeat what others have said, tack on some new chapters to this decent premise and we may just have a story here.

Sharing a cruise ship cabin with someone from the opposite sex that you don't know, is not supposed to happen. This ship has a strong moral ethic and will make sure that this does not happen.

Make sure that you listen to the rules.
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 9960 Words: 3128 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: Vacation Destination
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Romance
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 10/18/17
Updated: 10/18/17
Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 10/18/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Regarding the picture you were going to post, I imagine it would have made the story rejected by the moderator. In general, nudity and explicit sex acts are not allowed. I've seen some borderline images slip through, but, well I don't know your image, but from your description you probably would have had to remove it anyway.

Ash is a quiet boy, more interested in books than people. Then an alien accident wrecks his gender lobe. So it goes.
Ash, now Aisling, tries a new school, and a new beginning, and gets pulled into the beautiful and hardcore world of technical theater.
Rated: Explicit 183 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 182964 Words: 127345 Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Featured Items: Bikinis, Boots, Corsets, High Heels, Lingerie, Pantyhose, Sex Toys, Undies
Locale: High School, Hospital or Clinic
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Fights Change, Good to Bad
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Coming of Age
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Bodily Functions
Series: TG Techie - Series
Published: 11/22/17
Updated: 11/03/20
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/31/17 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Skirt

Nice.

Sometimes, the best way to learn about yourself, is to be away from yourself.
Rated: Explicit 35 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 59285 Words: 67774 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Featured Items: Bikinis, Lingerie, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Curse, Unknown
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Everyday Living, Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Body Swap, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 11/26/17
Updated: 09/08/18
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/10/17 Title: Chapter 2: Day 2: Girl Meets World

I feel there has been a lull of good stories (IMO) for several months now on all the story sites I visit. I was very happy to read your story, it is a great one so far. Five stars.

Bianca's just another PhD candidate looking to fulfill her doctoral thesis. What's it on? p**** transplants of course. But she's the patient. And there's no telling how long she'll remain objective or female.
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 48196 Words: 6971 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Boyfriend
Locale: College
Body Modification: Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Hormonal, Primarily Female to Male, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 12/15/17
Updated: 07/08/20
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/17/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I see potential, good premise, keep it up.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 09/03/18 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Welcome back!

Author's Response: Thanks! Didn't think anyone would notice this quickly!

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/23/19 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Heh, why am I the only one reviewing this story? :) Anyway, don't worry about that, the read count speaks for itself, there's plenty of people checking in, they're just quiet. I just happen to be one of the rare ones who comments on stories a lot.
So this is an interesting story. I keep imagining where this story might go, that's part of the fun. All the best in writing it, look forward to the next update.

Author's Response: Thank you.

The story of how a young man goes from a super star to a sweet, submissive, trophy wife.
Rated: Explicit 10 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 49164 Words: 3563 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 02/08/18 Title: Chapter 1: The Superstar

Nice premise, keep it up!

Kirsten “Xander” Harris has lost a big bet, and would swear that his life was at an all-time low. His mom had left him when he was a baby, so he never grew up knowing what a parent did. His girlfriend also had just left him. She wanted something more fulfilling and Xander always seemed too afraid to take things to the next level, not knowing if he had what it took to be a father.

But to fill his part of his bet, at his roommate's insistence and after donning wig and women's clothing, Kirsten was going to have to at least pretend to know how to be a female. And maybe unwittingly find out this new girl might have exactly what it takes to be a mother.
Rated: Explicit 23 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 46538 Words: 54598 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Featured Items: Breast Forms, Gaff
Motivation for Change: Accident, Lost a Bet, Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Pregnancy
Type of Change: Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 04/22/18
Updated: 06/28/19
Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 02/08/19 Title: Chapter 1: Bet

Wait, what?! A new release by the one and only?
*bookmarks*
I'm going to save this for later, when I have a moment to really savour it...

Author's Response: Should I tease you? I actually have a ton of chapters... or at least chapter content already written. It's editting it all down that's been the real pain in the a**. There should be a gradual trickle of releases in the near future.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/10/19 Title: Chapter 3: Raise

Then keep 'em coming. Your muse and I are best friends.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/27/19 Title: Chapter 4: Reproduce

Nice. Keep it up!

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/15/19 Title: Chapter 5: Mother

Great chapter once again!

Author's Response: The feedback is appreciated, as always. After some of the earlier comments, I had really started to stress out on both the release of this chapted as well as the chapter after this one.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 03/15/19 Title: Chapter 1: Bet

Originally, this was not my top pick when you said you were writing three stories (it was my middle pick, and 666XX was my top pick), but it is the spiritual sequel to Girl Unraveled, which I loved, so that's a good start.
I have written probably 1000 drafts of stories, but haven't stuck to one until completion for well over a year. I mean I write for my own amusement first and foremost, so I'll only finish a story if I feel the reward in doing so. But you opened up my mind to that unique angle, of taking someone who is biologically proximate to a girl, but fully convinced they are, or at least expect of themselves to be, a normal boy, but then some triggering event kind of, to borrow a word, unravels it all. It is all the elements of a TG story, but removing the TG part. It is really a unique take I enjoy.
Also, I can't help loving when a character precipitates toward the mental part of their transformation primarily by overwhelming and unrelenting pleasure.
Finally, that kind of "am I transforming? nah." moment you have in a lot of your stories is also pretty great.
In all, I'd summarize it with one word: Tantalize. v. 1. To tease. 2. To torment.

Author's Response: You get me. :)

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/21/19 Title: Chapter 6: Fill

So perfect. What you do with story-telling, very few can do. The mental transition between sexes is not easy to do. Almost every author gets impatient at some point in the story and jumps the shark. Either that, or gets pulled into the minutiae. You keep it interesting, all while taking surface-level tiny steps to accomplish deep-level giant things. So yes, another deserved 5 stars. Your every chapter is worth the wait. Though I wish I didn't have to wait so long between chapters. :P

Author's Response: I think it is really good to get reviews of encouragement every so often. I've been struggling with some of the story content over the last month and a half and it really helps. A quick note on content: I actually have a ton written. But there is a difference between words written and 'good' words. For those of you who can write everything in one go and be done, I envy you. The last two chapters of GF, for example, have probably been through 15 or more revisions. So if it takes a little while extra, I apologize. I'm just trying to make sure I give you guys something decent to read.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 04/22/19 Title: Chapter 1: Bet

It's fine. I used to write all in one go. Then I started planning, but that resulted ironically in really long stories that went off course. Then after that, I started outlining all my stories, and I've gotten really good at it. But I never publish anymore, so it is attention to detail for an audience of me, defeating the effort. So, you are better than me, because you can actually get your work to a publishable state. I've published, but things that I didn't really think deserved to be (though I have fans thankfully who call me their favorite. But I'm just not able to write with that methodology anymore, it is too unstructured).
By the time you publish, can you still see the appeal of your stories? For me, what I write one day as a breakthrough concept will already sound lame the following day. I get tired of concepts very easily. And I've come up with a lot of them.
As a reader, I need stuff to be good. Really, really good. My standards are unreasonably high. So if waiting longer means you can get me something better, I'll be patient. I prefer waiting a long time for something I love than getting it sooner but being disappointed. Just so long as waiting a long time doesn't become an indefinite hiatus.
As always, all the best.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/06/19 Title: Chapter 7: Class

Another 5 stars in appreciation for your great work. Cheech joke was funny. Nipple line was hot.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 06/20/19 Title: Chapter 1: Bet

I want you to dream with me. Dream of a world where the next chapter is conceived of, drafted, written up and published. Dream of a world where I read it, and I'm like "Oh my fuck whaaaat?"
It is nice to dream. In the meantime I'll keep hitting refresh on this story in anticipation.
All the best.

Author's Response: There was a chapter. That chapter was titled "Bust". It was suppose to be the chapter now called "Class," and also expanded to become an additional chapter called "Grow." In short, that chapter has been kicking my butt for at least a month now. (The remaining chapters after "Bust" are currently titled "Love," "Adopt" and the last chapter "Transition".)

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 06/20/19 Title: Chapter 1: Bet

If there's anyone who sympathizes with writing kicking your ass, it's me. I just wanted to give a gentle nudge, either in case it was the external motivation that you needed to resume writing the story, or if not, to point out that you have at least one reader who is here, hitting refresh on your story, as I am generally unsatisfied with the stories posted on the site lately. Anyway, I know there is a subtle difference between a helpful nudge and being an annoying reminder that you haven't written anything, so think of me more as the former. I strongly believe in the reader being entirely at the mercy of the writer, that readers ultimately have no right to hold any expectation over the writer, so *deep bow* proceed as you wish, I will respect it no matter what. My sympathies for your writer's block.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/28/19 Title: Chapter 9: Bust

You did it! Two chapters! I've been blessed.

Lo! From ancient text and forbidden prophecy let it be as it is written, that the fearsome Antichrist will be born... as a woman? It's a truth seldom known beyond angels and demons but to Vex'Trillium Prix, the little devil tasked with finding, raising and grooming the next Antichrist it has been her sole purpose since she was made. But those same prophecies lead her to the house of a young boy. Oh well. The prophecies demand a sexy female destroyer. Let it be so!
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 4027 Words: 4623 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo
Featured Items: Long Nails
Locale: Family Household
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement, Lips Plumped, Permanent Hair/Skin/Nail Change
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change, Good to Bad
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Mythical Setting, Pregnancy
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Politically Incorrect
Series: None
Published: 04/22/18
Updated: 04/22/18
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/23/18 Title: Chapter 1: In the Beginning...

Welcome back! One of my favorite authors, if not my very favorite!
You asked, so here we go:
666XX > Girl Filled > The Deviance
I love the corruption angle of 666XX, which you do very well. And the descriptions were nice.
Girl Filled feels like it could be the most like Girl Unraveled, which I adored.
The Deviance is maybe at the bottom because it is more saying rather than showing at this point, but it seems to boil down to "husband becomes a mother". Could still be good, but no spark of excitement for this story yet.
666XX does run the risk that I will end up not caring for it if too soon the story becomes "boy becomes bad devil girl who is an active participant in her changes". I love that he is currently oblivious (other than a vague sense that sin seems to be doing something) and would love if the demons continue to also be thrown for a loop as all expectations continue to be foiled. Essentially it would continue the kind of sexy comedy of this first chapter, as opposed to a dark "and evil won, and that's all there is to that". But if you had something already in mind for where to point that story, by all means. Anything you write I'll consume with joy!
I'll only comment here, but I'll star your other stories as well. All the best!

Author's Response: The Deviance is a direct sequel to the Changing (same characters). You are correct in that Girl Filled is a spiritual successor to GU (but no story crossover here). 666 is new, original content and as such is a pain in the a** to write (but still fun). Appreciate the feedback but I agree that the set up chapters are sort of boring (that might be said of all my set up chapters, but you have to start somewhere).

When Mike stumbles upon a hot tg story, he think it's just a piece of fiction. But when the story starts to affect both him and his sister Lara, they have to find a way to resist the changes they go through before it's too late... unless it's too late already?
Rated: Explicit 19 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 67461 Words: 11204 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/09/18 Title: Chapter 1: Mind what you read

So far so good, looking forward to the net chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for the five stars! I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter even more. It will up in a couple of days. Thank you again for your support!

Ten new high school graduates are participants in a brand new program designed to place them in their ideal lives, but how much will the program change them along the way?
Rated: Adult 12 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 27731 Words: 9329 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Boyfriend, Girlfriend, Jock
Locale: High School, Hospital or Clinic, Labratory
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Medical Experiment
Series: None
Published: 05/31/18
Updated: 06/18/19
Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 07/05/18 Title: Chapter 4: Take Two

Interesting, I'm curious for the next chapter.

Dave and Serena have been together for quite some time now. They have anything they could desire to be happy.
However Serena can't be satisfied, and it doesn't matter how hard she tries: she's too shy, and every day is a challenge for her.
Dave loves her very much, and he may have found a solution.
Rated: Explicit 36 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 162869 Words: 38222 Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/12/19 Title: Chapter 6: 6 - Order Me To Do It

I wanted to give a special mention 5 star rating for how you subtly are training his mind even as they're consciously trying to train hers. I mean maybe the story will go in a different direction, I'm still a bit early in the story, but it seems like that's where things are headed, and I really like it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, that was exactly what I was trying to do there!! :D

A middle-aged businessman stuck in a tortuously boring meeting finds a way out... right into the body of a high-school student with a burden all her own.
Rated: Explicit 94 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 151053 Words: 81296 Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Pregnancy
Type of Change: Age Regression, Body Swap, Stuck
Warnings: Bodily Functions
Series: None
Published: 06/28/18
Updated: 11/19/18
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/28/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Begging For a Change

Excellent descriptions. High praise!

Author's Response: it's always all about the details, right? i just hope i don't get too bogged down in them... xo, Charlotte

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 06/28/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Begging For a Change

(Looks at author name.) Oh, yeah, that makes sense. Look forward to more!

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/12/18 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Face in the Mirror

You are a great tease in your writing, which is awesome. It is like the character puts their toe into the corruptive nature of femininity, enough to pique my interest, but then pulls it back, which affords you as a writer a lot lengthier sexy descriptions than most authors which only have just one moment in their stories where the really sexy bits are. I am always trying to learn how to write that way myself, but you are leagues ahead of me. As always, high praise, 5 stars.

Author's Response: well i don't know if any of your praise is true but thank you all the same. xo, Charlotte

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/25/18 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: In Over Her Head

Great chapter

Author's Response: thank you! xo, charlotte

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/29/18 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Mind ~ Body Problem

Amazing chapter, probably the best in the story. Orientation flip is a big draw for me, and damn you know how to write. I honestly learned a lot about how to write just by reading this chapter. I've taken many notes. Worthy of another 5 stars.

Author's Response: you're too kind, ubougie. i'm happy you not only enjoyed this but 'took notes'. hope things retain your interest moving forward. xo, charlotte

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/13/18 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: In or Out

What a talented author you are. You made what is essentially three people sitting at a table talking not boring. I would normally skip over such a chapter, but, well, aside from the fact there isn't another chapter yet, you've throw in some mental nuggets in there as well as some witty banter. Well played.
You have somehow avoided having this story go off the rails, despite playing so much along the edge. Yup, talented author indeed.

Author's Response: thank you, ubougie!! and here i was thinking this was the 'action-packed' chapter. three people is a lot for me. you do remember all of the 'just Greg' chapters, no? i'm glad my 'witty' banter passes the test. these characters are fun to write for. and hey, i'll drive this thing off the rails when i'm good and ready. xo, charlotte

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/06/18 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: The Boyfriend

Greg's interactions with guys as Kennedy are so good.

Author's Response: ty, ubougie! more to come... xo, charlotte

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 11/20/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Begging For a Change

Thank you for a great story. And really beyond just the story, your writing ability itself is extremely good, and transcends this story. So looking forward to whatever future story you may write!

Author's Response: you are so welcome, ubougie! xo, charlotte

When given pills to help with his aggression, a man finds himself changing more than his attitude.
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 11090 Words: 8687 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: Office
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime, Forced
Personality: Bad to Good
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 07/12/18
Updated: 07/12/18
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/13/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Another great story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've been worrying a little that the very ending maybe was a little too different so I'm glad it doesn't seem to break the story.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 07/13/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I tend to focus more on the middle of the story. Which you did very well. I tend to lose interest after the character snaps and just accepts it wholeheartedly. But you have to finish the story at some point, so it makes sense for the story to end in such a conclusive way. I still can't describe universally what I like in a tg story, but the best I can say is, incremental steps that each seem believable (which you had going in your story for a long time which is what made it good). In my own (unpublished) writing I have been exploring a lot how orientation can be manipulated incrementally, so that a reader who suspends disbelief can be made to believe it doesn't take much to "convince" someone, through a series of story telling devices, they actually like the other sex. It is a challenge to not trip on something that ruins the believability, but nonetheless a fun challenge to tackle.

Author's Response: That's the trick of it for me, I think: finding the balance between making the change in desires and orientation realistic without slowing the story down needlessly and turning off the reader. I err waaaay on the side of the reader and kinda help along the character (or force the desire in some cases) but I think it'd be possible in a longer format. A fun challenge but I don't know if it's one I can personally tackle any time soon since it'd be a time sink. Challenging and fun, though. I like trying to get into my character's heads and finding the path to flipping them realistically would be fun. I hope you decide to post your own stuff some time! Definitely good luck with it!

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 07/13/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thanks! I am right there with you though. Siding with the reader is the way to go. I personally am not interested in going off on a million tangents just because I have a story to tell (though I have been guilty of that with at least one story, and I like to think I've learned my lesson). Instead I want to write stories that I also want to read. Often times, you're right (at least I think you'd agree with this): if you can, in the same amount of words, write three stories instead of one but where the plot is more in the background than "the point", then in the aggregate you have probably written a larger amount of sexy paragraphs. If someone reads a whole story but keeps coming back to one glorious paragraph, I want to learn more from that paragraph, and make as big a portion of my writing as possible be sexy like that. But except for in a specific writing style that jumps right into the action (Talking Dirty by Sir Lance Thrustalot and My Ultimate Change Fantasy by Miss Terri, both on fictionmania) a certain amount of story building can create context that leads to more effective sexy paragraphs. Good luck to both of us!

Four friends go to a cinema, one of them caught in a rip in reality that turns him into the female equivalent of himself and has an intense flood of hormones.
Rated: Adult 1 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 6467 Words: 2997 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: None
Motivation for Change: Accident
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 08/01/18
Updated: 08/01/18
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/05/18 Title: Chapter 1: The film

A+ For the synopsis to this story. It got me so excited to click on it!

After making a spontaneous cosmetic decision, our protagonist begins noticing some peculiar changes.
Rated: Explicit 12 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 34595 Words: 3801 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Model
Body Modification: Extreme Piercing
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 02/05/19
Updated: 06/30/20
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/25/19 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Keep it up!

Having never met before, a human and an AI travel lightyears away from Earth to an impoverished but lush garden planet. Away from the bustle of their terran lifestyle, they learn a few important things about themselves... and one another.
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 4017 Words: 4445 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/15/19 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Unapologetically wholesome is apt. I've decided I quite like this style of story. Looking forward to more chapters.

Author's Response: I'm happy you like it! :D

Two friends interact with a supernatural spirit, one does not take it very seriously. They are left to play a very different game than they thought they were.
Rated: Explicit 10 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 52549 Words: 25401 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Pantyhose, Undies
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced, Tricked, Unknown
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Humiliation, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Mind Control, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 04/12/19
Updated: 04/13/19
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/14/19 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Great story. Definitely a slice of it that was just the kind of story I wanted to read. It's been a while since I read a good story by a writer which I hadn't yet discovered. Hope you write more stuff, I'll be on the lookout.

Author's Response: Thank you. Appreciate the review and I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Which slice is the part you were most interested in?

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 04/15/19 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

To answer your question, The slice I particularly enjoyed was from when you switched the gendered pronouns in the first chapter up to and including the massage in the second chapter. Loved how she enjoyed teasing. Loved your use of adjectives in her narration that revealed her subconscious interest in him. The enjoyment I get from your story reminds me of the enjoyment I get from Passport Control by xshigoto, particularly Day 2a and 2b. All the best!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll keep that in mind for future writing.

1% of males wake up females, and no one really causes too much fuss. But, Zoe feels like there has to be more going on. Something like this seems a little too perfect.
Rated: Adult 33 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 24808 Words: 21265 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: College
Story Theme: Comedy, Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 05/08/19
Updated: 12/02/19
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/09/19 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love the unique perspective of this story. Look forward to see where it is headed, the pace so far has been perfect.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/11/19 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Still liking it

A man finds a way to turn himself into a girl and chronicles his experiments of womanhood, he may just lose himself in the process though
Rated: Explicit 1 Reviews Story Incomplete Reads: 7988 Words: 344 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Bodily Functions
Series: None
Published: 06/02/19
Updated: 06/02/19
Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 06/03/19 Title: Chapter 2: # Test 1 - Women's Gym

Great premise, would love longer chapters.

In a small town lost in the middle of nowhere, something unique is about to happen. Chris, a 17 yo student, got his private parts suddenly changed. Despite the change having its bright sides, Chris now struggles hiding his secret, deal with his friends, girlfriend and family, and investigate what happened to him.
Rated: Explicit 9 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 88111 Words: 17331 Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Boyfriend, Teenager
Featured Items: Lingerie, Sex Toys
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced, In Hiding, Revenge
Personality: Good to Bad
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Romance, Sports
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Primarily Female to Male, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 07/28/19
Updated: 08/09/19
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/07/19 Title: Chapter 17: The heist

Hey! First off, sorry for taking so long to give your story a read. I'll say I really enjoyed it. Great story and great sexy scenes. And the dream sequence, you asked what people thought of it, I liked it, so more like that would be nice as well.
So now that I am finally a fan, I am looking forward to future updates! All the best.

Author's Response: Thank you for the comment/support, it motivates me to write and speeds up the new uploads lol

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 08/10/19 Title: Chapter 18: Fun time!

"I was pretty much putting the cucumber completely out, then ramming it all the way in again."
LOL, what a champ!

This is the first experimental subject to undergo experimental conversion protocol #26a...
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 21463 Words: 3490 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Sissy
Featured Items: Chastity Belt, Lingerie, Sex Toys
Locale: Hospital or Clinic, Labratory
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive, Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Captive, Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Hormonal, Hypnosis, Mechanical Device, Mind Control
Series: None
Published: 02/11/20
Updated: 11/14/20
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/15/20 Title: Chapter 3: Phase 3

Great so far, keep up the good work!

Guy wakes up after a one night stand and sees that she didn't just leave him alone, she left him without his body as well!!
Rated: Explicit 18 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 116212 Words: 46515 Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 05/02/20
Updated: 10/25/20
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/18/20 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I am a picky reader. These days, this is the story I hit refresh for.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/11/20 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Love it, keep it up!

A magical event happens every seven years for sexually active couples. The first transformation from my Seven Year Switch series of transformations. There is sex, there are sexual changes, and a body swap.
Rated: Explicit 1 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 2473 Words: 3869 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Husband, Wife
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: Seven Year Switch
Published: 05/18/20
Updated: 05/18/20
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/19/20 Title: Chapter 1: Alex and Sam

Happy to see these stories return to the site

Author's Response: Thanks. I missed it.

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