ubougie
I generally like shorter more explicit stories, with a slow tantalizing transformation.
Member Since: 05/03/13 Membership status: Member
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Reviews by ubougie
Ego has always been and will always be man's greatest downfall. Usually that saying is not quite this literal, but for all my knowledge, and for all my preparation, my biggest mistake was thinking that I could experiment on myself, and control it.
Rated: Adult 7 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 16457 Words: 7330 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Good to Bad, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Medical Experiment, Mind/Body Posession
Type of Change: Mind Control
Series: None
Published: 09/30/11
Updated: 12/03/11
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/03/13 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love the mid-point of chapter 2. One of my favorite passages of all the stories on this website.

Eric was a great soldier, a good guy and looking at a promising career in the military. Until one day he finds himself facing problems even his training couldn't prepare him for.
Rated: Adult 12 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 41030 Words: 29948 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Work Uniform
Locale: Camp, Family Household, Hospital or Clinic, Office
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Sports
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 04/27/13
Updated: 06/30/14
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/03/13 Title: Chapter 2: Time Turned Fragile

End of chapter 2 sounds very promising. I love the corrupting power of femininity within its host.

One evening, right in the middle of 'the act,' a husband and wife find their bodies changing gender. This transformation is not the only thing the two share, as the couple is just weeks away from becoming new parents.
Rated: Explicit 44 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 161152 Words: 30433 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Mother, Wife
Locale: Family Household, Office
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Story Theme: Pregnancy
Series: None
Published: 04/30/13
Updated: 03/06/14
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/08/14 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Out of the Mouths of Babes

Excellent story. I still get a kick out of chapter 8.

A boys life gets turned upside down when he runs into a mysterious old woman in the streets.
Rated: Adult 6 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 10605 Words: 437 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Baby, Child, Daughter
Featured Items: Breast Forms, Diapers, Lingerie, Pantyhose
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Curse
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Babyhood, Everyday Living, Second Childhood
Type of Change: Age Regression
Series: None
Published: 06/16/13
Updated: 06/17/13
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/17/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Transformation

Promising premise. Please continue.

Author's Response: Thank You. Will Do

A horrific accident puts 17-year-old Brad Dowdy in the body of a 9-year-old girl while they grow a male clone. But when complications cause growth spurts, Brad finds himself on the wrong side of puberty. How will this affect his relationship with his girlfriend? What about his best friend, the star QB?
Rated: Adult 77 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 667857 Words: 120203 Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/22/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Story of the year. I insist you keep contributing to this site. I find myself waiting all day to come home and read your next chapter. You have quite a gift.

Alejandro Sanchez, an ordinary easy-going kid who wasn't really social in school, made decent grades, and a bookworm had always known they were different. What they didn't know was that there was a name for this condition called gender incoherence.
Al is now trying to find their way in the world. What opportunities are out there for such a brilliant and highly motivated individual?
Rated: Deviant 8 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 48358 Words: 52763 Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 02/20/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Congratulations on completing the story, quite an accomplishment in and of itself. I did find it difficult to read though because of how few paragraphs you have, so I would greatly appreciate if your next story was broken up into smaller paragraphs so I could follow along easier.

On this site you'll need to do two carriage returns, not just one, to really break up the paragraphs.

Author's Response: I'm writing a PDF version of this story, so I am wondering if the <br /> tags will work as paragraph? I also use the <p>p tag</p>. I'll put that on my to-do list and I'll revise each chapter. Right now I am copy-editing the novel on a Microsoft word document so I can showcase it elsewhere. Thanks for the feedback, and I like how you made your criticism into an instruction. I'm glad I know HTML web design.

Seeking a fresh start, Alexis quit her soul crushing job and ran off into the arms of her loving girlfriend to unwind on a tropical island. Things could be perfect - if only it wasn't for that whisper in her head. Or that damn itch...
Rated: Explicit 27 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 81481 Words: 22839 Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse, Unknown
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Women
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Primarily Female to Male, Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 01/15/14
Updated: 01/26/14
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/22/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So much talent! First off, FtM is rare, but I enjoy it too. And you have a very special telling of it. I feel there is much to be learned from this story, that what is interesting is not just the person transforming, but the person who is there with them. Both are mainly hetero, and watching the tension of Lily between her love for Alex as an individual (personality and behaviour), contrasted against her own sexual desire for the male-Alex who seems to be erasing the old Alex... it annoys the hell out of Alex, but delights us readers to no end! I could read a thousand stories with this same structure and would never get bored, and yet for me, this is the first time I've seen something like it. Keep up the excellent work!

Author's Response: Wow, first of all, thank you! To call my little drabble talent makes me blush :) You've also really nailed Lily's struggle! I was hoping that the text, filtered through Alex' perception, still conveyed what upset her. I've also never read a story which addresses how scary it would be to see a loved one go through such a change. All the stories where the protagonist is unaware of the changes, that obliviousness extends to the rest of the cast. So when you mix in great personality changes as well it becomes rather tragic - the old person dies and nobody even remembers to mourn them. Well, Lily remembers! And she's not gonna just take it!

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 01/28/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Perfection. Please write another. I've faved you as an author for motivation. :)

Author's Response: Aw, thank you very much! I'm already hard at work at my next short story =D It appears my writing bug has no intention of letting go.

Some princesses grow weary of waiting for a knight to rescue them.
Rated: Adult 11 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 8118 Words: 5407 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: From Submissive to Dominant
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Historical Time Period, Mythical Setting, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Primarily Female to Male, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 01/29/14
Updated: 01/29/14
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/29/14 Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Time

You did not disappoint. I haven't figured out yet what it is you do so much better than everyone else, but I want more of it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll try my best to deliver =D

In which a villainess sets out on a quest to seduce a hero, a hero must come to terms with the secret identity (s)he'd rather deny, and a mad scientist just tries to get some mad science done without getting distracted by the antics of her magical minion.
Rated: Explicit 347 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 655238 Words: 69415 Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 02/16/14 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18

Nice.

Author's Response: Thanks :3

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/13/14 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I knew what was coming up was coming up, there was enough foreshadowing, but now that I see definite evidence towards it, all I can say is, yesssss...!

Author's Response: *grins* Pretty much my exact reaction. I've been waiting so long to get this part! As a little sidenote, may I ask what I lost a star for? :) I'm totally cool with people being less than fully pleased with the story, but I like to know how I can improve it!

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 02/13/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Heh, I'm sorry if I lowered the average score or something like that. If there was a 4.5 score I could give, I would have given that. I guess my criticism would be, and this is true of a large number of novel-length stories I read, that stories feel like they are made larger not because there is more to say, but just because there are more side stories being added, in what I assume is an effort to make the characters more three-dimensional. In your case, I would point to the neck snapping heroine, or the evil scientist girl, or in this chapter, the office meeting, the passage about how Kara unilaterally kept people ethical in her company with his glare. Though in that last case, I can imagine some people would eat that right up, but to me the exaggeration which is common-place in the comic world does not feel genuine.

So you know, I hated the beginning of the first book of Harry Potter, where they talked about him living in the muggle house. And if most people found the beginning of that book boring, it wouldn't have become the success it is today, so I recognize my opinion may even be an outlier for all I know.

For our two main characters, I like how they are becoming evidence against how you can only be pure good and pure evil, and if you hook up, you have to pick one of the two choice together. Kara is becoming less of a square, and this chapter in particular, Diane is becoming complex: she seems to have no trouble being evil, but she also totally has some good in her too. This theme, of starting a story in black and white and then adding shades of gray to it, is a form of character development that I find more compelling.

Also, another more blunt reason I did not give a 5: I don't visit this and other story sites to read literary masterpieces. I come for sexy stories that push my buttons. And sometimes I get caught reading epics just because the author disarmed me and caused me to want to find out what happens next, even if I think there will unlikely ever be any sexy time for the remainder of the story. And if I were to write, I would write mainly shorter stories because my fear is starting a story and realizing I wrote myself into a corner and I don't want to finish it.

Talking of which, I actually did start writing. The first time in a couple of years I have tried. Still to be seen if it will ever see the light of day. But I am happy to say it is a direct result of The Itch, especially chapters 9 and 10. Even if I never publish, let me just say the fact that I am doing it is a big effin' deal and huge compliment to your writing.

Sorry for this epic comment. You made the mistake of asking. :)

Author's Response: Oh, I don't care about the average rating (much) *laughs* THANK YOU for this excellent comment; it's true that this story has a number of sideplots I added mostly to flesh out either the characters/world they live in, and I totally get how they might be less interesting in some ways. When reading novels, I also find my eyes glazing over at sideplots sometimes *laughs* But I promise that I'm actually keeping the cast of characters fairly economic; all characters with names/speaking parts were introduced to serve a purpose. I can however assure you that there ~will~ be more sexytime to look forward to ;) I'm also very flattered that The Itch had such an impact; I wish you the best of luck with your own writing. May your muse not be a total jerk.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 02/22/14 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 28

Hee hee!

Author's Response: Ha, I knew you'd like this one! :3

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 02/23/14 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 29

Ah, too many enemies to keep track of! Keeping them all at bay will really put a damper on all the super awesome sex. :)

Author's Response: But isn't "oh thank god we're alive"-sex ever so much hotter? ;)

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 02/25/14 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 32

Nooo! Platypus Man!

You are one evil author!

Author's Response: I know. I can't help it. Tears are delicious.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 02/26/14 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 35

Congratulations on completing the story!

Author's Response: Thanks :) Still a few more chapters to go! It's crazy, I never expected it to get this long.

After a telepath goes through a bad break up and an elevator free fall, he starts looking for a new relationship.
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 9763 Words: 651 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Doll, Girlfriend
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Mind/Body Posession
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change, Hypnosis, Mind Control
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 02/08/14
Updated: 02/21/14
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/21/14 Title: Chapter 1: Intro/lesson 1

Great, keep it up!

James returns to his home after turning into an attractive girl, hoping to find acceptance. Confronted by friends and family who can't help but see him in different light, he is dragged down into a spiral of jealousy and lust.
Rated: Deviant 8 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 32826 Words: 8408 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Featured Items: Lingerie, School Uniform, Work Uniform
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive, Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Humiliation
Type of Change: Hormonal, Stuck
Warnings: Bondage/S&M, Incest, Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 02/12/14
Updated: 04/10/14
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/29/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am a bit late coming to this story. I usually avoid stories that say they will be dark, but I came back to it anyway. That being said, at least as it stands right now (and presumably this is all it will be?), it isn't that dark, just kind of frustrating for the protagonist.
Anyway, really great! Do not regret reading it at all. Wish it had kept going (as long as it avoided topics like death and torture or anything very seriously dark).

John was in the park with his girlfriend, when the city sirens went off. They ran, but that wasn't enough to save them.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 3 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 7592 Words: 1192 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 02/13/14
Updated: 02/22/14
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/23/14 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I have read so many great stories around the premise of radiation poisoning, so I really look forward to what you do with this one.

He is here. She is here.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 7 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 2877 Words: 100 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Not Applicable
Series: None
Published: 02/16/14
Updated: 02/16/14
Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 02/16/14 Title: Chapter 1: Her

Even without the TG element, this drabble could stand on its own. We all have things we want that we can never have, want to be people that we can never be. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Kat Montgomery was one of the prettiest, most popular girls at school, but when she finds a magic locket, one wish will send her world spiraling out of control.
Rated: Explicit 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 31307 Words: 1830 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Boyfriend, Jock
Featured Items: Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse
Personality: Fights Change, From Submissive to Dominant, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Women
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes
Type of Change: Primarily Female to Male, Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Warnings: Bodily Functions
Series: None
Published: 02/18/14
Updated: 02/19/14
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/20/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent, I want more! :)


No one knows what the future holds. Everyone has a prediction. It doesn't mean it will come true. That's what one child learn in this futuristic story.
(RATED TEEN)
Rated: Adult 30 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 50710 Words: 42405 Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Trans
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Child, Daughter
Featured Items: Undies
Locale: Hospital or Clinic, Labratory
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Distant Future, Horror, Humiliation
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Stuck
Warnings: Bodily Functions, Death, Intense Violence, Torture
Series: Isisraxtosa
Published: 02/20/14
Updated: 12/31/15
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/20/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - This Strange New Feeling

You did a very good job of describing the upcoming transformation, fully deserving of 5 stars. My only critique is with some of the dialogue. The foreshadowing by the scientist is too on the nose (though out of context it is very well done!), and the mother seems way too much like a pushover to be believable as a mom.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like this chapter. I worked on adding to it. Chapter 2 was written by me and Princess_Panty_boy. It took a while to get back to this story. But with help from her, I am back. NATASA JESSICA =^.^=

Everyone dreams of being a superhero sometimes. But when Sarah wakes up with actual honest-to-Captain-Patriot powers, she finds out that being a mutant can have some unexpected consequences.
Rated: Explicit 50 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 38878 Words: 9098 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Boyfriend
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Loses Identity
Story Theme: Comedy, Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Primarily Female to Male, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: Paragon Verse
Published: 02/27/14
Updated: 03/06/14
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/01/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Heh, another FtM from you, and another one I adore. You're really good at this word composition into story thing.

Author's Response: *grins* I figured you would like this one!

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 03/02/14 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

It brings me endless joy as well! Keep it up. The voices are very believable.

Author's Response: Thank you! =D

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 03/04/14 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Another 10/10! Hell, 11/10! I'd rate it as such, but I almost feel this story was written for *me*, and I don't want to bias your rating too much.

Only part I found unbelievable was how Beth could be attracted to *only* a penis. Makes me think about how I saw a stand-up comedian ask the women in an audience who has received a dick pic (most hands went up) and who was happy they got said pic (all hands went down).

Maybe Beth's superpower is that she is a heterogenetalsexual?

Author's Response: *chuckles* We like Glistening Manhoods just fine in person; the problem with dickpics is their often unsolicited nature. Anywho, Beth is *not* just attracted to the Temptation Wand; it's more the implication of what it would mean to them. She likes Sarah as a person, and lack of physical attraction is just *never* gonna be a problem with a shapeshifter! Of course Sarah thinks it's the c*** itself. Because, you know... teens. Not that great at thinking.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 03/04/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thanks for your insight into the female mind. :) I can only know it as an outsider. Guys have no problem with unsolicited pictures of boobs and ass, as long as they are nice, though perhaps the direct equivalent, a vagina, is less flattering and just picturing one that is moist and hairy and zoomed in from a stranger is admittedly not *that* appealing if I wasn't pre-attracted to that girl to begin with. I think the problem with guy thinking is that that is all we think we have to offer, that the rest of our body is kind of factory standard, and really it is the D that is the only thing that differentiates us from an amorphous blob, whereas girls have all kinds of interesting bits. Girls tell me all the time that they like all kinds of male body parts, but I have a hard time believing them. You know what they say, guys are a lot more visual than girls.

Anyway, fun tangent. :)

Concerning Beth, I think the reason I was left with the impression that I was left with is that, in the flashback, she kissed and was not attracted sexually to Sarah. And now, add a penis, and buh-BAM! Now she's somewhere near 100% hot for her. I just have a hard time buying into the idea that her imagination is so great that she can imagine a fully male-ified Sarah and is attracted to *that* instead of what is right in front of her. Also, if that were really the case, she would have verbalized that you'd think, though admittedly Sarah is not the most direct communicator, which after all lends to keeping Sarah (and us) delightfully mislead at this part in the story.

Two lengthy reviews to say one teensy thing that isn't worth the time or effort I put to write it or you to read it. You're doing *amazingly* with this story, so keep it up. I'm so hooked!

Author's Response: *laughs* See, women like pictures of muscular chests just as much as guys like pictures of breasts. Yes, fun tangent :3 But yes, Beth *does* have a great imagination. Is she not the author of the Greatest Slashfic Of All Time?

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 03/07/14 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Darryl reminds me a bit of Morpheus or The Oracle from The Matrix. Sort of like "I know everything, but I'll only teach you what you need to know and in the way I see fit." He also reminds me of my favorite psychology teacher (well, honestly I've only had two, and my other one was great, so, yeah, I think I like this Darryl guy).

Onward!

As a normal boy, I would always dream of going to Paragon and meeting a hero. But, maybe my chances weren't so bad after all.
Rated: Adult 27 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 26376 Words: 19515 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Series: Paragon Verse
Published: 03/04/14
Updated: 07/23/15
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03/09/14 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

The random incest seemed to come out of nowhere, but the story is good, I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Incest? Rose and Rob aren't related. And thanks!

A fallen hero. An assassin. An unlikely meeting. The road to redemption is long and hard and filled with explosives.
Rated: Explicit 422 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 217076 Words: 73655 Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Mind/Body Posession, Mythical Setting, Romance
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Bondage/S&M, Intense Violence
Series: Paragon Verse
Published: 03/06/14
Updated: 04/13/14
Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 04/13/14 Title: Chapter 43: Epilogue

So I've been curious if you'll be coming back around to Adventures in Shapeshifting, or if it will remain an unfinished work? I was really enjoying it, and was saddened when you stopped your updates. I think by now you know the kind of story I like. I'm all about the gradual mental descent and intimacy of a person discovering their new sex. You're just as gifted at sexy stuff as with storytelling of a more general audience nature. Keep up the great work (that being said, enjoy your hiatus!)

Author's Response: Methinks that review would belong over on AiS :P I do intend to finish it, and I know how it ends, but it appears my muse can only sustain one story at a time, and I generally write down what she's screaming the loudest about!

Luke and Lillian are brother and sister. They're also best friends. Siblings who share a secret fantasy to experience the world as the opposite sex. One night when they confess this to each other, their wish comes true--for the entire world.
Rated: Explicit 29 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 96104 Words: 27400 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: College, Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: From Submissive to Dominant
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Series: None
Published: 03/08/14
Updated: 09/23/15
Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 03/11/14 Title: Chapter 1: Homecoming

promising!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/23/14 Title: Chapter 4: Examinations II

Excellent! Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/27/14 Title: Chapter 5: Strange Interlude

Don't apologize for this chapter. It was amazing. Especially the Lillian/Eric portion.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 03/31/14 Title: Chapter 7: Confrontations

Now you've done it. I'm adding you to my favorite authors. Your writing is just too good.

Author's Response: Aw shucks!

Appearances can be deceiving. Although a drunk and careless man might not know to think about that.
Rated: Adult 16 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 8755 Words: 3459 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/19/14 Title: Chapter 1: Pride of a Thief

Great job!

Author's Response: Much thanks to ye :3

Skylar wants to 'move her relationship to the next level' with her boyfriend, but is afraid of the pains associated with doing so. Good thing she can swap bodies!
Rated: Explicit 16 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 21014 Words: 3380 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend, Teenager
Featured Items: Undies
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Forced, Tricked, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Mind/Body Posession, Romance
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 04/21/14
Updated: 05/07/14
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/22/14 Title: Chapter 1: A Predicament

I really liked it!

Author's Response: I'm glad you did! :D

A young student gets drastically altered by nanites and finds it hard to get used to his new body and his new life.
Rated: Explicit 26 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 129340 Words: 68111 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Featured Items: Bikinis
Locale: College, Labratory
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement
Motivation for Change: Accident, Forced, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Humiliation, Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 06/11/14
Updated: 06/24/14
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/13/14 Title: Chapter 3: Day 2b

Wow, you spoil us. This may be one of the best stories I have ever read. Please stick around and keep writing, you're amazing.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/04/14 Title: Chapter 1: Day 1

Do you look at your reviews? You aren't responding to them.

Anyway, another 5 stars for good measure. I really look forward to what comes next.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 07/04/14 Title: Chapter 1: Day 1

...or, for that measure, any of your writing, even if it isn't necessarily this story.

What would you do if you woke up in the hospital as a different gender? Then your told it would take at least 5 months to get your male body back. That's what happened to Chris after a deadly accident. Now he has half a year to survive as a woman and succeed at his job.
Rated: Explicit 57 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 94567 Words: 21887 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Undies
Locale: Office, Vacation Destination
Body Modification: Extreme Surgical Alteration, Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 06/24/14
Updated: 12/02/14
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/17/14 Title: Chapter 11: Emasculating

You got me hooked. Can't wait for more chapters!

Author's Response: Thanks. I can't say how many chapters I'll post each week, but there will be at least one a week barring illness and emergencies.

Aaron, upon waking up one day, realized he was going through changes, seemingly for the better. What will he think of them as his changes progress?
Rated: Explicit 40 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 147732 Words: 24736 Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 06/30/14
Updated: 06/23/15
Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 10/12/14 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Nice to see the return of this long anticipated story! Hoorah!

Author's Response: Glad to hear that you like it! I'll try to make the delay shorter this time!

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/29/14 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

The passage near the end with the girl glasses, and then the internal struggle and then he forgets, that was very well executed. I think that warrants a 5 star review! :)

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! That bit took a bit longer than I would have liked, but I'm glad the time was worth it!

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/06/14 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Perfect form. I enjoyed the cat saga very much. I'll never get tired of your writing. 5 stars!

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it.

A young man and his girlfriend are camping when a meteor with an unknown element strikes their tent. He wakes up a she and wow is she now all woman!
Rated: Deviant 13 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 21383 Words: 4727 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Girlfriend, Teenager
Locale: Road Trip
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 07/31/14
Updated: 08/13/14
Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 08/02/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The thing about reviews is you'll get all kinds, because there are so many tastes out there. The most important thing is to write the kind of story you want to write, and write for your fans, which you'll gain when people with similar tastes start taking notice. Chapter 1 if I were to rate it would get 3 stars, but I won't rate it because it is undeserved, just because of a lack of synchronicity in what turns us on. Use some other sexy description, probably your next chapter or next story, and you'll be getting 5 stars from me. I see a lot of potential from you, and implore you to keep writing.

The Kings Sword is a gift from the gods, coming to the world when evil, treachery and suffering control the land. It is wielded by those with the strength and purity to return peace to the land. Sarah a peasant girl is its newest wielder. There is a problem though, it's the Kings Sword, not the Queens Sword.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 10463 Words: 18010 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: Camp, Road Trip
Motivation for Change: For a Job, In Hiding, Undercover, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: From Submissive to Dominant
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Historical Time Period, Mythical Setting, Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Body Suit, Changed by Clothing
Series: None
Published: 08/02/14
Updated: 08/19/14
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/02/14 Title: Chapter 1: Bandits

I like it. I've always wanted Minikisa to write a more involved version of Dragonslayer. This may be going in the direction. You have it categorized as crossdressing, so it is probably just wishful thinking, that she isn't going to physically or mentally change... but if she did, I would like that very much. :) Still, nice. I'll give it 5 stars.

Author's Response: Sorry, but this is merely cross dressing, as it's going to be more mainstream YA. I still want to go into more detail about how much effort she goes through to deal with things than you'll find in similar Western YA novels and deal with it as realistically as possible, well as realistically as possible when you have a magic sword. Thanks for reading, I hope you'll continue enjoying it. ...PS. I agree that seeing Minikisa write an expanded Dragonslayer would be awesome. Or even some short stories later on.

Sam has been looking forward to his summer holiday away with his big sister and her friends all year. But when a subtle mistake turns Sam into the opposite gender he must decide whether to let it ruin his holiday or embrace his new appearance.
Rated: Explicit 213 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 617890 Words: 92080 Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: Bikinis, Curlers, High Heels, Undies
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Humiliation
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 08/14/14
Updated: 12/14/15
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/04/15 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: A Little feel around

This chapter did not disappoint. Your pace is right on the mark, you're really good.

Author's Response: Thanks, that means a lot. Glad you enjoyed it. xxx

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/01/15 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: The Night out

Yes, this story is right in the sweet spot, so glad to see it is back. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad to be back writing it. xx

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/07/15 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Not a Date

Amazing so far. Like, could be my pick of the year good.

Author's Response: wow thanks! I appreciate that. Tell your friends!!! haha. Thanks for the review. xx

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 12/07/15 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: All things must end

I know I'll likely say it again when the last chapter is posted, but I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I'll keep it in my top list for years to come, especially the chapters when Sam was in denial. You can be sure that I'll be keeping a look out for your future work.

Author's Response: Thank you, that means a lot. I'm glad you're enjoying this story. Interesting you enjoyed the chapters where Sam was in denial the most. I also enjoyed writing those parts. Was fun finding ways to make him break. Last chapter coming next week! xx

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/21/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Brit girls

More, more, more, more! :)

Author's Response: Working on next chapter. x

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/12/15 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Attraction

Scenes where m2f girls become heterosexual are usually the best written chapters on this site, and this one is no exception. Though to be fair, in this story she has gradually been becoming heterosexual, and that has been excellent every step of the way. So given all that, it is a no brainer to give this chapter a 5 star rating.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I appreciate it. I agree with what you say and I really was looking forward to writing this chapter. Sam isn't quite there yet though and their will be more exciting chapters to come. Thanks for the 5 star rating I hope i keep up the standard. xxx

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/25/15 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: What have I done...

This story has been bittersweet to me because I know the vacation will have to end, and chapter 1 really seems to hint that the whole female experience was contained during the trip. So short of a rewrite of the first chapter, it looks like this won't have much of a happy ending.
I would still like it if Sam accepted her sexual orientation before she changed back. Then having her orientation switch back as a guy is a whole other question. Would it be instant, or would it take a few days? Or is she (now he) still conflicted, and continuing to correspond with David by e-mail for example as her?
You need to keep writing even after this story. I haven't given this many 5 stars for one story before. Your slow gradual young love romance descriptions are some of the best.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the detailed and very heart warming review. I don't want to give anything a way but the story will wrap up in a neat bow and the few paragraphs in the first chapter will come back into it in a later chapter. I'm glad you are really enjoying this story and you are invested in each step the protagonist takes. I hope the ending will be a satisfying one for you and you will reward it 5 stars when all is said and done. Thanks for the kind words. xx

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/15/15 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: The Memories

Yay! Great job! Start to finish. Many stories, especially the epics, rarely make it to the end, but you did it, so that's an accomplishment in and of itself. Not to mention, what a story! You're a good writer with a unique voice that's interesting to read. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. It is true, these large stories are hard to get through usually but not the summer holiday. It really has been a surprising pleasure to write each chapter and never did I hit any kind of writers block. Glad you enjoyed how it turned out. Think I will be writing a couple of shorter stories for now, including my next project. Thanks for reading and your regular reviews. xx

A Timber Grove Story: Michael Slanger shruggs off a curse that his mother tells him will make him more feminine everytime he has sex.
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 77965 Words: 15980 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo, Twin
Motivation for Change: Curse
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: Timber Grove
Published: 09/01/14
Updated: 09/25/14
Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 09/19/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What happened to this story? It has been somehow reset?

Author's Response: I'm reposting it, and all six chapters are up now.

Danny Wilson had what he thought was the perfect job working for a pharmaceutical company. But an attempt at industrial espionage changes his life forever
Rated: Kid-Friendly 7 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 9146 Words: 5335 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Daughter, Girlfriend
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: Labratory
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime, Forced, Undercover
Personality: Bad to Good, Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Age Regression, Drug-Induced, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 10/11/14
Updated: 06/18/16
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/18/16 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 More surprizes

Nice setup, looking forward to more. Congrats on your newborn.

Author's Response: Thank you I've a pretty good idea where this story is heading. Although at times a couple of the characters seem to take it in another direction. Thank you for that too he's pretty demanding but he's a joy as well Cheryl x

You get hired by a mysterious company for a fabulous sum - for research they can't talk about. You take the job, of course. And you wake up ... elsewhere.
Rated: Adult 25 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 17375 Words: 11505 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Series: The Dave Conspiracy
Published: 11/17/14
Updated: 11/20/14
Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 11/20/14 Title: Chapter 1: Employee disorientation

Nice. But wait, where did it go from the main page? Did I just read a non-existent story? Almost like the society and universe in the story. Weeeird.

Author's Response: Very meta!

The Captain of the high school soccer team leads his teammates into the playoffs. But that's as far as he can take them.
Rated: Adult 24 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 48382 Words: 21519 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Series: None
Published: 11/18/14
Updated: 02/20/15
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/19/14 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: This Really Sucks

Pretty good, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you for the support! (:

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 11/21/14 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: A day in bed

I am not sure if it is just your character or if it is based on your own knowledge, but hydrogen peroxide is actually bad for healing. While it does kill bacteria, it has never been shown to do so in wounds, and in fact the bubbling that hydrogen peroxide does is on the very parts of your biology that heals, which increases the odds of scaring and slower healing.
Just FYI, since common wisdom would have you believe hydrogen peroxide is good on wounds, but that turns out not to be the case.

Author's Response: That's just what I'd grown up with. Surprised to hear that, I'll keep that in mind for future injuries.

Rated: Kid-Friendly 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 782 Words: 697 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: None
Series: The Dave Conspiracy
Published: 11/23/14
Updated: 11/23/14
Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 11/23/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This put a smile on my face. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, mine, too. I totally did not see it coming.

Jessica + I are soul mates in every respect except in bed. She is often horny -- while for me sex is nothing more than an obligatory exercise. How can she make us soul mates for real? With a magic reading card.
Rated: Explicit 9 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 32321 Words: 3201 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Locale: Family Household
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Series: None
Published: 12/31/14
Updated: 01/10/15
Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 12/31/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

With that first chapter and the foreshadowing form the title, I know that I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and for your encouragement. Hopefully I won't disappoint you.

A man dies and is offered a deal; he may return to life but he will inhabit a body of a malevolent deity's choosing. He is dropped into a teenage girl's body, which he thinks isnt so bad, until he learns the hard way his new body is destined to be abducted and modified beyond his wildest wet dreams.
Rated: Explicit 114 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 616718 Words: 37863 Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/14/15 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Don't ladyboners ever go down?

Great so far!

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment this kind of response is what makes me keep at it :)

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 01/15/15 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Ain't all sunshine and fuckin' daisies.

Ah this seems to be moving towards a hardcore place, humiliation and surgery. Should have looked at the tags. I may drop off as that is not my cup of tea.

Author's Response: Hey that's cool, i understand this stuff isn't for everyone. I hope you enjoyed it up until now though :)

A shady organisation begins recruiting teenage males to its ranks; an organisation that, unknown to many, intends to eradicate the world of all males using female super-soldiers.
Rated: Explicit 115 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 285205 Words: 116349 Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: Camp, Labratory
Motivation for Change: Female Domination
Personality: Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Captive
Type of Change: Mechanical Device, Mind Control
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 04/20/15
Updated: 02/19/17
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/21/16 Title: Chapter 37: “Adjustment Issues”

Nice! Chapter 15 was up until this point my favorite, so I was happy to see it come back around to her orientation and attraction to guys. It isn't just the topic, but also how you go about writing about it, it is very well executed.

A night shift worker finds that he isn't quite himself anymore.
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 9854 Words: 2413 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Featured Items: Long Nails, Undies, Work Uniform
Body Modification: Ears Pierced, Permanent Hair/Skin/Nail Change, Weight Gain
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 07/08/15
Updated: 07/13/15
Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 07/09/15 Title: Chapter 1: The Last Week

Yeah, if there's one constant on this site, it is that very short stories tend to get one star out of five. So if that happens to this story, don't let that discourage you. Just make sure that next time your first submission to a story has a longer length (I guess I would recommend about 2000 words to be safe, but certainly more than 500).

It was just an ordinary day watching the game with my best bro. It didn't stay that way for long.
Rated: Explicit 7 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 14016 Words: 5775 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Girlfriend, Wife
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Comedy, Fan Fiction, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 07/23/15
Updated: 07/23/15
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/22/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Returning the favor. How I missed this story when it came out, I don't know. I frankly love this story much more than my own writing, I have much to learn from you. My two favorite parts (which make up like more than half of the story) are when Drew talks about her obsession in such denial language, but you know just below the surface, there's already so much corruption. And of course, when the protagonist convinces her to go the last mile. Her enthusiasm and innocence and trust is both endearing and super hot. The only drawback in the story to my preferences, and this will sound like I'm somewhat still giving you a compliment, is that it is too short. Between the time when she sniffs the dick, and when he pushes her over the edge, I think there could have been a bit more teasing there. I would have liked to, for example, ask her what else she could think of that wouldn't turn her into a succubus, but that would help fill her curiosity, basically let her own imagination corrupt her further, each new thing grasping at straws to the point where you start asking "wait, isn't she already basically breaking the rules?" But man, is it ever palpable, every time she takes a step closer to the precipice, she is pulled towards it with even more force, like a magnet. Keep writing stories like this one would be my humble request, and I'll keep loving them. :)

Author's Response: Well, I like your story more than my own writing, too ;p. We're probably both just too critical of ourselves. As for the latter (sexy) half not being drawn out as much as you'd like, well, I don't usually write explicit stuff. This story was one of my very few attempts at it. I always feel silly when I try to write explicit sex. It is nice to hear you appreciated it though, next time I get explicit I'll try to delve a bit deeper.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/22/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A downside to looking at your own writing is that it has the same effect as reading a story the second time. It has a lot less bite. It's the tragedy of authorship. I know for me anyway, I start writing when I run out of stuff to read online. The pro is I can write a story just how I want it (within my talent as an author anyway), while the con is that it is drawn out, so while I do enjoy writing twists and turns, it just is not as poignant to write it as it is to read something unexpectedly.

"I always feel silly when I try to write explicit sex." Ha! My first attempts were horrible. In real life I use technical terms for organs, even in sexy contexts. I'm not one for just throwing around words like "pussy" and "cock" willy nilly (though my gf loves it the few times I do). I also don't use pet names in real life, so after a few attempts which all sound forced, I just drop them, and rarely say "honey" or "sweety" or whatever pet names actually sound like. It is so out of my comfort zone. Just someone's actual name is good enough for me. Anyway, all that to say, this story about the monster girl, it is actually one of the sexiest drawn out sequences I've read. It annoys me when I read a story that spends all this time setting up the plot, and then within just a few sentences, they skip over the whole middle of the story and they're already fully at their final stage (in the case of tg stories, I'm referring to fully transformed mentally and physically / instant transformation). For me it is all about the tension, resistance, corruption, build up, and release. I still think I'm mediocre at it in some respects that I'm still trying to work on, but I'll admit in a non-modest way that when it comes to writing an overall story that moves very gradually, I've got that pretty well figured out.

To close off the subject of "explicit sex", I tend to include it in the story just because it gives it a sense of finality. But otherwise I prefer to use masturbation because I only have to deal with one person's wants and thoughts, and people are a lot more honest with themselves than they are with a partner, but can still be in denial which is fun too, because its another barrier to break (as with the monster girl in this story who is wonderfully in denial).

I PMed you my e-mail in case you want to keep in touch for whatever reason.

Josh is tried of being teased and messed with by his older sister Tiffany. One day, a piece of paper offering one wish gives Josh an opportunity to change that. However, things don't go completely to plan...
Rated: Kid-Friendly 18 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 79794 Words: 4594 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 08/15/15
Updated: 08/24/15
Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 08/19/15 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 (Cocky Style)

If you update frequently, I am perfectly happy with the length of your chapters. It only sucks when someone posts a first chapter that is 200 words and then abandons the story.
That being said, for whatever reason I get the impression that the very small minority of readership that rates most stories values story length over story quality. Well forget the haters. I'm your fan!

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/19/15 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 (Cocky Style)

I think whoever gave you a rating of 1 on every chapter was excessively cruel. I've been enjoying your story. Here, have 5 stars. :)

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstar
Date: 08/23/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 (Paper Please)

It's good but seems to be going to young for my liking. Thanks for contributing to the site, I hope to read more from you.

As Valentine's Day nears, Nathan learns from a fortune cookie that he will soon “find the love of his life.” Very shortly, he starts to believe that his possessions are being replaced--becoming more effeminate. And for that matter, so might he. What is the cause behind this transformation, and why does he feel so comfortable with most of these changes? For that matter, why does he have a hard time remembering exactly what he was worried about?
Rated: Adult 33 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 134779 Words: 24835 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Romance
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 10/06/15
Updated: 06/29/17
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/08/16 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: The Most Lovable Boy in the World

I don't know how I skipped over your story all this time. Maybe you updated the synopsis? Anyway, I'm glad I found it. The earlier chapters in particular. Maybe in the latter chapters it kind of became a different story. Less transformation and more character development. Still good though.
If this story is soon coming to an end soon as you say, then I really look forward to your next story!

Something that usually happens to girls happens to Adam Miller.
Rated: Adult 7 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 18284 Words: 2698 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: Hospital or Clinic
Body Modification: Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: Accident, Forced
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 11/26/15
Updated: 08/17/19
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/18/19 Title: Chapter 2: Part 2

I'm liking this. Out of curiosity, was there an inspiration to this story, like a story or manga you came across, or it came about on its own? Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks! It does take inspiration from a book I’ve read called The New Girl: https://books.google.com/books/about/The_New_Girl.html?id=A0fjgLjATAUC. And my own curiosity and desire when I was young... I imagined something like this long before I found book above (and maybe wanted it to happen to me ; ) of course, actual intersexed people suffer. My story is a fictional syndrome.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 08/18/19 Title: Chapter 1: Part I

Oh I just noticed you started writing this in 2015. Wow! Well, welcome back in that case!

Dr. Janet Beacher's research had hit a dead end, as had her hopes of ever having grandchildren. Her only son, Jason, seemed oblivious to the opposite sex. As for her research, animal tests seemed to lack the leap of mental consciousness needed to activate her lab's new drug, UR21 – a drug capable of changing male tissue to female tissue.

Janet had a revelation, maybe one problem could be the solution to the other. If only she could find someone who could help her son start thinking like a female...
Rated: Explicit 19 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 121747 Words: 64464 Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Pregnancy
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 01/26/16
Updated: 01/27/16
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/27/16 Title: Chapter 1: The Conversation

Yeees!

Casey Jones is at that age where boys normally experience changes. But instead of a deepening voice or hair growth like his friends, Casey is noticing his chest feels puffier, his features softer and the whole of his male genitalia seems to be unraveling.

What is more disquieting are the sudden dreams and urges he finds himself having, not those of a pubescent boy but more those a girl would have. Each day Casey must face the fear that he might want to start acting out these dreams and beneath it all lies the terrible secret his dead father had tried to keep from him all these years.
Rated: Explicit 15 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 53397 Words: 52121 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Pregnancy
Type of Change: Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 02/11/16
Updated: 02/15/16
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/11/16 Title: Chapter 1: Unravel

So happy to see this. :)

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/14/16 Title: Chapter 1: Unravel

I've been wondering why this hasn't gotten much feedback (compared to other stories of this caliber). I pushed hard to bring JacksorBetter to this site, and frankly I thought there would be a lot more reviews and positive feedback. I have three theories:
1) Since this story already exists on fictionmania, most people have already read the story there.
2) The chapters are not at the optimal size. I think 500-2000 words is a good target for a chapter size on this site to ensure people will read it (the first release can be closer to 2000 words or multiple chapters because some people give instant low ratings if they feel the first release is too small).
3) Maybe it is a timing thing.
Anyway, JacksorBetter, I suppose thousands of reads is not nothing, and probably with more familiarity of how to post to this site, that basically comes from either continuing to post here or reading other stories posted here, you'll learn the tricks to becoming a top author. You've been favorited by me, that's for sure.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 02/14/16 Title: Chapter 1: Unravel

Oh another thing is that because it was marked as complete before all the chapters were posted, people didn't see updates whenever a new chapter was posted. That probably has a whole lot to do with it too.

Poor Daniel. Woke up to find his world turned sideways as his manhood is stripped from him without a trace or any sign of how it happened. Will he be able to find the source of his new X chromosome and revert it or live life as a newfound woman?
Rated: Adult 52 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 88331 Words: 38805 Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Series: None
Published: 03/02/16
Updated: 02/16/17
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/23/16 Title: Chapter 6: Over the Hump

Dani, listen carefully: just to the right of the green URL in your search result, there's a little green triangle pointing down. Click on it, then click cached. And if not, go to archive.org and paste your URL. I mean, you're good at computers, right? There's still hope!
I like this story. Here, have some stars.

Author's Response: Someone's a bit quick on the draw. ;P

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/08/16 Title: Chapter 14: Recruitment

I must be one of those people who didn't read your last chapter. Sorry about that! Maybe on the day it updated, it showed up further down in the list of simultaneous updates for that day. Luck of the draw. Anyway, I am all caught up now, and happy with the story so far. I look forward to more from you. :)

Author's Response: I do not blame people for not reading; I originally submitted this with the idea that I would receive only a fraction of the attention that it did. Thank you for your continued attention, however, as people enjoying something I write is all I could hope for in doing this!

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/16/16 Title: Chapter 10: Late Night Noise

For a writer's block chapter, the exposition in this chapter is top notch! I think it will really augment the chapters to come.

Author's Response: Well thank you; I lacked the usual flow and energy in writing that I normally have so it was a bit difficult to get though. I'm not quite sure how day 2 will go yet, so I am hoping that this won't be a continuing trend.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/20/16 Title: Chapter 11: Faded Memories

Another deserved 5 stars!

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 08/11/16 Title: Chapter 15: Delayed Sweat

Welcome back. :)

After Barry accepts a job from a mysterious client to deliver a dress, his curiosity gets the better of him, and he sneaks a peek. The lesson that some items are best not meddled with is not one he will be likely to forget in a hurry.
Rated: Adult 11 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 12861 Words: 4757 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Bride
Featured Items: Bridal Gown, Corsets, High Heels, Pantyhose, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline, Undies
Locale: Road Trip
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 03/02/16
Updated: 03/02/16
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/03/16 Title: Chapter 1: Nice Day for a White Van Man

As a counter point to what Aura said in their comment, I kind of wish the story kept going, because your writing up until the end was really on point and I wanted to see some additional mental change on his way to his destination, getting out at a gas station and getting stares and having a brief interaction with a man and how that affected him. I no longer find a story appealing once the protagonist fully becomes female and no longer feels conflicted about it, but there was still a lot more you could have done. All that being said, it is your story, and you chose to end it that way, so that in itself is not a fault, I'm just stating my preference.
One more thing I'd disagree with Aura, not to contradict but so that you know your audience is not all represented by their review, is the statement of "I like the descriptiveness you give without being too explicit". For the record, I didn't find what you wrote to be going out of its way to avoid being explicit, and if you chose to be more explicit, I would certainly be ok with it. :)
Great story, I am definitely sticking around for the next thing you write. Good luck.

Author's Response: Thanks for your comments. Although I have chosen to end this story at this point, you will be glad to know that I've got other stories in the pipeline with both male/female interactions and more explicit elements. Hopefully I should have one ready for you soon!

A wife, desperate for some satisfaction in her marriage, calls on a unique marriage counselor to help her husband understand her needs. Only where will this understanding lead? And how will it change them?
Rated: Explicit 39 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 100789 Words: 28862 Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Clothing, Husband, Wife
Featured Items: Lingerie, Undies
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Dared into It
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 03/04/16
Updated: 03/20/16
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/16/16 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 : Working with a Vagina

Good chapter, nice direction of story, 5 stars!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the comment...and the rating too!

Mark's ex takes an extreme revenge. Mark fights back. Or tries to.
Rated: Adult 8 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 56087 Words: 7931 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo, Teenager
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Revenge
Personality: Fights Change
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 03/27/16
Updated: 04/07/16
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/28/16 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I can't make up my mind as to how to review this story, despite there being a lot I want to say. So... I think I won't. I'll just leave the first two chapters uncritiqued and make up my mind about you in later chapters and later stories. But as a gesture towards having enjoyed the story nonetheless, and you being a new author, I'll give you 5 stars. Welcome to the world of authorship.

Two teenage boys find a strange medallion one day while being out in the forest. This is the story of how the two learn about the medallion’s powers and about themselves (in ways they never thought to be possible) as they grow up to young adults.
Rated: Adult 18 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 273407 Words: 111180 Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/14/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - My uninteresting life (so far)

I don't have much to say other than you're a great writer. Think you might write something more explicit in the future? I see you have the chops for it in the moments in the story when you hint at it (especially early on, like the waking up to spooning and an erection). Your writing style combined with something more explicit would be really up my alley.

Author's Response: I tried keeping this novel clean of such happenings since I'm not inteterested in writing eroticism. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 04/15/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - My uninteresting life (so far)

Yeah, it's on me. I never really thought about it until just now, that Adult (R on fictionmania) is a non-explicit version of Explicit (X on fictionmania). I always thought Adult would mean there would be some happy happy fun time. Most of my friends in the TG fiction world like to write non-explicit stories, and I always found that weird because that's all I care about. For me the best stories are the ones I visit for the really nice sex scenes, but stay because they weave in some plot and I'm like "aw man, now I've gotta read the rest of the story to see what happens next."
But I'm happy to encourage you to write the kind of story you want to write. Perhaps it doesn't line up with my preference, but with over 25k reads, you certainly have some who must be fans already (just that most people lurking on this site like to keep quiet).
Best of luck!

Author's Response: Thank you. I added the "Adult" tag because there was some minor violence, Roger hitting Rick for example, which I couldn't see as Kid-friendly. Sorry if my reasoning was inaccurate.

Carl's all about freedom in a world that isn't. In the near future, communications are constantly monitored, except in The Construct, accessible via VR technology to anybody savvy enough to know about it. This place is an essential part of Carl, until one day, new and rather unusual safety measures are implemented and will change his life fundamentally.
Rated: Deviant 8 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 32053 Words: 26329 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/24/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Illusion

Chapter 2 and I'm still with you. As I said, the bimbo stuff is not my thing, but I love the mental stuff. My favorite part is where you said "Perhaps, just for today, you should cut down on remembering a little". Nice subtle line. :)

Author's Response: If I can keep people pleased who aren't even into the fetish, I'm feeling pretty good about the result =D Thank you!

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/15/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Illusion

I like the second person perspective. Not more than first or third, just that it makes it different. Your transformations are a bit over the top, at least they were in Chocker Change, but in this story, at least so far, it hasn't been so extreme that I can't see the hotness of it, like the lip touching and mental changes.

I had to suspect a lot of disbelief for the blowjob and subsequent reactions to it, it just didn't seem to make sense. At first I suspected he was the agent of change to explain his behaviour, but then you seem to explain it otherwise, and I can't buy that.

I get that you have a pretty strong fetish for over the top degradation and bimbofication, to the point where it seems like you're being cruel to your main characters. So I'm not really your target audience, but I do hope to continue to find things I find hot in your stories to come. I look forward to chapter 2.

Author's Response: Thank you for your very balanced review! Uncommon formats are always interesting =D Happy to hear the perspective hasn't bothered you much. Transformations are quite severe, yes, but I think they're still pretty moderate compared to things I've seen around the internet lol. OCD will most likely be more tame than Choker Change, as far as I recall what I've planned for the remainder of the story. Sorry that you didn't find that scene too believable. I guess I can see your point there. I can't really answer to your suspicions, since confirming or denying anything and putting spoilers in the review section would be kinda bad, and perhaps you wouldn't like that either. I wouldn't say that my fetish is over the top compared to others, but I see that tgstorytime tends to have a higher amount of consensual and voluntary TF/TG stories than others. I would also contest that it's not really about degradation/humiliation and more of a submissive/forced preference. In that respect, I'm guilty as charged, and it's true that my protagonists do not get off lightly. Sadly, I don't see that changing anytime soon, I doubt that a consensual, happy story written by me would be very enjoyable. If you want to chat some more, and you said you played Choker Change, always feel free to PM me there, or post in the forum thread, it's a much better way of talking about things and relaying suggestions (if that's what you want, of course). And I just want to say that I'm surprised that you had a couple of gripes with the story, yet gave it 5 stars. I won't hold it against you if you give a less-than-perfect score to represent your opinion on the story =D

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 04/15/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Illusion

Thanks for your response. As for why I gave you 5 stars, everyone chooses their own reasons for why they give stars. For me, 5 stars is "you're good as you are and I hope you write more". 4 stars is "I feel the story is maybe headed in the wrong direction". I don't give lower ratings. I might give 1 star to a story I feel should be banned from the site, but that's never happened yet.

Some guys will do anything to land the girl of their dreams. But when it seems that girl prefers other girls, who would go that far?
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 94068 Words: 9692 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Sex Toys
Locale: Office
Body Modification: Breast Implants, Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Tricked, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: Dissolving Men
Published: 04/19/16
Updated: 04/27/16
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/25/16 Title: Chapter 5: New Hobby

Good stuff, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 04/20/16 Title: Chapter 1: Bottom's Up!

I read in the shoutout section someone 1 stared all your stories. I gave them 5 stars so now they're at 3 stars each I guess, but I think it sucks that you got 1 stared because you didn't deserve it. I for one definitely look forward to your ambitious 4 parallel stories. :)

Two roommates: both with secret cross-dressing pasts. When one decides to convert the other without his knowledge, will he end up with the sex toy he wants?
Rated: Explicit 14 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 205857 Words: 32298 Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo, Slave
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Sex Toys
Motivation for Change: Tricked, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Comedy, Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: Dissolving Men
Published: 04/19/16
Updated: 09/17/19
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/05/16 Title: Chapter 18: Blowing it With Mr Wonderful

I know you end up punishing your characters in the end, but those few paragraphs where Nora is trying to convince Mike she likes boys, before the blowjob, that's some good, solid stuff.

Author's Response: Thanks. Actually, I noticed that too many of my posted stories include revenge. Geez, I just seem a little bitter or deranged! While I do think that makes for a fun story, it's not all that common in what I've been writing. I'm nearly done editing my all-time favorite (and longest) and it has none. Anyway, thank you for the kind words.

A crazy night on the town leaves Charles with a killer headache and a drunken mistake on his lower back. A mistake that ends up changing his life forever.
Rated: Explicit 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 7577 Words: 510 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, Lingerie, Sex Toys, Undies
Locale: Office
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Stuck
Series: None
Published: 04/20/16
Updated: 04/20/16
Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 04/20/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice start, looking forward to more.

A misunderstanding can change A man's life forever if he's not careful. Unfortunately, Fred wasn't careful enough.
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 49777 Words: 22795 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: None
Turned Into: Adult, Bride, Daughter, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Bikinis, Breast Forms, High Heels, Long Nails
Locale: Family Household
Body Modification: Ears Pierced, Extreme Breast Enlargement, Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: In Hiding, Undercover, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Hormonal
Series: None
Published: 04/24/16
Updated: 07/05/16
Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 04/24/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Fred ask's for help with his identity problem

As one person who edits without word wrap to another, you might want to edit your chapter so there aren't all those unnecessary line breaks. :)

How powerful can hypnosis be? This story tests the limits when a woman seeks revenge against a young womanizer, turning him into the sort of bimbo he seems to prefer. But maybe it's not quite what she expects in the end...
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 169489 Words: 17735 Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Breast Forms, Gaff, High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Pantyhose
Body Modification: Breast Implants, Ears Pierced, Vocal Surgery
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime, Revenge
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Type: Includes Images
Type of Change: Hypnosis, Mind Control, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 05/04/16
Updated: 05/11/16
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/08/16 Title: Chapter 3: Phase One

I like the way chapter 3 ends, particularly how you introduced the "men" to the end of "eager to please". Very subtle but effective.

Alex is just an ordinary man when he undergoes an experiment which he has no memory of.
How long until he realizes what is happening, and how will he react. His life is about to change forever.
Rated: Explicit 7 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 41861 Words: 2978 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 06/06/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Experiment XX (Week 1 Saturday)

Heh, no worries. As you may have seen, I've abandoned my own story for the time being, so I completely get it.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/11/16 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Gym (Week 1 Tuesday)

It goes without saying that of course I'd love this story. :P
5 stars!

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 05/15/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Experiment XX (Week 1 Saturday)

I hope you're still planning on working on this story. I really enjoy seeing your interpretation of this narrative.

Author's Response: I am trying to make time for it but I'm undergoing some family issues so I will be back asap

Matt and Dan have to deal with the wishes Dan had made one drunk night as they try and find a way to make Matt a man again
Rated: Adult 8 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 31763 Words: 6291 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Cheerleader, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, Undies
Locale: College, Office
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement, Lips Plumped, Vocal Surgery
Motivation for Change: Accident, Forced
Personality: Fights Change, Good to Bad, Loses Identity, Made Dumber
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Humiliation, Sports
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 05/16/16
Updated: 06/13/16
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/16/16 Title: Chapter 1: Day 0 & Day 1

Look forward to the future chapters.

Michael lived a simple life. Single, a full-time job, never had things ever been better for him. That was until a sexually driven wizard came into his life, cursing him into a girl with a body designed and addicted to sex.
Rated: Explicit 42 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 226764 Words: 114419 Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo, Fantasy Character, Girlfriend, Stripper
Featured Items: Lingerie, Undies
Locale: Strip Club
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement, Permanent Cosmetics, Permanent Hair/Skin/Nail Change, Vaginal Alteration
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Humiliation
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Bodily Functions, Bondage/S&M, Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 06/05/16
Updated: 05/11/17
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/27/16 Title: Chapter 42: An Invitation

Looking forward to more.

Sacha tried to cover his curvy hips all his life. But now he's agreed to break in a pair of women's designer jeans for his roommate. Those jeans are going to take this special young man on a journey.
Rated: Explicit 130 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 592876 Words: 71901 Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Pantyhose
Body Modification: Breast Implants
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Tricked, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Coming of Age
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 06/11/16
Updated: 08/23/17
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/16/16 Title: Chapter 5: Male Influence

Nice setup for the upcoming chapters.

Author's Response: Thank you. I love the a detailed foundation but I know it can take patience and I worry about losing the reader in the process.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/18/16 Title: Chapter 7: My Collientis

That's a shame. As I mentioned before, the setup is great. I'll be here when you come back to post the next chapter.

Successful neither at your career nor at love, nothing exciting or uplifting ever happens in your life. When a strange dream gives you powers over your body that you had never thought possible, you fail to realise the potential danger that comes with them.
Rated: Deviant 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 122287 Words: 18195 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/18/16 Title: Chapter 3: Day 3 - The Girl

The story on a whole isn't my thing, but I'll give 5 stars for the two passages in the first 8 paragraphs of the third chapter where thoughts are first interrupted by the subliminals. That was very well executed.

Author's Response: Thanks for being here again and thanks for the review :) That part is actually my favourite too, and it's a little different in the original version. If you want to give it a look, there's a pdf download for free on my profile. You can choose between MEGA, Google Drive and Mediafire. It's just a little formatting quirk but I think it's even better there. Give it a try if you want, and thanks once again!

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 06/19/16 Title: Chapter 1: Day 1 - The Dream

Indeed, the formatting is a nice touch. You did well within the limitations on this site though, by hearing the quotes interwoven with the internal dialogue, and the mention of the headphones, it is obvious that there is a continuous audio loop being played in Alex's ears. Many authors would either miss the mark, or be super literal and explicit (not sexually explicit, I mean the common dictionary definition of explicit).

An intergalactic gun runner, on a six month mission, makes a serious mistake. A gritty sci-fi noir, with space debauchery, bisexual escapades, and weird alien sex.
Rated: Explicit 141 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 177062 Words: 111268 Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 08/02/16 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Logan's Fun

"With rough palms." :)

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/27/16 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Adjustments

Crossdressing is not my thing, but you made me really like it in this chapter. That's some good writing, well deserving of 5 stars.

Author's Response: Thanks. That's the kind of encouragement I really need right now.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/28/16 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: [XXX] Buffin the...

You write erotic passages very well.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/31/16 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: {XXX] Sun Dress and Sucking Dick

I don't like to give five stars on every chapter of a story, because I don't want to spam ratings, but with this story, I seem to be doing just that. You're guiding this story great, keep it up.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/28/16 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Father

Nice chapter. :)

Two (mostly) harmless goofballs blunder into some sort of secret government experiment. With the help of a friend, they just begin to become comfortable with their new situation, when they are thrown a curve ball....and another.....and another.
Rated: Explicit 59 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 120128 Words: 23864 Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: High Heels, Undies
Locale: Strip Club
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 08/31/16
Updated: 11/21/16
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/17/16 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Moist Attitude Adjustment

I've had a dry spell on this site with stories that really played to my tastes, but I think I found something in your story. Great writing, and great story so far. I'll be reading every update from now on for sure. Five stars!

Author's Response: I'm so glad that one of my fantasies pleases you, too.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 09/17/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Lovable but Goofy Friends

Roadbandit: "I know where you are going!"
You: "Betcha don't."
Me: uh-oh hehe. This could either be good or bad. :P

Author's Response: We'll all know very soon, won't we? Heh heh heh

Humans are wiped out of existence by a powerful terrorist group. After being in cryo-sleep for 500 years Michael Stuart must come to terms that his life has been changed
Rated: Adult 53 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 84180 Words: 38289 Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Child
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Fights Change
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Torture
Series: None
Published: 09/01/16
Updated: 08/05/19
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/25/16 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Evacuation

Yup, you hooked me pre-transformation. Quite the accomplishment.

Author's Response: thank you, I have a ton of ideas for this story that will go into the next two chapters before the transformation. I hope you enjoy them just as much. Olivia

I just want to write a story I'd like that I don't get to see much of. Maybe you'll like it, maybe not.... But I thought it was good enough to post.
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 7567 Words: 3911 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Boyfriend
Locale: College
Body Modification: Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Women
Type of Change: Primarily Female to Male
Series: None
Published: 10/22/16
Updated: 11/02/16
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/23/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Pretty good!

Waking up one day as a woman, a man attempts to come to grips with what's happened to him, all while trying to understand who or what has done this to him? And WHY?
Rated: Explicit 13 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 152765 Words: 35572 Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Hormonal
Series: None
Published: 02/06/17
Updated: 05/02/17
Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 02/06/17 Title: Chapter 7: Release (2011-12-20)

Hey, I gave you a 5 star rating before, but didn't leave a message. Just wanted to say based on this story, I look forward to reading more from you. I'll go ahead and read your other stories now. Keep up the writing.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback.

Mark Lieger has always tried to follow the rules of a responsible drug pusher. Throughout high school he's sold everything from Heroin to Hormones, the latter leading to a haunting memory of a boy-changing-girl by Mark's own hand.

Now, in college he hopes to start anew, take a bit of a break and keep his addictions – including the perverse ones – under control. But immersed among one of the largest campus LGBT communities, flooded with opportunities to sell all of his old drugs – and some new ones, he chances upon a new hormone replacement drug called 'P'.

Suddenly Mark is in the fast lane of a new kind of drug push but no longer in the drivers seat. The spread of the new drug threatens to break down his carefully managed willpower and open up a world of obsession and addiction. All he can do is write down the stories he finds most interesting and ride out the trip.
Rated: Explicit 25 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 102294 Words: 59240 Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/31/17 Title: Chapter 13: I Should Know Who I Am By Now: Calling out Winter

Basically the only story right now I look forward to new chapters. And as a bonus it is multiple chapters released at a time.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 02/13/17 Title: Chapter 1: High School Drug Pusher: A Prologue

Welcome back. :) Look forward to the upcoming chapters.

Author's Response: Alexis is stuck on ch. 53, you need to write more too ;)

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 02/18/17 Title: Chapter 1: High School Drug Pusher: A Prologue

Hah, yeah Alexis is probably dead for good. I do have a new story that I've been working on for over half a year... I'm not sharing it until I consider it sharable, and maybe that's never. :)

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/18/17 Title: Chapter 2: The Effects of Hormones on a Curious Boy: An Experiment

Yup, you're one skilled author. The physical descriptions, the mental ones too, the gradualism, the reveal, the corruption, all the elements are there. I know to always look forward to any chapter you write.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/06/17 Title: Chapter 5: The Trial with an Unsuspecting Subject: Video Evidence

Your writing stands out as having its own flavour. I feel I could choose a story at random and know if you wrote it or not. It's a great flavour btw.
When I come about good writing, as I do with good anything, I can't help but try to reverse engineer it and figure out what it is that appeals to me. I even do it with my own writing: I don't like everything I write, but I do like some of it, and to try to understand what about it I like, that's my path to being more consistent, which I guess is my goal.
The comedic, less sensual way of describing a move you often do in your writing is, first establishing the potential, then the inevitability, then leading along with a series of micro changes, and then BANG someone lost patience and now the transformation is complete. Like fishing. What can I say, it works.
You can go on forever with micro change after micro change, but that's more literature than erotic writing. At the same time a story can just start with a huge change, but then its over before you know it. No, a good shock to your reader goes a long way, but first you have to lull them into a slow rhythm, the way tension builds in a suspenseful movie.
I have much more to absorb from you yet. The closer I get to understanding how to write to my satisfaction, the more I'll be able to share the stuff I write. And in the last year there's almost no authors I enjoy anymore (I wonder if that's just that I'm getting older and less easy to please), but I still really enjoy whenever you post stuff.

Author's Response: That's high praise, surely more than I deserve. With Pusser the story started as a very simple idea, and guiltily I am back to my 'pill' trope (though it fits into the UR21 universe). I've found most readers of the TG genre either like more concrete, realistic situations or quick "poof!" stroke stories. So I'm often afraid my style (which tends to split the two) doesn't have much of a place. I like your fishing analogy however. Indeed, I've teased in this story more than any other I've ever written. This slows down the beginning, but there are a number of "lures" there which should make for a pretty frantic ending.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/14/17 Title: Chapter 1: High School Drug Pusher: A Prologue

Great job! Happy to read as always. :)

Author's Response: As a fan, I'm actually kind of curious to see how you feel this one stacks up against the others.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 04/14/17 Title: Chapter 1: High School Drug Pusher: A Prologue

I'm going through my own thing, shifting desires as I get older, so it is a lot harder to really hook me in general. Whereas a couple of years ago there was almost something I liked on this site every day, now I am lucky if it is once a month. It might be partially the stories on the site's fault, but I think it is also my own self, either age or some mental block. Btw, further context since you're curious at this point: I'm 32 years old; for all I know you may be older but feel a lot younger than I do; I also surround myself with a lot of older people, and they certainly complain a lot about their age, so it has an effect on me.
Wow, what a way to start a review.
I'll compare to Girl Unraveled because to me that's the one that I like to come back to. I think you nailed that story particularly in the first 3 or so chapters. I *really* enjoyed it because it was the first time I read a story, not about a guy becoming a girl, but about a girl who had every reason to think she was a boy until recently. Well now that I word it out, I have seen that story line in the past. But I will say that what was really good about it is that it cleanly separated out the homosexual aspects of this fetish by making the story about a girl, so right off the bat I was mentally connecting to her as I would with a girl, not a guy who is not a girl yet, and I thought that was a clever way to distill the best aspects of the fetish (I can't speak for everyone, just for how I come at this fetish).
You also capture innocence well, and this is where I'll make the first mention of this story. This story features a drug dealer, and I appreciate the realistic way you talk about drug dealing, not glorifying it but not making it sound too harsh either. And the way he approaches it, strict rules and a lot of research, taking responsibility (at least initially) for what he's pushing, I can really relate to that. For all I know you may have picked some elements of this story up from Breaking Bad, but I never watched the show so I would appreciate it as though any idea were new. (Also, I imagine Mark is a small fry compared to that show.) I'm about 50/50 convinced that you were a dealer at some point, so that's a big compliment to your writing style. I'm saying it was very authentic, and even living an experience does not mean you can always convincingly put it into words.
But to what I was saying, even this guy who is a drug dealer, so you have to assume he has an unvarnished world view, when it comes to discovering this new aspect of himself, both the desire to see others get transformed, as well as his own inevitable downfall, you do a good job of portraying the novelty of it. For me, TG stuff is all about novelty. Well, really all forms of erotica and porn. I need to be shocked into finding something hot, because I see something I've never seen before. In this story, there were two bits that I really liked, and I wonder if you can guess them before reading further. They are the 3 videos (video #1 for sure), and the diary entry at the beginning of the Video 3 chapter, which has a much different voice than the rest of the story. It reminds me of when I had a conversation with a girl who shared a TG fetish and asked her about the nature of it, and when I used the word "corruption", she was like "yessss".
In real life I am a 100% logical guy. Logical all the time, except for when I escape it in these stories. I'd assume you're the same, because if you're not, you're way too good at writing characters who are. But what's great is breaking through that defense in such a person. It's particularly interesting because they have such strong defenses. There's a code to crack, maybe one that has never been cracked their whole lives, but then just the right trigger gets their eyes to dilate and their cheeks to flush and then the brain is now operating in a completely different mode, one driven by a single purpose: to reach an orgasm. The mind might think it is the same mind, but it's not, its dial is turned to another setting and while the conscious mind is an observer, it largely is taking its orders from a different part of the brain, much like the feeling of nodding off before sleep, but a lot less overt. There is no pleasant way (except the obvious one) out of this mode, and it will nag at you as though you were hungry and haven't eaten all day, until you fill that purpose. That's the deal. You orgasm, you have fulfilled your copulating instinct, you get your logic and rationality back. And we rely heavily in modern society on building big defenses, sort of a kind of "house training", so we only allow ourselves to open up to the possibility of exploring this alternate mode when we're at home, alone or with a loved one, in total privacy.
Your stories do that with your characters. When the story starts, they are one way, been that way their whole lives, it is consistent, reliable, routine and they know how it all works. but now we're joining them just as something is coming in to throw a wrench into things. They will need to discover a new side to themselves, and realize that this new side is way better than anything they had ever seen before, to the point that it can cause the giggles over the absurdity of it. But they have a modesty about it, where they want to keep it secret, thinking they can handle it on their own, that it never has to escape their own knowledge or control. All while the problem gets worse and worse, until it gets better and better.
I am of the opinion that the secret to a great story is a great premise. I've loved plenty of stories with spelling mistakes and mediocre grammar. I always stop to notice when an author appreciates the minds of those who would come to a site like TG storytime, but try to show them a different narrative than they're used to hearing. Maybe not everyone will love it, but others will think it is the greatest thing ever. I can appreciate that about your stories. You don't play it safe. You stand out and it is very rewarding for me as a reader.
This review was a total disaster, perhaps. I hope it holds some value for you, that I just went total stream of consciousness on you. The important thing to know is this: I appreciate the effort it takes to write a story, I love that you wrote this story, and I will always look forward to future stories.
Enjoy your day.

Kaden's new 'Disease' is getting worse every day. How will he deal with the new effects, and will he find a way to reverse it before it's too late?
Rated: Adult 7 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 34376 Words: 1018 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/19/17 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

I tend to like these stories, of incremental changes where the protagonist can barely keep up with their changes, and how quickly they get used to them. I look forward to more updates. Presumably from the title there's a point where you'll lose me, but I'm guessing I'll enjoy the early chapters.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 02/22/17 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

I know there's no way to comment to another commenter on this site, but even sci-fi stories stretch the imagination. I leave it at the author's discretion to decide how believable they'll make a transformation, and at the reader's imagination of whether or not they buy it. One trick I employ is to always assume every story takes place in a universe where such changes are really easy. Like how superheroes get exposed to toxic waste and get super powers. Obviously in real life that's not at all the case. You gotta give a little leeway to the storytelling. As for going forward as an author, the solution to this kind of criticism is hand-waving. Oh, it's just some special cocktail no one has discovered yet until now, and it just so happens to do what I need it to do for the story to move forward. I'll forgive an author for not going into "frequent visits to the bathroom" to explain the bulk loss, since that's a detail that just brings the story down. So anyway, while 930310's criticism is fair for their own criteria, it shouldn't be representative I feel of most people on this site who give a lot more leeway to authors, and I think giving 2 stars 3 times is a bit harsh.

A group of young men and women are diagnosed with the mysterious Tiresias Syndrome, which causes their bodies to change to those of the opposite sex. There's a 50% chance that in two weeks they'll turn back to normal, if not they'll remain that way for the rest of their lives.
Rated: Adult 83 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 132268 Words: 75879 Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: Camp, Hospital or Clinic, Office
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 03/10/17
Updated: 10/09/18
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/30/18 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Their Stories

I abandoned your story a while ago, I forget why, maybe I didn't get hooked. But that was undeserved, I probably read it too fast. Upon second reading it is pretty darn good. I am currently on this chapter, so I'm not fully caught up, but I have to say with Ellen and Blake's own stories, not only is what you wrote original (the boiling water analogy, and the pieces that broke off and mingled), but also hot as hell. So before I proceeded with the following chapters, I wanted to make sure to punctuate this chapter with a well-deserved 5-star rating.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! The opening chapters, I think, are the weakest part of the story for a variety of reasons, chiefly because I was still finding my "voice" in my writing at that point, if you know what I mean. I appreciate that you gave my story a second chance, and I'm glad you're enjoying it thus far! I hope you continue to read and enjoy future chapters!

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 06/16/18 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Complexity of Us

What ever happened to this story? :)

Reviewer: ubougie Signed
Date: 10/10/18 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: The Two Week Coin Toss

Thanks for the story. Had some top-tier moments that I appreciated very much.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it

Ash "the Flash" Johnson was an average kid. Went to school, played football, wanted to get into a career writing webcomics and teaching history eventually. His daily routine consisted of getting up, getting dressed going to school, and going home. He was so entrenched in his routine that there were some things he simply didn't notice.
Rated: Adult 32 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 110665 Words: 41140 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Jock
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men, Changes to be Attracted Only to Women
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: The Curse Universe
Published: 05/18/17
Updated: 08/28/19
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/30/17 Title: Chapter 1: Day One

Amazing, 5 stars, greatly looking forward to the next chapter.

James becomes the unwitting subject of an experimental and mysterious drug.
Rated: Explicit 44 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 205644 Words: 20987 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Sex Toys, Undies
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Female Domination, Forced, Tricked, Unknown
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive, Made Dumber
Story Theme: Humiliation, Medical Experiment, Romance
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Warnings: Bondage/S&M
Series: None
Published: 06/09/17
Updated: 12/22/18
Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/24/17 Title: Chapter 3: Second Vial

Great work! I am applying five stars on my favorite chapter so far. I look forward to more updates!

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