Rks
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Sam has been looking forward to his summer holiday away with his big sister and her friends all year. But when a subtle mistake turns Sam into the opposite gender he must decide whether to let it ruin his holiday or embrace his new appearance.
Rated: Explicit 211 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 574480 Words: 92080 Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: Bikinis, Curlers, High Heels, Undies
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Humiliation
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 08/14/14
Updated: 12/15/15
Reviewer: Rks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/06/15 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Not a Date

Oh my god, the teasing is real! How can you handle this? I want to see the expected, but no, Sam is unshakable, the character remains true to itself, and that's great! It makes it all so much more believable, and the building expectation, to see how, when and why Sam gives in, and every little piece of feminization that Sam allows to pass makes the reading and the teasing so enjoyable.
You deserve a congratulation on your patience alone, I'd be itching to make Sam "just fall". You though, are not taking the easy road, you're taking the right one!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. what a pleasant review. really appreciate it. The slow pace and the teasing is exactly why I am enjoying the story also. The believable and slow feminization is what makes this story a true joy to write. I am excited to work my way through Sams story but I'm in no rush to get to the end as each beat is just as exciting to write. Working on the next chapter now. Glad your enjoying it and hope you keep on enjoying it.

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Date: 07/21/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Brit girls

I'm always impressed with how much I enjoy this story. I guess you really have a good hand to put just the right amount of spice in each chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks. I just write what I love and it makes me happy that a lot of you out there love the same as me. Its made it a real pleasure to write. It's the first story I've written that I haven't run into writers block, it just flows so well. I hope you carry on enjoying it, thanks for the review. xx

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Date: 08/01/15 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: A Desired man

hum, I see how this can really be a favor.
Actually i think you could go either way from here. Sam could, with his own disappointment, realise that he actually feels something for David, or David's disappointment could show that he didn't see Sam just a buddy, and that Sam really wouldn't be interested in something like that. It's not difficult to guess which one i prefer, but i'm really not sure what you have in mind, but again, following the realistic behavior you've been giving Sam, this is probably the best way to make the first scenario happen.
As a side note, i've always read the story thinking that in the end Sam would be male, but after rereading the first chapter i noticed that you can't really be sure. With all the information given so far i'm not really sure if it would make much sense for the transformation to be permanent, but i guess it would be possible (and depending how, i would like to see that :p ). I wonder what you think about it.

Author's Response: Interesting thoughts and I love to hear speculation on what's to come. I have this story all planned out in my head and love to see peoples reactions as it unfolds each step of the way. I don't want to spoil anything but i am carrying on with the realistic approach to Sam's behavior but also steering it in a way that is going to be very enjoyable also. The first chapter was indeed a puzzle and it won't make full sense till the last. Glad your enjoying the story and thanks for the lengthy comment. You will find out soon enough the answers to your thoughts. xxx

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Date: 09/21/15 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: At Home in my skin

I love to see these moments between Sam and David. It also made me happy to see Sam's acceptance, and seeing herself naturally as a girl. At the end I felt that I want more, and even though you seem to have been uploading more frequently, I can't wait for the next one. It seems so close to have those answers.
I don't want to pressure you, but i have to admit, you made me build such high expectations that I'm a little afraid of getting disappointed as it often happens when I'm too excited about something. But don't worry or rush anything, your creative work have been great and I trust your pace and your plans gonna make an excellent story.

Author's Response: I understand how you feel. How many times have I read an exciting book or watched an interesting film and been completely disappointed by the ending. I hope this story doesn't do that to you. I have had an idea of where the story should go ever since i write the first few lines. The story has grown and changed in the writing but i believe the ending will be satisfying for all. Thanks for the review and I'm glad your enjoying the story and the characters. I would say the story is in the last third now and will be getting closer and closer to the climax with each new chapter. Thanks for reading! xx

Sexy alien Sunstanna arrive's on earth to study human habit's. Unfortunately the man who first contacted her had given up waiting so instead she must find someone to assist her in her alien shenanigans. Armed with 'Space Magic' she sets out to fulfil her check list.
Rated: Deviant 83 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 110768 Words: 82329 Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Rks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/27/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Even though i've found the surgery scene somewhat funny and enjoyable, at first it seemed a way too cheap to shove some tags and not as convincing as the others (you try to keep our expectations low, but the results have been really good so far).
However on the last chapter you showed that you may have some plans for Dr Fashion after all, and if you could find a convincing way to connect the two plot lines, this could actually be a good adition to the story.
Based on what i've read from you before, i think you may just do it.
I'm not really into reviewing, but i thought i could add my two cents.

Author's Response: It was a cheap way to shove in some tags :) But it's somehow turned into an important plot point and a good opportunity to tie off a loose end. Thanks for the thoughts.

I had been a slave to the Qharr nearly my entire life, but one fateful day everything changed. I joined up with a group of rebels, and through a twist of fate, no one could have ever foreseen, I became the woman I am today...
Rated: Adult 46 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 73265 Words: 232807 Chapters: 72 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Accident, Forced
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: The Earth Source Universe
Published: 04/16/15
Updated: 02/24/16
Reviewer: Rks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/03/15 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter Five

The relationship between Lily and Lexa is so interesting! Both are former males, now in a female body,while one feels more comfortable in this new form while the other would prefer to stay in male form. It makes me wonder if Lexa would assume a more "manly" role in the relationship or would get used to her new body and embrace femininity. And it without mentioning the symbionts, mother and daughter "watching" and in a way participating in it all from the first row.
I'm enjoying all aspects of the story so far, very nice job!

Author's Response: It's funny you should say that because the original plan was for Lexa to end up with Strave and he'd fall in love with her for real and reform his womanising ways. I ended up killing him off because I needed for someone to be a traitor and frankly I disliked his character's personality. Personality-wise Lily is about as different from Strave from any of the other characters and I thought she would be an interesting character to pair up with Lexa. I wondered if anyone would ever comment on the K'teth being witness to their hosts lovemaking. In one of the earlier drafts of the story I did put a conversation in between Lexa and Khala about it, but the whole thing came off as just a little bit creepy and I ended up cutting the whole thing. Thank you for your comment. It made my day! :D

Reviewer: Rks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/21/15 Title: Chapter 1: Resistance: Cover

WOW I did not see any of this coming.
the possibility for Lexa become Jelfree again, the communications arrays are actually ships, what happens to Kaya, specially when she's pregnant, Harold is alive...
The only thing I guessed right is Duvak's new hairstyle.

It took me a while to come back and read the new chapters, but now I can't wait to see how the great showdown between Lexa and Duvak will unfold. On one side, Duvak should be much stronger, on the other he may be unfamiliar with habilities. Still I hope it's not the final encounter.

Author's Response: Thank you, I always strive to make my stories hard to predict so it's nice to hear when I'm successful.

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Date: 06/23/15 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter Four

And at this point I guess I'll just give up on my predictions, I keep getting they all wrong.

On the 6th paragraph of this last chapters you mention Kaya, wasn't it suppose to be anyone else? Maybe Becca?

Anyway still very nice so far.

Author's Response: As much as I love making a story unpredictable, please keep at it. I love seeing people's predictions. You'd be surprised how many are similar to some of the ideas I had. This story could have turned out much differently had I chosen any one of them.

Reviewer: Rks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/29/15 Title: Chapter 1: Resistance: Cover

I liked the choice of transformation Lexa did, i too think a female version of himself is a better form to live than the former, mixed with Mara. I'm not sure if it went by your mind, but i thought that if Lexa would have turned into a female version of Jelfree from the begining, maybe Becca could've recognized her (?) even though i don't think i would imagine that a woman i just met was actually my long lost brother in disguise just because she resembles him. Anyway, i think that form had a purpose and i think you found a nice way and reason to change it now.
The suspense around the choice of the transformation was nice, but i got a little annoyed by Lexa's behavior about it, but it seems the others characters got just as anoyed, and it too was a nice touch.

about Mara and Harold, i guess you hinted how is possible for they to be around, but i won't theorize much about it.

The fatal act of a good Samaritan leads to a new life and a new chance to make a difference in the world. There's just one thing: Geoffrey West asked for an upgrade, and the upgrade has a steep learning curve.
Rated: Adult 22 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 31010 Words: 11688 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Teenager
Locale: Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Cultural/Nationality Change, Made Smarter
Story Theme: Second Childhood
Type of Change: Age Regression, Mechanical Device
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 05/09/15
Updated: 05/13/15
Reviewer: Rks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/14/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. The Road to Hell

Loved it, count on me to follow it in case you continue the story!

Author's Response: Thank you, Rks! There will definitely be more to come!

The second story of Rachel Montoya, an American teenager in Europe who used to be an old man in California. She meets new friends in school, comes to terms with her sexuality, helps a TG classmate, and hides from a hired killer while still finding time to study for exams.
Rated: Adult 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 13371 Words: 11752 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Boyfriend, Daughter, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Sex Toys
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Romance
Warnings: Death, Torture
Series: None
Published: 05/15/15
Updated: 05/22/15
Reviewer: Rks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/24/15 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8. On the Road to Babylon - Second half.

This chapter got me a little confused, I felt like i had skipped some paragraph and some development between Rachel and Abbie on the first half, and even got back to check. Actually i really found something that i had forgotten, but still felt like it was missing something.
Anyway besides that i'm still liking how you write and how the story goes very, very much. Very nice job, keep it up!

Author's Response: Hi, Rks. Yeah, this is a little quick. I had to accelerate things between Rachel and Abbie in order to sink it with the other plot. You didn't miss anything, I just messed up. If I were to do this again, I'd time things better. This is entirely my bad. I had a choice between carrying on, or going back and rewriting previous chapters. Sorry!

It was just an ordinary day watching the game with my best bro. It didn't stay that way for long.
Rated: Explicit 7 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 13344 Words: 5775 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Girlfriend, Wife
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Comedy, Fan Fiction, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 07/23/15
Updated: 07/24/15
Reviewer: Rks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/30/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice story. i've never heard of this universe before but seems quite nice, and most importantly you created a very nice scenario for that entry, writen in a very enjoyable way. It made me wonder even if I can find any more material writen by you somewhere else.
Nice job.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm planning on putting some other stories up here as well as porting some old ones over... eventually.

What secrets could you hold back from an irresistible woman?
Rated: Explicit 18 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 39300 Words: 24648 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Female Domination, Willing or Voluntary
Series: None
Published: 08/27/15
Updated: 10/14/15
Reviewer: Rks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/10/15 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wait,what?! Now I am intrigued
Nice job

In the distant future the mythological races are returning. But they aren't exactly what we would have expected. How far would you go to help one of them if you didn't have any other choice?
Rated: Explicit 95 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 200582 Words: 55422 Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Rks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/08/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm so happy for have you back! I don't usually make myself noticed, but I need to say how happy I'm right now.
Just like some others have said, I have read this story a couple of times and was wondering if you'd ever come back, how much I enjoyed it and how sad it had been when you stopped you posting spree back in the day.
By the way, even though this is one of my favorite unfinished stories (ever), I'm also very curious about your other works.
I'd like to express how sorry I'm for the losses you may have been through, and wish for better days.
As for the new chapter, a great continuation, just like I hoped for.
A kiss on your heart, and keep the good work!

Aiden Sommers was just your average, boring man, until he died. Upon learning that the afterlife is not exactly what it seems, Aiden must become a demon and an agent of Lust. What he doesn't know is this also entails him becoming a succubus.
Rated: Explicit 76 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 212076 Words: 49461 Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: For a Job
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Mind Control, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 12/04/15
Updated: 07/06/17
Reviewer: Rks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/12/15 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Oh my, so interesting. I hope you don't randomly disappear and let me hanging, cause you surely hooked me here.

Author's Response: Well, we're approaching the end of what I've had pre-written, so things might slow down. But disappear? Probably not!

Elliot Cannon is a stubborn kind of guy. He is willing to do anything to help out his bro, and it leads him to discover a whole world where men enter into polygamist relationships with trans-women. Come Join Elliot on his wild, naughty and entertaining journey.
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 27858 Words: 17376 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Rks Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12/23/17 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Are we missing chapter nine?

My best buds and I make an annual trip to our favorite winter cabin, except we have a unique twist on our epic week. Of course, the twist never happened to me until I drew the short straw this year...
Rated: Explicit 167 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 278714 Words: 119627 Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Daughter
Locale: Family Household, Office, Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Lost a Bet, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Romance
Series: None
Published: 11/28/16
Updated: 09/29/18
Reviewer: Rks Signed
Date: 09/23/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Drawing To Keep Your Straw

Hummmmmmm... I don’t like Brad.
He seems exactly the kind of man I feel uneasy about. Somehow his interactions with Ash are too stereotypical of how a man should treat a woman, and how manliness is awesome.

You're a small-time thief; you earn your money by looking for wallets left in buses, or by mugging the old and defenseless. One day, your friend Eric promises to have a solution: robbing the mansion of a rich, disabled old man. The plan stinks from the beginning, but you let your conscience guilt you into helping your friend. Finally, you'll know what it feels like to be gainfully employed, even if your only earnings come in the form of praise from your Master.
Rated: Deviant 20 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 231239 Words: 157285 Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Rks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/13/17 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I've seen your story before but only recently I came down to read it, I believe firstly because I'm not the biggest fan of the blind submission that often follows maid stories and secondly because I usually don't like the imperative tone sometimes associated with texts in second person, and lastly, I didn't find the first chapter very compelling.
Now, after reading all that's done so far I must say about those things then that I like the justified submission that Suki now presents, and love her contained rebellion. I'm glad that you used second person, it works well on this story and I believe it's one of the few cases of second person done right, and to be honest I'm not sure why, but I believe so. About the first chapter though , I still believe it's not the best it could have been.
That said, I liked almost everything else about your story and it's been one of my favorite updates to look forward on the site recently. Keep 'em coming!

ps. I believe something went wrong with the editing of the italic tags on this last chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for sticking around long enough to take the story in! The second person style is a decision I've been questioning for a while, and will probably drop for future stories. I'm glad you came out enjoying Maid to Last nonetheless. I'll readily admit I'm not great at introductions, heh. Thanks a lot for reporting the italics issue! I completely forgot checking for it and would've missed it entirely if you hadn't mentioned it.

The war between the Demon Realm and Human Realm has lasted centuries on this world, with no end in sight. However the 72nd Demon Lord has a plan to finally achieve peace by turning the current the human's current champion, Hiro, into the new Demon Lord and a succubus to boot. With his newfound responsibility, he must try to seek peace between the two Realms with the help of his friends.
Rated: Adult 19 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 11062 Words: 16130 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Maid, Prostitute, Robot, Wife
Featured Items: Lingerie, Maid Uniform, Undies
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Curse, For a Job, Forced, Undercover
Personality: Cultural/Nationality Change, Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Bodily Functions, Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 04/26/17
Updated: 08/26/17
Reviewer: Rks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/06/17 Title: Chapter 1: A New Demon Lord

I'm glad to have you back!
I liked how this chapter focuses on a new character's point of view. It made me curious about what was happening with Hina, and I guess it made sense to present a little of Grace without giving out too much. I hope you bring more about these characters backgrounds presented in a similar way in the future.
I hope to see more from you soon.

James becomes the unwitting subject of an experimental and mysterious drug.
Rated: Explicit 44 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 192730 Words: 20987 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Sex Toys, Undies
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Female Domination, Forced, Tricked, Unknown
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive, Made Dumber
Story Theme: Humiliation, Medical Experiment, Romance
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Warnings: Bondage/S&M
Series: None
Published: 06/09/17
Updated: 12/22/18
Reviewer: Rks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/06/17 Title: Chapter 4: Interlude: First Date

It was actually better than just having the effects of the third vial. It brought Victoria's character to a much better light. Nice touch.

Kids with more money than sense are pretty annoying, but they're useful at times.
Rated: Adult 7 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 5409 Words: 4551 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Boyfriend, Girlfriend
Motivation for Change: Tricked, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men, Becomes Only Attracted to Women
Story Theme: Comedy, Pregnancy
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 06/26/17
Updated: 06/26/17
Reviewer: Rks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/26/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was fun, I like it!
Is there more to this story?

Author's Response: That's all. I have no plans to write more about these characters.

"First, I want you to change your appearance so no one will recognize you. Hmm... how about a girl?" He grinned as he saw my look of horror.
Rated: Adult 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 11135 Words: 4345 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Slave
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement
Motivation for Change: Forced, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change, Mind Control
Series: None
Published: 07/03/17
Updated: 07/03/17
Reviewer: Rks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/05/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome short story. I love how it all develops with just enough of a world and characters to make the story so interesting.

Ivy has a problem, she needs to be in two places at once! It seems impossible, but with the help of a magic mirror and her friends Mary and Steve the impossible just might be possible. Magic is unleashed; bodies and lives are transformed and changed as all three end up learning what it is they really want in life.
Rated: Explicit 15 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 28277 Words: 30734 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Cheerleader, Jock
Locale: College, Family Household, Road Trip
Motivation for Change: Tricked, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men, Becomes Only Attracted to Women
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 09/17/17
Updated: 09/17/17
Reviewer: Rks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/24/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It surprises me how much I liked this story. Although stories with identity theft and unwillingly stuck body swap excite me, usually the end leaves a bad taste in my mouth.
In this case however the ending left me very satisfied, as everyone involved was eased into liking their new roles before the final deed was done (Cindy not so much, but for some reason that didn't bothered me, maybe that comment about blocking the sun?).

Not to devalue your work, but I knew how it would end from the 3rd chapter, but how the ending was achieved was, in my opinion, very well executed. It was kinda Stephen-Kingy, if you get what I mean, which I like very much. But I agree with 930310 about a possible sequel like that. See their reactions, some character development, and a bit more of Philip's good side, I'd like to have the new Cindy more like an antagonist and less as a villain, I guess. I hope we get to see it someday.

The one thing that I don't get is the travel to Hawaii. I was expecting something else but it seems it was just some vacations after all.

Author's Response: Rks, Thanks for the thoughtful review. At the moment I've got no plan to do another story here. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

This is the classic "man pretends to be the sexy girlfriend to help his best friend impress his social circle" story line. With a twist.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 15 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 47696 Words: 13292 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Breast Forms, Lingerie
Locale: Formal Dance
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Series: None
Published: 09/08/18
Updated: 11/15/18
Reviewer: Rks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/15/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved the ending. It was clearly a possibility all along and it was very satisfying how everything turned out. In my opinion it was definitely the best twist and made the story much better. That said, this is a story for which I think a alternative ending would be fun to read. Something like a final chapter in an completely alternative universe where it had been Jeremy through all those interactions all along. I’m not saying that’d be a better ending, but I’d like to check how it would play out.

Author's Response: You suggest a very interesting idea. I've begun an alternate, and much longer, ending. This will be a good deal more complicated since I now have two Gemmas to contend with!

What if there were a pair of rings that could turn you into your physical ideal? And what if the person who offered them to you wasn't your best friend anymore?
Rated: Adult 9 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 37364 Words: 17446 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 05/02/19
Updated: 05/02/19
Reviewer: Rks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/10/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved your writing, ended up reading the whole story in one sitting, which I was not expecting to do.
I’m look forward to reading more from you.

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