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Harry Potter, now in his fifth year of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, is about to experience his strangest year yet, as he is cursed upon by a strange Emerald Phantom and then transforms into a girl. Now Harry must deal with his new feminine persona, learn about what it means to be a girl, and unravel the mysteries of the evil sorceress, The Emerald Witch.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 25 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 85857 Words: 57430 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Featured Items: Long Nails, School Uniform
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse, Forced
Personality: Fights Change, Good to Bad
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Fan Fiction, Horror, Humiliation, Mind/Body Posession, Mythical Setting, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Identity Theft, Mind Control, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 07/10/11
Updated: 09/20/16
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/03/13 Title: Chapter 1: Part I

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A man who is traveling the world alone is kidnapped and forced to become a test subject in a medical experiment. The kidnappers have advanced medicine to a point far beyond what is capable anywhere else in the world and his life is changed permanently.
Rated: Adult 233 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 2160631 Words: 110386 Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Stripper
Locale: Hospital or Clinic, Road Trip, Strip Club
Body Modification: Extreme Surgical Alteration
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Story Theme: Captive, Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Age Regression, Drug-Induced
Series: None
Published: 10/25/12
Updated: 10/22/15
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02/03/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story! Make her get revenge!

Author's Response: Thank you! Jenni is in a tough spot right now. Maybe she will find a way out of it.

Mission commander Michael Owen is on the verge death after a failed mission in space to save the planet earth. Saved by what he thinks to be an angel, this friend from another world offers Michael the opportunity to save his planet my endowing him with great power but at a great personal cost.
Rated: Adult 33 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 91462 Words: 215790 Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Alien, Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Bikinis
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Fights Change, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Type: Comic
Story Theme: Fan Fiction, Historical Time Period
Type of Change: Age Regression, Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change, Mechanical Device
Series: Angel Season One, Angel Season Two
Published: 12/03/12
Updated: 07/21/13
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/04/12 Title: Chapter 1: Angel S:1E:1 Pilot Part I "Failure" (Original Version)

I created an account for the sole purpose of reviewing this story. So all I need to say is this. Hands down this is the single best story I have ever read on this site. I cant wait to read more. Hint Hint. (That means continue the story)

Author's Response: Hi thank you for taking the time to sign up and leave me a response. I am happy to know you enjoyed part one of a three part pilot. Part two was submitted today and is available to read. I will be releasing the other 6 episodes throughout the next week or two before slowing down to finish the second half of season one. All I could say, is strap yourself in and enjoy the ride.

While hiking, a boy stumbles across a magic artifact. As a result, whoever the boy touches transforms into a woman who is extremely attracted to him.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 37 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 187924 Words: 32306 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Coming of Age
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 12/10/12
Updated: 12/14/13
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/11/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story! I cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03/21/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

When will more be released? It's a great story!

Reviewer: thereader23 Signed
Date: 10/14/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You have to finish this story! We've been waiting for months! This is one of the best stories on this site and i'm sad to see it left here.

Robert, A british young boy Is discovering the truth about his family and running away. Nicholas, a scientist and a father, is losing his young-woman daughter. Nicholas will do anything that will make his daughter to live again...
Rated: Adult 11 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 61457 Words: 14606 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Daughter
Motivation for Change: Forced
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Artificial Age Progression, Mechanical Device, Stuck
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 12/11/12
Updated: 02/25/13
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02/03/13 Title: Chapter 1: I. Happy Family

Great story! Keep writing it!

A Sci-Fi story of a mad scientist that has developed cybernetic bodies
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 11054 Words: 4696 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Boyfriend, Girlfriend, Object, Robot
Featured Items: High Heels
Locale: Hospital or Clinic, Labratory
Body Modification: Extreme Surgical Alteration
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Forced, Tricked, Unknown
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Captive, Distant Future, Medical Experiment, Mind/Body Posession, Romance
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 12/29/12
Updated: 12/30/12
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12/30/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's a great story and I would like to read more. Maybe his memory could come back?

When Craig finds a genie in a pile of garbage, it changes his life forever. But is it for the better, or worse?
Rated: Explicit 19 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 190478 Words: 12874 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Daughter, Girlfriend
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Pregnancy
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Incest, Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 01/29/13
Updated: 09/03/13
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02/03/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Craig's Wish

Great story! Keep writing!

I had been blessed with a loving family, but they would never understand. At a young age, I moved away to start a new life.
Rated: Adult 19 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 34830 Words: 10284 Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 01/29/13
Updated: 06/21/13
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02/03/13 Title: Chapter 1: The Need

Such a great story! Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I tend to be very critical of my writing, so it helps to know that people do like it. More to come!

In the future, people can become superhuman - but it would be so déclassé, darling. They can travel in time - but my god, darling, who would do that? What happens when a corpsicle awakes with no such scruples? NOT COMPLETE (just a really explicit warning here)
Rated: Kid-Friendly 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 2119 Words: 5744 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Distant Future, Historical Time Period
Series: None
Published: 02/18/13
Updated: 02/18/13
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04/14/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - the sleeper awakens

Good start! Keep Writing!

After introducing Ryan to a world of spells, Ryan's grandfather disappears. Ryan is left to fend for himself as creatures begin to attack him. Also, Ryan made a mistake on a spell that caused an undesired change...
Rated: Kid-Friendly 10 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 22038 Words: 11719 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Accident
Type of Change: Age Regression, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 03/29/13
Updated: 04/01/13
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04/10/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You really should continue this story! Your writing skill has dramatically improved.

Dragons. They always existed. They still exist. And they will exist a long time. Unless those "Hunters" achieve their goal. Common people don't care, hell, they don't even know about all that. I was such a common person. But now I'm one of them. I'm a dragon. Well, half-dragon, to be honest.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 24 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 37282 Words: 15580 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident, Forced, In Hiding, Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Historical Time Period, Mythical Setting, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 04/13/13
Updated: 12/13/13
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04/14/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Crash

Very good story. Keep writing!

Eric was a great soldier, a good guy and looking at a promising career in the military. Until one day he finds himself facing problems even his training couldn't prepare him for.
Rated: Adult 12 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 40225 Words: 29948 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Work Uniform
Locale: Camp, Family Household, Hospital or Clinic, Office
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Sports
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 04/28/13
Updated: 06/30/14
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06/02/13 Title: Chapter 1: Very Busy People

Great story!

When famous treasure hunter, Desmond Hoffman, explores an Incan temple, he gets more than a gem to prove it. What will happen to him as he starts dreaming of a fourteen year old girl nightly, who claims to be attached to the jewel he stole? Who is she? What does she want? Why does she only come in his dreams? The only way to know, is to read, unless you are Desmond.
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 7918 Words: 5315 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend, Teenager
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse, Forced, Unknown
Personality: Bad to Good, Fights Change, Made Dumber
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes, Second Childhood
Type of Change: Age Regression, Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 05/10/13
Updated: 05/10/13
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/18/13 Title: Chapter 1: Desmond, The Hunter

You should really continue the story!

Author's Response: I've thought about tweaking it to look more professional. It's still under considderation, and if I did, I'd push a deadline for my next story farther back. I do, however get ideas on what would make this better. Lots of work, but I'm glad you liked it! XD

A drunken academic stumbles across an unusual dating site--and ends up with a whole new outlook on life.
Rated: Explicit 11 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 42622 Words: 8057 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Bimbo
Locale: Hospital or Clinic
Body Modification: Breast Implants, Extreme Breast Enlargement
Motivation for Change: Forced, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change, Made Dumber
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Type: Includes Images
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 05/23/13
Updated: 09/23/14
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/24/13 Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Mimi

Very good start! Possibly a few spin-offs set in the same universe?

Alan is a 14 years old boy who escapes from his adopting parents' house with the help of Lloyd, a lawyer who tells him that his biological aunt gave him all she had after she died. Alan starts his new life as Helen, a 25 years old woman. It gets more complex when Lloyd gives Helen a magical wish-stone...
Rated: Kid-Friendly 5 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 9300 Words: 5671 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: In Hiding, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Women, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes
Type of Change: Artificial Age Progression
Series: None
Published: 06/08/13
Updated: 06/13/13
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06/09/13 Title: Chapter 1: I. Underground

Great start, keep writing!

Pleased to meet you! Hope you guess my sex!
Rated: Adult 36 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 42297 Words: 91391 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Daughter
Locale: Family Household, High School, Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 06/14/13
Updated: 06/15/14
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08/19/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Selling the Tickets

Very great story! I love the long chapters. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Sixteen year-old runaway Jimmy was being chased by three murderous drug dealers for stealing $200,000 of their money, but when he took refuge with the Great Renaldo and wife, things got REALLY interesting!
Rated: Adult 18 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 27618 Words: 6772 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: Corsets, High Heels
Series: None
Published: 06/23/13
Updated: 07/10/13
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/29/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Amazing start! Can't wait to read more!

Junior High is filled with changes, but for some kids like Dean Morgan, the changes are greater than most.
Rated: Adult 14 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 34393 Words: 13943 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Series: None
Published: 08/20/13
Updated: 10/06/13
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/20/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You are an excellent writer and I feel you have a great start here! As long as you keep writing it, I will keep reading it.

Mathew Dawson has been hiding a secret for a very long time. But it's about to come out...
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 5860 Words: 4068 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Boyfriend, Bride, Girlfriend, Husband
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Hormonal
Series: None
Published: 09/06/13
Updated: 09/06/13
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/06/13 Title: Chapter 1: My life

Amazing story!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Jon wishes for control over other people, so whatever he says becomes true.
Starting plot taken from Fiction Branches.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 8 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 32054 Words: 7552 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Series: You Are What You Wish
Published: 10/22/13
Updated: 10/24/13
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/20/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I would love to see you continue this great story!

A young boy discovers that he possesses an organ that can not only change himself, but others.
Rated: Adult 7 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 11634 Words: 2637 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: None
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Accident
Series: None
Published: 11/04/13
Updated: 11/12/13
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11/05/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very promising start. You should work on your formatting (indenting). And you could also add more filler. For example, you could write about how long it took him to get into the bathroom. But, I am just nitpicking. Great story so far.

Author's Response: Haha! I actually wrote this story on a smartphone as I have yet to get a program (or discover an online application) that can type documents and has spellcheck. But I promose that I will start indenting and things like that when I get one.

Gerald Lynch was in Vegas. But gambling addictions aren't very good for the body. Especially if you're male.
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 11359 Words: 4802 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo, Daughter, Stripper
Motivation for Change: Lost a Bet
Personality: Loses Identity, Made Dumber
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Mechanical Device
Series: Fetish/erotic stories
Published: 11/14/13
Updated: 11/14/13
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/15/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great short story!
* BTW: I got the quiz question correct.

Author's Response: Good job! And thank you!

Connor and Linda have been married for 2 years. Their relationship is great and they're very happy with each other! Their sex life, however, is non-existent. Connor finds a power within himself that can change everything, his relationship, his sex life, and his body! Can he learn to control it before it's too late?
Rated: Explicit 23 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 106451 Words: 16750 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Husband, Wife
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive, From Submissive to Dominant
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men, Becomes Only Attracted to Women
Story Theme: Witchcraft
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 12/05/13
Updated: 01/05/14
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/06/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great Story! Write a sequel!

Author's Response: Thanks! Like I said to Roadbandit; I've definitely been thinking about doing a sequel. I've just gotta wait for inspiration to hit me while I write something else so I can find a direction for it.

Jaux Ballad has always wanted to enter the realm of magic, but could not do so by regular means. In his desperation to become a magician he finds himself with more power, and more trouble, than he could ever have imagined.
Rated: Adult 354 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 323477 Words: 97327 Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Teenager
Featured Items: Corsets, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline
Locale: Camp, College, Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Historical Time Period, Mythical Setting, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: Vanasia Universe
Published: 02/22/14
Updated: 09/17/15
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/27/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Demon Root

Great Story! I love how you update it so often.

Author's Response: Thankies :D! My aim is one a day, but I try to always have a decent amount of proofreading.

Virtual reality is making great strides in the world of today, but what if the game wasn't just virtual, but indistinguishable from the real thing?
Rated: Adult 8 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 22182 Words: 17693 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Clothing, Fantasy Character, Girlfriend, Slave, Teenager
Featured Items: Corsets, Masks, Undies
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Forced, Tricked, Unknown
Personality: Bad to Good, Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Captive, Comedy
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Warnings: Bondage/S&M, Intense Violence, Torture
Series: Best RPG Ever
Published: 02/26/14
Updated: 03/03/14
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/27/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You have a great start here! As long as you keep writing this, I will keep reading it.

Author's Response: Plenty already written ^_^ and thanks!

More Mystical Magecraft mishaps plague another pair of friends who just want to have fun playing a video game.
Rated: Adult 24 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 29088 Words: 15808 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Locale: Family Household, High School
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Series: The Perils and Pratfalls of Roleplaying
Published: 06/01/14
Updated: 08/11/14
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08/11/14 Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue

I really liked this story. Your writing style is one of the best I have seen on this website. However, there is just one problem... You didn't end the story. I know you can infer what happens next, but to me it just doesn't feel right. I like closure when a story is marked as complete. I am NOT saying this is a bad story though. It's great and I would recommend everybody on this website to read it.

Author's Response: I'm happy you liked the story and I'm extremely glad that you want to recommend the story to others. I am, however, a little disappointed that you didn't like the ending. To steal this from "The Wheel of Time" books, "There are no endings... and this is merely an ending." Once I found the ending, I realized that this story wasn't meant to have a definitive ending, it was meant to end exactly the way it did, with nothing but possibilities. Maybe Amber and Todd just stay friends, maybe they end up falling in love, maybe their attempts to rekindle their friendship only last a few more days before they separate again forever. There's not always closure, even if the story ends.

In the distant future the mythological races are returning. But they aren't exactly what we would have expected. How far would you go to help one of them if you didn't have any other choice?
Rated: Explicit 96 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 210214 Words: 55422 Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/15/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fantastic story! It's one of the best stories on this site.

In the future the wealthy will be able to transfer their consciousness to other bodies. A retired military man decides to start life over with his life savings.
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 9488 Words: 1671 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/04/15 Title: Chapter 1: Transhumanizer

Fantastic story! I would love to see more.

I couldn't believe my luck. I had found the perfect woman and she would be mine for ever. Or so I thought.
Rated: Explicit 16 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 114345 Words: 18533 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Genie/Wishes
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Mind Control, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 01/12/16
Updated: 03/09/18
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/16/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Meeting Her

Fantastic story! I can't wait to read more.

Two teenage boys find a strange medallion one day while being out in the forest. This is the story of how the two learn about the medallion’s powers and about themselves (in ways they never thought to be possible) as they grow up to young adults.
Rated: Adult 18 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 269088 Words: 111180 Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/18/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - My uninteresting life (so far)

After finishing the story I can say with confidence that it has earned a spot among my personal favorites on this site. Absolutely amazing work. I sincerely hope that you do continue on this path and follow their children. After reading your story I'm confident you could write an amazing sequel and I hope to see more from you in the future.

Author's Response: Thank you!

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