Kirri
Member Since: 03/07/11 Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Kirri
In the other's shoes. Literally.
Rated: Adult 8 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 18651 Words: 3025 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Husband, Wife
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Witchcraft
Series: None
Published: 01/27/11
Updated: 01/27/11
Reviewer: Kirri Signed
Date: 12/27/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a shame this story never extended to anther chapter , It would have been nice to see a few more chapters telling us a little more about the new worlds of our couple and their experiences with others in their new genders..

Kirri

Author's Response: Over the years I've thought off and on about continuing this story. I even started on it, but unfortunately those attempts are now lost. I make no promises, but now that it's been brought up maybe I should try again to do something. Thanks for your interest. Kristi

Envy towards a girl, a wish, and then you're suddenly not yourself anymore.
Rated: Adult 10 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 60402 Words: 7449 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Motivation for Change: Accident
Story Theme: Genie/Wishes
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 01/27/11
Updated: 01/27/11
Reviewer: Kirri Signed
Date: 03/18/11 Title: Chapter 4: Part 4

Really enjoyed reading this short story.... Sometimes its just nice to read a story without anything nasty in it, And you would have to say that both Heather and Jeff were more than a little happy with the outcome, All in all a very nice way of spending a few minutes reading...

Brad, star quarterback of his high school, has the hots for his neighbor Mrs. Irons. When he finds her spell book though, he's in for some unwanted marital bliss of his own.
Rated: Explicit 10 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 71132 Words: 2247 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Bride, Cheerleader, Wife
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Sex Toys
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Everyday Living, Romance, Sports
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 09/20/12
Updated: 01/11/13
Reviewer: Kirri Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01/12/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"It looked like another date with Rosie Palms tonight".

if only it was that simple Brad , Something tells me you should have followed the old adage of looking before leaping...

Kirri

Reviewer: Kirri Signed
Date: 01/12/13 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Poor Brad is really in the mire now, Whats next for him ... Well at least Chapter 3 is already posted so i can soon find out :)

Kirri

Reviewer: Kirri Signed
Date: 01/12/13 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

i wish i had the patience to wait until stories were complete before reading them, Now i have to wait .... Really enjoyed your story so far Code , I Will be checking back soon to see what happens to Brad , one thing is for sure though i doubt very much that Brad will be reaing out any more spells ... That is if he knows what might have caused his problems !!!

Kirri

Johnny got robbed and someone stole his clothes. When he finds some of the clothes of his friend, Melissa, he has to do the right thing to keep his body warm. But things get stranger and stranger...
Rated: Kid-Friendly 13 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 79922 Words: 2531 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse, Forced, In Hiding
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Artificial Age Progression, Changed by Clothing
Series: None
Published: 10/05/12
Updated: 10/27/12
Reviewer: Kirri Signed
Date: 01/27/13 Title: Chapter 1: 1st Chapter

Now thats what you call a shock, And there he was thinking he was still Johnny , Looks like it might be a time before he is again ....

Kirri

Chance McCall gets a whole lot more than what he expected when his rig breaks down in Limbo, Arizona.
Rated: Adult 14 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 20977 Words: 9229 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Romance
Series: None
Published: 12/08/12
Updated: 01/06/13
Reviewer: Kirri Signed
Date: 12/26/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good start Jolene , you have mine and Chances complete attention now

Looking forward to reading more very soon

Kirri

Reviewer: Kirri Signed
Date: 12/26/12 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Just finished the second part of your story Jolene, And just like the first part its very well written, Nice to see too lonely people getting together.... Or am i being a little presumptive there, Maybe part 3 might tell me..

Kirri

Reviewer: Kirri Signed
Date: 12/26/12 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Just like the first two parts , Very, Very good. My only regret now is i have caught up :-(

Kirri

Robert, A british young boy Is discovering the truth about his family and running away. Nicholas, a scientist and a father, is losing his young-woman daughter. Nicholas will do anything that will make his daughter to live again...
Rated: Adult 11 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 62284 Words: 14606 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Daughter
Motivation for Change: Forced
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Artificial Age Progression, Mechanical Device, Stuck
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 12/11/12
Updated: 02/25/13
Reviewer: Kirri Signed
Date: 01/27/13 Title: Chapter 1: I. Happy Family

Nicely set up for part two MayCohen , I will be looking out to see just who or what the shadow was ..

Kirri

If you were a successful 50 year old man who suddenly found himself inside the body of a young girl with no logical explanation for it and no foreseeable way to reverse it, would you be able to cope and survive? Harry is about to find out whether or not he can.
Rated: Explicit 186 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 330370 Words: 303450 Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, Lingerie
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 07/08/13
Updated: 02/09/14
Reviewer: Kirri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/13/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Rise and Shine

Have to thank editors picks for pointing me in the direction of this story,If the first chapter is anything to go by then it all i can say is the editor knows their stuff .... Thanks too to Casey for writing and sharing it with us all..

Author's Response: Thank you so much. This was one of my early stories. It's so long because I had a difficult time saying goodbye to the characters. If you finally wade through this one, I do have a couple of sequels posted also.

Jack's mom is tired of Jack always sleeping through his alarm, so she buys him a new one. But when Jack unknowingly hits a button, he unknowingly sets off a chain of events that will drastically change his life.
Rated: Explicit 8 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 9200 Words: 1211 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Teenager
Featured Items: Bikinis, Long Nails, School Uniform
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Everyday Living, Romance, Sports
Type of Change: Mechanical Device, Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 07/25/14
Updated: 07/25/14
Reviewer: Kirri Signed
Date: 07/25/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Clock

Great start to your story IHeartWishes, I like your style of writing its clear and concise with just enough to detail to draw in your readers Looking forward to reading the next chapter very soon .

Take care

Kirri

A small minded accountant learns the truth about himself and finds a partner.
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstar Completed Story Reads: 12406 Words: 3916 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Bad to Good
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Hypnosis
Series: None
Published: 01/12/16
Updated: 01/12/16
Reviewer: Kirri Signed
Date: 01/12/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice gentle story June , Love the way you showed what was behind Ashleys bigotry , Whilst i would not be a huge fan of hypnosis being used in the way it was in this story you would have to say that Ash was more than happy with the end result

After defeating his life-long rival in the US Open, Ben was living the dream. However, tennis turns treacherous when the rival's family seeks vengeance.
Rated: Explicit 26 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 87709 Words: 21687 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Forced, Revenge
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Romance, Sports
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 10/20/16
Updated: 11/05/16
Reviewer: Kirri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/12/17 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: In the End, We're All Human

Great little story Clarity , Maybe its the romantic in me but i really loved how everything turned out well for everyone, Blaire and Matt make a lovely attractive couple and even the parents who at the start of the story you really did not like turned out too be a nice couple , Now for your other 5 stories :)

Author's Response: Aw, thank you. That's very sweet of you to say, Kirri. I hope you enjoy the rest of them ;)

In a mystical land, a young Ranger keeps the countryside safe from all manner of dark creatures. One fateful night, a chance meeting with a beautiful maiden will change his life forever...
Rated: Deviant 73 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 136932 Words: 119977 Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Fights Change, Good to Bad
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Mythical Setting
Warnings: Death, Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 04/18/17
Updated: 06/23/20
Reviewer: Kirri Signed
Date: 10/29/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter I

It's always nice when a story is not set in a world we are familiar with , Apart from anything else it gives the author far greater scope with situations that they can put their characters into , Ellina or should that be Elldin certainly had an experience they won't forget in a hurry...

So what happens next ? , Seems likely that Elldin will very soon want to be Ellina again , All he has to do is find the witch .... Who said life was easy !!

Great story from a top author love the way its going , hope to read more of it very sooon

Kirri

Author's Response: Yeah, it's an issue I had with The Dawn Project to a certain extent setting it in the real world. You're bound by certain principles and rules. As you say, setting a story in a fantasy world gives you more avenues for locations and weird and wonderful characters. It's more fun to write it - considering at its core it's just a story about a man to turns into a woman - if there's interesting things for my imagination to consider. As for what happens next, who knows? Maybe Elldin will feel the need to become Ellina again, but how and why he does it is yet a mystery. Perhaps Elldin needs to 'persuade' a man? Stay tuned. ;)

An aspiring high school students meets his match in a sorcerer who changes him, for the good?
Rated: Adult 8 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 6930 Words: 1212 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Daughter, Girlfriend, Teenager
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, School Uniform
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime, Tricked
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive, Made Dumber
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Comedy, Everyday Living, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Bondage/S&M
Series: None
Published: 10/23/17
Updated: 10/24/17
Reviewer: Kirri Signed
Date: 10/25/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whilst I like the concept of the story ( it certainly has many possible avenues it could follow) I did feel that we needed to know more about Jimmy's background, Who is friends are and what is family are like .... Maybe even a g/f would help , The reason I mention this is so we can cotrast the difference in Sara's new life with her earlier life as Jimmy.

, It's always nice to get to the transformation scene quickly , But i do think in this case it would have added to the story if we had witnessed Jimmy getting pointed comments for Ms Kimball

Successful and financially well-off, Martha's life has taken a few unexpected turns recently, leaving her lonely and longing for something more. George is also lonely and just trying to get from one job to another. When their paths converge at a local bank one evening, suddenly things look brighter for both of them.
Rated: Adult 19 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 11468 Words: 32416 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Wife
Locale: Family Household, Hairstyling/Salon
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 11/15/17
Updated: 01/03/18
Reviewer: Kirri Signed
Date: 11/18/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a lovely sweet story , Isn't nice just once in a while to read a story about nice lonely people finding each other , Hopefully George and Martha find that a chance meeting turns into the sort of relationship they both deserve...

Kirri

Author's Response: Thank you, so, much!

Reviewer: Kirri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/18/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooops forgot to rate

Author's Response: Thanks for the rating, too

This story is about a young boy who witnessed a bank robbery and killing of a police officer
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstar Completed Story Reads: 14936 Words: 3654 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Featured Items: Bikinis, Breast Forms, Lingerie, Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Forced
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Hormonal
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 01/03/18
Updated: 01/03/18
Reviewer: Kirri Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01/05/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

As Marina mentions your story is a little short but it reads well , It would have been nice to have got a little more background on Jonny and his big sister, Anything like that helps in setting up your story and makes the characters feel real, Its certainly true big time criminals tentacles spread far and wide and the chances are that Katie would become a rather more permanent fixture than was intended, With that in mind maybe a fitting end to your story would have been an epilogue set maybe 5 or so years in the future showing us what happened to the sisters ....

Again as Marina says in her review keep writing , You have the talent and i would love to see more of your stories ....

Delan is a 19 years old squire who wants to be a great knight. But when he find himself lost into the Dawn Forest after saving a child, his life is changed forever.
Rated: Adult 14 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 35178 Words: 11165 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Girlfriend
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Pregnancy, Romance
Type of Change: Cultural, Fast/Instant Change, Identity Theft, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 08/06/18
Updated: 08/08/18
Reviewer: Kirri Signed
Date: 08/06/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Goblin

Nice story and given its setting, there are many many directions the story could follow, looking forward to the next chapters already.

If you require help with spelling and grammar then the Grammarly app is worth a look, Its free for the basic version

Author's Response: Hi Kirri, Thanks for the advice I started to use it, it can only help! I'm glad you're enjoying it, thank you!

A gay guy, a straight girl, a straight guy, and a bartender with a very unique drink for them to try. Time to find out: Is the grass really greener on the other side of the fence?
Rated: Adult 18 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 12725 Words: 4025 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Dared into It, Lost a Bet, Tricked
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 03/06/19
Updated: 03/06/19
Reviewer: Kirri Signed
Date: 03/09/19 Title: Chapter 2: One Month Later

Just goes to prove a story does not need be that long, I liked the concept and the story although only two chapters long felt complete. Well written it just goes too prove that the grass is not always greener on the other side of the fence,Except that is if your name just happens to be Lizzy !

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm a fan of brevity and efficiency in short stories, so I'm very happy to hear that I pulled it off when writing this one.

Reviewer: Kirri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/09/19 Title: Chapter 1: The Debate

oops , forgot too rate.

It was so cold… I had to start moving. I had to go to the campground. It wasn’t such a big problem for the old me. But I was barely moving now. At the same instant I started moving I heard the truck coming and saw it emerging. There was a ranger behind the wheel. He noticed me and immediately hit the brakes. The truck stopped and the ranger jumped out and ran to me.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 2 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 2133 Words: 2874 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Motivation for Change: Accident
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 11/20/19
Updated: 11/20/19
Reviewer: Kirri Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/20/19 Title: Chapter 1: Lucy’s return

Nice short story and a pretty satisfactory ending as well, If you feel the need QModo there is certainly scope for a sequel, Perhaps by expanding on Lucy's return to school or maybe the mystery of how she finished up where Bob found her. Would also be nice if we found out if Bob survived in any way.... Sometimes though things like that are best left to the imagination,Ultimately though the choice is yours, Either way i certainly enjoyed the read...

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