artistlibre
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Member Since: 07/27/20 Membership status: Member
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This is a story where our protagonist, Sam, is changed very slowly and without him realizing. He is changed by his new girlfriend and housemate, Claire, for reasons unknown.
Rated: Explicit 78 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 410305 Words: 30224 Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Bikinis, Boots, Corsets, Gaff, High Heels, Lingerie, Sex Toys, Work Uniform
Locale: Hairstyling/Salon, Office
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Female Domination, Tricked
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 01/31/16
Updated: 09/10/19
Reviewer: artistlibre Signed
Date: 08/30/20 Title: Chapter 1: A girl named Claire

Most unique approach. I am waiting on how Sam takes the step hereafter.

15 year old Tony Zanzetti, accidently witnesses a "gangland" murder, while skateboarding in an alley near his home. Federal agents Soon Swoop down and put him and his family in a "witness protection program".---Agents disguise Tony as a young woman to keep him hidden and safe. From "Fat eddies" goons trying to kill him, But it seems the Star Trek Convention is in town and he is mistaken for one of the Actresses and has to doge the "Trekies" too.

Rated: Kid-Friendly 2 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 10967 Words: 20888 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Secretary
Featured Items: Bikinis, Breast Forms, Corsets, High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Pantyhose, Work Uniform
Locale: Family Household, Hairstyling/Salon, Office
Motivation for Change: In Hiding, Undercover, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Humiliation
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Hormonal, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 12/23/17
Updated: 12/24/17
Reviewer: artistlibre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/30/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I happen to read this story from another site. Always one of my favourites.

When a young boy's parents fear an impending war draft, they begin a process that changes the child's life forever.
Rated: Explicit 15 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 118996 Words: 39172 Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Reviewer: artistlibre Signed
Date: 08/30/20 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Dear oh dear! Every element that this genre requires are there in your story. Your story structure inspires me to write one. Thank you!

Frank gets out of jail, and reconnects with an old friend.
Rated: Adult 39 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 51626 Words: 28275 Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Hormonal
Series: None
Published: 11/19/19
Updated: 01/23/20
Reviewer: artistlibre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/07/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Address

One of smooth writing style that I take inspiration from. Along with 'Alex', this is also my favourite from your offerings. My second time reading though,

I have broken a rule of mine here. I have not finished this story yet but am to a point where I can end it or keep it going.
This story has changed names three times because of stories being made under the names I made.
This is a story about an old time mobster who got what was coming him so he gave it back with a promise to disappear, he just didn't know how.
Rated: Adult 21 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 40174 Words: 44926 Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Trans
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Child, Daughter
Featured Items: Bikinis
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime, Forced, In Hiding
Personality: Bad to Good, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Age Regression, Drug-Induced, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 02/23/20
Updated: 09/29/20
Reviewer: artistlibre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/09/20 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20; You've lost that lovin feeling:

Wow! Nice premise. The person who painted the houses once (ref. The Irishman) is literally painting the library for good. Nice change over, for what if a person gets a different environment for growing up. Also, I expect if there's anymore confronting of the Past?

Author's Response: I do have to watch the Irishman someday. Thankyou for the review.

Reviewer: artistlibre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/21/20 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21;As time goes by:

Enjoyed the expansion of the premise you set up once again. I thought, this chapter could've had its breaks and passes, as it covers more stuff than any of your other chapters. Yes, what you provide is a realistic portrayal of one's alternate life. Yet, it is hard to see the story is going to end in one more chapter, as it has more possibilities to unravel. --- I'm happy to say that I've utilised some of your style to indicate the passage of time in my first real attempt in storytelling, "Eight People". I would love your valuable suggestions.

Author's Response: Thank you. I let the stories write themselves, I go in with an idea and start writing and the story takes off on its own tangent. When I started writing it I had no ending, that was about five years ago. I had to finish my other two stories first. I'll check out your story, I almost always review a story when I read it. If I haven't read it yet it's probably because it's under 10,000 words. It's my own personal limit I usually put on incomplete stories before I'll read them, but I won't post anything till I have 15,000 words either. I'll break my rule and read yours anyway.

Reviewer: artistlibre Signed
Date: 09/21/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Genesis;

Thanks a lot, Amanda, for breaking your rule for me. Though, I assure you, when the following chapters add up to 10,000 words and more, you will enjoy it more than this initial read. As I still struggle to forming up my tone, I would love to read the two other stories which you are writing :-)

Author's Response: I have two other stories on here. Always read your chapter before you post it, you'd be surprised the small mistakes you pick up. I'll read my stories three times before posting, and still make mistakes!

Reviewer: artistlibre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/30/20 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22; And in the end:

Where she names the baby Nathan Joseph... a touching move!

Author's Response: Abby wrote that part.

When three seemingly normal dudes move in together, the last thing any of them expected was romance. But one of them has a secret...

They won't be a "normal dude" for long.
Rated: Adult 30 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 48107 Words: 21982 Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Categories: Trans Life
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Comedy, Romance
Type of Change: Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Politically Incorrect
Series: None
Published: 07/19/20
Updated: 09/24/20
Reviewer: artistlibre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/30/20 Title: Chapter 1: I Thought You Were a Girl

Cute story!

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: artistlibre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/07/20 Title: Chapter 1: I Thought You Were a Girl

Smoothly runs! You have that certain touch, moving the plot interestingly without any artificial conflicts or extra characters. What you do here is efficient and handful, and applicable to all the audience, even the kids, especially those who want to come out to their parents. Very rarely matured stories come by, like yours. Thank you for writing it!

Author's Response: Wow! This is seriously so nice. Sometimes it's hard for me to believe that people actually like my writing, especially this much, so thank you for being incredibly kind with your words! I hope to keep you interested!

Reviewer: artistlibre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/10/20 Title: Chapter 16: Get Stronger

I wish, Dani 'gets stronger' as soon as possible to go 'right'!

Reviewer: artistlibre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/17/20 Title: Chapter 18: Maybe Next Time

"...what she thought would fit her own face." Seriously! Is this your first attempt at storytelling? I don't think so :-)

Author's Response: I may or may not have written fanfic in high school but honestly WHO didn't?

Meek crossdresser is discovered and dominated by his sketchy boss. Both of them discover things about themselves that surprise them.
Rated: Explicit 14 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 16526 Words: 15750 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Blackmailed, Caught Crossdressing
Series: None
Published: 08/26/20
Updated: 09/18/20
Reviewer: artistlibre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/08/20 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Loving the narration so far! Steady as ever.

Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: artistlibre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/18/20 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Loved it! Especially, the letter from the mystery woman.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: artistlibre Signed
Date: 09/21/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi, Casey! I know this is not the way to invite you personally for a review, but, I don't know any other ways though. My first real attempt in storytelling, "Eight People" - it is about to follow the narrative structure inspired by "Calvin". I know there are a lot other stories of shared perspectives, but, I am responsible to say that " Calvin" really pushed the "Eight People" into fruition. I will be thrilled to hear your valuable feedback on it. Thanks!

Author's Response: Be glad to, hon.

Dom might be trans... or he might not. But how's he meant to figure it out when he's forced to share a dorm room with the world's biggest jerk?
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 1579 Words: 3561 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Trans Life
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Romance
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 08/27/20
Updated: 09/03/20
Reviewer: artistlibre Signed
Date: 09/07/20 Title: Chapter 2: 2. First Impression

Wordplay once again (referring to title)!

Donnie is taken aback when his friend Mitch asks him to accompany him to Hawaii and act as his girlfriend. Donnie, of course, says ‘no,’ but Mitch makes him an offer he couldn’t refuse.
Rated: Adult 45 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 32269 Words: 95964 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Bikinis, Lingerie, Pantyhose
Locale: Formal Dance, Hairstyling/Salon, Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Series: None
Published: 08/29/20
Updated: 10/12/20
Reviewer: artistlibre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/30/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi, Clara! At last, registered with the site, just to review your story (no flattery! I'm fan of your writing right from the Bebe series.) This is the first time I happen to write a word on your writing. The way you central characters beat the s**t out of gender dimorphism is always the coolest part for me. You are one of my favourite inspirations in LGBT literature. Looking forward with how D(aw/o)n proceeds with the gender-def(y/in)ing trip. Kudos to you!

End notes: Always love where you cheekily use pop-references for character visualisations. Velma. LOL!

Author's Response: Wow, Iím so flattered. Thank you. Bebe was a special girl. I enjoyed that series, too. I hope you enjoy where Dawn takes us, too. Iím kind of excited to see where she goes.

Reviewer: artistlibre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/02/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Surprisingly speedy, yet with necessary breaks - confusions before conclusions. Perfect recipe for Dawn's first person narrative this time, than the last chapter. Keep awaiting for tans and taqilas:-)

Author's Response: Sometimes the conditions allow for a quick chapter. The tans and tequilas are coming!

Reviewer: artistlibre Signed
Date: 09/06/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Plot thickens, as the Past threatens, before Mitch stiffens! Dear heavens!

Author's Response: Hahahaha! Youíre brilliant! Thank you!

Reviewer: artistlibre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/12/20 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4B

Donnie is mad, because she couldn't feel the maiden experience of being a woman. Take care of her, Clara! She may need a woman's shoulder to cry this time.

Side note: Not sure how there is a word limit this time though.

Author's Response: I think that Donnie is as scared as she is angry. Sacred of (possibly) having been violated and scared of having actually wanted to have done what she did. Storytime allows up to 15,000 words per post. I usually look to make my chapters 25 to 28 pages long and that typically avoids exceeding 15,000 words. My work tends to have a lot more dialog, which leads to short paragraphs, but since this one is in first person, the narration leads to longer passages and thatís how I exceeded the limit by more than 1500 words. I considered editing some out, but chose to split the chapter in two instead.

Reviewer: artistlibre Signed
Date: 09/13/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you. Now, I understand it.

Author's Response: Thank you for asking!

Reviewer: artistlibre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/19/20 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

:-) "Hawaiian Wedding"... probably, a dumb reviewer's idea. Loving it!

Author's Response: Iím glad youíre enjoying it! Donnieís story isnít over, yet. Stick with her for at least one more chapter.

Reviewer: artistlibre Signed
Date: 09/19/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sure, I would happily look forward to where she takes us, no matter how much chapters. She's starting to show a lot of potential. It's in my wish list, to see that how she would turn out to be a teacher, and how would she face her wedding. Yet, I will wait until things are unfolding naturally for Dawn, Clara. I respect, how much hard work you are putting into this.

Author's Response: Thank you, so much! There is a little more of Donnieís story to be told. Itíll post fairly soon.

Reviewer: artistlibre Signed
Date: 09/28/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was about to say, "Another wonderful chapter, Clara!" Then I realised, there is no 7th chapter yet. I must be early. Curious as ever... ;-) Hope things are fine for you.

Author's Response: Things are great, but busy. I just started proofreading the next installment. Just another day or two, I promise.

Reviewer: artistlibre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/12/20 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

2 Chapters back to back, wow! This is one of your finest, without any antagonism in the story!

Author's Response: Thank you! The two chapters thing - Iím running myself ragged working remotely and I neglected to post Ch6 in this site. I didnít realize it until I went to post Ch7.

The song Always A Woman To Me was stuck in my head. These are the words from my head.
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews Story Incomplete Reads: 306 Words: 194 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Non-Story
Characters: Not Applicable
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Series: None
Published: 09/10/20
Updated: 09/10/20
Reviewer: artistlibre Signed
Date: 09/10/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, o, Well!

Ya' have per-fect rhythm.
Makes it ea-sier to hum.
If ya' could, give mor' care,
Woulda been damn wholesome!

Quinton is your average high school guy, with maybe a little less confidence than he would like. Turns out, he only has half a soul. What will his life be like once its complete?
Rated: Adult 7 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 6225 Words: 14537 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 09/22/20
Updated: 10/05/20
Reviewer: artistlibre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/22/20 Title: Chapter 2: Dream Girl

Thoroughly enjoyed! Nice premise. I was looking for the more cosmic intervention part in the second chapter, including the dream girl. Looking forward for what happens next!

Michael was a normal kid with social issues. However, when a weird storm starts changing people including him, he finds himself in a world where fantasy now becomes reality. Now he must learn how to live a new life with a new body and help to bring justice to those who use their new found abilities for evil.
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 7841 Words: 26538 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Daughter, Girlfriend, Teenager
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Fan Fiction, Mythical Setting, Romance
Series: None
Published: 09/26/20
Updated: 10/17/20
Reviewer: artistlibre Signed
Date: 09/26/20 Title: Chapter 1: The Storm

Hi, you have posted the story twice.

Author's Response: fixed

A dying man is given a second chance. His new life seems very different, but is he still the same person inside?
Rated: Explicit 13 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 17039 Words: 6675 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 09/27/20
Updated: 10/21/20
Reviewer: artistlibre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/01/20 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

"What about her past?" ... "Does it Matter?" Intriguing!

Author's Response: I tried to cover it with this. "So what if I'm in this new body, and this person has a family. How will I know them? Or if I'll now be a brain surgeon and get called in to surgery. What then?" "Don't worry. You'll just automatically know everything you need to know when it's needed, everything necessary to continue as your new self, but, again, you'll also know that it is a re do."

Reviewer: artistlibre Signed
Date: 10/01/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sorry for using "her". Actually, I was referring to the old man's past. But, I love as you have written it. Waiting for the more instances of messenger too...

Author's Response: Never fear. The past will raise its head from time to time.

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