Holly Snow
Member Since: 01/01/20 Membership status: Member
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Christopher is an average boy. He does boyish things, and only thinks of things boys should do. Until one day he finds out his gender identity. He's really a girl, named Christine.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 12 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 60232 Words: 147278 Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Categories: Trans Life
Characters: None
Turned Into: Daughter
Body Modification: Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Romance
Series: None
Published: 01/24/14
Updated: 01/24/14
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/26/20 Title: Chapter 22: EPILOGUE

This was simply the most tender and wonderful transitioning story I've ever read, thank you.

How could a simple mother & daughter school project turn my father's sexual preference upside-down
Rated: Adult 12 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 70587 Words: 30590 Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Daughter, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Bikinis, Breast Forms, High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Pantyhose
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Breast Implants, Ears Pierced, Vaginal Alteration
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 08/05/16
Updated: 02/02/20
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed
Date: 01/09/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Dad agrees to help me in my school project

I really wanted to like this story, but I could hardly make it through the first half of the chapter. You need an editor, I'm willing to help if you want to. A couple of quick notes to start out, first off, the bra size measures the size of the chest and the cup size. A 34C bra would only fit on a 34 inch chest, so it would not fit most men where you say that most men like a 34C - what should be said is that most men want a C cup. Next, when did they take off the boxers before fitting him with the gaff to hide his penis? If they took off the underwear to fit him with that, something should be said about that, you would think he would wake up as they did that. There are many grammatical and punctuation errors as well. I do like the concept of the story and the plot line and characterization seem to be coming along well from what I did read. Let me know if you are interested in an editor for this story, and I would be willing to look at your other stories if you wish. You can reach me at cybersaver@gmail.com

After his girlfriend shows him that he can wear her clothes, Chuck starts to live a private life on the weekends. But when he decides to finally leave his apartment as a girl, he gets much more than he expected.
Rated: Explicit 15 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 165329 Words: 22824 Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Pantyhose
Body Modification: Breast Implants, Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Series: None
Published: 10/17/16
Updated: 11/05/16
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/01/20 Title: Chapter 12: Better the Second Time

I keep seeing these notes that you haven't heard from readers, but I'm just now reading all these stores that you have posted over the years. I registered for the website for the sole reason of being able to respond to your stories, I absolutely love them all. Thoroughly enjoying Claire, and I wouldn't change a thing.

This is basically a love story. While there is some sex in it, it is not about sex.It is about a girl who discovers her boyfriend wears girls clothing and how it affects their relationship. It is told from the viewpoint of both parties.
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 3580 Words: 10114 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Female Domination, Forced
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Romance
Series: None
Published: 02/20/17
Updated: 02/20/17
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01/23/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked the story, just wish it had been longer, more detailed. I think you probably would have had to tell the story in a more traditional fashion to do so though.

Not all revenge schemes work as planned. When revenge involves changing your target’s gender, a backfired plan can become a disaster.
Rated: Explicit 230 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 709748 Words: 95249 Chapters: 104 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo, Bride, Girlfriend, Model, Prostitute, Stripper, Wife
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Sex Toys
Locale: Labratory, Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Revenge
Personality: Bad to Good
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual, Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Humiliation, Romance
Type of Change: Age Regression, Drug-Induced, Mechanical Device, Mind Control, Stuck
Warnings: Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 05/10/17
Updated: 08/28/17
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/01/20 Title: Chapter 81: No More Mr. Nice Guy

I didn't see Rodney as being the mastermind, but I knew he wasn't the savior that he was pretending to be, I thought he was just in on the secret and being the one to take care of Rich until the weekend, that they were just dragging out Rich's torments a bit longer for some reason yet to be revealed. But I did not see Daphne as being so reluctantly in on it even though I suspected that she might have had the same treatment. And yes, I'm now saying it all makes sense. Love it as always

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Date: 01/01/20 Title: Chapter 82: Anything but Saint Rodney

I know this email is going to be about TJ hiring him for revenge

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Date: 01/01/20 Title: Chapter 89: Meet Rikki

I love Rikki and Starr/Brian, and I hope what they do to Rodney is more unpleasant than anything I can imagine

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Date: 01/01/20 Title: Chapter 94: Welcome Wagon

I love it

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Date: 01/01/20 Title: Chapter 100: The Race Car

I'm glad they took his resort away from him, I had hoped they would

Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed
Date: 01/01/20 Title: Chapter 104: New Friends: Type Three

The saddest day of this coming year will be the day I have read all of your stories, hope you continue to write

Synopsis: Pretty transparent storyline: Young music teacher and his wife take his students to a choral festival at Walt Disney World. Luggage is lost and adjustments must be made. Not the most original premise, but, hopefully, you'll enjoy a fun ride.

This is my first story in 5 years and my first time posting at TG Storytime. I have posted stories on another site before, perhaps you've read them? TONGUE TIED, A LITTLE BIT OF A CHANGE and DUSTY ROSE. Anyway, I hope you enjoy this one. Please send comments!
Rated: Adult 15 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 14560 Words: 29612 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Daughter, Teenager
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Pantyhose, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline
Locale: Girl's School, High School, Vacation Destination
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: For a Job
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Story Theme: Humiliation
Type of Change: Age Regression, Changed by Clothing
Series: Dusty Rose
Published: 06/17/17
Updated: 06/23/17
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed
Date: 01/20/20 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Really enjoyed this one, I love how this one has a solid ending, it feels like the story has been told to it's end, nothing left to be said. I'm just sad to be saying goodbye to another of your wonderful characters.

Author's Response: Youíve been a busy reader, lately. Thank you!

Chris fills in as the singer for his sister's all-girl country music band, Dusty Rose, for one gig at the student union. That night, a record company executive happens to hear them and offers them a recording deal, but it will require Chris to make some Alterations
Rated: Adult 25 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 31459 Words: 81007 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: Breast Forms, Curlers, Lingerie, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline, Undies
Locale: College, Family Household
Body Modification: Breast Implants
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Willing or Voluntary
Series: None
Published: 07/17/17
Updated: 08/19/17
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed
Date: 01/21/20 Title: Chapter 9: Dusty Rose 10

Again, I love this so very much. I am ecstatic that you plan to return to Chrissie and Dusty Rose, on to your next story!

Author's Response: Thank you, again!

Once an attentive husband, Andrew has become a miserly, controlling jerk. Headed for a divorce, his wife embraces a radical solution, but something goes wrong.
Rated: Adult 7 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 49126 Words: 44100 Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Child, Teenager
Featured Items: Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline, School Uniform, Undies
Locale: Family Household, Formal Dance, Office
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Accident, Revenge
Personality: Bad to Good
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Second Childhood
Type of Change: Age Regression
Series: None
Published: 11/06/17
Updated: 11/06/17
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed
Date: 01/21/20 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - One Month Later

I have to say I didn't care as much for this one as I have for the other stories I've read of yours so far, but it is simply because I like the realistic change stories so much more than science fiction changes. Your characters still sparkle

Author's Response: Thank you. I prefer realist situations, too, but this was fun for me.

Successful and financially well-off, Martha's life has taken a few unexpected turns recently, leaving her lonely and longing for something more. George is also lonely and just trying to get from one job to another. When their paths converge at a local bank one evening, suddenly things look brighter for both of them.
Rated: Adult 19 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 10853 Words: 32416 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Wife
Locale: Family Household, Hairstyling/Salon
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 11/15/17
Updated: 01/03/18
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed
Date: 01/20/20 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I only have one complaint - this story is way too short, I am very sad to have to say goodbye to Jessie and Marty. I hope you come back to these characters, I would love to see their wedding and everything that leads up to it.

Author's Response: Thatís very sweet of you to sat. Thank you!

The maker of a transformative catsuit shares her stories.
Rated: Explicit 65 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 379579 Words: 73903 Chapters: 97 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/01/20 Title: Chapter 8: Madison - Chapter 7

That was fun, glad I read it around Christmas

Eighteen year old Paul agrees to help his mother with a sewing project. Everyone knew that he bore a striking resemblance to his grandmother when she was his age, but once he lets his hair down and is in a dress, they realize that he truly was created in her Spit and Image.
Rated: Adult 56 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 40513 Words: 91598 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: Breast Forms, Curlers, Lingerie, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline, Undies
Locale: Family Household, Formal Dance, Hairstyling/Salon
Motivation for Change: Caught Crossdressing, Dared into It
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 03/21/18
Updated: 05/15/18
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/21/20 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

As always, I love the story and I love the characters. I do have a comment on the title and the explanation of "spit and image" that you used in the story. I looked up the reference of the creation of man in Genesis and spit wasn't mentioned in any translation that I was able to find. I did find a reference to the origins of "spitting image" that said "'Spit' was historically used to mean "perfect likeness," possibly because it was said that a child looked enough like a parent to have been spit out of the parent's mouth." As far as I could find, there were no references to this before around the 1400s. If you wish to look into it, I found a very good article at https://www.merriam-webster.com/words-at-play/spitting-image-origin-meaning
There were many other articles that I read regarding this (I enjoy research), but that was the one I liked the best. You could contact me at cybersaver@gmail.com if you read this and wish to.

Author's Response: Hi Iím not sure which edition of The Bible this comes from, but it is Genesis 1-2: ďAnd the Lord God formed clay of the dust of the ground and spit, and breathed into his nostrils the breath of life; and man became a living soulĒ According to The Grammarist - Spitting image is the usual modern form of the idiom meaning exact likeness, duplicate, or counterpart. The original phrase was spit and image, inspired by the Biblical GodĎs use of spit and mud to create Adam in his image. Either way, they, spit and spitting, are both acceptable idioms and neither is the point of the story. No big deal, but itís a literary decision that I made and Iím sticking to it! 😁

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Date: 01/21/20 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

omg, what a wonderful brother

Author's Response: Iím glad you like him. Heís a real hero

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Date: 01/21/20 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm nervous about his last day before the photo at school, I hope they don't ruin it for him

Author's Response: Stay tuned

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Date: 01/21/20 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh god, the next page is the end, I'm just not ready for that

Author's Response: Hehehe

Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/21/20 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OMG, so many tissues! I've been reading your stories in order by when they were written, and I feel that each one is better than the last one. This one was the most believable story yet, his struggle to understand what he wanted was just simply perfect.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading it and all of your comments. They mean a lot to me

Val was best friends with his two female co-workers, all of them pranksters. He found it amusing when they jokingly referred to him as just one of the girls. Amusing, that is, until ....
Rated: Explicit 32 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 127055 Words: 13031 Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing
Series: None
Published: 08/23/18
Updated: 10/19/18
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/09/20 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Gotcha Back!

This is one of the best "forced" feminization stories I've read, it is more of a pushed into it type of thing. I just wish we could have continued to see what happens between Val and Eric and also what happens when Jane and Trish find out that Val and Eric are continuing the relationship. Please write a sequel?

Author's Response: So glad you liked it. I've given over writing sequels. I always get stuck just repeating what's gone before, and anyway, isn't it nice to be able to fill in the next part of the character's life with your own fantasies?

Continuation of John’s adventures in ‘Kiss Me, Bianca.’ John moves to Los Angeles to pursue his career as an actres.
Rated: Adult 82 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 30361 Words: 187153 Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Featured Items: Lingerie, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline, School Uniform, Undies
Locale: Family Household, Formal Dance, Girl's School, Hairstyling/Salon, High School
Motivation for Change: For a Job
Personality: Loses Identity
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Coming of Age
Type of Change: Age Regression, Hormonal
Series: None
Published: 10/30/18
Updated: 04/05/19
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/22/20 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I've been loving this set of series so much, I'm afraid I haven't been commenting, but this once I have to critique something. Miss Stephanie can't have heard then saying BeBe is a "young girl now" without having heard way too much other incriminating information - in fact that phrase is actually never said. The statement "Bebe, you’re a girl, now. A young girl." should be moved to the end of the paragraph and should actually state she is "a young girl now" or the whole conversation just doesn't make sense. Don't get me wrong, I am simply astounded by the quality of your writing, it gets better from series to series, and this being a set of three series so I can spend more time with these characters is quite wonderful.

Author's Response: I did not catch that

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Date: 01/22/20 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I can't wait to see what happens in the next series and I was so happy to see Chrissy and Dusty Rose again. Your writing continues to stun and is always better with each series. Love it, Love it, Love it!

Author's Response: Thank you

I thought it would be fun to track my senior year of high school. Well...parts of of this story are autobiographical, but most is made up fun. I'll be adding chapters as time allows me to write them.
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 30678 Words: 5264 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
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Date: 01/02/20 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Next Day

Really good story, I love how it is a mostly voluntary change for Steffi, hope you will be continuing to post more of this

A young closeted trans girl struggling with dysphoria in her life; Luna, or as she's known to others, Leo desperately wishes upon a star like in the stories to become the girl she always knew she was supposed to be. Little did she know her wish would be granted, and what that would entail.
Rated: Adult 69 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 23998 Words: 27741 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Categories: Trans Life
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend, Teenager
Locale: Family Household, High School, Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Women, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 01/31/19
Updated: 06/21/20
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/01/20 Title: Chapter 5: And I Love Her

Well, since I grew up in the 60's, my own coming out wasn't anywhere near as accepted, I really envy Luna having friends who would accept her like that. My first try was bad enough to send me back into boy's clothes, as was my second try in the 70's. It wasn't until I was in college in the 80's that I was actually able to stay true to who I was. Thankfully, my father was military and I never had to see anyone again from the aborted tries to be myself. I don't know what I would have done if my father hadn't been willing to let me try.

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Date: 08/01/20 Title: Chapter 4: Fixing a Hole

Well, since I can't really expect my wish to have this happen to me, maybe I can have my wish granted to have that dream.

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Date: 08/01/20 Title: Chapter 3: With A Little Help From My Friends

Still having lots of fun with this!

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Date: 08/01/20 Title: Chapter 2: Here Comes The Sun

Um, just a note, it is Heterochromatic eyes, not heteroaromatic eyes, I don't think her eyes smell differently. Other than that, I'm loving this!

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Date: 08/01/20 Title: Chapter 8: Here, There And Everywhere

I still want to have that kind of dream! Thanks for another wonderful chapter.

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Date: 08/01/20 Title: Chapter 7: Another Girl

I can so relate to this one, I always resented that I couldn't do sleepovers when my friends had one, almost all of my friends have always been girls. Thankfully, I always had at least one or two who knew me and I loved makeovers! And I really hope that that offhand comment about being happy even if this didn't last isn't a harbinger of things to come.

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Date: 08/01/20 Title: Chapter 7: Another Girl

I can so relate to this one, I always resented that I couldn't do sleepovers when my friends had one, almost all of my friends have always been girls. Thankfully, I always had at least one or two who knew me and I loved makeovers!

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Date: 08/01/20 Title: Chapter 6: A Hard Day's Night

Hey, don't sell yourself short, this was an awesome chapter too! I'm glad that Amber got taken down a peg and Luna didn't have to suffer too much. Love this! And I don't normally like "magical" changes like this, I like realistic stories, but this one rocks! Glad I gave it a try.

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Date: 08/01/20 Title: Chapter 9: All You Need Is Love

Ah, prom. I never went, I had my femme side so badly trodden down that I couldn't go like I wanted to, so I just didn't go. Even with the troubles, this was a great chapter. Thank you!

Erik came home from school one day after being called a girl, but realized...he kind of liked it? Follow along as Emma navigates her gender identity, in a family and community that may not be ready for her.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 61 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 20172 Words: 33654 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Hormonal
Series: None
Published: 02/18/19
Updated: 03/28/19
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed
Date: 02/01/20 Title: Chapter 13: September 6th, 2019

Please, please, please tell me more is on the way! Absolutely love this.

Out of work due to a strike and in need of some income to save his marriage and his credit rating, Parker turns to his brother for a job at a cabaret club.
Rated: Explicit 20 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 15298 Words: 31005 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: None
Featured Items: Work Uniform
Locale: Family Household
Body Modification: Breast Implants, Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: For a Job
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Series: None
Published: 05/24/19
Updated: 06/05/19
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/23/20 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I didn't like this one, I loved it! I wish I was Parker

Author's Response: Whew! Scared me for a moment.

Robyn by NicoleR New!
A young music student contracts a disease that requires radical treatment and it changes his body and his mind. He gets by with a little help from his friends.
Rated: Adult 63 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 136534 Words: 51490 Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Hormonal
Series: None
Published: 06/12/19
Updated: 08/10/20
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/14/20 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I have really loved Robyn's story so far, and I hope that you will be coming back to these since you just updated these last month. The characters are wonderful and the story line sparkles. Really looking forward to how all the different relationships play out.

Author's Response: Thank you. Sorry it's been so long, life got in the way.

Bebe’s back and is about ready to start filming her first movie, but living as a fifteen year old girl has a lot of complications.

Please note - This is a continuity of my previous ‘Bebe’ stories, ‘Kiss Me Bianca’ and ‘Bebe in LaLa Land.’

Also, the labels do not apply to every chapter
Rated: Adult 36 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 10169 Words: 99210 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Featured Items: Lingerie, School Uniform, Undies
Locale: Family Household, Girl's School, High School, Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Romance
Type of Change: Age Regression, Hormonal
Series: None
Published: 08/18/19
Updated: 10/30/19
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/22/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love Joanne

Author's Response: Me too

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Date: 01/23/20 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Damn it, now I have to wait for the next page to drop, how am I going to get my BeBe fix? I love this series, and I'll have to check every day and hope I find something to help with my withdrawal symptoms.

Author's Response: Sadly, I think Iíve reached the end of Bebeís saga. I have a new series running now called ĎPositively Glowing.í Three chapters have been posted so far. More are coming. Thank you for reading!

Frank gets out of jail, and reconnects with an old friend.
Rated: Adult 38 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 50360 Words: 28275 Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Hormonal
Series: None
Published: 11/19/19
Updated: 01/23/20
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/14/20 Title: Chapter 17: Epilogue: And From Now On...

God I loved this, soooooo much looking forward to reading more!

When Riley’s sister Nancy finds out he’s a cross dresser, she makes a plan for a night that would change his life forever.
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 78769 Words: 9525 Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Breast Forms, Gaff, High Heels
Locale: Family Household, Road Trip
Motivation for Change: Caught Crossdressing, Undercover, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Comedy, Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 11/26/19
Updated: 04/20/20
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/14/20 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

My only complaint is that I have to wait now for the next part, can't wait! Loved this soooo much!

Author's Response: Iím so glad you like it! Iíll be posting the next few chapters soon.

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Date: 05/25/20 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Aww, it was just getting going, hope you will be posting more soon. I really like this one and can't wait to see where you are going to take them.

Author's Response: I definitely will be posting soon! I've been crazy busy but I will definitely wrap this story up in probably 3 chapters. I'm glad you like it!

With the encouragement of his wife and sister, Gerry tries on some foundation garments to see if they make him look thinner. Unfortunately, they have the opposite effect.
Rated: Adult 34 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 41231 Words: 94606 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: None
Turned Into: Mother
Featured Items: Lingerie
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident, Dared into It, Female Domination, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Costume or Halloween, Everyday Living, Pregnancy
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing
Series: None
Published: 01/08/20
Updated: 05/13/20
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed
Date: 01/23/20 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well, I knew it would happen, but I'm still so sad. I've read every word you have written here so far and loved all but the sci-fi story - but that's because I don't really care for those, not because your story was bad. Hope to see a new page posted soon!
BTW, my partner is a newspaper writer and I proofread (and even edit) every story, if you ever want a proofreader, I would be happy to help - I love your stories that much! It seems to me that you use spell check to do your proofreading, as I don't see misspellings but I do see the wrong word sometimes - like your when it should be you're. You can reach me at cybersaver@gmail.com.

Author's Response: Thank you - both for the offer and for reading my stories. Actually, I do proof my stories twice before posting, but obviously, I still miss a few things. I tend to write quickly on an iPad, so the first time through is usually removing numbers or symbols in words that occur because my finger slipped on the screen and an alternate symbol appeared instead of the letter. I also rewrite and correct the story as I do the first proof. The second time I look for whatever I missed the first, BUT unless I read it aloud, I do sort of skim. I may take you up on your offer. I do like to post ASAP, so I can be more impetuous than I should.

Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed
Date: 02/12/20 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I loved this one too Clara, can't wait to see Gerri with her new baby. Really curious to see what the Halloween plans are.

Author's Response: Thank you, Holly! Thank you for sticking with us, too!

Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/18/20 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh what a wonderful end to a wonderful story, I absolutely loved this. Can't wait to see what the new one is.

Author's Response: Thank you, Holly! Thatís very sweet. Wishing you the best of health in this strange and dangerous time.

Alexander is your average college boy, trying to juggle studying, sports, and a part-time job. Until a chance encounter with femininity sets her down a new path.
Rated: Adult 60 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 66886 Words: 45975 Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Featured Items: Work Uniform
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Series: None
Published: 01/31/20
Updated: 05/30/20
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/21/20 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Molly

I am so thoroughly enjoying this story and ecstatic to find a currently running series, so many of the series here have been abandoned or finished long ago. I love the characters and the story line, you have a nice gift for dialogue.

Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/21/20 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Maddy

Gah, snuck up on me, I didn't realize this was the last posted chapter! I have so thoroughly been enjoying this story, I can't wait to read more of Lexi's story. I'm really curious to see who Lexi ends up being in a relationship with, Roger or Molly would be my guess. Thank you for such a wonderful story, now it is time to read your other stories - while I wait for this one's next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I'm glad you've enjoyed my story so far. And also, you're in luck, since I've just posted a new chapter :)

Due to a case of mistaken identity, a young man gets a Valentine's Day makeover intended for someone else.
Rated: Adult 6 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 13600 Words: 4638 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails
Motivation for Change: Accident
Series: A Mixed-Up Series
Published: 02/15/20
Updated: 02/17/20
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/22/20 Title: Chapter 1: A Mixed-Up Valentine's Day

I'm so glad this isn't The End, I already looked to see that there are a couple of sequels.

The sequel to 'A Mixed-Up Valentine's Day', where Felicia makes it known that for her birthday, all she wants is to spend a weekend with Carly, so Carl books a vacation to spend the birthday weekend together as girlfriends at a beach-side resort.
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 7154 Words: 4287 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, Long Nails
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Series: A Mixed-Up Series
Published: 02/20/20
Updated: 02/22/20
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/22/20 Title: Chapter 2: A Mixed-Up Birthday

My only regret in this one is that the next installment is the last one posted, I hope you can continue both this one a Feminized Summertime.

A sequel to 'A Mixed-Up Getaway', where, since Carl insists that Carly remain a best kept secret between him and Felicia, Felicia plans something special before the wedding for Carly.
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 5538 Words: 3218 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Bride
Featured Items: Bridal Gown, High Heels, Long Nails
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Series: A Mixed-Up Series
Published: 03/09/20
Updated: 03/11/20
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/22/20 Title: Chapter 2: A Mixed-Up Wedding Ceremony

I pray that the same Chapter End Note is in the next installment. I'm loving this story too much to have it end there.

Taylor is forced to spend the summer with a reclusive great aunt, but he gets more than he bargained for after a harmless prank gone wrong forces him to spend the summer masquerading as a girl.
Rated: Adult 39 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 82398 Words: 21860 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, Long Nails
Motivation for Change: Accident
Series: None
Published: 04/04/20
Updated: 07/24/20
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/21/20 Title: Chapter 8: To Sleepover, Perchance to Dream Continued

This was so much fun, I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go with this one. Now on to your others!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you're enjoying it!

Bobby wants to get a promotion and date Kelly, the sexy secretary. However, Bobby first needs to learn how to control Amelia, his newly awakened feminine side. Who will win the battle for control? And will Kelly become his new GF or BFF?
Rated: Explicit 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 8067 Words: 8408 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed
Date: 06/09/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Amelia Reawakened

I'm sorry, I don't usually leave a review that is the least bit snarky, but I have to say something. I do like what you are doing, but this is not a realistic gender change story.

The quarantine opens up an opportunity for Carl to bring Carly out more often, but after he accidentally oversleeps, can he get rid of the evidence before a work video conference begins?
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 1827 Words: 1399 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Featured Items: Long Nails
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Comedy
Series: A Mixed-Up Series
Published: 04/21/20
Updated: 04/21/20
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/22/20 Title: Chapter 1: A Mixed-Up Quarantine

YAY! I'm so happy that this will continue! And I'm simultaneously so bummed that I now have to wait for the next chapter of this or Feminized Summer to drop.

Tyler had wanted to try going to the dance as a girl. Be treated and seen as one. It was a fantasy he planned for a long time, but this one night was going to make the remaining part of his school year a memorable experience more than he dreamed it could become.
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 8002 Words: 7398 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Lingerie, School Uniform, Undies
Locale: Formal Dance, High School
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Coming of Age
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing
Series: None
Published: 05/20/20
Updated: 08/08/20
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/21/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Plan

I like the premise of the story and this is a nice beginning, but I do have a couple of suggestions. First, it is difficult to read because of lack of white space, you need to separate out the paragraphs with double spacing between them. You can even split some of those paragraphs, you should have only one basic thought within each paragraph. Second, dialogue needs to be separated out with each person's dialogue having its own paragraph. This will improve readability tremendously and give you a much higher chance of having this read, I honestly would not have even tried to read this if you hadn't included your story note. Third, I would strongly recommend that you have someone edit this, I already edit for several people on fictionmania but I would be willing to help you with this first effort. I can't promise that I could help with any further chapters as they keep my busy, but I could try. Keep at it though, you do have a nice touch with the story concept. If you wish my help, you can contact me at cybersaver@gmail.com.

Author's Response: Yea I did space it out in my word document, but somehow It did not translate over through the posting of the story.

Stuck in quarantine with nothing to occupy his mechanically inclined mind, Jordan is looking for a project to keep himself busy.
Rated: Adult 33 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 21664 Words: 73218 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Featured Items: Curlers, Lingerie
Locale: Family Household, Hairstyling/Salon
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion
Type of Change: Age Regression, Changed by Clothing
Series: None
Published: 06/02/20
Updated: 08/09/20
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/12/20 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

oh, this is just so cute, I love this one Clara! Can't wait for the next chapter, I always love your writing.

Author's Response: Thank you, Holly. Thatís very sweet of you to say.

A fourteen year old boy has longed his whole life to be a girl- then one day, a new girl joins his class, who will change his life forever...
Rated: Adult 10 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 17358 Words: 35691 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend, Teenager
Featured Items: Pantyhose, School Uniform, Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Hormonal
Series: None
Published: 06/18/20
Updated: 07/24/20
Reviewer: Holly Snow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/29/20 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh, I do love this so much, I'm really dreading Nikki's parent's reaction - please don't let it be as bad as mine with such violence. The hospital is a horrible place.

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