OfficiallyZoe
Hello! I'm a trans woman from Italy who dabbles in writing stories. Nice to meet you :)

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Member Since: 11/13/19 Membership status: Member
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Reviews by OfficiallyZoe
A young man gets a glimpse of an unexpected future
Rated: Explicit 9 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 6151 Words: 2728 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Trans Life
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Wife
Body Modification: Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Women, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 01/02/18
Updated: 01/02/18
Reviewer: OfficiallyZoe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/20/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really liked this story. When I first read it I was just starting transition, and without going into further details I was full of doubts, so this tale with its "glimpse of a better future" left quite an impression in me. I still think about it now and then.

Thank you for writing it.

Mel is super insecure about his body, until his gym bro roommate volunteers to help him get in shape. But as Mel starts becoming more and more feminine, she realizes that maybe being overweight wasn't the real issue.
Rated: Explicit 139 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 225138 Words: 69709 Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Lingerie, Undies
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Romance, Sports
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 02/25/19
Updated: 01/13/20
Reviewer: OfficiallyZoe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/14/20 Title: Chapter 24: The End

Heyyyyyy, congrats on completing this story and congrats on the HRT! I'm so happy for you! :)

Author's Response: thank you!!! been loving The Adress btw, anyone else in here looking at reviews, go read The Address it's cute af

An adventurer announces their retirement... and reveals the secret burden they've been carrying. A couple of exes try to salvage their friendship from the ruins of their relationship... and maybe something more. Two U.S. Marshals hunt for outlaws in 1876 Arizona... and find monsters. A fox running for his life from a trigger-happy farmer encounters a strange being... and finds a new life. Dive into these and three other stories by Dark Sun Morrigan, Desert Willow, Morrigan Q.R., MrSimple, Paradox, and Trismegistus Shandy.
Rated: Adult 1 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 6994 Words: 19170 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Reviewer: OfficiallyZoe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/20/20 Title: Chapter 6: Retirement

This story is lovely. I really enjoyed the character interactions, and the glimpses and hints at a bigger world. Thank you for writing it.

A short story about lifes of two young trans girls, finding each other, finding themselves, and eventually, getting together.

P.S. The title is a subtle hint that I'm incompetent and have no idea what I'm doing
Rated: Kid-Friendly 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 977 Words: 1694 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Women, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Romance
Series: None
Published: 02/04/20
Updated: 02/05/20
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Date: 04/22/20 Title: Chapter 1: The story. Whole of it. Thatís it. I donít have enough control over my brain to separate stuff I write into chapters

I really enjoyed this. A nice tale of two girlfriends (who at first don't realise they're girls, and then that they can drop the space from "girl friends") growing up together.

"For the next three months I will be putting myself on a low dose, anti-androgen and estrogen combo, because, uhhh... My si- brother came out as trans and I like to think empathy is the best manner to understand someone, so I want to see if I can manage to prompt in myself some gender dysphoria to... [Silence.] Dammit what’s the word— Ah— Yeah, you know, gain some perspective on the matter."
Rated: Kid-Friendly 4 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 3489 Words: 2643 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Trans Life
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Wife
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Women, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Comedy, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 03/09/20
Updated: 03/09/20
Reviewer: OfficiallyZoe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/12/20 Title: Chapter 1: audiologs.mp4

I love this. I'm glad Allan and Rose, with a bit of chemical help, were able to pierce Juniper's extra thick shell.

Author's Response: the slow acting, self hatching shell.

Eli knew the rumor: taking a coin from a wishing fountain made you responsible for fulfilling the wish. He didn’t realize the magic would take away his body and mind from him to do it, though. And how does him turning into a girl help anyone anyhow?
Rated: Adult 99 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 170423 Words: 85414 Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Trans
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse
Personality: Bad to Good, Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 04/03/20
Updated: 07/13/20
Reviewer: OfficiallyZoe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/29/20 Title: Chapter 28: Spiraling

Ester. Honey. Dear. It's okay. I know you're going through a lot.

But talk to someone. Please. You're not alone, even if you feel that way, don't try to solve everything on your own.

(P.s.: and Sue shows her real, bitchy colours. I'm not surprised, to be honest.)

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Date: 06/18/20 Title: Chapter 25: Falling into Place

Damn, this is a stressful situation. How to make April take back the wish, without making her feel super guilty that she (unwittingly) did this to Ester?

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Date: 07/14/20 Title: Chapter 35: Beginning of a New Life

Thank you for this story! I really enjoyed reading it. I'm happy Ester was able to find closure and build a group of true, genuine friends.

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Date: 04/19/20 Title: Chapter 5: Trusted Friends and Allies

Found out about this story, and I'm really enjoying it so far! I especially like the characters and setting (our world, but also magic is real). Looking forward to seeing how it develops!

Author's Response: Thanks! That means a lot to me, as a fan of your own work and characters.

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Date: 04/22/20 Title: Chapter 6: Isolation

Oh, cripes, I feel so sorry for poor Eli. His body is changing in unwanted ways and it's upsetting him, and he doesn't even have anyone to talk to right now.

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Date: 05/06/20 Title: Chapter 8: Spinning out of Control

Excuse me, what the fuck? It's been a BURDEN ON THE FAMILY? And they toss Eli out just like that?

Oh I want to reach through my screen and strangle those two idiot parents.

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Date: 05/14/20 Title: Chapter 12: A Long Day at the Mall

I think I've got it figured out. Whose wish Eli "took" from the fountain, I mean, and what that wish was. I can't wait to see if I was right.

I'm really enjoying this story!

Author's Response: Keep it secret, keep it safe. Three more chapters.

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Date: 05/16/20 Title: Chapter 13: Enemies Surround

This is, no joke, stuff I've had nightmares about. They're literally treating El as if he were a trans girl transitioning in school, down to the "it's your own fault if you get harassed" spiel.

Luckily my transition went smoother, but I still feel for El. (Not in the least because this is being forced on him.)

Author's Response: Yeah, some of this stuff gets a little too real for me too, but it betters the story to have this kind of conflict so I put it in despite it making me a little uncomfortable. I don't normally like fiction that's emotionally exhausting, but there's definitely value in it sometimes.

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Date: 05/23/20 Title: Chapter 15: A Star is Born

A-ha, I was right! :D

The big problem now is where El/Ester goes from here. They're being magically compelled right now, but I get the feeling this is helping them figuring out what they want; it'll be interesting to see what direction they take once the compulsion is removed.

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Date: 06/11/20 Title: Chapter 23: A Girl of Two Worlds

Oh I feel this. There are plenty of things I did "before" I didn't really like, but went along with so I would fit into a group.

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