helzblack
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Member Since: 06/11/19 Membership status: Member
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A new story leads to secrets and life or death situations for me
Rated: Kid-Friendly 10 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 16022 Words: 14041 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Child (0-12 yrs), Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Baby, Child, Daughter, Son, Twin
Featured Items: Diapers
Locale: Family Household, Labratory
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Blackmailed, Forced, Tricked, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Bad to Good, Fights Change, Made Dumber
Story Theme: Babyhood, Captive, Coming of Age, Medical Experiment, Second Childhood
Type of Change: Age Regression, Drug-Induced, Stuck
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 05/14/14
Updated: 07/25/14
Reviewer: helzblack Signed
Date: 03/30/20 Title: Chapter 1: The beginning

Why the heck did he tell the goverment how he escaped when the scientist asked him? I wouldn't have said anything

Playing with magic can be dangerous, especially when you mess with someone elses spell. Can Tim manage to figure out just what is happening to him and find a way to reverse it before its too late?
Rated: Adult 8 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 22532 Words: 16448 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Child, Daughter
Featured Items: Pantyhose
Motivation for Change: Accident, Forced
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Story Theme: Second Childhood, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Age Regression, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 08/06/14
Updated: 08/06/14
Reviewer: helzblack Signed
Date: 04/11/20 Title: Chapter 1: The Telling

The protagonist needs to be more pushy. He just let his mother and sister boss him around and that's why he ended up transformed

Men are now infertile and thus useless as women find other means of reproducing. Being a man is now illegal... 2nd chapter in production
Rated: Kid-Friendly 1 Reviews Story Incomplete Reads: 2527 Words: 2010 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: None
Locale: Labratory
Series: None
Published: 12/11/17
Updated: 12/12/17
Reviewer: helzblack Signed
Date: 01/15/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Why didn't you continue this? I liked it!

After making a tidy sum off his own computer start-up, Matthew is ready to marry his supple fiancee and retire young. However, he quiet suddenly finds himself quiet drastically demoted when he steps through the wrong door. Will he ever escape the seemingly bottomless degradation of this new reality?
Rated: Deviant 5 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 61190 Words: 3525 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Reviewer: helzblack Signed
Date: 03/18/20 Title: Chapter 1: Detoured & Humiliated

PLeanse finish this story

A new chosen hero has come to rid the world of the Demon race and their Demon Lord. But the demon Lord has other plans for the chosen hero.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 52 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 37253 Words: 57440 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Reviewer: helzblack Signed
Date: 07/29/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 A New start

Yay another chapter!!

Author's Response: Yay! Excitement! Hehe

Reviewer: helzblack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/31/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 A New start

Cutest, fluffiest story I've EVER read. It's so sweet it gives you diabetes.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much. I had no idea it could cause such a reaction, maybe I should bn lower the sugar content hehehe but in all seriousness thank you and I'm glad you enjoy it.

Reviewer: helzblack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/09/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 A New start

Hope you are not dead and can continue this story

Author's Response: Oh I'm not dead... I think. But I'll be sure to post more in time. Forgive me for the wait, it's just sometimes I really need to think and feel out where the story needs to go next that everyone can enjoy. ^_^

Reviewer: helzblack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/12/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 A New start

Great. I thought you were dead. Wonder ful new chapter

Author's Response: Thank you, yes I am not dead ^^ and thank you

Reviewer: helzblack Signed
Date: 03/12/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 A New start

By the way. Does Sophie shape-shifting powers only allow her to change her species, or could she look like anyone she wanted to? Also it was mentioned that she can turn into any type of demon, does that mean that humans are a type of demon? Finally does Rose share her father's DNA too?

Author's Response: Sophia's shape shifting powers are just being explained but she is regarded as the type of demon to take on the appearance and qualities of every species she becomes. So far only three forms have been used by her. As for the human part you will need to see what happens in the future ^^ As for Rose, she sadly does not. Its a little different for transitioned demons and their families. DNA isn't something highly regarded as highly important to have in a family, only important to be used in times for an example to transition humans into a demonic race that we have seen so far. Before the war with humans it may have been a bigger deal, however with the ongoing war many realized a demon is still a demon, and needs to be taken care of no matter where they come from in life. Sure there may be prejudices in many places in pure demon race blood, but just like humans it has it drawbacks. Rose will probably never have her fathers DNA , shes still a part of the family regardless and still has their mates DNA and usually that is enough to call them family due to their words spoken.

Tormented for years by his mother and sister, Victor's life is upended as his sister turns him into a witch to help cast a spell to banish a darkling hunting her friend. Overwhelmed with new powers, and bonded as the avatar to a Vanir goddess, Victoria will try to deal with a growing threat from darkness beyond, while dealing with an estranged family and their coven.
Rated: Explicit 48 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 30845 Words: 34962 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character, Girlfriend
Locale: Family Household, Girl's School, High School
Motivation for Change: Forced
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 10/31/18
Updated: 09/20/19
Reviewer: helzblack Signed
Date: 09/24/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really think you let victoria 's mother and sister get scot free way to easily. I mean her mom's punishment is to remain an attractive teenager? They way the story started I would have like for Victoria to run away and have her own adventures with Lewis/Chloe, instead of letting the coven walk all over her.

Reviewer: helzblack Signed
Date: 09/20/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thought you had croaked

In a world of superheroes and villains, Gavin McArthur feels like more of a shell than a person even after he transfers to a school for kids who are likely to soon posses an Alter form, a form that grants the user super powers and a different appearance. But what do you to do when your Alter form represents an uncomfortable truth about yourself that you're not prepared to face?
Rated: Adult 130 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 99863 Words: 222078 Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Featured Items: Masks, School Uniform, Work Uniform
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Coming of Age
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 02/25/19
Updated: 06/22/20
Reviewer: helzblack Signed
Date: 06/21/19 Title: Chapter 1: Lighting in a Bottle

Always leaving it in a cliffhanger or hungering for more. Pure evil. Publish longer chapters

Reviewer: helzblack Signed
Date: 10/17/19 Title: Chapter 1: Lighting in a Bottle

If you are gonna have Hexcute steal Gabby's powers you better make it so that she gets stuck as a girl if he removes them. I know that it is a tempting plotline for character development to see Gabby and how she will cope being stuck as a boy, but it is predictable and depressing. If Hexecute removes her powers it'd be better if she is stuck as a girl. Also I am glad to see Gabby finally standing up for herself. Doesn't she realize that unlike normal transfolk her and Cass' powers mean they could get the heck out of dodge (run away from home) and go to any country instead of dealing with this? Their powers mean that getting a job would be easier.

A sales rep for a school supplies company is duped by an all girls school with an A+ in pretense. What is he to do now?
Rated: Adult 90 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 92067 Words: 44568 Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: Girl's School, High School
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Age Regression, Drug-Induced
Series: None
Published: 07/01/19
Updated: 09/06/20
Reviewer: helzblack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/09/19 Title: Chapter 1: Orientation

Wonderful. Keep it up

Reviewer: helzblack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/23/20 Title: Chapter 1: Orientation

keept getting better and better

Reviewer: helzblack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/04/20 Title: Chapter 1: Orientation

Just because you couldn't accept your fate-a fate that's not even that big of a fucking deal! I mean, so what! Your stupid dick is gone! You're still a healthy human with a pretty good situation! Some people have it a lot worse than you! You're not deaf! You don't have ALS! Nobody's doing an ice bucket challenge for you, because your situation is pretty damn good!

That was the most transphobic comment I've heard in my entire life. Whatever Blake/Baylee decides about their situation that's what people should respect.

Why is Baylee giving up so easily? I mean is getting detention such a horrible thing. Firing her own words back to Nicole, can't she show a little sympathy for Baylee. There are much worse thing than detention and not going to bancamp, like ALS, being deaf, or feeling stuck in the wrong body.

Even if Baylee is trans that does NOT give the school a right to force her and treat her like that.

Author's Response: I honestly hadn't realized it could be taken that way until you mentioned that. But now that I reread it, I totally get your interpretation. I think the reason I didn't notice that myself is possibly because I see Baylee as more of a trans female in denial, rather than being a guy who became gender dysphoric after being turned into a girl. Still, "most transphobic comment I've ever heard" didn't sit well with me, so I've modified that part a bit to focus more on Baylee's old life rather than specifically her old gender. I don't want the Cole character to come off as transphobic. Thanks for pointing this out. And sorry if reading it made you uncomfortable. Hopefully the edit fixed it.

Reviewer: helzblack Signed
Date: 07/01/19 Title: Chapter 1: Orientation

Really intersting. hopeyou actually continue it, many good stories in this site are left unifinished.

After the strange machine appeared on the lawn at the library, Meredith found it was easy to physically transition to the feminine body she wanted so desperately. But socially transitioning, and getting her parents to go along with it, would be a lot harder.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 24 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 29267 Words: 56441 Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Trans
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Mechanical Device
Series: None
Published: 08/28/19
Updated: 12/02/19
Reviewer: helzblack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/24/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Let her escape. Let her get away from them. Parents like that should not be parents. I would really prefer that she goes away instead of staying and trying to change their minds. Bigots never change

What could possibly go wrong? Julia is concerned that her husband is spending too much time playing VR life. She's concerned John is spending too much time with Lisa in the game. Julia has a plan to discover the truth, but can her mother save John from her daughters Final Solution?
Rated: Adult 8 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 8328 Words: 5324 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Husband, Wife
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Unknown, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Witchcraft
Warnings: Incest
Series: None
Published: 09/23/19
Updated: 11/23/19
Reviewer: helzblack Signed
Date: 09/24/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So they morphed and use his magic and erase his mind whenver they please? You musn't let them get away with it. I hate stories where mind wipers get scot free. Really hoping your story continues

Author's Response: Yes it will be continued. I was tired and had to correct so many little things it made me sad at the time. This has turned out like a fruit concentrate, way to much in too little space. Anyway, more to come. Thank you for the comment.

Under the influence of a magical shirt, Ken Jenkins finds himself transformed and utterly at the mercy of his cruel housemate. A dark story of physical and mental transformation.
Rated: Deviant 10 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 21265 Words: 7192 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo, Girlfriend, Maid
Featured Items: High Heels, Maid Uniform
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement, Lips Plumped, Vaginal Alteration
Motivation for Change: Accident, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive, Made Dumber
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Captive, Humiliation, Mind/Body Posession
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Fast/Instant Change, Mind Control, Stuck
Warnings: Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 10/13/19
Updated: 10/13/19
Reviewer: helzblack Signed
Date: 01/12/20 Title: Chapter 1: Toys

That ending was an ass pull. Ken/Kimmie should have escaped, but suddenly a weirdo outta nowhere presents himself just to have a fucked up ending? Just like it is disappointing for normal movies to always have a good ending it is disappointing for horror stories to have a bad one.

Author's Response: Sorry you didn't like the ending. My intention is to, at some point, revisit Kimmie and show that things aren't as bad as they could have been. But who knows when I'll get around to it - I've got lots of open projects already.

Reviewer: helzblack Signed
Date: 01/12/20 Title: Chapter 1: Toys

I meant to *always* have such ending. It shoud *sometimes* be good, sometimes bad.

After a fast-food place introduces a new vegetarian option, a man discovers some alarming changes.
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 11003 Words: 5706 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Fights Change
Type of Change: Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 03/18/20
Updated: 03/24/20
Reviewer: helzblack Signed
Date: 03/18/20 Title: Chapter 1: Impossibly Delicious

Very intersting concept.

Author's Response: Thanks!

What if magic was real & you were offered one wish, to get the ideal body you've always dreamed of? Choose wisely though, because you only get one shot at this, then you're stuck with it for the rest of your life.
Rated: Adult 13 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 19485 Words: 17577 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Trans
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: Family Household
Body Modification: Permanent Hair/Skin/Nail Change
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: Tales from the Witches of Welland
Published: 04/03/20
Updated: 04/06/20
Reviewer: helzblack Signed
Date: 04/07/20 Title: Chapter 1: Searching for Magic

So what if zoe had been teleported to Cindy's room and was naked at the time? Cindy just grabs her and what if she had been in the crapper or something?

Author's Response: Perhaps it wasn't as clearly explained, but after the first private messages were exchanged, Cindy was watching Zoe with a clairvoyance (scrying) spell. So Cindy knew that Zoe was presentable and that it was safe to teleport her. :)

Reviewer: helzblack Signed
Date: 04/08/20 Title: Chapter 1: Searching for Magic

What if Cindy had clairvoyed Zoe while she was in the crapper. Awkward!

Eli knew the rumor: taking a coin from a wishing fountain made you responsible for fulfilling the wish. He didn’t realize the magic would take away his body and mind from him to do it, though. And how does him turning into a girl help anyone anyhow?
Rated: Adult 99 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 167686 Words: 85414 Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Trans
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse
Personality: Bad to Good, Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 04/03/20
Updated: 07/13/20
Reviewer: helzblack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/14/20 Title: Chapter 1: Make a Wish, Take a Wish

So did ester's orignal parents ever realize what happened? An epilogue is necesary

Author's Response: I went back and included a bit between Ester and Carla in the final chapter briefly discussing it, if that helps. Basically, they want nothing to do with her anymore.

Shortly after the 2020 lockdown, one man’s life is about to change forever. After almost knocking into the wrong person, he is cursed. He soon starts noticing some very drastic changes to his life, starting with the way people are treating him. Leading to the biggest change he couldn't imagine.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 43 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 90347 Words: 34926 Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Turned Into: Child, Daughter
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Curse, Revenge
Personality: Loses Identity
Story Theme: Second Childhood, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Age Regression, Hypnosis
Series: None
Published: 04/07/20
Updated: 07/14/20
Reviewer: helzblack Signed
Date: 05/01/20 Title: Chapter 2: The Uniform

Tgis story is filled with rude adults that treat everybody younger than them like second class citizens. Not even Japan, now for its deference towards the eldery, excpets younger people to be treated like servants. Only in the middle ages where you could be executed for touching the royal personage were people this pompous and arrogant.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment, it gets better trust me :)

A tail-like parasite attaches to a man, turning him into a succubus.
Rated: Explicit 2 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 6887 Words: 2927 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Fights Change, From Submissive to Dominant, Good to Bad
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Horror
Series: None
Published: 07/03/20
Updated: 07/03/20
Reviewer: helzblack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/11/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Is the tail part of her now? Or is it only a parasite? I mean can she control it? If the tail is a parasite does it reproduce? If you don't mind I have and story idea of the world beiing overrun by this tails that I'd like to write.

Clark's sister Sophie is bothering him again, trying to get him to hang out with her and her friend. He eventually plays along, walking right into her magical trick and a regrettable night. Things really get out of hand, however, when it doesn't wear off.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 12 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 26978 Words: 72054 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Curse, Dared into It, Tricked
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Witchcraft
Type of Change: Age Regression, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 08/29/20
Updated: 09/05/20
Reviewer: helzblack Signed
Date: 08/29/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Sleepover

Everything was going well till that part where the girls forced her to drop her advanced classes. What is this obssession with dumbing down people in stories? Poor Claire I just felt bad for her. It truly sickened me to see that happen to her. Why did you allowed them to get away with it? The corset should have fought the spell from the girls. After all the corset seems to believe that ladies make their best efforts.

Reviewer: helzblack Signed starstarstar
Date: 09/07/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Sleepover

I really want to like this story, but the awfulness of the people surrounding the protagonist puts me off, otherwise it would quite good and wholesome

The story of how an androgynous teen transforms into a beautiful girl, as shared by the most important EIGHT PEOPLE in his life, including himself. Too bad, the journey starts with the parents divorce!
Rated: Kid-Friendly 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 1945 Words: 6562 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Reviewer: helzblack Signed
Date: 09/24/20 Title: Chapter 1: Jo

Why is this called EIGHT PEOPLE? I don't understand!

Author's Response: Because, this shares the views of eight people in the boy's life. Still, I'm considering to change the title, when I'll be uploading the next chapters. Thought of "Eight Shades of Jo". If you think of any other suitable title, kindly share me.

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