Headhunter
I like to read a lot during my free time, I love flush out storys with a few imaginative world, its also nice reading the difference of main characters between other stories.
Member Since: 02/13/19 Membership status: Member
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Mark Nilsen is moving out of his house, and America. He had high hopes and is super excited for his journey. An unfortunate event leads him to meet a mysterious bunch of strangers that will change his life forever.
Rated: Explicit 18 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 43101 Words: 10638 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
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Date: 02/24/19 Title: Chapter 1: A Dream Come True

Oh man the part about the mother gave those feels dude. I hope they dont get the chance to wipe his memory in the next chapter, having a mom that supportive of you is a hard tear jecker and to forgot something like that breaks my heart.

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Date: 11/20/19 Title: Chapter 5: Strange Dreams

Been awhile since I last seen this story. Im a bit sad that Mark now Megan memories been erased and replaced, personally I wouldn't want to forget the important people that I hold dear be taken away.

Dont know whats next, but im curious to what happens.

Much of the world has been destroyed an a mysterious enemy who have poisoned much of the land. A pilot fighting to defend Alaska is shot down bringing his flying career to an end, that is until he is offered the chance to become a test subject in the Winged Warrior programme.
Rated: Adult 187 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 112793 Words: 128996 Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Featured Items: Lingerie, Undies
Locale: Labratory
Motivation for Change: For a Job
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 09/19/14
Updated: 01/05/15
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Date: 02/19/19 Title: Chapter 44: Epilogue

This has been one of the best storys I ever had the pleasure of reading, I can see all the love and hard work you have put into making this story into reality and as a reader I thank you for sharing it with me. Don't know if you plan on doing a sequel but since we know unknown 2 was human and uknown 1 just poof into dust upon defeat, is it still out there waiting for its moment? Who knows either way only you can tell me that tale.

Author's Response: I had plans for a continuation, but those never came to fruition. Maybe one day that seed will bear fruit. Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

When a dormant curse reawakens on his 18th birthday, a high school senior finds that moonlit nights have become infinitely more terrifying...and annoying.
Rated: Adult 75 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 198526 Words: 134250 Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Curse, Revenge
Personality: Fights Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 10/07/14
Updated: 06/21/19
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Date: 04/26/19 Title: Chapter 26: Stranded

Well crap, you're right that it isnt Andrew's week, im surprise he still hasn't blown up on karl yet like everyone else has. Also Electronic Arts being pro-consumer crack me up .

Author's Response: Andy probably should have blown up over it, I think his outrage would be the most understandable. He's probably just too shocked right now to even get mad.

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Date: 06/21/19 Title: Chapter 31: Here on Out

Ok so Andy is now stuck as a girl till the end of time due to karl major fuck up, and meanwhile Kylie is turning into a guy at night until that curse gets removed.

Andy seems to be going into a catatonic state at the moment so I hope she gets all the help and support she can get. With Kylie I dont see them missing up a second time so odds are she will be able to lift the curse on her and return to being a girl full time.

At the end of the day how does this effect thier relationship, they obviously love each other but after the curse on Kylie gets lifted will she still be willing to be with Andy? This curse has caused many problems but hopefully it doesn't take away thier love.

Author's Response: Their relationship could go one of many different ways from this point forward, but if there's one thing that remains certain, it's that they're going to need each other more than ever now. Kylie keeping her condition a secret from everybody could prove to preclude her getting cured so soon, though. Strange and trying times ahead.

Eric is a normal teenage desperately in love with his 'fiancée' Sarah, yes they are that in love. His parents have other ideas and start Eric on an incredibly unfamiliar journey. Will he be able to cope?
Rated: Adult 13 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 36158 Words: 18404 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Forced
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 07/11/15
Updated: 07/13/15
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed
Date: 04/11/19 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8-The Many Masks We Feel

Is this story drop? Im very interested to see if eric and Sarah would ever get back together, I mean his parents literal killed a baby and forced them apart.
Im cheering that they do go make it together somehow.

Many of my wants were fulfilled by a strange chalice found within the Maze, but many more problems arise due to the power it grants and the world it opens.
Rated: Explicit 287 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 211337 Words: 161202 Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Forced
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Torture
Series: None
Published: 08/22/15
Updated: 09/18/19
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/28/19 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Proclamation of Power

Im at a loss for words, it was that epic of a chapter, cant hardly wait for the next.

Author's Response: The next is a bit of a challenge, but we'll see how that goes. I'm glad you enjoyed it, I'm at least mostly satisfied with how it turned out.

An intergalactic gun runner, on a six month mission, makes a serious mistake. A gritty sci-fi noir, with space debauchery, bisexual escapades, and weird alien sex.
Rated: Explicit 141 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 176606 Words: 111268 Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
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Date: 02/23/19 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43: [XXX]Susan

man you got me suck in and invested in this story. Im a little peeved that the last three chapters were deleted but since your doing a revision then I guess there must of been reasons, either to flush out ther story more or to fix grammar or typo mistakes. I dont know if if the site puts an edited story in the recent tab since im new to this site so ill favorite this and continue checking up for the last few chapters, so im looking forward to your next update and thank for writing the this story

All Andy wanted to do was play video games and ignore his roommate. Now this former boy has to grapple with their gender identity and figure out how to be as true to themselves as possible. Can she cope with her changes in order to find help and reverse the curse? And more importantly will she even want to?
Rated: Adult 79 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 63980 Words: 46879 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 07/26/16
Updated: 03/05/19
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/20/19 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7- you might not see me any more, any more

Really good story, I like the mix of comedy and pop culture reference in there. Feel bad for Andi and her parents, her brother seems way more accepting then the mom and dad, probably due generation gap. Mother seems like she'll come around to the changes later while the the father just looks like he will just out right disown her. Hopefully next chapter Zoey or Elli help calm her down. And while I and other readers really want to get out the touches and pitchforks and demand for quicker updates, I know its better for you to take your time and flush out the story, either way you got us like putty in your hands so keep up the good work.

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Date: 02/21/19 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - I Saw Myself Tonight. Saw My Reflection In the Mirror

Good chapter, happy to see Andi get her self confidence back. Wonder how she'll do as a witch, sorceress, or mage, so many things you can work with on magic since the possibilities are endless. So I guess next on the list is the meet up with that woman, her brother the day after, and then her friend named Nathen at a later day in the week. Once again thank you for the great chapter and keep up the hard work.

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Date: 02/26/19 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - You Want a Brand New Start, Alright

This was a wonderful chapter, the character interactions alone was gold. Cant forgot about tipsy Andi, that brought me many laughs, hopefully tipsy Andi makes a reappearance later.

On the subject of mind manipulation that Andi and the crew brought out, I agree with her on the basis that the person under the mind control does indeed dies and the body remains behind to be altered. I myself think its morally wrong to change a person in a way while others may think differently, freedom of opinion, in that case. It gets hard to stay true to this belief in the case of criminals, jerks, and all around bad people, because lets face it we wish bad karma on them.

Alright that just some of my thoughts, im a bit of a theory and what if type of guy, either way thanks for this chapter, cant wait for the next one.

After serving time in prison, Brian is taken in by his evil stepmother, Faye, an unhinged and cruel doctor hell-bent on forcing the stepson she always loathed into becoming the sweet daughter she never had.
Rated: Adult 37 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 230136 Words: 61009 Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
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Date: 04/23/19 Title: Chapter 13: Part 2: Chapter 4

Whoa an update, someone pinch me and sing to the heavens

Author's Response: I'm just as surprised as you are!

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Date: 04/24/19 Title: Chapter 14: Part 2: Chapter 5

So now we have a name to the mystery girl that ellie seems to have develop a crush on, and ironically her name is jess, the same name as the girl that died taking drugs given to her when ellie was Brian.

Author's Response: Indeed. More coming soon! :)

Humans are wiped out of existence by a powerful terrorist group. After being in cryo-sleep for 500 years Michael Stuart must come to terms that his life has been changed
Rated: Adult 53 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 83592 Words: 38289 Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Child
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Fights Change
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Torture
Series: None
Published: 09/01/16
Updated: 08/05/19
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/23/19 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Kidnapped

Man what a cliffhanger to leave off on, hard to believe its been almost 3 years since first written up. This was the first story on this site that I click so thank you for the wonderful introduction. Cant wait for age 2.

So about the chapter im afraid for lexi I know that torture is coming up but what really scare me shitless is the mention of the blank screen while strap in, that give me brainwash vibs, brainwashing scares me in the sense that the person in question may lose the very thing that makes them well themselves. Heres an example, the day you been born your mother/father had a weak body at the young age of X, they contract a small tumor. With the very few years they have they make it memorable and heartwarming. However with brainwashing that could be taken away, having a loved one forgotten like this breaks my heart. So although this may be rude of me I ask to keep any to a minimum please

Now with Sable I have great sympathy for her, the comment about not wearing shoes struck me with a very hard to describe feeling. You can tell she is sad with how her life is and may have envy the freedom lexi had. However I feel that if anyone was willing to help lexi escape it would be her, I feel that if her spirit was truly broken she wouldn't have bother talking to lexi.

Alright so that wraps it up for me, once again thank you for the great story and I look foward to reading age 2 thank you

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Date: 04/07/19 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 The Shadow Of The Night

Ok so they are going to turn her back into a male because the process is very painfull maybe even deadly without painkillers, I hope I understand that correctly.

Author's Response: Yes, There trying to torture her to get information out of her

Eric, heir to one of the most famous last names in all history. His family was known to kill and hunt down the most dangerous monsters hat walked these lands. But what does the title of Monster Hunter gives you, if in this society monsters and humans now live in peace, working together to form a better future. Struggling to leave his last name in the shadows, Eric will soon find himself more attracted to these shadows.
Rated: Adult 36 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 12551 Words: 22399 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Corsets, Long Nails, School Uniform, Undies, Work Uniform
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Personality: Bad to Good, Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Mythical Setting, Romance
Type of Change: Hormonal, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 01/30/17
Updated: 02/08/17
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/25/19 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Lovecraft.

Man this is very good, hope you start writing for this story again Susy, be a shame for this to die.

A girl wakes up and discovers she remembers nothing of her past life, not even her name. All she can figure is she came from a place where evil knows no bounds.
Rated: Adult 91 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 41813 Words: 104320 Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend, Teenager
Locale: College, Family Household, High School, Hospital or Clinic, Labratory
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Horror, Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Mechanical Device
Series: Forgotten
Published: 06/26/17
Updated: 07/20/20
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/12/19 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Dang I just found this story a few hours ago and binge the hell out of it, I honest to god cant wait to see whats next in this awesome story

Author's Response: Wow, what timing. Thanks.

Alex trudges along through life, just wanting to keep his head down and focus on his school work. But one day, that all changes...with a wish.
Rated: Adult 100 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 97017 Words: 45137 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, School Uniform, Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Curse, Revenge
Personality: Cultural/Nationality Change, Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Genie/Wishes
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 08/24/17
Updated: 03/25/20
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/24/19 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Man this has been a good week, stories I like are getting updated left and right. It nice to see the one's on a hiatus are coming back :)

Author's Response: Sorry for the delay. I've got so many projects going at once and things have been hectic in real life, but it was great to be able to sit back down and get to write some more! Also *Blush* I'm glad that you like my story! :)

Connor is a successful young techie living in New York. Just when he doesn't think life could get any better the two kinky girls downstairs invite him over for what he naively assumes is a threesome.
Rated: Explicit 66 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 199754 Words: 54429 Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Pantyhose, Undies, Work Uniform
Motivation for Change: Tricked, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual, Changes to be Attracted Only to Women
Story Theme: Humiliation, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change, Mind Control
Series: None
Published: 04/30/18
Updated: 09/13/18
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/19/19 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Left Out

Good story, Im definitely getting the never switching back vibe. Makes me sad that Conner is losing his mind, I hope you do a middle ground like where he keeps all his memory and original personality and accepts that he like being a woman more. Dont know if you need to change the tags around, I get the bisexual one but the attractive to woman one kinda become irrelevant when she starts doing blow jobs and crave cocks. Also the is just my personal opinion but I prefer the lesbians play and hope that at the end of the story conner and a woman that like conner for for who s/he is end up in loving relationship but it's your story so only you get to decide that. Hope this review helps even if it didn't

An adventurer finds himself at the mercy of a mysterious, slightly inhuman woman, after having already being tricked by a cunning king and his unsympathetic court wizard.
Rated: Explicit 37 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 37640 Words: 47590 Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Forced
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Women
Story Theme: Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 05/12/18
Updated: 06/16/18
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/17/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Story is really good, i love how detailed the world is and how the characters react to each other. Im am a little scared since last update almost been a year ago. if there are updated versions on another website then please tell me? i would very much appreciate it.

High school is a period when many young adults discover who they are and what they want to do with their lives. But for some this path is longer and takes more unexpected turns than others. Thomas Swan is about to embark on just such a journey as he finds himself caught up in the machinations of the popular clique who've discovered a way to make the impossible reality.
Rated: Adult 61 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 100072 Words: 81871 Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Trans
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 05/28/18
Updated: 11/16/19
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/05/19 Title: Chapter 13: Red Days

Awww snap a new chapter to one of my favorite stories. Loved the family moment she shared with her parents very wholesome. An another note Sophia has finally got a clear answer that there is a major problem going on when so got the note saying "Remember".

Looking forward to the next chapter

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Date: 04/01/19 Title: Chapter 10: Screen-lit Rendezvous

Awww it nice to see chloe and Sophie get closer after that wish for her to remember everything before the change.

On another note im glad I've never touch anything remotely with alcohol, I never want to be in a situation where I dont remember something or have a hangover.

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Date: 07/26/19 Title: Chapter 14: Remember

Well we knew there was something going on with the Heather's and the memory loss but the level of ruthlessness they showed is a bit sickening. Hope Sophie and Chloe get out in one piece.

Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/26/19 Title: Chapter 14: Remember

Well we knew there was something going on with the Heather's and the memory loss but the level of ruthlessness they showed is a bit sickening. Hope Sophie and Chloe get out in one piece

A young man finds himself whisked off to a magical kingdom and transformed into a Fae.
Rated: Adult 7 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 5829 Words: 8946 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Fantasy Character
Body Modification: Permanent Hair/Skin/Nail Change
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Cultural/Nationality Change
Story Theme: Comedy, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Cultural, Racial
Series: None
Published: 10/12/18
Updated: 10/13/18
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/23/19 Title: Chapter 1: Becoming: A Crescent Fae (Short Story)

This story is actually pretty good, be a shame not to continue it. We already seen a small peek of the world, you could expand upon it by introducing other characters or some of the darker race's as yune put it. Cant forgot the magic element in the story, thanks to magic you can pretty much write whatever but gotta remember to have so basic laws of magic. An example would be the system in full metal alchemists with the equivalent exchange, or the chant based system where the longer and more vivid the chant is the more powerful it is.

Sorry for getting a little bit off track, back to the subject at hand there is potential in this story, one which could be expanded upon should you so choose to deem it worthy for your attention.

Tormented for years by his mother and sister, Victor's life is upended as his sister turns him into a witch to help cast a spell to banish a darkling hunting her friend. Overwhelmed with new powers, and bonded as the avatar to a Vanir goddess, Victoria will try to deal with a growing threat from darkness beyond, while dealing with an estranged family and their coven.
Rated: Explicit 48 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 30810 Words: 34962 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character, Girlfriend
Locale: Family Household, Girl's School, High School
Motivation for Change: Forced
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 10/31/18
Updated: 09/20/19
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/22/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very interesting story, hoping you continue updating this, be a shame if this got drop, I can certainly see the great potential it has.

Synopsis: Greg is shocked when he discovers his younger sister, Kelly, is a witch. Particularly since this revelation occurs after she uses her power to swap bodies with him after an argument. Unbeknownst to Kelly her actions awaken Greg’s latent magical power and because the spell was miss-cast a simple temporary body-swap becomes more complicated. Enter the Covens of Light and Dark, politics, male and female hormones and things are soon spinning out of control. Will Greg get his body back or will Kelly decide she likes being the older masculine sibling? This story is complete and is intended as a stand alone urban fantasy.
Rated: Adult 25 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 51942 Words: 50534 Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Jock
Locale: High School
Story Theme: Sports, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Body Swap, Identity Theft
Series: None
Published: 12/02/18
Updated: 12/02/18
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/26/19 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Great story, was definitely a great read, hoping for part 2 for this hopefully sometime in 2019

Jack couldn't help himself from giving in to his most basic desire - to look at a woman's breasts. Little did he know he'd get a chance to do that whenever he wanted.
Rated: Adult 31 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 201193 Words: 6417 Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Model
Locale: College
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement, Liposuction, Permanent Hair/Skin/Nail Change
Motivation for Change: Forced, Revenge
Personality: Bad to Good, From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 01/22/19
Updated: 08/27/19
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/28/19 Title: Chapter 12: Ch. 12: Up to 100%

Whoa didnt see the reversed punishment coming at the end there, now I cant wait to see whats next.

Sam is a quiet 16 year old high school guy. He's a nerd and a geek. A pretty typical guy. When his friends try to peer pressure him into playing the tank role for the new VR game they all want to play, he rebels, although he can't quite figure out why. Follow Sam as he dives into the world of Pellan Rise as the dainty little healer named Sylanna, where he discovers that the game has a lot more influence over the real world than everyone thought.
Rated: Adult 306 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 198575 Words: 34674 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: High School, Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Women
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Mythical Setting, Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Intense Violence
Series: Kammi-verse, The Andrare Legacy
Published: 02/06/19
Updated: 02/03/20
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/22/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: No Tankerino pls.

Thank you for this great story, its already been a blast to read and I cant wait for another chapter. While reading this I been a little bit of similar vibes to a novel called Praise The Orc, its not a tg but has a similar setting as the main character kinda sync to the character in Vr with the world being real also. If you want you can read it and take some ideas for future storys and chapters. Once again thank you for the great chapter and keep up the hard work

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Date: 02/24/19 Title: Pellan Rise

Thank you for another great chapter, also I dont mind if chapters are longer, I actually prefer longer chapters. found one typo where Mr Forsythe says "dont me late" other then that everything was perfect. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

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Date: 02/26/19 Title: Pellan Rise

Great chapter, nice to see Nia again, can see the teasing of a Nia and karen reunion with them being so close but having no idea.

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Date: 02/26/19 Title: Pellan Rise

Great chapter, I definitely like the details put into it to give me a more clear image of the world and new powers syl have.

Now about the author notes you left about the smut and explicit content. It's you story so I leave it up to you, but in my personal opinion since Syl is a lesbian im honestly ok with it. I do find girl on girl action to be "Hot" or any other word you wish to describe it as.

As always I look forward to the next chapter, so have fun and keep up the hard work

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Date: 02/27/19 Title: Pellan Rise

Awww im happy for Syl and Karen, a little bit bum that Karen parents cant be more open minded but happy nonetheless.

Also dont be afraid to look at reviews, there will always be at least one negative person but don't let that bother you. Feel proud for the work you have done and happy days you have given people through your writing.

As always, I look forward to the next chapter, so have fun and keep up the hard work

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Date: 03/03/19 Title: Pellan Rise

Its ok take all the time you need to recover, sad to hear about that conversation but its ok you have fans and friends more then happy to stand beside you. While it may be a while I will always look forward to the work you do, for it brings a smile to my face.

As always, have fun and keep up the hard work.

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Date: 03/08/19 Title: Pellan Rise

Great chapter, I loved the in depth skill descriptions you wrote down. Nice to see Zach getting the help he needed hopefully he meets up with the group in game soon.

If your still having anxiety or motivation issues then please take all the time in the world to recover.

As always, have fun and keep up the hard work.

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Date: 03/09/19 Title: Pellan Rise

What an awesome chapter, I got jedi lightsaber vibes from the skill Col used. Nice to see how cute syl and Karen have become with each other, also great to see that Isabelle made it to the gang.

Cant wait to read the next chapter for pellan and also the one for Kammi Kettu, cant get enough of you storys.

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Date: 03/19/19 Title: Pellan Rise

Yay for izzy, she got the help she desperately needed. Still loving the cute moments syl and karen have.

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Date: 06/23/19 Title: Pellan Rise

Well we got to meet back up with nia which is nice, the words the creature said, that it was created by "man of your own race" caught my interest.

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Date: 07/14/19 Title: Pellan Rise

Oh boy is there a lot of stuff happening in this chapter. First off, yay cross-over, second another emergence storm, wonder what this one will bring?

Thank you for the wonderful chapter

A gamer thinks he's unbeatable because of his uncanny ability to find and exploit mistakes in the programming. He accepts a challenge from a centuries old cranky magician to play a real life game that involves actual magic. Who will prevail?
Rated: Explicit 37 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 99185 Words: 12077 Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Clothing, Girlfriend
Featured Items: High Heels
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 02/07/19
Updated: 03/26/19
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Date: 03/11/19 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Nearly 5000 Points

I love it when someone uses a clever trick or a loop hole to out smart something or someone, goes to show that the wizard was hasty in making his game. Dont know if your magic system you set up will punish him in someway, since he's being a sore loser now and wont abide to the game he himself made.

Author's Response: We'll see what happens.

Two hundred and fifty years after Word War III humanity is living on the planet New Eden. Soon after their arrival people noticed a small number of teenagers suffering from a strange syndrome that was switching the teens genders. This is the story of Michael Armstrong and the syndrome commonly referred to as GTS changed his life forever.
Rated: Adult 1 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 3438 Words: 520 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: High School, Hospital or Clinic, Space or Foreign Planet
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Tricked, Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Distant Future, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Stuck
Series: None
Published: 02/11/19
Updated: 02/24/19
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/24/19 Title: The Day that Michael's Life Changed Forever (Rewrite)

Interesting story, almost cant wait for the next chapter, but sadly I must. Keep up the hard work.

Author's Response: Thank you; I will do my best.

A young man on the precipice of adulthood discovers the mistakes of his parents have opened up a brand new impossible world.
Rated: Explicit 147 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 169273 Words: 30582 Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Bride
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Curse, Forced
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Romance, Witchcraft
Series: None
Published: 02/12/19
Updated: 05/30/19
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Date: 02/21/19 Title: Chapter 4: The Warlock

Man this is why contracts need to be written beforehand in these type of situations. I mean yeah her mom did kinda find a loop hole by him not being a girl in the first place and not giving him up upon birth but odds are Alistair just going to force his way upon her anyway unless theres like a magical society or law that prevents him from doing so. Who knows maybe he'll asked to to be given a chance so they can mutually love each other as equals or something. Either way great chapter I look forward to the next one

Author's Response: i adore your comment, Headhunter. yes, i've thought about some of the things you bring up but some of this i had not considered. Hmm. one warlock logically presupposes a community. surely he's not the only magic being on earth. thanks for reading! xo, charlotte

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Date: 02/24/19 Title: Chapter 5: Minor Incantations

Wonder what questions he will ask her, hopefully just honest ones, hopefully this reality shift doesn't effort Ericas answers since it seems to be affecting her mind. Also man does alistair have a bit of an ego, "nudge" realty just at the end of that to say you not really my type or not much of one.

So that wraps up my thoughts, thank you for this wonderful chapter and I look forward to reading the next

Author's Response: the reality warping magic Alistair has wielded will continue to have (frustratingly?) mixed results. at least frustrating for him. Alistair does have ego buuuut wouldn't you if you had such immense power? he can 'back it up' as they say. it's his other character flaws that are (imo) worse (and more interesting). glad you enjoyed things. xo, charlotte

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Date: 02/26/19 Title: Chapter 6: Honor Bound to Answer

That was definitely a unique exchange of 20 questions, nice to see them answered as truthful it can get, although the reality shift did affect Ericas answers in the sense of a new personality born differently.

Wasn't expecting him to ask Eric a question though, that caught me off guard. Wonder how Erica in the next chapter answer him? If she like any woman in todays modern time shes most likely to reject him based off the fact that she literally met him and never met him any prior time, that and when did children ever left life choices to their parents.

Welp there some of my thoughts, cant wait for the next chapter, keep up with the good work.

Author's Response: loads of interesting thoughts and questions, Headhunter. hopefully the payoff for all of this meets your expectations. xo, charlotte

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Date: 03/18/19 Title: Chapter 13: Without a Reliable Map

Ouch, I was kinda rooting for a rejection since the way Alistair did things was kinda BS with all the reality alternation he did, but man the way that rejection played even hurt me in a spiritual physical sense from a mans point of view. But hey I support her for being an individual, not just taking the lazy river and going with the flow.

Author's Response: i mean her fate is still tied to Alistair's in many ways. not least of which the debt he took on of Rebecca's. from Eric's perspective, Alistair is the one person she knows who might have insight into what she actually is and what she can do. so maybe not wife, but... protege? xo, charlotte

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Date: 04/10/19 Title: Chapter 19: The Large Spoon to His Little

Thats unexpected, an all powerful warlock with might powers over the universe, still lives with his mother.

And since he thinks they will like each other I can only assume they share similar views. Heck she may even punish him by changing him into a woman or something for a month or so for messing with mortals or others.

Author's Response: i'm sitting on a lot of plots and don't want spoil anything but i love all of what you say here. and glad i was still able to toss out something unexpected. xo, charlotte

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Date: 05/09/19 Title: Chapter 25: Personal Attendants

"Sigh" when will Alistair stop doing all these shady things, like really ointments to enhance fertility behind her back, that made him lose a ton of brownie points for me. That just makes me wish to poof in there and break his nuts for that type of thing.

Also is kat there of her own free will? the hints that I got was when she said under a mumble her name "was kat" and that she gets physical discomfort if not attending to someone like a slave.

Author's Response: i'm shocked Alistair still had any brownie points left with you ;-p and the Kat situation is both not as sad and way way sadder than it appears. more on her later. xo, charlotte

For many people, becoming infected with the CARV virus a horrifying prospect. Your life as you know it might as well be over. So why is it that Nick can't stop thinking about it? At least, whenever he's not playing fighting games...
Rated: Explicit 29 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 22921 Words: 8726 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Romance
Series: None
Published: 02/17/19
Updated: 03/04/19
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/21/19 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wonder if him passing out was just an instance of the virus already being in him, if so well I guess the jab with needle becomes irrelevant but then again that could mean anything like something related to blood circulation. Overall good chapter, keep up the hard work

Author's Response: We'll find out more about the protagonist's fainting soon.

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Date: 02/27/19 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Nice chapter, kinda funny seeing the doctors acting like its the end of the world for him, they probably never thought some one might of wanted it before I guess. About the dysphoria, think she'll be fine for the most part, since she wanted the change to happen.

Once again thank you for the great chapter and keep up the hard work.

Marcus is a bored young senior stuck in a slowly emptying countryside, with parents quick to blame him for all of his life's woes, and two friends, Jules and Sam. A chance meeting with a new punk student at school, Lucie, eventually leads them four to stumble upon their science teacher's secret lab, including a portal to other universes. After an accident, him and Sam find their bodies transformed, and all four friends have to put their heads together to find the best way to accommodate for their changes while keeping the lab a secret.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 41 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 69247 Words: 33567 Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Trans
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse, Forced
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Mind/Body Posession, Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 02/18/19
Updated: 06/22/20
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Date: 02/24/19 Title: Chapter 17: The New Additions

Hmm a polyamorous relationship, Hopefully it works out, only problem with that kind of relationship is if a person gets greedy and want to be the only loved one.

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Date: 02/26/19 Title: Chapter 19: Looking Sharp

Oh no a cliffhanger, nice chapter by the way, looking forward to the next one

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Date: 02/27/19 Title: Chapter 20: Catgirl Convincing

What a great chapter, cant wait to read more.

Join Ethan as he stumbles into a world of super powers and government secrets. A journey of self-discovery and world-changing revelations.
Rated: Adult 9 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 8015 Words: 11635 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: Labratory, Prison
Motivation for Change: Accident, Tricked, Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age
Type of Change: Stuck
Warnings: Death, Torture
Series: None
Published: 02/18/19
Updated: 04/27/20
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/21/19 Title: Chapter 3: Chain Reaction

Now this was a very interesting chapter to read, I wonder what realm or place Ethan was at and who the mystery woman was. Im definitely looking forward to what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review :) Glad that you are enjoying it

In a world of superheroes and villains, Gavin McArthur feels like more of a shell than a person even after he transfers to a school for kids who are likely to soon posses an Alter form, a form that grants the user super powers and a different appearance. But what do you to do when your Alter form represents an uncomfortable truth about yourself that you're not prepared to face?
Rated: Adult 130 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 99627 Words: 222078 Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Featured Items: Masks, School Uniform, Work Uniform
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Coming of Age
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 02/25/19
Updated: 06/22/20
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Date: 04/29/19 Title: Chapter 5: Line of Sight

Interesting chapter, got more info on speedster powers so now we know its more to do with increase interactions instead of on attraction of feelings. And since Gavin/Gabrielle has no attraction towards markus im guessing thier interactions with each other will be as enemy's or rivals.

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Date: 02/25/19 Title: Chapter 1: Lighting in a Bottle

Interesting concept, people having alter forms with power, usually its just BOOM you have powers. Also im guessing cass is a non binary female with the hints of they and the lack of her or she used.

Alright this is just some of my thoughts, im looking forward to reading you next chapter, hopefully it comes out soon, keep up the hard work.

Author's Response: Cass actually isn’t non-binary, Gavin simply doesn’t know which they prefer and has defaulted to they/them. There ARE non-binary characters incoming, so fear not!

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Date: 03/07/19 Title: Chapter 2: Kinetic Potential

Great chapter, cant wait to read the next one.

When Devon agreed to be a vessel for a demonic summoning ritual performed by his crush Maria, he never expected it to work. Or that he'd end up sharing bodies with a demoness that claims to be doing him a favor.
Rated: Adult 11 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 18726 Words: 4532 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: College
Body Modification: Permanent Hair/Skin/Nail Change
Motivation for Change: Dared into It, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Mind/Body Posession, Mythical Setting, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: Headmate Demon
Published: 02/27/19
Updated: 03/03/19
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/27/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hmm, you got me interested, especially since its a demon story. Also quick question, since the sexual orientation is listed as does not change, will that mean he becomes a lesbian?

Author's Response: Well just wait and see, we've got four more chapters to be released over the next four days

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Date: 02/28/19 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting, so he still have main control over the body but the demoness can induce a sort of sleep walking state to his mind taking over.

Good chapter, can't wait for the next one.

Callum is alone in the States applying for a job as an engineer when the world changes forever. In an event called the Emergence he is changed. Fox ears and a tail greet the newly minted girl in a mirror. On the run from the abusive system, she is forced to turn to crime to survive.
Rated: Explicit 240 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 111646 Words: 27933 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Masks
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Personality: Bad to Good, Good to Bad, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Costume or Halloween, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 03/03/19
Updated: 07/20/19
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Date: 04/30/19 Title: Kammi Kettu

Loved this chapter, it was action pack and filled with adorable moments between kalia and Laithe make for a deadly combo

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Date: 03/03/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Emergence

Man I feel bad for him, I had a friend that gut mug before, was hurt but at least he lived. Im kinda interested in the "Emergence of Heroes" lighting strike, like how does it happen and why? Does it choose you to gift power or is it random? Im sure ill get the question answered later.

As always, have fun and keep up the hard work.

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Date: 03/03/19 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Jocelyn

That escalated quickly, I actually like the introduction Jocelyn had with the Protagonist, got me to like her quickly because of her sympathetic nature and boom shes gone. That really evil of you, but in a good way.

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Date: 03/03/19 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Dagger

Man what a day the the MC is having, gets mug, a person that was nice to them dies, and now a very radical religion believer trys to kill them, what else can go wrong?

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Date: 03/03/19 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Thief

Nice to see things looking up for Kalia cant wait to see what this cute foxgirl does next.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading my new story!! It’s my new baby. Kalia will go through a lot more s*** sadly, but im going to make sure there's also good times.

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Date: 03/11/19 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Socks

Great chapter nice to see kalia meet someone like Laithe, wonder if they will have a Harley Quinn and poison ivy type of relationship that DC universe had?

Thank you for this chapter, cant wait to see more

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Date: 03/13/19 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Kelly

Love the reference to Assassins creed, I'm a frequent gamer so I like seeing references to video games. Feels bad for the dragon that got killed, if kalia transformation anything to go by than that Dragon was a person freaking out. Cant wait to see the next chapter.

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Date: 03/16/19 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Heart Palpitations.

holy crap I thought the emergence of heros storm only affected people but I had no idea it was that bad on the world that was surprising. The interactions between kalia and the other characters were so cute, the urge to buy a hug pillow or some other soft object was really big, guess ill use my cat for that.

Also Congrats on the Kammi-verse, definitely has the potential to be something big like the twisted and Whateley academy universe to name a few. Cant wait to see more

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Date: 03/17/19 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Blood

Poor kelly, I grew really attached to her bubbly personality, she will be missed. I also fear for kalia, yet another person that had been nice and even cared for her is gone again. She is most likely never to forgot this moment for the rest of her life.

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Date: 03/20/19 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Leaving The Site, Info Below

Dang, sad to see how depress kalia is over kellys death. But I like how she used her powers, and im sure we'll see some new ones later.

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Date: 03/23/19 Title: Kammi Kettu

Thats some nice stuff out of that briefcase, wish I had a few. Wonder what kalia will do next? Will she run into a partner in crime or Laithe again? Or develop her evil "mmmwwwwhahaha" laugh?

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Date: 04/09/19 Title: Kammi Kettu

What makes a super villain Super, presentation.

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Date: 04/12/19 Title: Kammi Kettu

Wonder what happened between kalia and nightbinder during her teleportation, sounds like a thier souls linked with each other or something.

Also yay for the adorable moments between the two, especially the petting, pet for justice.

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Date: 04/16/19 Title: Kammi Kettu

Seems like two adorable characters have a crush on each other, cant wait to see how many funny moments come out of this, stand by with popcorn and cola.

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Date: 04/21/19 Title: Kammi Kettu

Aww poor nightbinder, was waiting specifically for kalia to show up but because they met with her as Vulptrix and with the medallion she cant put two and two together.

Also that was an adorable moment with kalia talking about her crush on nightbinder, hope she doesn't have to wait too long to be ask out for a date.

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Date: 04/22/19 Title: Kammi Kettu

Well damn that medallion works very hard to keep people unaware of kalias secret identity but fully knocking a person out, thats scary.

Hope Laithe wakes up alright later, with how the medallion works I guess kalia will have to show her how it works to get things cleared up.

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Date: 04/24/19 Title: Kammi Kettu

And we have lift off, what a great chapter can't wait to see what's next.

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Date: 05/03/19 Title: Kammi Kettu

man kalia is pissed, things are about to get real.

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Date: 05/04/19 Title: Kammi Kettu

Looks like the dreams of a few artists and erotica writers have come true now, all thats left is for one of them to "put a ring on it".

Also im still surprised that Bastion doesn't even know what he did to kelly, either he does and doesn't care or he's so reckless that he literal didn't take stock of the damage of the surroundings after fighting

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Date: 05/15/19 Title: Kammi Kettu

You gave Laithe an orgasmic name lol, also there was a lot of stuff happening in this chapter. We saw that kalia had an encounter with maya, had a meet up with robin and Al, and a reference to pellan rise.

I have a feeling things are about to get more serious in the upcoming chapters, cant wait to to read more

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Date: 06/14/19 Title: Kammi Kettu

Now this was a very wholesome and fun chapter to read, I loved the interactions kalia had with Maya, especially the teasing during the festival. Now about the festival itself, I very happy and excited that all the emerge came together as a community, I know everything isn't rainbows with being a emerge but is nice to see them relaxin and being just themselves without all the hate and bigotry.

And while the peace may not last forever, it's the little moments like this that bring true happiness and fond memories for the rest of our lives. Thank you for sharing these moments with us.

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Date: 07/03/19 Title: Kammi Kettu

Things are definitely getting into action, love how action pack this chapter was, it got me all giddy and excited for what happens next.

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Date: 07/12/19 Title: Kammi Kettu

Wooo what a chapter, Bastion finally sees how big of an idiot he's been and we finally get to see kelly save. While although kelly seems fine physically, mentally there are definitely problems, I hope she can get better afterwards.

Finding himself kicked out of his foster parents’ home on the night of the Emergence, John Doe Smith doubted even his luck could get any worse.

Now irrevocably changed by the Emergence into what many see as a monster, the newly dubbed Wraith must now deal with the consequences of her new powers in an unfriendly world.
Rated: Adult 96 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 49835 Words: 71972 Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character
Locale: Family Household, Prison
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown, Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Captive, Everyday Living, Mythical Setting, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Torture
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 03/15/19
Updated: 06/21/20
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Date: 03/17/19 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Shadows and Lighning

Good story, nice to see the events happening from the main story into this one. found a problem with the tags, our main protagonist was male before the transformation into female, while the tag says female to male.

Author's Response: whoops! nice catch thanks! And yes this story will be doing a bit of interacting with stuff in the main story even surprise characters popping up.

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Date: 03/19/19 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Wraith

WHAT, HOW, WHY, HOLY SHIT KELLYS ALIVE, MASSAIVE NUKE GOING OFF IN MY HEAD.

Author's Response: *taps her nose* That for another chapter and to be further investigated later

Author's Response: *taps her nose* That for another chapter and to be further investigated later

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Date: 03/21/19 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Mirror

So this OMR league knows that Robin and kelly is there, but I guess they dont know about the human experiments done there, because if they did they would of got them out sooner.

Author's Response: Who said anything about Kelly? :P

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Date: 05/09/19 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12: Songbird

Nooo the horror of having to get up from bed, my place of heaven, curse you for reminding me Dadneto.

Also damn there was a lot of fun stuff happening in this chapter, we got to see redd and nightbinder, and possibility the start of Robin's career in singing

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Date: 05/15/19 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 13: Hugs

Man, this chapter definitely gave me more questions that need answered, like what happened to Al´s family? What was that shared vision that had about?

Hopefully we find out later, until than keep up the hard work

Author's Response: I have big plans for Al and I am still laying groundwork for it, it will likely be relevant in arc 3. That said I am not sure everyone has connected him to his first appearance in Songbird yet. The shared vision hmm not sure how much I can say... but more will definitely be revealed in the other stories especially my next story I am still workshopping,, I'll give you a teaser though, the tentative title is "Atlas Bound".

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Date: 07/03/19 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 16: Blackout

Was a very fun chapter to read, robin learns a new power that lets her fly, and on top of that she fights and wins against Seraph. Looking forward to reading more

Tyler makes a wish, but ignores an important rule attached to it. The wish-granter needs to take another route, so that the wish comes true.
Rated: Adult 28 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 43219 Words: 15747 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Tricked, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Women, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 03/15/19
Updated: 04/16/19
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Date: 03/17/19 Title: Chapter 2: Monachopsis - 1.2

Im really interested in the build up to the wish taylor made, like what was the exact wording use for the wish? Or how did he even come across genie? Either way cant wait to read more.

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Date: 03/18/19 Title: Chapter 3: Monachopsis - 1.3

Hmm so what I getting is that one of the restrictions place upon the genie is that he can by no means take a person's will or personality and change it to the requestors wish. So the can be no wishing of slaves or the influence others. Also wishes to positions of power is also a no go, lets say you wish to be the president of America, you will get the title but everyone will know who the really president is still.

My guess is taylor depression is due to the fact he is 100% female in body, but his mind and others was left unaltered so things he would normally view as normal is not so anymore in the mind others, like a relationship with another girl for one. So she is afraid of being different in the eyes of others and be cast out alone.

So while she is down right now im sure she'll find some friends that will accept her and by then that special someone to help her get through the hard times ahead.

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Date: 03/24/19 Title: Chapter 4: Monachopsis - 1.4

Okay now im definitely confused on who max is, guess that was a nickname for a girlfriend, short for Maxine or something, she had before the change. That guess is just base of the story tags set up.

Also I can see taylor having a panic attack at some point in time during school since its seems like she is having flashbacks or something.

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Date: 04/03/19 Title: Chapter 7: Monachopsis - 1.6

So it comes full circle, so the wish was to become someone Max could fall in love with, which was another lesbian girl. Im sure taylors original wish was for Maxine to love him, however that broke one of the genies rules so this is the outcome.

Cant wait to see how this story develops.

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Date: 04/08/19 Title: Chapter 8: Nodus Tollens - 2.1

Man I love this story, everything feels real between the characters and the suspense it thrilling.

Nice to see taylor reaching out to max, one can tell she really does love her.

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Date: 04/13/19 Title: Chapter 9: Nodus Tollens - 2.2

Nice to see taylor getting better, but man do panic attacks suck.

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Date: 04/16/19 Title: Chapter 10: Nodus Tollens - 2.3

Poor Taylor, still having problems adapting. I think she's thinking too much in the in the "you look nice" comment from max, I mean doesn't everyone like to be complimented on their looks, especially by thier crush.

Also she may say she's not attracted to Hannah but that was a lot of details about her figure, because what do you get when you change a straight male into a female, a lesbian. Since nothing change but the body from the wish so the mind will find woman attractive and man unattractive still.

Also she may regret not being with max right now but really thats on her because all she needs to do is reach out even more then what has already happened, because whether she likes it or not unless she calls max for a meet up or an address to her home that that road between them will remain closed. Unless mom steps in and does something but that could be good or bad depending on taylor.

Superheroes have existed for a while now. And Sydney, since he was young, always wanted to be one. But since he has no powers, he has to fight villains with only the technology he creates. One day, a supervillain named The Magician starts to make superheroes disappear. This wouldn't have bothered Sydney, until The Magician comes to his home town.
Rated: Adult 11 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 3376 Words: 4352 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 03/16/19
Updated: 03/17/19
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/17/19 Title: Chapter 1: Sydney's Story

Pretty decent story, I usually read longer stories but the way the characters and setting was written was enjoying to read. The explanation about where every 9 in 10 hero or villain are men due to genetics had me interested since I love getting into details like that on the world in the stories im reading.

Dont know if you will ever expand upon the story by using this a prologue chapter and continue onwards from where the Protagonist left off. Or do a revision of this and make this longer to put more chapters in by having the MC transformation earlier in the plot.

Rairy lives in a rural right-leaning North Carolina town when the infamous 'Bathroom Bill' came out.

The whole town is ran by right-leaning conservatives. Things happen in this town that aren't supposed to happen in your average town. Things are swept under the table when they shouldn't be. Those with money are the law.

Who will listen to a single voice in an ocean of repudiation?
Rated: Adult 11 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 7038 Words: 13109 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Trans Life
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Extreme Piercing
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Torture
Series: None
Published: 03/19/19
Updated: 09/11/20
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Date: 05/08/19 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 A Lovely Dress

Holy crap was she getting stab? Wonder if she'll make to the hospital

an updating document containing the chronology of all Kammi-verse story releases.
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 2923 Words: 451 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Non-Story
Characters: None
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Locale: Family Household, Prison
Motivation for Change: Accident, Curse, Unknown, Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Mythical Setting
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 03/24/19
Updated: 03/24/19
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/02/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chronology

President Obama?!?! What are you doing here

Dave's seemingly static life gets turned upside down the day the second wave of the Emergence sweeps through the world.

How does the newly minted Catgirl fit into a world of Heroes, Villains, and mysterious artifacts of an advanced civilization?

This story takes place in the wonderful Kammi Kettu universe made by Rosilys Inknose.
Rated: Explicit 35 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 13324 Words: 31113 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Women, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Mythical Setting, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 04/16/19
Updated: 06/11/19
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Date: 04/16/19 Title: Chapter 1: Second Wave

Nice beginning for this story, its very upbeat and very interesting to read.

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Date: 04/23/19 Title: Chapter 4: Fresh Start

Yikes almost paralyzed from the waist down for life is a very scary thing to have, at least with the surgery she got her legs back.and maybe even more.

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Date: 05/10/19 Title: Chapter 6: Training

Great chapter, I love it when stories like these get to the powers portion, it get my mind thinking on how it works and ways to improve it

Someone has to make gadgets for all the new heroes that are gonna pop up, and that someone might as well be Bridget, a relatively popular tech youtuber turned genius mouse girl! But how did her early days go, and when did she start making gears for heroes specifically?
Rated: Adult 44 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 15468 Words: 37194 Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Mother
Locale: Family Household, Labratory
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Made Smarter
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 04/16/19
Updated: 06/21/20
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/23/19 Title: Chapter 4: Shady Business

That was a very nice thing to do, to adopt sárka as her daughter was very heartwarming.

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Date: 05/11/19 Title: Chapter 10: Public Speaking Class

That was a very well done speech on trans people and the emerge, felt like one of those TED talks I'd watch before.

As Nat and his friends take shelter in an abandoned house they find “The Magical Game of Desires” and make a life-changing decision by starting the game. With each round they all get changed into whatever the game decides whether they like or not. The friends quickly realise that it forces them to set new boundaries on what their friendship can sustain.
Rated: Explicit 31 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 201237 Words: 45995 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
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Date: 05/11/19 Title: Chapter 8: The Game Ends

How funny would it be that the loser actually turns back to normal while everyone else stay the same

After the Emergence, an event that shook the world, changing numerous individuals and providing them an array of fascinating superpowers, Charleston became a city of violence. In response to the chaos, the police set up a perimeter around a protected area in an effort to keep the Emerged out, and the good and normal folk in. Not everyone was lucky enough to be within that zone though, and the people left out have done what they feel is necessary to survive. Cameron and his family have managed to persevere through the aftermath of the Emergence storm, but what will he do once a second storm hits and he finds himself in a strange new body with his, or rather, her own set of powers to deal with?
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 1711 Words: 2558 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Masks
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Captive, Coming of Age
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 05/02/19
Updated: 05/02/19
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/02/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting, Im looking forward to how things develop from here.

Pedro is a normal guy, with a normal life, but one day he wakes up as girl, not only that, but the rest of the world was also transformed, all the males are now females, and all females seems to have disappeared or turned into babies! How will his life change, coping with a new body and a new world? Will things ever go back to normal?
Rated: Explicit 8 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 16011 Words: 10650 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Baby, Daughter
Featured Items: Bikinis, Breast Forms, School Uniform, Sex Toys, Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Women, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Pregnancy
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 05/05/19
Updated: 06/07/19
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/06/19 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 A new dawn

Interesting story so far, definitely a unique concept where all the men turn into women, basically making only one gender in the world now. Im looking forward to seeing more of this story

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Date: 05/18/19 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Afternoon

Welp feels bad for all the girls under 18, just poof or something they either dont exist or gone somewhere. And now with everyone being a woman I guess they will have to resort to using sperm from storage and hope for a boy being born. And if that doesn't work then they better come up with a way for one woman to impregnate another before sperm count

Looking forward to reading more, keep up the hard work

Author's Response: Thanks for your review Headhunter. Hope you'll like the answers to those issues in the upcoming chapthers...

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Date: 06/09/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 A normal day

I agree with ZZCromosome, the ahem "review" left by Madeleine is more of a rant then anything, yes there are some points made there however the way it was said was so overly negative that is was almost disgusting to read, do keep in mind that the story is only up to chapter 4 so some of these points may or may not be address, there is a reason the magical change tag is there.

I would also like to point out that the Madeleine20XX account only has 1 review EVER, so here is a question to be ask, is this person just being plane old mad or a troll?

1% of males wake up females, and no one really causes too much fuss. But, Zoe feels like there has to be more going on. Something like this seems a little too perfect.
Rated: Adult 33 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 24603 Words: 21265 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: College
Story Theme: Comedy, Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 05/08/19
Updated: 12/02/19
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/17/19 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh boy its been a while, nice to see you back.

Im definitely feeling anxious about what's is happening between zoe and Abby, especially since she saw abby making out with a man, which further proves the changes to the man that went through the transformation have a much deeper impact.

And although im rooting for the Zoe X ABBY ship to set sail, the odds of that happening are zero unless zoe can find a way to change the mental changes that has obviously happen to Abby.

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Date: 05/09/19 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Im wondering who's going to make the first move, Zoe or Abby

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Date: 05/11/19 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Awww that sucks for zoe, I kinda guess I saw something like this coming. So now the signs of something is wrong is showing up, all the fomer man taking everything in stride about becoming a women and the change in sexual orientation now.

Jamie, twelve year old recluse and bookworm, is the target of a group of bullies, Dean, Lukas, and the chief of the three that goes by Snake.

After news of the arrival of an alchemist in town, Snake and his goons force Jamie into breaking in the alchemist's mansion and looking for a potion of strength for another of their poorly thought out plans.

Jamie, however, gets distracted by another kind of potion after arriving at the lab...
Rated: Kid-Friendly 29 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 34751 Words: 12274 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Trans
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Bad to Good
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Fast/Instant Change, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 05/08/19
Updated: 08/10/19
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/08/19 Title: Chapter 2: The mix-up

Oooo i like alchemy base storys, adds a small blend of science to to world of magic. Cant wait to read more.

Author's Response: Alchemy is definitely my favorite kind of magic. It makes it feel tangible, like something you can genuinely experiment with by switching an ingredient or two, instead of slightly differently flicking your wrist.

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Date: 05/09/19 Title: Chapter 3: Someone like me

So back to the alchemists we go, what will happen, nobody knows.

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Date: 05/10/19 Title: Chapter 4: An occasion for learning

I really like Lucille, reminds of one of my teachers from school with her attitude and the way she acts. Also a very wholesome experience between all the characters, cant wait to read more

Author's Response: Thank you~ Lucille is a good person.

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Date: 05/11/19 Title: Chapter 5: Where we stand now

Nice, both jamie and snake both got their idle bodies now. Now onto the reactions of the friends and families, will they accept thier decision or disown them and throw them out

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Date: 05/12/19 Title: Chapter 6: Anxieties in the air

Hmm dean seems accepting of the situation or just curious, while lukas is harder read but also seems accepting or just going with the flow.

Cyrus Sutton, an ex-engineer at a luxury car firm in England is struck by the Emergence shortly after being fired from his job.
Changed into a Cyborg with Psionic powers, emotionally unstable, jobless, and with a growing distrust of the authorities. Under the alias Eunos. Cy is set to wreak havoc on the town and governmental systems hellbent to bring her under their control.
This is set in the same Universe as QuietValerie's Kammi Kettu and as such works under the same ideals and laws as her and all the other authors works, I hope you enjoy it!
Rated: Explicit 38 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 16004 Words: 50498 Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Masks, Pantyhose
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Personality: Good to Bad, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Costume or Halloween, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Mechanical Device
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 05/12/19
Updated: 09/14/19
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/12/19 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Burning Up the Night

Haven't read many cyborg stories so very interested in reading more, also she definitely got a very interesting set of powers.

Coby was once again forced to go to a college party by his best friend Brook. He hadn't been counting on much happening, he was an anxious nerd after all, but waking up in his friend's bed as a gorgeous girl was pretty damn far out of even his craziest dreams. A Kammiverse story.
Rated: Explicit 167 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 207286 Words: 47215 Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character, Model
Locale: College, Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Women, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Intense Violence
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 05/21/19
Updated: 04/22/20
Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/21/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Loose Shirt

Oh boy a third emergence storm, wonder what type of changes this one will bring to the world. And this one also brings the start of a disaster lesbian relationship with all it adorableness and cuteness with it.

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Date: 05/21/19 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Tank Top Pajamas

For anyone else that have read pellian rise and kammi kettu, you are in for a treat. There are only three chapters so far but it already blows you away with the cute character interactions with each and the wholesome feelings it provides.

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Date: 05/22/19 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Tight Denim

Very adorable chapter, I loved the phone chat Elsie and maddy had during breakfast.

Got me thinking on what her powers are, because of the glowing aspect it makes me thinks it energy related, she may switch between the coby and Elsie form right night but its possible for her to lose the coby form later on if its based on a type of assimilation method where her new form needs to gather more energy to become permanent.

Im also interested in the power ranking that the OMR had, like what levels they are comparing it to and what levels characters like kalia fall into.

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Date: 05/22/19 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Boring Jeans

Hmmm there is definitely a possible link between portals and the emergence, maybe those with teleportation play a key role in everything.

Also my theory on her powers may be incorrect in some areas, she definitely feels some sort of of power take hold, but strictly in a self-preservation way, where her only control was swapping back to her old coby form.

Also the the buger king moment was hilarious and cute, just all sorts of mixed messages being sent between them.

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Date: 05/22/19 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Comfy Comforter

Thank you for this chapter, I feel bad that Elsie parent's are like that, it hurts when the people who gave birth to you treat you as something less then a person.

Also seems like the assimilation of the Elsie form over the coby form may have not been as far fetched as I thought it was.

I loved the references to the games in this chapter, had a nerdgasm when they were mentioned.

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Date: 05/28/19 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Lacy Bralette

Thank you for the chapter. Still got me trying to figure how Elsie powers, the way It was told was that Elsie is like a blank canvas that can do crazy tricks and moves, so when her powers take hold it guide's her through the motions, afterwards she can kinda turn it off but her body goes through the motions but not as well when she has it on.

When you think about if she combines this with learning martial art she could become quite deadly in combat.

Again thanks for the great chapter and keep up the hard work.

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Date: 05/30/19 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Little Black Skirt

Dang the moments between Elsie and maddy are adorable as hell, such a shame Elsie hasn't realize that that maddy is actually interested in her :)

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Date: 06/03/19 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Scuffed Jeans

Definitely got me all hype up with the romance going on in this chapter, brook scored a point this round so I wander what will happen with maddy.

"Headpats"

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Date: 06/15/19 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Dress Shirt

Gosh Elsie family is such a toxic environment to live in, I hope brook or maddy comes along and give them a heavy dose of karma. Hopefully everything starts looking up for Elsie soon

Author's Response: Yeahhhh pretty f****** toxic

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Date: 06/16/19 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Leaving the Site, Sorry. Info Below.

OMG this chapter was so fun to read, first we had the family drama where Elise left her awful family behind. On the way to maddy's the bus she so happen to be on get practically destroyed, killing everyone but her. And on top of all that she gets caught up in a fight between heroes and villains.

What got me really interested was the mention of Elise being the "key" and something or someone is coming for her. And her powers, HOLY CRAP, is she strong. It looks like she literally stop the equivalent of a nuclear meltdown, and to think her punk cousin leon thought he was going to stand in her way.

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Date: 06/29/19 Title: Falling Over

Caught that lesbian hint from Ms Monahan when she said “Not too different to my own experiences" after Elise told her story to her, dont know if she has a GF but if not then I hope she finds that lucky someone.

Nice and adorable moments between Elsie and Maddy shared in the bed, it was a very good explosion of cuteness wrap together with adorableness to produce mouth watering results.

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