Jet
Member Since: 08/07/12 Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Jet
All my friends were growing up and leaving me behind. Why would they want to hang out with girls instead of me? But thanks to my mother, I was able to once again become "Mr. Popular!"
Rated: Kid-Friendly 21 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 157212 Words: 65 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend
Locale: Family Household, High School, Hospital or Clinic
Body Modification: Breast Implants, Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Personality: Bad to Good
Story Type: Comic
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Series: None
Published: 09/29/11
Updated: 09/29/11
Reviewer: Jet Signed
Date: 09/01/16 Title: Chapter 1: Page 1

Not sure, what to make of this story. Would be creepy and all, but it does seem, that Harry never been a man to begin with. Was s(he) intersex, I wonder? Anyway, sad, how someone with a grand future ahead of 'em became this mess. And evil ma came out unscathed too

A master thief, caught in his homeland, escapes to another country and begins rebuilding his life in the best way he knows how: Stealing everything.
Rated: Adult 65 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 62333 Words: 45816 Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Forced, Tricked
Story Theme: Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Death
Series: Hrelsin Universe
Published: 10/02/15
Updated: 10/15/16
Reviewer: Jet Signed
Date: 08/08/16 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Gender-bending Discworld. Would be rather hilarious, if that necromancer sees their medicine routine and hears some random domestication chat xD Anyway, I really hope, that Oliua would become full-fledged asap and suck dry some person already. It's so slow x_X
Quite surprised, that MC manages to completely ignore Theas so far. Thought, she would come clean at that point.
Oh, I just can't help, but hate Feerbshord. An absurd and disbalanced character, that came out of nowhere and continuously ruins the story sigh. MC, on the other hand, is interesting.

Author's Response: Wonderful to hear your commentary! Shame you don't like Feerbshord, but she is important. I hope you like the next chapter, it should be interesting, based on how it's going so far...

Reviewer: Jet Signed
Date: 08/28/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice of you to dabble in vampire theory. Seems fresh and curious too ;). I expect more. But don't forget gender bending. We didn't have much so far. MC is like, oh, I'm female now, ok then. No exploring, no mental struggle and too few social awkwardness to boot). Btw, I'm still confused, how did he become a she? Troll blood? Magic water? Unclear.

Author's Response: It's supposed to be unclear. I've been debating some more gender bending, and... now you've given me ideas, so I thank you. Glad to hear you're expecting more! There shall be more.

Reviewer: Jet Signed
Date: 09/01/16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thinking back, this very story is the sole reason for me coming back to this site every single day during the entire summer. F5ing it several times a day, rereading each chapter at least thrice, musing about all that for days. Man, you got me hooked xD. Feel lame about guessing too, seems to me, that you got it all together a long time ago - a grand masterplan :d. Strange, how I didn't like any of your other works, should give 'em some more tries, I assume.
Funny how Theas is both attracted and horrified by Oliua. He can stand watch, while she kills guards and steals all there is to steal. MC is kinda OP, would be nice, if she shows off more now.

Author's Response: Oh, wow. You don't know how reading this review made me feel. I suppose me rereading it three times would help explain? Seriously, it's awesome to hear that, and now I'm going to work on this more. Yes, I had a grand masterplan, but it's been delayed over and over. I'll be getting back to it soon! Very soon. And if you want to read some other pieces, I recommend Magical Mayhem. I'm quite proud of it, and it's sequel will likely be getting worked on a lot after I finish this. I hope to keep you just as hooked as you are now!

Poor Daniel. Woke up to find his world turned sideways as his manhood is stripped from him without a trace or any sign of how it happened. Will he be able to find the source of his new X chromosome and revert it or live life as a newfound woman?
Rated: Adult 52 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 88075 Words: 38805 Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Series: None
Published: 03/02/16
Updated: 02/16/17
Reviewer: Jet Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07/02/16 Title: Chapter 1: Morning Alarm

You ask for some critique, but it's surprisingly arduous to provide any, since you seem far ahead of other local authors already, both story and style wise. Style is repetitive though, words like grumble, anatomy, even whole sentences do reiterate from time to time.
I'm happy, that MC finally does something for a change. The whole story so far is the epitome of how you are your worst enemy. Keep up your impressive work! Hopefully, it shall be long and fruitful).

All Andy wanted to do was play video games and ignore his roommate. Now this former boy has to grapple with their gender identity and figure out how to be as true to themselves as possible. Can she cope with her changes in order to find help and reverse the curse? And more importantly will she even want to?
Rated: Adult 79 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 64015 Words: 46879 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 07/26/16
Updated: 03/05/19
Reviewer: Jet Signed
Date: 07/30/16 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: E-Mo-Tion

Just wanted to say, that 3rd chapter was simply marvelous! Like 10/10 heavy stuff. First 2 were meh, lame and all, but this one...jawdropping instafav. I even managed to enjoy romance somehow. Usually dislike it xd. Hopefully Endy will continue experiencing that new body. And woah, amazing how a boy and a girl can be that great of friends :o

Author's Response: Apologies for not responding to this sooner. I'm so glad that this chapter was to your liking. If you don't mind me asking, what was it about this chapter that made it stand out to you in comparison? I'd be curious to know for future reference. I really enjoy writing the friendship between Elle and Andi. They both seem to come alive when they are together and making each other's lives difficult. Andi will continue to explore herself a little more in the future. It's all going to happen in baby steps, but curiosity is definitely going to outweigh anxiety when it comes to exploring her new biology.

Joseph was a pessimistic loner, angry with both his existence and the world. After a misused wishing stone alters his body and robs him of his voice, Joseph is forced to evaluate his life.
Rated: Adult 251 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 278570 Words: 105448 Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Daughter, Girlfriend
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Accident, Revenge
Personality: Bad to Good
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes, Romance, Sports
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 02/09/17
Updated: 07/15/17
Reviewer: Jet Signed
Date: 03/10/17 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Day After - Part 2

Kinda lost interest early on.
So much intense and unfounded hatred in your stories, that it gets hard to read at times. But such the bipolar turn all of sudden. Megan realized, that bro got screwed over and became affable all of a sudden, huh? But didn't she hate MC's guts and just wished him dead to begin with?
And MC is more of a doll, than a person, so apathetic to everything. Doesn't even bother to explain anyone anything at all. The whole public considers her a pervert now. No channeling anger or venting out too. Do you become a "I deserve anything done to me" vegetable, if you change genders and used to be misanthropic before? A reaction like that is possible, I guess, but it's damn boring. And while I understand, that it's an alternative universe, ppl act so weird all the time, that it's hard to make sense of any.
Gaming descriptions were certainly fun. Wish, she would just play all days long and bond with mates instead of hiding in the shell, doing absolutely nothing, but following others wishes, that rarely make sense. And yeah, Stephanie is better than Johanna lol

Author's Response: I'm sorry that you lost interest in this story, and I'm trying very hard to make this response as level-headed as possible, because this review legitimately pissed me off. I suppose it's your right to p*** me off, though. Free speech and all :) At this stage in the story, Johanna is going through the a period of mourning, still digesting her new life. It's a process, and she's not yet reached anger. Also, she isn't a vegetable. I find that observation to be mildly offensive, but again - that is within your rights. While I applaud you on your use of the word 'misanthropic', I have no idea who 'Stephanie' is. Lastly, your average review rating is 1 star! Turn that frown upside-down and let people know when you like their story! If you don't enjoy reading any story on this site, then I don't know what to tell you! :D Yaaaaay!!! You're fun

A car accident started it all and now I'm writing it down to tell the world how I turned into a teenage girl.
Rated: Adult 15 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 23877 Words: 4504 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Locale: Family Household, Girl's School, High School, Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Accident, Forced
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Body Swap, Hormonal, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 03/09/17
Updated: 03/23/17
Reviewer: Jet Signed
Date: 03/11/17 Title: Chapter 2: 2 - Hospitals and recovery

So going to school is the biggest shock here :o lmao.
Well, he's pretty young, should still remember some of the curriculum.

Author's Response: Well he's been out of school for somewhere about 2-3 years so it was kinda shocking to be told he has to go back. You'll find out more in the next chapter :D Thanks for the review!

Travis had spent the night drinking with his friends. When he woke up, the whole night was a blur, he was trapped in a foreign body, and he (or she) was trapped in the past. Now he has to blend in as a woman while trying to find out how this had happened to her.
Rated: Adult 41 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 79693 Words: 35234 Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Corsets, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline, Work Uniform
Motivation for Change: Accident, In Hiding, Unknown
Personality: Cultural/Nationality Change, Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Historical Time Period
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 06/03/17
Updated: 06/21/19
Reviewer: Jet Signed
Date: 12/31/17 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great chapter ;)

Reviewer: Jet Signed
Date: 12/29/18 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

The suspence is killing me. Reread the last chapter few times. How are we supposed to survive till the next one?

Reviewer: Jet Signed
Date: 04/16/19 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Another brilliant, albeit short chapter.

What happens when you agree to let a stranger stay with you for a short time? If you're not careful your entire life could be turned upside down.

I am purposely leaving many boxes unchecked for this one. I'm curious to see how many people figure out what's happening without those clues.
Rated: Explicit 14 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 11203 Words: 5454 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Accident
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Series: None
Published: 06/28/17
Updated: 07/03/17
Reviewer: Jet Signed
Date: 06/29/17 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Not sure, I understand the purpose of aliens gender bending anyone, but might be curious idd.

Craig, an unpopular misfit is terrified as he is about to attend his high school Prom despite being a dateless wonder. All that changes after discovering an old mirror in the attic which shows him a reflection of his female self and a portal to an alternate reality where his life is very different…
Rated: Adult 135 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 172419 Words: 44712 Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Fights Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Humiliation, Romance
Type of Change: Stuck
Series: None
Published: 01/29/18
Updated: 06/22/18
Reviewer: Jet Signed
Date: 02/10/18 Title: Chapter 1: Cover

Poor lad, huh. Most ppl would back down instead of going all in, quite foolhardy.

Author's Response: Foolhardy indeed, or perhaps he's more curious then he wants to believe. Thanks for reading. x

"Are we all still heading out to the mountains this weekend?" Were words I never once thought could change my life so drastically.
Rated: Adult 50 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 130151 Words: 185198 Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 07/20/18
Updated: 07/04/19
Reviewer: Jet Signed
Date: 09/28/18 Title: Chapter 1: A Green-Eyed Woman

The gaming sessions are golden. Seriously, I'd happily read about them playing all sorts of online titles and goofing off over their voice chat. Would make one of the best stories on the site too lol.
Everyday life is nice too. School, work, stuff at home, I mean.
Drama is abit boring, but necessary, I guess.
But mystery and dreams are just lame, I don't find the almighty Jen or her cronies any fun, nor do they seem relevant somehow. Anyhow, this story got a ton of layers, a mite harder to give an overall mark.

Author's Response: The gaming sessions definitely weren't something I imagined someone would bring up when leaving a review, I'm glad you like them though! I mostly expected those to go unmentioned at best. Everyday life is what I'm guessing most people even clicked on this for. Drama...well that's a given, not everyone cares for it. It's not necessarily needed, but I felt it wouldn't really feel out of place in this, so I included it. As for the dreams/mystery...if you aren't enjoying the dreams so far I don't really expect that to change at this point. It's a bit late into the story for anyone not liking those to change their view on them I feel. Hopefully, they don't kill your enjoyment too much. Onto Jen and her cronies, they do have a purpose and I'd like to assume that when everything is clear their relevancy is earned, but as of right now I can certainly see why they're just kinda...well there. Overall though, I can't say they're going to be dialed back to the point of irrelevancy or anything like that, they'll be there in tandem with everyday life as they have been (at least Jen will be). All I can hope for is that the parts of the story you do enjoy outshine the ones you don't. Hope the response wasn't too lengthy, I wanted to try and address everything you brought up. Thanks for reading and for your feedback!

How would you punish someone that has caused your only daughter's death from a overdose on drugs, I can only think of one punishment suitable for that person.
Rated: Adult 16 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 39442 Words: 11263 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend, Teenager
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, Pantyhose
Locale: Family Household
Body Modification: Breast Implants, Ears Pierced, Extreme Plastic Surgery, Liposuction, Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime, Forced, Revenge
Personality: Bad to Good
Story Theme: Captive, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Age Regression, Identity Theft
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 09/19/18
Updated: 09/28/18
Reviewer: Jet Signed
Date: 09/20/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Death of our Daughter

Another poorly written sick horror this site is famous for. Well, the plot seems almost identical to The skin i live in so far. Guess, I hope for the same ending. Not sure what else can Jeff do, aside from slaughtering his tormentors.

When 13 year old twins Tyler and Jillian can't get along, their Mom decides to take drastic measures and make them see things from each others shoes by making them literally switch places, forcing Jillian to be the brother and Tyler to be the sister despite their protests.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 23 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 35940 Words: 53070 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Boyfriend, Cheerleader, Daughter, Girlfriend, Son
Featured Items: Lingerie, Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Bad to Good, Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Humiliation, Sports
Type of Change: Hormonal
Series: None
Published: 10/30/19
Updated: 11/08/19
Reviewer: Jet Signed
Date: 10/30/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Mom's Punishment

The plot is just mental. I don't see how something like that can ever happen irl for a number of reasons. Besides, MC gives up kinda instantly. Don't see how it can become anything beyond crossdressing at this point as well.

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