slinet042
Member Since: 09/01/18 Membership status: Member
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Peter - a shapeshifting intelligence operative - sets out to solve a series of grisly murders, only to have his investigation derailed when a disguise backfires.
Rated: Adult 126 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 113026 Words: 108139 Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Teenager
Featured Items: High Heels
Locale: High School, Hospital or Clinic
Body Modification: Extreme Piercing
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Horror
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change, Identity Theft, Stuck
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 11/07/16
Updated: 06/23/17
Reviewer: slinet042 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/03/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Noir

Truly a beautiful work. Thank you for taking the time and for putting in so much effort and so much hard reality. I loved Ash and hated her for her frailty and her weakness and her humanity. This really was a journey to read and I'm sure to write as well - very excited to check out your other works!

One stupid nitpick I had - Glocks don't have safeties, altho I really enjoyed the hard boiled 16yro girl detective constantly referring to her gun as 'trusty' lol

I also really admire your ability to take this story places I couldn't predict, with huge world sized events fading away for intense personal drama and then weaving back together excellently. Really, really well done - I'd love to chat with you about your writing process if you ever feel like it!

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words! The most challenging part of this story was transitioning from a hard-boiled detective tone to a more nuanced teen narration style, and I hope that this change was done sufficiently well. Ah, I've shown my true stripes as somebody who has never fired a gun before. I'll have to edit that xD I'm flattered by your notes on my style. I'd love to talk about writing and answer any of your questions! I stop by the TGS Discord server every few days, and I'm always in the mood to chat. Thanks!

Joseph was a pessimistic loner, angry with both his existence and the world. After a misused wishing stone alters his body and robs him of his voice, Joseph is forced to evaluate his life.
Rated: Adult 245 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 251393 Words: 105448 Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Daughter, Girlfriend
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Accident, Revenge
Personality: Bad to Good
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes, Romance, Sports
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 02/09/17
Updated: 07/15/17
Reviewer: slinet042 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/10/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Objective Apples

Another really great work and a super interesting angle to take. I know tons of trans women who have basically wished they were mute due to the difficulty in mastering voice so it was interesting seeing what living life with that physical condition would actually be like.

Super sweet story and the character arc and growth were very believable. It was also neat to see a story like this where the gender change, while front and center, isn't the main concern the character has to deal with and puts things into sharper relief. I also liked the little throwaway references to the minor differences a world with wishing stones has from our own haha

I would have loved to see a bit more conflict in the transition period where Johanna was getting used to her new situation at school - I would have thought someone who was so hostile and superior before hand would have reaped more of a whirlwind from any number of others after she became so helpless. Still though, what was there was excellent and the change it created in her personality was quite believable. Really resonated with me as I saw a lot of my angsty teenage self in Joseph, before the fall!

Author's Response: Thanks for the awesome feedback! I do enjoy writing stories where the gender changes aren't the most pressing issue in the character's life. I don't like to dwell too much on the physical adaptation, since that's where most other stories on this site (naturally) choose to focus, and it can feel overplayed if you read enough works in this genre. Glad you liked my attempts at subtle worldbuilding, and I'm flattered that you enjoyed my story! I'm also glad that you identified with Johanna's journey. We've all been angsty and negative at times - sometimes it's hard not to be - and it often takes a true challenge to get past those emotions.

Mark plans on having a fun night out with his friends, until he discovers a family legacy. This is a character-driven story with periodic sexual elements.
Rated: Adult 10 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 44641 Words: 16138 Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 04/18/18
Updated: 06/11/18
Reviewer: slinet042 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/01/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really enjoyed this one too! Very excited to hear more from Dani's perspective - being an attractive woman at a brogramming firm is no cake walk and I'd especially love for you to explore the conflict Maggie must have between wanting this new life and ruining the life of at least one of her friends! Could make for some great storytelling!

Connor is a successful young techie living in New York. Just when he doesn't think life could get any better the two kinky girls downstairs invite him over for what he naively assumes is a threesome.
Rated: Explicit 63 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 183053 Words: 54429 Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Pantyhose, Undies, Work Uniform
Motivation for Change: Tricked, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual, Becomes Only Attracted to Women
Story Theme: Humiliation, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change, Mind Control
Series: None
Published: 04/30/18
Updated: 09/13/18
Reviewer: slinet042 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/11/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - A Visit from the Neighbors

Just read thru all the chapters - I have to say I absolutely love your style! I also really enjoy the cruelty Maria and her beau are dishing out, personally. I mean if you're a witch why would you want to pass up this amazing opportunity right? Plus the hot-shot cocky guy who is like the same age as you and owns your building can def use just about any amount of humiliation.

Really love how you manage to keep upping the stakes without things really getting out of hand, and how you manage to keep all of your characters motivations and responses in line and believable. Really really great stuff!

Jeremy Sanders had certain expectations for his college life, but none of them involved becoming a loving girlfriend to his douche of a roommate. Can he resist the role he is being forced into or will he be trapped as a sexy college coed for the rest of his days?
Rated: Explicit 35 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 164577 Words: 81693 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Girlfriend, Model
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Forced, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Captive, Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Horror, Humiliation, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Identity Theft, Mind Control, Stuck
Warnings: Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 06/02/18
Updated: 06/19/18
Reviewer: slinet042 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/07/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Revised

Really fun work! I very much enjoyed how powerfully Kara struggled to regain her former life - I feel like many authors have their protagonists give up and accept things a little too quickly. Tanner's control over her was super hot too and I'm glad he eventually got what was coming to him. I'd have loved an epilogue from his perspective as he woke up on the ship too!

Thanks for breathing life into your 'redheaded beauty'!

Ethan has been lying to his parents about his romantic life. Now they've invited his made-up girlfriend to a wedding. Maybe it's time to call in a simple favor...
Rated: Adult 77 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 99364 Words: 25844 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Romance
Series: None
Published: 09/04/18
Updated: 09/13/18
Reviewer: slinet042 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/06/18 Title: Chapter 1: A Simple Favor

Another great piece of fun! Delightful working with you on this and I hope to see much more from you in the future!

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