Sharp Pen
Work in the legal profession and wanted to write some stories I don't see very much of. I was challenged that if I don't like the story, I should write my own
Member Since: 04/09/18 Membership status: Member
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A group of young men and women are diagnosed with the mysterious Tiresias Syndrome, which causes their bodies to change to those of the opposite sex. There's a 50% chance that in two weeks they'll turn back to normal, if not they'll remain that way for the rest of their lives.
Rated: Adult 82 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 130775 Words: 75879 Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: Camp, Hospital or Clinic, Office
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 03/10/17
Updated: 10/09/18
Reviewer: Sharp Pen Signed starstarstar
Date: 04/13/18 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Complexity of Us

Great start. Keep plugging along'1

A young man helps out a friend by becoming the Ivy League Girlfriend. It's just for dinner, so that wouldn't lead to anything... right?
Rated: Explicit 292 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 699686 Words: 59212 Chapters: 73 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Bride, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Bikinis, Boots, Breast Forms, Gaff, High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Pantyhose, Sex Toys
Locale: Vacation Destination
Body Modification: Breast Implants, Ears Pierced, Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual, Changes to be Attracted Only to Men
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Romance
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 03/03/18
Updated: 05/20/18
Reviewer: Sharp Pen Signed
Date: 04/13/18 Title: Chapter 1: Changing Seasons

Looking forward to your story!

Author's Response: And I'm looking forward to hearing what you think!

Eighteen year old Paul agrees to help his mother with a sewing project. Everyone knew that he bore a striking resemblance to his grandmother when she was his age, but once he lets his hair down and is in a dress, they realize that he truly was created in her Spit and Image.
Rated: Adult 56 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 41236 Words: 91598 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: Breast Forms, Curlers, Lingerie, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline, Undies
Locale: Family Household, Formal Dance, Hairstyling/Salon
Motivation for Change: Caught Crossdressing, Dared into It
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 03/21/18
Updated: 05/15/18
Reviewer: Sharp Pen Signed
Date: 04/13/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love how you develop your characters.

Author's Response: Thank you, so much.

It is better to read Bedazzled first before reading this sequel. This story continues with Matty returning from her first date with a man and follows her path through new adventures and life changing decisions.
Rated: Explicit 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 4726 Words: 18413 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Sharp Pen Signed
Date: 04/13/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapters 1-6 of 8.

I'm looking forward to the second half.

Author's Response: Thanks. Chapters 1-6 are the first half. 7 & 8 are the second half. I was forced to split this story because of the size limit, can you not see chapters 7 & 8?

Separately, Dracula and Loki awaken in new bodies. Who is the culprit? Why did this happen? Is it just your average April Fool's prank?
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 1916 Words: 4161 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Comedy
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: The Curse Universe
Published: 04/07/18
Updated: 04/07/18
Reviewer: Sharp Pen Signed
Date: 04/13/18 Title: Chapter 1: The Second Coming of April Fools

I love how you develop your characters.

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