Cario
Member Since: 03/09/18 Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Cario
A young man finds himself in a strange and different world, a world of light that is far too bright, and of vibrant, beautiful darkness.
Rated: Adult 36 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 38847 Words: 54174 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Curse
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Body Swap, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 05/16/16
Updated: 09/09/16
Reviewer: Cario Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/09/18 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I really enjoyed this story greatly. I hope to see more chapters in the coming future. I may have missed it but, what was Anne's original human name before she became the Dark Elf?

After he accidentally disturbs his female neighbours' ritual, beer-swilling student Chad finds himself gaining some pretty nifty divine powers. Unfortunately for him, that that's not all that is changing about him. Will the girls be able to reverse the effects, or is the old Chad soon to be no more?
Rated: Adult 57 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 108524 Words: 23273 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Corsets, Lingerie, Pantyhose, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 07/29/18
Updated: 09/04/18
Reviewer: Cario Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/07/18 Title: Chapter 5: Image and Identity

If Mercedes knew that was Chad instead of Bi, she would totally flip out! :3

His next big challenge would be that the girls will take him out to shopping at the mall. Every eyes would burn at him. Husbands ogling while wives glare. XD

Author's Response: A tempting scene, but Chad knows the power of internet shopping.

Reviewer: Cario Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/02/18 Title: Chapter 3: Consequences

Mercedes is my favorite character in the story. XD Chad will surely transform into a outrageously beautiful, buxom Goddess. How will he explain all this to his family?! :3

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Heh, I'm glad you like her; I've got a soft spot for her too. Chad's definitely on his way in that direction, isn't he? More chapters soon.

Reviewer: Cario Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/03/18 Title: Chapter 4: Love and Fear

Wow, the connection between those two is just awesome. Wonderful update~

Author's Response: Thank you! This story's definitely stretching my writing muscles; I'm glad the relationship reads well. More soon.

Reviewer: Cario Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/10/18 Title: Chapter 6: A Path Unknown

How much I enjoy reading your story. His metamorphosis to exotic female deity is coming out beautifully! It's only a matter of time now. :3

Reviewer: Cario Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/18/18 Title: Chapter 8: The High Priestess

I too often refresh this page to see an update. I hope the story can last for a long time, it's that good.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very happy that my longest story so far is still hooking people's attention. Still, all things must come to an end, and it's only got a few more chapters to go now. I hope you will enjoy them!

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Date: 09/06/18 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue - In With the New

Alas, all good things must come to an end. This has been an incredible journey for Chad or the now Cassie. Thank you so much for sharing the story. Will there be a sequel?

Author's Response: You're very welcome. I enjoyed writing it, and am glad people enjoyed it. No plans as yet for a sequel, but you never know when inspiration might hit!

Tormented for years by his mother and sister, Victor's life is upended as his sister turns him into a witch to help cast a spell to banish a darkling hunting her friend. Overwhelmed with new powers, and bonded as the avatar to a Vanir goddess, Victoria will try to deal with a growing threat from darkness beyond, while dealing with an estranged family and their coven.
Rated: Explicit 46 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 29654 Words: 34962 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character, Girlfriend
Locale: Family Household, Girl's School, High School
Motivation for Change: Forced
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 10/31/18
Updated: 09/20/19
Reviewer: Cario Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/02/18 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm really enjoying this story. Poor Victoria having to go through such hell over the years. Looking forward to the next update.

No one meant any harm, and everyone had only the best of intentions. The problem is that when one makes a wish to an entity from outside the mortal plane, it's very important to get the wording right. But in the end, it's not the worst thing that happened to the small college town of Spirit Falls.
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 16111 Words: 4084 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Cario Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/01/19 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Very interesting story so far. Looking forward to the next update.

Sir Chester of Echord died the warrior's death he had always known awaited him. Upon passing into the afterlife, he was not greeted by the eternal rest he so sought but by a foul-mouthed Goddess hellbent on recruiting him for yet another war. A new journey through a familiar world may lead our brave knight to a destiny greater than he ever could have dreamed.
Rated: Adult 19 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 10543 Words: 13948 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Featured Items: Corsets, Masks
Motivation for Change: In Hiding, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Bad to Good
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Attracted Only to Women, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Mythical Setting, Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 01/14/19
Updated: 10/08/19
Reviewer: Cario Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/14/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is just the beginning. Can't wait to see what happens next.

When I woke up this morning, there's a lot I didn't see coming, the truck least of all.

I reincarnated as the final boss of a game I had been playing. I'm now purple, nine feet tall, and female? Not that I mind any of this, but... Why does everybody fear me? I just want to be friends!
Rated: Adult 74 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 106269 Words: 173374 Chapters: 72 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs), Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Bad to Good
Sexual Orientation: Changes to be Bisexual, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Fan Fiction, Mind/Body Posession, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Body Swap
Warnings: Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 02/10/20
Updated: 06/23/20
Reviewer: Cario Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/11/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Unskippable

Awesome story. Looking forward to the next update. :P

Reviewer: Cario Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/12/20 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Tutorial

Great character development, Kazumi is just adorable. Heh, I'm sure Eliza will have plenty of time to explore her new body~ Looking forward to the next installment.

Lizzie Seward has always found solace in her Uncle Ethan. But eventually she just can't take her god awful mother, bratty sister, and middle school drama. So one thing leads to another, and poor Ethan gets to know his niece in ways he never wanted to.
Rated: Explicit 26 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 29639 Words: 26190 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Cario Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/18/20 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This story truly has potential. Can't wait for more. :)

Reviewer: Cario Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/29/20 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Kitty will most likely force her daughter (Ethan) to go clothing shopping with her after hearing about the detention. In which is related to the dress code issues.

Reviewer: Cario Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/03/20 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ethan would feel so awkward shopping for lingerie to swimsuits of different types, size and colors. XD
He will surely feel the stares of the guys at the mall for sure.

Reviewer: Cario Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/08/20 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Might be that the "real Lizzie" somehow swapped bodies with Miss Summer. Many possibilities of where she could be. She wouldn't just abandoned her uncle like that after all the good things he did for her through the years. She might be even watching over them in secret.

Any case, I'm really enjoying the story a lot. Ethan could bring his "new family" even to an even closer bond.

Reviewer: Cario Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/13/20 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Very nice, truly enjoyed this chapter for sure. I've bet Kitty never had this much fun with her daughter in a long time or never at all. She would treat her daughter to a pedicure and massage spa treatment :P

Looking forward to the next update. :)

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