Elron
Member Since: 01/27/18 Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Elron
This is a recurring dream, or perhaps nightmare, I once had for twelve consecutive nights. A man awakens in a two-room prison(?) with no memory or knowledge of anything. When he notices the statue of what must be a Goddess bizarre things begin to happen.
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 6874 Words: 9309 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement
Series: None
Published: 01/19/11
Updated: 01/19/11
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/29/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just read your story, Cheyenne, and all I can say is WOW. Such a heartwarming tale of love and sacrifice.

This is certainly one of the more unusual stories on the TG sites, and you have quite a vivid imagination.

I believe there are three things that elevate a good story into a great one. First is detail. You paint such a detailed picture of the characters and their surroundings I feel like I am in the room with them. My own breathing is constricted by a corset, and of course the giant breasts affect every movement I make. Second is conflict. Conflict and how they handle it is what develops a character into a real person. Every page was sheer torture with isolation, temptation, fear, you name it, it was in there. Finally great stories are filled with suspense. Each time Goddess summoned him I was on the edge of my seat wondering "what now?".

Thank you for giving life to this tale and I hope these comments do reach you.

Len Clancy is a simple PI, being thrust into a not-so-simple situation where extraterrestrials are pulling strings behind the scenes.
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 28215 Words: 5925 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo, Cheerleader
Motivation for Change: Forced, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive, Loses Identity, Made Dumber
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Type of Change: Age Regression, Hypnosis, Mind Control, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 01/03/12
Updated: 01/10/12
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/20 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Great story. Very creative. I'm glad Len didn't completely lose his old identity and memories.

It would be interesting to read about the bigger picture of what mother's end game is. Probably not gonna happen at this point. Oh well, I do enjoy your other stories. I'll keep reading. Thanks.

A man starts noticing things, but can't quite understand how they're coming to be.
Rated: Adult 18 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 190067 Words: 5120 Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Secretary, Wife
Locale: Family Household, Office
Body Modification: Ears Pierced, Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: Forced, Male Domination
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Type of Change: Hypnosis, Mind Control, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: Girly Stuff
Published: 01/13/12
Updated: 01/14/12
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/20 Title: Chapter 14: The Epilogue

Nice job.

A new swimmer takes on the best. He should have kept his morals in check.
Rated: Adult 8 Reviews starstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 10558 Words: 151 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Series: None
Published: 05/26/12
Updated: 05/26/12
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/15/19 Title: Chapter 1: The start of things.

Good start to the story, but moving a little fast. Can't wait to see what happens next.

A new College grad moves into a new apartment and finds out the neighbors are not so friendly.
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstar Story Incomplete Reads: 18175 Words: 2815 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Featured Items: Undies
Motivation for Change: Forced, Tricked
Personality: Made Dumber
Type of Change: Age Regression
Warnings: Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 09/14/12
Updated: 09/14/12
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/15/19 Title: Chapter 2: What next

I know it's a long shot, but I hope you continue this story. And slow down the pacing a bit, it's moving pretty fast. Thanks.

A fast, short sequel to "Twisting My Life". Once again, a mysterious purse leads to a changed life.
Rated: Explicit 8 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 61732 Words: 2677 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend
Body Modification: Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Hormonal, Hypnosis, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: Girly Stuff
Published: 11/10/12
Updated: 11/10/12
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/20 Title: Chapter 1: THE PURSE AND ITS CONTENTS

Great story, but it seems like magic would have to be behind all the changes. Very creative writing. Thanks.

A bank robber tries, along with his girl friend, to embezzle the whole loot and evade police capture with a metamorphosis to female gender by advanced medicines. But the other accomplices are not helpless with tracking the fugitives and neither are the police investigators. So law and order will in the end prevail. Futuristic science. Drama. Crime story – criminal planning and execution, and police investigation and manhunt. Metamorfosis by pulling on a new skin and then making it permanent by use of advanced medicines.

This story as a comic:
https://www.deviantart.com/ab-norway/art/Two-Criminals-on-the-Run-Front-Cover-761692162
Rated: Kid-Friendly 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 5040 Words: 12506 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/12/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

AB, this was a very interesting story. It reminded me of Ocean's Eleven with all the detailed planning that went into the heist. You obviously know the details of money theft and laundering, evading capture, criminal investigations, prison life, AND genetics. Wow!
I kind of expected the double-cross by Harry, but I was wondering if Mia would double-cross him by turning him into a baby, young girl, or even an animal. I guess any of those would have led the story in a much different direction.
I do wish you had kept the ending a secret instead of revealing it in the description "So law and order will in the end prevail." I always heard crime doesn't pay, so I was wondering as the story progressed what would happen, especially to Kate, if captured by the police.
It seemed a little far-fetched for the court to allow Kate and Maureen to occupy the same cell and get married. But I admit I know nothing about women's prisons.
I thought the pacing of the story was just right. The level of detail had to be very high for a crime drama, and you succeeded. All-in-all a very well written story. Thank you.

Author's Response: Years ago I was a passionated watcher of the show "Columbo", about the LA homicide police lieutenant. Those episodes always began with revealing the who- and how-dunnit so the mystery was always "how-catch'em". That was the angle I wrote them from.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/24/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I remember watching Columbo. Great writing. Looks like it rubbed off on you.

George is jobless and looking for any job that can help him pay rent with his flat mate. he goes for an interview as a babysitter at a mysterious rich mans house. the job to look after a 6 year old girl, the reality though is much worse. George wakes up as a living doll...
Rated: Explicit 50 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 174288 Words: 26196 Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Doll, Mannequin, Mother, Object, Slave
Featured Items: High Heels
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Tricked
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Captive, Humiliation, Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 03/25/13
Updated: 05/22/15
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/11/19 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: One last Hope

Hi Adam, I read Sophie a long time ago and forgot to leave a review. This was certainly a very unique story with the mechanism that turned George into a female slave. I really enjoyed reading each chapter. You are very good at creating suspense. The level of detail was great, I felt like I was right there in the house with Sophie and Conner.
It will be interesting to see how Amy turns out - will she be 'normal' or will she resume her father's work, turning people into slave dolls?
Thanks again for all your hard work in creating this story.

Author's Response: Thanks Elron, I appresiate your detailed review. It was my first ever full length story and though it was a challenge I'm happy with how it came out. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I thank you for reading. Check out more of my stories if you're interested. xx

A normal guy going to a Halloween party decides to add a secret extra 'something' to his costume. What he was not counting on was a magical surprise from the party host.
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 21533 Words: 6276 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Featured Items: Lingerie, Sex Toys, Undies
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident
Type of Change: Changed by Clothing, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 04/28/13
Updated: 04/28/13
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/17/19 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Great story! Loved the characters. I wish you would continue it. The night is far from over for those two.

I'd had a feeling that Han had been wearing Leia's gold bikini from Episode 6, under his Han outfit. Then maybe he would have become a complete woman, instead of somewhere in between.

At any rate, loved the story idea, loved the characters, maybe you could expand the story to explain what happened the rest of the night and if anyone was unable to change back. Next year have different costumes. Lots of possibilities.

One evening, right in the middle of 'the act,' a husband and wife find their bodies changing gender. This transformation is not the only thing the two share, as the couple is just weeks away from becoming new parents.
Rated: Explicit 44 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 153472 Words: 30433 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Mother, Wife
Locale: Family Household, Office
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Story Theme: Pregnancy
Series: None
Published: 04/30/13
Updated: 03/07/14
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/20/18 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Out of the Mouths of Babes

This is one of my favorite stories. I've read through it a number of times, always picking up some new detail or nuance I missed before. Your stories are quite vivid and make the magic seem real. Thanks for taking the time to give life and dimension to your creation. You rock!

A couple guys go up to a cabin to enjoy some outdoors time. Unfortunately for one of them, a group spell goes awry.
Rated: Explicit 16 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 70744 Words: 7937 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: Camp, Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Fights Change
Warnings: Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 05/22/13
Updated: 05/26/13
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/17/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story, very well written, wish you would continue it.

A brave knight journeys to a castle to a save a damsel in distress. He treks through a dry desert, up a steep volcano, and faces off with a dragon.
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 7016 Words: 2375 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/08/18 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Great twist on a classic tale. I like your attention to detail. And it has a volcano. Way cool.

The knight, now princess, faces another problem: how will she escape the castle and break the curse?
Rated: Explicit 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 5904 Words: 1985 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/08/18 Title: Chapter 1: Part 2

Great continuation to an excellent story. Wish I was there!

The changing mind of somebody who's gone through a massive change.
Rated: Adult 28 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 87151 Words: 14987 Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Locale: Family Household, Formal Dance, Hairstyling/Salon, High School, Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Lost a Bet
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: The Gender-Bending Adventures of Goshen
Published: 08/13/13
Updated: 08/22/13
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/30/20 Title: Chapter 15: Entry # 249

Nice lighthearted story without a lot of conflict or drama. Working my way through your list of stories. You are a very creative writer.

A young genius invents a device that allows him to swap bodies, but an accident during his first test leaves him in a body he's unfamiliar with, for the rest of his life.
Rated: Adult 25 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 101887 Words: 16981 Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/20 Title: Chapter 15: Epilogue: Catching Up to Me

Great story. I liked the premise, although it's hard to picture a hospital letting anyone have a comotose body, no matter how many of their machines he fixed. Some things you just have to accept.

I'm working my way through all of your stories, and I really enjoy your writing. Very creative and descriptive. Thank you.

Third person shorts based in my Gender-Bending Adventures of Goshen series. These may be adaptations of unclear events, or explanations of untold events, the story and where it takes place in it will be listed in the Chapter Notes section.
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 11723 Words: 12657 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Not Applicable
Locale: Family Household, High School
Series: The Gender-Bending Adventures of Goshen
Published: 09/28/13
Updated: 01/20/14
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/07/20 Title: Chapter 10: A Christmas Story: Kara

Great collection of followup stories. I like checking in on your characters every now and then.

Marks hates everything about his life. One night after work he is offered a chance to redo the last portion of his life, the only catch is that he must return as a female. Mark is thrown into his new life entering his senior year of high school confused, worried, nervous, and excited.
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 17059 Words: 3131 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Bride, Cheerleader, Daughter, Girlfriend, Teenager
Featured Items: Bikinis, Boots, Bridal Gown, High Heels, Lingerie, Pantyhose
Locale: College, Family Household, Formal Dance, High School
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 10/25/13
Updated: 11/10/13
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/15/19 Title: Chapter 2: The Following Morning

This is the beginning of a great story. I know it's a long shot, but I hope you will continue it.

Playing an RPG using virtual reality is great, unless you're a guy and you have to play the princess.
Rated: Adult 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 8488 Words: 1154 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Mythical Setting
Series: The Perils and Pratfalls of Roleplaying
Published: 12/19/13
Updated: 12/19/13
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01/29/20 Title: Chapter 1: Roleplaying Can Suck, Sometimes

Nice idea, would like to have seen how far the changes can go - including the Mage.

The story of four friends, each going through their own unique sort of changes.
Rated: Adult 6 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 6281 Words: 3826 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: Family Household, High School
Series: The Perils and Pratfalls of Roleplaying
Published: 12/24/13
Updated: 12/24/13
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/20 Title: Chapter 1: I Used to be a Roleplayer Like You, But Then...

Great story. Loved the step-by-step description of the changes.

A (very) short story about when a man loves a woman.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 7 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 2257 Words: 644 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Locale: High School
Series: None
Published: 12/24/13
Updated: 12/24/13
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story. I love that Brandon is not judgemental. Just accepting.

A short follow-up story of The Love of My Life by Hikaro
Rated: Kid-Friendly 5 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 1892 Words: 1129 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Series: None
Published: 12/26/13
Updated: 12/26/13
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/20 Title: Chapter 1: Surprise of my life

I love happy endings. Great finish to the story.

A sequel to Person42's Surprise of my life, which was a sequel to my own The Love of My Life.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 6 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 1525 Words: 1138 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: None
Series: None
Published: 01/01/14
Updated: 01/01/14
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/20 Title: Chapter 1: The Best Day of My Life

I thanked Person42 for writing such a happy ending, now I will thank you for the same thing. Great job, both of you.

A high schooler notices the girls acting very strangely and changing in appearance. Then the boys start disappearing. Then he unravels a very dark conspiracy.
Rated: Explicit 68 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 333880 Words: 42072 Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo
Featured Items: Bikinis, Lingerie
Locale: High School
Body Modification: Breast Implants, Castrated/Neutered, Extreme Plastic Surgery, Extreme Surgical Alteration, Lips Plumped, Sexual Reassignment Surgery, Vaginal Alteration
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Personality: Made Dumber
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Sports
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Mechanical Device, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 01/12/14
Updated: 11/23/14
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/15/19 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Epilogue

That was quite a different take on a TG theme.
I wasn't real clear on why the boys needed to be turned gay, rather than just turn them all into girls.
Thanks for writing.

A Teenage Boy finds out an amazing truth about his girlfriend's favorite computer game
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 18881 Words: 1317 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 02/10/14
Updated: 02/11/14
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/08/18 Title: Chapter 1: An Interesting Game

Kind of a fast start, great stories are a marathon, not a sprint. Good idea for a story. Please continue.

Lucas is a poor farmer living in a prosperous Kingdom in medieval England. He dreams of experiencing a life of luxury living in the kingdoms castle. One day he meets Princess Abigail who explains she also wants to experience life on the other side and so she suggests they use a magic potion to body swap.
Rated: Explicit 35 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 73717 Words: 19036 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character, Prostitute, Wife
Featured Items: Corsets, High Heels, Lingerie, Work Uniform
Motivation for Change: Tricked, Undercover, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Historical Time Period, Humiliation, Mind/Body Posession, Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change, Identity Theft, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 04/11/14
Updated: 10/01/14
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/07/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. A Fateful Meeting

Hi Adam, I'm working my way through your stories. You are a very talented writer and have left me on the edge of my seat (again!). I hope you are able to continue 'The Princess'. Thanks for taking the time to give life to these amazing stories.

Author's Response: Aww thanks Elron. That's so nice of you to say. I'm happy you enjoy my work, I needed to hear this today it's been a tough one. I must admit though 'The Princess' has been on halt for a number of years now. I began writing it at a time when I wasn't really sure what I wanted to write about. As you can see I got a few chapters into this tale but hit a brick wall and decided to leave it. I've kept it on here in the hope I may one day pick it up again but so far I haven't. I should perhaps consider taking it down. Now I never upload a story until it's at the 90% completion mark. Thanks anyway for reading. All my other stories are complete! lol. xx

Aaron finds a rock in his back yard. Hilarity ensues.
Rated: Deviant 43 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 89326 Words: 14634 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Sissy
Featured Items: Bikinis
Locale: Family Household, High School
Warnings: Non-Consentual Sex
Series: The Curse Universe
Published: 05/13/14
Updated: 06/09/14
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/10/20 Title: Chapter 1: There Was A Young Boy Who Found a Rock

Power corrupts, absolute power corrupts absolutely. Especially when Satan is pulling the strings.

Interesting story, reminded me of the opening scene from 'Terminator'.

A high school senior and his buddy go on a hunting trip. A life changing event occurs that day.
Rated: Explicit 14 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 88871 Words: 35763 Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Bikinis, Lingerie, Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Castrated/Neutered, Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: Royce's Journey
Published: 05/15/14
Updated: 05/16/14
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/03/19 Title: Chapter 9: Pool Party

I'm glad Royce decided to embrace his new anatomy. I'm disappointed that the relationship between Royce and Alyssa will become strictly platonic, although I understand. Life can be so unfair at times.
This has been a great story so far, and totally believable as a TG plot.
Your writing is excellent, and I look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/03/19 Title: Chapter 10: Female Lessons

So will Royce hook up with his bro?

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/03/19 Title: Chapter 11: Hello and Goodbye

I'm surprised Alyssa didn't invite Royce to celebrate with her family.
It was great that Dave stuck up for Royce when the guys were harassing her.
It also says a lot that Dave quit the party to spend time with Royce.
Man, I'm getting emotionally invested in this story. Thanks.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/03/19 Title: Chapter 12: College Decisions

It's good to see the college is doing everything possible to accommodate Royce and a scholarship.
You seem to know a lot about the scholarship rules or else you do a ton of research to support your stories. Either way, it speaks highly of you as an author.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/03/19 Title: Chapter 9: Pool Party

I'm curious what Royce told people as the reason for his changes. Did he go through the whole medical situation? It doesn't seem like he would have told everyone he had decided to have a sex change. Wasn't too clear from the description of the party.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/03/19 Title: Chapter 13: Cheerleading

Oh, wow, so close.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/03/19 Title: Chapter 15: The New Me

Wow, what a story. I pictured Royce winding up with Dave, the rest of the world be damned! They were best friends their whole lives after all.
I hope Alyssa stayed a part of Royce's life. She was there for him when he really needed it. BTW, right out of high school Alyssa would have gone to undergrad to earn a four-year Bachelor's degree before attending medical school. She could have easily done that at the same school Royce attended and they could have remained close.
All-in-all a great story. Because of your writing skills I felt like I was right in the middle of it. I look forward to working my way through your list of stories. Thank you.

The women's bathroom wasn't a good place to fall into. Nathan now knows why.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 6 Reviews starstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 6004 Words: 615 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: None
Turned Into: Girlfriend, Prostitute, Teenager
Body Modification: Permanent Hair/Skin/Nail Change
Motivation for Change: Accident, Forced
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Series: None
Published: 05/19/14
Updated: 05/19/14
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/22/19 Title: Chapter 1: The Stumble

Nice little magical change. Wonder if Natalie will ever find out who or what changed her. Seems like she doesn't care. She's just happy.

A rising young executive discovers that finding happiness in big business involves a switch to the female persuasion. Whether he wants to or not.
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 12174 Words: 8640 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Secretary, Wife
Locale: Office
Motivation for Change: Female Domination
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 05/24/14
Updated: 05/24/14
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/21/19 Title: Chapter 1: Story

That was a very interesting and creative story. Makes me wonder if that kind of mind control is already taking place. Thanks again for writing.

More Mystical Magecraft mishaps plague another pair of friends who just want to have fun playing a video game.
Rated: Adult 24 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 28683 Words: 15808 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Locale: Family Household, High School
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Series: The Perils and Pratfalls of Roleplaying
Published: 06/01/14
Updated: 08/11/14
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/10/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story. Could not stop reading.

Reggie has an accident at work which causes some interesting struggles in his life.
Rated: Explicit 1 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 17791 Words: 7669 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: None
Turned Into: Secretary
Locale: Family Household, Office
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Death
Series: Royce's Journey
Published: 06/03/14
Updated: 06/04/14
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/03/19 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Ooh, I'm glad to see this is like a sequel, and explains what happened to Royce.

Two simple thought waves catch a ride on a shooting star, now he gets to take a walk in her shoes.
Rated: Explicit 13 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 36341 Words: 7430 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Wife
Featured Items: Lingerie
Locale: Family Household
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Pregnancy, Romance
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 07/08/14
Updated: 07/08/14
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/08/19 Title: Chapter 6: Saturday

Dream, that was one of the most creative and well thought out stories I have read. You came up with a totally unique mechanism for the change.
I think this was a great way for him to learn what it is like to be a woman. Indeed I think I gain a little insight myself when I read stories like this.
Thank you for taking the time to write this story, and I am working my way through your collection.
Your fan, Elron

The Time: The Future. The Place: A Scientist's Lab. The Focus: The Creation of Virtual Reality. We know what this technology does, and we know that it does it, but now it's time to learn why.
Rated: Explicit 20 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 14263 Words: 10688 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, Undies
Locale: Family Household, Labratory
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Is Unaware of Changes, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Series: The Perils and Pratfalls of Roleplaying
Published: 07/30/14
Updated: 08/07/14
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/29/20 Title: Chapter 5: Epilogue

Interesting, yet scary, story. Every day, humanity seems to get a little bit closer to the world you just described.

Great imagination and writing.

Have you secretly ever wanted something?
What would happen if all you dreams are fulfilled?
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews starstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 11907 Words: 1961 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Girlfriend, Mother, Wife
Featured Items: Bikinis, Lingerie, Sex Toys, Undies
Body Modification: Sexual Reassignment Surgery
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Type: Non-English
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Bondage/S&M
Series: None
Published: 07/31/14
Updated: 10/21/19
Reviewer: Elron Signed
Date: 10/21/19 Title: Chapter 4: Geting tied up.

Good luck with your cancer treatments. Take care of yourself first, the story can wait.

While in Japan, Matt volunteers to improve his Japanese. Instead his consciousness is stolen to give to a sex-doll sentience. Now he is powerless and trapped inside a living Barbie doll only able to take in the world through his senses.
Rated: Adult 6 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 12981 Words: 2081 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/09/19 Title: Chapter 1: The Volunteer

Hell yes, you need to continue this story. We just barely got to meet Tamika. I'd like to get to know her better. Great idea for a story.

Tom Jackson has been given the opportunity of a life time. His parents and younger sister have gone away leaving him alone to indulge in his crossdressing. He finally carries out his daring plan to attend his sisters school dressed in her uniform. But his innocent adventure soon turns into a desperate fight to hide his true identity.
Rated: Explicit 22 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 47813 Words: 7055 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: Breast Forms, School Uniform, Undies
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Humiliation
Series: None
Published: 08/20/14
Updated: 09/29/14
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/11/19 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Escape

Adam, it was an interesting story. Looks like Tom didn't really think things through and totally blew it at the first bit of trouble (no pun intended, or was it?).
It would be nice to find out how things went with Tom's real sister. Would she figure out who the impostor was?
Will Tom go through with being Becky for Damien?
I guess it's all left to the imagination.
Thanks for writing.

Author's Response: Yes this was my first ever story on this site and was intended as a one-off. I like the story and a sequel story is defiantly there to be explored but right now I have too many other tales to tell and so it will remain as a one-off for now. Thanks for reading and the kind review. xx

A man wakes up with his wife’s nose. Two girls concoct a scheme to sneak a friend into an Elvish gathering. A dragon hatches and makes a decision that will change a young boy’s life. These are just some of the 14 stories on offer in the biggest Mixed Tape collection yet. Hit play and embark on a journey through time, space and unconventional fantasy, with a full cast of mad scientists, demonic bureaucrats, Time Lords and Ladies, and extraordinary ordinary individuals.
Rated: Adult 10 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 24226 Words: 8089 Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/10/20 Title: Chapter 7: I Picked a Helluva Day to Start Drinking

Excellent start, any chance of continuing? Time travel always adds a great element to a story.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/10/20 Title: Chapter 3: Around the Campfire

Dark.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/10/20 Title: Chapter 9: Melissa

He should have seen that one coming.

Author's Response: You would think so, but I've always found where the concerns of the heart are concerned foresight tends to be in short supply. Thanks for reading and commenting! Have a delightfully demented night, Daniel A. Wolfe

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/10/20 Title: Chapter 12: Precedent

All that glitters is not gold.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/10/20 Title: Chapter 16: Afterword

Great job everyone.

Steve is volunteered to help Amber. Nothing is quite the same after that.
Rated: Adult 6 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 13864 Words: 2161 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/12/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent mix of magic and technology. Sue seemed a little too eager to get rid of Steve, or "sell him off".

Looking forward to reading the rest of your stories.

Andy goes to a haunted house to find his friends, he rescues a girl instead. No good dead goes unpunished.
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 6407 Words: 1114 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Story Theme: Captive, Horror
Warnings: Bondage/S&M
Series: None
Published: 10/10/14
Updated: 10/11/14
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/12/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love your transformations. Very creative. They could be used as the transformation engines for much longer stories.

My brother always wanted a little sister. I never thought he'd go this far to get one.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 23 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 22775 Words: 17168 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Child, Daughter
Featured Items: Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline
Locale: Family Household, Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Forced
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Comedy, Medical Experiment, Second Childhood
Type of Change: Age Regression
Series: None
Published: 11/29/14
Updated: 01/13/15
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/18/18 Title: Chapter 5: You'll Need To Speak To Cthulhu

I really like the story and your style of writing. I know it's a long shot, but I really hope you find some way to continue this story. In the meantime I will read the other stories you have published. Thank you.
BTW, I'm from Michigan, and we know pasties :)

Author's Response: It's been on my mind for years. I've turned into one of those writers. You know the type; Writes something you really enjoy and then disappears off the face of the earth right at the good part.(usually a cliffhanger. ) The reasons I haven't finished is: 1. class started up so my free time was limited. 2. The guy helping me edit this turned into one of those and stopped responding to my emails. (you know the type. They help you edit your story then they disappear off the face of the earth right in the middle of critiquing your word choice) 3. I kinda wrote myself into a corner. This whole thing was made up as I went along with no thought as to what will happen at the end. The end I was planning (when I finally reached that point) would have made no sense at all. So if I do continue then it'll probably be a complete rewrite with proper planning. Which may change the entire feel of the story since I don't think I'm the same person I was when I wrote this. I've got another story rattling around in my head which I want to get out of the way first. But I'm eager to try to finish this up. The writing software is open on my computer right now. (ready for a big 'ol procrastinate)but first I need to finish crocheting this jolteon and maybe consider studying for my microbiological test. Thanks for taking the time to comment. Also I'm writing this on mobile so apologies for any errors.

Running can lead you to such interesting places.
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 9617 Words: 1164 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Clothing, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Pantyhose, Undies
Locale: Family Household
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement
Motivation for Change: Female Domination, Forced, Tricked
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 02/06/15
Updated: 02/07/15
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/11/19 Title: Chapter 1: The run

I wonder whatever happened to she who will not be named?

Imagine you had a magic bookmark that would allow you to enter the book of your choosing for a week at a time. What could possibly go wrong?
Rated: Adult 14 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 13699 Words: 2992 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Historical Time Period
Series: None
Published: 02/20/15
Updated: 02/20/15
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/21/18 Title: Chapter 1: An erroneous translation

What a great idea for a change. This opens up a whole new universe of possibilities. What if the main character was an animal, like in 'Lassie' or 'The Yearling'? Thank you for writing this.

The house always wins, something.
Rated: Adult 5 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 6753 Words: 870 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Stewardess
Featured Items: Work Uniform
Locale: Vacation Destination
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement
Motivation for Change: Female Domination, Forced
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Story Theme: Witchcraft
Series: None
Published: 03/01/15
Updated: 03/01/15
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/12/20 Title: Chapter 1: The Bet

So maybe Mel won after all.

A sexually frustrated man and social outcast gets back at all the women who spurned him, with a little help from Eris and her golden apple...
Rated: Explicit 3 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 3578 Words: 831 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Motivation for Change: Unknown, Willing or Voluntary
Series: None
Published: 03/27/15
Updated: 03/27/15
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/29/19 Title: Chapter 1: It Happened One Night

Gods and drunken, scorned men are always a great start to a TG story. I hope you will come back to continue it. Thanks.

You know what sucks more than dying?

Coming back to life.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 7 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 4345 Words: 2468 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Child, Daughter, Teenager
Locale: High School, Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Comedy
Type of Change: Age Regression, Body Swap, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 06/02/15
Updated: 06/02/15
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/18/18 Title: Chapter 1: Well... that happened.

Great start, I hope you are able to continue.

Dane thought he had life planned out and everything was working out. That is until a car crash tears it all away and leaves him paralyzed, but what can a medical company that specializes in bleeding edge technology offer him that will help him retake his life?
Rated: Explicit 75 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 54377 Words: 65166 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: High School, Hospital or Clinic
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Mechanical Device
Warnings: Death, Politically Incorrect
Series: None
Published: 06/26/15
Updated: 05/18/17
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/20/18 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Mental Flow

Misaania, I have really enjoyed reading this story. The theme is dark, but watching Tara overcome her handicap is very uplifting. It's a roller coaster, so I expect some ups and downs.
Too many TG stories are just guy transforms, then it's rainbows, unicorns, and sex. I believe that three elements are needed to take a story from ok to great. Detail, conflict, and suspense. You have very generous helpings of all 3, and it really elevates the story.
I hope you continue this story, I really want to see how it plays out.
Thank you for writing.

Author's Response: Sorry for the length of time it took for me to get back to this. There's a few aspects of the story that I feel are unnecessary and only serve to create questions toward the main character. The matter where he only feels sadness in response to himself and one friend as opposed to the other friends who lost their lives falls to perhaps an oversight on my part. Much like Fangs and the writing style of Dew Drop, I want to attempt a rewrite for A Leg to Stand On and The Dealer. The fact is, both could improve and have plot holes filled with a rewrite. When I'll get to it still remains to be seen, but I hope to do so when I'm conclude the first part of Fangs.

built up anger is unleashed after Ryan gets drunk. There is only one thing Suzanne can do.
Rated: Explicit 3 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 6002 Words: 1233 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: None
Turned Into: Teenager, Twin
Featured Items: Sex Toys
Locale: Family Household
Body Modification: Lips Plumped
Motivation for Change: Female Domination, Revenge
Personality: Bad to Good, Fights Change, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Humiliation
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 08/31/15
Updated: 08/31/15
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03/11/19 Title: Chapter 1: Ryan

Ended a little quickly. It would have been nice to read about Suzy 2.0 going through the problems an average woman faces. Including a period that came early - or not at all.
But, you could certainly say that the punishment fit the crime.

While Jonathon just wants to squeeze every bit of excitement out of a day with his prom date, he may have taken it too far.
Rated: Explicit 11 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 167987 Words: 42883 Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Boyfriend, Daughter, Girlfriend, Son, Teenager
Featured Items: Curlers, High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Pantyhose, Undies
Locale: Family Household, Formal Dance, High School, Labratory
Motivation for Change: Accident
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Body Swap, Fast/Instant Change, Mechanical Device
Warnings: Bodily Functions
Series: None
Published: 09/09/15
Updated: 01/06/17
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/09/18 Title: Chapter 1: The Introduction

One of my favorite stories, partially because of the subject matter, and partially because of the way you brought the characters to life.
It would be nice to see more stories (and more mistakes) with the machine. Thank you.

An "Odues' Oddities" Story: On Halloween, Sam uses a magical bookmark to travel into a book to become a mysterious man surrounded by desirable ladies... Only to find himself in the body of one of the ladies.
Rated: Explicit 8 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 16401 Words: 5905 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: Corsets, High Heels, Maid Uniform
Motivation for Change: Tricked, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Fights Change, Good to Bad
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Costume or Halloween
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 10/24/15
Updated: 10/29/15
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/25/19 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Forever in Lust

Great story I thought Sam would be able to leave the book and become his male self again. I guess I'm not too familiar with Odue and his oddities.
Very nicely written. Thank you.

A young man finds himself in the wrong place at the wrong time: his crush's closet!
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 141992 Words: 3728 Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/27/19 Title: Chapter 1: Ch. 1: Introducing Me

Baq, I really like this story. It's a little slower paced than some of your others. The only part I didn't like was the identity death for Scott. I think it's ok to change his mannerisms, speech, muscle memory, sexual attraction, but keep Scott's mind in there somewhere.
The 'hobby' of changing other guys seemed a little lame. Brooke came off as a robotic bimbo. I think a better ending would have been for the girls to go out clubbing and find a guy or two to have sex with. Brooke needs to learn about all the benefits of being a woman. And I think with your literary skills that you could do a great job of describing a lurid night on the town and in bed.
I think your description of Brooke was spot-on with all the details necessary for me to build my own Brooke. Someday I'd like to find pictures that match the women you create.
Overall great story and as always I can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: This was the first story I ever published on this site, before I really found my voice that I know you've come to love. I felt identity death was necessary to this story at the time, and I'll stand by that choice because I haven't often utilized that writing technique in my stories since this was published almost four years ago. As for the pictures, I have images in mind for each girl I create based on girls I know in real life, but out of their privacy and my own I'm going to refrain from posting them. Thanks as always for reviewing, Elron! -Baq

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/28/19 Title: Chapter 1: Ch. 1: Introducing Me

Baq, if the girls you know in real life are even half as sexy as the ones in your stories I can see why you don't have much time to write. You da man!

Author's Response: You have no idea. I wish I could show these girls... -Baq

When Adam babysat for a young girl, he didn't expect one little wish on a shooting star to completely change his life. After switching places with the young girl he babysat, Adam must pass himself off as a 4 year old young child for a month before he can switch back... If he is able to switch back at all.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 7 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 6563 Words: 1190 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Child, Daughter
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes, Second Childhood
Type of Change: Body Swap
Warnings: Bodily Functions
Series: None
Published: 12/13/15
Updated: 12/13/15
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/15/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start to the story. I'll bet Adam is going to be doing a lot of stargazing from now on. I hope you are able to continue this story.

After being caught spying on a group of girls Scott a usually well behaved, teen and his mischievous best friend Bobby are turned into beautiful girls by a spell. They're then given the task of breaking the curse before midnight or risk remaining girls forever...
Rated: Explicit 89 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 118818 Words: 21038 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Curse, Female Domination, Forced, Revenge, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Story Theme: Costume or Halloween, Humiliation, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Stuck
Series: None
Published: 01/03/16
Updated: 02/26/16
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/11/19 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Time is Changing

Great story! Magical changes are my favorite. Of those, forced feminization are the best. A surprising twist at the end, as long as everyone is happy with the results. I love your writing style, your level of detail is perfect. Moral of the story: don't mess with witches.

Author's Response: He-he, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Also: Don't always trust your friends! I'm glad you enjoyed the twist and the story overall. I see your reading through most of my stories so I thank you for your continuing support. Love Adam xx

Luke loved Darts. He was a semi pro player who dreamed of being at the world championships. One day he makes a wish he later regrets.
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 5685 Words: 154 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Bimbo, Cheerleader, Girlfriend, Model
Featured Items: High Heels, Long Nails, Work Uniform
Motivation for Change: Forced, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change, Made Dumber
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Sports
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 03/25/16
Updated: 03/25/16
Reviewer: Elron Signed
Date: 02/15/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start to a TG story. Can't wait to see what his wish does to him.

Bryce agreed to help chaperone at prom to help out a friend. But there's a twist and the only way he can go is as Ruby, a curvy redhead who changed her mind about helping.
Now, the slender 28-year-old man gets dressed and made up, hoping to quietly blend in but he finds himself mixed up with high-school jocks with sex on the brain - what could possibly go wrong?
Rated: Explicit 3 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 8811 Words: 7403 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Sissy
Featured Items: Breast Forms, Gaff, High Heels, Long Nails, Pantyhose
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Series: None
Published: 04/01/16
Updated: 04/01/16
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/19/19 Title: Chapter 1: The Romance of Prom

Well, Chloe, I just finished your first story. Like all the others it was captivating, fun, and even had some suspense and conflict in it. I think it could have been a little longer to give more detail to the other characters. I wonder if Justin and faux Ruby will show up in your other stories?
I did have to swallow hard (pun intended) at the notion that a single blow job could 'flip the switches' on someone's orientation.
But overall I thought this was a great start to your writing career. Thanks for sharing this story with us. I'm going to keep working my way up the list.

Lee's live-in girlfriend wins a spot on a reality bachelor show. It's an all-inclusive trip for a week in the mountains for her and a friend during filming but no men are allowed. Trying to be a good boyfriend, Lee agrees to masquerade a girl so the two can enjoy the trip.
But once they arrive, his girlfriend is whisked away for the show, leaving Lee with nothing to do at the lonely resort. Will the handsome production assistant be able to entertain the pretty guest?
Rated: Explicit 11 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 26055 Words: 33609 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Series: None
Published: 04/01/16
Updated: 04/01/16
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/08/19 Title: Chapter 4: Vacation's Over

Wow, what a hypocrite he turned out to be. He blew numerous guys and felt a little guilty. She blew one, felt disgusted, and he exploded at her.
I think that when he saw her in the video he should have owned up to how he spent the week, and each begged for forgiveness. He had no right to be angry with her.
Then they could have made up and gone out as two women looking for a guy for a threesome.
At any rate, it was well written and a great way to find out what Jenny had done.
Thank you for writing this story, Chloe.

Some guys will do anything to land the girl of their dreams. But when it seems that girl prefers other girls, who would go that far?
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 86716 Words: 9692 Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Sex Toys
Locale: Office
Body Modification: Breast Implants, Ears Pierced
Motivation for Change: Tricked, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Hormonal, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: Dissolving Men
Published: 04/19/16
Updated: 04/27/16
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/23/19 Title: Chapter 8: What Goes with Claret?

Interesting story with a nice twist at the end. I was surprised that Claret had pursued KK for so long. Then to find out that Wil was pursuing Claret the whole time as well. I was hoping that Claret would be rewarded with a loving relationship with KK, but she does seem much happier with Wil. So a happy ending for everyone. Great job.

A corporate drone gets sucked into a tax efficiency plan by his boss, property mogul Mr. Frunt. Is he willing to go this far to inherit the family fortune?

Any resemblance of any characters to US presidential candidates, living or dead, is purely coincidental.
Rated: Explicit 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 4531 Words: 593 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/01/19 Title: Chapter 1: Mr. Frunt

I can't wait to see how this plays out. I hope you decide to write more.
Thank you.

This is a classic Sci-Fi gender change story but with a revenge twist.
Rated: Explicit 6 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 138208 Words: 15057 Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/10/19 Title: Chapter 11: The Final Look

Wow, Chloe, another winner! I stumbled across this and decided to give it a read. So glad I did. I loved the way Holly was able to manipulate and control Clarissa. It's hard to believe Holly actually got revenge, considering how much Clarissa enjoys her new life. And of course the picture was absolutely stunningly drop dead sexy. Thank you.

Sacha tried to cover his curvy hips all his life. But now he's agreed to break in a pair of women's designer jeans for his roommate. Those jeans are going to take this special young man on a journey.
Rated: Explicit 129 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 562806 Words: 71901 Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Crossdressing and TV
Characters: Female to Male, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails, Pantyhose
Body Modification: Breast Implants
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Tricked, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Coming of Age
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 06/11/16
Updated: 08/23/17
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/28/19 Title: Chapter 2: I'm Not as Pretty as He Is!

Good setup so far. Nice details. Pacing is good.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/15/19 Title: Chapter 49: Servicing Room Service

Chloe, it's hard to imagine Sonja wanting to go back to being a regular guy, what with the way she enjoys all the perks of being a woman. I can see Vincent eventually paying for her to have SRS so she can make better use of that special spot. And with Sacha's ED, he really has nothing to lose and everything to gain.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/15/19 Title: Chapter 51: Back to Sorting Things Out

I can definitely see Sonja sticking around past New Years.
I'm not liking where things are headed with Vincent, however. Too possessive and domineering, all he cares about is kinky sex. I hope she can walk away from him and wind up in the arms of someone who will care for her and respect her. She has 3 roommates, Terry, and Blair who would seemingly move heaven and earth for her. Maybe even more caring men down the road. She doesn't need Vincent.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/15/19 Title: Chapter 52: Terry?

I'm really liking the way things are going with Terry. Love is a marathon, not a sprint.

Author's Response: Exactly!

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/18/19 Title: Chapter 66: Resolutions

Wow, what a perfect 'almost' ending to this story, and what a dilemma for Sonja. I can't wait to see who the lucky guy is, and to how much of a woman Sonja has come to be. I hope it is Terry or Blair. I think either one of them would be willing to 'put a ring on it'.
If you need some criticism just to stay grounded, I didn't like Vincent. He reminded me of Abe, from "Something New". I thought he was too controlling, and that Sonja should have asserted herself more, instead of letting him whore her out to his friends.
As with all your stories, Chloe, the detail is perfect, the pacing is perfect, the suspense, the whole package is just perfect. I just can't stop reading your stories.
Thank you.

Author's Response: Vincent wasn't supposed to be likeable. Maybe he was the villain, maybe he had a role to play in Sonja's development but, in any case, he wasn't husband material. Thanks so much for the kind words! I had fun with the ending to this and you can see who she ended up with by reading other stories (it's a process of elimination).

If you play with it to much it just might drop off and where would you be then?
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 8696 Words: 1272 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Female to Male, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Clothing, Maid, Prostitute, Slave, Teenager
Featured Items: Breast Forms, Lingerie, Undies
Locale: Family Household
Body Modification: Castrated/Neutered, Extreme Breast Enlargement
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime, Female Domination, Revenge
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive
Story Theme: Humiliation, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Age Regression, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 06/17/16
Updated: 06/17/16
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/20/20 Title: Chapter 1: Peeping

Nice little story about the hazards of peeping. Very creative.

A horny teenage boy falls for an attractive woman. Little does he know that she has different desires.
Rated: Explicit 8 Reviews starstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 32356 Words: 2700 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend, Maid, Slave
Featured Items: Lingerie, Maid Uniform, Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Body Modification: Weight Gain
Motivation for Change: Female Domination, Revenge, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Women, Does Not Change
Story Type: Includes Images
Story Theme: Captive, Humiliation, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Bondage/S&M, Politically Incorrect
Series: None
Published: 07/03/16
Updated: 07/03/16
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/11/19 Title: Chapter 3: Becoming a Big babe

Since he liked to objectify women and see them on camera, how about having him loose the fat, keep the giant boobs, and become a porn star?

A very short story piece that I wrote which had to contain an alien, a maid, a kitsune and cookies.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 1307 Words: 2535 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Maid Uniform
Locale: Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Curse
Series: None
Published: 07/12/16
Updated: 07/12/16
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/20 Title: Chapter 1: Alien, maid, kitsune and cookies.

Nice little story. Very creative. Thank you.

A costume gun tale unlike any other: For in that sleep of bodysuit, what dreams may come...
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 6644 Words: 4316 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Mother, Son
Locale: Family Household
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Body Suit
Series: None
Published: 08/09/16
Updated: 08/09/16
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/18/18 Title: Chapter 1: What dreams may come...

Wow, this has to be the most unique costume gun story I have ever read. What a great story idea. Thanks for sharing your story.

Humans are wiped out of existence by a powerful terrorist group. After being in cryo-sleep for 500 years Michael Stuart must come to terms that his life has been changed
Rated: Adult 53 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 80259 Words: 38289 Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Child
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Fights Change
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Torture
Series: None
Published: 09/01/16
Updated: 08/05/19
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/11/19 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The Martians Of Ares

It will be sad to see this story end, but I can't wait to find out what happens to Lexi in the next few chapters.
And then the teaser fit Age 2. It should be well worth the wait to start reading that. Thank you for taking the time to create these awesome stories.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/11/19 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The Martians Of Ares

Also, I don't understand why the ship(s) didn't move out to a safe orbit beyond the reach of the ground based missiles. Even going to the back side of the Moon would be safer than staying within striking range. And if the Hummingbird can go FTL for long periods, couldn't they use it to shuttle everyone back to earth when it is safe to return?

Author's Response: Hi, Great questions!!! These are just guesses I just thought of. I hope they make since... In the beginning I think they were just trying to figure out where the missiles were so they could destroy them. And they didn't go on the back side of the moon becouse there scientific instruments that they had wouldn't be able to scan the Earth properly since there isn't any daylights to bounce signals off of any more. And the hummingbird is only able to carry a small amount of passengers at a time. That would be a slow back and forth trip

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/22/19 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 A Martian Dinner

Sorry to see this coming to an end. I always wondered why they didn't take the ship out of missile range before going into suspended animation. Now I know. My prediction is that Lexi will stay behind on Mars either as a captive or in trade for supplies, and that she will be used for breeding purposes. We'll see...
It also appears the Hummingbird, when repaired, could make a number of trips back and forth to earth, either for supplies or to shuttle the Ares' survivors somewhere else.
I am so glad you are going to continue this in 'Age 2'.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/07/19 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Kidnapped

Well, that is definitely a cliffhanger!
I think I see Paytyn using Lexi as the mother who will unite the earthlings and Martians (Kahlo?) to fulfill some twisted Ares prophecy.
BTW, I love the science in your stories. Thank you.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/21/19 Title: Chapter 23: Age Two: The Followers of the Night

Olivia, this was a fantastic story. I am a huge space and sci-fi fan. You managed to tie that all in with a complete and believable TG story It was multi-dimensional and the TG was part of a much larger story. You have a very strong and creative imagination to be able to come up with a story like that. I look forward to reading more stories from you. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review!!! I have always been a fan of science fiction. I grew up on watching star trek and star wars and always wanted to write my own universe.

A baseball player finds himself in the right place at the right time when his school's field hockey team needs a player.
Rated: Explicit 12 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 151785 Words: 8553 Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: High Heels, Lingerie, Long Nails
Locale: College
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement, Liposuction, Permanent Hair/Skin/Nail Change
Motivation for Change: Female Domination, Forced, Tricked
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Sports
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Mechanical Device, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 09/13/16
Updated: 08/17/19
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/19/19 Title: Chapter 23: Ch. 23: The Game: Part I

Wow, I can't believe I never reviewed this.
I re-read the whole story so far to refresh my memory. Glad I did, it gave me a better understanding of the characters and plot.
The concept is great, but there are a couple of plot holes I hope you can fill in.
1. If the girls have all of this nearly magical equipment, why not just heal Mackenzie so she can play again? Is it because her injury was too severe for her to just 'magically' recover in time?
2. Why did the girls turn Devon into a Barbie doll right off the bat? It sounds like they could have left her more athletic until after the game, then dialed the body up as sexy as they wanted. Don't get me wrong - I think the bigger the boobs and bubblier the butt the better - but if the objective was to win the game they should have kept that the focus during the transformation.
3. Seems like any equipment sophisticated enough to make radical enough changes to turn Devon into Emma should have a 'Male/Female' switch on it. If the change is indeed permanent, then that M/F switch could turn Mackenzie into Mack so s(he) could have a future with Emma.

The fact that Emma didn't get aroused in the girl's locker room makes me think her time with Mackenzie is short. I like happy endings, probably because I've been through enough sad ones. I hope Emma and Mackenzie work it out.

You have a talent for cliffhangers. I like the way you break up the chapters.

I hope you continue this well after the game. I want to see how Emma does as a knockout girl in the long term. And at least some sex. Maybe Emma and Mackenzie in a threesome with the captain of the baseball team?

As always, thanks for taking the time to write your stories. Elron.

Author's Response: I LOVE reading your reviews, thank you so much for including so much detail in them! Please keep the feedback coming, I always love feedback on my characters and stories. -Baq

A womanizer gets taught a lesson he'll never forget
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 8737 Words: 1696 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: None
Turned Into: Baby, Child, Daughter
Featured Items: Diapers
Locale: Family Household
Story Theme: Babyhood, Humiliation, Second Childhood
Type of Change: Age Regression
Series: None
Published: 10/18/16
Updated: 10/18/16
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/15/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, seems kind of harsh treatment for Luke. He didn't rape anyone, he didn't hurt anyone. He was polite and the hookups were consensual between two adults. Now he has been found guilty of picking up women in bars and having consensual sex with them.

I think given that she already had a nursery set up, she was looking for a victim to fill it, no matter what excuse she had to use. I'd hope karma comes a-calling, but since Lucy is 100% dependent on her new mommy, we'd better hope nothing bad happens to her.

Harry and his four friends enter a house they're told is haunted, but inside are some college girls looking for a good time. Little do they know that this was all a trap, and while his three friends find some sexy girls waiting, Harry finds himself as a sexy girl...
Rated: Explicit 4 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 11105 Words: 8200 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Bimbo
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Costume or Halloween, Horror, Mind/Body Posession, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 10/31/16
Updated: 10/31/16
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/18/19 Title: Chapter 1: A Halloween Possession

Good story. I'm surprised Harry did all of the servicing instead of each boy taking a turn. I liked how you jumped back to the same point each time with Harry. Very good descriptions of the characters and their surroundings.

After going to his best friend's house, Jack encounters a life changing issue, and even more problems ensue!
Rated: Adult 1 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 9754 Words: 1843 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Slave, Teenager, Twin
Featured Items: Bikinis, Boots, Long Nails
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Revenge, Unknown
Personality: Fights Change, Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Captive, Comedy, Horror, Humiliation, Pregnancy
Type of Change: Age Regression, Artificial Age Progression, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 12/04/16
Updated: 12/04/16
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/19/20 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, what an evil little sister. Why didn't she just turn her own brother into her little sister.

Interesting change mechanism. I'd like to have read about what the other buttons on the remote could do. Maybe a sequel?

Very creative writing, thank you.

In the future, long space journeys are made with all crew-members in cryo sleep. Gene Boswell wakes up half way for what should be a routine maintenance, but the clone body he's been downloaded into is a lot more... female... than he's used to.
Rated: Deviant 16 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 76707 Words: 19963 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/25/19 Title: Chapter 5: Walking That Mile

This story reminded me of a more twisted version of 'Westworld', if such a thing is even possible.
I thought it was a very creative look at the future.
Unfortunately, sometimes the bad guys win.
I did expect for the horse relief that Gene's consciousness would have been loaded into a mare android body. And kept that way for the rest of the trip, in order to pacify the male horses. Since the original horse pacifier 'Droid died, it seemed like they needed one.
Towards the end, it seemed to be kind of a repetitious, "let's see how we can fuck Gene over this time", ending of course with the beasty raffle.

Overall a very good story, with a lot of futuristic creativity. Not your typical TG, then rainbows, unicorns, and sex. Please keep writing.

A womanizing boss is taught a lesson- one that will take many years to fully sink in.
Rated: Deviant 9 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 11931 Words: 2144 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/26/19 Title: Chapter 2: 1962

Kara's definitely a bitch in this story. Too bad he doesn't spend more time in each place.

A boarding school is no place to play practical jokes, and Gavin gets his fair share of behavioral reform.
Rated: Adult 3 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 5544 Words: 803 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: College, High School
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime
Personality: Bad to Good, Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Humiliation, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 04/03/17
Updated: 04/04/17
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/19/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Crime doesn't pay. So did Gwen have to finish the 100 sentences?

In a mystical land, a young Ranger keeps the countryside safe from all manner of dark creatures. One fateful night, a chance meeting with a beautiful maiden will change his life forever...
Rated: Deviant 66 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 120505 Words: 114355 Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Curse
Personality: Fights Change, Good to Bad
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Mythical Setting
Warnings: Death, Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 04/18/17
Updated: 02/14/20
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/29/18 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter XIV

GreenLeaf, I believe there are 3 aspects that separate a good story from a great one.
1. Detail. This story is so well thought out and written I feel like I am right there with the characters (and I wish I was! ).
2. Conflict. Too many stories are boy meets girl, boy becomes girl; then rainbows, unicorns, and sex. Fine for a quickie, but not a relationship. Conflict builds character and it really shows here.
3. Suspense. After all these chapters I can't tell who is going to win out. And I can't wait to read more.
You've scored a hat trick. Thanks.

Author's Response: No, no; thank you! I really appreciate all your kind words! I write because I enjoy it, but I have to admit; there have been times during the writing of 'Ellina' that I just didn't know where to go with it. Thankfully, as of now, I think I've got a pretty solid idea of how the story is going to go - but who knows?!

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/23/18 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter XV

More great chapters to your story.
I'm curious how Eldin can ever complete his quest, with Ellina there to undo his progress literally every night. Seems like he would need to be locked in solitary every night and/or someone else would need to complete it for him. Hmmmm, maybe a girl and her dwarfish friend?

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/17/19 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter XVII

Greenleaf, your writing skills continue to amaze me. Your descriptions of the characters, their thoughts and actions are so vivid I feel like I am in the middle of the scene.
The pacing is perfect, the conflict is intense, and the suspense holds me like a vice.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words. my friend! The next chapter is almost ready and will be out soon!

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/24/19 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter XVIII

Another great chapter. There is so much going on, I can't wait to see how you tie everything together.
I also learned what a manticore was. I guess I'm way behind on my monsters!

Author's Response: Always happy to help! Stay tuned!

Daniel McCallum died when a tanker truck ran him over after running a red light. Now he's in Limbo, and the line to find out where you're going is too long, so he decides to take a little walk into his new future as the new Death.
Rated: Adult 47 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 23393 Words: 21331 Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: For a Job
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Comedy, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: The Curse Universe
Published: 05/23/17
Updated: 05/02/19
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/25/19 Title: Chapter 6: The Sixth Chapter

I'm really enjoying this story. Humor is a refreshing break from some of the darker more serious stories on TGS. I especially like the way Danni's Guardian Angel swears like a sailor, taking God's name in vain, right in front of him.

Too bad Danni couldn't save Ginny. I know the grass always looks greener on the other side of the fence, but that is usually because the septic tank is overflowing. Ginny may not like what the afterlife has in store for her.

Please continue this story. It is really moving along well. Got to see what happens with Danni and Kevin. And find out about the teddy bear affect.

The God of Thunder loved to party, loved to drink, and loved to spend some alone time with the Valkyrie (sometimes two at once). He'd been warned about consorting with them once and told he'd suffer the consequences the next time. What the God of Thunder didn't know was how severe the consequences would be.
Rated: Explicit 16 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 22381 Words: 16951 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels
Locale: College, Family Household, Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime
Personality: Bad to Good, Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Comedy, Everyday Living, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: The Curse Universe
Published: 05/24/17
Updated: 09/05/19
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/22/19 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Hikaru, I really love the way you weave the dry humor into your story. It's so - - Thor.

Your plot and your pacing are also excellent. It's so easy to picture myself in the diner watching Nora wait on tables (I would have been too mesmerized to even speak). Even watching the Hammer fly through the walls.

Keep up the great storytelling. I love Norse mythology, even if this part wasn't in my textbooks.

Ben and his Sister have an Argument, the next day things are not what they once were.
Rated: Explicit 2 Reviews starstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 24707 Words: 4838 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: None
Turned Into: Girlfriend, Twin
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Age Regression, Stuck
Warnings: Non-Consentual Sex
Series: Sexy Shorts
Published: 05/29/17
Updated: 05/29/17
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/06/19 Title: Chapter 2: Bonus

That was a nice little romp. Well written, and everyone got what they wanted in the end (and everywhere else too haha).

It would have been nice to see that guy turned into a meek, but sexy girl that would get forced into a blowjob to teach her a lesson.

Thanks for the entertainment.

Travis had spent the night drinking with his friends. When he woke up, the whole night was a blur, he was trapped in a foreign body, and he (or she) was trapped in the past. Now he has to blend in as a woman while trying to find out how this had happened to her.
Rated: Adult 41 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 76229 Words: 35234 Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Corsets, Petticoat, Lace, Ruffles, Crinoline, Work Uniform
Motivation for Change: Accident, In Hiding, Unknown
Personality: Cultural/Nationality Change, Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Historical Time Period
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Published: 06/03/17
Updated: 06/21/19
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/09/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, I'm loving this story. I've been to Egypt and Rome, so the location and historical aspects give me even more reason to like it.
I don't know where or when 'he' is now (honestly, I've never heard anyone shout "woman overboard") so I'm waiting on the edge of my seat for the next part. Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/29/18 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Katt,
Thank you, thank you, thank you. I was afraid this story wouldn't be updated anymore.
I love the historical aspect of your writing. I can't wait to find out where and when we are now.
I'm glad to see Travis is still female, it would not have been as interesting if he had become a man again.
Now to find out who is pursuing him, and why. And how.
I'm just so excited to to be reading this story again. Thank you.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/07/19 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Well, at least Travis is getting to meet some famous people throughout history. Better than I made out last time I was out drinking with friends.
I hadn't thought that Travis would move on from Egypt, I think you could have kept her there for a lifetime. So much rich history to explore.
The leap to pirate times should prove interesting for a man turned into a woman pretending to be a man.
I hope the giant forward leap in time and location does not mean Travis is on his way home. You've created a universe where Travis could be anyone from any time period. Sorry, Travis, but I hope you get the best history lesson of all time.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/21/19 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Loving every word of this story and already dying to read more. Thanks.

Mackinzie Coyle ("Mac") is a fairly ordinary 17-year-old whose father just passed away. Because his mom has to travel Europe to manage the transition of her husband's extensive business empire to her control, Mac has been sent to Mystic, Conn. to live with his Aunt for the summer. All pretty prosaic.

Except that his Aunt Meg has an anything-but-prosaic bit of family history to teach to her nephew.
Rated: Adult 81 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 104271 Words: 99805 Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 06/08/17
Updated: 12/25/17
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/18/18 Title: Chapter 1: "Prologue"

That was a great story, although I wish Mac and Luke could have wound up together. Too much invested in their relationship to have it ruined like that.
But please keep writing. You are very talented.

Author's Response: Thank you! I don't know if I'll ever revisit these characters. Folks have said, rightly, that there's a lot of story to resolve between the last chapter and the 'Epilogue' - that that ending was too easy without more. I agree. And if I ever do revisit this, I think I owe it to folks to explore whether or not Mac can get beyond what she did to herself regarding Luke. Anyway - thanks again for the comment.

Our courageous narrator finds himself in a strange- and soon sticky- situation in a galaxy far, far away. Can he find out why he's a she, and why she suddenly inhabits a supposedly fictional universe, before the plot catches up with her?
Rated: Deviant 29 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 195426 Words: 37498 Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/22/19 Title: Chapter 27: Episode XXVII: Vandals of the Void

Another great chapter. You seem to immerse yourself into this world just as much as Aria. I guess that makes sense.

Your writing is captivating, and I can picture myself right there alongside her. Does that make me a sex Droid? Haha.

Keep up the great storytelling.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/01/18 Title: Chapter 1: Episode I: Foundation

This has already become one of my favorite stores. I love your attention to detail and the way you make this story fit into the Star Wars universe. Please keep writing!

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/21/18 Title: Chapter 25: Episode XXV: The Herald of the Flame

Thank you for posting another chapter. A great read, as always. Wish there really were pleasure droids.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/10/19 Title: Chapter 26: Episode XXVI: Artemis

A Droid with a 'tude. I love it. Please, please keep this going. You have combined all my favorite genres into an amazing story.

A couple moves into their grandparent's house to find an odd furnishing left behind, an oddity that changes their lives.
Rated: Adult 4 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 4683 Words: 1215 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend, Wife
Featured Items: Long Nails, Work Uniform
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Bodily Functions, Bondage/S&M
Series: None
Published: 07/31/17
Updated: 08/01/17
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/19/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start. i love mirror stories. Please, please continue. I don't think Liz should be evil, but that doesn't mean the mirror has to let Doug cross back to his own side after going through again. He (she) could be trapped as Liam's wife in a different world or a different time and place. Maybe Doug likes Liam more than Liz, or maybe Liz likes whoever comes through the mirror more and one of them breaks the mirror. Or it could just be an accident. Lot's of possibilities here. Good luck, and thanks.

With the pharaoh dead and no heirs to take his throne, the throne of Egypt falls to a palace servant touched by the gods. But for the unimaginable power and responsibility of this station, the gods charge a divine price.
Rated: Explicit 14 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 22191 Words: 6917 Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Masks
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: From Submissive to Dominant, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Historical Time Period, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Stuck
Warnings: Intense Violence, Politically Incorrect
Series: None
Published: 08/04/17
Updated: 11/17/19
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/20/19 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I've been to Egypt, so I find this story especially captivating. I love your writing and attention to detail. I hope you are able to continue this excellent story. Thank you.

You should be careful when trying to get into a girl's pants, she might not want you there and might give you something extra you really weren't expecting.
Rated: Adult 1 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 14561 Words: 1860 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Child, Daughter, Girlfriend, Teenager
Featured Items: School Uniform
Body Modification: Extreme Breast Enlargement
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime, Curse, Female Domination, Forced, Tricked
Personality: Bad to Good, Fights Change, From Dominant to Submissive
Story Theme: Pregnancy
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 08/19/17
Updated: 08/19/17
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/12/20 Title: Chapter 1: Perfect Girl

This was a great transformation story with all the right elements - hot witch, hot victim, pregnancy, girl-on-girl action, humiliation. But it seemed like it was over so quickly. The pregnancy could have lasted a lot longer, for example. Maybe she gets pregnant from the same type of encounter he initiated with Sarah? Then we would know the father.
Overall I love your writing. Thank you.

Alex trudges along through life, just wanting to keep his head down and focus on his school work. But one day, that all changes...with a wish.
Rated: Adult 93 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 82937 Words: 40557 Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character, Girlfriend
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, School Uniform, Undies
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Curse, Revenge
Personality: Cultural/Nationality Change, Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Genie/Wishes
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 08/24/17
Updated: 04/24/19
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/14/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great idea for a story, it's fresh and captivating. Lots of twists. Can't wait for the next part.

Author's Response: Thank you! It's a lot of fun to write, and to daydream all the twists and turns! The next part is coming!

A potion that transforms the drinker into someone else's perfect lover is intended for Mike's girlfriend, but ends up in the mouths of his two male roommates.
Rated: Explicit 9 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 33221 Words: 4737 Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 09/01/17
Updated: 09/01/17
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/06/19 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Excellent story!
Good thing no one's idea of a 'dream lover' was a poodle, alien, or sex doll.
Wonder what would have happened if one guy's idea of a dream lover was Jeannie, from "I dream of Jeannie"? If someone turned into Jeannie would she have Jeannie's magical powers? Maybe an idea for a future story...

A muscular gym rat gets a free gift from a weird old man he's never met. His workout doesn't go quite as planned, and he winds up getting a unique perspective on "fitness," now from both sides at the same time.

This is a spinoff of another story, SRU: Dream Lovers
Rated: Explicit 8 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 9147 Words: 3075 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend, Jock
Motivation for Change: Tricked
Personality: Cultural/Nationality Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men, Does Not Change
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Racial
Series: None
Published: 09/02/17
Updated: 09/02/17
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/08/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting twist on the first person you see potion. I was not expecting that at all.
I thought Brad would wind up drinking the potion in the presence of another guy, so good job with the suspense.

Reviewer: Elron Signed
Date: 03/06/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Anyone else have trouble downloading this story? When I try, I get a warning that TGS wants to download multiple files. If I say 'yes' I get a single file, as far as I can tell. If I say 'no' I'm locked out from downloading any stories until I relaunch chrome.
If like to know what these other file(s) are and if they are 'bad'.

This story tells the tale of a simple mistake which snowballs into something a lot worse. Set in a modern world with magical elements, it doesn't actually follow the story of Romeo and Juliet very well.
Rated: Deviant 11 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 24979 Words: 14091 Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/25/19 Title: Chapter 3: Wisely and slow; they stumble that run fast.

I'm really liking this story, more than 'Someone Else's Shoes'. Maybe because of the Magic - I seem to love curses, especially erroneously applied.

No good deed goes unpunished. Poor Julian is really getting screwed, and I wonder how much of a bitch she will turn into. Will she grow fur, a tail, have puppies; will Sara ever be back?
What about the witch?

I hope you are able to continue this 'tail'.
Thanks for writing.

A couple attempts to run away from the world, but the world has a way of pushing back.
Rated: Explicit 13 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 44703 Words: 17144 Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Accident, Forced
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Story Theme: Captive
Series: None
Published: 09/23/17
Updated: 08/16/18
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/02/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So many guys can relate to seeing the woman they love in the arms of another man, including me. I can feel his pain. Can't wait to see where this is headed. Great writing.

A middle aged man accidentally finds out what it's like to be a pregnant 18 year old.
Rated: Explicit 18 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 91219 Words: 10172 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Teenager
Motivation for Change: Accident
Personality: Fights Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Pregnancy
Type of Change: Age Regression, Changed by Clothing, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Bodily Functions, Non-Consentual Sex
Series: None
Published: 10/14/17
Updated: 08/04/19
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/22/19 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Babies?

I'm really loving this story, it has so many elements that appeal to me. Please keep it going and make it as detailed as possible. Don't rush a masterpiece!

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/27/19 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Spells, Decisions, & Confrontations

Wow, this is really getting intense! Please, please, please keep this going. I'm sure there are a lot of readers checking Amazon for magic plaster, me included. There is enough stuff going on to appeal to most everyone. I think Jay needs a dose of his own medicine, though, cheating on his best friends like that. A little plaster karma would cool his jets. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/18/19 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - New Life

Great story. Looks like the twins are running a little ahead of schedule. So unfortunate to have her heart broken and then go into labor. I hope a saint comes along to help her through her ordeal.

Benny catches his girlfriend cheating on him, and wakes up in her body the next day. He decides to take revenge.
Rated: Explicit 7 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 10859 Words: 3950 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Loses Identity
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual
Type of Change: Body Swap
Series: None
Published: 10/19/17
Updated: 10/19/17
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/07/19 Title: Chapter 1: Day

Smutty body swaps make for awesome stories. Thanks for writing.

An aspiring high school students meets his match in a sorcerer who changes him, for the good?
Rated: Adult 8 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 6309 Words: 1212 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Cheerleader, Daughter, Girlfriend, Teenager
Featured Items: Bikinis, High Heels, School Uniform
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime, Tricked
Personality: From Dominant to Submissive, Made Dumber
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Comedy, Everyday Living, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Age Regression, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Bondage/S&M
Series: None
Published: 10/23/17
Updated: 10/24/17
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/19/20 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a great story. Starting out as an eye-opener for stereotypical views on other people. I like how he has to repeat school to learn his lesson. At least there is the possibility he will get his old self back. That's better than a permanent change. I would love to read how Sara spends her high school years and whether she wants to change back at the end. Please, please continue.

While I consider the Paddle of Change a novel mechanism for the physical changes, I don't think it is very realistic for a female teacher to put a 6 foot tall senior boy over her lap to paddle him. In my day, the boy would have been told to stand still, bend over, and grab his ankles. Then the principal, a tall muscular guy, would swing the paddle like a baseball bat at the kid's rear. I never got 'the paddle' but I saw it happen to a couple of kids. I'm sure they felt like a baseball that had been hit by Babe Ruth. Learned their lesson well.

Jeff Boone was a Champion Athlete, Successful State Senator, and was on track for the White House. That was until his past and anger caught up with him. His cry for help delivered an Angel who would save him and offer redemption, but for a price.
Rated: Adult 2 Reviews Story Incomplete Reads: 5609 Words: 937 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Adult (27-62 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Bride, Mother, Wife
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime
Personality: Bad to Good
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Mind/Body Posession, Pregnancy
Series: None
Published: 11/04/17
Updated: 11/05/17
Reviewer: Elron Signed
Date: 10/17/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Jeff The Champion Quarterback and Politician

OK, Megan, there is fiction then there is outright LSD induced fantasy. Lil Bro winning back-to-back championships? Better odds of me growing my own DDs and a V-jay.

The Lions haven't won a championship since 1955.And with their uncanny ability to snatch defeat from the jaws of victory they may never win one. They need to fire the owner LOL.

Ken was an officer in the Fraternity. He was successful and made the frat better. No one knew about his enormous debt, and when he was asked to manage the fraternity's money. Temptation lead to crime. The only way he could save himself was to save a sorority girl named Beth.
Rated: Adult 46 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 118767 Words: 52891 Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Adult, Bride, Daughter, Girlfriend, Mother, Wife
Locale: College, Family Household
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime, In Hiding
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Mind/Body Posession, Pregnancy, Romance
Series: None
Published: 11/04/17
Updated: 10/23/19
Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/01/19 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Return To Tallahassee

Wow, I can't imagine when you would have even a spare second to catch your breath, let alone write, with 3 little ones to care for. Please take your time, and write the story the way you want it to go. Don't rush just to satisfy readers or get it out of the way. Quality over quantity.

I am an alumni member of Theta Xi Fraternity. They were responsible for keeping me focused on my degree when I wanted to screw off. Some of the best times of my life were in our house. I owe them a huge debt of gratitude.

I understand what you are saying about Aaron, his mom, and Beth. It can be a real tightrope walk sometimes.

Thanks again for all the time you have spent on this story. It shows in the quality of your writing.

Author's Response: At the present it is only 2 kids! Or to be more accurate 2.5. Third one is due in January. This past summer when we were together on vacation I was able to do a lot of writing , while the kids napped or went with grandparents and I didnít have to worry about taking care of household things. I actually wrote 4 stories and finished this one. Now I m doing editing. I will try and do it whenever I can a paragraph or two here,and another couple of paragraphs later on. I will edit when I am at the doctors office-like when my doctor is running an hour late ugh. I also will do some editing while hubs watches football, and he supports with me tine. I dedicated these stories (all but one) to my brother. He will come over occasionally and watch my oldest so I can get a solid hour of editing/writing in. Now you know why things come out in trickles. Lol. Thank you for reading and writing back.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/30/19 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Return To Tallahassee

Overall this has been a fantastic story. You go into enough detail to make the characters seem completely real. Having been in a fraternity I can see how Ken could have gone astray.
Now for amends. Ken owes his Fraternity a large sum of money. I think it is up to Beth to repay that debt, even if it is done anonymously.
Beth also owes it to Aaron to tell him that she used to be Ken. That's a little too big of a secret for her to keep. She also owes it to Beth's family and her old family - maybe. Would it matter to them? She will have to decide.

Author's Response: In the first couple of chapters that I wrote-which seems like a century ago lol-I dealt with this issue. When Ken became Beth, Ken was wiped from existence. This that if Ken never existed, then he never stole the money, So the fraternity never lost the money, so there is no debt to repay. My thought at the time was something "It's a wonderful life"-If Ken had never existed how would other people's lives had been changed. I will touch on this theme in an upcoming chapter. What fratrnity were you in? I really was a Chi Omega

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/30/19 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Return To Tallahassee

"But I need to know that you are with me, that I have your support when there is a conflict between your mom and I”
I understand where you are going with this, Aaron is leaving his family to make Beth the priority. But you set it up as an ultimatum that is impossible to meet. Beth won't always be right, and Aaron will be forced into the middle of an unwinnable situation no matter what he does. Been there many times. Aaron can't sacrifice his conscience or his principles just to take the right side. It's one thing when you're talking about raising kids, Beth and Aaron have the final say. But if they disagree and Aaron's position matches his mom's, he is accused of taking sides.
All I'm saying is that all 3 need to act like adults. Mom needs to back off and accept that Beth is the one for Aaron and she will not be.
Beth needs to realize that Aaron is not taking mom's side just because he disagrees with Beth.
Problems should be solved, not allowed to fester by taking sides. I hope everyone realizes how their roles will change, and how they shouldn't.

Author's Response: Thank you for your comments. Where I was going is that Aaron is afraid of him mom, because Martha Dye is a very dominating woman. My goal is that Beth encourages Aaron to place her (Beth) first while still respecting, loving, and honoring his mom.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/30/19 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Return To Tallahassee

I don't understand what steps Aaron needs to take to further their relationship. He has been a perfect gentleman and companion to Beth.
It sends like Beth needs to do a few things to be honest with Aaron and worthy of his love.

Author's Response: It will come clearer in upcoming chapters. There are things that he and Beth need to come clean about with their families.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/30/19 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Return To Tallahassee

Finally, the story seemed to becoming somewhat preachy. Given all of Ken's failings, Beth doesn't come off as overly credible when quoting Bible verses. Beth may be a new person, but she has not atoned for her previous life. I've seen people live very 'sinful' lives and when they 'find' religion suddenly they are holier than thou. I hope Beth doesn't become one of those.
Thank you for all the time you have spent on this story.

Author's Response: Thank you for your comments and for reading. This story has been a journey. I started writing it when I was pregnant with my first child, and now I am pregnant with #3. Hoping to bring it to a close soon, My intention was that part of Beth's atonement was that she would help heal her family-somethng that was accomplished. I have some ideas fo rother stories where the Beth character plays a supporting role, and is instrumental in making changes for the better in different areas of society. In this story I wanted to lay the groundwork for her new life, and becoming comfortable with being a woman.

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