Rylune
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Reviews by Rylune
Many of my wants were fulfilled by a strange chalice found within the Maze, but many more problems arise due to the power it grants and the world it opens.
Rated: Explicit 285 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 201406 Words: 161202 Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Locale: High School
Motivation for Change: Forced
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Mythical Setting
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Torture
Series: None
Published: 08/22/15
Updated: 09/18/19
Reviewer: Rylune Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/14/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Verona's Chalice

A HUNTER spy boyfriend was not the twist I expect but definitely the one we deserve. Perfect :P

Author's Response: Thank you. I aim to impress.

A late-night stroll seems to be the perfect time to encounter strange events. After getting pulled into an encounter with slavers, Alex is forced to find his own way back home, however difficult that may be.
Rated: Explicit 194 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 119031 Words: 228394 Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Mythical Setting
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 05/05/17
Updated: 11/27/19
Reviewer: Rylune Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/22/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Snipers and Slavers

I'm sure a lot of us on here appreciate the difficult work you went through to get this chapter out. This is another great chapter. You inspire me :)

Author's Response: Thank you. But it's you guys who read and leave reviews that inspire me, not the other way around. If it wasn't for some form of visual effect, it would be tough to put these things out. I love writing, but I love seeing other people love my work more than that.

In a realm where hair color determines a person’s worth, Prince Delvaran was destined for greatness. However, when his kingdom falls to invaders and his magic backfires, he becomes stuck as a light-haired girl. He disguises himself as a maid in his former castle, and plots to assassinate his conquerors.

All the while, a powerful empire stirs in the east, where two thieves conduct an ambitious heist.
Rated: Adult 246 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 123562 Words: 138685 Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Maid, Slave, Teenager
Featured Items: Boots, Maid Uniform, Work Uniform
Motivation for Change: Accident, In Hiding
Personality: Bad to Good, Cultural/Nationality Change
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Captive, Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Mythical Setting, Romance
Type of Change: Cultural, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 06/12/18
Updated: 06/13/19
Reviewer: Rylune Signed
Date: 03/12/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - From the Fog

Of course it was Marsa! Ugh! This update leaving me on the edge. Already can't wait for more

Author's Response: I'm sorry, I wish I could write faster :D Don't worry, though! More is coming!

Alana is special. When she wants, she can turn into a lion. Only ten years old, she isn’t very big or scary when she’s a lion, but one day she will be. In the meantime, she just tries to be good. She stays in her room all day, waiting for the men with guns to take her to see Doctor Graham, and she tries really hard on all of the doctor’s tests.
Then - one day - Alana gets a roommate, and everything changes.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 185 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 53032 Words: 75929 Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Locale: Family Household, Hospital or Clinic, Labratory, Prison, Road Trip, Vacation Destination
Motivation for Change: Accident, Forced, Unknown
Personality: Bad to Good
Story Theme: Captive, Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Medical Experiment
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 07/13/18
Updated: 04/08/19
Reviewer: Rylune Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/07/19 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Amends

It's been so absolutely interesting to read a story on here that twists what's expected of our genre so elegantly as this. Watching Zee go through her changes from an outside the paradigm is engrossing. I can imagine the typical story beats going on in her head that we only see the outside perspectives on. Wonderful. Made my actually use my account to post a review, it's so wonderful.

Author's Response: So glad that you've enjoyed this little twist on TG storytelling! I tried to give us a tiny window into Zee's mind, and it's very comforting to know that it kinda worked :D

"Are we all still heading out to the mountains this weekend?" Were words I never once thought could change my life so drastically.
Rated: Adult 50 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Story Incomplete Reads: 124878 Words: 185158 Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter
Locale: Family Household, High School
Motivation for Change: Forced
Personality: Fights Change
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living, Genie/Wishes
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 07/20/18
Updated: 07/04/19
Reviewer: Rylune Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/12/19 Title: Chapter 1: A Green-Eyed Woman

I truly think this is one of the best written stories on this site. I'm really excited to see where you take it and where it ends from here

Author's Response: Aw... <3 that's really nice of you to say. Thanks, Rylune. It means a lot.

A former bully gets taken down a peg after his girlfriend breaks up with him. A year later, his father goes missing and his troubles only go from bad to worse when he tries to go looking for him in another world.
Rated: Explicit 48 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 68318 Words: 152112 Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Reviewer: Rylune Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/15/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Bullied

I am both incredibly confused and incredibly enraptured. Incredible ;)

Author's Response: Hehe XD

Hopefully I can clarify everything before or at the end of this story. But I am glad that you are having fun with the novel. :D

I will be attempting to come out with another chapter this weekend. :)

Sam is a quiet 16 year old high school guy. He's a nerd and a geek. A pretty typical guy. When his friends try to peer pressure him into playing the tank role for the new VR game they all want to play, he rebels, although he can't quite figure out why. Follow Sam as he dives into the world of Pellan Rise as the dainty little healer named Sylanna, where he discovers that the game has a lot more influence over the real world than everyone thought.
Rated: Adult 306 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 186916 Words: 133413 Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character
Featured Items: School Uniform
Locale: High School, Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: For a Job, Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Women
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Mythical Setting, Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Intense Violence
Series: Kammi-verse, The Andrare Legacy
Published: 02/06/19
Updated: 02/03/20
Reviewer: Rylune Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/18/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: No Tankerino pls.

Loving the mystery of the world and how important it seems that's it's not just a game-world. Excited for more!

Reviewer: Rylune Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/22/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: No Tankerino pls.

Excited to see how a school goes for Syl!

Nia is a trans girl studying computer science at university. Her troubles don't stop at being trans in the casually sexist world of stem however, her body betrays her in other, more physical ways. Attending a lecture like normal, she never expected to be torn from the world and left scared, wounded and alone in a vast ruined city.
Rated: Explicit 43 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 15843 Words: 32367 Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character, Twin
Locale: Space or Foreign Planet
Motivation for Change: Accident, Forced, Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Mythical Setting, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: Kammi-verse, The Andrare Legacy
Published: 02/13/19
Updated: 05/01/19
Reviewer: Rylune Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/01/19 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

More Ruins! Can Nia control how large she is when she changes between forms? I might be a little partial to tiny dragon Nia. And flirting with Sarra!

Erik came home from school one day after being called a girl, but realized...he kind of liked it? Follow along as Emma navigates her gender identity, in a family and community that may not be ready for her.
Rated: Kid-Friendly 60 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 18797 Words: 33654 Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Categories: Realistic Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living
Type of Change: Hormonal
Series: None
Published: 02/18/19
Updated: 03/28/19
Reviewer: Rylune Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/08/19 Title: Chapter 1: September 28, 2018

You made me cry, evil evil author. I hadn't given this story a chance at first because I'm more for the fantasy stories but in it's second chance, it's definitely showing it's earnestness. It's wonderful and hopeful even if I feel like to moves to fast sometimes. Can't wait for more

Callum is alone in the States applying for a job as an engineer when the world changes forever. In an event called the Emergence he is changed. Fox ears and a tail greet the newly minted girl in a mirror. On the run from the abusive system, she is forced to turn to crime to survive.
Rated: Explicit 239 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 91465 Words: 118355 Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Featured Items: Masks
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Personality: Bad to Good, Good to Bad, Made Smarter
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Bisexual, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Costume or Halloween, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 03/03/19
Updated: 07/20/19
Reviewer: Rylune Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/12/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Emergence

Fun fun fun! Can't wait to see what kind of crazy situations Kalia gets herself into

Reviewer: Rylune Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/24/19 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Photo

Some Vulptrix and Nightbinder shipper in Kami Kettuverse just had their wildest dreams come true.

Finding himself kicked out of his foster parents’ home on the night of the Emergence, John Doe Smith doubted even his luck could get any worse.

Now irrevocably changed by the Emergence into what many see as a monster, the newly dubbed Wraith must now deal with the consequences of her new powers in an unfriendly world.
Rated: Adult 95 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 42678 Words: 71532 Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character
Locale: Family Household, Prison
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown, Willing or Voluntary
Story Theme: Captive, Everyday Living, Mythical Setting, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence, Torture
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 03/15/19
Updated: 10/16/19
Reviewer: Rylune Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/19/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Storm

It's like DC or Marvel comics where the stories from multiple authors intersect! This is really cool and I'm glad we get to see more of Kelly.

After a fun night on the town Maria was ready to wind down and relax but things dont always go to plan when magic is involved.
Rated: Explicit 5 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 13126 Words: 7090 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Girlfriend
Featured Items: Maid Uniform, Sex Toys
Locale: Family Household
Motivation for Change: Female Domination, Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Romance, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Warnings: Bondage/S&M
Series: Convenient glamours
Published: 04/16/19
Updated: 04/19/19
Reviewer: Rylune Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/25/19 Title: Chapter 1: Here we hecking go

Smut with a big heart is my kind of smut. I would love to read more about these two.

Author's Response: I do enjoy writing it too :)
since this is marked complete i cant add to it. Everything i tried to continue this ended up just being more of the same as far as sex went. With Maria being a nearly-out trans girl to start i didnt leave a phenomenal amount of space for the good fluff afterwards since she sorta reaches a destination immediately rather than embarking on a journey so to speak. If you havent read Latent Desires, it shares a bit of resemblance in smut minus the outright bondage and visceral transformation. Otherwise thanks so much for reading and ill try to be back with more lovey-dovey smut before too terribly long.

Jamie, twelve year old recluse and bookworm, is the target of a group of bullies, Dean, Lukas, and the chief of the three that goes by Snake.

After news of the arrival of an alchemist in town, Snake and his goons force Jamie into breaking in the alchemist's mansion and looking for a potion of strength for another of their poorly thought out plans.

Jamie, however, gets distracted by another kind of potion after arriving at the lab...
Rated: Kid-Friendly 29 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 32596 Words: 12274 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Child (0-12 yrs), Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Accident, Willing or Voluntary
Personality: Bad to Good
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Coming of Age, Everyday Living, Romance
Type of Change: Drug-Induced, Fast/Instant Change, Slow/Gradual Change
Series: None
Published: 05/08/19
Updated: 08/10/19
Reviewer: Rylune Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/09/19 Title: Chapter 1: Not the smartest of plans

Well that was not the twist I was expecting. Neat. Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: I am so incredibly glad the twist is surprising so many people in a good way.

Coby was once again forced to go to a college party by his best friend Brook. He hadn't been counting on much happening, he was an anxious nerd after all, but waking up in his friend's bed as a gorgeous girl was pretty damn far out of even his craziest dreams. A Kammiverse story.
Rated: Explicit 161 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 177619 Words: 113287 Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character, Model
Locale: College, Family Household
Motivation for Change: Accident, Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Women, Does Not Change
Story Theme: Beauty/Fashion, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Slow/Gradual Change
Warnings: Intense Violence
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 05/21/19
Updated: 03/05/20
Reviewer: Rylune Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/30/19 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Little Black Skirt

Maddy wins in a game of Elsie, obviously! Loving this. You're writing is always a treat. Thank you for the wonderful chapters so far. :)

Reviewer: Rylune Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/15/19 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Dress Shirt

Forest fires are a part of the life cycle of nature, when the forest must clean out the old that choke it's future. The soot left over enrich the life that grows anew. Elsie is only in the process of removing the holdovers holding her back. Love everything that you do :)

Author's Response: Yup! Exactly! Burn out the old choking brush.

Follow the adventures of Kevin Castle, as he struggles to navigate a post Emergence world. Now transformed into a young woman, and bestowed with great powers, she has to decide if she is going to be a heroine - and wonders if the world will even want to be saved. My Take on the Kammiverse, in Canada. I will be posting this story on Royal Road as well.
Rated: Adult 50 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 27904 Words: 86438 Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Alien
Featured Items: Masks
Locale: College
Motivation for Change: Accident
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Series: Kammi-verse
Published: 05/27/19
Updated: 11/19/19
Reviewer: Rylune Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/03/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Work Blues

How fun! You have great prose for writing action. It's enjoyable and goes at a wonderful pace without feeling rushed.

Author's Response: Thanks, Rylune. I'm glad the combat and action seems well paced. Its surprisingly hard to write well!

When you check the donor box, be careful what you are agreeing to!
Rated: Explicit 19 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star Completed Story Reads: 55615 Words: 8117 Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Motivation for Change: Willing or Voluntary
Sexual Orientation: Becomes Only Attracted to Men
Story Theme: Everyday Living
Type of Change: Slow/Gradual Change, Stuck
Series: None
Published: 06/07/19
Updated: 06/07/19
Reviewer: Rylune Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/07/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

While short, this story was wonderful in it's convictions and perfect in it's emotional tone. I hadn't noticed the author line at first and thouroughly enjoyed this, then noticed it was you and knew why. Glad to get more from you, even if it isn't Chimera.

Author's Response: Thank you! I feel bad that I left that story half told, but Iím working on finishing. Basically, I had written the entire story, but as I posted one chapter at a time, my edits turned into rewrites, and it pulled the story so far away that the original ending no longer fit. And then I was hit with a major depressive episode that left me a little unmotivated to write. Iíve been starting to interact with the world again, one dropped thread at a time, and now Iím ready to pick up this one.

Some time during the 19th century, a witch gets heckled by a young mage with a rotten outlook on life. She takes it upon herself to knock some sense into him... Maybe even make him realise the hidden reason fueling his beliefs.
Rated: Adult 7 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Completed Story Reads: 5491 Words: 4037 Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Categories: Magical Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Young Adult (20-26 yrs)
Turned Into: Fantasy Character
Motivation for Change: As Justice for a Crime, Forced
Personality: Bad to Good
Story Theme: Historical Time Period, Witchcraft
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change
Series: None
Published: 06/15/19
Updated: 06/15/19
Reviewer: Rylune Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/15/19 Title: Chapter 1: Story

Love it! Love it! Literally enchanting :D

Author's Response: *blushes* That's high praise!! Thanks!!!

After having a fight with his family, Eric finds himself alone on the beach during the Emergence. Now a young woman, Ella must learn to control her newfound powers while trying to survive the ensuing chaos. A Kammiverse fanfiction, posted with the permission of Rosilys Inknose herself.
Rated: Explicit 13 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Story Incomplete Reads: 2920 Words: 5598 Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Categories: Sci-Fi Gender Change
Characters: Male to Female, Teen (13-19 yrs)
Turned Into: Daughter, Fantasy Character, Twin
Motivation for Change: Unknown
Sexual Orientation: Does Not Change
Story Theme: Fan Fiction, Romance
Type of Change: Fast/Instant Change, Stuck
Warnings: Death, Intense Violence
Series: None
Published: 06/18/19
Updated: 06/30/19
Reviewer: Rylune Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/20/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: What Once Was

Cant wait to see where this goes. Happy to see more Kammi stories too even if they aren't all canon. Love it! :)

Reviewer: Rylune Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/30/19 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: What Once Was

I'm super happy for Ella that her family is so welcoming to her. It's a nice change of pace from so many other Kammi stories. Can't wait to see what comes next.

Author's Response: I wanted to do something sweet, and I have things planned for Ella that do require her to be living with her family.

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