Date: 07/06/13 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story. I loved it. It is rare for there to be female to male transformations without it being body swaps. I would love to read any other stories you have like this.
Ps. Try to work on the dialogue I had some problem at first telling what was being said or being thought
Date: 07/06/13 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
cute story! keep up the good work!
just a tip: for future stories, try to put speech into these symbols ( " ) and for thoughts you can use this symbol ( ' ) so readers know when people talk or think in a story! like i said: only a tip! but apart from that it is really a nice and cute story