Reviews For Fairy Mistake
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Reviewer: Gene Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/07/13 01:27 am Title: Chapter 1

I've been a fan of Dauphin for a long, long time. Good to see the stories here! Any chance, Dauphin, of a new, updated version of Sissy Idol?

Reviewer: transfansguy Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/06/13 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great story. I loved it. It is rare for there to be female to male transformations without it being body swaps. I would love to read any other stories you have like this.
Ps. Try to work on the dialogue I had some problem at first telling what was being said or being thought

Reviewer: Princess_Panty_boy 92646 Signed Report
Date: 07/06/13 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hun really liked your story thanks for sharing.

Princess panty boy

Reviewer: Hiei_The_Little_Tomboy Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/06/13 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

cute story! keep up the good work!
just a tip: for future stories, try to put speech into these symbols ( " ) and for thoughts you can use this symbol ( ' ) so readers know when people talk or think in a story! like i said: only a tip! but apart from that it is really a nice and cute story

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