Date: 08/04/13 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 5 New Life
A nice story, but wen it comes to the sex episodes and domination of the man, it resembles all the stories you read everywhere. At the end...nothing new.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing my story. It is so incredibly frustrating to get so little feedback from readers. Just Julie was my second story, and I'm aware of its shortcomings. Instead of writing as I usually do and explore my fantasies, this was a story I wrote for a dear friend exploring her fantasies, and that caused problems. I tended to hurry through it so I could get back to my own fantasies. Your comments will always be welcome, and I hope to use them and those of other reviews to improve. I notice you've written several reviews, and I urge you to continue to do so. *kiss*