Reviews For The Girlfriend
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Reviewer: Natasa Jacobs Signed Report
Date: 03/09/19 11:48 am Title: Chapter 3

This story is getting weird

Reviewer: Natasa Jacobs Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/09/19 11:37 am Title: Chapter 2

I wish I would have been Mark and turned into Mary

Reviewer: Natasa Jacobs Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/09/19 11:06 am Title: Chapter 1

I really like this story so far

Reviewer: Elana Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 08/14/13 05:53 am Title: Chapter 5

Okay, can I be honest here? I feel like this is Homestuck. It sucks, but I can't stop reading. I don't like it, yet I want to read more and more. But as I read, I notice it still... sucks. I would say spelling and speach are not your strong suits. Work on them. 6/10 stars from me.

Reviewer: Krv1987 Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/08/13 07:15 am Title: Chapter 1

Don't know where this story is going but the transformations are fun to read

Reviewer: TheMadPoet Signed Report
Date: 07/07/13 06:27 am Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoy the story, but the spelling needs work. Otherwise this is a wonderful story and I am looking forward to the rest of it!

Good luck!
The Mad Poet

Reviewer: TGLee Signed starstarstarhalf-star Report
Date: 07/05/13 04:54 am Title: Chapter 1

i like the story, but it looks like ur losing track of some of ur details, you mentioned in an earlier chapter that if a person who takes the baby pills has sex with a woman than they would get absorbed into the womb but the parents didnt have sex they were just kinda taken. besides that its an interesting story.

Reviewer: transfansguy Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/02/13 12:56 am Title: Chapter 1

This story is great. Love that instead of a girl changing him that it is a boy turning a boy into his girlfriend. Love it

Reviewer: Princess_Panty_boy 92646 Signed Report
Date: 06/29/13 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

Cute story I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing Hun. I hope you continue it.

Hugs
Princess pantyboy

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